Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- The First Snow (Arobot)
Real - enjoyed this very much. Great construction. Clean, straightforward...
November 30th, 2020 17:59 - Once (Fay Slimm.)
Points well taken from the other contributors to this thread. The...
November 30th, 2020 17:33 - Once (Fay Slimm.)
Well she knew satisfaction - no ambiguity there... Thanks Fay
Stay...
November 30th, 2020 05:05 - Life Changer. (Goldfinch60)
On one level you are spot on, Andy. If life’s a misery, apparently not...
November 30th, 2020 03:38 - Lines composed on a summer\'s day walk in the Manifold Valley (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Manifest your pleasures that day in the Manifold Valley.
Felt and enjoyed...
November 29th, 2020 19:45 - GENDER NEUTRAL (Michael Edwards)
Another poem - am I the inspiration or wot....?.....not?
Look after...
November 29th, 2020 04:52 - GENDER NEUTRAL (Michael Edwards)
Is it not possible, Michael, that conceivably you may perhaps have gone...
November 29th, 2020 04:35 - Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
I\'ve made this one a favourite (only very recently found out how to do...
November 28th, 2020 17:39 - summer No 17 (Dusk arising)
Definitely \"Those Lazy-Hazy-Crazy Days of Summer\"
Ah -...
November 28th, 2020 00:46 - Cannabis Cool (A Nonsense Poem) (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Geez that\'s strong shit you got there, man..........
November 27th, 2020 22:57 - Inferos (explicit) (Salem_B911)
Every bone in my body is telling me I should creep quietly around...
November 27th, 2020 22:46 - Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
Going to keep this short as I couldn\'t possibly articulate anything to...
November 27th, 2020 22:33 - The Girl Who Loaned Me A Pencil (Dylan Lawler)
Makes terrible, but perfect sense. Situation clearly defined.
Saw and...
November 26th, 2020 19:09 - underworld (Tylerintheclouds)
I\'ll be honest - I don\'t usually get along at all well with the poetry...
November 26th, 2020 18:48 - Sorrow\'s Season (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Hell of a tale: colour, change, and activity. Plus the underlying sorrow...
November 26th, 2020 06:22 - Always There For Me. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks for the musical peace offering Andy. More than settles the...
November 26th, 2020 03:39 - HARD CHEESE (Michael Edwards)
A loverly piece of matured Whimsy; piquant with subtle flavors of...
November 26th, 2020 03:34 - WORD OF THE YEAR 2020 ~ OXFORD ENGLISH DICTIONARY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hi A & B:
Good fun message, informative, easy to travel with.
Wot no...
November 25th, 2020 00:50 - Impossible mission to identify mine heretically rooted hair issue (Rew4er2nail)
Doggerel Dave
November 18th, 2020 03:46
I continue to enjoy what you do...
November 25th, 2020 00:30 - Overthinker (Brittany Jo)
I remember (believe it or not...) that feeling which pervaded the years...
November 24th, 2020 15:57 - Helping hands (RDS)
Couldn\'t throw some light on \'Estuarine\' could you? How it has...
November 24th, 2020 05:57 - the long goodnight (Dusk arising)
Felt that and it hurts.
Left me a bit raw.
Dave
November 24th, 2020 05:01 - Poetry in motion (Poetic Dan)
Rescue greyhound?
If so deserves all the care and compassion you give -...
November 24th, 2020 04:50 - Nature\'s Comfort. (Goldfinch60)
You succeeded.
Nothing much more to add, Andy - they\'ve mostly said it...
November 24th, 2020 04:40 - UK CHRISTMAS 2020 STAMPS ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A & B, Greetings!
That was great - thanks. As promised.
Next year are...
November 23rd, 2020 01:07 - Nature - got to be a winner!? (Doggerel Dave)
Grass (no not the stuff you roll up and light) - the horizontal green...
November 23rd, 2020 01:00 - Another Golden Dawn (Neville)
Metaphor or plain hard boiled reality? Keeps flipping for me... Can...
November 22nd, 2020 18:41 - The Widecombe Fair Chestnut Mare (Alan .S. Jeeves)
You had to travel for that one - didn\'t you? Needed horse had to go?
I...
November 22nd, 2020 18:19 - IM JUST A OWL IN A CHRISTMAS TREE ~ A SEASONABLE BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So – If the festive season and it’s symbols, basically pagan, can be...
November 21st, 2020 03:33 - UNSAMES (2) 4&5 (Michael Edwards)
Fire engines and purpose in perfect unity plus one of them conundrums...
November 21st, 2020 03:18 - This Moment. (Goldfinch60)
Advice that can\'t be bettered there Andy.
I hope there is, but maybe...
November 21st, 2020 03:06 - I Spend a Lot of Time with People that Don\'t Exist (Quemis)
Post Script:
Ring a \'Help\' line if you feel you have noone you can...
November 20th, 2020 23:17 - OFF THE CLOCK (Joe Marcello)
Great - short sharp and witty. And true.
A long period of unemployment...
November 20th, 2020 19:03 - I Spend a Lot of Time with People that Don\'t Exist (Quemis)
IF this is a piece of poetry, well crafted, which generalises a position...
November 20th, 2020 18:12 - HEY MISTER VACCININE MAN ~ FIVE PHYSIOLOGICAL QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oh Damn! I\'m veggo so mine don\'t stink anyway....except in extreme...
November 20th, 2020 17:51 - That’s life (Arazimus)
Needs to be chiseled in stone many times for many places.
Can I order...
November 20th, 2020 17:31 - HEY MISTER VACCININE MAN ~ FIVE PHYSIOLOGICAL QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Simple straightforward message anyone could understand.
Might even have...
November 20th, 2020 02:00 - The Fountain Pen (Dasim)
Your\'e back! Disappeared there for a while...
An easy comfortable...
November 20th, 2020 01:47 - Into Another Place. (Goldfinch60)
Go with books Andy, every time.
I get my books from Vinnies (sorry - a...
November 19th, 2020 04:10 - be-lie-ve (Lonelyraccoon)
I\'d vote for nothing at all (ever since age approx 14).You can believe - ...
November 19th, 2020 03:37 - Promised Land (Last Shadow)
Promises, promises....
Dave
November 18th, 2020 17:33 - Hippies. (Goldfinch60)
Certainly hit a chord there Andy: Great response. Ideals close to perfect...
November 18th, 2020 06:02 - Get that trumpeting miscreant yucca puck out of the White House (Rew4er2nail)
I continue to enjoy what you do - even if sometimes I can\'t come to...
November 18th, 2020 03:46 - - Division - (PoeticBiscuit)
\'Never have guessed...
The kind of poetry I like - small neat and...
November 18th, 2020 00:54 - Anomalous (Jbritt321)
Heads up re your age would have been good (not because I\'m ageist - I try...
November 17th, 2020 20:01 - slab square sunset (Dusk arising)
Never quite hit the streets, although I came very very close (next step...
November 17th, 2020 19:08 - Mother (Mysleze)
Sussed out your Profile.
Seventeen years? English not Your first...
November 17th, 2020 18:52 - Try this for size: (Doggerel Dave)
Thank all you four (but who\'s counting?) for your support. Its a pity I...
November 17th, 2020 17:24 - Hippies. (Goldfinch60)
Not going to disagree (my favorite stance) with any of that. Just...
November 17th, 2020 04:56 - Short stories light our lives (Trenz Pruca)
Thanks mate, that really did it for me.
Dave
November 16th, 2020 20:27 - please, so much (Dusk arising)
Never mind it may be you or maybe not, d.a., the memories stretched for...
November 16th, 2020 20:13 - A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville)
Nah - the preceding apostrophe meant to substitute For \'You\'re\' - an...
November 16th, 2020 05:02 - Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.)
Form - craft - imagery - how long did it take to construct your butterfly...
November 16th, 2020 04:21 - A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville)
\'Welcome - though you didn\'t really need a contribution from an intruder...
November 16th, 2020 03:43 - A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville)
Copious use of stops....I\'d endorse that - it\'s something I use...
November 16th, 2020 03:28 - Keys Lost. (Goldfinch60)
Nicely paced Andy.
The gut wrench I experienced between lines \'Keys...
November 16th, 2020 03:14 - my dreams light (Dusk arising)
I\'m truly glad you can still find the same wonder in old moon that I once...
November 15th, 2020 19:29 - AS TIME GOES BY ~ A CLASSIC PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hi you lot:
DAVE here!
PANTOUM easier than ...
November 15th, 2020 18:05 - A PATRIOT I (or A DOUBLE WHAMMY) (Michael Edwards)
Right on, Michael.
Regards Dave
PS I\'m old school - can you do me a...
November 15th, 2020 05:43 - Here We Go!! (Goldfinch60)
Andy - Like flash mobs do you? Here\'s an oldie that I hope you and...
November 15th, 2020 05:29 - AS TIME GOES BY ~ A CLASSIC PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hi A & B & S the C:
The \'70\'s merging into the 80\'s definitely - just...
November 15th, 2020 05:11 - love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st)
Hey mate (lvvv1 )
I want to get something sorted here.
Let me just...
November 15th, 2020 04:48 - love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st)
Wasted your time and energy, didn\'t you orchidee?
November 14th, 2020 16:53 - Poetry to Pass the Time (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Yes you cracked that one. I\'m left with rhythm, rhyme and in the end,...
November 14th, 2020 16:34 - LIFETIME (Dove)
Both deeply affecting and erotic.........aah......
Many thanks for that...
November 14th, 2020 16:27 - Such a Good Start. (Goldfinch60)
For pities sake - since joining MPS it has taken over my life. I spend...
November 14th, 2020 04:26 - It\'s over then? (Doggerel Dave)
Absolutely Andy.
I had two (serially monogamous) relationships in the
...
November 14th, 2020 03:16 - It\'s over then? (Doggerel Dave)
Thanks Phil for your reading. Oh I suppose I\'ll have to blow my cover a...
November 14th, 2020 00:47 - It\'s over then? (Doggerel Dave)
Noticed one theme common at MPS is Love - found , gained, rejected (or...
November 13th, 2020 17:44 - Praise Prelude (Orchidee)
Well many thanks orchidee. Bought back some very old memories.
But...
November 13th, 2020 16:15 - 14 x 14 (AuburnScribbler)
Got it. I\'m in the accommodation I\'ve always favoured. In the UK it\'s...
November 13th, 2020 06:32 - Praise Prelude (Orchidee)
Hello Orchidee:
And don\'t get tense - I\'m not going to blast away at...
November 13th, 2020 06:09 - UK ADAPTABILITY ~ A FREE VERSE 2 12 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
All hail A & B & S the C:
You do manage to pump this stuff out, don\'t...
November 13th, 2020 05:30 - Love Is How It Feels (MendedFences27)
Gradual and smooth. Wish more relationships AND poetry were like...
November 13th, 2020 05:12 - White Noise is the Right Noise (A Homage to ASMR) (AuburnScribbler)
Some seriously weird shit going down there, but seems harmless enough. so...
November 13th, 2020 00:41 - USA ~ SEVEN KEY ENVIRONMENTAL ISSUES ~ SEVEN RHYMING QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
\'Hope you are right.....I mean Left...oh you know what I mean....?
Love...
November 11th, 2020 18:38 - to end all wars (Dusk arising)
\"Linger not stranger....\"
A good \'un, your peice.
Kind regards...
November 11th, 2020 18:06 - Winning. (Goldfinch60)
Now depending what you are referring to, I obviously don\'t mind winning,...
November 11th, 2020 03:46 - A Relationship (Doggerel Dave)
Well yeh, but some, like this one, have a certain sense of place, an...
November 11th, 2020 03:28 - Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.)
The memories your poem evoked: Blackberrying as a kid; sampling homemade...
November 10th, 2020 21:19 - An Apology (AwHec8)
Good for you mate. But steady on - don\'t drown in misery....
Take care...
November 10th, 2020 19:19 - Cinema Paridiso. (Goldfinch60)
You get my vote , Andy. your piece locates music\'s role perfectly....
November 10th, 2020 18:16 - Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8)
So we have two areas of divergent thinking here:
-You believe in the...
November 10th, 2020 17:53 - Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8)
Thanks Don - you know, I almost managed to read most of your last entry....
November 10th, 2020 07:08 - Harry (Doggerel Dave)
So I\'m sure your husband knows the score, and treats you with double...
November 10th, 2020 06:50 - Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8)
Oh Don - \'sorry I intervened. You just carry on. But you won\'t include...
November 10th, 2020 04:26 - love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st)
I\'d give it up, DA. I don\'t think you\'ll get through and so the other...
November 9th, 2020 20:51 - Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8)
Oh please - you should realise that \"God made man in his own image\" is...
November 9th, 2020 20:35 - Number forty six - White House occupant re: guarding President elect Joe Biden (Rew4er2nail)
Surreal but vivid - message comes through loud and clear.
And I like...
November 9th, 2020 20:11 - Unsung (Fay Slimm.)
What to say? You know it\'s good without any endorsement from me, Fay. You...
November 8th, 2020 19:13 - A Day Out in London Town (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Ah but you have the West Yorkshire Moors around you and under your feet,...
November 8th, 2020 18:42 - A Day Out in London Town (Alan .S. Jeeves)
\"Spose I\'m obligated to add my three hapeth: Love the place (as it was...
November 8th, 2020 07:55 - PEACE...WHEN THE MONKEY BECOMES A MONK (Airatmaninravi)
Wow! you stuck your head up above the parapet there, DA. But well said -...
November 7th, 2020 19:20 - Harry (Doggerel Dave)
Huntsmans in Australia are large (for a spider). As the common name...
November 6th, 2020 20:21 - Lost & Found (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I\'m sure you don\'t need or want any commentary from me or even anyone...
November 6th, 2020 19:28 - things to come (Dusk arising)
Thanks DA. Beyond the great structure as a piece of poetry and the \'good...
November 6th, 2020 19:04 - Dressing aTurkey (Dove)
Bound to RB - in fact my user photo was taken last season at my...
November 6th, 2020 17:52 - Lockdown Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Ah Andy - I don\'t know what to say about lockdown as I\'ve never really...
November 6th, 2020 04:58 - Self-sabotage (Aa Harvey)
Are all your poems like this? I dare not look.
You are here. So having...
November 5th, 2020 19:42 - Smiles Are Always There. (Goldfinch60)
Plenty of material there, Andy - at the absurdity of this life and...
November 5th, 2020 03:40
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