Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- She was (Anu)
A life guided totally by emotion sounds like disaster to me.
And I\'m not...
September 15th, 2021 18:46 - 14 Lines (Tema)
Sonnet - you sure?
September 15th, 2021 07:48 - what’s wrong with silence? (Asrealastheycome)
Yes - I can relate to that - pop it in the same bag as Summer Lovin.
September 15th, 2021 07:14 - summer lovin’ (Asrealastheycome)
I \'m not a great fan of love poetry generally (and there\'s a lot of it)....
September 15th, 2021 07:10 - Phucking Phiretrucks (Ken23)
So this is pfun , is it?
September 15th, 2021 02:16 - The curse of bad timing (HannahElisabeth)
The geography of one of your relationships well scanned, Hannah.
I...
September 14th, 2021 20:09 - Jeremy Wade Delle (Julietmonty)
Pearl jam spreads nicely , does it? Not too sugary?
September 14th, 2021 19:51 - Path (Jerry Reynolds)
You have encapsulated a personal affinity with this place perfectly,
September 14th, 2021 19:48 - A dot in the universe (Fozzy)
Although I\'m not too sure about the word \'given\' (carping, I know), I...
September 14th, 2021 19:21 - Good at or Good for poetry is at the core (Poetic Dan)
That great succinct shortie really got to me Dan - nothing there to...
September 14th, 2021 04:25 - Paresaan nahi thik hoon mein (Black_diamond)
Oh I\'ll translate for you now, Dusk,-
Doo bah dah booloks shoo...
September 14th, 2021 03:58 - Online Classes (Maira)
As well and truly a Senior who is comfortable with an old clunker of a pc...
September 13th, 2021 08:24 - Dowlish Wake (Goldfinch60)
Had to Google Dowlish Wake....... I wish you wouldn\'t do this to me, Andy...
September 13th, 2021 01:32 - All on a pleasant meadow (Jarcher54)
Missed this first time round (second time today!) Glad I got here via the...
September 13th, 2021 01:15 - Footprints in the Sand (2021 Revision) (APoeticTurtle)
I think I get the point - maybe.
But where are you coming from with this?...
September 13th, 2021 00:24 - What do You See? (Cygnus X-1)
Neat write - don\'t know how I missed it before.
September 13th, 2021 00:16 - No Evidence to be Found? (Cygnus X-1)
Fun write there, Cyg. Enjoyed that very much.
September 13th, 2021 00:11 - Sounds (Fay Slimm.)
Oh come on Fay - cut to the chase: on second reading I couldn\'t wait to...
September 12th, 2021 07:43 - Безисходность (AntoZa)
No background no context do you provide;
It stands alone, a masterpiece,...
September 12th, 2021 07:08 - Leather (Ruby 2446)
No background no context do you provide;
It stands alone, a masterpiece,...
September 12th, 2021 07:00 - Sick Of Waiting (Jo)
That is because you are waiting, Jo.....Get on and do life......
September 12th, 2021 05:32 - Off the beaten track (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
I make it a habit to try to read your poetic contributions here..love the...
September 12th, 2021 05:18 - Silhouette of Freedom (Nexune)
No background no context do you provide;
It stands alone, a masterpiece,...
September 12th, 2021 05:06 - Universal Truth #1 (Saxon Crow)
As in \'We are all in this together, aren\'t we?\'?
Well actually (and...
September 12th, 2021 01:44 - Heavy handed (HannahElisabeth)
Got to give this one the big miss - sorry, Hannah yer Uncle Dave...
September 11th, 2021 22:22 - DOWNTOWN GIRL…09/11/2001 (Laura🌻)
Must be a particularly bad time for you right now, Laura - You have...
September 11th, 2021 21:41 - Hedgehogs (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Great little plea, Kevin..... Suggestion - send some to Australia and let...
September 11th, 2021 21:33 - From Darkness To Light (Orchidee)
Not addressed at you, Orchi - but, enough.
News programmes, special...
September 11th, 2021 21:24 - People Always Prefer Rainbows (Saxon Crow)
Of course I\'m your thunder cloud with plenty of it, Sax.... Climate...
September 11th, 2021 01:25 - NOTHING TO GRAIN (Joe Marcello)
Dunno the market, Joe ....but if sugar was the culprit there, It should...
September 10th, 2021 22:54 - Enough (WhiskeyyLullaby)
Love, love unrequited, love lost, sadness...It\'s a crowded field here at...
September 10th, 2021 21:51 - That Day, And Onwards (Tema)
Here at MPS (and I don’t exclude myself from this) when we think of (and...
September 10th, 2021 21:13 - Narcissist (Neville)
Oh yes Nev, they exist - both genders. And ofttimes the male version is...
September 10th, 2021 20:13 - Nelson Went To Battle. (Goldfinch60)
Did you do it on white paper so the mothballs didn\'t show up, Andy?...
September 10th, 2021 01:07 - The Darkest Place (Saxon Crow)
To be powerless in a relationship is for me the best place to be. When I...
September 10th, 2021 00:59 - A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry (Saxon Crow)
Garn - it\'s got Passion \'n Power \'n ...\'n... \'n ...\'n - yeh, all of...
September 9th, 2021 17:48 - Oh, Georgia (HannahElisabeth)
I thought it was the Brits who had the wonky weather, but I bet they...
September 9th, 2021 01:23 - The moon and her wolf (HannahElisabeth)
I do hope you are able to pass that to someone also significant in G\'s...
September 8th, 2021 23:53 - My Lotus and Me (Neville)
Well I suppose if you are a tree and not a hand and don’t have another...
September 8th, 2021 20:53 - 𝒜𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓏𝒶𝑔𝑜𝓇𝒶𝓅𝒽𝑜𝒷𝒾𝒶 (Dove)
Me, you can forget - memories of me are no good to the me that I am now....
September 8th, 2021 19:55 - When the Sea Fret Hit (Neville)
Despite the atmosphere and atmospherics (are they different?) your piece...
September 7th, 2021 19:24 - Untamed (Fay Slimm.)
No - just envious, Fay. And a write which doesn\'t allow me to forget in...
September 7th, 2021 05:03 - Decisions (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely - that should be the way it goes.....
September 7th, 2021 05:00 - Murderers Lament (Saxon Crow)
I\'d suggest a torch with some long life batteries plus spares....
I...
September 7th, 2021 02:01 - THE SEVENTH FLOOR (PETERHARRISON)
Thanks for that, Peter – it’s the kind of poetry I can relate to with...
September 6th, 2021 21:27 - Wryneck (Neville)
Well If you keep looking over your shoulder for them dicky birds they for...
September 6th, 2021 07:49 - Changes. (Fay Slimm.)
That’s a cop out, Fay! – You’ve passed all that poetry power and...
September 6th, 2021 07:31 - Slow Train. (Goldfinch60)
I have memories of steam train travel as a kid, I worked with them later...
September 6th, 2021 07:02 - Metamorphosis (HannahElisabeth)
Does feel a little fevered to me, Hannah - metaphors are not a strength...
September 6th, 2021 04:22 - Wanted (Lulu Boatwright)
Difficult to work this one out - never got past the three kids she really...
September 6th, 2021 04:06 - Listen Through the Breeze (Neville)
Did you get it together again or not, Nev?
Great flow with some depth -...
September 5th, 2021 05:30 - यारियां (Rahul verma (Rv))
Apparently , from the evidence found in his \'About me\" he has at least...
September 5th, 2021 05:15 - Wasted Day - Almost. (Goldfinch60)
\"Always look on the bright side of life....\" And you do Andy, without...
September 5th, 2021 01:49 - The Stars are Jellyfish (Saxon Crow)
Sax - \'Surreal\' is not a sufficient or even adequate descriptor for your...
September 5th, 2021 01:25 - Wishes (HannahElisabeth)
Ambivalence, Hannah? I want to turn that into two separate pieces:
Top...
September 4th, 2021 17:44 - This is Not a Hake (Neville)
Could be shark - ah no - they\'re protected (just) now.....
September 4th, 2021 17:19 - Time to Heal (James Michael)
Thanks for that J. I may have to follow your daughter if I hope to retain...
September 4th, 2021 17:05 - Cloud Nine (Jo)
Garn - you shoulda stayed.....
September 4th, 2021 06:29 - Multifunctional human (DrSafaAamir786)
Study of a woman\'s role in a different culture to mine - thanks.
September 4th, 2021 05:06 - Cloud Nine (Jo)
Stay put - I would....and just whisper the directions...
I enjoyed that...
September 4th, 2021 05:03 - ‘Hell hath no fury like a…’ (Laura🌻)
Nowhere near it are you, Laura? You are in Italy, according to your...
September 4th, 2021 04:48 - TIME (Sal246)
Good advice.
Welcome to MPS (Trad. greeting here) Please feel free to...
September 4th, 2021 04:32 - Forgotten class (Jim Jimminy)
Absolutely - you have painted a perfect picture of that man\'s...
September 4th, 2021 04:24 - Look At The Moon (Goldfinch60)
I suspect I\'d be howling at the moon by the time I reached that stage,...
September 4th, 2021 01:16 - Paresaan nahi thik hoon mein (Black_diamond)
Just indulge me.- I know I\'m a cranky old bugger, but the explanation...
September 4th, 2021 00:57 - Looking back. (Chris Duffy)
Cheers, Mate - There\'s something of most people\'s lives in there...
September 4th, 2021 00:38 - Time to Heal (James Michael)
Good statement there - clear and unambiguous. Thanks.
Unfortunately we...
September 4th, 2021 00:31 - cold and smooth bath tiles (Devinvezzuto)
Why?
September 4th, 2021 00:24 - VINE TUNING (Joe Marcello)
Why you would drink old out of date Coca Cola is beyond me, Joe - I\'ve...
September 4th, 2021 00:11 - Ars Poetica (M.E.M.)
A message to be nailed on to the door of every person with poetic...
September 3rd, 2021 18:15 - STONES KNOW (Fay Slimm.)
A rich and atmospheric portrait of past mining of tin and copper in...
September 3rd, 2021 06:11 - Smaller Balls? (Goldfinch60)
Nothing plural here... Are you sure that croquet etiquette doesn\'t demand...
September 3rd, 2021 04:40 - I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven (Neville)
Big question,........Saxophones would definitely sooth the transition......
September 3rd, 2021 04:31 - This is a woman’s world (Florence J)
Go for it Flo. Took me time to work out what you were on about, but by the...
September 3rd, 2021 04:06 - Blighted (Fay Slimm.)
Your sweet poetry will draw the reader in and then, engaged with the...
September 2nd, 2021 21:05 - Confused (Trevor_Ricardo17$)
Yes - read and read again and ask what makes sense to you - that way you...
September 2nd, 2021 08:36 - Just-ifying Myself (Jo)
You have an interesting style, Jo - allows for quick comprehension, which...
September 2nd, 2021 08:23 - Songs From a Room (Neville)
Don\'t need to add to your piece, do I Nev.... a beautifully crafted...
September 2nd, 2021 04:42 - Unattainable (Lorna)
That one thing that I lack is a full comprehension of the idiocy and...
September 2nd, 2021 04:24 - The Unseen Diamonds Of The Slum (Darsana)
Very romantic , with a good message. And since those kid\'s lives will...
September 1st, 2021 23:07 - Called to War (Neville)
It\'s always someone else\'s bloody war. In Australia of right age at the...
September 1st, 2021 22:03 - Haunted (HannahElisabeth)
Absence and emptiness.
September 1st, 2021 07:42 - Salute Our Soldiers (Thekkinkkattil)
Every Country - or just yours?
September 1st, 2021 07:39 - Swaziland (BusyB)
Good for you - I don\'t know why you left.
Don\'t worry - I\'m a...
September 1st, 2021 04:28 - the apologetic generation (NafisaSB)
Not sure of that...but saw the argument .. though short and punchy might...
September 1st, 2021 04:23 - Worry. (Goldfinch60)
Worry away Andy - unless that worry can result in a preemptive strategy,...
September 1st, 2021 04:11 - Sugar Baby (Lorna)
Great little tune there, Lorna
I\'ll vote for alcohol in very measured...
September 1st, 2021 02:38 - Abyss (Coyote)
I like it C, because of its cynicism and pissedoffedness (creative use of...
August 31st, 2021 19:16 - To Be Continued Maybe (Neville)
Now there\'s a rich portrait of a woman who, (oh dear!) in the words of Mr...
August 31st, 2021 04:59 - Mission Complete (Michael J. Schaeffer)
I\'ll believe it when I see it ...and then perhaps....
August 31st, 2021 04:41 - The Treatise of Love (Neville)
Not my thing, really Nev - but even I can relate to the isolation and...
August 31st, 2021 00:35 - Dancing in the snow (HannahElisabeth)
In terms of structure alone this makes, for me a great piece of verse...
August 31st, 2021 00:11 - MIND GAMES (Andy Hunter)
Yes - and do it now, Andy.
August 30th, 2021 22:38 - Heartbeat to heartbeat (Florence J)
Thanks for responding. Need I add that I hope that all future activity in...
August 30th, 2021 06:13 - I\'m Jealous of Mary Jane (Kingdomcleeves)
Not only is he a dope head, he\'s a dope as well - doesn\'t know what...
August 30th, 2021 05:14 - Dumbness (Fay Slimm.)
Human need and \'Love\' - so freely bandied about here - weaponised, Fay.
August 30th, 2021 05:03 - Heartbeat to heartbeat (Florence J)
Can\'t say I understand this issue completely (I\'m male) but I felt your...
August 30th, 2021 04:57 - It\'s Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60)
Anyone left?? 😊 😊
August 30th, 2021 04:35 - Wanderlust (Lorna)
Aren\'t you being just a little too understanding there,...
August 29th, 2021 20:29 - The toupee in the pub. (Chris Duffy)
With the hat no need for the toup. Feels to me like Your pub\'s habitues...
August 29th, 2021 18:14
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