Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• यारियां (Rahul verma (Rv)) Apparently , from the evidence found in his \'About me\" he has at least...
  September 5th, 2021 05:15
• Wasted Day - Almost. (Goldfinch60) \"Always look on the bright side of life....\" And you do Andy, without...
  September 5th, 2021 01:49
• The Stars are Jellyfish (Saxon Crow) Sax - \'Surreal\' is not a sufficient or even adequate descriptor for your...
  September 5th, 2021 01:25
• Wishes (HannahElisabeth) Ambivalence, Hannah? I want to turn that into two separate pieces: Top...
  September 4th, 2021 17:44
• This is Not a Hake (Neville) Could be shark - ah no - they\'re protected (just) now.....
  September 4th, 2021 17:19
• Time to Heal (James Michael) Thanks for that J. I may have to follow your daughter if I hope to retain...
  September 4th, 2021 17:05
• Cloud Nine (Jo) Garn - you shoulda stayed.....
  September 4th, 2021 06:29
• Multifunctional human (DrSafaAamir786) Study of a woman\'s role in a different culture to mine - thanks.
  September 4th, 2021 05:06
• Cloud Nine (Jo) Stay put - I would....and just whisper the directions... I enjoyed that...
  September 4th, 2021 05:03
• ‘Hell hath no fury like a…’ (Laura🌻) Nowhere near it are you, Laura? You are in Italy, according to your...
  September 4th, 2021 04:48
• TIME (Sal246) Good advice. Welcome to MPS (Trad. greeting here) Please feel free to...
  September 4th, 2021 04:32
• Forgotten class (Jim Jimminy) Absolutely - you have painted a perfect picture of that man\'s...
  September 4th, 2021 04:24
• Look At The Moon (Goldfinch60) I suspect I\'d be howling at the moon by the time I reached that stage,...
  September 4th, 2021 01:16
• Paresaan nahi thik hoon mein (Black_diamond) Just indulge me.- I know I\'m a cranky old bugger, but the explanation...
  September 4th, 2021 00:57
• Looking back. (Chris Duffy) Cheers, Mate - There\'s something of most people\'s lives in there...
  September 4th, 2021 00:38
• Time to Heal (James Michael) Good statement there - clear and unambiguous. Thanks. Unfortunately we...
  September 4th, 2021 00:31
• cold and smooth bath tiles (Devinvezzuto) Why?
  September 4th, 2021 00:24
• VINE TUNING (Joe Marcello) Why you would drink old out of date Coca Cola is beyond me, Joe - I\'ve...
  September 4th, 2021 00:11
• Ars Poetica (M.E.M.) A message to be nailed on to the door of every person with poetic...
  September 3rd, 2021 18:15
• STONES KNOW (Fay Slimm.) A rich and atmospheric portrait of past mining of tin and copper in...
  September 3rd, 2021 06:11
• Smaller Balls? (Goldfinch60) Nothing plural here... Are you sure that croquet etiquette doesn\'t demand...
  September 3rd, 2021 04:40
• I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven (Neville) Big question,........Saxophones would definitely sooth the transition......
  September 3rd, 2021 04:31
• This is a woman’s world (Florence J) Go for it Flo. Took me time to work out what you were on about, but by the...
  September 3rd, 2021 04:06
• Blighted (Fay Slimm.) Your sweet poetry will draw the reader in and then, engaged with the...
  September 2nd, 2021 21:05
• Confused (Trevor_Ricardo17$) Yes - read and read again and ask what makes sense to you - that way you...
  September 2nd, 2021 08:36
• Just-ifying Myself (Jo) You have an interesting style, Jo - allows for quick comprehension, which...
  September 2nd, 2021 08:23
• Songs From a Room (Neville) Don\'t need to add to your piece, do I Nev.... a beautifully crafted...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:42
• Unattainable (Lorna) That one thing that I lack is a full comprehension of the idiocy and...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:24
• The Unseen Diamonds Of The Slum (Darsana) Very romantic , with a good message. And since those kid\'s lives will...
  September 1st, 2021 23:07
• Called to War (Neville) It\'s always someone else\'s bloody war. In Australia of right age at the...
  September 1st, 2021 22:03
• Haunted (HannahElisabeth) Absence and emptiness.
  September 1st, 2021 07:42
• Salute Our Soldiers (Thekkinkkattil) Every Country - or just yours?
  September 1st, 2021 07:39
• Swaziland (BusyB) Good for you - I don\'t know why you left. Don\'t worry - I\'m a...
  September 1st, 2021 04:28
• the apologetic generation (NafisaSB) Not sure of that...but saw the argument .. though short and punchy might...
  September 1st, 2021 04:23
• Worry. (Goldfinch60) Worry away Andy - unless that worry can result in a preemptive strategy,...
  September 1st, 2021 04:11
• Sugar Baby (Lorna) Great little tune there, Lorna I\'ll vote for alcohol in very measured...
  September 1st, 2021 02:38
• Abyss (Coyote) I like it C, because of its cynicism and pissedoffedness (creative use of...
  August 31st, 2021 19:16
• To Be Continued Maybe (Neville) Now there\'s a rich portrait of a woman who, (oh dear!) in the words of Mr...
  August 31st, 2021 04:59
• Mission Complete (Michael J. Schaeffer) I\'ll believe it when I see it ...and then perhaps....
  August 31st, 2021 04:41
• The Treatise of Love (Neville) Not my thing, really Nev - but even I can relate to the isolation and...
  August 31st, 2021 00:35
• Dancing in the snow (HannahElisabeth) In terms of structure alone this makes, for me a great piece of verse...
  August 31st, 2021 00:11
• MIND GAMES (Andy Hunter) Yes - and do it now, Andy.
  August 30th, 2021 22:38
• Heartbeat to heartbeat (Florence J) Thanks for responding. Need I add that I hope that all future activity in...
  August 30th, 2021 06:13
• I\'m Jealous of Mary Jane (Kingdomcleeves) Not only is he a dope head, he\'s a dope as well - doesn\'t know what...
  August 30th, 2021 05:14
• Dumbness (Fay Slimm.) Human need and \'Love\' - so freely bandied about here - weaponised, Fay.
  August 30th, 2021 05:03
• Heartbeat to heartbeat (Florence J) Can\'t say I understand this issue completely (I\'m male) but I felt your...
  August 30th, 2021 04:57
• It\'s Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60) Anyone left?? 😊 😊
  August 30th, 2021 04:35
• Wanderlust (Lorna) Aren\'t you being just a little too understanding there,...
  August 29th, 2021 20:29
• The toupee in the pub. (Chris Duffy) With the hat no need for the toup. Feels to me like Your pub\'s habitues...
  August 29th, 2021 18:14
• A Permanent Embrace (Neville) (He tried to save her from the foggy foggy dew, but there woz a cold...
  August 29th, 2021 17:56
• I ain\'t mad (Merissa) Right then Merissa: That, plus your explanation is a powerful picture of...
  August 29th, 2021 17:33
• FIFTY YEARS FROM NOW (PETERHARRISON) An imaginative write enjoyable the way SF is. But come on - bring it...
  August 29th, 2021 06:45
• Then Maybe (Jo) I think you are right - but if at anytime you wanted to change, then let...
  August 29th, 2021 05:32
• Pleasures (Fay Slimm.) Go for it with every fibre of your being........
  August 29th, 2021 05:27
• Please be Gentle (Saxon Crow) Good counsel there Sax. Are you, or have been, in one of the caring...
  August 29th, 2021 01:46
• Thankfulness. (Goldfinch60) IF in a good position, then let\'s enjoy, be thankful but not...
  August 29th, 2021 01:40
• Tethered To A Moment (Flyingfish) Plenty of tension there - imaginative write or real, I experienced...
  August 29th, 2021 01:35
• Proof of My Charity (Gary Edward Geraci) Hi Gary – I’ve just seen the Utube presentation by your Bishop and...
  August 29th, 2021 00:42
• Take Out (KarvelD) Not absolutely sure where you are coming from, but it makes an interesting...
  August 28th, 2021 21:49
• Man and Woman (Chandan chatterjee) A clear expression of traditional roles in troubled times. Thanks for...
  August 28th, 2021 21:32
• An Old Promise Well Kept (Neville) A bond, broken by circumstance, but his side of the contract never...
  August 28th, 2021 05:22
• Learn to Dance (Flyingfish) A straightforward portrait of a long term relationship - with more depth...
  August 28th, 2021 00:45
• GOING AWAY FOR A WHILE. (The elder poet) Another site?? I had a vision of you roaring off on your Harley deep into...
  August 27th, 2021 19:39
• Bus Folk (AuburnScribbler) You know Ben, it really wasn\'t necessary to visit your home page to know...
  August 27th, 2021 19:27
• She Calls Them Tears (Neville) Ah Neville, such loss…such unspoken grief… that salt can still be felt...
  August 27th, 2021 18:37
• Shut Up Shutting Up? (Orchidee) I thought we had got 1066 and your future singing career sorted back in ...
  August 27th, 2021 03:46
• EIEIO (Coyote) Yes you have got it , C. But some people cannot live without something...
  August 26th, 2021 20:32
• A LIFE TIME. (The elder poet) I can\'t relate to the next two thousand years , but you have nailed the...
  August 26th, 2021 20:19
• Holding On (Jerry Reynolds) ....fully true....I\'ve been pondering a way to induce tears...but the...
  August 26th, 2021 20:10
• Displacement (BusyB) I think you have a truth nailed. Thanks for putting it out there.
  August 26th, 2021 08:27
• Weeds by Nickname Cursed (Flyingfish) Oh - goodness me! where did they come from, John?
  August 26th, 2021 04:32
• Home (Jay-Lee Jane) Keep at it, Jane. You have a place here. I\'ve lived in Australia for...
  August 26th, 2021 04:29
• dictators are like amplifiers (Jon Nakapalau) You might classify this as surrealist, Jon, but the symbiotic relationship...
  August 25th, 2021 21:46
• They Say (Jim Jimminy) Should never have been there in the first place, but if there, behave like...
  August 25th, 2021 21:37
• Flag of My Fathers (Coyote) As above, really - Owing to time difference I\'ve come late... Mid...
  August 25th, 2021 20:18
• ᴇᴘʜᴇᴍᴇʀᴀʟ ᴀs  ʟᴏᴠᴇ ᴍᴀʏ ʙᴇ (Dove) Love passes to abiding regard and care....Or am I missing the...
  August 25th, 2021 20:00
• A Hedgerow Chant (Langton) Nothing to add - that shortie said it all. Many thanks.
  August 25th, 2021 19:53
• GREAT OAK (PETERHARRISON) As memory of a certain time in my life, an old English oak does it for...
  August 25th, 2021 19:49
• The land of Anon. (Doggerel Dave) The political systems of every country in the world should be our focus, I...
  August 25th, 2021 19:05
• An Unexpected Chaos (Neville) Nobody\'s perfect, Nev. I\'m not, but I aspire to create an environment...
  August 25th, 2021 04:23
• Cloistered (Fay Slimm.) All that erotic literature, all that erotic content on line - all...
  August 25th, 2021 01:46
• Do I Qualify? (Goldfinch60) I\'m sure the sales person was too tactful, too circumspect really Andy,...
  August 25th, 2021 01:26
• Perpetual Insanity (Coyote) Thanks, C for applying your poetic talent to war, something which has...
  August 24th, 2021 20:51
• Two Herds, Two Fates (Flyingfish) I’ve tried hard not to comment on your piece here. This represents...
  August 24th, 2021 19:59
• A Pair of Men (Jay-Lee Jane) Great structure to the poem and clear descriptions of the two characters I...
  August 24th, 2021 19:19
• A Cat Called Rabbit (Langton) Yes, this is a ‘well done’ piece of poetry. Brings out the reminiscent...
  August 24th, 2021 08:50
• Perception (Fay Slimm.) Play on Fay, play on – and please give eternity, infinity and now...
  August 24th, 2021 08:32
• Superfluity (Jo) And neither should you be obliged to. Mum wants to fulfill her desired...
  August 24th, 2021 05:54
• Where Did The Time Go? (Goldfinch60) Happens to me often enough , Andy. Even with the task list, half the items...
  August 24th, 2021 01:33
• When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud (Neville) Value the human with a conscience, Nev - sometimes I believe they are...
  August 24th, 2021 01:27
• Aqua Regia (HannahElisabeth) Another one down done and dusted. As a bloke (guy) should I start to feel...
  August 24th, 2021 01:18
• Superman (Anthony Esposito) I am unsure if this is high satire or some expression of an unmet...
  August 23rd, 2021 19:33
• The Fullest of Moons (Neville) I can see two seriously intriguing pictures here , Nev - the first, your...
  August 23rd, 2021 08:01
• Worry (Lorna) I never knew you cared, Lorna..... A polished write that speaks of...
  August 23rd, 2021 04:02
• The Within (Flyingfish) Plenty of intelligence and thought been thrown at this question - to me it...
  August 23rd, 2021 02:27
• Fools and Horses (Jim Jimminy) I\'ve had a few jobs in my time, one or two interesting some just this...
  August 23rd, 2021 01:02
• Fools and Horses (Jim Jimminy) Meat = meet. Change and I\'ll scrub this.
  August 23rd, 2021 00:50
• Mime (Coyote) I know that feeling. Why? (and this is not directed at you C, but to any...
  August 23rd, 2021 00:41
• A Very Personal Holocaust (Neville) Much hard graft went into that, Nev – and more worthy grounds would be...
  August 22nd, 2021 20:33
• A Dream (Dove) Lust, (sorry) - Last stanza got me to perfection. The rest? Yeh well, if...
  August 22nd, 2021 19:45