Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Pray Keep the Mask On (Neville) .....and we might just still make the 1.5 metre rule if you were to lean...
  November 13th, 2021 06:47
• The Ex (Paul Bell) \'Seen a bit of life in your time, haven\'t you, Paul? Well entertained...
  November 13th, 2021 06:33
• Letting Fade (Fay Slimm.) The cycle which is fundamental to everything, including the Universe,...
  November 12th, 2021 19:24
• THE ICE CAPS ARE MELTING (Andy Hunter) Got to vote for that, Andy. Overpopulation and the powers that endorse...
  November 12th, 2021 19:07
• No Such Thing as Empty Space (Neville) Smells (and I mean this in the best possible sense) a little like a Zen...
  November 11th, 2021 18:59
• Fate #1 (Saxon Crow) Sorry, mate - I have too pedestrian a mind to come to grips with this.
  November 11th, 2021 00:37
• Churches (Gwennie Jewel SAMPÉ) As a complete non believer, I remain, however convinced that for SOME the...
  November 10th, 2021 17:41
• no fear for comforts company (Dusk arising) That got me where it hurts most, dusk. Yes, mine. Beautiful piece of...
  November 10th, 2021 07:04
• Waiting For What. (Goldfinch60) Are you starting to weird up, Andy? this is the second piece on...
  November 10th, 2021 06:53
• Musings (Orchidee) Walk away, mate - walk away. Start your own church. Probably a bit late,...
  November 10th, 2021 06:35
• Sweet Stupor (Fay Slimm.) \'Time to get up\' - oh the lethargic response which isn\'t me, but is -...
  November 10th, 2021 06:21
• they never leave you (Dusk arising) Linger not, stranger; shed no tear. Go back to those who sent us...
  November 10th, 2021 00:53
• CAPTAIN FOR A DAY (Andy Hunter) Yep - \'daft\' would be the self criticism I\'d apply to myself should I...
  November 9th, 2021 18:57
• Life (Paul Bell) Losers unite? Not sure about this one, Paul.....
  November 9th, 2021 05:27
• The magic of Venice (Sund1951) Since I\'ve very recently put up a short verse relating to my first...
  November 9th, 2021 05:16
• Cooking Curse. (Goldfinch60) But how\'s your digestion, Andy? You obviously need Digestive Biscuit...
  November 8th, 2021 04:02
• The Fridge (Paul Bell) It has come to my attention that a bloody good laugh with certain very...
  November 8th, 2021 00:06
• grin and bear it (Dusk arising) Unspeakable really dusk – though I’ll try. A picture of a great...
  November 7th, 2021 19:32
• No Chips! (Goldfinch60) Apparently the semiconductor shortage is world wide, so my apologies for...
  November 7th, 2021 00:59
• I went for a drink with an Irishman (Saxon Crow) Your mate Barry - he\'s the Irishman? OK - that\'a a relief....otherwise...
  November 6th, 2021 07:05
• cutting the mustard (Dusk arising) Is \'tongue in cheek\' a get out clause with respect to your criticism,...
  November 5th, 2021 18:51
• Wake (Saxon Crow) Hey Sax – as a fan of Stanley Holloway, you will be familiar with his...
  November 5th, 2021 00:22
• Cupiditates Spina (Charles_newOwner) Precisely - all too often love and lust are conflated; let\'s separate...
  November 4th, 2021 18:57
• Kitten (Neville) Nothing like the old role play to get \'em at it.... That\'s lowered...
  November 4th, 2021 03:57
• Madly Flowering. (Goldfinch60) Since you are the perennial optimist, Andy, this must be cause for...
  November 4th, 2021 03:50
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards) What needs to be said about Creationism beyond your few dissecting...
  November 4th, 2021 03:42
• 3 a.m. (HannahElisabeth) Now I don’t want to be picky, but somewhere I thought there were some...
  November 4th, 2021 03:34
• Crashing Pinballs (M.E.M.) I get this completely, those thoughts are slippery little buggers aren\'t...
  November 2nd, 2021 20:15
• Let These Words Speak For Themselves (Neville) Bustle and rush to where? absolute futility....Nah I\'ve already made this...
  November 2nd, 2021 20:00
• Oh woe! (Orchidee) Well at least none can accuse you of product misrepresentation - the label...
  November 2nd, 2021 19:52
• Storm Petrel Rising (Neville) Smelt the salt the sea and the foam tangy in my nostrils, never saw no...
  November 1st, 2021 07:52
• Too Long (Fay Slimm.) Great mood and atmosphere there, Fay - something I know quite well -...
  November 1st, 2021 07:35
• The Glory Of My LIfe. (Goldfinch60) Your joy, your happiness radiates out from these pages every day, Andy -...
  November 1st, 2021 07:26
• somewhere else (Dusk arising) I\'ll vote for that, dusk - your piece that is, not the situation it...
  November 1st, 2021 07:19
• I\'ve already been; (HannahElisabeth) Hannah - I cannot find a single argument to muster against anything or...
  November 1st, 2021 00:13
• their sunday habit (Dusk arising) It\'s a great little statement, dusk - paints a pretty accurate picture,...
  October 31st, 2021 20:00
• gain the future (Dusk arising) Gain the future from deep in the past.... a creepy one dusk - but non the...
  October 30th, 2021 07:33
• Halloween Horror (Orchidee) Garn Orchi - if you are going to believe in him, then believe he can do...
  October 30th, 2021 07:27
• Best (Fay Slimm.) Passion this is - good for you Fay.
  October 30th, 2021 07:19
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (7) (Michael Edwards) Got a good laugh out of your last two lines Michael. Wicked...
  October 12th, 2021 16:14
• Bucket List (Figuring-it-all-out) Nothing wrong in being a dreamer, and I cannot see anyone do anything but...
  October 7th, 2021 06:38
• Did It Rain? (Goldfinch60) No idiocy there, Andy - you took a calculated gamble given the uncertain...
  October 6th, 2021 06:05
• Tall tales. (Chris Duffy) Taller than that - needed oxygen by the time I reached the end. Thanks...
  October 5th, 2021 20:05
• Riches To Riches (Orchidee) Commented upon end of orchi/Marie dialogue.
  October 5th, 2021 19:59
• Friend (IamUnicorn) This about cyber friendships? Glad I\'m not a part of it... Welcome to...
  October 5th, 2021 01:28
• Cobweb House (Figuring-it-all-out) Not too sure about all the weird content, but I\'m a sucker for a decent...
  October 5th, 2021 01:20
• Wishful (Fay Slimm.) Hi Fay- Thanks for your neat little piece. Now I fully understand what...
  October 2nd, 2021 18:58
• A Very Bad Accident. (Goldfinch60) Did no one bring a spoon, Andy? \"Be prepared - that\'s the Boy Scouts\'...
  October 2nd, 2021 04:55
• Aliens are here! (MendedFences27) Yes MF - the brain has to be altered, I think ....Not too much parody...
  October 2nd, 2021 02:27
• To the Greatest Generation (From an Aging Baby Boomer) (Lennewo) Keep at it, mate - Lets hear more about you. Perhaps a little long; short...
  September 30th, 2021 00:11
• The Ballad of Clancy\'s Leaning Horse (Len Varley) Please don\'t apologise - you are giving Banjo a run for his...
  September 28th, 2021 07:20
• Insane? (Simple-Man87) I am forced to tell you the answer is – yes. Or at least you have been...
  September 24th, 2021 07:19
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (6) (Michael Edwards) That\'s that then - I don\'\'t want no more posies. When \'s (7)?
  September 23rd, 2021 19:20
• A PRECAUTIONARY LETTER FROM CORONA VIRUS (Maira) I do take precautions, but I\'m sorry - I do worry How is it all going...
  September 23rd, 2021 19:06
• weary n weak (Dusk arising) But your strength comes through when you pen such a searingly truthful...
  September 23rd, 2021 01:47
• La Traviata. (Goldfinch60) I can never quite get over the diversity of your taste in music,...
  September 23rd, 2021 01:40
• You (Exea16) You need help. Please go out and get it.
  September 23rd, 2021 01:32
• The Mushroom Man (Germanamericanchurch) If the mushroom is of the right quality, there would be no need for me -...
  September 23rd, 2021 01:25
• Autumnal Equinox (Laura🌻) If I were sitting on a bench in NY\'s Central Park in autumn......I would...
  September 23rd, 2021 00:46
• Last breath (Rozanne) Of all the population pushed almost beyond endurance during this pandemic,...
  September 23rd, 2021 00:37
• Without Closure (Neville) So many questions: Have you: Cleaned it? Pawned it? Sold It...
  September 23rd, 2021 00:24
• Turn (Eugene) No background no context do you provide; It stands alone, a masterpiece,...
  September 23rd, 2021 00:00
• Flower (Solmaz rezaei) Advice by example there: smooth and polish your write - something all...
  September 22nd, 2021 23:55
• Generational Trauma (Mariel Ilagan) https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-16099
  September 22nd, 2021 20:56
• This Heart (Fay Slimm.) Yes Fay - I\'ve felt all of that, but there\'s no way I would attempt to...
  September 22nd, 2021 20:44
• Natures Gymnopodie. (Goldfinch60) Thanks Andy.
  September 22nd, 2021 06:43
• A Taste Well Shared (Neville) A woody fragrance pervades this piece. Rhythmic in a quite erotic way,...
  September 21st, 2021 18:34
• The Further Down, The Less You Can See (Jo) Now there\'s a salutary warning about social media if ever I\'ve read...
  September 21st, 2021 05:53
• Broken Chalice (Germanamericanchurch) A bit too enigmatic for me -and wot about the crystal didgeridoo?
  September 21st, 2021 05:47
• Moonlight. (Goldfinch60) You have never minded a bit of a laugh, have you...
  September 21st, 2021 05:39
• Bridges (Fay Slimm.) My pedestrian political mind sees it as a motion to be presented at the...
  September 20th, 2021 18:25
• For Reference Purposes Only (Neville) I resemble that remark, Nev. My book case complies with the Iron Law Of...
  September 20th, 2021 18:05
• Evolution (Thekkinkkattil) Survival of the most adapted. Are humans the exception? I had not...
  September 20th, 2021 06:30
• Degradation (Flyingfish) Heavy stuff ... never thought of it quite like that, but - yes. Life and...
  September 20th, 2021 05:55
• Who Dunnit? (Goldfinch60) Don\'t fully understand the activity, Andy - but it\'s obvious you spent...
  September 19th, 2021 20:17
• Someone More Golden (Neville) Just a rehearsal for what\'s to come, Nev. But never you care - it will...
  September 19th, 2021 06:27
• CONSTRUCT (Michael Edwards) Yes - reminds me a little of my last trip to the Old Country. I don\'t...
  September 19th, 2021 06:19
• Gonifs and gossips... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) I\'ve lived once or twice (thankfully not now), as the result of a rather...
  September 18th, 2021 20:44
• He Didn’t Make Evil (Gary Edward Geraci) Gary - Peace! But if this God of yours left us free, abdicated all...
  September 18th, 2021 20:34
• Who Knows ? (Fay Slimm.) Doom , doom. We are not far off the same position today Fay, IMHO. What...
  September 18th, 2021 06:10
• Scarper  (Neville) Mutuality all round, I\'d say....
  September 18th, 2021 06:03
• The Gravyard. (Goldfinch60) Well at least it wasn\'t \'My Way\', Andy.... But beyond that , since...
  September 18th, 2021 05:50
• Better as a daydream (HannahElisabeth) Following a precedent already shared on this thread, my take on ’Love’...
  September 18th, 2021 05:26
• Lovely Daubs in Fall (Flyingfish) Great little poem. However the subject is overcrowded on MPS at the...
  September 18th, 2021 00:30
• goodbye (Dusk arising) Massive work to get out in a day, dusk - Not pure imagination , you\'ve...
  September 18th, 2021 00:19
• Faze (SarahG) Does it need one? MPS gets many first poems without context, no \'About...
  September 17th, 2021 21:33
• The Country Sighed (Cygnus X-1) Your message is plain and well put in a strong piece of poetry. Mankind...
  September 17th, 2021 19:20
• Hard To Read (Jo) Very much agree with dusk\'s PS. And if after, there is no change then to...
  September 17th, 2021 18:16
• Everybody\'s sorry lately (IamAperson) Your title and last line perfectly frame your account of terrible domestic...
  September 17th, 2021 17:54
• This Giant House (Germanamericanchurch) Really don\'t think I\'m likely to own or encounter a bear trap but...
  September 17th, 2021 07:05
• We are all Jack (Poetic Dan) We\'re here because we\'re here, Dan - there\'s not much more we can...
  September 17th, 2021 06:46
• His Girl (The Anonymous Poet) Won\'t happen again....will it?
  September 17th, 2021 01:33
• Chasing Clouds (Langton) I\'ve observed this via my armchair and TV screen - amazing. As for...
  September 17th, 2021 01:01
• Adorning (Fay Slimm.) I think I understand a little better romantic poetry now - the embroidery...
  September 16th, 2021 07:21
• It is not your fault (User) Jilly, you are a hard one to fathom. Your three poems registered here,...
  September 16th, 2021 05:34
• Technology Passed. (Goldfinch60) Wot goes around comes around - or something, Andy - until there\'s a...
  September 16th, 2021 01:23
• Faze (SarahG) No background no context do you provide; It stands alone, a...
  September 16th, 2021 01:03
• Lying to Oneself (Trenz Pruca) Puberty? The memory grows dim...mercifully... You raise an interesting...
  September 15th, 2021 19:13
• . (Poky) A wee bit of context could go a long way here you know, poky.
  September 15th, 2021 18:58
• [ Pillow Talk ] (Heart of Babel) Absolutely relate to that in every possible way - sometimes. Took a few...
  September 15th, 2021 18:53