Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Insane? (Simple-Man87)
I am forced to tell you the answer is – yes. Or at least you have been...
September 24th, 2021 07:19 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (6) (Michael Edwards)
That\'s that then - I don\'\'t want no more posies.
When \'s (7)?
September 23rd, 2021 19:20 - A PRECAUTIONARY LETTER FROM CORONA VIRUS (Maira)
I do take precautions, but I\'m sorry - I do worry
How is it all going...
September 23rd, 2021 19:06 - weary n weak (Dusk arising)
But your strength comes through when you pen such a searingly truthful...
September 23rd, 2021 01:47 - La Traviata. (Goldfinch60)
I can never quite get over the diversity of your taste in music,...
September 23rd, 2021 01:40 - You (Exea16)
You need help. Please go out and get it.
September 23rd, 2021 01:32 - The Mushroom Man (Germanamericanchurch)
If the mushroom is of the right quality, there would be no need for me -...
September 23rd, 2021 01:25 - Autumnal Equinox (Laura🌻)
If I were sitting on a bench in NY\'s Central Park in autumn......I would...
September 23rd, 2021 00:46 - Last breath (Rozanne)
Of all the population pushed almost beyond endurance during this pandemic,...
September 23rd, 2021 00:37 - Without Closure (Neville)
So many questions:
Have you:
Cleaned it?
Pawned it?
Sold It...
September 23rd, 2021 00:24 - Turn (Eugene)
No background no context do you provide;
It stands alone, a masterpiece,...
September 23rd, 2021 00:00 - Flower (Solmaz rezaei)
Advice by example there: smooth and polish your write - something all...
September 22nd, 2021 23:55 - Generational Trauma (Mariel Ilagan)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-16099
September 22nd, 2021 20:56 - This Heart (Fay Slimm.)
Yes Fay - I\'ve felt all of that, but there\'s no way I would attempt to...
September 22nd, 2021 20:44 - Natures Gymnopodie. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Andy.
September 22nd, 2021 06:43 - A Taste Well Shared (Neville)
A woody fragrance pervades this piece. Rhythmic in a quite erotic way,...
September 21st, 2021 18:34 - The Further Down, The Less You Can See (Jo)
Now there\'s a salutary warning about social media if ever I\'ve read...
September 21st, 2021 05:53 - Broken Chalice (Germanamericanchurch)
A bit too enigmatic for me -and wot about the crystal didgeridoo?
September 21st, 2021 05:47 - Moonlight. (Goldfinch60)
You have never minded a bit of a laugh, have you...
September 21st, 2021 05:39 - Bridges (Fay Slimm.)
My pedestrian political mind sees it as a motion to be presented at the...
September 20th, 2021 18:25 - For Reference Purposes Only (Neville)
I resemble that remark, Nev.
My book case complies with the Iron Law Of...
September 20th, 2021 18:05 - Evolution (Thekkinkkattil)
Survival of the most adapted.
Are humans the exception?
I had not...
September 20th, 2021 06:30 - Degradation (Flyingfish)
Heavy stuff ... never thought of it quite like that, but - yes.
Life and...
September 20th, 2021 05:55 - Who Dunnit? (Goldfinch60)
Don\'t fully understand the activity, Andy - but it\'s obvious you spent...
September 19th, 2021 20:17 - Someone More Golden (Neville)
Just a rehearsal for what\'s to come, Nev.
But never you care - it will...
September 19th, 2021 06:27 - CONSTRUCT (Michael Edwards)
Yes - reminds me a little of my last trip to the Old Country. I don\'t...
September 19th, 2021 06:19 - Gonifs and gossips... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
I\'ve lived once or twice (thankfully not now), as the result of a rather...
September 18th, 2021 20:44 - He Didn’t Make Evil (Gary Edward Geraci)
Gary - Peace!
But if this God of yours left us free, abdicated all...
September 18th, 2021 20:34 - Who Knows ? (Fay Slimm.)
Doom , doom. We are not far off the same position today Fay, IMHO.
What...
September 18th, 2021 06:10 - Scarper (Neville)
Mutuality all round, I\'d say....
September 18th, 2021 06:03 - The Gravyard. (Goldfinch60)
Well at least it wasn\'t \'My Way\', Andy....
But beyond that , since...
September 18th, 2021 05:50 - Better as a daydream (HannahElisabeth)
Following a precedent already shared on this thread, my take on ’Love’...
September 18th, 2021 05:26 - Lovely Daubs in Fall (Flyingfish)
Great little poem. However the subject is overcrowded on MPS at the...
September 18th, 2021 00:30 - goodbye (Dusk arising)
Massive work to get out in a day, dusk - Not pure imagination , you\'ve...
September 18th, 2021 00:19 - Faze (SarahG)
Does it need one? MPS gets many first poems without context, no \'About...
September 17th, 2021 21:33 - The Country Sighed (Cygnus X-1)
Your message is plain and well put in a strong piece of poetry. Mankind...
September 17th, 2021 19:20 - Hard To Read (Jo)
Very much agree with dusk\'s PS. And if after, there is no change then to...
September 17th, 2021 18:16 - Everybody\'s sorry lately (IamAperson)
Your title and last line perfectly frame your account of terrible domestic...
September 17th, 2021 17:54 - This Giant House (Germanamericanchurch)
Really don\'t think I\'m likely to own or encounter a bear trap but...
September 17th, 2021 07:05 - We are all Jack (Poetic Dan)
We\'re here because we\'re here, Dan - there\'s not much more we can...
September 17th, 2021 06:46 - His Girl (The Anonymous Poet)
Won\'t happen again....will it?
September 17th, 2021 01:33 - Chasing Clouds (Langton)
I\'ve observed this via my armchair and TV screen - amazing. As for...
September 17th, 2021 01:01 - Adorning (Fay Slimm.)
I think I understand a little better romantic poetry now - the embroidery...
September 16th, 2021 07:21 - It is not your fault (User)
Jilly, you are a hard one to fathom. Your three poems registered here,...
September 16th, 2021 05:34 - Technology Passed. (Goldfinch60)
Wot goes around comes around - or something, Andy - until there\'s a...
September 16th, 2021 01:23 - Faze (SarahG)
No background no context do you provide;
It stands alone, a...
September 16th, 2021 01:03 - Lying to Oneself (Trenz Pruca)
Puberty? The memory grows dim...mercifully...
You raise an interesting...
September 15th, 2021 19:13 - . (Poky)
A wee bit of context could go a long way here you know, poky.
September 15th, 2021 18:58 - [ Pillow Talk ] (Heart of Babel)
Absolutely relate to that in every possible way - sometimes.
Took a few...
September 15th, 2021 18:53 - She was (Anu)
A life guided totally by emotion sounds like disaster to me.
And I\'m not...
September 15th, 2021 18:46 - 14 Lines (Tema)
Sonnet - you sure?
September 15th, 2021 07:48 - what’s wrong with silence? (Asrealastheycome)
Yes - I can relate to that - pop it in the same bag as Summer Lovin.
September 15th, 2021 07:14 - summer lovin’ (Asrealastheycome)
I \'m not a great fan of love poetry generally (and there\'s a lot of it)....
September 15th, 2021 07:10 - Phucking Phiretrucks (Ken23)
So this is pfun , is it?
September 15th, 2021 02:16 - The curse of bad timing (HannahElisabeth)
The geography of one of your relationships well scanned, Hannah.
I...
September 14th, 2021 20:09 - Jeremy Wade Delle (Julietmonty)
Pearl jam spreads nicely , does it? Not too sugary?
September 14th, 2021 19:51 - Path (Jerry Reynolds)
You have encapsulated a personal affinity with this place perfectly,
September 14th, 2021 19:48 - A dot in the universe (Fozzy)
Although I\'m not too sure about the word \'given\' (carping, I know), I...
September 14th, 2021 19:21 - Good at or Good for poetry is at the core (Poetic Dan)
That great succinct shortie really got to me Dan - nothing there to...
September 14th, 2021 04:25 - Paresaan nahi thik hoon mein (Black_diamond)
Oh I\'ll translate for you now, Dusk,-
Doo bah dah booloks shoo...
September 14th, 2021 03:58 - Online Classes (Maira)
As well and truly a Senior who is comfortable with an old clunker of a pc...
September 13th, 2021 08:24 - Dowlish Wake (Goldfinch60)
Had to Google Dowlish Wake....... I wish you wouldn\'t do this to me, Andy...
September 13th, 2021 01:32 - All on a pleasant meadow (Jarcher54)
Missed this first time round (second time today!) Glad I got here via the...
September 13th, 2021 01:15 - Footprints in the Sand (2021 Revision) (APoeticTurtle)
I think I get the point - maybe.
But where are you coming from with this?...
September 13th, 2021 00:24 - What do You See? (Cygnus X-1)
Neat write - don\'t know how I missed it before.
September 13th, 2021 00:16 - No Evidence to be Found? (Cygnus X-1)
Fun write there, Cyg. Enjoyed that very much.
September 13th, 2021 00:11 - Sounds (Fay Slimm.)
Oh come on Fay - cut to the chase: on second reading I couldn\'t wait to...
September 12th, 2021 07:43 - Безисходность (AntoZa)
No background no context do you provide;
It stands alone, a masterpiece,...
September 12th, 2021 07:08 - Leather (Ruby 2446)
No background no context do you provide;
It stands alone, a masterpiece,...
September 12th, 2021 07:00 - Sick Of Waiting (Jo)
That is because you are waiting, Jo.....Get on and do life......
September 12th, 2021 05:32 - Off the beaten track (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
I make it a habit to try to read your poetic contributions here..love the...
September 12th, 2021 05:18 - Silhouette of Freedom (Nexune)
No background no context do you provide;
It stands alone, a masterpiece,...
September 12th, 2021 05:06 - Universal Truth #1 (Saxon Crow)
As in \'We are all in this together, aren\'t we?\'?
Well actually (and...
September 12th, 2021 01:44 - Heavy handed (HannahElisabeth)
Got to give this one the big miss - sorry, Hannah yer Uncle Dave...
September 11th, 2021 22:22 - DOWNTOWN GIRL…09/11/2001 (Laura🌻)
Must be a particularly bad time for you right now, Laura - You have...
September 11th, 2021 21:41 - Hedgehogs (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Great little plea, Kevin..... Suggestion - send some to Australia and let...
September 11th, 2021 21:33 - From Darkness To Light (Orchidee)
Not addressed at you, Orchi - but, enough.
News programmes, special...
September 11th, 2021 21:24 - People Always Prefer Rainbows (Saxon Crow)
Of course I\'m your thunder cloud with plenty of it, Sax.... Climate...
September 11th, 2021 01:25 - NOTHING TO GRAIN (Joe Marcello)
Dunno the market, Joe ....but if sugar was the culprit there, It should...
September 10th, 2021 22:54 - Enough (WhiskeyyLullaby)
Love, love unrequited, love lost, sadness...It\'s a crowded field here at...
September 10th, 2021 21:51 - That Day, And Onwards (Tema)
Here at MPS (and I don’t exclude myself from this) when we think of (and...
September 10th, 2021 21:13 - Narcissist (Neville)
Oh yes Nev, they exist - both genders. And ofttimes the male version is...
September 10th, 2021 20:13 - Nelson Went To Battle. (Goldfinch60)
Did you do it on white paper so the mothballs didn\'t show up, Andy?...
September 10th, 2021 01:07 - The Darkest Place (Saxon Crow)
To be powerless in a relationship is for me the best place to be. When I...
September 10th, 2021 00:59 - A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry (Saxon Crow)
Garn - it\'s got Passion \'n Power \'n ...\'n... \'n ...\'n - yeh, all of...
September 9th, 2021 17:48 - Oh, Georgia (HannahElisabeth)
I thought it was the Brits who had the wonky weather, but I bet they...
September 9th, 2021 01:23 - The moon and her wolf (HannahElisabeth)
I do hope you are able to pass that to someone also significant in G\'s...
September 8th, 2021 23:53 - My Lotus and Me (Neville)
Well I suppose if you are a tree and not a hand and don’t have another...
September 8th, 2021 20:53 - 𝒜𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓏𝒶𝑔𝑜𝓇𝒶𝓅𝒽𝑜𝒷𝒾𝒶 (Dove)
Me, you can forget - memories of me are no good to the me that I am now....
September 8th, 2021 19:55 - When the Sea Fret Hit (Neville)
Despite the atmosphere and atmospherics (are they different?) your piece...
September 7th, 2021 19:24 - Untamed (Fay Slimm.)
No - just envious, Fay. And a write which doesn\'t allow me to forget in...
September 7th, 2021 05:03 - Decisions (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely - that should be the way it goes.....
September 7th, 2021 05:00 - Murderers Lament (Saxon Crow)
I\'d suggest a torch with some long life batteries plus spares....
I...
September 7th, 2021 02:01 - THE SEVENTH FLOOR (PETERHARRISON)
Thanks for that, Peter – it’s the kind of poetry I can relate to with...
September 6th, 2021 21:27 - Wryneck (Neville)
Well If you keep looking over your shoulder for them dicky birds they for...
September 6th, 2021 07:49 - Changes. (Fay Slimm.)
That’s a cop out, Fay! – You’ve passed all that poetry power and...
September 6th, 2021 07:31 - Slow Train. (Goldfinch60)
I have memories of steam train travel as a kid, I worked with them later...
September 6th, 2021 07:02 - Metamorphosis (HannahElisabeth)
Does feel a little fevered to me, Hannah - metaphors are not a strength...
September 6th, 2021 04:22 - Wanted (Lulu Boatwright)
Difficult to work this one out - never got past the three kids she really...
September 6th, 2021 04:06 - Listen Through the Breeze (Neville)
Did you get it together again or not, Nev?
Great flow with some depth -...
September 5th, 2021 05:30
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