Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Hero Returns (Part 3) (JED)
I have not commented before as I wanted to see all three poems. They show...
May 24th, 2018 01:08 - THE SILENCE BROKEN (Michael Edwards)
Clever write Michael.
\"The Bells! The Bells!\"
May 24th, 2018 01:04 - To Love Is Best (W c)
Very true write, the best things in life do not need money.
May 24th, 2018 01:02 - \"Don\'t call him names\" (Ian Primmer)
Good write, all should be accepted in our world but some people just seem...
May 24th, 2018 00:58 - Read all about it (Jim Jimminy)
The problem is that good news does not sell papers therefore the 99% of...
May 24th, 2018 00:49 - A poet told me... (Poetic Dan)
Very true.
May 24th, 2018 00:45 - Fantasies and Daydreams (MrNobody40)
Very good write. Those moments are so precious. If only....
May 24th, 2018 00:42 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #74: happy chronicity (Frank Prem)
The question says it all.
May 24th, 2018 00:35 - OCTOPUSES ARE ALIENS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good write, I do like octopuses, intriguing animals and very tasty on...
May 24th, 2018 00:23 - Priestly Path: Hebrews Series - 5 (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 24th, 2018 00:19 - OBSERVATIONS MADE DURING THE CUTTING OF TOE NAILS (Michael Edwards)
Very true write Michael, trying to put socks on can be hard as well,...
May 23rd, 2018 00:27 - certain summers (Willyweed)
Those memories are certainly wonderful ww, as are your words.
May 23rd, 2018 00:21 - Leaf or trunk all are welcome (Poetic Dan)
If only we could understand them, what wondrous tales they could tell. ...
May 23rd, 2018 00:17 - If i were a love poet (Skyler.miles19)
Very good love poem. Welcome to MPS.
May 23rd, 2018 00:16 - Infinite Dreams (MrNobody40)
You will remain unscathed throughout your life.
May 22nd, 2018 08:02 - LIFESAVING. (Fay Slimm.)
Every day Fay, every day.
May 22nd, 2018 08:01 - GIVE THANKS for EVERYTHING & THINK POSITIVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You are asking me to be positive, I am thankful each day for the joy of my...
May 22nd, 2018 08:00 - Tilly. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Brian, if I had known what fun it was to have grandchildren I’d...
May 22nd, 2018 07:58 - Freedom Flowings (Orchidee)
My Spirit is always there.
May 22nd, 2018 02:02 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #73: praying m (Frank Prem)
Life has its fun moments despite the horror that it can be.
May 22nd, 2018 02:02 - A PAIR OF SOCK COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
So very true, strangely my wife and I were talking about this yesterday.
May 22nd, 2018 02:00 - Timeless (MrNobody40)
Super write, those forgotten moments can be wondrous.
May 22nd, 2018 01:59 - TICKING AWAY. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write Fay, your command of language is superb.
May 22nd, 2018 01:58 - Early Awakening (W c)
The beauty of dawn wonderfully conveyed in your words.
May 21st, 2018 01:00 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #72: parfait crazy (Frank Prem)
Your payments are very much appreciated.
May 21st, 2018 00:59 - THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK (Michael Edwards)
Very good write Michael, it put me i mind of a Johnny Cash song -...
May 21st, 2018 00:56 - Blades (Christina8)
So many people do not seek friends who can help them.
May 21st, 2018 00:50 - Him (Angstypoems)
You will never know unless you let him know how you feel, you may be...
May 21st, 2018 00:44 - Justice (Poetboy123)
That last line says it all in our present world. Good write.
May 21st, 2018 00:42 - From a Daydream (MrNobody40)
Very good write but that reflection you see in the mirror is just that a...
May 21st, 2018 00:27 - To the end. From the spark of life (Poetic Dan)
Such a searching write with some searching questions of yourself but you...
May 21st, 2018 00:26 - Pentecost Proclamations (Orchidee)
Good write. As its Pentecost today the Church choir has been getting an...
May 20th, 2018 01:28 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #71: looking forward to a homecoming (Frank Prem)
Very strong write Frank.
May 20th, 2018 01:26 - A COUPLE OF 575s (Michael Edwards)
Two very good 575s, and so true.
May 20th, 2018 01:21 - I Pray (SLR)
We should always be there for our children and (in my case) grandchildren,...
May 20th, 2018 01:20 - Out in Hollywood (Willyweed)
Good write ww, good to see you back.
May 20th, 2018 01:07 - Down the Rabbit Hole (MrNobody40)
in any rabbit hole there is an entrance, that entrance is also the exit...
May 20th, 2018 00:59 - Blue Ice Cream (Jabberwocky)
Good fun write.
May 20th, 2018 00:41 - LOVE IS IN THE AIR ~ MEGHAN & HARRY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write and you were right about the Preacher, very powerful.
May 20th, 2018 00:39 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #70: cracked-pepper clinic (Frank Prem)
It is amazing what goes on in peoples mind.
May 20th, 2018 00:37 - Spirit Sensitivity (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 20th, 2018 00:35 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #69: under the skin (Frank Prem)
Another strange happening in the hospital.
May 19th, 2018 00:53 - Dayspring Dawnings (Orchidee)
Amen.
May 18th, 2018 01:45 - HARRY AND MEGHAN ~ An Acrostic 5 3 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
They were made for each other.
May 18th, 2018 01:45 - BUTTERFLY (Michael Edwards)
They are beautiful to watch while I sit in the garden drinking my Rioja.
May 18th, 2018 01:04 - In My World (Leostars_poems)
May that locked heart soon be opened. Good write.
May 18th, 2018 00:58 - Leaves (A.5724)
Very good words. Welcome to MPS.
May 18th, 2018 00:55 - Song In The Trees (DesertWords)
The sound of natures symphony is always wonderful.
May 18th, 2018 00:54 - It\'s a way (Nicki Jackson)
Follow your way, it will lead you into joy.
May 18th, 2018 00:52 - Be me (Netashi)
Just be yourself, many will try and change you but what you must realise...
May 18th, 2018 00:49 - Finding You (MrNobody40)
Super loving write.
May 18th, 2018 00:44 - Gleaming Star (Madiha Faizan)
You have got it in one. The light is always there, keep following it....
May 18th, 2018 00:43 - Here Comes Summer (Ternic73)
Very good write, enjoy your freedom in the sun.
May 18th, 2018 00:40 - I am Alive (Caroline Elizabeth)
Life certainly is everlasting our Spirit goes on for eternity.
May 17th, 2018 08:08 - My shadow (Middlearth)
Good write but what you must know is that the light is always there and...
May 17th, 2018 08:07 - Pendulum (Baylee)
That love will never die.
May 17th, 2018 08:06 - From the spark of life (Poetic Dan)
Very good emotive write, all will be good as you are beginning to realise.
May 17th, 2018 08:05 - L0ve (JoeLucky)
I am sure she will like your loving words in this poem.
May 17th, 2018 08:01 - The Drake (W c)
Good write about a beautiful bird.
May 17th, 2018 08:00 - Wheeled Freedom. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you da, your comments are much appreciated.
May 17th, 2018 06:42 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #68: before breakfast (Frank Prem)
I can sort of relate to this as my wife takes 18 tablets per day and I...
May 17th, 2018 03:07 - Plenipotentiary Priest - Hebrews Series: 4 (Orchidee)
May God\'s Mercy always be with you as you write these fine words.
May 17th, 2018 01:49 - MERLOT (Michael Edwards)
Very good painting Michael.
Good write as well, Merlot is OK but I...
May 17th, 2018 01:09 - PLANET EARTH 2100 ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very true Brian, those in power our planet have no visualisation of what...
May 17th, 2018 01:07 - KING (Lizzie)
May you pull away from that precipice and fall into your lovers arms for...
May 17th, 2018 00:36 - Victory (YangYin)
Very good write, to die with no regrets is something for which we all need...
May 17th, 2018 00:25 - Bit By Bit (Brooklyn6timesplus)
The prize is there and will always be found if you go towards the light.
May 17th, 2018 00:18 - As I lay here (Nicki Jackson)
Very good loving and sensual write.
May 17th, 2018 00:15 - Sinful Scars (Gabriela)
Very strong supportive write, I do hope things get easier and that your...
May 17th, 2018 00:14 - The Noisiest Things (Gary Edward Geraci)
So true Gary.
May 17th, 2018 00:11 - Thank you all for reminding me (Poetic Dan)
Very good write, to write your feelings onto paper is so fulfilling and so...
May 17th, 2018 00:10 - Trees in the Breeze of Time (Lorna)
Such an awful situation Lorna, I am so glad that you are OK and your house...
May 17th, 2018 00:07 - Birthing A Poem (DesertWords)
Very good write, it is surprising from where some of the words come.
May 17th, 2018 00:03 - Whence and Whither (Jabberwocky)
Our Spirit will meet on the way to eternity.
May 16th, 2018 07:57 - Meeting Time (W c)
A wonderful magical place to unwind.
May 16th, 2018 02:46 - Unbearable Bearable. (Goldfinch60)
I don\'t know why but the music starts at the second movement for some...
May 16th, 2018 02:09 - Hearing Heart - Hebrews Series: 3 (Orchidee)
Another good write Orchi.
May 16th, 2018 02:03 - The Life I Live With You (Caprib97)
Good loving write, may your life together go towards eternity in love.
May 16th, 2018 01:18 - A poem for a great woman (Renzi)
Great to see you back on here Renzi with a good fun write.
May 16th, 2018 01:17 - PREJUDICES (Michael Edwards)
Good write, may those prejudices soon be dispelled.
May 16th, 2018 01:14 - Father (JADED)
Amen.
May 16th, 2018 01:13 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #66: the tweedle man (Frank Prem)
So many different people with different troubles.
May 16th, 2018 01:12 - Heading Down A Corruptive Path (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Good write the choice of going towards the light is the way to go.
May 16th, 2018 01:10 - The Nature Of Worry (Christina8)
We should always live in the moment and treasure each one of them. We can...
May 16th, 2018 01:01 - Thin Veils (EmiliasLillith)
Very emotive write but under that fake facade is the real you and all you...
May 16th, 2018 00:55 - Life Is Good (W c)
Very good positive write.
May 16th, 2018 00:47 - The Inevitability of 3 A.M. (Lorna)
Very good write. 3am is the time that I remember something I have been...
May 16th, 2018 00:45 - An Honest Bob (DJ)
This is a very good write and shows the misery of being made redundant....
May 16th, 2018 00:42 - Franks Psychiatry 5 # 66: cigarette? still laughing! (Frank Prem)
The good life comes in may guises.
May 16th, 2018 00:37 - Incarnation Identifying - Hebrews Series: 2 (Orchidee)
May 16th, 2018 00:35 - Incarnation Identifying - Hebrews Series: 2 (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi, but surely the devil is with you in KP.
May 16th, 2018 00:28 - FIVE FABULOUS HAIKU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good Haikus Brian but your statement about Senryu is incorrect Senryu are...
May 15th, 2018 03:28 - SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY (Michael Edwards)
Another beautiful write Michael.
May 15th, 2018 01:19 - Time\'s River (Lorna)
Super write may your boat always sail towards the moon.
May 15th, 2018 01:16 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #65: Furball and Freddie (Frank Prem)
It is amazing what friends are around sometimes.
May 15th, 2018 01:15 - Superior Saviour - Hebrews Series: 1 (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 14th, 2018 01:37 - A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Good couplets Michael, especially the first one - when will they ever...
May 14th, 2018 00:58 - Raft of reeds (Dusk arising)
Very good emotive write, those who lie remove any trust that may have been...
May 14th, 2018 00:56 - Beached (Jabberwocky)
Such a strong write but your soul is still with you and always will be.
May 14th, 2018 00:51 - THE REAL PRESENCE OF GOD ~ A 5 5 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
God will be forever with you.
May 13th, 2018 15:53
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