Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- MARY HAD (1) (Michael Edwards)
I too have many of these, I will have to put some more on here. WOOF!
February 8th, 2019 01:43 - Unnoticed (Heartbreak)
May she see the true love that you have for her and love you in return.
February 8th, 2019 01:41 - Daughter of Wessex (Joanna Garrido)
Very good precis of the story Joanna.
February 8th, 2019 01:37 - Spilled milk (Netashi)
Anger can at times clear our minds but it is best kept restrained.
February 8th, 2019 01:27 - The Journey (Vvnrose)
Very good and true write vv, life is there ahead of us to be enjoyed, each...
February 8th, 2019 01:25 - I have it, they have it and so do you! (Poetic Dan)
Super write Dan and so true, we should follow the ways within us that we...
February 8th, 2019 01:23 - Victims of Indifference (Neville)
That indifference is a strong weapon that those in power apply to those...
February 8th, 2019 01:21 - RECALL. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write once again Fay.
February 8th, 2019 01:18 - Vineyard Valuings - Mark\'s Gospel (15) (Orchidee)
May those vineyards be filled with the grapes to produce fine Rioja.
February 8th, 2019 01:17 - My core (Joseph M Marion)
That love will go in for eternity.
February 6th, 2019 15:52 - Your Hand (Rrodriguez)
Powerfully emotive write rr, beautifully written.
February 6th, 2019 15:52 - Letting the darkness out (Poetic Dan)
That darkness does not last and the ligh will soon be with you Dan.
February 6th, 2019 15:50 - The Transom Window (Lorna)
The beauty of nature’s changing artwork is there to thrill us all.
February 6th, 2019 15:47 - UNLUCKY IN LOVE ? : ANGELA : RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Some people are so unfortunate not to find that right person, you have now...
February 6th, 2019 15:46 - RESILIENCE. (Fay Slimm.)
Great tribute to all those who have to work in all weathers.
February 6th, 2019 15:43 - Once Upon a Tablecloth (Neville)
A chequered blanket is/was warmer.
February 6th, 2019 15:42 - Promise In Prayers - Mark\'s Gospel (14) (Orchidee)
Faith may move mountains, why can it not remove dementia from my wife!!
February 6th, 2019 15:40 - 575s SERIOUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Three good ones Michael, especially the last one.
February 6th, 2019 02:38 - Pebble (Joanna Garrido)
As we look out through the ocean we realise that we are all just pebbles...
February 6th, 2019 01:32 - a year full of reasons (Psychofemale)
Stay strong pf, the right person for you will soon be with you.
February 6th, 2019 01:29 - yesterday told me (Jon Nakapalau)
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
February 6th, 2019 01:27 - Place to Belong (Ternic73)
Beautiful write, that place where we belong is always within us.
February 6th, 2019 01:25 - P stands for practical (Netashi)
That smile may be the saving of some people. Good positive write.
February 6th, 2019 01:23 - Writers block (Kasia Kevan)
Words on this page show that writers block has been expunged.
February 5th, 2019 15:44 - Words (Lorna)
Words are so special to us all Lorna.
February 5th, 2019 15:42 - Posturing (Jabberwocky)
This became a very emotive write at the end, the love is obviously never...
February 5th, 2019 15:41 - WHERE ARE THE CLOWNS ? BRIAN ~ A RHYMING 4 4 4 2 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Memories of times gone by.p, thank you.
February 5th, 2019 15:36 - HEARABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
Nature’s Chorus is so wonderful Fay, as are your words.
February 5th, 2019 15:35 - Bartimaeus\' Blessings - Mark\'s Gospel (13) (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi. I always use Speech Marks, it emphasises the words.
February 5th, 2019 15:34 - 575s - SERIOUS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Number one says so much about life with freedom, so much can be...
February 5th, 2019 02:57 - The Rain (Joanna Garrido)
Wonderful poem, so much emotion in the final stanza.
February 5th, 2019 01:50 - please tell me one more time (Jon Nakapalau)
wonderful emotive write.
February 5th, 2019 01:47 - Forecast (Netashi)
Those tears of angels are felt within oneself. Good write Theta.
February 5th, 2019 01:40 - It\'s you, know what I mean? (Joseph M Marion)
Your love shines through your words Joseph.
February 5th, 2019 01:38 - The End (Lorna)
That quiet can be so wonderful Lorna it is always a friend.
February 5th, 2019 01:34 - LOVE ME : LOVE MY CAT ! ANGELA : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Cats are such arrogant creatures!
February 5th, 2019 01:31 - Riches Restrainings - Mark\'s Gospel (12) (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
February 5th, 2019 01:30 - Virus (Neville)
That virus found me a few days ago, they get everywhere Neville.
February 5th, 2019 01:30 - OUTGROWN (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write Fay, yes we need to let go of the youngsters to find there...
February 5th, 2019 01:28 - POLITICAL CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards)
Political correctness is an absolute pain sometimes, after all when ever...
February 4th, 2019 03:06 - N O S T A L G I A (Brie)
Those times passed may be hard to return to but the future will hold so...
February 4th, 2019 01:52 - I will (Joseph M Marion)
May that dream be forever with you. Wonderful loving write.
February 4th, 2019 01:47 - A Box With No Light (The Retired Bloke)
Very good emotive write, I do hope the key to the door gets to him soon.
February 4th, 2019 01:40 - The Chosen One (Kevin Michael Bloor)
The right one for each of you by the look of the love in your words and...
February 4th, 2019 01:37 - S U N D A Y ~ A Day for Peace & Praise ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Each Sunday is special, as was the one that JC had.
February 4th, 2019 01:35 - Ink Blots (Neville)
Wonderful imagery within this piece. Those ink blots are not...
February 4th, 2019 01:32 - Different Pages (Sylviasearcher)
Very good write. If only more people could have more open minds and...
February 4th, 2019 01:28 - Prosperous Praises (Orchidee)
His name will never die.
February 3rd, 2019 03:06 - 575 SMILES (3) (Michael Edwards)
I would rather listen to dolphins.
When I first started working at the...
February 3rd, 2019 02:48 - You Are Enough (Noah Malice)
May that fire in your soul be with you forever.
February 3rd, 2019 01:39 - A letter to myself (Courtneyreanna)
May that love never fail.
Welcome to MPS.
February 3rd, 2019 01:38 - \"Into feelings\" (Fluffy)
Love surely does go on and on.
February 3rd, 2019 01:36 - Beautiful blue eyes (Kasia Kevan)
Good loving write. Welcome to MPS.
February 3rd, 2019 01:33 - Gold Roses (Joanna Garrido)
Super write Joanna.
February 3rd, 2019 01:30 - The East (Dovestoneboy)
Very good write, that silence can be so wonderful.
Welcome to MPS.
February 3rd, 2019 01:29 - Transfer (Jabberwocky)
Good write, is there any satisfaction in cyber sex?
February 2nd, 2019 15:22 - Goddess (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Beautiful write about a beautiful lady.
February 2nd, 2019 15:21 - CITY LONELINESS ~ ANGELA ~ ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This says a great deal to me Angela.
February 2nd, 2019 15:19 - Radiant Revealing (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
February 2nd, 2019 15:18 - 575 Smiles (2) (Michael Edwards)
The second one is very clever Michael.
February 2nd, 2019 15:17 - Wanting to be Wanted (Neville)
I think I will stick with my wife as well.
February 2nd, 2019 15:16 - I AM COLORED (Heartbreak)
I just cannot understand why some people pass judgements on others due to...
February 2nd, 2019 15:15 - Itch (Jabberwocky)
Clever write Jabberwocky.
February 2nd, 2019 01:50 - WINTER BLUES ~ HAIKU ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Shows the absolute differences from one side of the world to the other,...
February 2nd, 2019 01:46 - 575 SMILES (1) (Michael Edwards)
Good fun writes Michael.
February 2nd, 2019 01:44 - Servant Scenes - Mark\'s Gospel (11) (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
February 2nd, 2019 01:42 - WISH LIST HOLIDAYS ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I have not travelled far in my life but I would be quite happy to live in...
January 31st, 2019 03:20 - Cantate Cavalcade (Orchidee)
alleluia indeed especially the last line.
January 31st, 2019 03:18 - DREAMS LOST (Michael Edwards)
Sometimes the realisation of our lives lead to sad consequences.
Love...
January 31st, 2019 02:08 - she speaks (Psychofemale)
Some people just do not realise when relationships do not work.
Good...
January 31st, 2019 02:05 - I wake everyday (Joseph M Marion)
That angel will be forever with you.
January 31st, 2019 01:58 - Birth of lust (Netashi)
Your colleague will be filled with wonder at your words Theta.
January 31st, 2019 01:57 - Countless Indiscretions (Neville)
May you both fly in your wonderful sensual world Neville.
January 31st, 2019 01:54 - RELEASED. (Fay Slimm.)
The raptors seen in flight are glorious to see, as glorious as your words...
January 31st, 2019 01:50 - Transfiguration Time - Mark\'s Gospel (10) (Orchidee)
That eternal life is with us all Orchi.
January 30th, 2019 03:52 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ SIMON & GARFUNKEL ~ BRIAN ~ An 8 6 Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
One of my favourite songs which we often sing in our choir.
January 30th, 2019 03:13 - NO GOLD TO GLISTEN (Michael Edwards)
That gold may not glisten on the hand but it certainly glistens within...
January 30th, 2019 01:58 - A Faith in Mind (Gino)
May that end be full of peace and wonder.
January 30th, 2019 01:52 - Clickety Click (Joanna Garrido)
Such a sadly emotive write very well written.
January 30th, 2019 01:50 - One hundred thoughts before you go (Netashi)
That blank page has been filled with your wonderful words Theta, may there...
January 30th, 2019 01:43 - Love Sick (Brie)
Opposites attract so many times - good write.
January 30th, 2019 01:38 - Lessons of loneliness (Joseph M Marion)
Your love for your wife shines through your words.
January 30th, 2019 01:37 - LUNACY. (Fay Slimm.)
Lunacy indeed Fay, absolute lunacy.
January 30th, 2019 01:28 - WELLINGTON (N Z) : ANGELA : A Barrel Acrostic (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It sounds such a special place Angela, I am sure that you and Brian will...
January 29th, 2019 03:27 - Confessed To Be Christ - Mark\'s Gospel (9) (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi, those temptations are always there.
January 29th, 2019 03:25 - I CREATE (Michael Edwards)
Your creations are as wonderful as ever Michael.
I would be interested...
January 29th, 2019 03:24 - eyes that cast (Jon Nakapalau)
Good emotive write Jon. Indifference can be so painful.
January 29th, 2019 02:04 - Swan (Joanna Garrido)
Beautiful write but Odette will always be within the mind.
January 29th, 2019 02:02 - I AM HIP HOP !!!! (O.G. Tone)
Very good write about a great style of music. In its original form opera...
January 29th, 2019 01:55 - Oldest Mirror (Netashi)
As Icarus do not fly too close to the sun so showing him your wisdom.
January 28th, 2019 16:37 - From this moment (Joseph M Marion)
Super loving write.
January 28th, 2019 16:34 - But is it Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
Thank you Angela. My feeling about writing poetry is that it must convey...
January 28th, 2019 16:29 - WITCHDOCTORS! (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Very good write, unfortunately those witch doctors can nowadays be...
January 28th, 2019 10:10 - Life Nah Easy (Sisdrenjen)
If only all could show love for one another.
Welcome to MPS,
January 28th, 2019 10:08 - NIGHTNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
What a wonderful write Fay, I was with them waiting for the light that...
January 28th, 2019 10:03 - Crisp clean (Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87)
I have just sat down in my regular coffee bar sipping my coffee and was...
January 28th, 2019 10:00 - But is it Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
Thank you my friend, so kind.
January 28th, 2019 09:58 - Might She by Chance be a Witch (Neville)
Beautiful write about a very special lady to you Neville. Are you still...
January 28th, 2019 04:12 - F E B R U A R Y ~ BRIAN ~ A Barrel Acrostic (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yep. three snowflakes and the UK stops.
January 28th, 2019 03:50 - Just A Second....! (Orchidee)
It\'s a long time since we saw one of your wonderfully dappy poems Orchi,...
January 28th, 2019 03:49
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