Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Waiting For The End (Resa71)
Beautiful poignant write Resa.
April 11th, 2018 08:18 - Rejoin the Dance (Sylviasearcher)
Dancing conveys music into elegant actions. Good write Sylvia.
April 11th, 2018 08:17 - Opportunity Openings - Colossians Series - 8 (Orchidee)
Amen.
April 11th, 2018 02:06 - Let Me Ask You a Question (Nicholas Browning)
It can be wonderful. Good thought provoking write Nicholas.
April 11th, 2018 02:06 - Nightmare. (Wallace)
We can all be thankful that we were not there. Very good write, we must...
April 11th, 2018 01:13 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #33: better than that (Frank Prem)
The strength of being a good nurse shows through your writings.
April 11th, 2018 01:11 - ANOTHER ESSENCE (Michael Edwards)
Good one once more Michael.
April 11th, 2018 01:10 - Frozen (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Beautiful write ron.
April 11th, 2018 01:09 - Ghost Writer (W c)
He is in many places but never known. Good write.
April 11th, 2018 01:06 - Beauty of the Soul (Lorna)
So very true Lorna.
April 11th, 2018 00:59 - Love\'s Leadings (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
April 11th, 2018 00:55 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #32: huntington’s marionette (Frank Prem)
Such an awful disease that strikes so young.
April 11th, 2018 00:53 - SEASONS ~ FOUR FULL TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good Tankas Brian.
April 10th, 2018 01:54 - LIMERICK No 52 (Michael Edwards)
Frayed ankles can be a nuiscance.
April 10th, 2018 01:26 - MASTERMIND (Bibbeck)
There was a time
When you could Double Your Money
As you Take Your...
April 10th, 2018 01:21 - TRUTH (Onepauly)
Life changes all the while but in spite being thrown onto a different road...
April 10th, 2018 00:58 - God Smiles (Accidental Poet)
There are good people in this world who help each other without thinking...
April 10th, 2018 00:55 - WRITER\'S BLOCK (Lasergraph)
That blank page obviously attracted these fine words laser.
April 10th, 2018 00:38 - SUNDAY WAYS. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write, those Sundays were so special.
April 10th, 2018 00:26 - BIBLES IN HOTELS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian and yes I have read the Gideon Bible in a hotel and my...
April 10th, 2018 00:23 - I Dreamt (W c)
May your dreams come true.
April 10th, 2018 00:21 - The Laughing Dormouse (Lorna)
Good fun write Lorna.
April 10th, 2018 00:20 - An Apology (Sylviasearcher)
Asking for forgiveness is the first step to going into a better life. You...
April 10th, 2018 00:19 - Family And Work Matters - Colossians Series - 7 (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
April 9th, 2018 02:22 - AN ESSENCE (Michael Edwards)
Another new type of poem brought into my armoury.
April 9th, 2018 02:22 - Franks Psychiatry, 2 #31: bounce and flow (Frank Prem)
Distraction therapy eh?
April 9th, 2018 02:20 - start (Onepauly)
Good write but to my mind rhyming is not important, not many of my poems...
April 9th, 2018 02:18 - The Warp and the Weft (Lorna)
Very good write Lorna, time is endless.
April 9th, 2018 02:10 - FLIMSY WONDERS. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful words.
Whenever you see a feather you know an Angel has been...
April 9th, 2018 02:09 - Franks Psychiatry, 2 #30: medication jam (Frank Prem)
I bet you got through a lot of jam.
April 8th, 2018 00:46 - WATER DROPLETS (Michael Edwards)
That journey to the ocean can be thrilling. Good write Michael.
April 8th, 2018 00:45 - ANCIENT ONES (Onepauly)
Those ancestors are always with you.
April 8th, 2018 00:43 - SALT IN HER WOUNDS (Bibbeck)
Very good write.
April 8th, 2018 00:42 - My Baahstun Accent (Accidental Poet)
Good write AP, accents can be wonderful.
April 8th, 2018 00:34 - Mary and the Little Snake (Lorna)
Good write Lorna, kids can be fearless.
April 8th, 2018 00:24 - FIRST BALLAD. (Fay Slimm.)
I was sitting their with you Fay, may your baton always produce fine words...
April 8th, 2018 00:21 - Shepherd Sureties (Orchidee)
Very good one Orchi.
April 8th, 2018 00:19 - Franks Psychiatry, 2 #29: in charge of retardation (Frank Prem)
Such a strange world for a young man but you came through it.
April 8th, 2018 00:18 - LET US ALL TRUST IN GOD ~ A 6 6 2 SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good write Brian, God is always with us though.
April 8th, 2018 00:17 - WITH RESOLUTION (Michael Edwards)
Super sonnet, always leave the shadows behind you.
Did you get the...
April 7th, 2018 00:50 - Quaff (Eugene S.)
Cheers Eugene, enjoy your beer.
April 7th, 2018 00:39 - I Thought I Knew (Christina8)
In life we have bumps in the road and sometimes crashes but they can lead...
April 7th, 2018 00:34 - Snowdrops in the Morning (Lorna)
Very good write, those snowdrops are very determined plants.
April 7th, 2018 00:23 - STATES OF THE USA 1 ~ MICHIGAN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write and explanation, my new thing learned for the day.
April 7th, 2018 00:21 - Breakfasting Believers (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi, there were 154 fishes but we took one to eat before they...
April 6th, 2018 02:05 - EPIGRAM No 3 (Michael Edwards)
If I wore them I would be singing castrato! Good fun write.
You need a...
April 6th, 2018 01:49 - Franks Psychiatry, 2 #28: getting stuffed (Frank Prem)
Those who have died should be treated with respect and dignity.
April 6th, 2018 01:27 - Memory Exhales (Kurt Philip Behm)
Those words grew into this excellent write Kurt.
April 6th, 2018 00:52 - I Wonder (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Good emotive write ron.
April 6th, 2018 00:47 - Simple Words (Lasergraph)
Very good write Edward, words can be so fragile that it is always best to...
April 6th, 2018 00:44 - Hero or Villain (Patricia LaFazia)
Very good and very true write.
There is Japanese Proverb that says,...
April 6th, 2018 00:42 - Grandma\'s Treasures (Spirit Walker)
Beautiful write SL. Your Grandma\'s treasured moments revealed and never...
April 6th, 2018 00:29 - A world unknown (Resa71)
So many of the ‘privileged ‘ have no idea what real life is about....
April 5th, 2018 08:16 - MARTIN LUTHER KING ~ 1929 - 1968 Gone but never Forgotten (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A great man whose message is still needed even now.
April 5th, 2018 08:13 - TOGETHERNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Togetherness is so wonderful and it shows in this very good write.
April 5th, 2018 08:12 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #27: a day at the races (Frank Prem)
Good fun write, there is fun to be had sometimes in all eventualities.
April 5th, 2018 03:44 - Faith Formations (Orchidee)
That belief must be string but sometimes it is sorely tested.
April 5th, 2018 02:30 - EPIGRAM No 2 (Michael Edwards)
Learning comes from others and your errors - it is called experience. ...
April 5th, 2018 00:52 - My Girl (Christina8)
Very good loving write for your daughter, that love for her will never...
April 5th, 2018 00:49 - MODERN DAY BLUES (Lasergraph)
Good write and so true in this day and age.
April 5th, 2018 00:47 - (The Ride) (Spirit Walker)
Good write SW. Welcome to MPS.
April 5th, 2018 00:45 - Philosophy III (Noah)
Clever words Noah.
April 5th, 2018 00:41 - Proportion (Jabberwocky)
Good write J.
April 5th, 2018 00:37 - Winnie and Roo (Lorna)
Super write, if only the innocence of childhood could remain with us all...
April 5th, 2018 00:30 - ASK & YOU WILL RECEIVE ~ BUT NOT ALWAYS AS EXPECTED ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good write Brian. One thing that I have always believed that if you...
April 5th, 2018 00:28 - Watching And Waiting (Orchidee)
Alleluia indeed.
April 4th, 2018 02:21 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #26: row your boat (Frank Prem)
It is amazing what they do.
April 4th, 2018 02:21 - EPIGRAM No1 (Michael Edwards)
You were listening to Orchi then!
April 4th, 2018 02:20 - My Teddy Bear (MARY Swillum)
Very good write, may your teddy bear always bring you pleasure.
April 4th, 2018 01:00 - Paired. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good love write Fay, that love only increases with time.
April 4th, 2018 00:58 - Sinful Victory (Resa71)
Very good write Resa.
April 4th, 2018 00:56 - MODEL RAILWAY GEEK ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good write and my first laugh of the day - thank you Brian.
April 3rd, 2018 03:56 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #25: bathing the locked ward (Frank Prem)
So sad.
April 3rd, 2018 03:53 - Anchor (Karoline)
Good loving write.
April 3rd, 2018 02:57 - Emmaus Encounter (Orchidee)
That road to Emmaus has a great deal for which to answer.
April 3rd, 2018 02:21 - Music Waiting Under the Snow (Lorna)
Super write Lorna, your garden is awakening.
The music is quite...
April 3rd, 2018 01:19 - FROM PASSION TO ENCHANTMENT (Michael Edwards)
Good senryu write Michael.
Just one thing the second line of the first...
April 3rd, 2018 00:45 - Fall (MP Martinez)
May your landing be soft and loving.
April 3rd, 2018 00:27 - Be That Driving Force (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Very good positive write b.
April 3rd, 2018 00:22 - THE PICNIC (Laura🌻)
Viva indeed Laura. This is a great idea, what a wonderful man your Dad...
April 3rd, 2018 00:21 - I believe in EQUALITY! (Renzi)
Very good write and song Renzi. May your writes and rights to gay...
April 3rd, 2018 00:18 - Today is a Beautiful Day (MARY Swillum)
What a very good positive write. After reading this I now know that my day...
April 3rd, 2018 00:14 - That’s The Daddy in Me (Accidental Poet)
Very good emotive write, such a shame that you were not a Dad.
April 3rd, 2018 00:11 - When the Pine Fell (Lorna)
Very good write Lorna and so sad, the picture itself is so emotive.
April 3rd, 2018 00:09 - Keep On Praising (ForeverJesus7)
Amen.
April 3rd, 2018 00:07 - MYSTERIOUS. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay, Gods Covenant is with us.
April 3rd, 2018 00:05 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #24: birdies at meal time (Frank Prem)
Such a hard life in dealing with these patients, patience in the staff...
April 3rd, 2018 00:00 - 14 STATIONS OF THE CROSS ~ A ~ 4 4 4 2 ~ SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Those fourteen Stations of the Cross do show us the way to the eventual...
April 2nd, 2018 23:58 - Meaningful Morning (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
April 2nd, 2018 23:56 - People vs the power (Hoopie)
very true nr, the same applies to gender and religious beliefs.
April 2nd, 2018 01:33 - A JOKE IS NOT A JOKE (Michael Edwards)
Pardon Michael, I seem to have gone deaf.
April 2nd, 2018 00:35 - The wine speaks... (Ash)
In that darkness you may still glimpse the light and when you glimpse it...
April 2nd, 2018 00:34 - Met Your Match .. (Ivory)
May that chemistry always combine into the perfect formula.
April 2nd, 2018 00:25 - Feelings (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Simple and very meaningful write.
April 2nd, 2018 00:23 - Blues stand news (Willyweed)
Very good emotive write.
April 2nd, 2018 00:22 - WISELY BOUGHT. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write Fay.
April 2nd, 2018 00:18 - Drinker (W c)
Good write, I am glad that you have overcome your drinking problems,...
April 2nd, 2018 00:17 - Eternal Easter (Orchidee)
I am so glad there is no whisky watering today.
Good write Orchi.
April 2nd, 2018 00:14 - ON EASTER SUNDAY ~ An Acrostic 2-6-6 Sonnet. (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good acrostic Brian. Yes Easter is the most special time in the...
April 2nd, 2018 00:12 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #23: famous flying choppers (Frank Prem)
The sound of gnashing teeth as they hit the floor.
April 1st, 2018 01:43
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