Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Longing. (LiterateLesbian)
Very good emotion laden write. May your dreams become reality.
June 3rd, 2018 00:35 - War Poem - Tear Of A Child (Arcanemanuscripts)
Very strong and good write. The innocent are always the ones that pay in...
June 3rd, 2018 00:34 - For each others sake (Poetic Dan)
Good write, may you and your brother be each others keeper.
June 3rd, 2018 00:31 - The Journey On (W c)
Super write, the light is there for us all to follow.
June 3rd, 2018 00:30 - WALES ~ LAND OF MY FATHER ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian, Wales is a great place to visit, so I am told.
I used...
June 3rd, 2018 00:21 - Faith Focus: Hebrews Series - 14 (Orchidee)
Faith is so precious, it is a shame it gets questioned by so much sorrow...
June 3rd, 2018 00:17 - WINTER (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful, both words and painting.
June 2nd, 2018 00:16 - Tanka Time (Gary Edward Geraci)
Very clever write Gary.
June 2nd, 2018 00:14 - Butterflies (Evie.36)
Very good write, always believe that the sun will shine - just follow that...
June 2nd, 2018 00:11 - With You My Love (W c)
Wonderful loving write.
June 2nd, 2018 00:08 - And love is. (Dave donovan)
Always.
June 2nd, 2018 00:05 - AUTUMN (Michael Edwards)
Superb write Michael and another very good abstract.
There really is...
June 1st, 2018 05:12 - Warning Against Waywardness: Hebrews Series - 13 (Orchidee)
Good one once more Orchi.
June 1st, 2018 05:11 - FIVE CONGENITAL \"C\" WORDS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
God fun write Brian.
Gilbert was a wonder with words and Sullivan a...
June 1st, 2018 05:10 - Property (Christina8)
Very emotive write, I do hope that you can see the way through into a...
June 1st, 2018 05:07 - One for Domestic Abuse/Violence (Jewels)
Very strong write, it is difficult to understand these type of...
June 1st, 2018 04:11 - Unable to Be Contained (Poetboy123)
Very good write, climb that tree your life is ahead of you.
June 1st, 2018 00:55 - CHALLENGES (Lasergraph)
Very good write. Each day has different challenges for us to face.
June 1st, 2018 00:53 - Put a Face to the Name (Nicholas Browning)
very good write. It is amazing what the pen will write when put onto the...
June 1st, 2018 00:52 - BRAW BROWN BEARS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian. Some animals do seem to communicate with us.
June 1st, 2018 00:51 - Dementia (LiterateLesbian)
Dementia is a very cruel disease, my wife is suffering from it and each...
May 31st, 2018 03:54 - Providential Protection (Orchidee)
Good write but it is a pity that the last stanza does not apply at the...
May 31st, 2018 01:53 - The Writing In The Air (ForeverJesus7)
If only forgiveness were in their souls all would be well in the world.
May 31st, 2018 01:51 - WHAT AM I ? (Michael Edwards)
Very good write Michael, I can understand this a I am much the same. We...
May 31st, 2018 00:52 - The Underdog (ForeverJesus7)
In British culture we often support the underdog. They will surprise you...
May 31st, 2018 00:46 - 5-30-18 (Wilted)
Good emotive write. Sometimes it can be hard when you are on your own.
May 31st, 2018 00:43 - take advantage of the time you have (Blank_voice)
Very emotive write, I am sure your thoughts and love will help.
May 31st, 2018 00:40 - California (Mark Garcia)
Very good write Mark. did you send her these words?
Welcome to MPS.
May 31st, 2018 00:38 - My Goddess From the Silent Stars (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Wonderful loving write.
May 30th, 2018 13:40 - New Chapter. (LiterateLesbian)
Very good write, it seems that you have found the right person in your...
May 30th, 2018 13:38 - It\'S MoRe ThAn ThE CoLoR Of My SkIn, MoRe ThAn ThE World I\'m In (YoDaPoe)
Super write, those last two lines are so powerful and are so very true,...
May 30th, 2018 04:18 - Persevering Profession: Hebrews Series - 12 (Orchidee)
His day is certainly coming but i wish he would hurry up.
May 30th, 2018 04:15 - CITY OF AUCKLAND ~ ANGELA de SANTOS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
She is obviously enjoying being out there.
May 30th, 2018 01:38 - UGLY USE OF THE LANGUAGE (Michael Edwards)
Like I was going to....
I should of done...
Actually I was...
I too...
May 30th, 2018 01:34 - A Tribute to Families and Funerals (Izzi Lynn)
Such a strong write Izzi, it is the young of America that will be able to...
May 30th, 2018 01:10 - is there anybody out there (Willyweed)
Super write and yes there is somebody out there and always will be.
May 30th, 2018 00:41 - The LIDO (FineB)
These places where people gather and commune together are wonderful and...
May 30th, 2018 00:28 - Sufficient Sacrifice: Hebrews Series - 11 (Orchidee)
Good one once more Orchi.
May 29th, 2018 07:56 - GOLDEN MEMORIES ~ JIM REEVES III (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very emotive write, I do hope that it reflective as you and not for real.
May 29th, 2018 03:49 - high (LiterateLesbian)
May your highs be joyous.
May 29th, 2018 03:46 - IVY (Michael Edwards)
Ivy can be so wonderful Michael, but I do wish it would stay out of my...
May 29th, 2018 00:47 - fortitude (Onepauly)
May that love be always there.
May 29th, 2018 00:45 - Indian King (H.R.Powell)
I can see her in my minds eye, may her song glorify.
May 29th, 2018 00:42 - Covenant of Christ: Hebrews Series - 10 (Orchidee)
Amen.
May 28th, 2018 01:51 - New Bird (W c)
Another of nature\'s wonderful creations.
May 28th, 2018 01:30 - TWO TWO LINERS> (Michael Edwards)
Two good ones Michael. I do like the second one better as that could apply...
May 28th, 2018 00:38 - Always Be Determined (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Trying the best you can is always the way forward.
May 28th, 2018 00:35 - Six Strings (LiterateLesbian)
Playing any music is always a way to let go and reform you mind.
May 28th, 2018 00:34 - Where Have All The Poets Gone? (Michael Edwards)
Yes this happens but I will not be moving on, I will still post every day...
May 28th, 2018 00:32 - AN EVENING PRAYER ~ AMEN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
None of us is perfect but even if none believers followed Jesus\' way the...
May 27th, 2018 01:58 - The New Covenant: Hebrews Series - 9 (Orchidee)
Good one once more Orchi.
May 27th, 2018 01:31 - The Orchard Pear (W c)
One of life\'s changes and life changes all the time. Good write.
May 27th, 2018 00:45 - Endlessly (Christina8)
Wonderful loving write, believe me that love increases every moment of...
May 27th, 2018 00:44 - We\'re all key (Poetic Dan)
the keys to life are within us all. Good write.
May 27th, 2018 00:31 - A PERFECT PARTNER ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good write Brian, if only the rest o the world could abide by those...
May 27th, 2018 00:30 - Eternal Empathy: Hebrews Series - 8 (Orchidee)
Christ is always with us.
May 27th, 2018 00:27 - Three Score Years and Ten (Goldfinch60)
The song by Nat King Cole was one of the top songs of 1948.
May 26th, 2018 01:05 - There are things that i must say (Irvin_g71)
Your words are a start in the way you are going to rise from the lost...
May 26th, 2018 00:01 - Our Sin (LiterateLesbian)
It is no sin, love in all its forms sees no boundaries or rights or...
May 25th, 2018 23:56 - Oh Graduation (M.E.M.)
That road not taken is full of wonder.
May 25th, 2018 14:14 - Cancer kills all (Blank_voice)
Sad write, cancer us a killer but they are gradually finding ways to deal...
May 25th, 2018 14:12 - DILLIGENCE. (Fay Slimm.)
The rate at which birds feed their young is astonishing. We watch them...
May 25th, 2018 04:23 - AGONY & ECSTASY OF LIFE & LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good right all positives have a negative but in my case all negatives have...
May 25th, 2018 04:21 - Forth In Faith: Hebrews Series - 7 (Orchidee)
Good one once more Orchi.
May 25th, 2018 04:19 - franks psychiatry 6 #76: still its creature (final) (Frank Prem)
As Laura has said, I too have enjoyed all your writings. Such a complex...
May 25th, 2018 01:16 - Teaching Never Ends (W c)
Learning never ends either and even at my age I still learn new things.
May 25th, 2018 01:14 - IN MOSS AND SWAMP (Michael Edwards)
I too have seen those faeries, beautiful to watch as was this poem to
May 25th, 2018 01:12 - thinking of you... (Canticle)
Beautiful lovelorn write.
May 25th, 2018 01:11 - FAVORITE FLOWER ? An Acrostic 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The blooms are coming out for us all to enjoy. Good write Brian.
May 25th, 2018 01:00 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #75: on harridan avenue (Frank Prem)
You once again have my respect for the work that you did.
May 24th, 2018 02:42 - WHY? (Renzi)
Very strong write Renzi, I have no words that will help, all I can do is...
May 24th, 2018 02:40 - Growth In Grace: Hebrews Series - 6 (Orchidee)
Clever write this one Orchi, very meaningful.
May 24th, 2018 02:36 - Hero Returns (Part 3) (JED)
I have not commented before as I wanted to see all three poems. They show...
May 24th, 2018 01:08 - THE SILENCE BROKEN (Michael Edwards)
Clever write Michael.
\"The Bells! The Bells!\"
May 24th, 2018 01:04 - To Love Is Best (W c)
Very true write, the best things in life do not need money.
May 24th, 2018 01:02 - \"Don\'t call him names\" (Ian Primmer)
Good write, all should be accepted in our world but some people just seem...
May 24th, 2018 00:58 - Read all about it (Jim Jimminy)
The problem is that good news does not sell papers therefore the 99% of...
May 24th, 2018 00:49 - A poet told me... (Poetic Dan)
Very true.
May 24th, 2018 00:45 - Fantasies and Daydreams (MrNobody40)
Very good write. Those moments are so precious. If only....
May 24th, 2018 00:42 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #74: happy chronicity (Frank Prem)
The question says it all.
May 24th, 2018 00:35 - OCTOPUSES ARE ALIENS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good write, I do like octopuses, intriguing animals and very tasty on...
May 24th, 2018 00:23 - Priestly Path: Hebrews Series - 5 (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 24th, 2018 00:19 - OBSERVATIONS MADE DURING THE CUTTING OF TOE NAILS (Michael Edwards)
Very true write Michael, trying to put socks on can be hard as well,...
May 23rd, 2018 00:27 - certain summers (Willyweed)
Those memories are certainly wonderful ww, as are your words.
May 23rd, 2018 00:21 - Leaf or trunk all are welcome (Poetic Dan)
If only we could understand them, what wondrous tales they could tell. ...
May 23rd, 2018 00:17 - If i were a love poet (Skyler.miles19)
Very good love poem. Welcome to MPS.
May 23rd, 2018 00:16 - Infinite Dreams (MrNobody40)
You will remain unscathed throughout your life.
May 22nd, 2018 08:02 - LIFESAVING. (Fay Slimm.)
Every day Fay, every day.
May 22nd, 2018 08:01 - GIVE THANKS for EVERYTHING & THINK POSITIVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You are asking me to be positive, I am thankful each day for the joy of my...
May 22nd, 2018 08:00 - Tilly. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Brian, if I had known what fun it was to have grandchildren I’d...
May 22nd, 2018 07:58 - Freedom Flowings (Orchidee)
My Spirit is always there.
May 22nd, 2018 02:02 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #73: praying m (Frank Prem)
Life has its fun moments despite the horror that it can be.
May 22nd, 2018 02:02 - A PAIR OF SOCK COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
So very true, strangely my wife and I were talking about this yesterday.
May 22nd, 2018 02:00 - Timeless (MrNobody40)
Super write, those forgotten moments can be wondrous.
May 22nd, 2018 01:59 - TICKING AWAY. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write Fay, your command of language is superb.
May 22nd, 2018 01:58 - Early Awakening (W c)
The beauty of dawn wonderfully conveyed in your words.
May 21st, 2018 01:00 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #72: parfait crazy (Frank Prem)
Your payments are very much appreciated.
May 21st, 2018 00:59 - THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK (Michael Edwards)
Very good write Michael, it put me i mind of a Johnny Cash song -...
May 21st, 2018 00:56 - Blades (Christina8)
So many people do not seek friends who can help them.
May 21st, 2018 00:50 - Him (Angstypoems)
You will never know unless you let him know how you feel, you may be...
May 21st, 2018 00:44
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