Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES (Michael Edwards)
Two thought provoking quinzaines Michael.
April 16th, 2018 01:02 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #38: a doctor for the seclusion room (Frank Prem)
Emotive write.
April 16th, 2018 01:00 - INSPIRATION (Laura🌻)
Very good Laura, you have got them down to a tee .
April 16th, 2018 00:57 - Forever (Willyweed)
Very good loving write, this is exactly how I feel for my wife.
April 16th, 2018 00:54 - (Caretakers Of Greed) (Spirit Walker)
Good write and so true, unfortunately those with the power are the most...
April 15th, 2018 12:33 - NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good and meaningful write Brian, love should rule the earth.
April 15th, 2018 12:31 - Throne (Nicholas Browning)
Very good write which leaves one intrigued which I think is good.
April 15th, 2018 12:30 - Fulfilling Faith - Epistles of Peter Series - 1 (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
April 15th, 2018 02:02 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #37: opening the door surveying the realm (Frank Prem)
Love the last stanza. This happens in many walks of life where the staff...
April 15th, 2018 01:00 - TWO MORE EDELECTS (Michael Edwards)
Both are good but the second one gave me my first chuckle of the day.
April 15th, 2018 00:58 - Bisexuality (Purplebooks)
As Maxine said do waht makes you happy and that happiness will move you...
April 15th, 2018 00:52 - Lopsided (Noni)
Good write, it says so much in so few words.
April 15th, 2018 00:50 - Abode (Eugene S.)
Very good write, if only that ground could speak we would learn of many...
April 15th, 2018 00:39 - A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I too do not gamble but Grand National is different and in the past I have...
April 15th, 2018 00:32 - Judgement And Justice (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi, can we call God down to sought out our world as it heads...
April 14th, 2018 03:20 - Franks Psychiatry 3 #36: consumers now (Frank Prem)
Super write, you will not forget them or the care that you gave them.
April 14th, 2018 03:19 - Sixteen Years (Christina8)
Great, great love poem. That love will continue into eternity.
April 14th, 2018 01:23 - AN ARTISTS EYE (Michael Edwards)
It is amazing what beauty can be seen when transferred from the artists...
April 14th, 2018 01:22 - Much Ado About Anything (Lorna)
Those tears do run together and become indistinguishable but the joy will...
April 14th, 2018 00:59 - SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
if we were all the same it would be a dull old world.
April 14th, 2018 00:57 - Serenity (Sylviasearcher)
There is a key but it takes time and experience to find the one that fits...
April 14th, 2018 00:54 - Common-Union Considerations (Orchidee)
Amen.
April 13th, 2018 02:18 - UNWINESQUE (Michael Edwards)
Stanley Unwin was surely a one off and a very funny, intelligent...
April 13th, 2018 02:17 - Franks Psychiatry 3 #35: final discharge (Frank Prem)
It is so true that cemeteries are beautiful dignified places.
Even those...
April 13th, 2018 02:11 - THE LITTLE HOUSE ON THE HILL (Lasergraph)
Those memories are so special and take you back to wonderful times when...
April 13th, 2018 00:50 - Images on the Hammersmith and City Line (FineB)
Good write, riding on the underground and looking t the people makes me...
April 13th, 2018 00:43 - To you (Myself and me)
Very good romantic write, those times with each other are wonderful. May...
April 13th, 2018 00:40 - Escape (Sylviasearcher)
Very good write, that special person is just that, special.
April 13th, 2018 00:30 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #34: after the ball (Frank Prem)
Leila is obviously a very kind person as they ll need to be in that...
April 13th, 2018 00:28 - MY PERFECT LOVE ~ A LINE DANCING POEM ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good love lorn write Brian. May your Perfect Love go on forever.
April 13th, 2018 00:25 - Lamb\'s Ears in the Garden (Lorna)
Those warmer silver mornings will soon be here Lorna. Good write.
April 13th, 2018 00:23 - ALLURE. (Fay Slimm.)
What a wonderful write Fay, the seduction of the cliffs tantalising all.
April 13th, 2018 00:18 - Easter Extempore (Orchidee)
Death has no sting, the body may go but the Spirit within us goes on for...
April 12th, 2018 02:11 - ALL MY OWN (Michael Edwards)
Clever writes that work very well.
April 12th, 2018 01:11 - Closed Door (Christina8)
Very good write, that door is still open as she is still looking down on...
April 12th, 2018 01:03 - HER JOB (Lasergraph)
What a superb write, the ladies of the house do an amazing job.
April 12th, 2018 00:59 - morning walk (Onepauly)
Early morning walks are fabulous with or without the cheesecake.
April 11th, 2018 08:25 - The Shade Garden (Lorna)
Very happy family indeed.
April 11th, 2018 08:23 - it aint our summer (Dusk arising)
Beautiful loving write.
April 11th, 2018 08:22 - DECEPTION. (Fay Slimm.)
So sad, these type of man should be ***************ed Enter your own...
April 11th, 2018 08:20 - Waiting For The End (Resa71)
Beautiful poignant write Resa.
April 11th, 2018 08:18 - Rejoin the Dance (Sylviasearcher)
Dancing conveys music into elegant actions. Good write Sylvia.
April 11th, 2018 08:17 - Opportunity Openings - Colossians Series - 8 (Orchidee)
Amen.
April 11th, 2018 02:06 - Let Me Ask You a Question (Nicholas Browning)
It can be wonderful. Good thought provoking write Nicholas.
April 11th, 2018 02:06 - Nightmare. (Wallace)
We can all be thankful that we were not there. Very good write, we must...
April 11th, 2018 01:13 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #33: better than that (Frank Prem)
The strength of being a good nurse shows through your writings.
April 11th, 2018 01:11 - ANOTHER ESSENCE (Michael Edwards)
Good one once more Michael.
April 11th, 2018 01:10 - Frozen (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Beautiful write ron.
April 11th, 2018 01:09 - Ghost Writer (W c)
He is in many places but never known. Good write.
April 11th, 2018 01:06 - Beauty of the Soul (Lorna)
So very true Lorna.
April 11th, 2018 00:59 - Love\'s Leadings (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
April 11th, 2018 00:55 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #32: huntington’s marionette (Frank Prem)
Such an awful disease that strikes so young.
April 11th, 2018 00:53 - SEASONS ~ FOUR FULL TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good Tankas Brian.
April 10th, 2018 01:54 - LIMERICK No 52 (Michael Edwards)
Frayed ankles can be a nuiscance.
April 10th, 2018 01:26 - MASTERMIND (Bibbeck)
There was a time
When you could Double Your Money
As you Take Your...
April 10th, 2018 01:21 - TRUTH (Onepauly)
Life changes all the while but in spite being thrown onto a different road...
April 10th, 2018 00:58 - WRITER\'S BLOCK (Lasergraph)
That blank page obviously attracted these fine words laser.
April 10th, 2018 00:38 - SUNDAY WAYS. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write, those Sundays were so special.
April 10th, 2018 00:26 - BIBLES IN HOTELS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian and yes I have read the Gideon Bible in a hotel and my...
April 10th, 2018 00:23 - I Dreamt (W c)
May your dreams come true.
April 10th, 2018 00:21 - The Laughing Dormouse (Lorna)
Good fun write Lorna.
April 10th, 2018 00:20 - An Apology (Sylviasearcher)
Asking for forgiveness is the first step to going into a better life. You...
April 10th, 2018 00:19 - Family And Work Matters - Colossians Series - 7 (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
April 9th, 2018 02:22 - AN ESSENCE (Michael Edwards)
Another new type of poem brought into my armoury.
April 9th, 2018 02:22 - Franks Psychiatry, 2 #31: bounce and flow (Frank Prem)
Distraction therapy eh?
April 9th, 2018 02:20 - start (Onepauly)
Good write but to my mind rhyming is not important, not many of my poems...
April 9th, 2018 02:18 - The Warp and the Weft (Lorna)
Very good write Lorna, time is endless.
April 9th, 2018 02:10 - FLIMSY WONDERS. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful words.
Whenever you see a feather you know an Angel has been...
April 9th, 2018 02:09 - Franks Psychiatry, 2 #30: medication jam (Frank Prem)
I bet you got through a lot of jam.
April 8th, 2018 00:46 - WATER DROPLETS (Michael Edwards)
That journey to the ocean can be thrilling. Good write Michael.
April 8th, 2018 00:45 - ANCIENT ONES (Onepauly)
Those ancestors are always with you.
April 8th, 2018 00:43 - SALT IN HER WOUNDS (Bibbeck)
Very good write.
April 8th, 2018 00:42 - Mary and the Little Snake (Lorna)
Good write Lorna, kids can be fearless.
April 8th, 2018 00:24 - FIRST BALLAD. (Fay Slimm.)
I was sitting their with you Fay, may your baton always produce fine words...
April 8th, 2018 00:21 - Shepherd Sureties (Orchidee)
Very good one Orchi.
April 8th, 2018 00:19 - Franks Psychiatry, 2 #29: in charge of retardation (Frank Prem)
Such a strange world for a young man but you came through it.
April 8th, 2018 00:18 - LET US ALL TRUST IN GOD ~ A 6 6 2 SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good write Brian, God is always with us though.
April 8th, 2018 00:17 - WITH RESOLUTION (Michael Edwards)
Super sonnet, always leave the shadows behind you.
Did you get the...
April 7th, 2018 00:50 - Quaff (Eugene S.)
Cheers Eugene, enjoy your beer.
April 7th, 2018 00:39 - I Thought I Knew (Christina8)
In life we have bumps in the road and sometimes crashes but they can lead...
April 7th, 2018 00:34 - Snowdrops in the Morning (Lorna)
Very good write, those snowdrops are very determined plants.
April 7th, 2018 00:23 - STATES OF THE USA 1 ~ MICHIGAN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write and explanation, my new thing learned for the day.
April 7th, 2018 00:21 - Breakfasting Believers (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi, there were 154 fishes but we took one to eat before they...
April 6th, 2018 02:05 - EPIGRAM No 3 (Michael Edwards)
If I wore them I would be singing castrato! Good fun write.
You need a...
April 6th, 2018 01:49 - Franks Psychiatry, 2 #28: getting stuffed (Frank Prem)
Those who have died should be treated with respect and dignity.
April 6th, 2018 01:27 - Memory Exhales (Kurt Philip Behm)
Those words grew into this excellent write Kurt.
April 6th, 2018 00:52 - I Wonder (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Good emotive write ron.
April 6th, 2018 00:47 - Simple Words (Lasergraph)
Very good write Edward, words can be so fragile that it is always best to...
April 6th, 2018 00:44 - Hero or Villain (Patricia LaFazia)
Very good and very true write.
There is Japanese Proverb that says,...
April 6th, 2018 00:42 - Grandma\'s Treasures (Spirit Walker)
Beautiful write SL. Your Grandma\'s treasured moments revealed and never...
April 6th, 2018 00:29 - A world unknown (Resa71)
So many of the ‘privileged ‘ have no idea what real life is about....
April 5th, 2018 08:16 - MARTIN LUTHER KING ~ 1929 - 1968 Gone but never Forgotten (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A great man whose message is still needed even now.
April 5th, 2018 08:13 - TOGETHERNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Togetherness is so wonderful and it shows in this very good write.
April 5th, 2018 08:12 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #27: a day at the races (Frank Prem)
Good fun write, there is fun to be had sometimes in all eventualities.
April 5th, 2018 03:44 - Faith Formations (Orchidee)
That belief must be string but sometimes it is sorely tested.
April 5th, 2018 02:30 - EPIGRAM No 2 (Michael Edwards)
Learning comes from others and your errors - it is called experience. ...
April 5th, 2018 00:52 - My Girl (Christina8)
Very good loving write for your daughter, that love for her will never...
April 5th, 2018 00:49 - MODERN DAY BLUES (Lasergraph)
Good write and so true in this day and age.
April 5th, 2018 00:47 - (The Ride) (Spirit Walker)
Good write SW. Welcome to MPS.
April 5th, 2018 00:45 - Philosophy III (Noah)
Clever words Noah.
April 5th, 2018 00:41
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