Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2) (Michael Edwards)
This is a very good write Michael, the clay may be moved by the Spirit.
October 6th, 2017 02:11 - Bitter sweet, memories (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Wonderful write Ron.
October 6th, 2017 02:07 - A Painters Eye (WL Schuett)
Super write, all art is built like this, it is what makes it so amazing.
October 6th, 2017 02:00 - Under the stars ✨ (Malubotelho)
super write, the innocence of young love shines in the stars.
October 6th, 2017 00:48 - Harvest Homage (Orchidee)
Another good thankful write Orchi.
October 6th, 2017 00:46 - Afraid (John Prophet)
Our fears of what is ahead will become the experiences of our past. Good...
October 5th, 2017 08:03 - The Gravity of Time (Accidental Poet)
The past has gone, the future holds the excitement of the unknown. Good...
October 5th, 2017 08:01 - Paint\'s Heat. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful tribute to a wonderful artist.
October 5th, 2017 07:59 - I Want to Meet a Stranger (MALU)
Good write, welcome to MOS.
October 5th, 2017 07:56 - Yesterday. (LenientOne)
Good write, hope to see more. Welcome to MPS.
October 5th, 2017 07:54 - coffee train (Frank Prem)
Black no sugar please, Colombian preferably.
October 5th, 2017 07:53 - DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1) (Michael Edwards)
The soil should not be moved as the Spirit has already left the body and...
October 5th, 2017 01:44 - Mortality (FredPeyer)
Good write, you are still with us and will stay with us and we will meet...
October 5th, 2017 01:42 - THE OLD COUPLE (Lasergraph)
Super write, I can see this story in my own mind.
October 5th, 2017 01:30 - Not even the Mule (WL Schuett)
Super write, so true. All any of us can and should do is start...
October 5th, 2017 01:22 - AUTUMN HAIKU ~ For CHRISTINA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Autumn is my favourite season its colours are mesmerising. Good write.
October 5th, 2017 01:20 - Comforting Considerations (Orchidee)
Another good one Orchi.
October 5th, 2017 01:17 - Our love Is Strong (Christina8)
Good write and so true. The last words that my wife and I say to each...
October 5th, 2017 01:00 - Bound (Baylee)
Good loving write.
October 5th, 2017 00:58 - To Surmount (Poetboy123)
Good positive write, keep going up the light is there for you.
October 5th, 2017 00:57 - Fountains Abbey (Sue.evans)
Good write Sue. We have been to Fountains Abbey some years ago and it is...
October 5th, 2017 00:56 - Just an Organ? (Mugsdaddy)
Good write, the last line is so true and I wish it could apply to all in...
October 5th, 2017 00:51 - Empathy Among The Species (Accidental Poet)
Very good write AP and so true. It may happen one day when all agree that...
October 5th, 2017 00:46 - October\' s Intent. (Fay Slimm.)
Another good write Fay, October does have its beauty, the yellow, golden...
October 5th, 2017 00:43 - Scarred (FredPeyer)
Good write Fred, the world is always a better place as you have gone...
October 5th, 2017 00:40 - IT\'S ABOUT TIME (Louis Gibbs)
I am with you Louis.
October 4th, 2017 01:06 - THE AUTOCRAT (Michael Edwards)
Some family autocrats can bind family members. Good write.
October 4th, 2017 01:05 - Thank God, Papi is Home Again (Rrodriguez)
Such a moving write, I am so glad your Dad is safe.
October 4th, 2017 00:56 - Littlest of things (Poetic Dan)
Those little things in our lives are so important and can bring us such...
October 4th, 2017 00:46 - Creature Comfortings (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi, it is a pity that homo sapiens is trying to destroy it...
October 4th, 2017 00:44 - Senryu (Christina8)
Good senryu Christina.
October 4th, 2017 00:43 - PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good fun write the both of you.
October 4th, 2017 00:34 - Sweet Memories (FredPeyer)
Very good write, I was there in bell bottoms and platform shoes.
October 3rd, 2017 07:55 - What I’d Like to Know (Accidental Poet)
Good write about an awful killing. I cannot see the point in killing any...
October 3rd, 2017 01:51 - Yesterday. (Wallace)
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
October 3rd, 2017 01:49 - so many ask why (Mugsdaddy)
Strong write about an appalling atrocity. I agree with Michael about the...
October 3rd, 2017 01:49 - Alaska Wildlife (W c)
Good write, I would love to have been there as well.
October 3rd, 2017 01:46 - ON BEING A POET (Michael Edwards)
I am a bit of stickler when writing the English language, except in...
October 3rd, 2017 01:37 - Wine Soaked Kisses (FredPeyer)
Good write, your imagination is very creative.
October 3rd, 2017 01:32 - Homeless (Sue.evans)
Very good write about an increasing problem in our towns and cities.
October 3rd, 2017 01:30 - To Fall Asleep (MendedFences27)
Very strong grief stricken write but very well penned.
October 3rd, 2017 01:27 - Hiking the Urayoán Mountains (Rrodriguez)
wonderful write, I was with you all the way, I have these feelings when I...
October 3rd, 2017 01:22 - Awake Alertings (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi, I agree with SM87 that it could easily open a...
October 3rd, 2017 00:41 - Ode to Music. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you Louis, much appreciated.
October 2nd, 2017 11:53 - Space (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Good write, space within our minds is infinite.
October 2nd, 2017 07:59 - Wedding Day (Christina8)
Good write, \'til death do us part is so true.
October 2nd, 2017 07:58 - GOODBYES (Arpit)
True friendship never ends, welcome to MPS.
October 2nd, 2017 07:56 - Wells of Summer. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay.
October 2nd, 2017 07:55 - The Place Where Love Controls. (Kevin browne)
Good write, love controls all our emotions.
October 2nd, 2017 07:53 - love (in a time of passing trains) (Frank Prem)
Very good write Frank.
October 2nd, 2017 07:51 - Kiss My WHAT? Good-bye (Accidental Poet)
Good write, it may have misinterpreted though and should have been 2022.
October 2nd, 2017 07:50 - Sock Puppets (Adam Shirley)
Very good write.
October 2nd, 2017 07:48 - HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write, I have never been up in one but we used to have a hit air...
October 2nd, 2017 07:47 - FUSIONS 4 (Michael Edwards)
While I eat my bred
washed down with red.
October 2nd, 2017 01:49 - Rutting Buck (W c)
Never get near a stag in the rutting season, they don\'t care who they...
October 2nd, 2017 01:48 - THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM (Louis Gibbs)
Data exists. Good write, A-I is with us and will be teaching us before...
October 2nd, 2017 01:27 - The Phone (FredPeyer)
Very good loving write, glad it was in your mind though Fred.
October 2nd, 2017 01:24 - The Pack (WL Schuett)
Wonderful write, beautiful painting, both are so very meaningful.
October 2nd, 2017 01:15 - Come Sleep, Oh Sleep (Rrodriguez)
Good write very well formed.
October 2nd, 2017 01:13 - In The Garden (DeviLove)
Very good write, the beauty of your garden is shown the words written, the...
October 2nd, 2017 01:12 - Definition Of Beauty - Jaylan E. Mitchell (Jaylan eneva)
Good write, your beauty shines within your words. Welcome to MPS.
October 2nd, 2017 01:09 - Travelling On Trusting (Orchidee)
Another good write Orchi.
October 2nd, 2017 01:00 - An Apology (Edward Charles McDevitt)
It is good that you write on this site, I do try to comment on poems, I...
October 2nd, 2017 00:59 - All-Points Bulletin (Accidental Poet)
Good fun write, anger into poetry works well.
October 2nd, 2017 00:49 - A Place For Animals (W c)
Good write and I would wish it was so but homo sapiens is so greedy that...
October 2nd, 2017 00:47 - Advancing. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write as usual Fay, my favourite time of the year.
October 2nd, 2017 00:46 - GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen Brian, Amen indeed.
October 2nd, 2017 00:38 - THE TEMPTRESS (Michael Edwards)
Good write, repetitions always work well in poetry.
October 1st, 2017 01:11 - You Touched Me (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Beautiful loving write Ron.
October 1st, 2017 01:09 - Please tell me (Rrodriguez)
Beautiful lovelorn write Roberto.
October 1st, 2017 01:00 - National Parks (W c)
Good write, the National Parks in the UK are very special places as well....
October 1st, 2017 00:59 - Salvation Sensitivity (Orchidee)
Amen.
October 1st, 2017 00:57 - MULTITASKING (Michael Edwards)
Oh dear Michael, you have really opened a can of worms here. As I have...
September 30th, 2017 01:24 - Musings (FredPeyer)
Good write, never thought of each day being my last day but I do treat...
September 30th, 2017 01:20 - CHILLY WRITING DAY (Lasergraph)
So very true, ideas in your mind change as the words go onto the page. ...
September 30th, 2017 01:12 - The Creature (Tony36)
Very good write. It is OK I will not be around your way tonight so you...
September 30th, 2017 01:10 - Aubode (Rrodriguez)
Super write, the mornings in the UK are not the same but to me that are...
September 30th, 2017 01:08 - Love theatre 🎭 (Malubotelho)
Good write, may that theatre of love continue to flourish.
September 30th, 2017 01:05 - Wooden Music (WL Schuett)
Super write, making music together is wonderful and must be all the better...
September 30th, 2017 00:59 - Mississippi Kite (W c)
Good write. Watching raptors is wonderful. I had the experience of a days...
September 30th, 2017 00:54 - Sing-song Serenadings (Orchidee)
Yes I was singing to his Praises last night as I will do on Sunday which...
September 30th, 2017 00:51 - Clipped Wings (Christina8)
Very good and powerful write but be assured your wings are free now and...
September 30th, 2017 00:49 - Decorations of the Heart (Accidental Poet)
Very good write, those times in our lives are so important and so...
September 30th, 2017 00:46 - Music Melody (GeraldineTaylor)
Clever write about my favourite form of art.
September 29th, 2017 02:53 - Extravagance. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful fruit filled write. I can remember gathering blackberries and...
September 29th, 2017 02:26 - SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This really took me back, I was an analytical chemist at the start of my...
September 29th, 2017 02:24 - Forever Lost *Senryu* (Veil loreraven)
Good write but strictly speaking this is a senryu.
Haikus refer to...
September 29th, 2017 02:18 - Prime Time. (Wallace)
I too am up at 6 in the morning, the best time of the day.
September 29th, 2017 01:40 - REFLECTED EDONE (Michael Edwards)
Clever write Michael.
September 29th, 2017 01:38 - PASSING THROUGH (Louis Gibbs)
We all have our travels to continue and we all have pauses but some of...
September 29th, 2017 01:36 - Don’t Postpone Joy (Rrodriguez)
Wonferfully positive and joyful write.
September 29th, 2017 01:25 - I Want to Love Him (Katy S.)
Good but very sad write.
September 28th, 2017 08:28 - A bird told me 🐦 (Malubotelho)
Good write, I feed the birds and occasionally they eat from my hand, but...
September 28th, 2017 08:28 - Faithful Favourings (Orchidee)
Thank the Lord indeed, amen.
September 28th, 2017 08:25 - Drama (Christina8)
Love is the best cure all any of us can have, good write.
September 28th, 2017 08:24 - Wild and Crazy World (Poetboy123)
All you or any of us can do is move on fearlessly in humility.
September 28th, 2017 08:22 - Horizon (Jabberwocky)
Good positive write Jabberwocky.
September 28th, 2017 08:16 - Past, Present and Future (Accidental Poet)
We should never stop learning, moving forward is the only way we should...
September 28th, 2017 08:15 - FUSIONS 3 (Michael Edwards)
Good fun write. I often tell people not to thunk as it is dangerous.
September 28th, 2017 01:46 - TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Some good writes but I would disagree with \'amicable divorce\' I am...
September 28th, 2017 01:44
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