Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- A LIFELESS LAND (Michael Edwards)
That is a wonderful poem Michael, the desolation it brings is...
May 10th, 2018 00:54 - The First Thing (Christina8)
Very good write Christina. \" I do\" says it all.
May 10th, 2018 00:51 - Morning dew (Netashi)
Good write, mornings are magical.
May 10th, 2018 00:49 - Daytime Dawning (W c)
Mornings are so wonderful, I see the dawn nearly every day. Good write.
May 10th, 2018 00:48 - Simply Shakespeare (Lorna)
A very good write Lorna although I do not like Shakespeare, it was forced...
May 10th, 2018 00:40 - Eternity (Arianna Smith)
Beautiful emotive write, I do hope that love is returned.
May 10th, 2018 00:37 - This Life (Jabberwocky)
Life can be hard and the kids can drive you crazy but I don\'t believe...
May 10th, 2018 00:36 - LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ A Diablo Morphic Mirror Poem ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian and good format.
May 10th, 2018 00:33 - Blessings Bounties (Orchidee)
Praise the Lord indeed.
May 9th, 2018 02:12 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #61: nursing theory (Frank Prem)
It certainly isn\'t right. In these modern times doing things quickly (on...
May 9th, 2018 02:11 - A COUPLE OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Very good couplets Michael.
We have a couple of those poppies in our...
May 9th, 2018 00:59 - SOME~GOOD~ADVICE (Lauraš»)
Good write Laura, great structure.
May 9th, 2018 00:58 - Return to Sunlight (Noah)
That hole should always be the one that goes towards the light.
May 9th, 2018 00:56 - Out Of Harmony (Christina8)
Good write and very true, you must go to bed in harmony, the last word...
May 9th, 2018 00:48 - The Great Society (W c)
Very good write, we will all be there one day.
May 9th, 2018 00:44 - The Creed of Spring (Sandbone18)
Yes Spring is so special
May 9th, 2018 00:42 - Batman (Jabberwocky)
Mine was Superman back in the day.
May 8th, 2018 05:31 - moving ahead no matter what (Lemons poetry)
May that tragedy now be behind you and you move forward into an existence...
May 8th, 2018 05:30 - Seine Haul Fishing For Life (Lorna)
I have much respect for the fisherman of the world, they work so hard and...
May 8th, 2018 05:29 - BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Clever write Brian, it works well both ways.
May 8th, 2018 05:27 - Persisting Petitions (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
May 8th, 2018 05:26 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #60: weary (Frank Prem)
There are so many good people out there doing good works in places like...
May 8th, 2018 01:25 - SILHOUETTED (Michael Edwards)
Those few words say so much Michael.
May 8th, 2018 00:29 - Introduction (SLR)
Welcome to MPS, I look forward to reading your words.
May 8th, 2018 00:27 - Do You Know? (MissRight223)
Very emotive and well written words, being with her is the right thing to...
May 8th, 2018 00:25 - Someone to hold (Netashi)
Very good write, that search for the right person can be hard but that...
May 8th, 2018 00:22 - LITTLE JOHNNY (A tragedy) (Lasergraph)
Wow, what a strong write and that last stanza brought me to tears.
I...
May 8th, 2018 00:20 - ~For my Grandma~ (Arianna Smith)
Beautiful tribute, she will always be with you.
May 8th, 2018 00:17 - a love for poetry (Lemons poetry)
The muse is obviously with you as it is with all who put pen to paper.
May 8th, 2018 00:16 - Malarkey Blowing in the Wind (Lorna)
People who only worry about themselves and expect others to help them are...
May 8th, 2018 00:14 - Ease (Jabberwocky)
Enjoy your coffee and your ease as your Siren calls go out over the sea.
May 8th, 2018 00:10 - intuition (Onepauly)
The mystery of life is wonderful as are your words.
May 8th, 2018 00:07 - IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
If only those who have the power would listen to those who know all would...
May 7th, 2018 02:18 - Unity And Peace (Orchidee)
Very good write and one of THE songs in our religion.
May 7th, 2018 01:54 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #59: alzheimerās in the twenty-first century (Frank Prem)
Such a strong write. Caring for others seems to have stopped in our lives,...
May 7th, 2018 01:28 - TRANSIENT DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Very good senryu (I write them as well) and I love the sculpture Michael.
May 7th, 2018 00:52 - Fantine (Mae)
Very good emotive write.
Welcome to MPS.
May 7th, 2018 00:49 - Until we meet again (Arianna Smith)
Very good write Arianna, distance is no barrier these days, one of my...
May 7th, 2018 00:46 - THAT MORN. (Fay Slimm.)
Super write Fay, I felt I was in the corn field as well.
May 7th, 2018 00:41 - Tickled (Jabberwocky)
I am glad that you held your breath otherwise we would not have seen these...
May 7th, 2018 00:38 - Write to the Stars (MP Martinez)
May your words fill the sky.
May 7th, 2018 00:37 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #58: raising the pride (Frank Prem)
Good write, I bet there were many days like this where all worked well...
May 7th, 2018 00:36 - on writing (Onepauly)
Good write, we all need to write, that need is within us.
May 7th, 2018 00:35 - JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen.
May 7th, 2018 00:33 - Seeking Soul (Orchidee)
Constant renew indeed. Good write Orchi.
May 6th, 2018 01:58 - SHE DANCED (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful write Michael.
May 6th, 2018 01:30 - WHIRLING ROUND (Resa71)
That piece is there for you Resa, just look towards the light.
May 6th, 2018 01:29 - Cactus Cafe (Gary Edward Geraci)
Those places were wondrous in which to be involved, the number of world...
May 6th, 2018 01:27 - my assistant (Onepauly)
Good fun write.
May 6th, 2018 01:15 - A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Rainbows are special, they re-affirm God\'s Covenant with us all.
May 6th, 2018 01:13 - Cobwebs of the Sun (Lorna)
Very good write Lorna, the light is with us.
May 6th, 2018 00:59 - Refuge Reassurance (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
May 6th, 2018 00:58 - LANTURNES BY THREE (Michael Edwards)
Good writes Michael, I like all three.
May 5th, 2018 01:06 - When Stars Collide (Noah)
Super write - those stars are so special.
May 5th, 2018 01:04 - Key of Sands (WL Schuett)
Super right WL, glad to hear from you again.
May 5th, 2018 01:03 - Franks Psychiatry 4 # 56: from long black shoelaces (Frank Prem)
Such a strong moving write Frank.
May 5th, 2018 00:59 - The Tears of Lean On Pete (Lorna)
There are some films that can cause all emotions in us for various reasons...
May 4th, 2018 07:52 - RESTITUTION (Michael Edwards)
Clever write Michael.
May 4th, 2018 01:55 - Praise Perpetual (Orchidee)
Amen.
May 4th, 2018 01:54 - I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You are right it certainly does not have rhyme or reason but is great fun...
May 4th, 2018 01:54 - Reciprocal (Noah)
The wisdom of the old
is ignored by the young.
May 4th, 2018 00:53 - The Love is Gone (Christina K)
Sometimes the love is just not there Christina. Good write.
May 4th, 2018 00:51 - ON WRITING (Lasergraph)
Great write Edward, even at our age there are so many words still to be...
May 4th, 2018 00:47 - Pretending (Christina8)
In our lives we have bad times but all you need to be is thankful that you...
May 4th, 2018 00:41 - A Fishing Day (W c)
Good write. I used to fish every weekend a long, long time ago.
May 4th, 2018 00:38 - Millennium Bridge - LONDON (FineB)
Good write FineB, I could see all those sights and people on that...
May 4th, 2018 00:36 - Throw Out the Nets for the Wondrous Heart (Lorna)
Very true Lorna.
May 3rd, 2018 07:59 - ON THE RUN. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write Fay, I was there walking down the crowded streets.
May 3rd, 2018 07:57 - Ascents Acclaimings (Orchidee)
May the Peace of the Lord be always with you.
May 3rd, 2018 02:35 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #55: what happened (Frank Prem)
Wow! Such a strong sad write, how did the lad get on?
May 3rd, 2018 00:41 - WORDS (Michael Edwards)
Words are so important in our lives, they can be so powerful both for good...
May 3rd, 2018 00:39 - ready (Onepauly)
Positive write, go for it onepauly and good luck.
May 3rd, 2018 00:34 - UNFORGETTABLE (Lauraš»)
Very good write and tribute to a wonderful poet and musician - he will be...
May 3rd, 2018 00:31 - Road Trip Conclusions (Lorna)
There are some places from where you cannot get home quick enough.
May 2nd, 2018 07:56 - Broken Cup (Jabberwocky)
That cup can be repaired to hold your life.
May 2nd, 2018 07:54 - Judgement And Justice (Orchidee)
That justice we saw at the time seems to have changed - or has it?
May 2nd, 2018 07:53 - Franks Psychiatry 4 # 54: and the hell with the papers (Frank Prem)
Those clear outs can be so uplifting - for a while.
May 2nd, 2018 01:27 - ONCE HONED (Michael Edwards)
Those blunted blades when sharpened can cut through the sorrow of life...
May 2nd, 2018 00:41 - HOOD (Lauraš»)
He will be missed, a wonderful poet and musician.
May 2nd, 2018 00:38 - My father the stranger.... (P.H.Rose)
Such an emotive write but I can see where it can be so true.
Good to...
May 2nd, 2018 00:37 - Empty but fine (Netashi)
Boredom is a right pain so make sure that the music I listen to, the...
May 2nd, 2018 00:34 - Moments (Christina8)
Very well written, we all have hidden secrets that mean so much to us and...
May 2nd, 2018 00:27 - The Flower Moon - May (Lorna)
To the moon and the stars with your words is wonderful.
May 1st, 2018 08:15 - LOVE\'S GLOW. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful Fay, just beautiful.
May 1st, 2018 08:14 - shelter (Onepauly)
Good fun write onepauly, enjoy the warmth and your music.
May 1st, 2018 08:13 - Righteousness Reality (Orchidee)
Yes, ALL may come to Him. Good write.
May 1st, 2018 08:11 - HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ An Acrostic 3 3 8 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I have never been up in a balloon but we used to have a balloon festival...
May 1st, 2018 08:10 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #53: the Carer Meeting (Frank Prem)
Very good write, it is awful that the people who can do something about...
May 1st, 2018 08:08 - Ocean (Bailey)
Very true, we may know more about space than we do about the mysteries of...
May 1st, 2018 00:26 - Forest Prince (W c)
Very good, nature is wonderful, especially new birth.
May 1st, 2018 00:23 - grateful (Onepauly)
Positivity is always good, move forward with faith.
May 1st, 2018 00:21 - My Sails are Luffing (Lorna)
May the wind be always in your sails Lorna.
April 30th, 2018 08:04 - BEGINNINGS. (Fay Slimm.)
Oops two.
April 30th, 2018 08:03 - BEGINNINGS. (Fay Slimm.)
Very true Fay, cracking last too lines.
April 30th, 2018 08:03 - Franks Psychiatry 4 # 52: that\'s all (last Saturday) (Frank Prem)
Very emotive Frank.
April 30th, 2018 08:01 - Creation Considerations (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
April 30th, 2018 08:00 - HAPPINESS ~ An 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
How tickled I am to be always happy.
April 30th, 2018 04:59 - MASK (ZIGGY)
Good write. We all wear masks in the differing situations in our lives.
April 30th, 2018 01:00 - Our spirit never dies. (Antonis)
Good write, your Spirit goes on to eternity.
April 30th, 2018 00:59 - Reminiscing at the Playground (Sandbone18)
Very true, so many memories when you take your children to the park - they...
April 30th, 2018 00:54
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