Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Proportion (Jabberwocky)
Good write J.
April 5th, 2018 00:37 - Winnie and Roo (Lorna)
Super write, if only the innocence of childhood could remain with us all...
April 5th, 2018 00:30 - ASK & YOU WILL RECEIVE ~ BUT NOT ALWAYS AS EXPECTED ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good write Brian. One thing that I have always believed that if you...
April 5th, 2018 00:28 - Watching And Waiting (Orchidee)
Alleluia indeed.
April 4th, 2018 02:21 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #26: row your boat (Frank Prem)
It is amazing what they do.
April 4th, 2018 02:21 - EPIGRAM No1 (Michael Edwards)
You were listening to Orchi then!
April 4th, 2018 02:20 - My Teddy Bear (MARY Swillum)
Very good write, may your teddy bear always bring you pleasure.
April 4th, 2018 01:00 - Paired. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good love write Fay, that love only increases with time.
April 4th, 2018 00:58 - Sinful Victory (Resa71)
Very good write Resa.
April 4th, 2018 00:56 - MODEL RAILWAY GEEK ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good write and my first laugh of the day - thank you Brian.
April 3rd, 2018 03:56 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #25: bathing the locked ward (Frank Prem)
So sad.
April 3rd, 2018 03:53 - Anchor (Karoline)
Good loving write.
April 3rd, 2018 02:57 - Emmaus Encounter (Orchidee)
That road to Emmaus has a great deal for which to answer.
April 3rd, 2018 02:21 - Music Waiting Under the Snow (Lorna)
Super write Lorna, your garden is awakening.
The music is quite...
April 3rd, 2018 01:19 - FROM PASSION TO ENCHANTMENT (Michael Edwards)
Good senryu write Michael.
Just one thing the second line of the first...
April 3rd, 2018 00:45 - Fall (MP Martinez)
May your landing be soft and loving.
April 3rd, 2018 00:27 - Be That Driving Force (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Very good positive write b.
April 3rd, 2018 00:22 - THE PICNIC (Laura🌻)
Viva indeed Laura. This is a great idea, what a wonderful man your Dad...
April 3rd, 2018 00:21 - I believe in EQUALITY! (Renzi)
Very good write and song Renzi. May your writes and rights to gay...
April 3rd, 2018 00:18 - Today is a Beautiful Day (MARY Swillum)
What a very good positive write. After reading this I now know that my day...
April 3rd, 2018 00:14 - When the Pine Fell (Lorna)
Very good write Lorna and so sad, the picture itself is so emotive.
April 3rd, 2018 00:09 - Keep On Praising (ForeverJesus7)
Amen.
April 3rd, 2018 00:07 - MYSTERIOUS. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay, Gods Covenant is with us.
April 3rd, 2018 00:05 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #24: birdies at meal time (Frank Prem)
Such a hard life in dealing with these patients, patience in the staff...
April 3rd, 2018 00:00 - 14 STATIONS OF THE CROSS ~ A ~ 4 4 4 2 ~ SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Those fourteen Stations of the Cross do show us the way to the eventual...
April 2nd, 2018 23:58 - Meaningful Morning (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
April 2nd, 2018 23:56 - People vs the power (Hoopie)
very true nr, the same applies to gender and religious beliefs.
April 2nd, 2018 01:33 - A JOKE IS NOT A JOKE (Michael Edwards)
Pardon Michael, I seem to have gone deaf.
April 2nd, 2018 00:35 - The wine speaks... (Ash)
In that darkness you may still glimpse the light and when you glimpse it...
April 2nd, 2018 00:34 - Met Your Match .. (Ivory)
May that chemistry always combine into the perfect formula.
April 2nd, 2018 00:25 - Feelings (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Simple and very meaningful write.
April 2nd, 2018 00:23 - Blues stand news (Willyweed)
Very good emotive write.
April 2nd, 2018 00:22 - WISELY BOUGHT. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write Fay.
April 2nd, 2018 00:18 - Drinker (W c)
Good write, I am glad that you have overcome your drinking problems,...
April 2nd, 2018 00:17 - Eternal Easter (Orchidee)
I am so glad there is no whisky watering today.
Good write Orchi.
April 2nd, 2018 00:14 - ON EASTER SUNDAY ~ An Acrostic 2-6-6 Sonnet. (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good acrostic Brian. Yes Easter is the most special time in the...
April 2nd, 2018 00:12 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #23: famous flying choppers (Frank Prem)
The sound of gnashing teeth as they hit the floor.
April 1st, 2018 01:43 - What Happen to the Music (MARY Swillum)
That music will always be in your heart and soul. Good write and welcome...
April 1st, 2018 00:49 - Greatest mystery ever (_rivas98)
Love can be a mystery and take a lifetime to unravel but it is worth every...
April 1st, 2018 00:47 - A BEVY OF BREVETTES (Michael Edwards)
Never come across brevettes but it is an interesting way to write and like...
April 1st, 2018 00:45 - The Shepherd (Patricia LaFazia)
Very good write, the passing of a companion is so hard but I am sure that...
April 1st, 2018 00:36 - Candy Coated Nightmare Love (MaddieJ)
Once the love is there and you are together the love will get stronger and...
April 1st, 2018 00:34 - Unconditional (LukeCoomer)
Good write, love for family has no bounds.
April 1st, 2018 00:31 - My Greatest Hope; My Darkest Fear (Poetboy123)
May those brightest hopes outshine your darkest fears.
April 1st, 2018 00:30 - Depression (Resa71)
Very sad words but in writing words you can lose yourself in them for that...
April 1st, 2018 00:23 - RESURRECTION ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
He is risen, Alleluia!
April 1st, 2018 00:21 - Redemption Riches (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
He is risen. Alleluia!
April 1st, 2018 00:20 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #22: so long miriam (Frank Prem)
This can be said for many students.
March 31st, 2018 00:21 - You Fell In Love With A Memory (Ron parrish aka wordman)
those memories can be so strong.
March 31st, 2018 00:21 - The trend (Hoopie)
The end may well be nigh but ordinary people cannot do anything about it.
March 31st, 2018 00:19 - The UnKnown Man (G-Trebble)
Welcome to MPS.
March 31st, 2018 00:18 - The UnKnown Man (G-Trebble)
That \'old me\' doesn\'t necessarily need to be scary, you can change your...
March 31st, 2018 00:17 - Mrs BROWN (Michael Edwards)
The Mrs Browns of this world are always out there, they mean no harm but...
March 31st, 2018 00:09 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #21: cleaning up (Frank Prem)
Hard times that can be mis understood..
March 30th, 2018 07:49 - CONSTANT. (Fay Slimm.)
Good description of those very hard working fishermen.
March 30th, 2018 07:48 - WHY ~ PERCHE ~ PORQUE - POURQUOI ~ VARUM ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian, you stole my painting, a wonderful coincidence for a...
March 30th, 2018 07:47 - Follow In His Footsteps (Orchidee)
But he did rise, good write Orchi.
March 30th, 2018 02:17 - MOUNTAIN RANGES (Michael Edwards)
Very good tanka Michael, I could see those mountains.
March 30th, 2018 00:19 - Good Friday (Christina8)
Very good write and so true, He saved us all.
March 30th, 2018 00:18 - Morning Sun. (Wallace)
Great life, I was with you going into your peaceful life.
March 30th, 2018 00:13 - ANNIE\'S SONG FOR ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Beautiful loving write Brian to a beautiful lady.
March 30th, 2018 00:11 - Passion Progress (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
March 30th, 2018 00:10 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #20: toilet routine (Frank Prem)
So sad, there are many people like this.
March 29th, 2018 01:31 - WHITE HAIR AND WALKING STICKS (Michael Edwards)
Great write, at least they got to the gig.
March 29th, 2018 01:30 - Govan lass (written in Glesga slang) (Jewels)
Very good write. Those weans certainly grow up fast, treasure them.
March 29th, 2018 01:29 - Anxiety (Kayleigh od)
Your control is there if you can write words like these. Your soul will...
March 29th, 2018 01:16 - Mellow (Hoopie)
Risks must be taken in our life otherwise we would never move forward....
March 29th, 2018 01:07 - The Cold That Cries (Lorna)
The warmth that is missing outside Lorna is certainly there in your heart.
March 29th, 2018 00:59 - ENGAGEMENT LOVE ~ A Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Dance away Brian towards the day that you will be wed.
March 28th, 2018 02:50 - Gethsemane Graces (Orchidee)
Yes we will prevail. Good one Orchi.
March 28th, 2018 02:49 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #19: a dead parrot (Frank Prem)
One of the unforgettable sketches.
(My wife has dementia and it is...
March 28th, 2018 01:04 - THE OWNERS ARE REALLY TO BLAME (Michael Edwards)
So very true Michael, you get my vote. As a bird watcher for over sixty...
March 28th, 2018 01:02 - Goldfish (W c)
May your castle always protect you. Good write.
March 28th, 2018 00:58 - I could be dead (Snakskin)
Certainly stay for a while or longer and keep writing these...
March 28th, 2018 00:57 - love lifts me up (Willyweed)
Very good love poem, may your love rise forever.
March 28th, 2018 00:55 - Am I alone? (Chloé)
Such a sad write but the answer does not lie in a bottle of wine. Talk to...
March 28th, 2018 00:51 - In All She Does. (Kevin browne)
Very good write Kevin, may that love go on to eternity.
March 28th, 2018 00:46 - Some Diet (Kitcat)
All we can do is try, but sometimes (most times) the goodness of the food...
March 28th, 2018 00:45 - MY REALITY (Kaychee)
The simplicity in life is the most wonderful way to lead it.
Good write...
March 28th, 2018 00:37 - Drifting again (Poetic Dan)
Those solutions are out there but sometimes they are hard to find but they...
March 28th, 2018 00:35 - Trial. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you Brother, these were a challenge to do.
March 27th, 2018 12:38 - The Young Soldier (Lorna)
Good write, so much is owed to these heroes.
March 27th, 2018 08:04 - CHANGELING (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write Fay, air is so special but we take it for granted.
March 27th, 2018 08:03 - Safe Haven. (Wallace)
Very true, our humble abodes are the places where we can be ourselves and...
March 27th, 2018 02:11 - Passover Pausings (Orchidee)
We shall (and do) share in his glories.
March 27th, 2018 02:10 - IN TONES OF GRATITUDE (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful write Michael, you old romantic you.
March 27th, 2018 02:09 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #18: to pharmacy for tubes (Frank Prem)
In my first job as an analytical chemist one of the things we used to try...
March 27th, 2018 00:55 - I took a break (Avigail)
That hug is returned, welcome back.
March 27th, 2018 00:24 - I want you (Jewels)
Fabulous write Jewels, your daughters will grow up strong and loving and...
March 27th, 2018 00:22 - Gethsemane. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you Brian, they are very meaningful.
March 26th, 2018 08:04 - Accompanied by Trees (Lorna)
Very good write Lorna, I hope the tree is removed safely.
I love Johnny...
March 26th, 2018 08:01 - Rainbow (Jabberwocky)
The joy of childhood is so uplifting. Good write.
March 26th, 2018 07:59 - Dream Sweet (Resa71)
May those sweet dreams last forever.
March 26th, 2018 07:58 - Mile-High Amour. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write Fay and so true. True love is the way to go.
March 26th, 2018 07:57 - If Someone Knew (Breakingpoint)
Very good emotion laden write.
Welcome to MPS.
March 26th, 2018 01:18 - Alone (Michael Edwards)
Super senryu
Connecting us with nature
With your hellebore
March 26th, 2018 01:16 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #17: where the air (Frank Prem)
Yep, been there, back in the seventies and eighties you would have to...
March 26th, 2018 01:14 - Till the end of time (Quietwriter)
Beautiful love poem, may that love go onto eternity.
Welcome to MPS.
March 26th, 2018 01:12 - I love you. (Bigtimesully)
Very good emotive write.
March 26th, 2018 01:09 - A Borrowed Life (Rrodriguez)
Super write, that dark day became the Light of the World.
March 26th, 2018 01:05
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