Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Justice (Poetboy123)
That last line says it all in our present world. Good write.
May 21st, 2018 00:42 - From a Daydream (MrNobody40)
Very good write but that reflection you see in the mirror is just that a...
May 21st, 2018 00:27 - To the end. From the spark of life (Poetic Dan)
Such a searching write with some searching questions of yourself but you...
May 21st, 2018 00:26 - Pentecost Proclamations (Orchidee)
Good write. As its Pentecost today the Church choir has been getting an...
May 20th, 2018 01:28 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #71: looking forward to a homecoming (Frank Prem)
Very strong write Frank.
May 20th, 2018 01:26 - A COUPLE OF 575s (Michael Edwards)
Two very good 575s, and so true.
May 20th, 2018 01:21 - I Pray (SLR)
We should always be there for our children and (in my case) grandchildren,...
May 20th, 2018 01:20 - Out in Hollywood (Willyweed)
Good write ww, good to see you back.
May 20th, 2018 01:07 - Down the Rabbit Hole (MrNobody40)
in any rabbit hole there is an entrance, that entrance is also the exit...
May 20th, 2018 00:59 - Blue Ice Cream (Jabberwocky)
Good fun write.
May 20th, 2018 00:41 - LOVE IS IN THE AIR ~ MEGHAN & HARRY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write and you were right about the Preacher, very powerful.
May 20th, 2018 00:39 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #70: cracked-pepper clinic (Frank Prem)
It is amazing what goes on in peoples mind.
May 20th, 2018 00:37 - Spirit Sensitivity (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 20th, 2018 00:35 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #69: under the skin (Frank Prem)
Another strange happening in the hospital.
May 19th, 2018 00:53 - Dayspring Dawnings (Orchidee)
Amen.
May 18th, 2018 01:45 - HARRY AND MEGHAN ~ An Acrostic 5 3 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
They were made for each other.
May 18th, 2018 01:45 - BUTTERFLY (Michael Edwards)
They are beautiful to watch while I sit in the garden drinking my Rioja.
May 18th, 2018 01:04 - In My World (Leostars_poems)
May that locked heart soon be opened. Good write.
May 18th, 2018 00:58 - Leaves (A.5724)
Very good words. Welcome to MPS.
May 18th, 2018 00:55 - Song In The Trees (DesertWords)
The sound of natures symphony is always wonderful.
May 18th, 2018 00:54 - It\'s a way (Nicki Jackson)
Follow your way, it will lead you into joy.
May 18th, 2018 00:52 - Be me (Netashi)
Just be yourself, many will try and change you but what you must realise...
May 18th, 2018 00:49 - Finding You (MrNobody40)
Super loving write.
May 18th, 2018 00:44 - Gleaming Star (Madiha Faizan)
You have got it in one. The light is always there, keep following it....
May 18th, 2018 00:43 - Here Comes Summer (Ternic73)
Very good write, enjoy your freedom in the sun.
May 18th, 2018 00:40 - I am Alive (Caroline Elizabeth)
Life certainly is everlasting our Spirit goes on for eternity.
May 17th, 2018 08:08 - My shadow (Middlearth)
Good write but what you must know is that the light is always there and...
May 17th, 2018 08:07 - Pendulum (Baylee)
That love will never die.
May 17th, 2018 08:06 - From the spark of life (Poetic Dan)
Very good emotive write, all will be good as you are beginning to realise.
May 17th, 2018 08:05 - L0ve (JoeLucky)
I am sure she will like your loving words in this poem.
May 17th, 2018 08:01 - The Drake (W c)
Good write about a beautiful bird.
May 17th, 2018 08:00 - Wheeled Freedom. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you da, your comments are much appreciated.
May 17th, 2018 06:42 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #68: before breakfast (Frank Prem)
I can sort of relate to this as my wife takes 18 tablets per day and I...
May 17th, 2018 03:07 - Plenipotentiary Priest - Hebrews Series: 4 (Orchidee)
May God\'s Mercy always be with you as you write these fine words.
May 17th, 2018 01:49 - MERLOT (Michael Edwards)
Very good painting Michael.
Good write as well, Merlot is OK but I...
May 17th, 2018 01:09 - PLANET EARTH 2100 ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very true Brian, those in power our planet have no visualisation of what...
May 17th, 2018 01:07 - KING (Lizzie)
May you pull away from that precipice and fall into your lovers arms for...
May 17th, 2018 00:36 - Victory (YangYin)
Very good write, to die with no regrets is something for which we all need...
May 17th, 2018 00:25 - Bit By Bit (Brooklyn6timesplus)
The prize is there and will always be found if you go towards the light.
May 17th, 2018 00:18 - As I lay here (Nicki Jackson)
Very good loving and sensual write.
May 17th, 2018 00:15 - Sinful Scars (Gabriela)
Very strong supportive write, I do hope things get easier and that your...
May 17th, 2018 00:14 - The Noisiest Things (Gary Edward Geraci)
So true Gary.
May 17th, 2018 00:11 - Thank you all for reminding me (Poetic Dan)
Very good write, to write your feelings onto paper is so fulfilling and so...
May 17th, 2018 00:10 - Trees in the Breeze of Time (Lorna)
Such an awful situation Lorna, I am so glad that you are OK and your house...
May 17th, 2018 00:07 - Birthing A Poem (DesertWords)
Very good write, it is surprising from where some of the words come.
May 17th, 2018 00:03 - Whence and Whither (Jabberwocky)
Our Spirit will meet on the way to eternity.
May 16th, 2018 07:57 - Meeting Time (W c)
A wonderful magical place to unwind.
May 16th, 2018 02:46 - Unbearable Bearable. (Goldfinch60)
I don\'t know why but the music starts at the second movement for some...
May 16th, 2018 02:09 - Hearing Heart - Hebrews Series: 3 (Orchidee)
Another good write Orchi.
May 16th, 2018 02:03 - The Life I Live With You (Caprib97)
Good loving write, may your life together go towards eternity in love.
May 16th, 2018 01:18 - A poem for a great woman (Renzi)
Great to see you back on here Renzi with a good fun write.
May 16th, 2018 01:17 - PREJUDICES (Michael Edwards)
Good write, may those prejudices soon be dispelled.
May 16th, 2018 01:14 - Father (JADED)
Amen.
May 16th, 2018 01:13 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #66: the tweedle man (Frank Prem)
So many different people with different troubles.
May 16th, 2018 01:12 - Heading Down A Corruptive Path (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Good write the choice of going towards the light is the way to go.
May 16th, 2018 01:10 - The Nature Of Worry (Christina8)
We should always live in the moment and treasure each one of them. We can...
May 16th, 2018 01:01 - Thin Veils (EmiliasLillith)
Very emotive write but under that fake facade is the real you and all you...
May 16th, 2018 00:55 - Life Is Good (W c)
Very good positive write.
May 16th, 2018 00:47 - The Inevitability of 3 A.M. (Lorna)
Very good write. 3am is the time that I remember something I have been...
May 16th, 2018 00:45 - An Honest Bob (DJ)
This is a very good write and shows the misery of being made redundant....
May 16th, 2018 00:42 - Franks Psychiatry 5 # 66: cigarette? still laughing! (Frank Prem)
The good life comes in may guises.
May 16th, 2018 00:37 - Incarnation Identifying - Hebrews Series: 2 (Orchidee)
May 16th, 2018 00:35 - Incarnation Identifying - Hebrews Series: 2 (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi, but surely the devil is with you in KP.
May 16th, 2018 00:28 - FIVE FABULOUS HAIKU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good Haikus Brian but your statement about Senryu is incorrect Senryu are...
May 15th, 2018 03:28 - SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY (Michael Edwards)
Another beautiful write Michael.
May 15th, 2018 01:19 - Time\'s River (Lorna)
Super write may your boat always sail towards the moon.
May 15th, 2018 01:16 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #65: Furball and Freddie (Frank Prem)
It is amazing what friends are around sometimes.
May 15th, 2018 01:15 - Superior Saviour - Hebrews Series: 1 (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 14th, 2018 01:37 - A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Good couplets Michael, especially the first one - when will they ever...
May 14th, 2018 00:58 - Raft of reeds (Dusk arising)
Very good emotive write, those who lie remove any trust that may have been...
May 14th, 2018 00:56 - Beached (Jabberwocky)
Such a strong write but your soul is still with you and always will be.
May 14th, 2018 00:51 - THE REAL PRESENCE OF GOD ~ A 5 5 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
God will be forever with you.
May 13th, 2018 15:53 - Peace, Perfect Peace (Orchidee)
May the Peace always be with you.
May 13th, 2018 01:45 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #64: mad till knock-off (Frank Prem)
Such a sad situation.
May 13th, 2018 01:45 - A NAANI (Michael Edwards)
Good write and form Michael.
May 13th, 2018 01:44 - Enough (Jabberwocky)
Very emotive write, that glimpse to being touched is so moving.
May 13th, 2018 01:42 - Elusive Endorphins (Lorna)
the light is there for you Lorna jsut keep looking up.
May 13th, 2018 01:40 - Cheerful Chorus (Orchidee)
Alleluia!
May 12th, 2018 01:25 - LONG WHITE CLOUD ~ An Acrostic 4 5 5 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good loving write Brian, all will be wonderful, Skype will keep you...
May 12th, 2018 01:24 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #63: the other one (Frank Prem)
Your patience is so admirable.
May 12th, 2018 00:59 - AS AN ARTIST SEES (Michael Edwards)
The artists eye can see so many colours that come to life on the canvas.
May 12th, 2018 00:46 - Tablet Trouble. (Goldfinch60)
Yes we have a pill organiser for my wife but she takes 18 pills a day so...
May 11th, 2018 11:21 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #62: the hostel princess sings of her future with eric the nurse (Frank Prem)
That castle may well be there in her mind.
May 11th, 2018 07:58 - Choosing My Chains When We Met (Lorna)
May those chains bind you and your forever.
May 11th, 2018 07:56 - SELF-HOOD. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write, those songs in the late evening are wondrous.
May 11th, 2018 07:55 - Handover (Jabberwocky)
Very moving piece J. If only.....
May 11th, 2018 07:53 - Words from the soul (Poetic Dan)
All life is wonderful.
May 11th, 2018 07:52 - Guarding Graces (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
See last line while instead of wile.
May 11th, 2018 02:19 - FOUR HORSEMEN OF THE APOCALYPSE ~ PROPHETICAL VISION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good one Brian, we should always be aware of the Four Horsemen.
May 11th, 2018 01:34 - SIX LANTURNES (In Collaboration with Laura ) (Michael Edwards)
Very good lanturnes the both of you.
May 11th, 2018 01:33 - Enjoy The Music (W c)
Music is my life.
May 11th, 2018 01:27 - Ghost (Nicholas Browning)
Very good write, I hope you got home safely.
May 11th, 2018 00:56 - LUNACY. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good and very true write Fay. another phase where homo sapiens is...
May 11th, 2018 00:54 - Dearth (Jabberwocky)
Very good write, so moving.
May 11th, 2018 00:52 - SUMMER LOVIN\' ~ A Seasonal Sonnet for CHRISTINA S (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Dontknocjk the straw hats of cricket watchers that might be me one day,...
May 10th, 2018 07:55 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #62: meandering journey (Frank Prem)
Laughter is so important, I am using it to help my wife as her dementia...
May 10th, 2018 07:54 - Healing in the Yorkshire Dales (FineB)
We spent many holidays in the Yorkshire Dales, Gods Country. Great write...
May 10th, 2018 07:52 - Oh the Joy of Knowing You (Lorna)
Beautiful uplifting write, a great start to my day.
May 10th, 2018 02:45 - Go and play little John Evans (Jo Middleton)
Very strong write Jo, yes children must be free but a caring parent will...
May 10th, 2018 02:44 - Ascension Acclamations (Orchidee)
Alleluia indeed.
May 10th, 2018 02:25
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