Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Faithful Focus (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
December 10th, 2017 02:08 - Love (Hoopie)
Good write NR, many may it without love but love takes you to a different...
December 10th, 2017 02:06 - ANOTHER BUNCH OF ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Good ones Michael.
I had never realised that my mirror was cracked,...
December 9th, 2017 01:59 - Christmas With You (Christina8)
Very good write, Christmas s special but is more special with the one you...
December 9th, 2017 01:57 - for the coming of the wind (Frank Prem)
Super write Frank, the wind can play so many differing tunes.
December 9th, 2017 01:52 - Her First Experiences (Rrodriguez)
Good write, those first times for the baby girl are so important. Did you...
December 9th, 2017 01:41 - The life I once knew. (Shadow192)
Good write, that life may have been confusing but it gave you the...
December 9th, 2017 01:38 - Follow (Hoopie)
We must all find our own way in life, we will get it wrong sometimes but...
December 9th, 2017 01:36 - Hey! (LukeCoomer)
Good write. There is so little respect in our world.
December 9th, 2017 01:34 - Cobbled Steps. (Kevin browne)
Good write, the lifeline of London a long time ago.
December 9th, 2017 01:31 - HAIKU ITALIANU ~ Per LAURA con AMORE XOX (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good three liners Brian.
I would get somebody to sort out that building...
December 9th, 2017 01:27 - Dance (Tony36)
Anyone who says sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain.
December 9th, 2017 01:25 - Boisterous. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write Fay, I was there with you l
December 8th, 2017 09:09 - Wielded (Poetboy123)
Good write and it depends on what you write to be able to answer the...
December 8th, 2017 09:08 - The Sunrise in My Heart (Accidental Poet)
That sun rising on your life is always wonderful.
December 8th, 2017 09:06 - Presence Pleasantness (Orchidee)
Good one once more Orchi.
December 8th, 2017 09:05 - SIMPLISTIC COMPLEXITY (Michael Edwards)
Very good simplistic complex write.
December 8th, 2017 03:04 - POETRY IS (Louis Gibbs)
Very true. Good write.
December 8th, 2017 03:02 - Triumph (Poetboy123)
Good positive write.
December 8th, 2017 03:01 - MY HEART BURSTS IN PRAISE (Zizi)
Amen.
December 8th, 2017 01:32 - This Moment (Christina8)
Wonderful positive write, you are definitely heading the write way, these...
December 8th, 2017 01:30 - Clowns (Tony36)
Good write with what I believe is a hidden meaning.
December 8th, 2017 01:27 - Tonight, I feel lonely (Myself and me)
Very good emotive write, may that loneliness soon be abated.
December 8th, 2017 01:25 - Seven (FredPeyer)
December 8th, 2017 01:18 - Seven (FredPeyer)
Seven appears so many times in our lives but you are write the ONE is the...
December 8th, 2017 01:18 - Cry (Hoopie)
Good write and sound advice, stick with what you know.
December 8th, 2017 01:15 - Seduction. (Fay Slimm.)
The entrapment worked Fay, is there anyway out. Good write.
December 8th, 2017 01:13 - You Will Come To Know (Accidental Poet)
Good emotive write and you are write \'heaven is everywhere\'.
December 8th, 2017 01:12 - C H R I S T M A S F A I R S ~ An Acrostic 9 5 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good fun time Brian.
December 8th, 2017 01:10 - Unforgiven Unease (Orchidee)
Amen.
December 8th, 2017 01:08 - Mellow Timbre (Adam Shirley)
Good write, the months may well have left but they will always return.
December 7th, 2017 01:21 - NEW RESOLVE (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful write Michael, such power within it. Going forward despite past...
December 7th, 2017 01:18 - coffee café before late shift (Frank Prem)
Thank you Frank - mines an americano please.
I don\'t grow beans but I...
December 7th, 2017 01:14 - He Is A Failure (Poetboy123)
Good write with a positive end, HE WILL RISE.
December 7th, 2017 01:09 - AN ENGLISHMAN\'S \'OUSE ! A 6 6 2 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good fun write Brian, only one minor criticism that I will put down to...
December 7th, 2017 01:02 - Be True to me (Tony36)
Good loving write.
December 6th, 2017 09:10 - Ask Me Why I Love You... (Tumnus)
It is a question that cannot be answered, love is.
Welcome to MPS.
December 6th, 2017 04:44 - Culture (Accidental Poet)
Very true, but those morals get twisted by those in power.
December 6th, 2017 04:41 - ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4) (Michael Edwards)
Good fun writes Michael.
December 6th, 2017 02:29 - PASSING STRANGERS (Louis Gibbs)
Very true, we must know ourselves to be able to move forward in our lives.
December 6th, 2017 02:28 - Here to teach and be taught (Poetic Dan)
Good positive write, we all make mistakes but that just adds to our...
December 6th, 2017 02:24 - Time (Accidental Poet)
Good write AP and very true, always look ahead and grab each moment that...
December 6th, 2017 02:10 - Deacons Dynamism (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
December 6th, 2017 02:08 - Dead-End Street (FredPeyer)
Very good write but that misery and shame can be quelled by one loving...
December 6th, 2017 02:07 - Wrapped Up In Christmas (Christina8)
The best Christmas present of all is time, time you give to others and...
December 4th, 2017 09:10 - Castaway (Poetboy123)
Good positive write.
December 4th, 2017 09:07 - Springtime\'s First. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write, when we first moved into our current house we had a daffodil...
December 4th, 2017 09:04 - Survivor (Accidental Poet)
We all will survive with Gods help,
December 4th, 2017 09:02 - Running (FredPeyer)
Good write, that freedom is well worth running for.
December 4th, 2017 09:01 - Spirit Stream (Orchidee)
Another good one Orchi.
December 4th, 2017 09:00 - He Always Hears Me (ForeverJesus7)
May your prayer be answered. Good write.
December 4th, 2017 01:58 - GUILT (Michael Edwards)
Very good and true write.
Fabulous artwork - where is it. It must be...
December 4th, 2017 01:45 - THE PERPETUAL PRODUCTION (Louis Gibbs)
We must not stop as that audition will lead us into our lives.
December 4th, 2017 01:16 - Just a few thoughts of a busy mind (FredPeyer)
Good words Fred, I like the penultimate one, it is so very true.
December 4th, 2017 01:10 - Heaven\'s Strongest Love (Accidental Poet)
Very good write, there is a voice within each of us to help us through our...
December 4th, 2017 01:08 - Sweet Potion. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 01:05 - Advent Aspirings (Orchidee)
Good write, not long now.
December 4th, 2017 01:04 - A COUPLE OF COUPLETS TIMES TWO (Michael Edwards)
Good twosomes Michael.
December 3rd, 2017 02:15 - Remember (Seeker)
Good write, may we be remembered for trying our best in our lives.
December 3rd, 2017 02:14 - Computer Time (Accidental Poet)
Yes we all suffer from that, good write.
December 3rd, 2017 02:08 - Alone (Tony36)
Very good emotive write.
December 3rd, 2017 02:00 - Plastic Cup (Challenge Poem) (Jabberwocky)
You won the challenge, good write.
December 3rd, 2017 01:54 - Springtime of life (Jeremy Leach)
Very good write and so true, those wonderful days seemed to last forever...
December 3rd, 2017 01:49 - Advent Announcement (Orchidee)
Another good one Orchi, he is on his way.
December 3rd, 2017 01:39 - The Journey of a Song (Songbird)
Good write, music starts where words end.
December 2nd, 2017 01:49 - THE CONFORMIST (Michael Edwards)
That box may get buried within the conformity of life.
Good write
December 2nd, 2017 01:48 - As life goes. (Malubotelho)
Great to see you back Malu. In busy lives we must still have time for...
December 2nd, 2017 01:43 - Never be afraid to go your own way (Poetic Dan)
Good write and very true, we must keep on that stage and always go behind...
December 2nd, 2017 01:40 - Thomas Ave. (Accidental Poet)
Very emotive write, those places where we grew up will always bring back...
December 2nd, 2017 01:23 - Concluding Formal Prayers Series - 8 (Orchidee)
Amen.
December 2nd, 2017 01:19 - a journey of raindrops (Frank Prem)
Very good write but to me raindrops will end up in the river, then the sea...
December 1st, 2017 04:32 - Pockets of knowledge (Jake Holland)
Good write, so many now cannot live without their \'phones glued to them,...
December 1st, 2017 02:46 - Don\'t give up the day job (Jeremy Leach)
Good write, we must try to reach our goals but secure in the knowledge...
December 1st, 2017 02:45 - THEY WOULD NOT BLEED (Michael Edwards)
Good write Michael and an interesting form of words.
Like the artwork,...
December 1st, 2017 02:23 - THE CAVE (Louis Gibbs)
Good write and a great anthem.
December 1st, 2017 02:20 - Message to all my Friends on MPS (FredPeyer)
Many congratulations, another grandchild to enjoy, love and spoil eh Fred,...
December 1st, 2017 02:19 - Enchanting Winter\'s Day (SunSearcher)
Beautiful write, I was walking there with you.
December 1st, 2017 02:15 - Inspirational (MaddieJ)
Good positive write.
December 1st, 2017 02:14 - Black Umbrellas (Naeners)
Good emotive write, sometimes though the rain will wash away those \'Dark...
December 1st, 2017 02:12 - See Me (Songbird)
Good write, there are many who are too shy to show their wonder but there...
December 1st, 2017 02:10 - Time Machine (PoeticPup18)
Music can create every emotion within us, that is why it so so wonderful. ...
December 1st, 2017 01:58 - Difference In Taste (Syd)
Great write and so very true, we all like different things, if we were all...
December 1st, 2017 01:55 - Magic Is Still There (Christina8)
Good write Christine and a reminder of the true meaning of Christmas.
December 1st, 2017 01:53 - Place the Stone (Brenda lee)
Good write and tribute to your friend, he will always be with you. Welcome...
November 30th, 2017 09:16 - Be True (Tony36)
Very true.
November 30th, 2017 09:13 - Potential (Poetboy123)
Outrage destiny is there we must enjoy all our time to achieve a great...
November 30th, 2017 09:13 - Seize and See. (Fay Slimm.)
The now is so important, good write Fay.
November 30th, 2017 09:11 - WINTER LUNES (5 3 5) ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Lune away Brian.
November 30th, 2017 09:10 - In Retrospect (Accidental Poet)
Great write, a similar thing happened to me, an artwork made me write...
November 30th, 2017 09:09 - Jazz Without Sparkle. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Michael, it may well have been me being off but jazz normally lifts...
November 30th, 2017 09:07 - A FEW LUNES (Michael Edwards)
Never heard of lunes but I have now and will have to try them, I write...
November 30th, 2017 02:27 - While the Universe watches (FredPeyer)
Good strong write Fred, we need to turn that Universe back by getting homo...
November 30th, 2017 02:25 - Me, Myself, and I (FredPeyer)
Very good write, the \'what\' in our lives is complicated and may never be...
November 30th, 2017 02:22 - Do I Love You Too Much? (Its Raskolnikov)
Loving somebody too much is not a problem it is the cure for many
November 30th, 2017 02:20 - AUTUMN MEMORIES (Lasergraph)
Good write lg, those memories are special, especially those with family.
November 30th, 2017 02:18 - Lordship Laudings (Orchidee)
Amen.
November 30th, 2017 02:16 - Idle Time (Syd)
Clever write, we all await that is to come in our lives.
November 30th, 2017 02:16 - Found Absent. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write Fay showing the sadness and horror that was once (and may...
November 30th, 2017 02:01 - Mankind in Dreamland (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Good write, our dreams can send us into many differing worlds both real...
November 29th, 2017 04:14 - SUMMER SOLSTICE (Michael Edwards)
The imagery this conjurs up is great Michael I could see and smell...
November 29th, 2017 01:40
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