Comments on community poems by orchidee
- Be (Michael Edwards)
She\'s in my bedroom! Oohh, a pic of the Mona Lisa, that is. Is she...
January 28th, 2019 07:03 - NIGHTNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. More Dayness coming along these days, gradually now.
January 28th, 2019 05:20 - F E B R U A R Y ~ BRIAN ~ A Barrel Acrostic (ANGELA & BRIAN)
We want snow when we\'re young, then don\'t want it when we\'re older. Can...
January 28th, 2019 02:54 - My Dark Dreams (W c)
Indeed, as Gold says, w c.
January 28th, 2019 02:52 - It Is Finished (Crystal Hope)
A fine and true write Crystal. We need spiritual understanding if we...
January 28th, 2019 02:51 - Be (Michael Edwards)
It be a good write and pic Michael. Mona having a bad-hair day?! lol.
January 28th, 2019 02:48 - But is it Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. yep, it is poetry. We don\'t have to torture ourselves...
January 28th, 2019 02:47 - Mixups #9 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Oops, I\'m working, maybe not intentionally, on saying as much as possible...
January 27th, 2019 14:42 - Mixups #9 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A fine write Andrew.
January 27th, 2019 13:57 - i`m just a man... (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A good write Ron. It\'s all appeared in the title too!
January 27th, 2019 13:55 - FROM WHERE DO THE BREEZES BLOW? (Michael Edwards)
A fine write Michael. Bit windy poem! Do you know Brie Zee?
January 27th, 2019 03:35 - Towards My Rosie Lee (Part 2). (Kevin browne)
A fine write Kevin, though I lost the plot seeing \'Rosie Lee\'. I...
January 27th, 2019 03:27 - Sinister Hatred (Salem_B911)
Erm, a bad-hair day there?! (heehee).
January 27th, 2019 03:14 - Mozart Acrostic 1. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely write Gold, of a 263rd anniversary of a birth. Were we both there...
January 27th, 2019 03:12 - What We Got (Neville)
A fine write Neville. OK - I\'ll still want ya. I won\'t leave ya. I\'ll...
January 27th, 2019 03:08 - Three Times Fallen (Gary Edward Geraci)
A \'lovely\' write in a way Gary. Well, in the sense that we benefit from...
January 26th, 2019 12:39 - When They Took Away the Tumour (Neville)
Yes, glad is all well now. We might never know what some folk have been...
January 26th, 2019 09:25 - Towards My Rosie Lee. (part 1) (Kevin browne)
A fine write Kevin. Erm, I didn\'t get the hang of it at first. I thought...
January 26th, 2019 04:05 - WEEKEND PERFECT ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. I saw a comedy programme. A snobbish remark was \'Oh, I...
January 26th, 2019 03:42 - Hollering hounds (Netashi)
A fine write T. I\'m sure youth are not savage hounds - or only a...
January 26th, 2019 03:40 - High Face Crimes (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary. I\'m sure it didn\'t mean going to extremes - \'If one...
January 26th, 2019 03:37 - DISCOURSE IN URINATORY EXTRACTION (Michael Edwards)
A fine write M. heehee. I never knew having a...….. was so eloquent!...
January 26th, 2019 03:33 - Goldie and Orchi Seven Hundred. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Gold. lol. You will have to listen out for \'Psstt\'. Not as in me...
January 26th, 2019 03:31 - I AM A KING ...I $AID !!!!! (O.G. Tone)
This should be marked 18+ I think.
January 25th, 2019 13:25 - I asked God for just one (Joseph M Marion)
A fine write J.
January 25th, 2019 11:08 - Life’s Last Moments (The Retired Bloke)
A fine write RB.
January 25th, 2019 11:07 - Mirislavka (Neville)
Oohh you met her! Should I meet her? Will she be too much for me? Is she a...
January 25th, 2019 05:19 - Crumbs! - Mark\'s Gospel (8) (Orchidee)
Meanwhile - maybe she even had a dog, named Fido - as I do! heehee.
January 25th, 2019 03:15 - Calliope Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
She\'s a fine gal, Gold, is Cal. Would I know her socially?!
January 25th, 2019 03:03 - BOOKS IN RETIREMENT (Michael Edwards)
A fine write Michael. And now your next book:\' The Tales of Sylla Berles...
January 25th, 2019 03:02 - Destiny Unseen (+13) (Kurt Philip Behm)
A good write I\'m sure Kurt. I\'ve scanned this. have to return to read it...
January 24th, 2019 15:27 - Homeless In Roanoke (W c)
A good write w c.It\'s a gloomy life-style to be in surely. Thankfully...
January 24th, 2019 15:25 - Ms Melancholy (Netashi)
A thoughtful write T. We don\'t know - there are life\'s mysteries....
January 24th, 2019 15:20 - ELEMENTS IN THE ROOM ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. In ye olden days this table was set out in small squares...
January 24th, 2019 11:07 - Waiting for Cancer (Neville)
It was my fault. I chopped off the ends of all the straws. Everyone drew...
January 24th, 2019 11:02 - EVOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
January 24th, 2019 04:10 - What\'s Left For Both You And Me. (Kevin browne)
A fine write Kevin. I\'m sure a guy was having me on re Mars. Well I only...
January 24th, 2019 03:15 - IVR Blues (The Retired Bloke)
Doh! You could make a cup of tea, then come back, and still be waiting on...
January 24th, 2019 03:12 - ARTY COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Fine and wise writes Michael. Why do I (maybe) use 20 words when 5 will...
January 24th, 2019 03:09 - Paid Retirement (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. Yes, grateful - you and other retired folk have earned...
January 24th, 2019 02:42 - My wicked witch (Netashi)
A fine write T.
January 23rd, 2019 11:35 - The Cold Hard Truth (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary.
January 23rd, 2019 11:32 - An Occasional Dream (Neville)
A fine write Neville. Similar to \'Did he fall or was he pushed?\' Or...
January 23rd, 2019 05:48 - HOPING. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. yes, some snowdrops appeared really early, it seems. We...
January 23rd, 2019 05:46 - TO A MOUSE ~ ROBBIE BURNS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. Burns Night soon too in Scotland - Jan 25th.
January 23rd, 2019 05:45 - Anaphora (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary, as I try to unravel it. I lost the plot, and ended up...
January 23rd, 2019 03:02 - Understanding. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
January 23rd, 2019 02:57 - A (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. I should get here first. The supplies of \'a\'s....
January 23rd, 2019 02:56 - Aesthetic of purpose (Netashi)
A fine write T.
January 22nd, 2019 15:22 - FESTAL LIGHT (Michael Edwards)
And - there\'s a film, Elysium, set in 2154 I read. Erm, how do they know...
January 22nd, 2019 08:00 - LOVESCAPE. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, lovely write again Fay.
January 22nd, 2019 07:56 - What Happened to the Painter (Neville)
Well, that\'s told me! OK, I\'ll get painting again, write poems, stop...
January 22nd, 2019 07:55 - Intelligent Conversation 2. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write and clip Gold.
January 22nd, 2019 07:52 - FESTAL LIGHT (Michael Edwards)
You know that (not so well known) hymn \'Hail, Festal Day\' by Fortunatus?...
January 22nd, 2019 03:09 - The Part Of Love I\'m Scared Of. (Kevin browne)
A fine write Kevin. I might discover love if I ever get past the swooning...
January 22nd, 2019 02:49 - FESTAL LIGHT (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic Michael. Erm, is this subtitled: \"No.769 in \'The...
January 22nd, 2019 02:47 - ARTISTIC LICENCE (Michael Edwards)
That Eve Ning going OK?!
January 21st, 2019 14:36 - I\'ve Ran Over Water. (Kevin browne)
That\'s a lot to do. Did you do all that one day?! lol.
January 21st, 2019 10:55 - Enlightenment (Neville)
A fine write N. Some calls their partners dinosaurs these days, if they...
January 21st, 2019 05:43 - OH WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DAY ! BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. I\'m gonna croon / sing now! heehee.
January 21st, 2019 05:42 - The Death of Planet Earth (Joanna Garrido)
A good write as a poem Joanna. Well, on a spiritual/Christian plane,...
January 21st, 2019 04:21 - EARLYNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. You seeing those mornings dawning a little more now?...
January 21st, 2019 04:18 - Every Little Thing (Psychofemale)
A fine write P/F.
OK, I\'ll get me spade then. What ya doing in that...
January 21st, 2019 03:27 - Love of Healing. (Goldfinch60)
Ahh lovely write Gold. RSPCA adverts on telly can\'t be watered down...
January 21st, 2019 03:22 - Story of Eternity (Blessednloved)
I had an idea I would like this before I read it! It is that we don\'t...
January 21st, 2019 03:02 - ARTISTIC LICENCE (Michael Edwards)
Fine writes and pic Michael. That rubber dust - Oohh it reminded me I must...
January 21st, 2019 02:57 - The Surgery (BoxMyHeart)
I will probably faint if you say what happened in those 15 or 16 seconds!...
January 20th, 2019 09:16 - TO MANY JESUS IS STILL AN ENIGMA ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Well, that\'s enough for me to believe B&A! I do tend to be a bit \'blind...
January 20th, 2019 09:10 - TO MANY JESUS IS STILL AN ENIGMA ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
That cat playing Monopoly?
January 20th, 2019 09:07 - Painfully Yours (Neville)
This could be swoony in one sense. Is this the \'pain\' sense you meant?...
January 20th, 2019 09:05 - Cry Through The Pain. (Kevin browne)
Good write Kevin, with some swirling effect in the layout of the poem. The...
January 20th, 2019 03:44 - Promise Vows (Rayray2)
Good write Ray.
January 20th, 2019 03:33 - Coffee Time. (Goldfinch60)
A good write Gold. I don\'t have coffee much, but tea without milk is like...
January 20th, 2019 03:17 - A COUPLE MORE (Michael Edwards)
Fine writes and pic Michael. What to do to*ay? I ha* *eci*e* to write a...
January 20th, 2019 03:15 - WINTER APPROACHES (Michael Edwards)
How\'s the Eve Ning going?!
January 19th, 2019 14:18 - Stable City Skylines (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary.
You very old too, like I am?
The answer to the Bible...
January 19th, 2019 13:23 - MY GREAT AWESOME GOD ! ANGELA : A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
January 19th, 2019 06:46 - Proclamations To Paralytic - Mark\'s Gospel (3b) (Orchidee)
Thanks M. Do we put things like \'!\' or \'?\' actually within the speech...
January 19th, 2019 06:42 - Before Leaving (Neville)
More swoons! lol.
January 19th, 2019 04:21 - Proclamations To Paralytic - Mark\'s Gospel (3b) (Orchidee)
How do you find the speech marks (\".....\") in the poem? I tend to leave...
January 19th, 2019 03:29 - Wealth of Self (RiverJordan)
A good write River. I see what you mean. Yet on a spiritual plane, I...
January 19th, 2019 03:13 - Wealth of Self (RiverJordan)
A good write River. I see what you mean. Yet on a spiritual plane, I...
January 19th, 2019 03:13 - Would They Lock Me Up? (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary. I was going to do a poem of similar title, relating to...
January 19th, 2019 03:11 - History. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
January 19th, 2019 03:07 - WINTER APPROACHES (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic Michael. I thought it had been here for about a month...
January 19th, 2019 03:06 - The Lion that visits the cave (Netashi)
A fine write T.
January 18th, 2019 14:37 - My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville)
Oops can\'t meet her then!
January 18th, 2019 14:34 - My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville)
Heehee! But yes, I might meet her, without the ciggies. Is she Fag-ash...
January 18th, 2019 10:53 - HUSBANDRY. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
January 18th, 2019 10:47 - My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville)
Swoony enough for me! lol.
January 18th, 2019 10:45 - Until Death (Netashi)
A nice write T.
January 18th, 2019 02:41 - For The Homeless (W c)
A fine and true write w c.
January 18th, 2019 02:37 - Moments in Words. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Gold. As I say, some days I have no moments, with no poems. Then...
January 18th, 2019 02:36 - 747 (Michael Edwards)
Yes, you sorted out those syllables well. Did Miss Berles help you with...
January 18th, 2019 02:34 - TWO 575s (Michael Edwards)
Ohh, let\'s all go in the tub and relax then - erm, separately, or else I...
January 17th, 2019 10:53 - Turquoise (Neville)
A fine write N. I was gonna write something similar. Erm, I held me breath...
January 17th, 2019 10:48 - WHY ? (Fay Slimm.)
Another fine write and pic Fay.
January 17th, 2019 04:18 - MORE HERBS & SPICES ~ BRIAN ~ An ABC Rhyming Acrostic ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A tasty write B&A.
January 17th, 2019 04:17 - TWO 575s (Michael Edwards)
Fine writes Michael. how\'s that evening? Oops it\'s miles away yet (hours...
January 17th, 2019 03:08 - My character (Heather Harrisson)
Ohh I dunno. She\'s not all that splendid to me. She made me feel sickly -...
January 17th, 2019 02:51
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