Comments on community poems by Laura🌻
- Chet Lives in Me. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
A great read and video! Thank you for sharing your writes and...
May 13th, 2018 16:56 - THE REAL PRESENCE OF GOD ~ A 5 5 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella scrittura per oggi!
Angela will always...
May 13th, 2018 16:08 - Eternally (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Thank you for the post, my friend!
I love the painting! It complements...
May 13th, 2018 13:39 - On Mother\'s Day (W c)
w c,
Thank you for this beautiful poem! You’re absolutely spot...
May 13th, 2018 06:58 - Peg\'s Mini. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
Epic...great label for that great song...
BLUE VELVET...
love...
May 12th, 2018 10:18 - Cheerful Chorus (Orchidee)
Orchi,
Beautiful poem...beautiful hymn!
Thank you 🙏🏻
~Laura~
May 12th, 2018 09:30 - LONG WHITE CLOUD ~ An Acrostic 4 5 5 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
She’s on her way! Wishing Angela a safe trip!...
May 12th, 2018 09:20 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #63: the other one (Frank Prem)
Frank,
Patience for the patient is the key! It seems to me you were...
May 12th, 2018 08:00 - AS AN ARTIST SEES (Michael Edwards)
That boat with no oars will find its way back! No doubt!
...and The...
May 12th, 2018 07:51 - Reflection from the other friends (Poetic Dan)
A poetic piece from Poetic Dan! A Super write!
Spot on with these...
May 12th, 2018 07:27 - Elusive Endorphins (Lorna)
Lorna,
A great video, pic and verse!
Sting does it for me all the...
May 12th, 2018 06:31 - Frenetically (Satishverma)
Truth be known!
May 12th, 2018 00:21 - Eternally (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Blue-eyed Bolla,
Another beautiful dedication to your “first and only...
May 11th, 2018 16:38 - SELF-HOOD. (Fay Slimm.)
My dear Fay,
I agree with Lorna...
you do every single day!
A fine...
May 11th, 2018 16:26 - Guarding Graces (Orchidee)
Orchi,
A great write!
Loved the clip! The last stanza does it for...
May 11th, 2018 15:58 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #62: the hostel princess sings of her future with eric the nurse (Frank Prem)
Frank,
We all have dreams...
including the princess!
I guess she was...
May 11th, 2018 15:50 - Sleep time junction (Netashi)
Theta,
A great write! That’s how I feel at times! Loved this...
May 11th, 2018 15:37 - FOUR HORSEMEN OF THE APOCALYPSE ~ PROPHETICAL VISION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Veramente una bella poesia!
Loved the “Ghost...
May 11th, 2018 15:24 - Tablet Trouble. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
Very relatable and so true!
When I organize my mom’s pills ......
May 11th, 2018 14:27 - Words from the soul (Poetic Dan)
Dan,
Glad to see your writing again!
Your words are very touching and so...
May 11th, 2018 14:08 - Choosing My Chains When We Met (Lorna)
Lorna,
After a rough morning with my mom, I finally got to my iPhone to...
May 11th, 2018 09:32 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #61: nursing theory (Frank Prem)
Frank,
You’re spot on with this write! I can relate with what you’ve...
May 10th, 2018 19:27 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #62: meandering journey (Frank Prem)
Frank,
I liked this entry very much! It made me smile too...as I was...
May 10th, 2018 19:04 - Ascension Acclamations (Orchidee)
Orchi,
A beautiful write and clip for a beautiful blessed day! Happy...
May 10th, 2018 15:59 - The Cards of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
I love reading your poems! Their positivity is contagious! I...
May 10th, 2018 15:41 - SUMMER LOVIN\' ~ A Seasonal Sonnet for CHRISTINA S (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella poesia!
When I saw the title of this...
May 10th, 2018 14:21 - LUNACY. (Fay Slimm.)
My dear Fay,
You’re so spot on with your poem!
It should be...
May 10th, 2018 10:54 - A LIFELESS LAND (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
An intriguing poem!
As I read the title and the first three...
May 10th, 2018 10:07 - Oh the Joy of Knowing You (Lorna)
Lorna,
So much love in this one! I love it! I agree with Andy......
May 10th, 2018 03:00 - Some Glimpses (Satishverma)
Why? Senseless!
May 9th, 2018 19:36 - LOVE\'S TUNE. (Fay Slimm.)
My dear Fay,
I love the Oscar Wilde quote you chose! I wish everyone...
May 9th, 2018 16:16 - Blessings Bounties (Orchidee)
Orchi,
A great write which I enjoyed reading! I also enjoyed listening to...
May 9th, 2018 15:26 - Birds Now Fed - FIBS (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
A great clip! I enjoyed listening to the birds! They’re magical!...
May 9th, 2018 15:12 - A COUPLE OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
Great couplets and a great pic! I’ve never seen that color...
May 9th, 2018 14:31 - Truth Unwraps (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
There’s so much I can say about your two poems, but I’ll...
May 9th, 2018 14:05 - Simply Shakespeare (Lorna)
Lorna,
A great pic!
I love the poem! Yes, I wonder who his muses were...
May 9th, 2018 12:07 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #60: weary (Frank Prem)
Frank,
I cannot even imagine the mental and physical fatigue imposed upon...
May 8th, 2018 23:24 - BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
I enjoyed reading this great write of yours! I like...
May 8th, 2018 22:35 - Primi Entis (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Yes, indeed...the flag it is!
A golden nugget!
~Laura~
May 8th, 2018 21:13 - An Opening (Satishverma)
Astonishingly so!
May 8th, 2018 21:04 - Malarkey Blowing in the Wind (Lorna)
To answer the question in the pic, I’d use both hands...
May 7th, 2018 09:41 - on writing (Onepauly)
No letter grade, Pauly!
A holistic grade is more like it! An excellent...
May 6th, 2018 19:54 - JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Grazie!
This is a beautiful read at the end of the...
May 6th, 2018 19:46 - The Old Man by the River. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
A super write! As I was reading your poem, I could sense that it...
May 6th, 2018 19:39 - Seeking Soul (Orchidee)
Orchi,
Yes, Thomas did say what I like to say (not in reference to...
May 6th, 2018 18:21 - Pain is no longer welcome here (Aa Harvey)
A beautifully written message, Aa!
Eventually we do get what we...
May 6th, 2018 18:14 - SHE DANCED (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
This exquisite write and line figures remind me of Cinderella at...
May 6th, 2018 18:08 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #58: raising the pride (Frank Prem)
Frank,
It’s a great feeling when everyone pulls together and works for...
May 6th, 2018 17:15 - THAT MORN. (Fay Slimm.)
My dear Fay,
This is an extraordinary verse tantalizing our senses!...
May 6th, 2018 09:41 - A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella poesia per la tua fidanzata, Angela! Gli...
May 5th, 2018 13:36 - Cobwebs of the Sun (Lorna)
Lorna,
I totally agree with AP’s comments!
What a great montage of...
May 5th, 2018 09:10 - Refuge Reassurance (Orchidee)
Orchi,
Another fine write!
It was a pleasure to listen to that joyful...
May 5th, 2018 02:35 - Impossible Tamed. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
A great play-on-words!
A fun read!
~Laura~
May 5th, 2018 02:17 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #57: between ridiculous (Frank Prem)
Frank,
A very hard decision to make! None of us know what we would do...
May 5th, 2018 01:59 - LANTURNES BY THREE (Michael Edwards)
A
bouquet
of flowers
to wake up your
nose.
Black
liquid
in a...
May 5th, 2018 01:25 - The Syntax (Satishverma)
Hearing in silence!
May 5th, 2018 00:51 - Franks Psychiatry 4 # 56: from long black shoelaces (Frank Prem)
Frank,
I hope the disappearance of the shoelaces was not the...
May 4th, 2018 18:27 - The Tears of Lean On Pete (Lorna)
Lorna,
A super write! You’ve piqued my interest. I’ll definitely look...
May 4th, 2018 15:58 - Quartet for the End of Time. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
This is one that my dad would’ve appreciated more than I ever...
May 4th, 2018 11:05 - ON WRITING (Lasergraph)
Well said , Ed!
May 3rd, 2018 22:21 - On Unknown Track (Satishverma)
Death is a certainty!
May 3rd, 2018 19:16 - Pretending (Christina8)
Christina,
Your write is somewhat sad. I hope by the end of this day...
May 3rd, 2018 17:18 - Wings (Marlenawood)
Marlena,
My heartfelt condolences to your friend on the loss of her son!...
May 3rd, 2018 15:13 - a normal day (Onepauly)
An interesting and intriguing write, onepauly!
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 14:22 - Throw Out the Nets for the Wondrous Heart (Lorna)
Lorna,
Such a beautiful poem with the perfect song to accompany it! It...
May 3rd, 2018 14:17 - ON THE RUN. (Fay Slimm.)
My dear Fay,
The hustle and bustle of the city!
Use to love it...not as...
May 3rd, 2018 13:45 - Ascents Acclaimings (Orchidee)
Orchi,
Beautiful write accompanied by a beautiful clip! I do enjoy...
May 3rd, 2018 11:53 - NAMING OF OUR INTERNAL ORGANS ~ A Dodeca Laudatio (12 Line Eulogy) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella scrittura del nostro corpo!
A very...
May 3rd, 2018 11:02 - At One With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
A beautiful write and musical piece! I just finished listening to...
May 3rd, 2018 10:43 - WORDS (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
An impressive write! I’m fascinated by words! As an English...
May 3rd, 2018 09:48 - Rinse. Relapse. Repeat. (Noah)
Noah,
I wish you well!
I see this situation too often! It breaks my...
May 3rd, 2018 08:49 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #55: what happened (Frank Prem)
Frank,
So so sad! How long ago did this happen?
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 08:46 - Judgement And Justice (Orchidee)
Orchi,
A fine write and video!
The pics of Jesus with the crown of...
May 2nd, 2018 18:37 - Missing Conversation. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
A bit sad, but a beautiful poem! That great painting is so...
May 2nd, 2018 14:43 - ONCE HONED (Michael Edwards)
Hi, Michael! Glad you’re back!
Andy really honed in to the message...
May 2nd, 2018 08:05 - Franks Psychiatry 4 # 54: and the hell with the papers (Frank Prem)
Frank,
You do have a way with words! This great write not only resonates...
May 2nd, 2018 07:18 - NAMING OF THE EXTERNAL BODY PARTS ~ LINKED HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Grazie per la tua poesia!
Thank you for your great...
May 2nd, 2018 07:04 - Road Trip Conclusions (Lorna)
Lorna,
Been there, done that,
and I too am glad to be
anywhere but...
May 2nd, 2018 06:48 - To My Beloved Daughter Melissa (On Your 40th Birthday) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
This is the most beautiful
piece of writing I’ve read
today!...
May 2nd, 2018 06:31 - Rain Comes (W c)
w c,
That was great!
I love the rain...
as long as there’re no leaks...
May 1st, 2018 10:36 - MUSIC ! MUSIC ! MUSIC ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great Fusion everyone...especially that hit list of bands...phew!!
May 1st, 2018 08:55 - LOVE\'S GLOW. (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful write, my dear Fay!
The magical kisses; especially the first...
May 1st, 2018 07:04 - The Flower Moon - May (Lorna)
Lorna,
Happy May Day...aka...Happy Labor Day( in Italy and many other...
May 1st, 2018 06:28 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #53: the Carer Meeting (Frank Prem)
Frank,
It’s so true what you’ve scribed! Most of us start out with...
May 1st, 2018 04:46 - BEGINNINGS. (Fay Slimm.)
A truly beautifully written poem, my dear Fay, that evokes our senses to...
April 30th, 2018 19:42 - Franks Psychiatry 4 # 52: that\'s all (last Saturday) (Frank Prem)
Frank,
This write is disheartening. I feel for that lonely girl!...
April 30th, 2018 15:20 - Creation Considerations (Orchidee)
Orchi,
A fine write! It gives the reader a lot to think about! I enjoyed...
April 30th, 2018 15:01 - HAPPINESS ~ An 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella poesia di esseri contenti!
Una bella...
April 30th, 2018 14:42 - My Sails are Luffing (Lorna)
Lorna,
I have a feeling your sails will forever be filled to keep your...
April 30th, 2018 10:34 - Towards Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
A fine write which I enjoyed reading. It does resonates!
I...
April 30th, 2018 09:52 - Untold (Noah)
Noah,
Spot on...
No hidden messages here!
A great write which I...
April 29th, 2018 09:01 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #51: a well-honed team (Frank Prem)
Frank,
It sounds very intense! Was she ever given the...
April 29th, 2018 06:06 - us (Onepauly)
onepauly,
We are what we are and we do what we do...for our own...
April 28th, 2018 05:41 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #50: this somebody\'s boy (Frank Prem)
Frank,
Such an episode is tough and painful to watch! I’m somewhat...
April 28th, 2018 05:32 - Expectant Eschatology - Epistles of Peter Series - 11 (Orchidee)
Orchi,
...and to Him we shall sing...
A fine write with a wonderful...
April 28th, 2018 05:22 - NEW ORLEANS ~ STREET JAZZ ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Thank you for that bit of history!
I do agree with...
April 28th, 2018 05:10 - Love is gone (Aa Harvey)
Aa,
You’re not stupid, you’re living life...the ups and downs of...
April 28th, 2018 05:00 - After Death (Poeta de Cabra)
The tangible will cease to exist...
The intangible will forever be...
April 28th, 2018 04:32 - Contentment in Wine. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
There should be more young men such as the one you met with such...
April 28th, 2018 03:37 - This Was Love (Satishverma)
The door of the unknown will lead us to the known!
April 27th, 2018 21:44
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