Comments on community poems by Neville
- Ink talk (Down the rabbithole)
Yes, keep writing.. this is the first poem of yours that I have had the...
January 24th, 2019 09:16 - EVOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
what poet would not have wanted to have written these words... a page full...
January 24th, 2019 07:07 - Waiting for Cancer (Neville)
you read me so very well, bless you Fay my dear friend.. Peace & All Good...
January 24th, 2019 07:04 - Understanding. (Goldfinch60)
we only really fear what we dont understand, or what we are unable to...
January 24th, 2019 02:49 - Wholesome Witness - Mark\'s Gospel (6) (Orchidee)
it is indeed amazing what a touch of faith can do... a familiar tale told...
January 23rd, 2019 08:50 - HOPING. (Fay Slimm.)
brevitas sublimas, when less is more than.. an exquisite little gem Fay...
January 23rd, 2019 05:20 - renzi (Dusk arising)
I never knew her, or had the pleasure of her words but I have known a few...
January 23rd, 2019 04:06 - Intelligent Conversation 2. (Goldfinch60)
without a shadow of a doubt, this is a most touching and heartfelt poem...
January 23rd, 2019 03:50 - FESTAL LIGHT (Michael Edwards)
darn near perfectly put.... much enjoyed and then some... Neville
January 22nd, 2019 15:25 - Stuck (Whisperingquill)
enjoyed to the full & then some...
January 22nd, 2019 13:50 - LOVESCAPE. (Fay Slimm.)
This is most definitely a keeper, if ever there was... Whoever requested a...
January 22nd, 2019 08:07 - Seeds, Sowing, Soils - Mark\'s Gospel (5) (Orchidee)
just you be careful where you plant them seeds, you old sow and sow...
January 22nd, 2019 08:03 - What Happened to the Painter (Neville)
old mirrors have the very same effect on me... thank you for visiting...
January 22nd, 2019 05:35 - With Her Love (+13) (Kurt Philip Behm)
tis painful even to contemplate... looks good on the page tho..
January 21st, 2019 10:53 - Love of Healing. (Goldfinch60)
what a lovely little cameo you have created for us here today.. I can...
January 21st, 2019 10:39 - EARLYNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
quite simply beautiful Fay...
January 21st, 2019 10:31 - Faith For Forgiveness - Mark\'s Gospel (4) (Orchidee)
the devil\'s in the detail... or so it seems... well poemed sir... N
January 21st, 2019 05:56 - ARTISTIC LICENCE (Michael Edwards)
Deviate from truth
lose oneself in darkness
truth will light the...
January 21st, 2019 05:32 - SOME~GOOD~ADVICE (Laura🌻)
I like it Laura.. why not try a heart, club and spade for a full house...
January 21st, 2019 04:46 - Every Little Thing (Psychofemale)
how very sweet & then some..
January 21st, 2019 04:36 - It\'s okay to laugh at funerals. (Poeticpayne)
You have just made a very important statement here.. we each respond in...
January 20th, 2019 18:28 - Nest Egg (Poeticpayne)
You just hit the nail on its head....
January 20th, 2019 18:22 - A Metaphor Of Poetics (#1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
nicely penned friend.. I hope Emily has seen this...
January 20th, 2019 14:03 - Gift Of Grace (Orchidee)
I like the sentiment behind the saying \'there but for the grace of God go...
January 20th, 2019 12:10 - A COUPLE MORE (Michael Edwards)
another nice pair if I maybe so bold... painting looks a little like...
January 20th, 2019 12:05 - Painfully Yours (Neville)
It can mean anything you so wish orchidee thanks
January 20th, 2019 10:13 - colours (Dusk arising)
there is truth here
January 20th, 2019 05:58 - Painfully Yours (Neville)
I think I should thank you, so I shall.. thank you...
January 20th, 2019 05:56 - History. (Goldfinch60)
what if, now that is an interesting proposition if ever there was...
January 19th, 2019 16:46 - Veritas (Senryu #1) (Laura🌻)
Seek and ye shall find
find and I shall follow on behind....
AGT\'s...
January 19th, 2019 09:11 - FRIENDSHIP (Laura🌻)
What a delightfully kind and considerate gesture dear Laura.. it is most...
January 19th, 2019 09:05 - WINTER APPROACHES (Michael Edwards)
nice words, nice watercolour, actually I think the watercolour is great...
January 19th, 2019 05:38 - Proclamations To Paralytic - Mark\'s Gospel (3b) (Orchidee)
tis hard to know whether this was indeed a miracle or whether the guy had...
January 19th, 2019 04:34 - Moments in Words. (Goldfinch60)
tis a universal truth, tis what we do
January 18th, 2019 13:53 - arrow (Dusk arising)
interesting
January 18th, 2019 13:50 - HUSBANDRY. (Fay Slimm.)
I read this poem earlier today before I went out... and decided it...
January 18th, 2019 11:05 - Compassionate Cleansing - Mark\'s Gospel (3a) (Orchidee)
a tale told well of a kindly deed, indeed..
January 18th, 2019 10:56 - 747 (Michael Edwards)
yes indeed, very clever
January 18th, 2019 06:53 - The Last Time (Psychofemale)
I seriously hope you feel better having got this off ya chest... ...
January 18th, 2019 05:06 - TWO 575s (Michael Edwards)
great title, super sketch and a smart little brace of 575\'s
January 17th, 2019 12:42 - Kingdom of the King - Mark\'s Gospel (2) (Orchidee)
you can beat an egg, and you can beat a carpet.. but you just cant beat...
January 17th, 2019 12:37 - Teddy Man. (Goldfinch60)
it happens all the time where I work... an interesting observation now...
January 17th, 2019 10:27 - WHY ? (Fay Slimm.)
Have you ever noticed when one why is answered, another why immediately...
January 17th, 2019 09:41 - Being (Sylviasearcher)
No need for me to search high and low today, these words jumped out at me...
January 17th, 2019 09:34 - woman (Dusk arising)
I thoroughly enjoyed this, your first poem published here on My Poetic...
January 17th, 2019 09:27 - Turquoise (Neville)
tis true... am so glad you like it...
January 17th, 2019 05:36 - harmony revealed (Dusk arising)
there is certainly something very therapeutic about the countryside.. a...
January 16th, 2019 15:47 - The Weavers Knot (Neville)
no... are you a guinea pig
January 16th, 2019 13:20 - Riding through the rainbow on my space unicorn (Sylviasearcher)
Nothing wrong in indulging oneself every now and then.. and that sure...
January 16th, 2019 11:11 - Practical Preparation - Mark\'s Gospel (1) (Orchidee)
although not always my cup of tea.. I thought this read extremely well and...
January 16th, 2019 08:48 - The Weavers Knot (Neville)
I\'m darn sure he is a witch... thank you for helping to load my brush
January 16th, 2019 08:37 - Score for Words. (Goldfinch60)
twas 2 all at half time but the penalty was questionable... sorted..
January 16th, 2019 07:17 - A WHISKY MAC (Michael Edwards)
make mine a double in a dirty glass...
what a nice little pick me up...
January 16th, 2019 07:11 - The Better Version of Us (Denise)
This is the first of your poems I have read thus far... twas most...
January 16th, 2019 07:08 - TAKE WING. (Fay Slimm.)
another uplifting little bit of magic here.... delightful our Fay and...
January 16th, 2019 07:04 - A virtuous Woman (Shahla Latifi)
delightful & true
January 15th, 2019 14:00 - The Opposite of Up (Sylviasearcher)
The opposite of up is impossible to definitively define from a global...
January 15th, 2019 12:16 - PRECOCIOUS.. (Fay Slimm.)
probably one of the least precocious poems I\'ve read for hours.. and I...
January 15th, 2019 07:02 - Hope, Help, Healing (Orchidee)
What more could one possibly wish for other than that great trilogy you...
January 15th, 2019 06:57 - Hushed (Sylviasearcher)
I searched high and low to find these words.. but keep it quiet.. a...
January 15th, 2019 05:19 - silent night (Dusk arising)
interesting, tell me ..when did you last see a butterfly smile
January 15th, 2019 03:38 - Falling Fast (Psychofemale)
safe and happy landings are always much preferred... go well friend.... N
January 15th, 2019 03:34 - MOVES. (Fay Slimm.)
that\'s reality for ya.. a delightful poem Fay... truly
January 14th, 2019 05:55 - Joyful Journeying (Orchidee)
Now this is much more up my street.. or bit o the country rather.. I live...
January 14th, 2019 04:29 - Descent (Sylviasearcher)
Maybe its a new beginning... tho Aristotle was of course write... pick up...
January 14th, 2019 03:56 - TWO SHORTIES (Michael Edwards)
two good ones indeed..
January 14th, 2019 03:12 - Trust in Politicians. (Goldfinch60)
apt, timely and true.... very true.
January 14th, 2019 02:46 - Towel Boy (Gary Edward Geraci)
restraining someone else is rarely justifiable .. restraining oneself, is...
January 14th, 2019 00:16 - No Signalling Day. (Goldfinch60)
a dangerous sign of the times indeed... N
January 13th, 2019 15:15 - persistence (Dusk arising)
the truth hurts, and when it\'s told well, it hurts even more... told as...
January 13th, 2019 14:12 - Wild (Sylviasearcher)
that\'s one of the beauties of the ocean.. it can be whatever you want it...
January 13th, 2019 12:57 - Sacramental Sentiments (Orchidee)
Ah\' good old Sacramento the capital of California.....where they still...
January 13th, 2019 10:59 - if you but take a bite of this forbidden fruit... (Gary Edward Geraci)
shh say it quietly, or the disciples shall hear....
tis a fact, I kinda...
January 13th, 2019 05:37 - LIMERICK 61 (Michael Edwards)
there are so many possible responses that spring to mind.. but I shall...
January 13th, 2019 04:25 - Abiding Assurance (Orchidee)
I first read this a A Binding Insurance\' then on subsequent reads, I...
January 12th, 2019 07:00 - Wonderful Life. (Goldfinch60)
a fine birthday dedication and true... I am convinced your daughter will...
January 12th, 2019 06:41 - Icarus (Aislinn Wilson)
the last two lines are to die for.. and of course, he did
January 11th, 2019 13:24 - The Echo Of Your Voice (Orchidee)
the painting you have chosen fits well with the words you have written...
January 11th, 2019 11:45 - a lie became noble (Dusk arising)
this is an excellent tribute to all those who made the supreme sacrifice...
January 11th, 2019 11:41 - Students (Neville)
Maybe we should form a cult, in the meantime though I thank you for taking...
January 11th, 2019 11:14 - Students (Neville)
you may be write... but you are certainly a diamond...
January 11th, 2019 09:36 - SCRATCH IT ? (Michael Edwards)
where there\'s a will, there\'s a way..
and
where there\'s a whole,...
January 11th, 2019 06:43 - MELT-DOWN (Fay Slimm.)
I have held the notion for longer than I care to mention that love does...
January 11th, 2019 06:36 - Tell You (Sylviasearcher)
I notice you say this is a quick rough draft & may consider revising ......
January 11th, 2019 06:31 - Dueling Violins - Sonnet (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
this hits all the write notes and true...
I shall seek out and find...
January 10th, 2019 13:09 - My Very Own Crew (Seek)
an amazing snapshot we have here families eh\' who would have em....
I...
January 10th, 2019 12:40 - Everything now has color (Netashi)
I think the title is fantastic.. and of course true...
January 10th, 2019 11:56 - Bad Days to Good. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s the spirit.... think of parquet floors, lino and apple crumble......
January 10th, 2019 05:52 - Soulless (Sylviasearcher)
like a stick of Brighton rock... this poem has a clear message running...
January 10th, 2019 05:48 - Powerful Presence (Orchidee)
even tho a Buddhist , I understand where you are coming from.. tis the...
January 10th, 2019 05:43 - LAMENT. (Fay Slimm.)
this is indeed a lament... no other title would come close.... even I ache...
January 10th, 2019 04:55 - Indecision (+8) (Kurt Philip Behm)
thought provoking and thoroughly enjoyed.... is this your way of getting...
January 9th, 2019 13:19 - Tongues (Aislinn Wilson)
a very much enjoyed poem... cheers.. Neville
January 9th, 2019 12:59 - NO MORE A DREAMER (Michael Edwards)
is this a tragedy, wimsey or a comedy by any chance... enjoyed tho and...
January 9th, 2019 09:00 - Evening Malt. (Goldfinch60)
now ya talking... just one before bed most nights does me just fine... am...
January 9th, 2019 08:58 - Taken (Sylviasearcher)
sometimes.. words make one ache so very tenderly...
January 9th, 2019 08:56 - silent night (Dusk arising)
I can not tell a lie... this was thoroughly enjoyed... a delicious little...
January 9th, 2019 06:45 - Faith Focusing (Orchidee)
everyone has got to have faith... thanks for pointing it out... N
January 9th, 2019 06:02 - Providing Promise (Orchidee)
promises, promises.. that\'s all I ever hear these days....
January 3rd, 2019 03:22 - Day of Bach. (Goldfinch60)
Bachman Turner Overdrive or Bach.. although maybe polar opposites within...
January 3rd, 2019 02:45
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