Comments on community poems by Neville

• Gelida (Quemis) these fine words deserve much praise indeed.. here.. accept mine......
  December 22nd, 2018 08:07
• Savage (John Prophet) I hope you dont mind me being the first to visit these words and leave a...
  December 22nd, 2018 08:04
• Goldfinch (Joanna Garrido) thoroughly enjoyed my friend... am sure it won\'t be too long before...
  December 22nd, 2018 07:31
• Don\'t invite us....! (Orchidee) made me chuckle sir but if you dont mind, I will hang on to my own bottle...
  December 22nd, 2018 07:06
• HAIKU OR SENRYU _ WHO CARES? (Michael Edwards) without doubt, you have displayed a fine collection here.. a few purists...
  December 22nd, 2018 05:50
• Why? (JillianA) In the real world, folk are often too busy or wrapped up in themselves to...
  December 21st, 2018 18:32
• What happened to Jack? (JillianA) I am glad I read your other Jack post first... kind of back to front...
  December 21st, 2018 18:28
• Sighting of Jack (Part 2) (JillianA) this has the feel of an old penny dreadful...
  December 21st, 2018 18:26
• ONIONS AND BEANS (Michael Edwards) keep your friends close.. but keep your enemies closer...
  December 21st, 2018 18:24
• CHOCOLATE AN ACROSTIC ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) thoroughly enjoyed from beginning to end.. the pair of ya
  December 21st, 2018 09:02
• SUCHNESS (Fay Slimm.) Perfectly formed and rings true to my ear... N
  December 21st, 2018 08:29
• Palms Perusings (Orchidee) got to hand it to you on a palm Sunday..
  December 21st, 2018 04:34
• Yes I Exist. (Goldfinch60) we only have your word for that tho
  December 21st, 2018 04:32
• Storm (Debsspot) a moment captured forever here to enjoy...
  December 21st, 2018 04:01
• IN FRAMES OF ANTIQUE GOLD (Michael Edwards) My immediate reaction is that you may be writing about your own art.. and...
  December 20th, 2018 11:18
• a gospel of tenderness (Queer-with-a-pen) This is really quite special, at least in my book it is.. original and...
  December 20th, 2018 10:00
• Scaffold (Jabberwocky) my interpretation leaves little to the imagination.. tis all down hill...
  December 20th, 2018 09:55
• A Blue Toothbrush (Neville) are saying you think these words do not warrant the 18+ label I gave them...
  December 20th, 2018 09:04
• floorboards (Abora) kinda creepy but I guess it is meant to be.. there are certainly some very...
  December 19th, 2018 06:37
• The Wood Mouse (Classicmister) a delightful bit of poetry to be sure.. here in the middle of rural...
  December 19th, 2018 05:36
• Sad Sounds (Sylviasearcher) one of the best haiku\'s I have read for some time.. domo arigato
  December 19th, 2018 04:04
• Halloween Horror! (Orchidee) I made a point of being the first to read your Halloween Horror for...
  December 19th, 2018 03:16
• STONES (Michael Edwards) as stones placed on scales tis those kilograms that tell tales oh\'...
  December 19th, 2018 03:09
• Two Thousand. (Goldfinch60) you can beat an egg.. and you can beat a carpet.. and you can beat about...
  December 19th, 2018 02:45
• Duvet Cover. (Goldfinch60) Been there, done that and wore the T shirt well and truly out...on one or...
  December 19th, 2018 02:13
• Indigo Bird (W c) an ornithologists delight I would imagine & captured perfectly here for...
  December 18th, 2018 13:53
• DOGS AND CATS (Michael Edwards) I think you pretty much hit the nail on its head another nice painting...
  December 18th, 2018 13:27
• Help For Homeless (Orchidee) a very apt and timely post my friend.. a subject very dear to my own...
  December 18th, 2018 08:22
• THINK (Laura🌻) reads luverly.. and I could not agree more with your concluding...
  December 18th, 2018 08:14
• Will Never Fail. (Goldfinch60) This is far more than a poem.. it is a devotion.. I truly do feel for you...
  December 18th, 2018 08:07
• PACE. (Fay Slimm.) these words read deliciously.. not only that.. they look good pinned to...
  December 18th, 2018 07:42
• Nothing (Sylviasearcher) sometimes we find something where nothing once was... there is nothing...
  December 18th, 2018 06:30
• Lack of Understanding. (Goldfinch60) what an intriguing observation, although I guess it is one of those things...
  December 18th, 2018 05:12
• Wounded Dove (DesertWords) it can appear so very cruel at times, but so absolutely necessary.... a...
  December 17th, 2018 13:16
• Free From Nothing (Sylviasearcher) I particularly like the first two stanza\'s rounded off with Faraway from...
  December 17th, 2018 12:32
• VICE VERSA (Michael Edwards) would this be a whimsy... whatever the case, now ya talking.. N
  December 17th, 2018 11:58
• Magnificat Musings (Orchidee) another epic religious poem.. say\'s this here Buddhist
  December 17th, 2018 05:55
• Versal Law (Neville) no rush, take your time & thanks for visiting.. Neville
  December 17th, 2018 05:34
• Travel in Hope. (Goldfinch60) while there is still tea, there is hope... a fine message here
  December 17th, 2018 04:56
• Popping Bubbled Prisms (Whisperingquill) thoroughly enjoyed by me.. I hope others will visit this page, when I have...
  December 16th, 2018 13:17
• You\'re Gone (ExistentialSarah) I found these words by chance and am now, so very glad I did.. cheers......
  December 16th, 2018 11:40
• Centaurs (LIGHT WARRIOR) an intriguing and otherwise captivating poem.. I am by the way ...
  December 16th, 2018 06:35
• MY SPIRIT (Michael Edwards) I was not expecting the end, but it made me chuckle, no end.. cheers
  December 16th, 2018 06:31
• The Glue of Life. (Goldfinch60) a nice thought.. I presume you\'re sticking to it... Neville
  December 15th, 2018 14:09
• Circe/Medusa Tag Team (Jon Nakapalau) Not entirely sure why, but I really like this, cheers..
  December 14th, 2018 07:09
• Close (Sylviasearcher) why would I do that, one of the things I quite like about myself is my...
  December 14th, 2018 06:57
• Woof! Woof! A Fido Tale (Orchidee) there you are.. give a dog a phone and they will yap all night.. give a...
  December 14th, 2018 06:53
• Close (Sylviasearcher) my new fave...are you sure you are not Ms Plath reincarnated... I really...
  December 14th, 2018 06:35
• WORDS. (Fay Slimm.) words, or more specifically, language is what sets us most apart from any...
  December 14th, 2018 03:13
• Sacrifice (Sylviasearcher) wickedly ragged and real.. once started, I felt compelled to see it...
  December 14th, 2018 02:48
• The Experts Opinion. (Goldfinch60) Yes, indeed beauty is very much in the eye of the beholder.. and of...
  December 14th, 2018 02:33
• The Day After the Night Before. (Goldfinch60) lovely just aint good enough, bloomin lovely, is more like it.. made me...
  December 14th, 2018 02:28
• A DISARRAY OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) I like this discarded out take idea, great for your carbon footprint......
  December 14th, 2018 01:47
• \"Pet Project\" (Nicholas Browning) a certain melancholia weaves its way throughout this poem... yet it still...
  December 13th, 2018 17:39
• Alone (Sylviasearcher) not gone but merely set aside methinks.. the ocean is wider than tis ...
  December 13th, 2018 15:19
• LOVE BITES. (Fay Slimm.) are you saying once bitten, forever smitten... a fun take on the serious...
  December 13th, 2018 14:41
• 1066 and all that rubbish! (Orchidee) are you referring to an actual re-enactment event here.. I have several...
  December 13th, 2018 14:25
• SHORTIE FOUR (Michael Edwards) a philosophical little rhyming whimsy, if ever there was
  December 13th, 2018 12:11
• Sanddune Solitude (Sylviasearcher) precariously balanced on the very edge between romantic dream and erotica...
  December 12th, 2018 08:32
• My age (Heather Harrisson) My word, the nib of your pen must be near molten.. you are of course quite...
  December 12th, 2018 07:50
• Rainbow Revealings (Orchidee) Who can see a rainbow without smiling... go ask Bungle, Zippy & George..
  December 12th, 2018 07:03
• Love Hate. (Goldfinch60) nicely penned, but sadly, the Beatles as good as they are did not get it...
  December 12th, 2018 07:00
• BREXIT - A WILFUL BETRAYAL? (Michael Edwards) you have certainly captured a lot of peoples frustrations.. I certainly...
  December 12th, 2018 06:56
• SHORTIE ONE (Michael Edwards) a very much enjoyed x4 lines of universal law..
  December 12th, 2018 06:06
• SHORTIE TWO (Michael Edwards) the seal of approval guarantees depravity... I wonder how many have...
  December 11th, 2018 17:45
• The Letter (Lorna) be proud of these words my friend, I am for you.. N
  December 11th, 2018 09:08
• A Lane (Yasu Na) I thought perhaps there was a rainbow in the making.. maybe there was but...
  December 11th, 2018 09:06
• WIND BLOWN TREE (Culshaw) A thoroughly enjoyed poem indeed
  December 11th, 2018 09:02
• Their Lips Move. (Goldfinch60) The concluding line is a universal truth and a universal shame.. N
  December 11th, 2018 07:23
• FAST and FURIOUS (Haiku #1) (Laura🌻) Having seen it on TV and heard it on the news, these words were simply...
  December 11th, 2018 07:02
• Peace Petitions (Orchidee) any & all attempts to promote peace in the world today are good in my...
  December 10th, 2018 08:46
• Fine (Sylviasearcher) I get your message sylviasearcher, how could I not.... fine is okay when...
  December 10th, 2018 08:16
• The Last Night (Lorna) A great little war poem my fine literary friend, and posted on the...
  December 10th, 2018 07:56
• Winter escape (Heather Harrisson) as I scroll down the page to read each line in turn, these words seem to...
  December 9th, 2018 09:24
• GROWTH.. (Fay Slimm.) sadly we live in an increasingly risk adverse society and where...
  December 9th, 2018 04:25
• Infinity (LIGHT WARRIOR) I sincerely hope you found the penning of this epic, more than just a...
  December 9th, 2018 04:06
• Artwork or Photography (Goldfinch60) an interesting series of observations that will no doubt give rise to many...
  December 9th, 2018 03:13
• Autumn Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) an autumn dedication & true..
  December 9th, 2018 03:05
• OILS DIFFUSED (Michael Edwards) a very impressive collection of senryu sir and of course could also be a...
  December 8th, 2018 12:05
• Don\'t Alter The Red Cape (Satishverma) I was drawn by the title and held to the very end.. there is something I...
  December 8th, 2018 11:07
• She And Her Love Poet (Corey) a delightfully understated piece of erotica, leaving just enough to the...
  December 8th, 2018 10:50
• I\'m Loving It (JasmineUK) I don\'t suppose your talking McDonald\'s are ya.. very entertaining,...
  December 8th, 2018 10:19
• Triumphant Testimony (Orchidee) clearly a winner... although I rather choose to read it as a poem than as...
  December 8th, 2018 08:51
• Tactile Values (AJ) An impressive little poem & does precisely what it say\'s on the label.. I...
  December 8th, 2018 08:44
• Neediness (Sylviasearcher) Everyone has their very own critical point, beyond which it is a good idea...
  December 7th, 2018 13:02
• You, me (Heather Harrisson) Life is filled with regrets, I imagine most of those who write, touch upon...
  December 7th, 2018 10:53
• Melancholy (Sylviasearcher) emotionally charged & moribund...a moment captured in time.. I hope the...
  December 7th, 2018 08:25
• The Other Side of Fear. (Goldfinch60) well said.. we have nothing to fear but the unknown and of course, fear...
  December 7th, 2018 04:32
• KEEPING WATCH. (Fay Slimm.) How perfectly put... tis what we do isn\'t it... Neville :)
  December 7th, 2018 04:28
• December Sky (Fay Slimm.) this little gem is so multi-faceted, it sparkles in its very own write.....
  December 6th, 2018 14:51
• POST OP COMPLICATIONS (Michael Edwards) I really enjoyed this bit of self disclosure... am glad to hear you are on...
  December 6th, 2018 14:17
• 9:20 (Arazimus) what a nice little series of personal recollections, you have kindly left...
  December 6th, 2018 12:14
• Angel Announcement (Orchidee) reads well and looks good on the page.. what more could you ask except to...
  December 6th, 2018 12:03
• The rise and fall of life\'s notes (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) an undulating journey of ups and maybe not so downs... reminds me a little...
  December 6th, 2018 10:27
• love me (MSA-19) It can\'t be that bad, surely.. so much self directed negativity ain\'t...
  December 6th, 2018 05:33
• Awake (Sylviasearcher) Move me like your poetry Until I\'m weak with breathless ecstasy I...
  December 6th, 2018 05:18
• Simply Difficult. (Goldfinch60) a precisely penned poetical musical paradox captured and true...if ever...
  December 6th, 2018 03:12
• Just Another Mad Girl\'s Love Song (Sylviasearcher) I can appreciate just how cathartic it must have felt having got these...
  December 6th, 2018 02:41
• ANOTHER BATCH OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards) I think each of these four little gems more than adequately make up the...
  December 5th, 2018 05:29
• CHAINS. (Fay Slimm.) this is, without any doubt an excellent poem.. melancholic maybe, but...
  December 5th, 2018 05:21