Comments on community poems by Neville

• TWO 575s (Michael Edwards) great title, super sketch and a smart little brace of 575\'s
  January 17th, 2019 12:42
• Kingdom of the King - Mark\'s Gospel (2) (Orchidee) you can beat an egg, and you can beat a carpet.. but you just cant beat...
  January 17th, 2019 12:37
• Teddy Man. (Goldfinch60) it happens all the time where I work... an interesting observation now...
  January 17th, 2019 10:27
• WHY ? (Fay Slimm.) Have you ever noticed when one why is answered, another why immediately...
  January 17th, 2019 09:41
• Being (Sylviasearcher) No need for me to search high and low today, these words jumped out at me...
  January 17th, 2019 09:34
• woman (Dusk arising) I thoroughly enjoyed this, your first poem published here on My Poetic...
  January 17th, 2019 09:27
• Turquoise (Neville) tis true... am so glad you like it...
  January 17th, 2019 05:36
• harmony revealed (Dusk arising) there is certainly something very therapeutic about the countryside.. a...
  January 16th, 2019 15:47
• The Weavers Knot (Neville) no... are you a guinea pig
  January 16th, 2019 13:20
• Riding through the rainbow on my space unicorn (Sylviasearcher) Nothing wrong in indulging oneself every now and then.. and that sure...
  January 16th, 2019 11:11
• Practical Preparation - Mark\'s Gospel (1) (Orchidee) although not always my cup of tea.. I thought this read extremely well and...
  January 16th, 2019 08:48
• The Weavers Knot (Neville) I\'m darn sure he is a witch... thank you for helping to load my brush
  January 16th, 2019 08:37
• Score for Words. (Goldfinch60) twas 2 all at half time but the penalty was questionable... sorted..
  January 16th, 2019 07:17
• A WHISKY MAC (Michael Edwards) make mine a double in a dirty glass... what a nice little pick me up...
  January 16th, 2019 07:11
• The Better Version of Us (Denise) This is the first of your poems I have read thus far... twas most...
  January 16th, 2019 07:08
• TAKE WING. (Fay Slimm.) another uplifting little bit of magic here.... delightful our Fay and...
  January 16th, 2019 07:04
• A virtuous Woman (Shahla Latifi) delightful & true
  January 15th, 2019 14:00
• The Opposite of Up (Sylviasearcher) The opposite of up is impossible to definitively define from a global...
  January 15th, 2019 12:16
• PRECOCIOUS.. (Fay Slimm.) probably one of the least precocious poems I\'ve read for hours.. and I...
  January 15th, 2019 07:02
• Hope, Help, Healing (Orchidee) What more could one possibly wish for other than that great trilogy you...
  January 15th, 2019 06:57
• Hushed (Sylviasearcher) I searched high and low to find these words.. but keep it quiet.. a...
  January 15th, 2019 05:19
• silent night (Dusk arising) interesting, tell me ..when did you last see a butterfly smile
  January 15th, 2019 03:38
• Falling Fast (Psychofemale) safe and happy landings are always much preferred... go well friend.... N
  January 15th, 2019 03:34
• MOVES. (Fay Slimm.) that\'s reality for ya.. a delightful poem Fay... truly
  January 14th, 2019 05:55
• Joyful Journeying (Orchidee) Now this is much more up my street.. or bit o the country rather.. I live...
  January 14th, 2019 04:29
• Descent (Sylviasearcher) Maybe its a new beginning... tho Aristotle was of course write... pick up...
  January 14th, 2019 03:56
• TWO SHORTIES (Michael Edwards) two good ones indeed..
  January 14th, 2019 03:12
• Trust in Politicians. (Goldfinch60) apt, timely and true.... very true.
  January 14th, 2019 02:46
• Towel Boy (Gary Edward Geraci) restraining someone else is rarely justifiable .. restraining oneself, is...
  January 14th, 2019 00:16
• No Signalling Day. (Goldfinch60) a dangerous sign of the times indeed... N
  January 13th, 2019 15:15
• persistence (Dusk arising) the truth hurts, and when it\'s told well, it hurts even more... told as...
  January 13th, 2019 14:12
• Wild (Sylviasearcher) that\'s one of the beauties of the ocean.. it can be whatever you want it...
  January 13th, 2019 12:57
• Sacramental Sentiments (Orchidee) Ah\' good old Sacramento the capital of California.....where they still...
  January 13th, 2019 10:59
• if you but take a bite of this forbidden fruit... (Gary Edward Geraci) shh say it quietly, or the disciples shall hear.... tis a fact, I kinda...
  January 13th, 2019 05:37
• LIMERICK 61 (Michael Edwards) there are so many possible responses that spring to mind.. but I shall...
  January 13th, 2019 04:25
• Abiding Assurance (Orchidee) I first read this a A Binding Insurance\' then on subsequent reads, I...
  January 12th, 2019 07:00
• Wonderful Life. (Goldfinch60) a fine birthday dedication and true... I am convinced your daughter will...
  January 12th, 2019 06:41
• Icarus (Aislinn Wilson) the last two lines are to die for.. and of course, he did
  January 11th, 2019 13:24
• The Echo Of Your Voice (Orchidee) the painting you have chosen fits well with the words you have written...
  January 11th, 2019 11:45
• a lie became noble (Dusk arising) this is an excellent tribute to all those who made the supreme sacrifice...
  January 11th, 2019 11:41
• Students (Neville) Maybe we should form a cult, in the meantime though I thank you for taking...
  January 11th, 2019 11:14
• Students (Neville) you may be write... but you are certainly a diamond...
  January 11th, 2019 09:36
• SCRATCH IT ? (Michael Edwards) where there\'s a will, there\'s a way.. and where there\'s a whole,...
  January 11th, 2019 06:43
• MELT-DOWN (Fay Slimm.) I have held the notion for longer than I care to mention that love does...
  January 11th, 2019 06:36
• Tell You (Sylviasearcher) I notice you say this is a quick rough draft & may consider revising ......
  January 11th, 2019 06:31
• My Very Own Crew (Seek) an amazing snapshot we have here families eh\' who would have em.... I...
  January 10th, 2019 12:40
• Everything now has color (Netashi) I think the title is fantastic.. and of course true...
  January 10th, 2019 11:56
• Bad Days to Good. (Goldfinch60) That\'s the spirit.... think of parquet floors, lino and apple crumble......
  January 10th, 2019 05:52
• Soulless (Sylviasearcher) like a stick of Brighton rock... this poem has a clear message running...
  January 10th, 2019 05:48
• Powerful Presence (Orchidee) even tho a Buddhist , I understand where you are coming from.. tis the...
  January 10th, 2019 05:43
• LAMENT. (Fay Slimm.) this is indeed a lament... no other title would come close.... even I ache...
  January 10th, 2019 04:55
• Indecision (+8) (Kurt Philip Behm) thought provoking and thoroughly enjoyed.... is this your way of getting...
  January 9th, 2019 13:19
• Tongues (Aislinn Wilson) a very much enjoyed poem... cheers.. Neville
  January 9th, 2019 12:59
• NO MORE A DREAMER (Michael Edwards) is this a tragedy, wimsey or a comedy by any chance... enjoyed tho and...
  January 9th, 2019 09:00
• Evening Malt. (Goldfinch60) now ya talking... just one before bed most nights does me just fine... am...
  January 9th, 2019 08:58
• Taken (Sylviasearcher) sometimes.. words make one ache so very tenderly...
  January 9th, 2019 08:56
• silent night (Dusk arising) I can not tell a lie... this was thoroughly enjoyed... a delicious little...
  January 9th, 2019 06:45
• Faith Focusing (Orchidee) everyone has got to have faith... thanks for pointing it out... N
  January 9th, 2019 06:02
• Providing Promise (Orchidee) promises, promises.. that\'s all I ever hear these days....
  January 3rd, 2019 03:22
• Day of Bach. (Goldfinch60) Bachman Turner Overdrive or Bach.. although maybe polar opposites within...
  January 3rd, 2019 02:45
• WHERE AM I ? (Michael Edwards) excellent.. this is more zen than many might imagine.. N
  January 3rd, 2019 01:30
• that i may face you (Dusk arising) tis a jungle out there.. let that free spirit fly and let it roost when...
  January 2nd, 2019 18:03
• Back of my Dad’s Car (The Retired Bloke) brought back a few treasured memories so ya did... and for that, I thank...
  January 2nd, 2019 17:33
• PARADOX (Michael Edwards) yes indeed.. truth captured in water colours and words.... N
  January 2nd, 2019 11:20
• Water Shock. (Goldfinch60) oops... could have caused a watt err shortage..
  January 2nd, 2019 11:10
• Tired of Painting (Sylviasearcher) a self portrait is not such a bad idea... but am sure there will be loads...
  January 2nd, 2019 07:15
• Birth Blessings (Orchidee) Ee man I thought this was written with a northern accent for a mo....
  January 2nd, 2019 07:13
• Uncaring Touch (Shahla Latifi) tho not permitted, maybe.. I would give you a big but gentle hug... these...
  January 1st, 2019 16:45
• Afternoon Rain (DesertWords) just like that rain, these words are refreshingly good.... Neville
  January 1st, 2019 12:47
• The year gone (P.H.Rose) an emotionally charged poem inspired by an emotionally charged and...
  January 1st, 2019 11:24
• New Beginnings (The Retired Bloke) now that\'s what ya call an all inclusive.. nice thought shared... N
  January 1st, 2019 10:56
• Thoughts on the fullness of love or Where\'s my bloody valentine? (David.A-J) this was a smashing read from beginning to end.. loadsa fun along the way...
  January 1st, 2019 10:32
• 12:17 2019 (Arazimus) ah\' dont ya just love them early morning routines.... enjoyed by me...
  January 1st, 2019 10:29
• Radiant Revealings (Orchidee) we can\'t have any revealings here unless they are appropriately labelled...
  January 1st, 2019 09:58
• My Family and My Father’s Fate (Kevin Michael Bloor) you recall a tragedy thus so well indeed... sad recollections and true...
  January 1st, 2019 09:53
• The Blue Flames of Immortality (Joanna Garrido) Blue flames are kinda special methinks... I dont think you\'re just...
  January 1st, 2019 09:51
• COLOURS OF CHANGE. (Fay Slimm.) awesome.. what a sight to behold eh.. a great poem too based on an...
  January 1st, 2019 09:48
• IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards) easy on the eye and on the mind.. tranquil words, dream like even... N
  January 1st, 2019 06:55
• LOOKING FORWARD (Dusk arising) I like these words, you have made me exercise my mental muscle this...
  January 1st, 2019 06:37
• Forever Moment. (Goldfinch60) a nice little optimistic poem to welcome the new year in...
  January 1st, 2019 05:02
• Prepared People (Orchidee) maybe you are very early..... very, very early...
  December 31st, 2018 10:56
• HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL AT MPS (Michael Edwards) pipped to the proverbial post.... omm
  December 31st, 2018 10:53
• sleeper (Dusk arising) interesting.. I\'m sure there are numerous ways in which these words might...
  December 31st, 2018 10:38
• TOO SOON ? (Fay Slimm.) it was an absolute pleasure to stumble upon these very fine words this...
  December 31st, 2018 05:26
• New Year Scotch. (Goldfinch60) Make mine a Delwhinnie Gold and I\'m there.. Cheers and I\'ll drink to...
  December 31st, 2018 04:08
• It’s Finally Over! (The Retired Bloke) festive fun for five minutes then, tis gone in a blink... cheers, I shall...
  December 30th, 2018 14:29
• No Vanity Set For This Chap, No Way (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) I take it he was not on your Christmas card list... arrogance...
  December 30th, 2018 14:26
• better vision (GON) dont ya just love bacon... crusty bread, real butter and a couple of fried...
  December 30th, 2018 13:48
• Dream of Peace. (Goldfinch60) A dream well shared... Happy & peaceful New Year... N
  December 30th, 2018 13:35
• Dyspraxia (Moom) you got this off to a T... funny but not to be laughed at... well I Know...
  December 30th, 2018 12:41
• Extinguish (Sylviasearcher) occasionally one does not have to say very much, to say it all.......
  December 30th, 2018 12:38
• Rough Sketched & True (Neville) then I shall thank you again
  December 30th, 2018 12:25
• Angels Acclaimings (Orchidee) I like the idea of angels especially if they fight in my corner, if you...
  December 30th, 2018 08:20
• The Long Night (Jai747) there are parts of this little poem that quite rightly might be called a...
  December 30th, 2018 06:31
• No Longer Admired (Angela1711) I note you tend to write more when you are feeling sad or down... you have...
  December 30th, 2018 06:24
• arms trade (Dusk arising) Syria springs to mind although there are many places that live under such...
  December 30th, 2018 06:14
• OLD INTO NEW. (Fay Slimm.) A very apt and timely, well crafted and kind poem indeed, brimming with...
  December 30th, 2018 05:46
• You Can Always Do Better (Brooklyn6timesplus) there is no moral here, there is a universal truth however...
  December 29th, 2018 12:08
• Slave To Light (Kurt Philip Behm) in succinct terms, excellent.. N
  December 29th, 2018 11:29
• Not a love song (Sylviasearcher) just imagine it can happen.. and it will happen.. maybe not today but it...
  December 29th, 2018 09:42