Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Lamps (Screaming goat. (New and Improved))
I don\'t want to decide, I want a clear unambiguous message which informs...
December 13th, 2021 18:38 - Santa\'s Sacked! (Saxon Crow)
Gotta feel for the poor old fella - definitely from another era - unable...
December 13th, 2021 18:17 - The Right Direction. (Goldfinch60)
YES!
December 13th, 2021 18:07 - Purple (Lorna)
Nicely understated romance; purple magic, Lorna?
I\'m on holiday end of...
December 13th, 2021 07:32 - Blue (Lorna)
Blue skies where I am......not. We have a summer of rain ahead of us this...
December 13th, 2021 07:21 - Love from Lust & Fear from Trust (Summerraine)
There you go - experiential learning.
December 12th, 2021 23:55 - A Lady in a Room Full of Men (M.E.M.)
Rules of decorum for young Ladies perhaps....
Come on - get feisty,
December 12th, 2021 23:51 - Yellow (Lorna)
The right intensity yellow can do it for me.
Thanks for the reminder in...
December 11th, 2021 22:26 - \"My God\" (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
That\'s religion for you..........not going to elaborate after your second...
December 11th, 2021 22:09 - Hardly So (Gary Edward Geraci)
Have a good Christmas, Gary.
December 11th, 2021 22:04 - I Shan\'t (Raphael Shonibare)
I\'m not keen on love poetry, but enjoyed the conceit.
December 11th, 2021 20:51 - Skewed (SureshG)
Heavy questions so very well constructed.
\'Wish I knew the answer,...
December 11th, 2021 20:33 - Gordon the Gnome (Woundedheart)
Yes - I\'ll buy this one.
Great little rhymer. I also have a special spot...
December 11th, 2021 20:19 - Camel Drive or Putt? (Goldfinch60)
Andy, as I\'m not a Facebook devotee (what would be the correct...
December 10th, 2021 06:22 - Green (Lorna)
Your \'Colours\' period, Lorna? I\'ll enjoy all of them - but will pester...
December 10th, 2021 06:06 - 12 Days of Marriage (ish) (Saxon Crow)
....Has to be a moral there somewhere....
....yep...got it... thanks Sax
December 10th, 2021 01:40 - Choices (Saxon Crow)
Just because I\'m an unbeliever/agnostic doesn\'t prevent me from...
December 9th, 2021 17:36 - In Your Grace (Saxon Crow)
I can see this as a tribute in stone, Sax.
a highly polished piece.
December 9th, 2021 17:19 - Red (Lorna)
And I\'m trying to cool down in preparation for sleep.....
Lot of power...
December 9th, 2021 07:32 - WRITE OR WRONG (Joe Marcello)
Have to guess a little here, Joe - this because social media is attacked...
December 8th, 2021 16:37 - the only love she held on to (Dusk arising)
Enjoyed the memories that evoked of some fine sunsets and the...
December 7th, 2021 21:19 - Wild Land (Fay Slimm.)
Nature in the raw - survival of the fittest, I know but...you capture the...
December 7th, 2021 07:06 - Something of a Quandary (Neville)
Zen agen, Nev....?
December 7th, 2021 06:54 - Smothered (Lorna)
Love the irony, Lorna. So much said in so few lines....I feel that there...
December 7th, 2021 06:48 - My Christmas Present. (Goldfinch60)
OK Speedy Gonzales: nothing wrong with a little ambition - fun write Andy.
December 7th, 2021 04:34 - The Road to Perdition (Coyote)
Yes that was great, C. And brilliant (Sax above) says it all. A yarn to be...
December 7th, 2021 04:16 - Stage Back (AuburnScribbler)
Great piece of self talk there man.
And from your side comments, it...
December 5th, 2021 23:16 - Wintery Sky (Fay Slimm.)
Wot\'s wrong with hot sweaty sub tropical summery dawn sky (apart from the...
December 5th, 2021 23:04 - तनहाई (Pranav Kumar)
I like the look of that script....very attractive...haven\'t got a bloody...
December 5th, 2021 05:37 - Leaden Heart (Lorna)
Great picture of the way I get around for most of the time...
But come on...
December 4th, 2021 20:27 - Liberated (Gary Edward Geraci)
A neat verse which says something to me, Gary - though you would know me...
December 4th, 2021 20:10 - My Lady is More Than a Poem (Neville)
So be it sweetheart or vessel you have never the less described your own...
December 3rd, 2021 19:09 - global warning (Dusk arising)
Prophetic, dusk.
December 3rd, 2021 18:47 - Looking For The Word (Jerry Reynolds)
Believe it or not I completely missed the religious connotations, which I...
December 3rd, 2021 18:31 - meshed within the creases, a smile of contentment (SureshG)
A vivid painterly piece, Suresh.
I would vote for the last stanza anytime...
December 3rd, 2021 18:18 - Striped Tie. (Goldfinch60)
Good \'un Andy...But don\'t you feel free, shuffling around in a loincloth...
December 3rd, 2021 03:25 - A Winter Song (Jerry Reynolds)
Reassuring safe moment, Jerry.
December 2nd, 2021 19:42 - my body part (Dusk arising)
All that fur.... You do keep it well trimmed for easy access, I hope....
December 2nd, 2021 19:35 - The Life of a Black man (Poetaddict365)
Let\'s find out who you are first, before I take this seriously. Since...
December 2nd, 2021 19:22 - No Kiss On The Mouth (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
That first piece - it was the rhyme and construction....the rhyme and...
December 2nd, 2021 19:11 - Dead Fox (Saxon Crow)
Usual great piece of writing, Sax.
The key is obviously embodied in the...
December 2nd, 2021 07:17 - Ranting? (Orchidee)
Don\'t know what to say, orchi. You do seem just a trifle conflicted....
December 2nd, 2021 07:05 - No Home (Lorna)
It ain\'t easy out there, Lorna - should be on everyone\'s mind, not just...
December 2nd, 2021 06:55 - Where are you Mary (Neville)
That was neat and easy to relate to, Nev.
My problem is I am talentless...
November 30th, 2021 19:33 - TOO HOT TO HOLD (MDStone)
OK, OK, OK I got there in the end..... Good quality entertainment well...
November 30th, 2021 19:18 - Ho Ho Oh No (Lorna)
Xmas ambivalence poeticised.
Extreme thanks, Lorna
November 30th, 2021 18:22 - Pulchritudinous (PattieVBoi)
\'Bit of orrright, is she?
November 30th, 2021 17:09 - Dandelions (Dove)
Dandelions certainly found their reproductive niche, didn\'t they? Oh well...
November 30th, 2021 00:07 - Arrow (Nicholas Browning)
Kudos for the time and energy taken to construct that - I know I would...
November 29th, 2021 06:27 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (7 - 9) (Michael Edwards)
Philosophy 101 -Some questions are destined to remain...
November 29th, 2021 06:14 - What Ghost! (Goldfinch60)
Good \'un Andy - but you know, sometimes folks aren\'t brave enough to...
November 29th, 2021 06:05 - On Being Called to War (Neville)
Given that particular time and situation I\'m pretty sure one of two...
November 29th, 2021 05:57 - In The Making (Fay Slimm.)
You have captured perfectly the apparent chaos but actual order of a true...
November 29th, 2021 05:44 - Was It You? (Lorna)
I\'ll try as often as I can, Lorna - but, you know, it\'s a fair old...
November 29th, 2021 05:33 - Sunday Shores (Fay Slimm.)
Memories: Sunday certainly differed from every other day of the week...
November 28th, 2021 18:19 - johannes sabastian WOOF (Dusk arising)
Great write dusk.
But when was this contractual arrangement actually...
November 27th, 2021 19:52 - Cosmic Wrinkle (SriVi)
And unknowable?
Thanks for that. I\'m not going to add to that with my...
November 27th, 2021 05:57 - Heaven and Hell (Paul Bell)
Do your keep a flow chart on these relationship pieces you put out? I get...
November 27th, 2021 05:47 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (4 - 6) (Michael Edwards)
Thanks Michael for your latest contributions to the merriment which...
November 27th, 2021 05:34 - Down With Everything (Neville)
Dating that nun again Nev?
Well good for her if she still inspires...
November 27th, 2021 05:11 - Theories about marriage (Anna_noday)
Your thoughts (From a 23 year old\'s pen –) leave me unsure as to your...
November 27th, 2021 04:59 - Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer (Neville)
My very literal (no, not literary) mind was none the less provoked by this...
November 26th, 2021 16:47 - Is love real? (MKL)
Just one one more example of the many uses and abuses of the term...
November 26th, 2021 07:35 - Voiceless (Fay Slimm.)
Love as an undefinable feeling? Yes, Fay - I\'d pay that one.
For me, and...
November 26th, 2021 04:29 - An Unmistakable She (Neville)
Beautifully paced , Nev, no - really.
But did Granny know you cared,...
November 25th, 2021 21:49 - Thank you (Saxon Crow)
Great stuff, Sax.
The adjustments and compromises parents have to make as...
November 25th, 2021 21:35 - Absence (An Acrostic) (AuburnScribbler)
I can\'t quite suss this one out, AS.....so just get back here and post...
November 24th, 2021 20:26 - gangsta rap influenced me (Austinherlein)
A little background on your Profile page might be good. I\'d like to...
November 24th, 2021 20:16 - Ma Petit Serviette (Neville)
Monogrammed, laundered and ironed to perfection (No innuendo intended)....
November 24th, 2021 06:41 - four and counting (Dusk arising)
Certainly convinced me kiddo - you conquered the old one two three and I...
November 24th, 2021 01:03 - ICE CREAM (Jerusha PS Barnabas)
Got an essential truth and bundled it up into a good piece of...
November 24th, 2021 00:52 - Penitus (Coyote)
Been out There and found no evidence of either Heaven or Hell. In here?...
November 24th, 2021 00:37 - Mother without a child (Lisa Gibson)
I don\'t know your current situation, but I would have thought that the...
November 24th, 2021 00:34 - Linger (Neville)
First Nev, I have to state that I like the piece but am unable to put my...
November 23rd, 2021 19:51 - Be To Me (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, I really was pleased to read that you were motivated by the...
November 23rd, 2021 19:33 - You (Jay-Lee Jane)
I think they got your message.....short and to the point - nicely...
November 22nd, 2021 06:10 - A Man Of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60)
Great, ain\'t it Andy?
Retirement - the best time of my life, and your\'s...
November 22nd, 2021 06:02 - This Time (Fay Slimm.)
Lost for words here, Fay - I can feel it - the embrace and rightness of...
November 22nd, 2021 05:52 - An All Too Certain Falsity (Neville)
Thanks Nev for a lesson all should see and cogitate upon:
\'Love\' a term...
November 22nd, 2021 05:43 - An All Too Familiar Modus (Neville)
Where was yer British reserve? Well for them as hasn\'t got it , a...
November 21st, 2021 19:53 - Don\'t Think Too Much. (Goldfinch60)
Once that was me, but now the living is easy and I have no...
November 21st, 2021 19:47 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (1 - 3) (Michael Edwards)
You do a great line in shorties, Michael - these are up to standard.
I...
November 21st, 2021 19:25 - The Guy Who Wasn\'t There (Coyote)
Great to see you back and on form, C.
Perfect proof that context is all...
November 21st, 2021 18:48 - Omega Sunset (an ode to Yeats) (Coyote)
The trouble with subject specific pieces such as this, on a site such as...
November 20th, 2021 04:15 - Sensuality (Fay Slimm.)
Yeh...............................................................Oh where...
November 20th, 2021 03:54 - VIVID ART (Th3rdeye)
;Let\'s see a little more context (Public profile?) They gravestones in...
November 20th, 2021 03:37 - The Wreck of Our Lady (Neville)
Orchi is obsessed with these women he believes you keep throwing up onto...
November 20th, 2021 03:17 - What Failing Memory? (Goldfinch60)
Get the humour, Andy - but if there\'s any soupcon of truth in that, then...
November 20th, 2021 03:09 - MY ACCOUNT (Abu Wafi Palathumkara)
I just sometimes do not feel the need, at this point in my life, to spend...
November 19th, 2021 21:40 - Unsincerely Yours (Neville)
Maybe I\'m just not that deep - I\'ve lingered with past relationship for...
November 19th, 2021 21:19 - The Quick-Fix Manual To Keeping a Woman Happy. (Gunnar)
Go nuts mate - but these are very localised fires you are aiming at, and...
November 19th, 2021 03:35 - Who (Fay Slimm.)
Is this the definitive Fay, embedded in country you so clearly love?
It...
November 18th, 2021 20:42 - The Quick-Fix Manual To Keeping a Woman Happy. (Gunnar)
Come on guys/fellas – you’ve had your fun; now retract in case some...
November 18th, 2021 20:23 - THE CATWALK QUEEN (Andy Hunter)
Great stuff, Andy - sometimes, just sometimes fantasy can be better than...
November 18th, 2021 20:03 - forgiveness is a scam (Angela-a)
Your poetry I like, feels neat and sophisticated.
However, this site...
November 18th, 2021 19:58 - Compulsive Engagement (OllyPlease)
I have at present no view of you or your work. There\'s nothing of you on...
November 18th, 2021 00:06 - Magic (Fay Slimm.)
Easily explained in terms of surface tension and all that, yet so damn...
November 17th, 2021 06:21 - bloody tower (Dusk arising)
A medi-evil tale vividly painted with a skilled hand and his...
November 17th, 2021 06:13 - Just Another Way Out (Neville)
\'Was the Titanic weren\'t it? \'Cept there was no time to mend her.........
November 17th, 2021 05:42 - Nothing to see here (Jvhernandez921)
Is this a one off - nothing more to say, or are you going to get out there...
November 17th, 2021 05:32
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