Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Baklava (PoeticKwill)
Appetite definitely bolstered there. Never heard of Baklava...... but I...
November 9th, 2022 18:43 - White Lies Matter (Nikthemuse)
Excoriating.
Welcome. Should you intend to stay let\'s see more of your...
November 9th, 2022 06:42 - 3 Stripes and Partial Saturn Rings (Adidas and Nike) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I have always had a profound objection to becoming a (unpaid) walking...
November 9th, 2022 03:57 - A Wonderful World? (Goldfinch60)
It would take more than that to produce a wonderful world.
Tell me do I...
November 9th, 2022 03:29 - sea change (Arqios)
Didn\'t work out? Know the feeling - even if the context (no sea) was...
November 8th, 2022 19:43 - Untitled - LXIV (SureshG)
Quite possibly a dismal truth, Suresh.
November 8th, 2022 19:36 - Not Enough Sky For You (Nicole Ching)
The thought provoked of starting up afresh (something I\'ve done a few...
November 8th, 2022 19:33 - Heart and Mind Called a Meeting (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Dilemma often faced somewhere, I think - in fact I\'ve done my own version...
November 8th, 2022 19:14 - They Are Here. (Goldfinch60)
Thought he said, “one small step for man”,
And “one giant leap for...
November 8th, 2022 03:59 - Dost Thou Still See Me? (Rocky Lagou)
Hello Rocky - I think Bella is the best person to provide you with the...
November 7th, 2022 18:47 - The Future (Bella Shepard)
Not sure it is waiting, but it will certainly pop up at just the...
November 7th, 2022 18:39 - When the Word Is Broken (Tommytoons)
Nothing humorous about that at all, tom - too bloody real..... 😥 Shall...
November 7th, 2022 18:27 - Words Made From Poison (DestinysPerspectives)
Quick response - You certainly like to engage with...
November 7th, 2022 05:42 - Words Made From Poison (DestinysPerspectives)
Nothing like being a disputatious contrarian as an antidote.
Enjoyed that...
November 7th, 2022 05:19 - If i had the money... (Jinsflyingshoes)
If you could only stop feeling up all the strays and homeless, I think I...
November 7th, 2022 03:49 - Sweatshirts, No Jumpers (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Off times I wear tee shirt, open check shirt, workpants - I know my...
November 7th, 2022 03:41 - Dwelling Delights (Orchidee)
Thought from your title that this might conceivably be about having a roof...
November 7th, 2022 03:36 - How Did This Happen? (Goldfinch60)
Stop moaning you fool;
Shut up and enjoy.
Groaning is not cool...
November 7th, 2022 03:27 - Centipede scare (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
While I\'m all for live and let live, there are times when a strong insect...
November 6th, 2022 17:13 - fill each unruled page (Arqios)
The ephemeral nature of news with absolutely no perspective unless a...
November 6th, 2022 16:54 - Go! (Sorenbarrett)
I\'m off; I\'m a sensitive soul and can take a hint, however subtle....
November 6th, 2022 06:17 - Field Into Lake. (Goldfinch60)
You get your waders out and are content
That no snorkel by your river is...
November 6th, 2022 05:53 - Blackrock (Fay Slimm.)
I think you have got that just about right, Fay - \" BlackRock is the...
November 5th, 2022 08:21 - English (Sorenbarrett)
Cannot be more glad, given its almost universal use everywhere, that...
November 5th, 2022 08:05 - Brain Full. (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely Sir – I cannot disagree.
Bits of my memory drop out all the...
November 5th, 2022 03:27 - TAXES (Econ_boys)
Good argument. Keen to see what else you\'ve got.
Should you intend to...
November 4th, 2022 18:13 - Storms Of Clearance. (Goldfinch60)
A few storms in my life have cleared the way
Sometimes the way proved...
November 4th, 2022 03:31 - Fall Leaves (Jerry Reynolds)
Plenty of autumn blessings - if or when it comes. Thanks for the...
November 3rd, 2022 17:49 - minding your portals (Arqios)
I need an elevation from the mundane occasionally. Thanks for that -...
November 3rd, 2022 17:44 - Treasures In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Do you know Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs?
For Physiological and...
November 3rd, 2022 04:32 - with you (Arqios)
\"not\"? Otherwise, I do empathise and accept your reasoning up to a...
November 2nd, 2022 18:17 - with you (Arqios)
This is not the first time you have spruiked autumn recently, Rik..... a...
November 2nd, 2022 18:02 - Tree (Sorenbarrett)
You\'ver just about covered it all, Soren. in the urban setting where I...
November 2nd, 2022 17:34 - Searching for Light (Neville)
Not looking forward to death - but what can yer do... will be...
November 2nd, 2022 06:30 - Old school contact (Hzugman)
Good \'un - stay with it as a mode of...
November 2nd, 2022 04:06 - The C Word. (Goldfinch60)
This is a cheeky one in no mistake -
The ‘C word’ here is not its...
November 2nd, 2022 03:40 - Don\'t Shoot the Messenger! (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Apart from the verses, I do admire your videos. Any chance you might...
November 2nd, 2022 00:21 - Bach Spoiled. (Goldfinch60)
The whole not greater than the sum of its parts, then?
I am a musical...
November 1st, 2022 17:26 - Ted, Tell A Vision (Sorenbarrett)
I now note, having been distracted by Ted K, that I didn\'t give adequate...
November 1st, 2022 17:07 - Ted, Tell A Vision (Sorenbarrett)
Not sure what to make of this. Actually don\'t recall hearing anything...
November 1st, 2022 07:24 - This House (Tom_day)
Suggest you spend time reading other poetry - by no means just here,...
November 1st, 2022 06:32 - falling leaves (Arqios)
I like this, Rik. Very easy to evoke parallels with where I am in my jolly...
November 1st, 2022 06:04 - Look At Me (Fay Slimm.)
Why do botanical catalogues resort to such dry technical terminology when...
October 31st, 2022 08:18 - Laccaria Amethystina (Neville)
\'Darling\' never worked, whereas \'Laccaria Amethystina\' threw her into...
October 31st, 2022 08:04 - Teaching Respect. (Goldfinch60)
….So my parents taught me to say ‘Thank You’;
This stood me in good...
October 31st, 2022 04:25 - Seoul Souls (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Give it no thought -This is simply a model of the greater tragedy...
October 31st, 2022 04:05 - end of the month (Arqios)
Perhaps a direct link might help, Rik - at amazon I\'m not sure I\'m...
October 31st, 2022 01:07 - Grow a Pair (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
This is confusing - the poem, which I like, is surely advice to have the...
October 30th, 2022 18:32 - Turtle On A Brick (Bella Shepard)
Great little read,. Bella - moves along much faster than your turtle. My...
October 30th, 2022 18:17 - Primroses and Kites (Neville)
Wadyamean, \'maybe\'? Best news of the week surely, Neville!
October 30th, 2022 04:46 - Live In Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Statements are nowhere near enough -
Answers assiduously sought
Should...
October 30th, 2022 04:32 - Good riddance to bad rubbish ! ( with thanks to Rose/Brown/Henderson ) (Justa_Geezer)
Had one or two relationship problems, then?
Entertaining write, believe...
October 29th, 2022 07:32 - Looking Forward to Change (Neville)
You\'ve had a troubled love life, haven\'t you, Nev? I hope that, apart...
October 29th, 2022 07:20 - The Secret Hip-Hop Meeting (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Never really understood rap, to be quite honest. Years ago, in what must...
October 29th, 2022 07:13 - Flowing Around Your Life. (Goldfinch60)
The personification of the wind
I like more than anthropomorphism,
Which...
October 29th, 2022 06:48 - Not Today, Thank You! (Orchidee)
I believe you may have succeeded in the closure of all Halloween...
October 29th, 2022 06:47 - Defying Societies Norm (Carmen Barnett)
Thanks. I would find it interesting to see it in the first person - how...
October 28th, 2022 17:52 - Beached (Fay Slimm.)
I do, I do Fay - Years ago when very young I found a stone amazingly...
October 28th, 2022 17:47 - Fond Holiday Memories. (Goldfinch60)
My fond memories of the Isle of Wight:
Sandown, learned to swim, skies...
October 28th, 2022 03:27 - Ciao (Neville)
You made it, by virtue of it\'s brevity a piece which didn\'t leave me in...
October 27th, 2022 18:03 - Nectar (Fay Slimm.)
That is the kind of memory worth careful storage for recall, Fay. The...
October 27th, 2022 17:47 - Jack-o-lantern (Sorenbarrett)
And just before I\'m going to bed too....
Something to do with...
October 27th, 2022 07:26 - Night Write (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
How dare you criticise orchi\'s wife? LOVL
October 27th, 2022 03:53 - Life (Dr. Soma)
Hooray! I can relate to most of that! Thanks Soma or Maya....
The...
October 27th, 2022 03:49 - Magic In Music. (Goldfinch60)
Your life surrounded by music,
Does that insulate you from life?
World...
October 27th, 2022 03:25 - Big Band Swing. (Goldfinch60)
Music can evoke memories
Unfiltered by distance and time.
You cared so...
October 26th, 2022 03:38 - Empty Hopes (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Brainwashed mindset.
Thanks, man.
October 25th, 2022 06:05 - Internally Yours (Neville)
Wow Nev - that was a sweaty ride. Enjoy your trip - who knows, they might...
October 25th, 2022 06:00 - Together In Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
Please tell the name of that hotel -
I’ve stayed in some duds in my...
October 25th, 2022 05:22 - Key to Success (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
A set up in a very litigious society? Please confirm. Enjoyed. 🙂 🙂
October 24th, 2022 23:57 - A beer with Uncle Albert. (Chris Duffy)
Ban the Demon drink ! 🙂🙂 🙂
My back up medication. Learnt to...
October 24th, 2022 17:37 - Transgender Singer Plays Keyboard With Her Penis (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Think I\'ll give this one a miss if you don\'t mind.....
October 24th, 2022 06:33 - Beautiful Venice (Eugene)
What are you up to? what is Venice to you?
October 24th, 2022 06:29 - Dirty Linen (Neville)
I have to confess, my friend........... I\'m sure of nothing here.... my...
October 24th, 2022 06:22 - My Errant Mind (Lauren Kirkman)
Your write has power - scary, but power none the less. Keep writing when...
October 24th, 2022 03:58 - Words Of The Wise. (Goldfinch60)
And there’s Garrulous Gertie down the road;
Also Blabbermouth Bill...
October 24th, 2022 01:41 - Deepavali (SureshG)
Ah - so that\'s how you spell it, Suresh, Thanks.
And your last line will...
October 23rd, 2022 22:29 - HAPPY BIRTHDAY (Snemkul)
Fine write.
Would you care to reveal a little of yourself on your home...
October 23rd, 2022 19:22 - Aye Eye Captain (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Can\'t find any comment worth contributing to this.... other than to add...
October 23rd, 2022 17:59 - The Potion (Paul Bell)
There you go Paul - what more do you need than the endorsements above?...
October 23rd, 2022 17:44 - Battles (Fay Slimm.)
Only you could produce such an atmospheric piece surrounding a piece of...
October 23rd, 2022 17:26 - Twice told toilet tale – a cheeky execrable gross fable (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Many (all?) of your pieces are possessed of more than a little indelicate...
October 23rd, 2022 17:14 - Helpless (Simonmugunzva)
Neat but poignant - Thanks.
Enjoy your stay here.
PS: Name short...
October 23rd, 2022 16:58 - witless waxing (Arqios)
Humanity not brained to do the job as all warnings have fallen on deaf...
October 23rd, 2022 05:30 - Narrow Margins (Neville)
I do believe there may just conceivably be unresolved issues there, Nev..
October 23rd, 2022 05:19 - Pie Fever. (Goldfinch60)
There ain’t nothing like a good cuppa tea:
Though it’s more like a...
October 23rd, 2022 05:02 - Thorny Weed (Gary Edward Geraci)
Are you blaming Christ for the fact that the garden is now completely...
October 22nd, 2022 16:49 - To You (Fay Slimm.)
Incantations of power - and I\'m sure you really don\'t need to ask Fay -...
October 22nd, 2022 16:38 - elle était unique (Neville)
Ah but you’re a smooth one Neville. Not being a sophisticate and no...
October 22nd, 2022 16:28 - Choices (Sorenbarrett)
Curley one, soren….
While the first land seems irrefutably the way to...
October 22nd, 2022 07:30 - Prisoner (Arealhorrorshow)
Your pins here: I like the form; not always quite sure of the...
October 22nd, 2022 07:12 - For the birds (Hzugman)
Fun. Got any more on the Can-can?
October 22nd, 2022 07:02 - Other People\'s Words (Chris Duffy)
Took me down a fairly tortured path there Chris. Significant lines there...
October 22nd, 2022 06:51 - Holiday Season (J.Edse)
You are mad in the very best kind of way - it seems you might have some...
October 22nd, 2022 03:30 - Is that me out there (EvenwheniLie)
I get the feeling in there very well - I\'m just not quite sure where you...
October 22nd, 2022 01:56 - Music For Love. (Goldfinch60)
Music can enhance many a moment
And add to satisfaction felt all...
October 22nd, 2022 01:43 - Endless Potential (Nicole Ching)
Plenty more for us to behold - including the material in your \'Comment...
October 21st, 2022 21:26 - Venice on steroids (Eugene)
Venice requires time, much longer than the 24hours to three days masses of...
October 21st, 2022 21:15 - Too many balls in the air at once (Hzugman)
Universal truth more folks should listen to.....
October 21st, 2022 05:58 - No Matter What Time it Is (Neville)
No probs with Clinton St o\' course, Nev....
Spencer Bridge Road, in...
October 21st, 2022 05:37
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