Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• sunrising sunset (Arqios) Understood completely, Rik - imagery rich; the difference between...
  October 2nd, 2022 23:34
• Remembered (Fay Slimm.) Oh how I wish I could write like that after I returned from a time travel...
  October 2nd, 2022 19:12
• NIGERIA INDEPENDENCE POEM by Muhammad Danlami Muhammad (Sir. MDM) (Grand Magazine) Three (no four!) poem pieces together on the same day, subject Nigeria. Is...
  October 2nd, 2022 18:49
• Inconsequential Wonderings (Neville) An unanswered question if ever there was one, Nev. Close intimate human...
  October 2nd, 2022 18:42
• The smile. (Chris Duffy) Smile not here yet, Chris, although the packages certainly are. A read I...
  October 2nd, 2022 18:32
• Lexical Expansion (Lord Montgomery) Lord Monty: I rarely do this , but since you are such a language...
  October 2nd, 2022 06:09
• Forego Grudges. (Goldfinch60) I detest others who give me advice. But I will make an exception for...
  October 2nd, 2022 01:32
• Write It Down, Write It Out. (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Good advice in your comment. Unfortunately the little voice in my head...
  October 1st, 2022 20:57
• A day out at the beach (Morwenna) A subtle change in consciousness beautifully pinned (no mistype -...
  October 1st, 2022 20:50
• the purpose of pain (Lonelyraccoon) If you come out of that experience with insight, it was valuable because...
  October 1st, 2022 20:34
• A Love Story (MendedFences27) That title - l very nearly passed this by - almost didn\'t...
  October 1st, 2022 20:29
• and I try to be brave (Arqios) Captured the essence of parting when no residual contact remains, Rik. I...
  October 1st, 2022 07:53
• What! No Strawberries! (Goldfinch60) Eton Mess British? I had no idea: Should I remember this, or let it...
  October 1st, 2022 02:06
• Ian (Rocky Lagou) Motherland - Mother Earth - happening all over. You are not unique. But...
  October 1st, 2022 00:53
• I Heart My Heart (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Awwh You just stay in that good place - the pain isn\'t worth the
  September 30th, 2022 19:43
• The Maze (Jerry Reynolds) Point taken , Jerry - though I do believe that piece of advice has come a...
  September 30th, 2022 19:23
• Kicked you in the cooch (Edthepoet) A little disillusioned with virtual interaction, Ed? Should be more of...
  September 30th, 2022 08:53
• A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Coffin (Aa Harvey) Well that\'s a relief - time to move on, perhaps?
  September 30th, 2022 08:41
• Odds (Paul Bell) I think Teddy\'s right - I think we should gently tiptoe round it.......
  September 30th, 2022 08:39
• That Special Time. (Goldfinch60) ‘Early to bed, early to rise..” Andy, I think you have cracked...
  September 30th, 2022 02:21
• A Certain Kind of Highness (Neville) Dunno how I missed this before, Nev - mind if I keep and use at a timely...
  September 30th, 2022 01:51
• The Hero Filling Station, near Sheffield, by Cumwell Lane (AuburnScribbler) As a poem about a filling station open late in Sheffield, it has no peer,...
  September 29th, 2022 20:28
• Let Me Be (Bella Shepard) If I reach back into my very early childhood Bella, it does sound like a...
  September 29th, 2022 20:12
• behind each poem (Arqios) Well writ always worth bearing in mind, Rik. I should do it more...
  September 29th, 2022 05:27
• Greeting Cards (Lord Montgomery) Which will go first? The Hallmark shop or my cramped hand reduced to...
  September 29th, 2022 05:21
• A Bus Stop in the Rain (Gene Rockwell Gant) Well told interaction - Thanks.
  September 29th, 2022 05:12
• Lament for a past world (Jerry Reynolds) Ignorance was bliss.... and we have every right to view the past with what...
  September 29th, 2022 05:09
• Stepping Stones. (Goldfinch60) Whole life is a learning experience; Mistakes should certainly be...
  September 29th, 2022 04:54
• Brad and Sally (Paul Bell) Ran through the tenses there didn\'t ya? Understandable really - You\'re...
  September 29th, 2022 00:33
• What Abuse? (Goldfinch60) Now I have a funny presentiment That you ain’t going to like wot I...
  September 28th, 2022 08:38
• If People Were Ringtones (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Your poetry fun; your visuals stimulating, full of life. I like both. Many...
  September 27th, 2022 20:40
• We don\'t need another Sequel (Shetonya Latryce) Understood half (say three-quarters) of what was going down there - and...
  September 27th, 2022 20:32
• If this is my life I\'d rather be dead than alive (Rick Singh) Difficult to know what to say. No background. Your name? yeh Ok......
  September 27th, 2022 05:08
• The Conversation (Paul Bell) Kudos for the civilized way that was achieved ....no legal eagles making a...
  September 27th, 2022 05:02
• Morning Mozart. (Goldfinch60) I sensed the invigoration you felt, Experienced your wonderful day. Is...
  September 27th, 2022 01:41
• Wasting time around the Red Velvet Rope (Ccpegus) Five repeats...clever or what? I gave you what i consider to be very...
  September 26th, 2022 21:32
• Sprinkle some crack on ‘em (EvenwheniLie) I\'m out of breath and run through after that....!!!
  September 26th, 2022 20:15
• Wasting time around the Red Velvet Rope (Ccpegus) Let\'s hope persistence pays better than the subject of your piece....... ...
  September 26th, 2022 20:07
• Snaggletooth The Snitch (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Maintaining a roof over one\'s head always involves compromise. I always...
  September 26th, 2022 19:51
• Apartment A (J.Edse) I like this a lot and can relate to most of it, although it would be...
  September 26th, 2022 19:44
• These Old Cats: Diary of a Single Black Female (Shetonya Latryce) You think it\'s only old guys trying to get inside your pants? Still best...
  September 26th, 2022 19:23
• Liminal Deliverance (Quemis) Oh cheer me up, why don\'t you? I do see a truth there (I think) - all is...
  September 26th, 2022 19:10
• On My Way (Lorna) Hi Lorna - apologies in advance for this: I\'m quite literal minded and...
  September 26th, 2022 18:57
• Just Unbelievable! (Goldfinch60) My prejudices challenged - how lovely: I love this because my name is...
  September 26th, 2022 04:12
• Vodka& Coke (Paul Bell) Another bent conversation you do so well Paul, which has certain insights...
  September 25th, 2022 07:09
• That Creation. (Goldfinch60) Had to get the ice cream van out by eight. This week I’ve really had a...
  September 25th, 2022 06:41
• TV Soaps (Chris Duffy) More than that, a belly laugh Chris. Good job I live alone - no one...
  September 25th, 2022 02:19
• Always read the label. (Tallisman) A serious warning lightly told, T.
  September 25th, 2022 02:06
• I Think I\'m Being Followed (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Definitely followed here - no need to think about it!
  September 25th, 2022 02:03
• Inside Dreams (Fay Slimm.) Normally some dreams manage to express thoughts, emotions, intuitions...
  September 24th, 2022 19:47
• The True Weight of a Man’s Soul (Neville) Lost for words Neville. Yours is a precious statement of....(I may come...
  September 24th, 2022 02:20
• Smoke Filled Days. (Goldfinch60) Irony substitutes here for the smoke - Hides the disaster that lurked in...
  September 24th, 2022 02:04
• LAST GAME (Avi) \'Life\'s a Game\'? - Agreed. And it IS \'how you play it\' that counts....
  September 23rd, 2022 19:03
• Back To That Time. (Goldfinch60) Never was such a time I’m afraid, Mate. Know what you mean, and it’s...
  September 23rd, 2022 01:36
• Taking a break: Womb Work (Shetonya Latryce) I\'ve probably lost the plot, but are you expecting? I\'d vote for the...
  September 22nd, 2022 19:10
• Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You (Neville) Thought a gem, but then a warm comforting pillow as I drift to sleep with...
  September 22nd, 2022 18:43
• Ballad of Billy McGee (Arqios) Not such an older time, I would think; not enjoyable other than as a vivid...
  September 22nd, 2022 18:32
• hands off that snooze button! (Arqios) Never thought I\'d do this - just faved it without commentary....
  September 22nd, 2022 18:14
• The Nutcracker Soldier is in Denial (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) So much in here, just beneath the surface: Where was father at? Gay...
  September 22nd, 2022 06:18
• Pretty Beautiful ! (Justa_Geezer) Matured like fine wine. Neat quatrain.
  September 22nd, 2022 01:25
• Fishermen\'s Friends The Musical. (Goldfinch60) Envy is a terrible thing; I’ve got a large dose of it here - I need...
  September 22nd, 2022 01:13
• My Damm Butterfly (Kel554) Liked the butterfly. Should you intend to stay, it would be good if you...
  September 21st, 2022 07:07
• Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud (Doggerel Dave) Got that right, Andy - how did you guess? 🙃
  September 21st, 2022 02:00
• Deeds Of Love. (Goldfinch60) Words are cheap it’s said - Deeds the better fare. Yet words can...
  September 21st, 2022 01:57
• Back Pat (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) A neat, well honed piece, the lack of wordiness really something I can go...
  September 21st, 2022 00:38
• Teach Me (Bella Shepard) A prayer to yourself, Bella? Agreed - To usefully be and constantly seek...
  September 20th, 2022 22:35
• Mimicking The Elite (Wanna be like them) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The phenomenon of influencers (they aren\'t \'elite\' ) totally baffles...
  September 20th, 2022 07:40
• live fed matins (Arqios) Irony - via live screen. Got it - Not the real thing? Dunno where...
  September 20th, 2022 07:35
• Gas Bag (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) There\'s some other items in your old archive on this subject.... Any...
  September 20th, 2022 07:27
• My Country (Dr. Soma) Try as we might (some of us) to become citizens of the world...... I know...
  September 20th, 2022 07:16
• The train (Chris Duffy) Great metaphor for life, Chris - It\'s all there.. Thanks. Please, next...
  September 20th, 2022 07:04
• Cygnets At Rest, (Goldfinch60) How do you know that one’s Daddy? Mum out on the razzle dazzle? Too...
  September 20th, 2022 03:42
• Thinnest Divide (Fay Slimm.) Fish visualised from your words in full colour and movement, Fay. Very...
  September 19th, 2022 09:13
• Consume Until Doom (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) ....So now wake up! A good shortie there Cool.
  September 19th, 2022 06:22
• Queens and Kings. (Paul Bell) And so it does, Paul - my point precisely.
  September 19th, 2022 06:19
• Addicted For Life. (Goldfinch60) Music then is the gateway to your soul. Your preoccupation has served you...
  September 19th, 2022 02:54
• Hey! You bit my sandwich! (Arqios) Yes - Having taken all factors into consideration, I think you might just...
  September 18th, 2022 19:02
• Grave Sight (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) If for you it\'s right, then I hope it comes to pass. Thanks for...
  September 18th, 2022 06:48
• A Wise Person. (Goldfinch60) Squeezed sponge doesn’t absorb any moisture. Silence doesn’t imply...
  September 18th, 2022 01:52
• Mao\'s Mausoleum (Pearcemelville 兎敏) Nice timing - reminds us that other parts of the world have revered...
  September 18th, 2022 01:20
• Poem, Living Life (AwHec8) You are in a contemplative mood, Don. Good to hear from you - been a...
  September 18th, 2022 01:05
• Super Satellite (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Your vids are worth the effort. I really enjoyed this as I had missed out...
  September 18th, 2022 00:58
• Have we forgotten? (Sorenbarrett) I must endorse this - I\'ve argued the relevance of history on these pages...
  September 17th, 2022 07:28
• Just to be alive (Poetic Dan) A perfect statement of where you are now, Dan...You are making me envious....
  September 17th, 2022 07:15
• is it not your day? (Arqios) I think I\'d file that under \'grunge\' - and non the worse for that . ...
  September 17th, 2022 07:06
• the insolent bystander (Arqios) I\'ll vote for the grey areas anytime - thanks.
  September 17th, 2022 07:00
• thanks for the applause (Arqios) At last! one I can halfway comprehend! Permission to amend to some of my...
  September 17th, 2022 06:54
• Outlandish Sci-fi Horror (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Can\'t get my head around this, mate - maybe she\'s leaped out of the page...
  September 17th, 2022 02:53
• Cane Lady. (Goldfinch60) Experiential learning is the way it goes these days; Remembering that the...
  September 17th, 2022 02:37
• As I look Back. (Goldfinch60) If it’s Fate you are just reckoning with Add to that and give Luck more...
  September 16th, 2022 07:44
• The Baking Tray from Hell (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Experiential learning - life\'s lessons learnt the hard way. Wot did yer...
  September 15th, 2022 07:30
• A Right Royal...... (Doggerel Dave) Revised, in particular the final stanza - I hope it makes more...
  September 15th, 2022 05:07
• Respect Of The Past. (Goldfinch60) Might be true for you and me, however.. In the sixties, seventies, while...
  September 15th, 2022 04:19
• Proofread Before Sending (WriteBeLight) Never got as far as your vids - seem to have become entangled with a...
  September 15th, 2022 02:00
• Dislocation (Morwenna) So here you casually ( well - not casually, but deliberately) disclose in...
  September 14th, 2022 06:41
• The Strange Woman (Kimani) Approached with some trepidation, given the title - I did find this fun. I...
  September 14th, 2022 05:00
• The Wonder Of Life. (Goldfinch60) I’d have to say you were lucky Andy - Some who enter this life at rock...
  September 14th, 2022 04:47
• Kitkat Con (Chris Duffy) Maybe the jolly old dental bills may be smaller though, Chris.... I...
  September 13th, 2022 18:12
• Harmony Prevails. (Goldfinch60) Can’t see it happening anytime soon. A shame, because this is all...
  September 13th, 2022 05:52
• Questions For Nature (Diana Baffoe) So long as you have another concrete reality based consciousness you can...
  September 12th, 2022 08:21