Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Back Pat (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
A neat, well honed piece, the lack of wordiness really something I can go...
September 21st, 2022 00:38 - Teach Me (Bella Shepard)
A prayer to yourself, Bella?
Agreed - To usefully be and constantly seek...
September 20th, 2022 22:35 - Mimicking The Elite (Wanna be like them) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
The phenomenon of influencers (they aren\'t \'elite\' ) totally baffles...
September 20th, 2022 07:40 - live fed matins (Arqios)
Irony - via live screen.
Got it - Not the real thing?
Dunno where...
September 20th, 2022 07:35 - Gas Bag (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
There\'s some other items in your old archive on this subject.... Any...
September 20th, 2022 07:27 - My Country (Dr. Soma)
Try as we might (some of us) to become citizens of the world...... I know...
September 20th, 2022 07:16 - The train (Chris Duffy)
Great metaphor for life, Chris - It\'s all there.. Thanks.
Please, next...
September 20th, 2022 07:04 - Cygnets At Rest, (Goldfinch60)
How do you know that one’s Daddy?
Mum out on the razzle dazzle?
Too...
September 20th, 2022 03:42 - Thinnest Divide (Fay Slimm.)
Fish visualised from your words in full colour and movement, Fay.
Very...
September 19th, 2022 09:13 - Consume Until Doom (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
....So now wake up!
A good shortie there Cool.
September 19th, 2022 06:22 - Queens and Kings. (Paul Bell)
And so it does, Paul - my point precisely.
September 19th, 2022 06:19 - Addicted For Life. (Goldfinch60)
Music then is the gateway to your soul.
Your preoccupation has served you...
September 19th, 2022 02:54 - Hey! You bit my sandwich! (Arqios)
Yes - Having taken all factors into consideration, I think you might just...
September 18th, 2022 19:02 - Grave Sight (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
If for you it\'s right, then I hope it comes to pass.
Thanks for...
September 18th, 2022 06:48 - A Wise Person. (Goldfinch60)
Squeezed sponge doesn’t absorb any moisture.
Silence doesn’t imply...
September 18th, 2022 01:52 - Mao\'s Mausoleum (Pearcemelville 兎敏)
Nice timing - reminds us that other parts of the world have revered...
September 18th, 2022 01:20 - Poem, Living Life (AwHec8)
You are in a contemplative mood, Don.
Good to hear from you - been a...
September 18th, 2022 01:05 - Super Satellite (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Your vids are worth the effort. I really enjoyed this as I had missed out...
September 18th, 2022 00:58 - Have we forgotten? (Sorenbarrett)
I must endorse this - I\'ve argued the relevance of history on these pages...
September 17th, 2022 07:28 - Just to be alive (Poetic Dan)
A perfect statement of where you are now, Dan...You are making me envious....
September 17th, 2022 07:15 - is it not your day? (Arqios)
I think I\'d file that under \'grunge\' - and non the worse for that . ...
September 17th, 2022 07:06 - the insolent bystander (Arqios)
I\'ll vote for the grey areas anytime - thanks.
September 17th, 2022 07:00 - thanks for the applause (Arqios)
At last! one I can halfway comprehend! Permission to amend to some of my...
September 17th, 2022 06:54 - Outlandish Sci-fi Horror (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Can\'t get my head around this, mate - maybe she\'s leaped out of the page...
September 17th, 2022 02:53 - Cane Lady. (Goldfinch60)
Experiential learning is the way it goes these days;
Remembering that the...
September 17th, 2022 02:37 - As I look Back. (Goldfinch60)
If it’s Fate you are just reckoning with
Add to that and give Luck more...
September 16th, 2022 07:44 - The Baking Tray from Hell (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Experiential learning - life\'s lessons learnt the hard way.
Wot did yer...
September 15th, 2022 07:30 - A Right Royal...... (Doggerel Dave)
Revised, in particular the final stanza - I hope it makes more...
September 15th, 2022 05:07 - Respect Of The Past. (Goldfinch60)
Might be true for you and me, however..
In the sixties, seventies, while...
September 15th, 2022 04:19 - Proofread Before Sending (WriteBeLight)
Never got as far as your vids - seem to have become entangled with a...
September 15th, 2022 02:00 - Dislocation (Morwenna)
So here you casually ( well - not casually, but deliberately) disclose in...
September 14th, 2022 06:41 - The Strange Woman (Kimani)
Approached with some trepidation, given the title - I did find this fun. I...
September 14th, 2022 05:00 - The Wonder Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
I’d have to say you were lucky Andy -
Some who enter this life at rock...
September 14th, 2022 04:47 - Kitkat Con (Chris Duffy)
Maybe the jolly old dental bills may be smaller though, Chris....
I...
September 13th, 2022 18:12 - Harmony Prevails. (Goldfinch60)
Can’t see it happening anytime soon.
A shame, because this is all...
September 13th, 2022 05:52 - Questions For Nature (Diana Baffoe)
So long as you have another concrete reality based consciousness you can...
September 12th, 2022 08:21 - The Game. Part 1. (Paul Bell)
Let\'s see parts 2....3? - though I wouldn\'t put it past you, Paul to...
September 12th, 2022 08:10 - Poverty Wars (Chris Duffy)
Not sure about the \'accomplished poet\' bit, Chris. As per my home page,...
September 12th, 2022 05:11 - Losing And Finding (Orchidee)
A fine write, orchi.
(Wot yer lost? Wot yer found?
Come on orchi -...
September 12th, 2022 04:57 - She Is Poetry. (Goldfinch60)
I’ve had my say on love and poetry
And feel my irritation is just...
September 12th, 2022 01:31 - Devils bride revisited (Tallisman)
Revisited? Revisited? No one has the strength energy or foolhardiness to...
September 11th, 2022 17:33 - Poverty Wars (Chris Duffy)
The ways of mankind as real history nicely summed up there Chris.
You are...
September 11th, 2022 17:16 - The Queen is Dead (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Yes - even in the Antipodes this is wall to wall radio and TV. Who knew so...
September 11th, 2022 07:13 - This Should be Obvious… (Doggerel Dave)
Hey Paul - thanks for the further input. Very welcome to give any of my...
September 11th, 2022 06:53 - Never Regret Any Day. (Goldfinch60)
But you don’t have any bad days Andy.
Though unfit to advise on stuff...
September 11th, 2022 02:04 - வாராஹி (Varahi Amman)
You sure this is about Varahi ?
September 10th, 2022 20:41 - Hope (Gary Edward Geraci)
I\'ll join you in that hope, Gary.
September 10th, 2022 20:18 - Sinful Daughter (Jerry Reynolds)
That may well be the shortest poem with a good \'turn\' I\'ve come across...
September 10th, 2022 20:14 - Touched By An Angel (Paul Bell)
Although I\'m no fan of magical realism Paul, you\'ve got a talent for the...
September 10th, 2022 20:02 - Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again (Neville)
I do hope your R&R (if that \'s what it be - though I fear it may not..)...
September 10th, 2022 19:52 - Songs Of Yore. (Goldfinch60)
We headed for Magnetic Island after our exams.
For Buddy we were...
September 10th, 2022 19:08 - A Dry Throat And A Bloody Back (Christ)
Read your bio on your home page. Go for it. the greater range of people...
September 9th, 2022 18:45 - The Sea Of Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
I think you have nailed it right there Andy -
You have definitely made a...
September 9th, 2022 08:41 - September 8th 2022 ! (Justa_Geezer)
Definitely got (some) lines I can identify with there...
September 9th, 2022 08:27 - Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming (Neville)
A prey to some ultimately addictive substance, or mystic?
Never managed...
September 9th, 2022 08:12 - Musings (Orchidee)
But surely you would rather be in fellowship with them than an atheistic...
September 9th, 2022 07:58 - The singer and the song (Tallisman)
I get it, I think.... words are cheap and easy - But for you? Trust is the...
September 9th, 2022 00:11 - The Song Rang Out. (Goldfinch60)
Wot, there’s a new Fisherman’s Friend’s movie?
I’m bound to see...
September 8th, 2022 01:58 - Past And Future. (Goldfinch60)
Please bottle your optimism, Andy -
You could sell it and make a...
September 7th, 2022 07:09 - I Am My Hair (Lauren Kirkman)
I think I now know more of the significance hair can play in some folk\'s...
September 6th, 2022 06:05 - Individuals (Eugene S.)
Not doing you justice here, are they?
Someone who knew the nineties tha...
September 6th, 2022 05:42 - Nature Enlivening. (Goldfinch60)
Wait until the grass grows up to your knees
And the croquet balls go...
September 6th, 2022 05:33 - Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister (Neville)
Yes, but in whose cheek would you really wish to come Neville, this...
September 6th, 2022 05:07 - no matter (SureshG)
This one I missed initially. Thanks for popping in, Suresh.
So much...
September 5th, 2022 17:09 - This Time (Fay Slimm.)
Sooner or later we must settle - and you, utilising memories richly...
September 5th, 2022 07:31 - Hearts desires (Poetic Dan)
That\'s a Liberation statement if ever I\'ve found one. Good luck to you...
September 5th, 2022 07:20 - Nature\'s Anger Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
The personification of nature
Is really just shifting the blame.
No need...
September 5th, 2022 01:10 - Nelson (Paul Bell)
Never mind, Paul I\'m sure that out there, somewhere, there\'s someone...
September 4th, 2022 07:34 - We Met On A Crossing. (Goldfinch60)
That memory of the seasons
Keep tight, as it will fade with...
September 4th, 2022 07:23 - On Being Too Gentle (Neville)
A smooth change of pace portrayed in your piece; Improvisation the name of...
September 3rd, 2022 19:31 - Family Meeting. (Goldfinch60)
Ah, a good family dynamic
Will be security for you.
For some home life...
September 3rd, 2022 02:50 - dangling carrot (Arqios)
I get that completely (now I\'ve found it!)
Let them go, I say - I...
September 2nd, 2022 21:04 - Abandon (Fay Slimm.)
Practice, as in your poetry, can make perfect, Fay. Not that when it comes...
September 2nd, 2022 20:18 - The Old Tom and I (KeneBujold)
A simply painted fun piece I enjoyed. More in there than a cat/man...
September 2nd, 2022 19:45 - The Words We Spoke (MendedFences27)
You captured the dynamic of a long term relationship to perfection there,...
September 2nd, 2022 19:07 - Potage du Femme (Neville)
...and she did and I did and the energy passed through her to me.... Wish...
September 2nd, 2022 05:26 - Experience. (Goldfinch60)
What have you got if not experience?
A practice proven and is tried and...
September 2nd, 2022 05:12 - Potage du Femme (Neville)
Talking cunnilingus here? \'Since between your legs is all the richness...
September 2nd, 2022 04:22 - Fiery Fred. (Goldfinch60)
With a tribute to Fred Trueman,
A tale of cricket at that time,
You writ...
September 1st, 2022 19:45 - This Should be Obvious… (Doggerel Dave)
Fringe is right, I think Phil. Grateful that now I can use Google and...
September 1st, 2022 19:38 - Purple R.I.P (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
The fickleness of fashion - fun write.
Thanks for that.
September 1st, 2022 05:36 - Welcome to America (Mary73223)
Although the stark realities you so eloquently present in your post here...
September 1st, 2022 00:28 - The Steel Fortress (Bella Shepard)
Well Bella, I\'m not sure I wanted this: the relationships metaphor...
September 1st, 2022 00:14 - Love So Deep (MendedFences27)
Either way, one hell of a tale, Phil, very real in the telling. Pulled me...
August 31st, 2022 23:56 - Looking Forward to Later (Neville)
No matter the route (care with spelling there), so long it worked out well...
August 31st, 2022 07:53 - Frenzy (Fay Slimm.)
Yes the maternal (and in occasional instances paternal) care and regard...
August 31st, 2022 07:41 - Innocence. (Goldfinch60)
Reckon socialisation buggers it
And it’s conformity which has the...
August 31st, 2022 07:24 - CARGO 200 (Angus wardlaw)
For once here I found a pursuit of the picture to be absolutely relevant....
August 30th, 2022 18:37 - Signs of old age (Hzugman)
And everything that is supposed to work if you take it three times a day...
August 30th, 2022 18:13 - A Few Moments After (Neville)
Gritty stuff, Neville - wasn\'t the makings of a question mark unfinished,...
August 30th, 2022 06:05 - Her (Fay Slimm.)
Let’s make it clear: this is one of the strongest and straightforward...
August 30th, 2022 05:57 - Indispensable People. (Goldfinch60)
Of course, it’s Ozymandias springs to mind….
Or Narcissistic...
August 30th, 2022 05:42 - Being Human (Bella Shepard)
Sometimes less is more.... in this case definitely, Bella
August 30th, 2022 04:26 - What you going to do about that? (Tallisman)
Should be classified as \'humour\' .
So what you gonna do about...
August 29th, 2022 23:02 - While Watching Swifts (Neville)
For me it is impossible to express the wonder.
Glad you took up the...
August 29th, 2022 19:51 - Affluence. (Chris Duffy)
The influence of affluence is pernicious in western (and quite possibility...
August 29th, 2022 19:44 - Resignation To Life. (Goldfinch60)
Not much more to add after dusk got in first.
When I\'m here I\'m here,...
August 29th, 2022 06:55 - My life in lipstick (Morwenna)
Still don\'t understand.....
I can appreciate the fun, Morwenna, if not...
August 29th, 2022 02:05 - Happy Hour (LittleTalks)
I once lived in the tropics - your piece evoked memories of torment and...
August 28th, 2022 19:04 - Blame Russia or the Ukraine? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Yeh - go for it.
Could be though that politicians are pushed by even...
August 28th, 2022 06:41
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