Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- And It Snowed. (Goldfinch60)
I hope you understand I am going slow.
Not interested in snow, you...
December 11th, 2022 04:04 - There\'s Alot More... (Gunwanti Harish Thanvi)
Yes, yes and yes…. You should bottle that feeling for life and spray it...
December 10th, 2022 22:14 - I’m So Frightened of These Lights (AuburnScribbler)
\"Christmas\" (or I, as a non believer prefer \' The Festive Season\')...
December 10th, 2022 19:06 - I Won\'t Look (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
I just hope you get a pay rise...
As a dedication to those who get on...
December 10th, 2022 18:52 - Cat as trophy (Sorenbarrett)
Black cat in witness box ? A convincing Meow?
Glad your are out now,...
December 10th, 2022 18:45 - You Can\'t Nap In Cairo (Cressida Cane)
A rich painting of a city I know nothing about.. Almost, however felt line...
December 10th, 2022 06:44 - Long Life Pleasure. (Goldfinch60)
Pleasure at your leisure sounds good to me;
I do what I can with what...
December 10th, 2022 05:16 - A bit of nonsense! (Tallisman)
But funny nonsense, none the less: I enjoyed it. Two nonsenses perfectly...
December 9th, 2022 22:08 - Less Trodden (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks Fay – At first read (usually fairly superficial) methought this...
December 9th, 2022 17:37 - When Size is Not Everything (Neville)
Shows to go just how unwithit I am - thought the Prof G would blow...
December 9th, 2022 08:21 - Joy And Freedom. (Goldfinch60)
Hallelujah,
You all did sing -
Next year, ‘see ya
Can’t wait for...
December 9th, 2022 08:06 - Changes (Fay Slimm.)
A meditative moving word picture of smooth trouble free change, Fay.
December 9th, 2022 01:31 - Hidden (Neville)
Irony, ain\'t it?
PS: searched \'pantomime\' in relation to...
December 9th, 2022 01:23 - The new math (Hzugman)
Come on, Mate - you know you are an undergraduate at the University of...
December 9th, 2022 01:15 - Nowhere (Sorenbarrett)
Definitely a Dreamtime - a place where negativity could have a positive...
December 8th, 2022 17:48 - The New Watch. (Goldfinch60)
I ain’t got no phone.
Double negative?
Means I ain’t got one;
I...
December 8th, 2022 03:58 - head gear all in poe (Arqios)
Not sure it\'s gonna help, Rik....
December 8th, 2022 03:25 - Moon Of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Of course you do arise,
(Your love is so strong)
Before the day...
December 7th, 2022 03:28 - The Woke Stick (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Don\'t understand this woke thing (I don\'t) Is it the next move after...
December 6th, 2022 20:30 - What We Don\'t See (Saxon Crow)
Woo Woo - well writ as usual....but...but... weird, Sax
December 6th, 2022 20:26 - angel envy (Arqios)
I think you better stay with orchi - I\'m out of my depth again....🙂
December 6th, 2022 19:46 - Nature\'s Life. (Goldfinch60)
You are lucky you still have some my friend;
Not sure your grandchildren...
December 6th, 2022 03:34 - Haibun-2 (Jerry Reynolds)
Dusting - vacuuming - mopping ..................................... Trying...
December 5th, 2022 18:57 - Creatures of Nature (Bella Shepard)
Amid the cacophony of modern life it can be well nigh impossible to hear...
December 5th, 2022 18:46 - Sheltered from the Storm (M.E.M.)
Can happen. Certainly I\'ve had that experience under (of course) totally...
December 5th, 2022 18:37 - Daily Teacher. (Goldfinch60)
When? It’s cloudy with possible showers;
Don’t tell me it doesn’t...
December 5th, 2022 03:54 - And On And On And On (M.E.M.)
\"A death trap on two wheels.......... license for less than a month...
December 4th, 2022 20:12 - Laura - A Limerick (Classicmister)
Was an excuse this old fellow called Ted
Made for a decision to leave...
December 4th, 2022 19:36 - Journey to the soul in hope to find the self (Poetic Dan)
Much wisdom and insight in there, Dan. You do justice to the journey you...
December 4th, 2022 19:10 - The Testosterone Terminator (James Cameron) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Strange is right. Has he lost all his and doesn\'t want to be the only
December 4th, 2022 05:55 - Leaf(p) of faith (Saxon Crow)
Sax, you have been missed, I\'m sure. Great parable in flowing verse. Do...
December 4th, 2022 05:50 - Stories Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
I thought myself a vegetarian;
Regaled people with stories of mass...
December 4th, 2022 05:29 - Now That My Lady Is Gone (Neville)
Dunno about being someone else, but I do vainly (of course) wish I could...
December 3rd, 2022 19:48 - Blessed Laughter. (Goldfinch60)
Ella Wheeler Wilcox gave it a shot,
Although others had done so...
December 3rd, 2022 05:10 - Desk Top Fever (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
For every substance (including water) there\'s a \'therapeutic window\' ...
December 3rd, 2022 00:22 - What is Femininity? (Lola Portillo-Wright)
OK if a male pops in?
That was a pretty comprehensive summary of the...
December 3rd, 2022 00:05 - So Long and Thanks for All the Fish (Neville)
Yeh - Although a SF afficionado in the past I missed out on Hitchhiker\'s...
December 2nd, 2022 23:45 - She\'s a platter I can often forget to let know (Poetic Dan)
There you have created an erotic piece I can really relate to Dan,...
December 2nd, 2022 23:32 - Conscience (Sorenbarrett)
Only way out, I would think, Soren.
December 2nd, 2022 08:32 - Covert (Fay Slimm.)
Such a twist, Fay. But both must know...otherwise....
Reminds me of...
December 2nd, 2022 08:28 - Tomorrows Garden. (Goldfinch60)
You have just filled me full of envy -
No garden upstairs where I...
December 2nd, 2022 07:19 - Emerging December. (Fay Slimm.)
The upcoming Festive Season never feels quite the same in the Antipodes -...
December 1st, 2022 06:35 - what i\'m not saying (Arqios)
Definitely a luxuriant jungle in cyber- space, Rik. Difficult to negotiate...
December 1st, 2022 06:26 - Peace And Harmony. (Goldfinch60)
When it comes to music I’m no expert,
But I know what I like when I...
December 1st, 2022 06:22 - RELATIVELY SPEAKING (Joe Marcello)
\'Missed you ,Joe.
Summarises my position on time travel.
But come on,...
November 30th, 2022 18:22 - Tombs to dreams (Sorenbarrett)
All I have is now - dead right Soren.
The \'dead\' may well be true of...
November 30th, 2022 18:03 - Ten Years After (Neville)
The residue, since the data so obviously redundant....but such...
November 30th, 2022 06:23 - inimitable contrivances (Arqios)
hear, hear!
November 30th, 2022 06:17 - Bad Drivers. (Goldfinch60)
I’d give it up if I were you -
Public Transport is all the...
November 30th, 2022 03:51 - 17 (Rocky Lagou)
I\'m sure you will make it, Rocky. Any support you have received here you...
November 29th, 2022 17:23 - The Howling Dog (Paul Bell)
This is short, but there is a lot packed in...
November 29th, 2022 17:18 - AN UPDATE (Michael Edwards)
Rules are pointless in your position, Michael.
My wishes are as...
November 29th, 2022 08:26 - Her Passing (MendedFences27)
The pain of loss more than adequately portrayed there, Phil. Your final...
November 29th, 2022 03:26 - After Death (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Neatly put , those last three lines, Not sure, though how the afterlife...
November 29th, 2022 03:19 - That Last Time Look (Neville)
The distance, the the resultant emptiness (will it ever be filled...
November 29th, 2022 03:13 - Slithered Moon Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Do slither away, you very new moon;
Claim to be cutting the sky with your...
November 29th, 2022 03:00 - My Body (M.E.M.)
So long as it wasn\'t actually your experience... Reassurance?
The...
November 28th, 2022 19:36 - baggage claim delay (Arqios)
For me Ohio is not the main point of interest, here. The pajamas in the...
November 28th, 2022 19:27 - How you look at it (Sorenbarrett)
And I thought I\'d got hope - despair, glass half full/empty all sorted....
November 28th, 2022 05:53 - Full Life. (Goldfinch60)
Congratulations should be granted here;
Time to write your biography, old...
November 28th, 2022 05:42 - Just Another Zen Thing (Neville)
Orchi conducted a preemptive strike and pinched my corny one liner,...
November 27th, 2022 16:10 - Protecting Moon. (Goldfinch60)
Ah! The moon, a dry piece of rock,
A base for space exploration
Neglects...
November 27th, 2022 04:25 - Doing his Best (Fay Slimm.)
Your poem, Fay frames this raptor\'s fearful symmetry as did another poet...
November 27th, 2022 00:32 - granny\'s steinway (Arqios)
There\'s a history there and I wouldn\'t mind if more detail.....
November 26th, 2022 22:03 - The Safety Net (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Not everyone - I cannot, will not , won\'t.
\"Consume, be silent, die\"....
November 26th, 2022 22:00 - Song for Gene Malloy (Neville)
Dear Sir, (I do this all the time to big companies and Govt depts - are...
November 26th, 2022 21:01 - Walking To School. (Goldfinch60)
With such nostalgia I can but agree.
And what, do you believe, has caused...
November 26th, 2022 03:29 - Rewritten history (Illia)
And what passes for truth not worth a candle after that (your poem)
Here...
November 25th, 2022 04:37 - Creating Music. (Goldfinch60)
I’ve never heard of Auchentoschan
Much less spell it – syllable count...
November 25th, 2022 04:08 - Poem on a Plate (Neville)
Certainly one way of consolidating international relations is via a good...
November 24th, 2022 18:32 - Back Then (Fay Slimm.)
Those last two lines really talked to me.. If only.
Is this your...
November 24th, 2022 18:12 - When Things Were Perfectly Perfect (Neville)
Them old mirrors (I frequent old junk and antique shops) reflect me...
November 24th, 2022 04:26 - Fulfilment of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Nothing wrong with having a happy life;
I reckon, hard as it’s been,...
November 24th, 2022 04:16 - \"Salacious Sal\" (MendedFences27)
Kept me guessing and off on my own fantasies along the way....
That\'s...
November 23rd, 2022 23:13 - new car (Arqios)
A plea from the heart and wet feet.
Can be a bit of a lottery when it...
November 23rd, 2022 03:30 - And It Rains. (Goldfinch60)
I asked the rain to go away….
It did, makes out I’m a liar;
But...
November 23rd, 2022 03:22 - Lyric-less (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Message (if any) is the most important part of the whole enterprise. If...
November 23rd, 2022 00:19 - The State of Australia (Lord Montgomery)
I too like the old poets. But if the best you can do with these...
November 23rd, 2022 00:02 - Trying too hard (Hzugman)
Remove the 18+. Kids love a good fart......
November 22nd, 2022 16:26 - Seeing (Fay Slimm.)
What is left to say after Neville took his turn?
In addition I will add,...
November 22nd, 2022 07:43 - For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain (Neville)
Although I willingly give it, you don\'t really need an endorsement from...
November 22nd, 2022 07:21 - Flaming Computers! (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
This way, sympathy vote from me:
Refs below – We’ve been there...
November 22nd, 2022 07:00 - Progress? (Hzugman)
Certain truth there, H.
November 21st, 2022 18:10 - Kinship (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, \"those lazy, hazy, crazy days of summer\" - First there\'s Andy,...
November 21st, 2022 07:36 - Three Summers (Neville)
Like the old fisherman\'s craft has such a central role in the craft of...
November 21st, 2022 07:27 - Simon And Garfunkel. (Goldfinch60)
Oh the memories you bring back:
Each when ‘Those were the days my...
November 21st, 2022 07:16 - Alone At Last (MendedFences27)
I feel all caught up in this one, MF.
The whole issue of domestic...
November 20th, 2022 22:33 - A puzzle (Hzugman)
Don\'t doubt, just enjoy.......
November 20th, 2022 21:54 - Scatter Sunshine. (Goldfinch60)
I’m out of this then; good will is the proof:
If you want to drown...
November 20th, 2022 06:18 - Between Courses (Neville)
In the Algarve, or where?
November 20th, 2022 05:27 - Olivetti Moments (Neville)
Come on Nev - you coulda at least hired a row boat and said \"hello\" to...
November 19th, 2022 07:11 - Such A Glorious Day. (Goldfinch60)
Now what is it with this game of croquet
Which keeps you very engaged for...
November 19th, 2022 06:17 - Untitled - LXVI (SureshG)
As with all commentary which includes \'we\', my response is \'Speak for...
November 19th, 2022 01:58 - capricious recollections (Arqios)
Took several readings for again my literal mind to to work at this one...
November 18th, 2022 23:37 - Oranges (Gary Edward Geraci)
I hope you don\'t do that too often, Gary. Gives me a...
November 18th, 2022 20:29 - I Am One With Creation (Bella Shepard)
Your last eleven lines perfectly express feelings in me which over the...
November 18th, 2022 17:19 - Untitled - LXV (SureshG)
In a sense, a truth.
Thanks Suresh.
November 18th, 2022 07:07 - No Title (Makoto Maruyama)
There is no ultimate truth - or if there is, it\'s well beyond my reach.
November 18th, 2022 06:44 - Algarvia (Neville)
You are back, Nev! That’s a relief! Thought you might have succumbed to...
November 18th, 2022 03:55 - Peace And Love. (Goldfinch60)
But of course I can imagine
A world just so; let’s take the tour:
On...
November 18th, 2022 03:43
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