Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- An Uncertain Certainty (Neville)
My own Uncertain Certainty -
\"I really like old guys\", she...
January 13th, 2023 20:50 - I am a woman. (That1_13yrold_writer)
Still here? That\'s good.
January 13th, 2023 03:18 - Art (Sorenbarrett)
Nice one Soren. You have reached the right conclusion for me here -.it...
January 13th, 2023 03:11 - Philosophy And Reason. (Goldfinch60)
Good \'un, Andy - I wasn\'t aware you were that much of a sceptic, but can...
January 13th, 2023 03:00 - Feeling Saggy Baggy (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
After that I felt saggy and baggy too....visuals cheered me up a...
January 12th, 2023 00:16 - \"Depression\" does not belong in quotations. (That1_13yrold_writer)
I am not sure an 80 something male has any right to intervene, advise or...
January 11th, 2023 17:34 - The Violin Wept (Bella Shepard)
What a subtle way of providing an angry (sad?) political message, Bella....
January 11th, 2023 07:01 - Distractions (Bella Shepard)
I find Bella, as each day, month, year passes I come to welcome silence...
January 11th, 2023 06:52 - From the Cradle to a Grave (Neville)
I want no credit for my life. I\'ll pass judgement on it myself (credits...
January 11th, 2023 06:37 - So What Does Your Father Do (Neville)
Good question, Nev. Ofttimes it more than determines your own path way in...
January 11th, 2023 06:21 - Taken From the Diary of a Contented Man (Neville)
Got it completely, Nev - and I\'ll be saying it tomorrow too...
January 11th, 2023 06:15 - Get Off the Pot (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
But wot pot are you coming off of, PV?
January 11th, 2023 03:45 - I, Am But a Puzzle (M.E.M.)
Liked this, but are you a conundrum to yourself? Ignore them and focus on...
January 11th, 2023 03:41 - 20 Hours to Memphis (MendedFences27)
A story, Phil with the absolute ring of truth. Became totally involved....
January 11th, 2023 03:35 - And that\'s the truth (Hzugman)
I\'ve got nothing against trannies, mate - even though I don\'t understand...
January 11th, 2023 03:18 - Glory Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Like your live for the moment, Andy
January 11th, 2023 03:12 - Cruising Past the Billboard That Declares: “It’s Ok to Say Gay” (Rocky Lagou)
Rocky – as usual you have turned great lines in support of something you...
January 11th, 2023 01:33 - You Broke My Heart At Walmart And I Cried All The Way To Sears (Charles69)
How many buy and buy as a substitute for a lack in other parts of their...
January 11th, 2023 01:11 - Villanelle in Subzero (Rocky Lagou)
When you mention that the villanelle is a difficult form I can only but...
December 21st, 2022 16:30 - Fear of Flying Solo (Neville)
I\'m torn apart by this one, Nev.
On one hand I have an absolute...
December 21st, 2022 06:49 - Ageless (Fay Slimm.)
\"kept lively..... with regular minding\" is hard work but gloriously...
December 21st, 2022 06:40 - Together And Forever. (Goldfinch60)
Don’t know if I can do this:
Declarations have been many.
I understand...
December 21st, 2022 03:33 - Jigsaw (Sorenbarrett)
\'Analogy\' is not quite right; neither is \'metaphor\' - But I\'m here to...
December 20th, 2022 18:39 - Disaster Trumps Competition. (Doggerel Dave)
Thanks mate. And I\'m not getting at Andy here - but I really would like...
December 20th, 2022 06:10 - Beautiful Atheism (Jenny.g)
For what it\'s worth, I think you should operate on the basis of your...
December 20th, 2022 06:01 - As a Matter of Fact It’s a Fact (Neville)
Wot\'s a Christmas card (never send \'em - is that why I don\'t get...
December 20th, 2022 05:50 - Spring Approaches Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
How can you only hope it’s on its way
When you know there can be no...
December 20th, 2022 04:21 - Wonderful World (Saxon Crow)
Beautiful irony/satire/fantasy there, Sax.
December 20th, 2022 01:42 - Beautiful Atheism (Jenny.g)
Great to know you are a good person.
I\'m not sure that your atheism...
December 19th, 2022 23:37 - Take Out the Trash! (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Yuk! I\'m a compulsive hand washer, and after your very vivid piece, I...
December 19th, 2022 23:27 - Naturally Tidy? (Saxon Crow)
Great imagery in this parable, Sax.
Unfortunately Mum will be exerting...
December 19th, 2022 18:59 - Why Can’t We Always be Like This. (Goldfinch60)
Competition – an essential component
Which artificially constructs a...
December 19th, 2022 03:17 - On the Verge of Another New Year (Neville)
I doubt any Xmas card publisher would buy it, Nev (you may have to keep...
December 19th, 2022 02:30 - The Things One Remembers (Neville)
Cheering the crawfish, Nev - Glad the delirium has dissipated.
December 18th, 2022 17:38 - Music In Life. (Goldfinch60)
All you want is music! music! music!
No worries Andy, you’re in good...
December 18th, 2022 03:25 - Tories Steal From Purses Of Nurses (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
This is one of your best, mate - instead of a focus on the misdemeanors ...
December 18th, 2022 03:17 - Enemies within (Oludare Joshua)
Yes, the world is definitely out of joint. I think that goes for politics...
December 17th, 2022 22:57 - Beginning (Fay Slimm.)
A symptom of a sick system...
Aid - yes; action - yes.
What form should...
December 17th, 2022 18:04 - Saint of Faults (Gary Edward Geraci)
Such a vivid picture you paint, Gary.
Evokes a similar feeling to a...
December 17th, 2022 17:50 - Gratefulness. (Goldfinch60)
I do enjoy being here,
I’ll be sorry to depart
When life for me is so...
December 17th, 2022 07:20 - For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There (Neville)
Well, You certainly do your best Nev, and no one can ask any more of you...
December 16th, 2022 16:29 - Jingle Bills (Sorenbarrett)
For some genuine Christians, all this commercialisation must rankle. For...
December 16th, 2022 16:14 - Lullaby Dreams (Saxon Crow)
Smooth Sax, very smooth.
December 16th, 2022 03:34 - Easy Lives. (Goldfinch60)
Wot no central heating?
That does take some beating:
Gas oven...
December 16th, 2022 03:28 - Sombras (Sorenbarrett)
Viva Espania , or Portugal or sommat.....
December 15th, 2022 22:56 - Poetry to me! (Tia K)
To write a poem about writing a poem seems like great fun, OK - job done....
December 15th, 2022 22:50 - A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing (Neville)
Yeh - the ageing process - tell me about it.......
Nah, don\'t remind...
December 15th, 2022 03:39 - Be That Light. (Goldfinch60)
Reciprocal relationships
Are what help to keep us steady
Those...
December 15th, 2022 03:34 - So, You Made A Mistake (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
I think you are right:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129289
December 15th, 2022 00:35 - New Life Of Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
Choice of music sublime today: thanks Andy.
December 14th, 2022 19:07 - Panic (Sorenbarrett)
Impending doom I cannot quite place... Thankfully once I declined the...
December 14th, 2022 19:01 - Challenge (Fay Slimm.)
Nothing here metaphorical in my response, but I\'m motivated to do it...
December 14th, 2022 18:54 - The Gardeness (Neville)
Alas, Neville - alas...
\'Tis the way of gardens....or at least human...
December 14th, 2022 05:37 - New Life Of Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
Here all must be happy you found your way:
Wish it could be the same for...
December 14th, 2022 05:22 - Ukraine in Winter (Neville)
Apposite reminder of a hideous situation existing while most of us enjoy...
December 13th, 2022 20:13 - That Half-Smile (Fay Slimm.)
Your picture and words combine to completely cover, and at the same time...
December 13th, 2022 20:00 - ECO WARRIOR (Michael Edwards)
I don\'t know if it was intentional (I suspect it was ...) but the drawing...
December 13th, 2022 18:52 - Another Fine DAy. (Goldfinch60)
And therefore what else need to be said?
Here’s a day complete unto...
December 13th, 2022 03:27 - The Cost of Living (Bella Shepard)
It is what keeps many (but certainly not all) with their \'nose to the...
December 12th, 2022 18:19 - Winter (Jerry Reynolds)
Well, having in my past experienced snow it can argue all it likes Jerry,...
December 12th, 2022 17:56 - Teeth (Quemis)
After the temptation to give amateur (drawn from experience) periodontic...
December 12th, 2022 17:48 - Squeaky wheel (Hzugman)
Comment for you only (not for many of the rest):
I like your long form -...
December 12th, 2022 17:33 - Sad Reminders (Fay Slimm.)
If it\'s not tin it was/is gold and sundry other of today\'s precious...
December 12th, 2022 17:14 - From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors (Neville)
This one really got to me, Nev. And while the temptation to give plain...
December 12th, 2022 17:02 - Can Ya Help? (Orchidee)
Have I missed something, or can\'t you get a \'no faults\' divorce these...
December 12th, 2022 04:23 - Just A Shower. (Goldfinch60)
All snowed up?
So I see….
Need a cup
Of whisky?
Don’t bother to...
December 12th, 2022 04:06 - The Cost of Living (Bella Shepard)
Is this one of those short forms they do here sometimes that I\'ve never...
December 11th, 2022 19:07 - Lady in Pursuit. (Chris Duffy)
Phew, Chris - please don\'t send her my way, this old boneshaker would...
December 11th, 2022 19:01 - Mr Perpendicular (Neville)
....Or a solution .... maybe...perhaps...
With absolute certainty I\'d...
December 11th, 2022 04:16 - And It Snowed. (Goldfinch60)
I hope you understand I am going slow.
Not interested in snow, you...
December 11th, 2022 04:04 - There\'s Alot More... (Gunwanti Harish Thanvi)
Yes, yes and yes…. You should bottle that feeling for life and spray it...
December 10th, 2022 22:14 - I’m So Frightened of These Lights (AuburnScribbler)
\"Christmas\" (or I, as a non believer prefer \' The Festive Season\')...
December 10th, 2022 19:06 - I Won\'t Look (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
I just hope you get a pay rise...
As a dedication to those who get on...
December 10th, 2022 18:52 - Cat as trophy (Sorenbarrett)
Black cat in witness box ? A convincing Meow?
Glad your are out now,...
December 10th, 2022 18:45 - You Can\'t Nap In Cairo (Cressida Cane)
A rich painting of a city I know nothing about.. Almost, however felt line...
December 10th, 2022 06:44 - Long Life Pleasure. (Goldfinch60)
Pleasure at your leisure sounds good to me;
I do what I can with what...
December 10th, 2022 05:16 - A bit of nonsense! (Tallisman)
But funny nonsense, none the less: I enjoyed it. Two nonsenses perfectly...
December 9th, 2022 22:08 - Less Trodden (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks Fay – At first read (usually fairly superficial) methought this...
December 9th, 2022 17:37 - When Size is Not Everything (Neville)
Shows to go just how unwithit I am - thought the Prof G would blow...
December 9th, 2022 08:21 - Joy And Freedom. (Goldfinch60)
Hallelujah,
You all did sing -
Next year, ‘see ya
Can’t wait for...
December 9th, 2022 08:06 - Changes (Fay Slimm.)
A meditative moving word picture of smooth trouble free change, Fay.
December 9th, 2022 01:31 - Hidden (Neville)
Irony, ain\'t it?
PS: searched \'pantomime\' in relation to...
December 9th, 2022 01:23 - The new math (Hzugman)
Come on, Mate - you know you are an undergraduate at the University of...
December 9th, 2022 01:15 - Nowhere (Sorenbarrett)
Definitely a Dreamtime - a place where negativity could have a positive...
December 8th, 2022 17:48 - The New Watch. (Goldfinch60)
I ain’t got no phone.
Double negative?
Means I ain’t got one;
I...
December 8th, 2022 03:58 - head gear all in poe (Arqios)
Not sure it\'s gonna help, Rik....
December 8th, 2022 03:25 - Moon Of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Of course you do arise,
(Your love is so strong)
Before the day...
December 7th, 2022 03:28 - The Woke Stick (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Don\'t understand this woke thing (I don\'t) Is it the next move after...
December 6th, 2022 20:30 - What We Don\'t See (Saxon Crow)
Woo Woo - well writ as usual....but...but... weird, Sax
December 6th, 2022 20:26 - angel envy (Arqios)
I think you better stay with orchi - I\'m out of my depth again....🙂
December 6th, 2022 19:46 - Nature\'s Life. (Goldfinch60)
You are lucky you still have some my friend;
Not sure your grandchildren...
December 6th, 2022 03:34 - Haibun-2 (Jerry Reynolds)
Dusting - vacuuming - mopping ..................................... Trying...
December 5th, 2022 18:57 - Creatures of Nature (Bella Shepard)
Amid the cacophony of modern life it can be well nigh impossible to hear...
December 5th, 2022 18:46 - Sheltered from the Storm (M.E.M.)
Can happen. Certainly I\'ve had that experience under (of course) totally...
December 5th, 2022 18:37 - Daily Teacher. (Goldfinch60)
When? It’s cloudy with possible showers;
Don’t tell me it doesn’t...
December 5th, 2022 03:54 - And On And On And On (M.E.M.)
\"A death trap on two wheels.......... license for less than a month...
December 4th, 2022 20:12 - Laura - A Limerick (Classicmister)
Was an excuse this old fellow called Ted
Made for a decision to leave...
December 4th, 2022 19:36 - Journey to the soul in hope to find the self (Poetic Dan)
Much wisdom and insight in there, Dan. You do justice to the journey you...
December 4th, 2022 19:10 - The Testosterone Terminator (James Cameron) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Strange is right. Has he lost all his and doesn\'t want to be the only
December 4th, 2022 05:55 - Leaf(p) of faith (Saxon Crow)
Sax, you have been missed, I\'m sure. Great parable in flowing verse. Do...
December 4th, 2022 05:50
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