Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Dancing in the snow (HannahElisabeth)
In terms of structure alone this makes, for me a great piece of verse...
August 31st, 2021 00:11 - MIND GAMES (Andy Hunter)
Yes - and do it now, Andy.
August 30th, 2021 22:38 - Heartbeat to heartbeat (Florence J)
Thanks for responding. Need I add that I hope that all future activity in...
August 30th, 2021 06:13 - I\'m Jealous of Mary Jane (Kingdomcleeves)
Not only is he a dope head, he\'s a dope as well - doesn\'t know what...
August 30th, 2021 05:14 - Dumbness (Fay Slimm.)
Human need and \'Love\' - so freely bandied about here - weaponised, Fay.
August 30th, 2021 05:03 - Heartbeat to heartbeat (Florence J)
Can\'t say I understand this issue completely (I\'m male) but I felt your...
August 30th, 2021 04:57 - It\'s Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60)
Anyone left?? 😊 😊
August 30th, 2021 04:35 - Wanderlust (Lorna)
Aren\'t you being just a little too understanding there,...
August 29th, 2021 20:29 - The toupee in the pub. (Chris Duffy)
With the hat no need for the toup. Feels to me like Your pub\'s habitues...
August 29th, 2021 18:14 - A Permanent Embrace (Neville)
(He tried to save her from the foggy foggy dew, but there woz a cold...
August 29th, 2021 17:56 - I ain\'t mad (Merissa)
Right then Merissa: That, plus your explanation is a powerful picture of...
August 29th, 2021 17:33 - FIFTY YEARS FROM NOW (PETERHARRISON)
An imaginative write enjoyable the way SF is.
But come on - bring it...
August 29th, 2021 06:45 - Then Maybe (Jo)
I think you are right - but if at anytime you wanted to change, then let...
August 29th, 2021 05:32 - Pleasures (Fay Slimm.)
Go for it with every fibre of your being........
August 29th, 2021 05:27 - Please be Gentle (Saxon Crow)
Good counsel there Sax. Are you, or have been, in one of the caring...
August 29th, 2021 01:46 - Thankfulness. (Goldfinch60)
IF in a good position, then let\'s enjoy, be thankful but not...
August 29th, 2021 01:40 - Tethered To A Moment (Flyingfish)
Plenty of tension there - imaginative write or real, I experienced...
August 29th, 2021 01:35 - Proof of My Charity (Gary Edward Geraci)
Hi Gary – I’ve just seen the Utube presentation by your Bishop and...
August 29th, 2021 00:42 - Take Out (KarvelD)
Not absolutely sure where you are coming from, but it makes an interesting...
August 28th, 2021 21:49 - Man and Woman (Chandan chatterjee)
A clear expression of traditional roles in troubled times.
Thanks for...
August 28th, 2021 21:32 - An Old Promise Well Kept (Neville)
A bond, broken by circumstance, but his side of the contract never...
August 28th, 2021 05:22 - Learn to Dance (Flyingfish)
A straightforward portrait of a long term relationship - with more depth...
August 28th, 2021 00:45 - GOING AWAY FOR A WHILE. (The elder poet)
Another site?? I had a vision of you roaring off on your Harley deep into...
August 27th, 2021 19:39 - Bus Folk (AuburnScribbler)
You know Ben, it really wasn\'t necessary to visit your home page to know...
August 27th, 2021 19:27 - She Calls Them Tears (Neville)
Ah Neville, such loss…such unspoken grief… that salt can still be felt...
August 27th, 2021 18:37 - Shut Up Shutting Up? (Orchidee)
I thought we had got 1066 and your future singing career sorted back in ...
August 27th, 2021 03:46 - EIEIO (Coyote)
Yes you have got it , C. But some people cannot live without something...
August 26th, 2021 20:32 - A LIFE TIME. (The elder poet)
I can\'t relate to the next two thousand years , but you have nailed the...
August 26th, 2021 20:19 - Holding On (Jerry Reynolds)
....fully true....I\'ve been pondering a
way to induce tears...but the...
August 26th, 2021 20:10 - Displacement (BusyB)
I think you have a truth nailed. Thanks for putting it out there.
August 26th, 2021 08:27 - Weeds by Nickname Cursed (Flyingfish)
Oh - goodness me! where did they come from, John?
August 26th, 2021 04:32 - Home (Jay-Lee Jane)
Keep at it, Jane. You have a place here.
I\'ve lived in Australia for...
August 26th, 2021 04:29 - dictators are like amplifiers (Jon Nakapalau)
You might classify this as surrealist, Jon, but the symbiotic relationship...
August 25th, 2021 21:46 - They Say (Jim Jimminy)
Should never have been there in the first place, but if there, behave like...
August 25th, 2021 21:37 - Flag of My Fathers (Coyote)
As above, really - Owing to time difference I\'ve come late...
Mid...
August 25th, 2021 20:18 - ᴇᴘʜᴇᴍᴇʀᴀʟ ᴀs ʟᴏᴠᴇ ᴍᴀʏ ʙᴇ (Dove)
Love passes to abiding regard and care....Or am I missing the...
August 25th, 2021 20:00 - A Hedgerow Chant (Langton)
Nothing to add - that shortie said it all. Many thanks.
August 25th, 2021 19:53 - GREAT OAK (PETERHARRISON)
As memory of a certain time in my life, an old English oak does it for...
August 25th, 2021 19:49 - The land of Anon. (Doggerel Dave)
The political systems of every country in the world should be our focus, I...
August 25th, 2021 19:05 - An Unexpected Chaos (Neville)
Nobody\'s perfect, Nev.
I\'m not, but I aspire to create an environment...
August 25th, 2021 04:23 - Cloistered (Fay Slimm.)
All that erotic literature, all that erotic content on line - all...
August 25th, 2021 01:46 - Do I Qualify? (Goldfinch60)
I\'m sure the sales person was too tactful, too circumspect really Andy,...
August 25th, 2021 01:26 - Perpetual Insanity (Coyote)
Thanks, C for applying your poetic talent to war, something which has...
August 24th, 2021 20:51 - Two Herds, Two Fates (Flyingfish)
I’ve tried hard not to comment on your piece here. This represents...
August 24th, 2021 19:59 - A Pair of Men (Jay-Lee Jane)
Great structure to the poem and clear descriptions of the two characters I...
August 24th, 2021 19:19 - A Cat Called Rabbit (Langton)
Yes, this is a ‘well done’ piece of poetry. Brings out the reminiscent...
August 24th, 2021 08:50 - Perception (Fay Slimm.)
Play on Fay, play on – and please give eternity, infinity and now...
August 24th, 2021 08:32 - Superfluity (Jo)
And neither should you be obliged to.
Mum wants to fulfill her desired...
August 24th, 2021 05:54 - Where Did The Time Go? (Goldfinch60)
Happens to me often enough , Andy. Even with the task list, half the items...
August 24th, 2021 01:33 - When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud (Neville)
Value the human with a conscience, Nev - sometimes I believe they are...
August 24th, 2021 01:27 - Aqua Regia (HannahElisabeth)
Another one down done and dusted. As a bloke (guy) should I start to feel...
August 24th, 2021 01:18 - Superman (Anthony Esposito)
I am unsure if this is high satire or some expression of an unmet...
August 23rd, 2021 19:33 - The Fullest of Moons (Neville)
I can see two seriously intriguing pictures here , Nev - the first, your...
August 23rd, 2021 08:01 - Worry (Lorna)
I never knew you cared, Lorna.....
A polished write that speaks of...
August 23rd, 2021 04:02 - The Within (Flyingfish)
Plenty of intelligence and thought been thrown at this question - to me it...
August 23rd, 2021 02:27 - Fools and Horses (Jim Jimminy)
I\'ve had a few jobs in my time, one or two interesting some just this...
August 23rd, 2021 01:02 - Fools and Horses (Jim Jimminy)
Meat = meet.
Change and I\'ll scrub this.
August 23rd, 2021 00:50 - Mime (Coyote)
I know that feeling. Why? (and this is not directed at you C, but to any...
August 23rd, 2021 00:41 - A Very Personal Holocaust (Neville)
Much hard graft went into that, Nev – and more worthy grounds would be...
August 22nd, 2021 20:33 - A Dream (Dove)
Lust, (sorry) - Last stanza got me to perfection. The rest? Yeh well, if...
August 22nd, 2021 19:45 - Until Day (Fay Slimm.)
All my hopes, as time for bed approaches, are to be found, much more...
August 22nd, 2021 19:28 - Corporal Punishment (Chris Duffy)
Of the men who return from totally unnecessary wars, far too many find...
August 22nd, 2021 07:05 - Old Clock (Lorna)
Ignore it, Lorna, ignore it. Agree with the sentiment embodied in your...
August 22nd, 2021 04:30 - The Issue About Tissues (Cygnus X-1)
Congratulations on a neat little rhymer on the toilet tissue riots!
Was...
August 21st, 2021 23:38 - Lands Sake! (Lorna)
Oh lordy - love the vernacular, Lorna. Are You hunkered down OK? Roof...
August 21st, 2021 22:34 - The Vellichor of Canterbury Library (Dove)
New word education…You are at it again, Dove. I doubt I will remember...
August 21st, 2021 22:16 - AGE. (The elder poet)
A neat write, ep.
Sad I know in some ways, but you can only offer. And...
August 21st, 2021 21:47 - Hashtag (Jim Jimminy)
I don\'t do cyber friendships, all I have is my PC, became acquainted with...
August 21st, 2021 08:14 - Read all about it (Jim Jimminy)
You might have classified this as Humour, .....but I\'ll not be laughing...
August 21st, 2021 08:02 - Caught (Fay Slimm.)
The slave trade, which is not equal opportunity, exploits many thousands,...
August 21st, 2021 05:48 - Limerence (Neville)
Been there, both sides at different times…..did not enjoy either:...
August 21st, 2021 05:08 - Prolonged offal bout courtesy constipation... redux a worse hellish fate than perdition (Rew4er2nail)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ic3g8Xnf7LI&ab_channel=cojwat
August 20th, 2021 23:43 - OPEN FLY (Joe Marcello)
That woz a surprise after the title.... \'Tis an intriguing question.....
August 20th, 2021 22:19 - You (HannahElisabeth)
Gotcha - hung and framed, but especially hung; perfect material just...
August 20th, 2021 21:59 - Options (Jerry Reynolds)
Thanks Jerry.
That news will drive you to ........Nah - start again -...
August 20th, 2021 21:47 - Never No More (Lorna)
Yes Lorna precisely right - takes time to learn that uninformed opinion...
August 20th, 2021 21:36 - Road Works God. (Goldfinch60)
That Road Works God is, I find, particularly active in months May and June...
August 20th, 2021 20:08 - One Of My Teeth Fell Out Yesterday. (Trenz Pruca)
Sorry, Trenz - I encounter this problem from time to time and complain on...
August 20th, 2021 19:46 - Untitled #2 (Neville)
Yeh ... not a bad idea, really.. gotta meet fire with fire.... Thanks...
August 20th, 2021 04:16 - The Angle of Her Lay (Neville)
A leisurely ride over some interesting cuntry, Nev. (As Hamlet might...
August 20th, 2021 01:54 - Leave it there ! (Chris Duffy)
Love takes hard work (precisely what you are doing, I think, Chris) It...
August 20th, 2021 01:03 - Switch Off (Coyote)
All of the above C, and then some....
You aren\'t leaving us to write...
August 20th, 2021 00:47 - Fury (Lorna)
Thanks Lorna – that ‘s a very vivid account of a thunder storm…in...
August 19th, 2021 07:31 - The Honeybee (Classicmister)
The role of bees in the environment, their function in keeping us fed,...
August 19th, 2021 04:31 - [ Execution ] (Heart of Babel)
Don\'t get it.
And no; it is not compulsory to love a freak.
August 18th, 2021 23:52 - Untitled 2 (Coyote)
If memory serves me correctly. I\'ve stated this before:
Man made God...
August 18th, 2021 18:13 - Left to Bleed (Valerie Alexandra)
I can only vote as ep above: The pain will fade, heal, get...
August 18th, 2021 18:04 - Human Voice (Speechmax21)
Stay absent thanks.
Product promotion , not poetry.
August 18th, 2021 17:48 - Chance (Fay Slimm.)
\'Romantic notion\'?
Come on Fay, that woz lust, not very pure but...
August 18th, 2021 03:59 - It\'s Just Physics (HannahElisabeth)
Not good in this area at all now Hannah: Would you term that a...
August 18th, 2021 01:21 - Nonsense to Help Me Sleep (Coyote)
Didn’t have much choice, really did you, C?
You can’t count sheep...
August 17th, 2021 18:23 - Ennui (Lorna)
But Lorna , I\'m still not sure if Uncle Vanya flogged off the...
August 17th, 2021 06:26 - Us (Fay Slimm.)
I feel a little sorry for you folks in the northern hemisphere; although...
August 17th, 2021 04:59 - Elusive Blues (Neville)
I\'m not a painter... so I think I would have to get closer to make my own...
August 17th, 2021 04:34 - Destiny (Classicmister)
Could be...I\'m not sure...but fate or not, your portrait is fair comment...
August 16th, 2021 08:24 - Alt. End #6 (aka The Truth of it all) (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Humpty is no orphan - don\'t we all get trampled on by \'the governments...
August 16th, 2021 08:19 - With Peace to Induce (Accidental Poet)
Really?
August 16th, 2021 08:10 - Sunday Shivers (Lorna)
Sunday? used to be a bugger once.. now? Long time retired, Sunday just...
August 16th, 2021 07:46 - Yellows (Fay Slimm.)
Yellow – one of my favourite c……s. Seriously – a high performance...
August 16th, 2021 04:30 - Thanks to Covid (Neville)
Just a teeny bit enigmatic, Nev.
‘Like to elucidate?
‘t’s not...
August 16th, 2021 04:14
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