Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Muslin or Silk (Iva Hotko)
Iva, the rich poetic examination of a relationship or encounter not quite...
March 9th, 2023 05:33 - A Lion\'s Share-In (Orchidee)
Heavy duty job. Works weekends as well? Gets double time or only time and...
March 9th, 2023 03:55 - Hands Dealt. (Goldfinch60)
Had some lucky hands, Andy - some get nothing but duds because the dealer...
March 9th, 2023 03:49 - Lovesick Justice (Sameera)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
March 9th, 2023 03:34 - Selective outrage (Ok Waleed)
Oh I\'m far better than you - I hate human beings, but love...
March 8th, 2023 16:52 - With Both Eyes Closed (Neville)
Literal mind intrudes once more...Please elucidate the terminology for the...
March 8th, 2023 08:12 - Worship Me? (Orchidee)
I don\'t get it - who said the devil had title rights to all that stuff...
March 8th, 2023 07:38 - Green Or Grey. (Goldfinch60)
Good you got the thought, Andy.
March 8th, 2023 03:44 - Odrorir and the 18th charm (Sorenbarrett)
Started life with a classical education,, Soren?
I\'d vote to play the...
March 7th, 2023 19:30 - Dwelling Delights 2 (Orchidee)
Don\'t tell anyone, but Dwelling Delights 1 has snuck into the tents of...
March 7th, 2023 18:32 - New Way In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks for the Johnny Cash version of Ghost riders, Andy. Couldn\'t...
March 7th, 2023 18:19 - In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye (Neville)
In the time it takes to read your poem, I got me a good rhythm...
March 7th, 2023 07:52 - In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps (Neville)
Yep - Nice to have me.... too late ; I\'ll start earlier next time....
March 6th, 2023 16:41 - World Hunger Is Never Ending (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
\"Please, please, please
Research to who you are giving\"
Great piece...
March 6th, 2023 16:35 - Kumquats (2781)
🤣Keep the kumquat trees, otherwise he\'ll be at your wood work...
March 6th, 2023 07:20 - The Beautiful World Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
Yep - I think that\'s your environment rather than the cinema,
March 6th, 2023 07:11 - Jump From Temple Top? (Orchidee)
So is this from where the middle ages\' test for a witch was conceived,...
March 6th, 2023 03:53 - Angel of My Dreams (Dove)
I have room on my other shoulder for one more, Dove.....😇!!!
March 6th, 2023 00:29 - Goodbye to Yesterday\'s Pain, Hello to a Brighter Tomorrow (Ghelay)
There\'s more to you than meets the eye:
First poem here, an on going...
March 5th, 2023 18:47 - Alone (Harshita)
One poem, no background, no other poems read....
On the evidence...
March 5th, 2023 18:23 - Helpful Hope (Orchidee)
The body of the poem is far too technical for my sinple mind, orchi - thus...
March 5th, 2023 06:59 - Lost In The Cinema. (Goldfinch60)
Not often I go for nostalgia (you do, Andy - but I\'m not all that keen),...
March 5th, 2023 06:22 - Forget the Name Remember the Taste (Neville)
Nice to give me a warning, Nev.... You will get no competitioon for her...
March 5th, 2023 06:03 - Yume no seirei (Sorenbarrett)
Totally creeped out Soren, plus your commentary did not make me feel one...
March 5th, 2023 00:52 - The Waltz (A.D. Small)
A tango sounds more your style.
March 5th, 2023 00:44 - Innocent & Pure (Dove)
Has she got a sister?😇!!
March 4th, 2023 18:45 - The Duck With No Web Feet (Eileen Clark)
A feathered tale of a duck with extraordinary talents unrecognised by the...
March 4th, 2023 18:38 - A Necessary Evil (Bella Shepard)
About halfway through Bella, I was sure you were heading for a divorce and...
March 4th, 2023 16:35 - Stones To Bread? (Orchidee)
The tempter needs to be bought into line.
With you and KP it should be a...
March 4th, 2023 04:21 - Underdog Days (Neville)
Definitely for some other odd reason, Nev...😇
I know you like and...
March 4th, 2023 04:03 - Small To Large Steps. (Goldfinch60)
We marching or something, Andy? Can\'t be right - marching steps are...
March 4th, 2023 03:55 - Cry (Cutietwinx08)
\"Im not a good poet\" Try this:
...
March 4th, 2023 03:40 - Reflections (Sorenbarrett)
Don\'t quite know how I came so late to the party.... though it does mean...
March 3rd, 2023 18:52 - Blood of Life (Smit (Vahi \'Agyat\'))
While I have absolute respect for the way you address a sometimes...
March 3rd, 2023 18:32 - Lasting Love (Orchidee)
I wonder why God hasn\'t suffered a nervous breakdown by now..... 😇
March 3rd, 2023 03:49 - Almost Without Purpose (Neville)
Q&A: What is the last thing which passes through the insect’s mind as...
March 3rd, 2023 03:33 - Minutes (Gamerfairy)
A very balanced view of a past relationship not often (or ever ) found on...
March 2nd, 2023 23:18 - My Best Day (John_Bingham)
A little grim for a first poem; I hope that doesn\'t set the tone for your...
March 2nd, 2023 23:08 - Knight in the night (Sonali)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
March 2nd, 2023 22:34 - Him (Anfisa)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
March 2nd, 2023 22:28 - Dark Side Of Hope (Iva Hotko)
Fully endorsed re hope. Hope and prayer expressed become the justification...
March 2nd, 2023 19:13 - Troll. (Doggerel Dave)
Editorial note: I\'m top of the pops at MPS (see \'Trending now\'). Never...
March 2nd, 2023 18:48 - FOOTBALL PUNDITS (Michael Edwards)
To keep their head in the middle of the game saves them coming out to view...
March 2nd, 2023 18:37 - Agnes of God (Neville)
Story of the good Lord Buddha I\'d never heard...... 🙂
March 2nd, 2023 04:54 - But Is It Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
What you have Andy, is a matter you wish to convey, utilising, broadly a...
March 2nd, 2023 04:46 - Going On In Grace (Orchidee)
That Spirit is a \'he\'? \'Strengthen, renew\'? Apologies, but it all...
March 2nd, 2023 04:39 - Dirty Pigs (Kaca6996)
I\'m with orchi here - pigs are highly intelligent but not given (as so...
March 1st, 2023 18:16 - Forgiveness Fullness (Orchidee)
You are just evil, orchi - all those sins piled up to be...
March 1st, 2023 06:03 - Let’s Not Forget Syria #2 (Neville)
Sidelined, I\'m afraid, Nev.
All we know about Syria (or anywhere else...
March 1st, 2023 05:19 - Respect Deserved. (Goldfinch60)
Please define your terms, Andy. If you mean respect for Authority, then...
March 1st, 2023 04:02 - Old together (Sorenbarrett)
I didn\'t believe you had a misery poem in you, Soren. Can you make the...
March 1st, 2023 02:11 - Some Resent Our Comment and Become Absent (Mvvenkataraman)
Waste of time.
February 28th, 2023 21:49 - Mirror, Mirror On The Wall (Iva Hotko)
Elusive is my inner voice – occasionally I think I’ve cut through,...
February 28th, 2023 18:37 - Some Resent Our Comment and Become Absent (Mvvenkataraman)
Focus on your title, which is easier to understand than all that...
February 28th, 2023 17:57 - Leftovers (Neville)
A well painted still life, Nev ...I\'m tempted to take the lot to \'Save...
February 28th, 2023 04:06 - Through Troubles (Orchidee)
My old landline phone is giving me no end of trouble - glad to see your...
February 28th, 2023 03:59 - Brain Awakening. (Goldfinch60)
Insomnia rules, Andy.....Still you can trip downstairs and write a fresh...
February 28th, 2023 03:36 - Polar Bear (Thinkerbell)
Don\'t delude yourself - there\'s nothing \'dear\' about me....🙃
February 27th, 2023 22:52 - Indifferent Nature (Fay Slimm.)
Frozen shoulder is indifferent too. I hope it doesn\'t last as long as...
February 27th, 2023 18:48 - I AM THE GREATEST POET ALIVE (Ok Waleed)
Get over yourself OK? 🙂
February 27th, 2023 18:14 - Polar Bear (Thinkerbell)
Given the trajectory the climate is on, the only polar bears alive will be...
February 27th, 2023 17:49 - Pandemic ITU ([email protected])
My fullest and undying (haven\'t had it yet - fully vaccinated and...
February 27th, 2023 17:35 - Hesitant to be neighborly (EvenwheniLie)
You don\'t know what bull shit is until you\'ve seen...
February 27th, 2023 17:20 - \"Mental Breakdown\" (Lv_2shiestyyy)
Existential questions.
February 27th, 2023 17:13 - Just in Case it Still Matters (Neville)
Orchi and the making up of the numbers....... I\'m doing my...
February 27th, 2023 06:12 - Insanity (Sorenbarrett)
I\'m no stranger to delusional folks, Soren, but could I request a little...
February 27th, 2023 05:15 - Sowing And Reaping (Orchidee)
Wow ..I didn\'t realise...I\'d have been more careful where I put it about...
February 27th, 2023 04:36 - Greenhouse Childhood (Arobot)
Solid message I like. Sooner or later those fragile beings surely must get...
February 26th, 2023 19:54 - Painting (Addy)
Some paintings....
February 26th, 2023 19:41 - The War Against Art (Ok Waleed)
Thanks, Mate. \'I was inspired heavily...\' By?
February 26th, 2023 19:39 - Mean for no reason (EvenwheniLie)
Thanks. The whole culture is shit.
February 26th, 2023 05:35 - The Creature from The City Of Lamps (Andino)
Since you have not told me anything about yourself, not read or commented...
February 26th, 2023 05:08 - Always Singularly Noticed (Neville)
Orchi, you are so deluded - It\'s me he\'s on about.... \"Under no...
February 26th, 2023 05:01 - Mission To Mankind (Orchidee)
His boss asked a lot of him....not sure he was being entirely fair -...
February 26th, 2023 04:54 - Winterlude (Neville)
Seem to remember some bloke walking on water...though it was a long time...
February 25th, 2023 19:49 - Winterlude (Neville)
Out of my depth there, Nev - I hope the ice is firm...🙂
February 25th, 2023 16:56 - When Jannis sang the blues (Sorenbarrett)
Agreed - Janis had something...no, more than something... A fitting...
February 25th, 2023 05:39 - Justice And Judgement (Orchidee)
I\'m beginning to believe you are older than that Lord... Do you pay rent...
February 25th, 2023 05:20 - AT OUR AGE!! (Goldfinch60)
\"We just do not understand,\" - That line, please eliminate. It occurs...
February 25th, 2023 05:06 - Michael Jackson (EvenwheniLie)
Not a healthy relationship? None of his latter years sound very healthy...
February 25th, 2023 00:30 - Where is the Naughty Step? (CST)
The situation is very deep, but as a working title \'Exasperated\' would...
February 25th, 2023 00:22 - I call out to you Nurse (CST)
I\'m really glad you received a good response - I missed out on you...
February 24th, 2023 17:58 - Returning Repentants (Orchidee)
Nah, Don\'t let\'s repent - just move on and let them pile up. You can...
February 24th, 2023 07:45 - When the Walls Were Magnolia (Neville)
You don\'t have to fess up to the identity of the \'he\' do you, Nev........
February 24th, 2023 07:35 - Footprints. (Goldfinch60)
They have to be special, but yes, they certainly do (or have) existed,...
February 24th, 2023 07:26 - The Kimono (Madam Butterfly not here). (Doggerel Dave)
So there you have it: Madam Butterfly was not involved in the making of...
February 24th, 2023 01:13 - Circle Of Life (Bella Shepard)
Your circle of life is really a link in a chain I feel, Bella. As you step...
February 24th, 2023 01:04 - Mama Said (Bella Wren)
Experiential learning.
February 24th, 2023 00:46 - Time for... (Orchidee)
Don\'t tell me you are taking Fido out for a walk? How can you let loose...
February 23rd, 2023 04:17 - Normal...right? (Ash :))
\"I hate myself and I hate my life
But I\'m a teenager so it\'s normal...
February 23rd, 2023 04:04 - Scientific breakthroughs (EvenwheniLie)
Greed is the word, mate - it pervades every level of a hierarchical...
February 23rd, 2023 03:44 - Blessings In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Not rebellion, Andy - just means you have enough dosh not to worry.
February 23rd, 2023 03:38 - A Brief Inconvenience (Neville)
Really? He took the subtle hint?
Wot a sensitive soul......
Thanks, Nev...
February 23rd, 2023 03:33 - Humble Heard (Orchidee)
Don\'t often turn out for your hymn poems orchi, but one part line caught...
February 23rd, 2023 00:43 - my everything. (Ayathebest55)
Better diversify - Poetry of the \'He did me wrong\' variety is an...
February 23rd, 2023 00:28 - Words and questions (Sorenbarrett)
Although I think you are over egging it slightly Soren, I do believe it...
February 22nd, 2023 17:41 - We Are Marching To The Beat Of Who\'s Drum? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
The situation seems, right now to go from bad to worse.
A neat summary of...
February 22nd, 2023 17:28 - War before peace (EvenwheniLie)
It never ends, does it?
A truthful portrayal of the situation right now.
February 22nd, 2023 06:26 - I Matter, To Me (Mara \"Marzipan\")
You learnt from your experience, learnt to make better initial choices -...
February 22nd, 2023 06:16 - Cloudy Coffee Day. (Goldfinch60)
Got me there, Andy. I tend to be with Soren (above) on this one....
February 22nd, 2023 06:10
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