Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Time for... (Orchidee) Don\'t tell me you are taking Fido out for a walk? How can you let loose...
  February 23rd, 2023 04:17
• Normal...right? (Ash :)) \"I hate myself and I hate my life But I\'m a teenager so it\'s normal...
  February 23rd, 2023 04:04
• Scientific breakthroughs (EvenwheniLie) Greed is the word, mate - it pervades every level of a hierarchical...
  February 23rd, 2023 03:44
• Blessings In Life. (Goldfinch60) Not rebellion, Andy - just means you have enough dosh not to worry.
  February 23rd, 2023 03:38
• A Brief Inconvenience (Neville) Really? He took the subtle hint? Wot a sensitive soul...... Thanks, Nev...
  February 23rd, 2023 03:33
• Humble Heard (Orchidee) Don\'t often turn out for your hymn poems orchi, but one part line caught...
  February 23rd, 2023 00:43
• my everything. (Ayathebest55) Better diversify - Poetry of the \'He did me wrong\' variety is an...
  February 23rd, 2023 00:28
• Words and questions (Sorenbarrett) Although I think you are over egging it slightly Soren, I do believe it...
  February 22nd, 2023 17:41
• We Are Marching To The Beat Of Who\'s Drum?  (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The situation seems, right now to go from bad to worse. A neat summary of...
  February 22nd, 2023 17:28
• War before peace (EvenwheniLie) It never ends, does it? A truthful portrayal of the situation right now.
  February 22nd, 2023 06:26
• I Matter, To Me (Mara \"Marzipan\") You learnt from your experience, learnt to make better initial choices -...
  February 22nd, 2023 06:16
• Cloudy Coffee Day. (Goldfinch60) Got me there, Andy. I tend to be with Soren (above) on this one....
  February 22nd, 2023 06:10
• Postulate (EvenwheniLie) You saying there is some meaning to it all, even if it is only pain?...
  February 21st, 2023 22:09
• The Convolutionals (EvenwheniLie) I repeat, as often as I can: Man made God in his own image and then...
  February 21st, 2023 21:55
• They want to look up your butt hole… (EvenwheniLie) What are you psychic? You cannot tell if I was upset. Only I can know...
  February 21st, 2023 21:51
• Past and present (EvenwheniLie) The past as justification for today\'s retribution - no! The past as a...
  February 21st, 2023 18:24
• They want to look up your butt hole… (EvenwheniLie) 😆 You didn\'t.
  February 21st, 2023 17:48
• Taken From a Diary Found (Neville) Get away with it in the stiff canteen....? Better than the mile high...
  February 21st, 2023 03:24
• Togethering (Fay Slimm.) Would that it were so, Fay...let\'s hope...
  February 21st, 2023 01:28
• Grim reaper (Addy) Not too keen on your Grim Reaper my self.....probably just a matter of...
  February 20th, 2023 18:58
• Why (Zuzu) There is nothing fair in this world. Understand that, swallow it and get...
  February 20th, 2023 18:40
• Lullaby Of Sin (Iva Hotko) The ephemeral stuff which result from my personal circumstances mean all...
  February 20th, 2023 18:36
• Freethinker (Medium Rare) (Gary Edward Geraci) Agreed - no thought is actually free or totally new, it always comes from...
  February 20th, 2023 18:21
• Finding connection in the disconnection (Sophenia) There\'s nothing wrong with being alone - as you rightly point out, you...
  February 20th, 2023 07:20
• Don\'t trust residential streets (Norman Flagtea) I know this is humorous, but haven\'t enough knowledge of the culture to...
  February 20th, 2023 03:56
• It Should Never Happen To a Vet  (Neville) Absobloodylutely, Nev. There are nothing but casualties - the only...
  February 20th, 2023 03:45
• Now hear this (Hzugman) Sage advice, H. Considered before being acted out?
  February 19th, 2023 20:17
• Nursing Home Nurse (Charles69) Are you (or they - I\'m a little confused) paid enough? Sounds like the...
  February 19th, 2023 20:12
• Blow Wind (Bella Shepard) Just the kind of greeting I need when I step outside on these very hot...
  February 19th, 2023 20:03
• Ghandi (what legends are made of) (Sorenbarrett) Without in anyway attempting to diminish Christ and Buddha, Gandhi should...
  February 19th, 2023 05:13
• Two Odd Numbers (Neville) Two odd numbers? I\'m not sure which, either the baked beans or the Kama...
  February 19th, 2023 04:55
• Redundant Crows (Neville) Really feel I should have used \'murmurations\' somewhere..... I\'ll keep...
  February 18th, 2023 20:32
• Barmy Birthday! (Orchidee) I wrote you a very long exquisitely (even if I do say so myself) worded...
  February 18th, 2023 20:16
• A New Widow\'s Winters Night by brenniewebb (Brenniewebb) Nice to hear - but no one knows who he is? You know who he is ....fame is...
  February 18th, 2023 20:06
• Fear the reaper (Madeleinedutronc) If everything is meaningless, then why fear your reaper? Be extracted from...
  February 18th, 2023 19:55
• Everything is Fake (Plumeria.flower12) In all probability you are suffering a dissociative state. Get it fixed.
  February 18th, 2023 19:53
• My ebbing physical prowess and strength (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Know how you feel...although I doubt I could open up quite like...
  February 18th, 2023 19:49
• The Self-Crowned Emperor Of The French (Joseph C Ogbonna) I “Don\'t know much about history” – or at least, not that early...
  February 18th, 2023 19:44
• My Nordic Christmas Story (Joseph C Ogbonna) I love the idea of Nigeria (where you claim to be from), subject to “icy...
  February 18th, 2023 19:41
• Tomorrow (Chris Duffy) The agony of it all... right to end it that way - truth will out, Chris....
  February 17th, 2023 19:22
• Taking My Shot (FallingAwake2) The only redeeming feature of this piece (apart from the fact that it is...
  February 17th, 2023 19:03
• Existential Angst (FallingAwake2) I\'ll pay that one; extend it to \"I never asked to be born who I am\" and...
  February 17th, 2023 18:54
• I Am American (August) Why on earth would anyone aspire to be American, or (I add quickly, before...
  February 17th, 2023 18:42
• Courage (Iva Hotko) Haven\'t quite put my head down yet... Sturdy definition, Iva....
  February 17th, 2023 05:28
• That person was you (Arie_jac) That\'s life - a learning experience. Do it. Enjoy your stay at MPS.
  February 17th, 2023 05:17
• They\'ll Cut Off The Lights And Gas Tomorrow.... (Charles69) Succinct neat poem about a situation which afflicts too many in so called...
  February 17th, 2023 05:03
• One Day Perhaps (Neville) Wow - not often we hear of that from you, Nev....perfection....🙂 Your...
  February 17th, 2023 04:43
• In my head (Jessica rose) With all due respect to charles69 above, his churchy religious way is...
  February 17th, 2023 01:25
• If I vanished... (ModernPoemLover) Maybe no one does much...and that\'s alright too ...who wants to be...
  February 16th, 2023 19:35
• Africa\'s vote (Isa) You write for fun? Then I don\'t understand your poem at all!! Care to...
  February 16th, 2023 19:01
• a plastic flower (Georgiaa) Sad alright - please move on....
  February 16th, 2023 18:53
• A Future In Ashes (Archdoom) https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-155649
  February 16th, 2023 06:20
• Dance of Love (Iva Hotko) You promised something controversial. Nothing controversial there - what...
  February 16th, 2023 06:16
• Kindness Of Snow. (Goldfinch60) Remember the slush as it melts.......🙂
  February 16th, 2023 06:06
• Fully engaged (Billy Birch) Now that orchi has done his thing I understand...but why so coy? Couldn\'t...
  February 16th, 2023 06:03
• For Everfriends Everywhere (Neville) Which one of the 64 friends you have here woz it?
  February 16th, 2023 05:59
• Modern Times (Chris Duffy) You old grouch....all too miserably familiar, Chris. Cheered me up...
  February 16th, 2023 05:53
• It wasn\'t long ago (Thinkerbell) A beautifully rendered piece which captures some of the trauma both...
  February 15th, 2023 20:38
• The Death of Joy (Archdoom) Absurd? Agreed - But for me anyone who uses such terminology as \'the...
  February 15th, 2023 07:32
• Eyes of The Past (Asher) You may want it to be up to my interpretation - I want you to state...
  February 15th, 2023 07:03
• Oldest And Youngest. (Goldfinch60) The thought of you acting crazily boggles the mind, Andy - but point well...
  February 15th, 2023 06:57
• A Time for Everything (Neville) I read that all the dust in my place which I have hitherto blamed on the...
  February 15th, 2023 06:53
• The World Is Still Young (Iva Hotko) Not keen on love poetry, but still wrapped up in your words and
  February 15th, 2023 06:46
• The Death of Joy (Archdoom) I won\'t be reading many of yours, Sir - they are too bloody grim. And...
  February 15th, 2023 06:40
• Precisely As it Did Not Happen (Neville) Well who\'d have thought ?.............................. I cannot but...
  February 14th, 2023 20:08
• Anti-valentine (M.E.M.) My feelings/attitudes conveyed in their entirety - though expressed here...
  February 14th, 2023 19:53
• Hopeless Romantic (A Poem on Valentine’s Day) (AuburnScribbler) I\'m not good on the topic of love, so despite the fact that it was you,...
  February 14th, 2023 19:46
• Zoning Out is Easier (Andy Kemp) Going to float through MPS too? If you do put your feet down at MPS for...
  February 14th, 2023 19:41
• Desire (Iva Hotko) The whole poem is a whisper, polished and complete.... complete, that is,...
  February 14th, 2023 19:33
• Treaty Words (Sorenbarrett) Very neat, Soren. Now, I tried to trace the quoted lines back, but Prof...
  February 14th, 2023 19:12
• Valentine\'s Woe (Orchidee) Woe? Misery? You could be notorious in the field of erotic literature if...
  February 14th, 2023 07:45
• The Making of a Man (RomanceWon) And you haven\'t progressed from there?
  February 13th, 2023 23:45
• Miss You (OkumuRaven) Good you made your own poem your favorite - no need to worry about anyone...
  February 13th, 2023 23:42
• Afterthoughts Don’t Count (Neville) OK Nev I\'m not going to blow your cover right now, so below is my...
  February 13th, 2023 22:03
• Red Green (Sorenbarrett) A vivid word portrait of a friend of yours, Soren? Colourful and engaging...
  February 13th, 2023 21:14
• When The Iron Forms (Juniper June) You really should not ask for feedback from an unknown audience how can...
  February 13th, 2023 21:01
• Cry in the Spotlight (LeeAnn) I prefer polished pieces with the aim of communicating something to the...
  February 13th, 2023 20:55
• Dream (Jerry Reynolds) From another sufferer to you - full empathy. And I had a poem just coming...
  February 13th, 2023 20:43
• Cry in the Spotlight (LeeAnn) And to anyone else?
  February 13th, 2023 20:34
• Working together (Greg57) Agreed. Next one please.
  February 13th, 2023 01:15
• To my wife (Greg57) Hold fast for one teensy little moment - I think I need clarification...
  February 13th, 2023 01:08
• Belief (Bella Shepard) Thanks, Bella. THE question in the proverbial nutshell. My only belief is...
  February 13th, 2023 00:23
• I wish (Hannah:() May be possible with counselling......🙂
  February 13th, 2023 00:17
• Many Worlds (Gary Edward Geraci) So where are you with that, Gary? \'Absence of evidence is not evidence...
  February 13th, 2023 00:10
• Distilled Time (Neville) All the qualities of a distraction free moment, Nev; that moment just...
  February 12th, 2023 19:19
• Where is it that I am going? (Krishnag) A state of bliss.........?
  February 12th, 2023 19:16
• Tasted. (Fay Slimm.) I almost felt I could ride a horse (total illusion, experience has taught...
  February 12th, 2023 19:10
• Job Satisfaction? (JasmineUK) I don\'t quite understand why no-one was prepared to at least give a nod...
  February 12th, 2023 18:37
• The not special (R.J.Stone) I like your commentary and agree with it\'s sentiments. Why not...
  February 12th, 2023 18:21
• Amateur (Sorenbarrett) What more is there to do other than try, Soren? Neatly summarised. So, O...
  February 12th, 2023 07:39
• Thorny Satellite (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) At first read I thought you were on about downed \"weather\"...
  February 12th, 2023 00:34
• Nature\'s sign (Sorenbarrett) Sorely tempted to leave this one completely alone Soren, as it covered so...
  February 10th, 2023 19:58
• Enigma (Saxon Crow) You may never know in this wonderful world of wallopers....
  February 10th, 2023 19:40
• Unabashedly True (Laura🌻) And? Oh come on Laura, you can\'t (oh yes you can!) leave me in suspenders...
  February 10th, 2023 19:33
• Know When To Fold \'Em (Gramann001) From the title I thought it was a poker player being a poker player! Sharp...
  February 10th, 2023 19:20
• Nothing For Granted. (Goldfinch60) Stay with it Andy.
  February 10th, 2023 03:20
• Whose wine is it, anyway? (Hzugman) Thanks OKW for sorting that one. I see you\'ve noted, H so... How about...
  February 9th, 2023 23:42
• Tomorrow (Quemis) I had no idea your piece, which had great rhyme and rhythm, was about...
  February 9th, 2023 23:32
• Remiss (Kinsey Peterson) Neat piece of poetry I liked, even as my literal mind could not quite make...
  February 9th, 2023 18:37
• To New Relationships (M.E.M.) What no external prompt? Great: Please continue - less direction and more...
  February 9th, 2023 18:13