Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Treaty Words (Sorenbarrett) Very neat, Soren. Now, I tried to trace the quoted lines back, but Prof...
  February 14th, 2023 19:12
• Valentine\'s Woe (Orchidee) Woe? Misery? You could be notorious in the field of erotic literature if...
  February 14th, 2023 07:45
• The Making of a Man (RomanceWon) And you haven\'t progressed from there?
  February 13th, 2023 23:45
• Miss You (OkumuRaven) Good you made your own poem your favorite - no need to worry about anyone...
  February 13th, 2023 23:42
• Afterthoughts Don’t Count (Neville) OK Nev I\'m not going to blow your cover right now, so below is my...
  February 13th, 2023 22:03
• Red Green (Sorenbarrett) A vivid word portrait of a friend of yours, Soren? Colourful and engaging...
  February 13th, 2023 21:14
• When The Iron Forms (Juniper June) You really should not ask for feedback from an unknown audience how can...
  February 13th, 2023 21:01
• Cry in the Spotlight (LeeAnn) I prefer polished pieces with the aim of communicating something to the...
  February 13th, 2023 20:55
• Dream (Jerry Reynolds) From another sufferer to you - full empathy. And I had a poem just coming...
  February 13th, 2023 20:43
• Cry in the Spotlight (LeeAnn) And to anyone else?
  February 13th, 2023 20:34
• Working together (Greg57) Agreed. Next one please.
  February 13th, 2023 01:15
• To my wife (Greg57) Hold fast for one teensy little moment - I think I need clarification...
  February 13th, 2023 01:08
• Belief (Bella Shepard) Thanks, Bella. THE question in the proverbial nutshell. My only belief is...
  February 13th, 2023 00:23
• I wish (Hannah:() May be possible with counselling......🙂
  February 13th, 2023 00:17
• Many Worlds (Gary Edward Geraci) So where are you with that, Gary? \'Absence of evidence is not evidence...
  February 13th, 2023 00:10
• Distilled Time (Neville) All the qualities of a distraction free moment, Nev; that moment just...
  February 12th, 2023 19:19
• Where is it that I am going? (Krishnag) A state of bliss.........?
  February 12th, 2023 19:16
• Tasted. (Fay Slimm.) I almost felt I could ride a horse (total illusion, experience has taught...
  February 12th, 2023 19:10
• Job Satisfaction? (JasmineUK) I don\'t quite understand why no-one was prepared to at least give a nod...
  February 12th, 2023 18:37
• The not special (R.J.Stone) I like your commentary and agree with it\'s sentiments. Why not...
  February 12th, 2023 18:21
• Amateur (Sorenbarrett) What more is there to do other than try, Soren? Neatly summarised. So, O...
  February 12th, 2023 07:39
• Thorny Satellite (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) At first read I thought you were on about downed \"weather\"...
  February 12th, 2023 00:34
• Nature\'s sign (Sorenbarrett) Sorely tempted to leave this one completely alone Soren, as it covered so...
  February 10th, 2023 19:58
• Enigma (Saxon Crow) You may never know in this wonderful world of wallopers....
  February 10th, 2023 19:40
• Unabashedly True (Laura🌻) And? Oh come on Laura, you can\'t (oh yes you can!) leave me in suspenders...
  February 10th, 2023 19:33
• Know When To Fold \'Em (Gramann001) From the title I thought it was a poker player being a poker player! Sharp...
  February 10th, 2023 19:20
• Nothing For Granted. (Goldfinch60) Stay with it Andy.
  February 10th, 2023 03:20
• Whose wine is it, anyway? (Hzugman) Thanks OKW for sorting that one. I see you\'ve noted, H so... How about...
  February 9th, 2023 23:42
• Tomorrow (Quemis) I had no idea your piece, which had great rhyme and rhythm, was about...
  February 9th, 2023 23:32
• Remiss (Kinsey Peterson) Neat piece of poetry I liked, even as my literal mind could not quite make...
  February 9th, 2023 18:37
• To New Relationships (M.E.M.) What no external prompt? Great: Please continue - less direction and more...
  February 9th, 2023 18:13
• The Ode for The Meat (Kinsley Lee) You have that right. As a very long term (nothing trendy about me!)...
  February 9th, 2023 18:06
• Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip (Neville) A tragic suicide pact....why must you continue to traumatize us like this,...
  February 9th, 2023 05:17
• Individual Journeys. (Goldfinch60) You must have very comfortable hard wearing shoes, Andy...care to share...
  February 9th, 2023 02:58
• To beat the band (Ode to Lewis Carroll) (Sorenbarrett) About two thirds, I think. You are a serial lister aren\'t you? (Killer...
  February 9th, 2023 01:23
• Music To Clean By. (Goldfinch60) A likely story, Andy. Wot about ‘Roll out the Barrel’ and ‘Why, Why...
  February 8th, 2023 20:25
• Come Late July (Neville) No marriage, no issue (happy with that) but I\'ve seen it in other new...
  February 8th, 2023 20:18
• I Miss Me (Tommytoons) 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 - Understood completely - all seven stanzas....
  February 8th, 2023 20:04
• Media (Sky.the.creator) Great write. Valid complaint. I, an ancient can see it\'s validity even...
  February 8th, 2023 19:49
• Why (Zuzu) A nicely balanced write well constructed. You are definitely wasting...
  February 8th, 2023 19:37
• Kinderspiel (Olaf Gatermann) Danke.
  February 7th, 2023 20:05
• The Pond (Cheyennekch) No you wouldn\'t - you don\'t have any idea from whom you are receiving...
  February 7th, 2023 05:06
• Captive (Fay Slimm.) Both well said and well done, Fay. Can you make a further plea for fish in...
  February 7th, 2023 04:52
• Kinderspiel (Olaf Gatermann) Google attempted to translate that fro Spanish to English... so what are...
  February 7th, 2023 04:38
• The Small Space (Jarcher54) We all must sort this in our own way... In the meantime you\'ve wrought a...
  February 7th, 2023 04:33
• Someplace Where There Are Whales (Neville) Going to be overcrowded, I fear as in a few masterly lines, you\'ve...
  February 7th, 2023 04:22
• Adorning (Fay Slimm.) To anyone who has ever asked \"What is poetry?\" the answer lies complete...
  February 6th, 2023 21:56
• tongue in cheek (Arqios) Yes - any communication is not worth a candle until it is received and...
  February 6th, 2023 21:42
• Love enough to care (Poetic Dan) Thanks Dan. Any pet owner who has loved their pet will know that feeling...
  February 6th, 2023 21:25
• Pre-date-Her (Neville) I have a feeling for the folks in the latter half of your write, Nev: them...
  February 6th, 2023 21:15
• Climbing up the ladder (Hzugman) Wot have I been telling you? Extend the wordage and the world (well MPS)...
  February 6th, 2023 21:05
• developmental linguistics (Willowthewisp) That is a unique and different voice.. Also a welcome one. I\'d further...
  February 6th, 2023 20:50
• Earthquake (Sorenbarrett) I think you\'ve got that, Soren - an earthquake must be must be one of...
  February 6th, 2023 20:28
• River And Time. (Goldfinch60) Good write, Andy.
  February 6th, 2023 06:44
• Child of my youth (Tallisman) Just give the image an empathic smile - works wonders. 🙂 \'Tis however...
  February 6th, 2023 01:41
• The Creative Process (Andrew Durbin) Well writ - I don\'t think you will be lost for words for very long......
  February 6th, 2023 01:31
• The Return of The Daughter of Night (Andrew Durbin) You are usually worth reading, I\'ve discovered recently. There\'s an...
  February 6th, 2023 01:25
• Music Remembered. (Goldfinch60) Are indeed, Andy - Especially Buddy H’s. So recent – word in topic:...
  February 5th, 2023 20:32
• Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once (Neville) Cool and enigmatic, Nev...enjoyed.
  February 5th, 2023 20:13
• Unconnected thoughts (Hzugman) So it would seem, H. thanks for extending the riff...
  February 5th, 2023 20:04
• Her Thing About Blue Eyes (Neville) Such smooth poetry, beautifully formed.....but why make a thing of wonder...
  February 4th, 2023 18:51
• Name calling (Hzugman) Same system applies here with respect to \'Friends\'. I like most of your...
  February 4th, 2023 18:43
• The Timeless (Gary Edward Geraci) And I did enjoy, Gary. A parable?
  February 4th, 2023 18:39
• I knew a girl (Kblackburn) You really drew me in. Please stay. It would be good if you could tell us...
  February 3rd, 2023 07:23
• The Song (Tallisman) A masterly construction, T. It ultimately mattered little whether I...
  February 3rd, 2023 07:14
• Who Was There? (Goldfinch60) Trust, Andy - you\'ve encapsulated it. Many thanks for the reminder.
  February 3rd, 2023 07:09
• What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now (Neville) If the beams, the inglenook, the Aga (that woz the one I had in my days of...
  February 3rd, 2023 07:03
• Brief (Fay Slimm.) What a gently sad ending....Despite the sorrow, peace and tranquility...
  February 3rd, 2023 06:41
• pinch and a punch (Arqios) An appropriate in memoriam, Rik. I felt that having experienced not...
  February 3rd, 2023 06:35
• The Library of Time (Bella Shepard) Really got this, Bella - no \'sage\' advice, but a perfect model on which...
  February 2nd, 2023 18:59
• Baldies. (Goldfinch60) You might have been trendy in the sixties, Son, but you sure as hell...
  February 2nd, 2023 08:01
• Chasing the Carpet (Neville) You got me - I\'m glad there were early entrants to this column with more...
  February 2nd, 2023 07:50
• FREE ONESELF FROM THE CHAINS OF DEMOCRACY (Nephilim56) You are correct, of course. Any solutions in sight?
  February 2nd, 2023 07:41
• Alone In Grief (Dove) \'𝘓𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘢 𝘱𝘰𝘦𝘵 𝘐 𝘸𝘳𝘰𝘵𝘦...
  February 1st, 2023 22:23
• Prints (Sorenbarrett) To remind me of my DNA spread everywhere is salutary, Soren - I AM part of...
  February 1st, 2023 07:06
• Wholesommusic (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Twas ever thus - there were big exceptions in the sixties, seventies and...
  February 1st, 2023 06:42
• Hello Again Marianne (Neville) Got to find the CD and hope it replicates the album ..too late at...
  February 1st, 2023 06:38
• The Great Chinese Famine (Ok Waleed) On the contrary - US General is predicting war with China within two years...
  January 31st, 2023 20:21
• Russian Roulette. (Chris Duffy) Bloody right on so many levels, Chris. Well penned - my kind of poetry...
  January 31st, 2023 20:04
• Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities (L. B. Mek) No wish to engage here Mek, but just to add that I\'ve read it,...
  January 30th, 2023 21:53
• The Wimp\'s Rap. (Chris Duffy) As a rough draft it wasn\'t too bad - one or two inaccuracies, but nothing...
  January 30th, 2023 21:30
• Sirens (Sorenbarrett) There\'s not only the Devil who dances here, Soren - the whole piece...
  January 30th, 2023 07:32
• Smile (Neville) Your latest publication - yes, always worth a smile and congratulations,...
  January 30th, 2023 07:24
• Die Flies, Die! (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Loved the video. Flies have their own ecological niche - break up and...
  January 29th, 2023 19:28
• Flawed #2 (Neville) Or, as they once said in the very old days (and I was there though much...
  January 29th, 2023 06:37
• My City on Fire (M.E.M.) No, can\'t get this to translate into English via Google. Only way was to...
  January 29th, 2023 06:29
• Shore Song (Fay Slimm.) I can feel the sea\'s power in that, Fay. And it is the power I love to...
  January 29th, 2023 06:11
• Men today, gods tomorrow (Sorenbarrett) I\'m still trying to unlock the code, Soren.......
  January 28th, 2023 07:07
• Death Walks Among Man (M.E.M.) Your prompt, in this instance, paid dividends here. If, when I write that...
  January 27th, 2023 23:16
• Jacqueline. (Goldfinch60) It is so many things beyond an In Memoriam, Andy – the celebration of a...
  January 27th, 2023 23:05
• Vengeance (Sorenbarrett) Doesn\'t set me free to know that the dickheads listed in the first half...
  January 26th, 2023 18:54
• Pier (M.E.M.) Doesn\'t require a classification to my mind - it is a great introduction...
  January 26th, 2023 18:47
• The Confession  (Neville) If it\'s not too much trouble, Nev, would you mind if I put any...
  January 26th, 2023 18:43
• All war is unjust (Aa Harvey) And a full vote from me. https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
  January 25th, 2023 19:11
• Chroma (M.E.M.) Teal - a colour which has found it\'s way into Australian politics. The...
  January 25th, 2023 00:11
• Raining a Yesterday (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful story which portrays the dynamic of many a relationship over...
  January 24th, 2023 20:02
• Does God Have Nipples ([email protected]) I\'ve writ this before (I\'m a boring old bugger): Man made God it his...
  January 24th, 2023 19:54
• The dance (Sorenbarrett) Your key word there, for me, is \'balance\' with respect to the...
  January 24th, 2023 19:31
• Just Another Way Out (Neville) There are some shonkey architects about......Neville.....🙂
  January 24th, 2023 08:15
• Watson And Holmes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60) The oldies are the good \'uns in my book - Good \'un Andy.
  January 24th, 2023 08:12