Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Something Greater (Fay Slimm.) “A bright corner where care melted old scars.” Fay - don’t normally...
  October 8th, 2022 18:32
• When it’s time (EvenwheniLie) You are a rhymer extraordinaire. Do you consider your style rap? I\'m not...
  October 8th, 2022 05:19
• Good Friends. (Goldfinch60) A friendship such as yours is without peer: History, understanding and...
  October 8th, 2022 02:12
• What Didn’t We Find in the Attic (Neville) Not there (the bodies) \'cos there\'s no room for \'em... LOL. Selective...
  October 7th, 2022 20:22
• Reality From My Dream. (Goldfinch60) There’s always hope old lad - why not? Your mantle piece is full of...
  October 7th, 2022 05:24
• Blocked by Viola Davis (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) If ever a pin here needed a comment from author, this is it, C: Agojie,...
  October 6th, 2022 18:53
• Off On Vacation! (Bella Shepard) Have a good trip, Bella. Visited the falls from the Canadian side early...
  October 6th, 2022 18:39
• Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60) Congratulations on your happy day: Venerable age to reach without...
  October 6th, 2022 06:39
• The Age of Gold (Orchidee) Orchi - you have no time to be messing around here - onward, go
  October 6th, 2022 06:34
• The Teddy Challenge (Tallisman) Ok - but why did you delete it? Is this place a wet place where all...
  October 6th, 2022 05:12
• not to be messed with (Arqios) Thanks Rik - just let\'s hope Cheshire cat hasn\'t gone feral. Lady in...
  October 6th, 2022 05:00
• Excuse Me I Love You She Said (Neville) Can I drag that last stanza completely out of context and make it mine,...
  October 6th, 2022 00:59
• Critical race theory (EvenwheniLie) I\'m not qualified to analyze all your issues stated there, but I\'ll vote...
  October 6th, 2022 00:55
• Mirrors (Sorenbarrett) Man made god in his own image then flipped it. The rest is history.
  October 6th, 2022 00:50
• Life (Sorenbarrett) You take on big themes, soren. \"In the end one dies.....see it as a...
  October 6th, 2022 00:46
• Do you believe? (Sorenbarrett) Funnily enough, soren prior to my arrival here I had used the word...
  October 6th, 2022 00:24
• Commissioned (Fay Slimm.) I believe (no, not believe – am certain) you are right, Fay. I like...
  October 5th, 2022 18:33
• Man in the moon (Tallisman) WHAT HAPPENED TO \" Not defeated!\"???
  October 5th, 2022 18:06
• Bird Feeding. (Goldfinch60) My partner is of the same mind. Lorikeets and cockatoos find Five pm,...
  October 5th, 2022 04:35
• looking for a real bargain (Arqios) Rik: The trouble with \'screenshot and then posted as an image\' is that...
  October 5th, 2022 04:00
• A moment of grace (Morwenna) I love train rides, Morwenna -your piece captures perfectly the kind of...
  October 4th, 2022 17:57
• Tory Scum (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) That\'s it - get it off your chest - you might just conceivably have...
  October 4th, 2022 17:49
• Poor teachers (Little margaret) Not \"victims of circumstances\" - victims of politics. And incidentally ...
  October 4th, 2022 17:43
• take two (Arqios) \'If only\' - but it ain\'t, Rik, is it? Fires floods and military...
  October 4th, 2022 17:35
• Myself Ahead (Insanely Hilarious) Someone who bills themselves as \'Insanely Hilarious\' obviously has a...
  October 4th, 2022 04:19
• Dame Janet Baker. (Goldfinch60) Oh getting somewhat esoteric here: And your musical knowledge knows no...
  October 4th, 2022 04:07
• Witchdoctor (Sorenbarrett) Plus the right to refuse treatment... A dire warning - well versified...
  October 4th, 2022 01:14
• A woman scorned (Sorenbarrett) Apologies I have a very literal mind (always doing this here). Your...
  October 4th, 2022 01:07
• Invasion of the Boring Guy (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Come on - most (99%) of the guests in your video looked pretty interesting...
  October 4th, 2022 00:46
• Each Night (Bella Shepard) A complete experience, Bella - no trouble to sleep soundly that night..?...
  October 3rd, 2022 20:58
• The smile. (Chris Duffy) \'Afternoon Chris Met with Amazon...no smile. Burning? Burning? How are...
  October 3rd, 2022 20:52
• Heady Times (Fay Slimm.) It may be just my mind, Fay. Permission to find this highly erotic.....?
  October 3rd, 2022 18:39
• star gazing (Arqios) Don\'t mention star gazing to this lot Rik - most live in the Northern...
  October 3rd, 2022 07:30
• The True Value of Dreaming (Neville) I\'m sure an essential truth is there fined down to a perfect definition,...
  October 3rd, 2022 07:21
• Last Dance (Lorna) You make me nostalgic for times quickly passing. Too sad, Lorna.
  October 3rd, 2022 07:10
• Coffee Days. (Goldfinch60) Sir, you are someone who shows much restraint - Such abstinence - you...
  October 3rd, 2022 02:34
• sunrising sunset (Arqios) Understood completely, Rik - imagery rich; the difference between...
  October 2nd, 2022 23:34
• Remembered (Fay Slimm.) Oh how I wish I could write like that after I returned from a time travel...
  October 2nd, 2022 19:12
• NIGERIA INDEPENDENCE POEM by Muhammad Danlami Muhammad (Sir. MDM) (Grand Magazine) Three (no four!) poem pieces together on the same day, subject Nigeria. Is...
  October 2nd, 2022 18:49
• Inconsequential Wonderings (Neville) An unanswered question if ever there was one, Nev. Close intimate human...
  October 2nd, 2022 18:42
• The smile. (Chris Duffy) Smile not here yet, Chris, although the packages certainly are. A read I...
  October 2nd, 2022 18:32
• Lexical Expansion (Lord Montgomery) Lord Monty: I rarely do this , but since you are such a language...
  October 2nd, 2022 06:09
• Forego Grudges. (Goldfinch60) I detest others who give me advice. But I will make an exception for...
  October 2nd, 2022 01:32
• Write It Down, Write It Out. (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Good advice in your comment. Unfortunately the little voice in my head...
  October 1st, 2022 20:57
• A day out at the beach (Morwenna) A subtle change in consciousness beautifully pinned (no mistype -...
  October 1st, 2022 20:50
• the purpose of pain (Lonelyraccoon) If you come out of that experience with insight, it was valuable because...
  October 1st, 2022 20:34
• A Love Story (MendedFences27) That title - l very nearly passed this by - almost didn\'t...
  October 1st, 2022 20:29
• and I try to be brave (Arqios) Captured the essence of parting when no residual contact remains, Rik. I...
  October 1st, 2022 07:53
• What! No Strawberries! (Goldfinch60) Eton Mess British? I had no idea: Should I remember this, or let it...
  October 1st, 2022 02:06
• Ian (Rocky Lagou) Motherland - Mother Earth - happening all over. You are not unique. But...
  October 1st, 2022 00:53
• I Heart My Heart (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Awwh You just stay in that good place - the pain isn\'t worth the
  September 30th, 2022 19:43
• The Maze (Jerry Reynolds) Point taken , Jerry - though I do believe that piece of advice has come a...
  September 30th, 2022 19:23
• Kicked you in the cooch (Edthepoet) A little disillusioned with virtual interaction, Ed? Should be more of...
  September 30th, 2022 08:53
• A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Coffin (Aa Harvey) Well that\'s a relief - time to move on, perhaps?
  September 30th, 2022 08:41
• Odds (Paul Bell) I think Teddy\'s right - I think we should gently tiptoe round it.......
  September 30th, 2022 08:39
• That Special Time. (Goldfinch60) ‘Early to bed, early to rise..” Andy, I think you have cracked...
  September 30th, 2022 02:21
• A Certain Kind of Highness (Neville) Dunno how I missed this before, Nev - mind if I keep and use at a timely...
  September 30th, 2022 01:51
• The Hero Filling Station, near Sheffield, by Cumwell Lane (AuburnScribbler) As a poem about a filling station open late in Sheffield, it has no peer,...
  September 29th, 2022 20:28
• Let Me Be (Bella Shepard) If I reach back into my very early childhood Bella, it does sound like a...
  September 29th, 2022 20:12
• behind each poem (Arqios) Well writ always worth bearing in mind, Rik. I should do it more...
  September 29th, 2022 05:27
• Greeting Cards (Lord Montgomery) Which will go first? The Hallmark shop or my cramped hand reduced to...
  September 29th, 2022 05:21
• A Bus Stop in the Rain (Gene Rockwell Gant) Well told interaction - Thanks.
  September 29th, 2022 05:12
• Lament for a past world (Jerry Reynolds) Ignorance was bliss.... and we have every right to view the past with what...
  September 29th, 2022 05:09
• Stepping Stones. (Goldfinch60) Whole life is a learning experience; Mistakes should certainly be...
  September 29th, 2022 04:54
• Brad and Sally (Paul Bell) Ran through the tenses there didn\'t ya? Understandable really - You\'re...
  September 29th, 2022 00:33
• What Abuse? (Goldfinch60) Now I have a funny presentiment That you ain’t going to like wot I...
  September 28th, 2022 08:38
• If People Were Ringtones (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Your poetry fun; your visuals stimulating, full of life. I like both. Many...
  September 27th, 2022 20:40
• We don\'t need another Sequel (Shetonya Latryce) Understood half (say three-quarters) of what was going down there - and...
  September 27th, 2022 20:32
• If this is my life I\'d rather be dead than alive (Rick Singh) Difficult to know what to say. No background. Your name? yeh Ok......
  September 27th, 2022 05:08
• The Conversation (Paul Bell) Kudos for the civilized way that was achieved ....no legal eagles making a...
  September 27th, 2022 05:02
• Morning Mozart. (Goldfinch60) I sensed the invigoration you felt, Experienced your wonderful day. Is...
  September 27th, 2022 01:41
• Wasting time around the Red Velvet Rope (Ccpegus) Five repeats...clever or what? I gave you what i consider to be very...
  September 26th, 2022 21:32
• Sprinkle some crack on ‘em (EvenwheniLie) I\'m out of breath and run through after that....!!!
  September 26th, 2022 20:15
• Wasting time around the Red Velvet Rope (Ccpegus) Let\'s hope persistence pays better than the subject of your piece....... ...
  September 26th, 2022 20:07
• Snaggletooth The Snitch (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Maintaining a roof over one\'s head always involves compromise. I always...
  September 26th, 2022 19:51
• Apartment A (J.Edse) I like this a lot and can relate to most of it, although it would be...
  September 26th, 2022 19:44
• These Old Cats: Diary of a Single Black Female (Shetonya Latryce) You think it\'s only old guys trying to get inside your pants? Still best...
  September 26th, 2022 19:23
• Liminal Deliverance (Quemis) Oh cheer me up, why don\'t you? I do see a truth there (I think) - all is...
  September 26th, 2022 19:10
• On My Way (Lorna) Hi Lorna - apologies in advance for this: I\'m quite literal minded and...
  September 26th, 2022 18:57
• Just Unbelievable! (Goldfinch60) My prejudices challenged - how lovely: I love this because my name is...
  September 26th, 2022 04:12
• Vodka& Coke (Paul Bell) Another bent conversation you do so well Paul, which has certain insights...
  September 25th, 2022 07:09
• That Creation. (Goldfinch60) Had to get the ice cream van out by eight. This week I’ve really had a...
  September 25th, 2022 06:41
• TV Soaps (Chris Duffy) More than that, a belly laugh Chris. Good job I live alone - no one...
  September 25th, 2022 02:19
• Always read the label. (Tallisman) A serious warning lightly told, T.
  September 25th, 2022 02:06
• I Think I\'m Being Followed (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Definitely followed here - no need to think about it!
  September 25th, 2022 02:03
• Inside Dreams (Fay Slimm.) Normally some dreams manage to express thoughts, emotions, intuitions...
  September 24th, 2022 19:47
• The True Weight of a Man’s Soul (Neville) Lost for words Neville. Yours is a precious statement of....(I may come...
  September 24th, 2022 02:20
• Smoke Filled Days. (Goldfinch60) Irony substitutes here for the smoke - Hides the disaster that lurked in...
  September 24th, 2022 02:04
• LAST GAME (Avi) \'Life\'s a Game\'? - Agreed. And it IS \'how you play it\' that counts....
  September 23rd, 2022 19:03
• Back To That Time. (Goldfinch60) Never was such a time I’m afraid, Mate. Know what you mean, and it’s...
  September 23rd, 2022 01:36
• Taking a break: Womb Work (Shetonya Latryce) I\'ve probably lost the plot, but are you expecting? I\'d vote for the...
  September 22nd, 2022 19:10
• Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You (Neville) Thought a gem, but then a warm comforting pillow as I drift to sleep with...
  September 22nd, 2022 18:43
• Ballad of Billy McGee (Arqios) Not such an older time, I would think; not enjoyable other than as a vivid...
  September 22nd, 2022 18:32
• hands off that snooze button! (Arqios) Never thought I\'d do this - just faved it without commentary....
  September 22nd, 2022 18:14
• The Nutcracker Soldier is in Denial (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) So much in here, just beneath the surface: Where was father at? Gay...
  September 22nd, 2022 06:18
• Pretty Beautiful ! (Justa_Geezer) Matured like fine wine. Neat quatrain.
  September 22nd, 2022 01:25
• Fishermen\'s Friends The Musical. (Goldfinch60) Envy is a terrible thing; I’ve got a large dose of it here - I need...
  September 22nd, 2022 01:13
• My Damm Butterfly (Kel554) Liked the butterfly. Should you intend to stay, it would be good if you...
  September 21st, 2022 07:07
• Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud (Doggerel Dave) Got that right, Andy - how did you guess? 🙃
  September 21st, 2022 02:00
• Deeds Of Love. (Goldfinch60) Words are cheap it’s said - Deeds the better fare. Yet words can...
  September 21st, 2022 01:57