Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Hippie Warning. (Goldfinch60)
Indeed why? In the next three days (three writes) I hope to read the...
July 15th, 2021 04:53 - War of Attrition (Saxon Crow)
Come back Boffington Town - you are out of lockdown - all is forgiven.
July 15th, 2021 04:49 - Wood-fired Kiln (Flyingfish)
Pottery and ceramics, among the highest of the arts. You capture the...
July 15th, 2021 01:54 - Fancy (Fay Slimm.)
I was creeped out by this - thank you Fay.
Now to try to get a good...
July 14th, 2021 04:36 - Upon a Small White Feather (Neville)
Do you wish to rehabilitate the white feather, Neville?
Can\'t avoid the...
July 14th, 2021 04:28 - Live As You. (Goldfinch60)
Good advice, Andy - but freeing yourself from other\'s expectations can be...
July 14th, 2021 04:12 - Demeaning Meaning (Flyingfish)
Great read - I really enjoyed the ride. For me, though, I may well get...
July 14th, 2021 00:53 - FREEDOM (Oscar Gonzalez)
Read your ‘About me’ with interest. A couple of thoughts: I don’t do...
July 13th, 2021 19:54 - You know it (Poetic Dan)
I liked the thought of ‘intoxicating’ going to your head and you got...
July 13th, 2021 19:29 - one in a million (SureshG)
Malthus was giving it to the world in the 18th century, but did anyone...
July 13th, 2021 19:14 - LOVELY SET OF WHEELS (Sold as seen) (Andy Hunter)
You\'ve been round a load of lousy lots a lot - ever get lumbered,...
July 13th, 2021 08:18 - Trust (Accidental Poet)
A very valid description of trust and friendship and the relationship...
July 13th, 2021 05:28 - Magnificently Different (Neville)
Frustrating, Neville......my pedestrian mind wants to know what happened...
July 13th, 2021 04:22 - The Lost Words. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s a little creepy Andy - have you got some kind of access to my...
July 13th, 2021 02:00 - Buzzing Bees (Nightingale of Poetry)
A poetic tribute to bees very neatly penned.
On a more prosaic level,...
July 12th, 2021 19:52 - An Unfinished Life and Poem (Trenz Pruca)
I\'d settle for that, Trenz. Much in a very neat little package. Last...
July 12th, 2021 19:26 - Naughty Girl (Jerry Reynolds)
Booty? Wot off to the footy again.....
Seriously though - Every (or most)...
July 12th, 2021 18:58 - Whu do you hate me? (GC)
You are a little bit of an enigma. I don’t know to whom you address this...
July 12th, 2021 18:49 - Oaths (Catgotthecream)
Your piece describes the multi faceted nature of domestic abuse – broken...
July 11th, 2021 18:19 - Field Of Dreams Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
My Poetic Side -
A poetry writing school.
I’m learning a...
July 11th, 2021 02:11 - Stranger at Door (Flyingfish)
Your fun poem does nothing to convince me that the BBC is not going down...
July 11th, 2021 01:53 - Briefly (Neville)
Much of the world\'s phenomena I could feel much better about if that were...
July 11th, 2021 01:46 - A Challenging See-Saw (Laura🌻)
Good one there Laura. Reads as self talk which is definitely the way to go...
July 10th, 2021 17:24 - Without the Vow (Gary Edward Geraci)
Perhaps not just young people, you know, Gary - divorce has been around...
July 10th, 2021 17:11 - Such is Nostalgia (Fay Slimm.)
As you so rightly point out - it\'s a very nostalgic piece, Fay..... Few...
July 10th, 2021 04:12 - We all have darkness (Poetic Dan)
I certainly have stopped by, Dan – I cannot tell a lie.
That little...
July 10th, 2021 04:01 - Banished (Neville)
Well so long as the banishment was sincere, Neville.
You can feel the...
July 10th, 2021 03:36 - Hypocrisy - 2016\0 (Rossen V. Vassilev)
I think perhaps you might just conceivably have something there......Who...
July 10th, 2021 01:11 - Illusion (Tulipslove)
\'i\'m not used to writing poems\' - could have fooled me......
Welcome...
July 10th, 2021 00:44 - Smile/Frown (AstralAbaddon)
This one is a bit heavy. Felt a little uncomfortable after this read - and...
July 10th, 2021 00:39 - Paths V (Eugene S.)
A great little parable which should have garnered more attention. Many ...
July 9th, 2021 20:51 - Elsa (Jerry Reynolds)
\'Tropical Storm Elsa, which brought heavy rain and high winds to parts of...
July 9th, 2021 07:57 - Life #1 (Saxon Crow)
Thanks for the advice, Sax.
Where have you been?
Welcome back.
July 9th, 2021 04:46 - Sleeping on the Job (Neville)
Yeh - that\'s proof Stonehenge has been around too long, hasn\'t it, old...
July 9th, 2021 04:11 - meditative - III (SureshG)
Mmmm I’m not sure you worry too much, Suresh – you are going to put it...
July 9th, 2021 04:02 - Passed The Universe. (Goldfinch60)
And so we did (me - hippie disguised as a straight), Andy.
Your entry...
July 9th, 2021 03:47 - Behold the Sweet Angel (Thomas Koron)
Should rise through the ranks very rapidly round here., where you may find...
July 9th, 2021 01:46 - cut and paste poem #16: bertrand russell and snagglepuss (Jon Nakapalau)
With snagglepuss in the mix I find it funny and, yes, a little...
July 8th, 2021 19:42 - I like her hair (Reeves :()
A lengthy but easy read – no obscurities there; you tell it like it is,...
July 8th, 2021 19:35 - Untitled - XLVII (SureshG)
With you absolutely here, Suresh. That quagmire can be more like glue...
July 8th, 2021 19:10 - Longboards & You (Poetic Dan)
I really like the happiness in your poem/song, Dan.
Ashamed to say...
July 8th, 2021 18:16 - WHO is fooling who? (Gary Booker)
I would settle for the first four lines Gary.
The fifth, ‘This...
July 8th, 2021 08:06 - Freshly Squeezed (Neville)
\' just waiting on winter\' - nothing more?
What did you get up to in the...
July 8th, 2021 06:14 - Beginnings (Fay Slimm.)
Not sure at that point It\'s love... but I have felt that moment... Nice...
July 8th, 2021 05:07 - SINS OF THE PAST (Michael Edwards)
True, Michael - but we can try to make amends to the offspring of the...
July 8th, 2021 04:54 - Babel Bagels (Flyingfish)
I\'ll vote for that as I go through the exit to wherever, John. Not...
July 8th, 2021 00:31 - Lock down Lessons (Thekkinkkattil)
A smart write - that\'s my decision.
July 7th, 2021 08:29 - Way Too Late (Neville)
How did you get away with it Neville? \'Bit dangerous, your confession...
July 7th, 2021 04:31 - On the outta (Flyingfish)
Yes there are a few places up and down that stretch of coast a bit like...
July 7th, 2021 00:18 - meditative - II (SureshG)
Agreed – and therein lies the problem, doesn’t it Suresh. The message...
July 6th, 2021 19:23 - The Fairies Cast A Spell- Triolet (Dove)
Thanks Dove. That had something of the flavor of folk clubs I frequented...
July 6th, 2021 19:01 - No Mean Feet (Neville)
A wee bit of tension going on there? They\'ve got one hell of a past,...
July 6th, 2021 06:38 - Myself (Fay Slimm.)
The river\'s growth and passage captured in rich descriptive...
July 6th, 2021 06:00 - Has He Returned? (Goldfinch60)
Yep - it\'s one way to save the environment from all those farting cows...
July 6th, 2021 05:46 - Just look at the time (Flyingfish)
Yeh - it’s necessary to impose some artificial system of measurement in...
July 6th, 2021 05:38 - Seeing Both Sides (Flyingfish)
Memories from childhood,John? (can\'t believe you are still at it). Bought...
July 5th, 2021 21:47 - Car Talk (Langton)
That\'s an easy fun way to make the argument digestible Langton.
Should...
July 5th, 2021 19:13 - Bullseye (Catgotthecream)
So ?Alex? – Your name, to be addressed by? Or ‘Cat’?
I’m...
July 5th, 2021 18:57 - Lost and Found (Jerry Reynolds)
As above, really, Jerry. Congrats on a great moral tale. Just wish the...
July 5th, 2021 18:38 - Back Then (Fay Slimm.)
Not going there - sorry Fay. Couldn\'t cope with the sweat (sorry -...
July 5th, 2021 04:27 - Across the Kitchen Floor. (Goldfinch60)
Intervene - counselling - dispute resolution, conditional upon the...
July 5th, 2021 04:04 - Ode to Mother Nature (Goddess of the Mist)
Your changing relationship with Nature and the freedom it gives you, is...
July 4th, 2021 20:29 - Pretty Penny (Catgotthecream)
Another unspeakable issue which MUST be spoken about, Cat.
A skilled...
July 4th, 2021 20:20 - Phoenix Reborn (Kurt Philip Behm)
Book burning? No acceptance, please, Kurt. However song existed before...
July 4th, 2021 20:04 - Geraldine (Neville)
A swim past to balance your tribute – even I have to admit that...
July 4th, 2021 06:22 - Good To Me (Pacifique Niyitanga)
I really enjoyed the way you explored the complexities of your attraction...
July 4th, 2021 02:07 - Please me (Florence J)
Crap sex.
Welcome to MPS Please feel free to respond to commentary -MPS...
July 4th, 2021 01:00 - The Relaxing Pitter-Patter on the Conservatory Roof (AuburnScribbler)
All these bleeders wiv conservatories.... Wait \'til I get their...
July 3rd, 2021 21:36 - Seeds in the Sand (Cheka)
Cheka now? well hello anyway...
Your work is again clearly and cleanly...
July 3rd, 2021 21:20 - Hide and Seek (Catgotthecream)
I do hope that your piece is just an imaginative construction rather than...
July 3rd, 2021 21:00 - Three T’s (Neville)
I’m not about to wait Neville - I’ve seen.
What I’m about now is...
July 3rd, 2021 08:25 - You Liking? (Orchidee)
You\'ve been around, ain\'t you orchi? Your penultimate stanza - wow the...
July 3rd, 2021 04:44 - Why Flies should Die! (Saxon Crow)
Dear Sir,
You are reliably informed that those small beasts do sterling...
July 3rd, 2021 01:19 - The Old Churchyard Wall (Langton)
It’s the same feeling I get when I look at any well crafted old...
July 2nd, 2021 19:45 - The Time in Between (Cheka)
Hello CB…I really relate to your first two stanzas, where I feel that...
July 2nd, 2021 19:34 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (3) (Michael Edwards)
Michael, for me this evoked very visual images, as the first line gave me...
July 2nd, 2021 18:41 - Solitary (Fay Slimm.)
Not, as you point out Neville, typical, your Brian.
Where I live, when...
July 2nd, 2021 07:59 - All the Best Words (Neville)
Plagiarism and aggressive misinterpretation rampant, Neville?
Time to...
July 2nd, 2021 04:46 - Song, Heartache, Heartbreak. (AwHec8)
I\'m not very musical, and can\'t normally keep a tune, Don - but this...
July 1st, 2021 17:56 - Breaking News (MyMindInRhyme)
Dunno where you\'ve come from, but feel you are an old hand.
A great...
July 1st, 2021 17:45 - Discovery (Fay Slimm.)
Simple and pleasing, Fay.
\'Such a summer as this had buttons undone as...
July 1st, 2021 05:11 - Six Million Candles (Neville)
Once more, a great piece, Neville. Another topic I cannot deal with...
July 1st, 2021 04:36 - Another Year (Saxon Crow)
That’s a hard one neatly put, Sax.
I like to think I’ve matured,...
July 1st, 2021 01:09 - Haunted (Lily_)
You got out but obsessive thoughts and dreams plague you?
They more then...
July 1st, 2021 00:44 - PUZZLED POET (Andy Hunter)
Yeeeees....I knoooooow...... whaaaat .......yooooou ......meaaaaan....mind...
June 30th, 2021 21:05 - Under The Hammer. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m sure they will get the odd tickle of interest at that auction, Andy -...
June 30th, 2021 19:08 - Curbed (Fay Slimm.)
Dedicated to birds in cages also? A silly question: (\'all...
June 30th, 2021 08:56 - Cold Shoulder (Neville)
Victimisation and prejudice - a portrait too painful - wonder you could...
June 30th, 2021 04:40 - Dominus Propitiari (Laura🌻)
I\'m just a poor weak man.....
Also uncultivated, so if it would not be...
June 30th, 2021 00:43 - The Crescent Alter (Germanamericanchurch)
I somehow feel that an attempt at author commentary would have been...
June 29th, 2021 18:31 - Colliers Way (_naturally_curious_)
Takes me back to my country cycling days in the UK- the best of...
June 29th, 2021 18:28 - Don\'t say anymore (Sandra)
This is partner abuse. Get out.
June 29th, 2021 18:11 - WHY PUT OUR DREAMS ON HOLD (Andy Hunter)
I\'ve never been a parent (thankfully) but from observation I believe many...
June 29th, 2021 18:03 - Bonsai (Thekkinkkattil)
You have something there which only rarely troubles me a little: I very...
June 29th, 2021 05:13 - Empty Harbours (Neville)
Fished out - \'sorry to make this reductionist and personal Neville, but...
June 29th, 2021 05:01 - The Love Story of Mrs Duckers and Mr Von Sneppick (Saxon Crow)
Boffington Town sounds a very interesting place full of ....colorful...
June 29th, 2021 04:34 - No Joke Jo... (Jaimeleigh)
and with your child hood it will remain my dear - eyestrain
June 28th, 2021 20:12 - Twitarus (Neville)
Definitely a twit - so far so good. Should also be nominated for a Darwin...
June 28th, 2021 08:55 - Middle aged (Sandra)
Oh - and I wuz starting to get up.... a perspiration....
Never mind - ...
June 28th, 2021 04:32 - Infinite Universe. (Goldfinch60)
Infinite universes are more than likely, I feel; however, I cannot buy the...
June 28th, 2021 02:15
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