Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- The Great Chinese Famine (Ok Waleed)
On the contrary - US General is predicting war with China within two years...
January 31st, 2023 20:21 - Russian Roulette. (Chris Duffy)
Bloody right on so many levels, Chris. Well penned - my kind of poetry...
January 31st, 2023 20:04 - Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities (L. B. Mek)
No wish to engage here Mek, but just to add that I\'ve read it,...
January 30th, 2023 21:53 - The Wimp\'s Rap. (Chris Duffy)
As a rough draft it wasn\'t too bad - one or two inaccuracies, but nothing...
January 30th, 2023 21:30 - Sirens (Sorenbarrett)
There\'s not only the Devil who dances here, Soren - the whole piece...
January 30th, 2023 07:32 - Smile (Neville)
Your latest publication - yes, always worth a smile and congratulations,...
January 30th, 2023 07:24 - Die Flies, Die! (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Loved the video. Flies have their own ecological niche - break up and...
January 29th, 2023 19:28 - Flawed #2 (Neville)
Or, as they once said in the very old days (and I was there though much...
January 29th, 2023 06:37 - My City on Fire (M.E.M.)
No, can\'t get this to translate into English via Google. Only way was to...
January 29th, 2023 06:29 - Shore Song (Fay Slimm.)
I can feel the sea\'s power in that, Fay. And it is the power I love to...
January 29th, 2023 06:11 - Men today, gods tomorrow (Sorenbarrett)
I\'m still trying to unlock the code, Soren.......
January 28th, 2023 07:07 - Death Walks Among Man (M.E.M.)
Your prompt, in this instance, paid dividends here.
If, when I write that...
January 27th, 2023 23:16 - Jacqueline. (Goldfinch60)
It is so many things beyond an In Memoriam, Andy – the celebration of a...
January 27th, 2023 23:05 - Vengeance (Sorenbarrett)
Doesn\'t set me free to know that the dickheads listed in the first half...
January 26th, 2023 18:54 - Pier (M.E.M.)
Doesn\'t require a classification to my mind - it is a great introduction...
January 26th, 2023 18:47 - The Confession (Neville)
If it\'s not too much trouble, Nev, would you mind if I put any...
January 26th, 2023 18:43 - All war is unjust (Aa Harvey)
And a full vote from me.
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
January 25th, 2023 19:11 - Chroma (M.E.M.)
Teal - a colour which has found it\'s way into Australian politics. The...
January 25th, 2023 00:11 - Raining a Yesterday (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful story which portrays the dynamic of many a relationship over...
January 24th, 2023 20:02 - Does God Have Nipples ([email protected])
I\'ve writ this before (I\'m a boring old bugger):
Man made God it his...
January 24th, 2023 19:54 - The dance (Sorenbarrett)
Your key word there, for me, is \'balance\' with respect to the...
January 24th, 2023 19:31 - Just Another Way Out (Neville)
There are some shonkey architects about......Neville.....🙂
January 24th, 2023 08:15 - Watson And Holmes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60)
The oldies are the good \'uns in my book - Good \'un Andy.
January 24th, 2023 08:12 - I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show! (Jane Frye)
Then if you watch them all, your mind would really fill up then....Become...
January 24th, 2023 00:37 - There\'s Always A Reason (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Got it - reflect away PV. More broadly, there\'s a reason for all...
January 24th, 2023 00:29 - What Once Was Is No More (Ricki)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-155194
January 23rd, 2023 19:37 - The Knife\'s Edge. (Goldfinch60)
Right to highlight the last lines - a truth, Andy.
Are you a betting...
January 23rd, 2023 03:29 - A Single Truth For all Things Being Unequal (Neville)
Salutary reminder that compared to what is known there is so much unknown....
January 22nd, 2023 16:58 - Earth, Air, Fire (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Soren. It has all the properties of a smooth running engine - which...
January 22nd, 2023 16:48 - Even, now (Ryan Robson-Bluer)
Very observational. No judgements such as these boys enculturated into...
January 22nd, 2023 16:41 - She Smelt Like 24 Carat Gold (Neville)
Precious few words there, Nev................................(departing or...
January 22nd, 2023 16:25 - Painting On Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Great, Andy. Short but in your turn well painted - this time in words.
I...
January 21st, 2023 02:42 - The Day Before the Day Before Today (Neville)
Can\'t help but unusually empathize with orchi above, Nev. However...
January 20th, 2023 16:38 - Gone (Fay Slimm.)
Guilt free satisfaction ... still calling? Hope you are listening,
January 20th, 2023 16:33 - Back To The 80s (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Certainly felt like a time just before the world began to go down the...
January 20th, 2023 16:24 - Where Were You? (Goldfinch60)
\'Tell you - Scott Joplin ain\'t no soothing cure for insomnia..... but I...
January 19th, 2023 07:15 - So consider (Sorenbarrett)
Good reminder, Soren. the way I interpret this final conclusion of yours...
January 19th, 2023 07:04 - Acromegaly. (Goldfinch60)
Thankful you are still here and decided to pin this, Andy.
January 18th, 2023 17:18 - Tick Tock (M.E.M.)
You don\'t need the prompts - You could observe the world around you with...
January 18th, 2023 17:14 - Blanketed. (Fay Slimm.)
It is absolutely no good attempting to convince me that snow is wonderful...
January 18th, 2023 05:48 - 25th Anniversary Poem for Karen ([email protected])
Sonnet?
January 17th, 2023 16:32 - A Handful of Random Thoughts and a Sunflower (Neville)
Do you last longer that way..... Nev?
January 17th, 2023 06:16 - Three Limericks (Classicmister)
You don\'t know nuttin \'bout spiders in the UK.... 🙂
Serves you...
January 17th, 2023 06:13 - Air Burns (Cryinginacafe)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-123766
January 17th, 2023 06:00 - The Ginger Tomcat (Whiskers McGraw)
Got rid of him a long time...
January 17th, 2023 05:57 - I Don\'t Want Prune Juice (Jane Frye)
When you successfully complete the tunnel and are on your way, just give...
January 16th, 2023 22:48 - Sunday Faced (Fay Slimm.)
The image of those honest, stoic countryfolk in their own environment well...
January 16th, 2023 07:27 - Cause and Affect (Neville)
Could have left that one out, Nev. I just about manage that anxiety, that ...
January 16th, 2023 07:20 - Che sarà sarà (Laura🌻)
Hello Laura – you have been away a long time. I thought you were ‘lost...
January 15th, 2023 23:30 - Back seats (Tallisman)
Thanks T. For me that was an honest appraisal of a certain short period of...
January 15th, 2023 17:01 - More Than Nearly Dearly Departed (Neville)
Don\'t want to interpret, Nev - I want freedom from ambiguity.... apart...
January 15th, 2023 16:52 - ODDS AND SAUSAGES (1 & 2) (Michael Edwards)
(1)Sometimes one has only a wee amount of time In which to consider one\'s...
January 15th, 2023 05:07 - Tranquility (Gary Edward Geraci)
Thanks Gary. \'Tranquility\' is the very word I used, together with a...
January 14th, 2023 20:02 - pygmalean ivory (Arqios)
Definitely would appear to be on it\'s way again, Rik..... Who thought ...
January 14th, 2023 00:45 - An Uncertain Certainty (Neville)
My own Uncertain Certainty -
\"I really like old guys\", she...
January 13th, 2023 20:50 - I am a woman. (That1_13yrold_writer)
Still here? That\'s good.
January 13th, 2023 03:18 - Art (Sorenbarrett)
Nice one Soren. You have reached the right conclusion for me here -.it...
January 13th, 2023 03:11 - Philosophy And Reason. (Goldfinch60)
Good \'un, Andy - I wasn\'t aware you were that much of a sceptic, but can...
January 13th, 2023 03:00 - Feeling Saggy Baggy (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
After that I felt saggy and baggy too....visuals cheered me up a...
January 12th, 2023 00:16 - \"Depression\" does not belong in quotations. (That1_13yrold_writer)
I am not sure an 80 something male has any right to intervene, advise or...
January 11th, 2023 17:34 - The Violin Wept (Bella Shepard)
What a subtle way of providing an angry (sad?) political message, Bella....
January 11th, 2023 07:01 - Distractions (Bella Shepard)
I find Bella, as each day, month, year passes I come to welcome silence...
January 11th, 2023 06:52 - From the Cradle to a Grave (Neville)
I want no credit for my life. I\'ll pass judgement on it myself (credits...
January 11th, 2023 06:37 - So What Does Your Father Do (Neville)
Good question, Nev. Ofttimes it more than determines your own path way in...
January 11th, 2023 06:21 - Taken From the Diary of a Contented Man (Neville)
Got it completely, Nev - and I\'ll be saying it tomorrow too...
January 11th, 2023 06:15 - Get Off the Pot (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
But wot pot are you coming off of, PV?
January 11th, 2023 03:45 - I, Am But a Puzzle (M.E.M.)
Liked this, but are you a conundrum to yourself? Ignore them and focus on...
January 11th, 2023 03:41 - 20 Hours to Memphis (MendedFences27)
A story, Phil with the absolute ring of truth. Became totally involved....
January 11th, 2023 03:35 - And that\'s the truth (Hzugman)
I\'ve got nothing against trannies, mate - even though I don\'t understand...
January 11th, 2023 03:18 - Glory Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Like your live for the moment, Andy
January 11th, 2023 03:12 - Cruising Past the Billboard That Declares: “It’s Ok to Say Gay” (Rocky Lagou)
Rocky – as usual you have turned great lines in support of something you...
January 11th, 2023 01:33 - You Broke My Heart At Walmart And I Cried All The Way To Sears (Charles69)
How many buy and buy as a substitute for a lack in other parts of their...
January 11th, 2023 01:11 - Villanelle in Subzero (Rocky Lagou)
When you mention that the villanelle is a difficult form I can only but...
December 21st, 2022 16:30 - Fear of Flying Solo (Neville)
I\'m torn apart by this one, Nev.
On one hand I have an absolute...
December 21st, 2022 06:49 - Ageless (Fay Slimm.)
\"kept lively..... with regular minding\" is hard work but gloriously...
December 21st, 2022 06:40 - Together And Forever. (Goldfinch60)
Don’t know if I can do this:
Declarations have been many.
I understand...
December 21st, 2022 03:33 - Jigsaw (Sorenbarrett)
\'Analogy\' is not quite right; neither is \'metaphor\' - But I\'m here to...
December 20th, 2022 18:39 - Disaster Trumps Competition. (Doggerel Dave)
Thanks mate. And I\'m not getting at Andy here - but I really would like...
December 20th, 2022 06:10 - Beautiful Atheism (Jenny.g)
For what it\'s worth, I think you should operate on the basis of your...
December 20th, 2022 06:01 - As a Matter of Fact It’s a Fact (Neville)
Wot\'s a Christmas card (never send \'em - is that why I don\'t get...
December 20th, 2022 05:50 - Spring Approaches Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
How can you only hope it’s on its way
When you know there can be no...
December 20th, 2022 04:21 - Wonderful World (Saxon Crow)
Beautiful irony/satire/fantasy there, Sax.
December 20th, 2022 01:42 - Beautiful Atheism (Jenny.g)
Great to know you are a good person.
I\'m not sure that your atheism...
December 19th, 2022 23:37 - Take Out the Trash! (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Yuk! I\'m a compulsive hand washer, and after your very vivid piece, I...
December 19th, 2022 23:27 - Naturally Tidy? (Saxon Crow)
Great imagery in this parable, Sax.
Unfortunately Mum will be exerting...
December 19th, 2022 18:59 - Why Can’t We Always be Like This. (Goldfinch60)
Competition – an essential component
Which artificially constructs a...
December 19th, 2022 03:17 - On the Verge of Another New Year (Neville)
I doubt any Xmas card publisher would buy it, Nev (you may have to keep...
December 19th, 2022 02:30 - The Things One Remembers (Neville)
Cheering the crawfish, Nev - Glad the delirium has dissipated.
December 18th, 2022 17:38 - Music In Life. (Goldfinch60)
All you want is music! music! music!
No worries Andy, you’re in good...
December 18th, 2022 03:25 - Tories Steal From Purses Of Nurses (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
This is one of your best, mate - instead of a focus on the misdemeanors ...
December 18th, 2022 03:17 - Enemies within (Oludare Joshua)
Yes, the world is definitely out of joint. I think that goes for politics...
December 17th, 2022 22:57 - Beginning (Fay Slimm.)
A symptom of a sick system...
Aid - yes; action - yes.
What form should...
December 17th, 2022 18:04 - Saint of Faults (Gary Edward Geraci)
Such a vivid picture you paint, Gary.
Evokes a similar feeling to a...
December 17th, 2022 17:50 - Gratefulness. (Goldfinch60)
I do enjoy being here,
I’ll be sorry to depart
When life for me is so...
December 17th, 2022 07:20 - For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There (Neville)
Well, You certainly do your best Nev, and no one can ask any more of you...
December 16th, 2022 16:29 - Jingle Bills (Sorenbarrett)
For some genuine Christians, all this commercialisation must rankle. For...
December 16th, 2022 16:14 - Lullaby Dreams (Saxon Crow)
Smooth Sax, very smooth.
December 16th, 2022 03:34 - Easy Lives. (Goldfinch60)
Wot no central heating?
That does take some beating:
Gas oven...
December 16th, 2022 03:28 - Sombras (Sorenbarrett)
Viva Espania , or Portugal or sommat.....
December 15th, 2022 22:56 - Poetry to me! (Tia K)
To write a poem about writing a poem seems like great fun, OK - job done....
December 15th, 2022 22:50
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