Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• OFF THE CLOCK (Joe Marcello) Great - short sharp and witty. And true. A long period of unemployment...
  November 20th, 2020 19:03
• I Spend a Lot of Time with People that Don\'t Exist (Quemis) IF this is a piece of poetry, well crafted, which generalises a position...
  November 20th, 2020 18:12
• HEY MISTER VACCININE MAN ~ FIVE PHYSIOLOGICAL QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN) Oh Damn! I\'m veggo so mine don\'t stink anyway....except in extreme...
  November 20th, 2020 17:51
• That’s life (Arazimus) Needs to be chiseled in stone many times for many places. Can I order...
  November 20th, 2020 17:31
• HEY MISTER VACCININE MAN ~ FIVE PHYSIOLOGICAL QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN) Simple straightforward message anyone could understand. Might even have...
  November 20th, 2020 02:00
• The Fountain Pen (Dasim) Your\'e back! Disappeared there for a while... An easy comfortable...
  November 20th, 2020 01:47
• Into Another Place. (Goldfinch60) Go with books Andy, every time. I get my books from Vinnies (sorry - a...
  November 19th, 2020 04:10
• be-lie-ve (Lonelyraccoon) I\'d vote for nothing at all (ever since age approx 14).You can believe - ...
  November 19th, 2020 03:37
• Promised Land (Last Shadow) Promises, promises.... Dave
  November 18th, 2020 17:33
• Hippies. (Goldfinch60) Certainly hit a chord there Andy: Great response. Ideals close to perfect...
  November 18th, 2020 06:02
• Get that trumpeting miscreant yucca puck out of the White House (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) I continue to enjoy what you do - even if sometimes I can\'t come to...
  November 18th, 2020 03:46
• - Division - (PoeticBiscuit) \'Never have guessed... The kind of poetry I like - small neat and...
  November 18th, 2020 00:54
• Anomalous (Jbritt321) Heads up re your age would have been good (not because I\'m ageist - I try...
  November 17th, 2020 20:01
• slab square sunset (Dusk arising) Never quite hit the streets, although I came very very close (next step...
  November 17th, 2020 19:08
• Mother (Mysleze) Sussed out your Profile. Seventeen years? English not Your first...
  November 17th, 2020 18:52
• Try this for size: (Doggerel Dave) Thank all you four (but who\'s counting?) for your support. Its a pity I...
  November 17th, 2020 17:24
• Hippies. (Goldfinch60) Not going to disagree (my favorite stance) with any of that. Just...
  November 17th, 2020 04:56
• Short stories light our lives (Trenz Pruca) Thanks mate, that really did it for me. Dave
  November 16th, 2020 20:27
• please, so much (Dusk arising) Never mind it may be you or maybe not, d.a., the memories stretched for...
  November 16th, 2020 20:13
• A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville) Nah - the preceding apostrophe meant to substitute For \'You\'re\' - an...
  November 16th, 2020 05:02
• Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.) Form - craft - imagery - how long did it take to construct your butterfly...
  November 16th, 2020 04:21
• A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville) \'Welcome - though you didn\'t really need a contribution from an intruder...
  November 16th, 2020 03:43
• A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville) Copious use of stops....I\'d endorse that - it\'s something I use...
  November 16th, 2020 03:28
• Keys Lost. (Goldfinch60) Nicely paced Andy. The gut wrench I experienced between lines \'Keys...
  November 16th, 2020 03:14
• my dreams light (Dusk arising) I\'m truly glad you can still find the same wonder in old moon that I once...
  November 15th, 2020 19:29
• AS TIME GOES BY ~ A CLASSIC PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Hi you lot: DAVE here! PANTOUM easier than ...
  November 15th, 2020 18:05
• A PATRIOT I (or A DOUBLE WHAMMY) (Michael Edwards) Right on, Michael. Regards Dave PS I\'m old school - can you do me a...
  November 15th, 2020 05:43
• Here We Go!! (Goldfinch60) Andy - Like flash mobs do you? Here\'s an oldie that I hope you and...
  November 15th, 2020 05:29
• AS TIME GOES BY ~ A CLASSIC PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Hi A & B & S the C: The \'70\'s merging into the 80\'s definitely - just...
  November 15th, 2020 05:11
• love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st) Hey mate (lvvv1 ) I want to get something sorted here. Let me just...
  November 15th, 2020 04:48
• love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st) Wasted your time and energy, didn\'t you orchidee?
  November 14th, 2020 16:53
• Poetry to Pass the Time (Kevin Michael Bloor) Yes you cracked that one. I\'m left with rhythm, rhyme and in the end,...
  November 14th, 2020 16:34
• LIFETIME (Dove) Both deeply affecting and erotic.........aah...... Many thanks for that...
  November 14th, 2020 16:27
• Such a Good Start. (Goldfinch60) For pities sake - since joining MPS it has taken over my life. I spend...
  November 14th, 2020 04:26
• It\'s over then? (Doggerel Dave) Absolutely Andy. I had two (serially monogamous) relationships in the ...
  November 14th, 2020 03:16
• It\'s over then? (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Phil for your reading. Oh I suppose I\'ll have to blow my cover a...
  November 14th, 2020 00:47
• It\'s over then? (Doggerel Dave) Noticed one theme common at MPS is Love - found , gained, rejected (or...
  November 13th, 2020 17:44
• Praise Prelude (Orchidee) Well many thanks orchidee. Bought back some very old memories. But...
  November 13th, 2020 16:15
• 14 x 14 (AuburnScribbler) Got it. I\'m in the accommodation I\'ve always favoured. In the UK it\'s...
  November 13th, 2020 06:32
• Praise Prelude (Orchidee) Hello Orchidee: And don\'t get tense - I\'m not going to blast away at...
  November 13th, 2020 06:09
• UK ADAPTABILITY ~ A FREE VERSE 2 12 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) All hail A & B & S the C: You do manage to pump this stuff out, don\'t...
  November 13th, 2020 05:30
• Love Is How It Feels (MendedFences27) Gradual and smooth. Wish more relationships AND poetry were like...
  November 13th, 2020 05:12
• White Noise is the Right Noise (A Homage to ASMR) (AuburnScribbler) Some seriously weird shit going down there, but seems harmless enough. so...
  November 13th, 2020 00:41
• USA ~ SEVEN KEY ENVIRONMENTAL ISSUES ~ SEVEN RHYMING QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN) \'Hope you are right.....I mean Left...oh you know what I mean....? Love...
  November 11th, 2020 18:38
• to end all wars (Dusk arising) \"Linger not stranger....\" A good \'un, your peice. Kind regards...
  November 11th, 2020 18:06
• Winning. (Goldfinch60) Now depending what you are referring to, I obviously don\'t mind winning,...
  November 11th, 2020 03:46
• A Relationship (Doggerel Dave) Well yeh, but some, like this one, have a certain sense of place, an...
  November 11th, 2020 03:28
• Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.) The memories your poem evoked: Blackberrying as a kid; sampling homemade...
  November 10th, 2020 21:19
• An Apology (AwHec8) Good for you mate. But steady on - don\'t drown in misery.... Take care...
  November 10th, 2020 19:19
• Cinema Paridiso. (Goldfinch60) You get my vote , Andy. your piece locates music\'s role perfectly....
  November 10th, 2020 18:16
• Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8) So we have two areas of divergent thinking here: -You believe in the...
  November 10th, 2020 17:53
• Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8) Thanks Don - you know, I almost managed to read most of your last entry....
  November 10th, 2020 07:08
• Harry (Doggerel Dave) So I\'m sure your husband knows the score, and treats you with double...
  November 10th, 2020 06:50
• Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8) Oh Don - \'sorry I intervened. You just carry on. But you won\'t include...
  November 10th, 2020 04:26
• love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st) I\'d give it up, DA. I don\'t think you\'ll get through and so the other...
  November 9th, 2020 20:51
• Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8) Oh please - you should realise that \"God made man in his own image\" is...
  November 9th, 2020 20:35
• Number forty six - White House occupant re: guarding President elect Joe Biden (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Surreal but vivid - message comes through loud and clear. And I like...
  November 9th, 2020 20:11
• Unsung (Fay Slimm.) What to say? You know it\'s good without any endorsement from me, Fay. You...
  November 8th, 2020 19:13
• A Day Out in London Town (Alan .S. Jeeves) Ah but you have the West Yorkshire Moors around you and under your feet,...
  November 8th, 2020 18:42
• A Day Out in London Town (Alan .S. Jeeves) \"Spose I\'m obligated to add my three hapeth: Love the place (as it was...
  November 8th, 2020 07:55
• PEACE...WHEN THE MONKEY BECOMES A MONK (AiR - Atman in Ravi) Wow! you stuck your head up above the parapet there, DA. But well said -...
  November 7th, 2020 19:20
• Harry (Doggerel Dave) Huntsmans in Australia are large (for a spider). As the common name...
  November 6th, 2020 20:21
• Lost & Found (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) I\'m sure you don\'t need or want any commentary from me or even anyone...
  November 6th, 2020 19:28
• things to come (Dusk arising) Thanks DA. Beyond the great structure as a piece of poetry and the \'good...
  November 6th, 2020 19:04
• Dressing aTurkey (Dove) Bound to RB - in fact my user photo was taken last season at my...
  November 6th, 2020 17:52
• Lockdown Once More. (Goldfinch60) Ah Andy - I don\'t know what to say about lockdown as I\'ve never really...
  November 6th, 2020 04:58
• Self-sabotage (Aa Harvey) Are all your poems like this? I dare not look. You are here. So having...
  November 5th, 2020 19:42
• Smiles Are Always There. (Goldfinch60) Plenty of material there, Andy - at the absurdity of this life and...
  November 5th, 2020 03:40
• Dressing aTurkey (Dove) Hi Romantic B/Dove: As a long time vegetarian (and I mean long time -...
  November 4th, 2020 23:47
• Violence Solved? (Goldfinch60) Andy - iv\'e lived in North Queensland for a goodly number of years. I...
  November 4th, 2020 06:55
• Inscription Plus... (Doggerel Dave) Cheers L.B. - Didn\'t think I\'d be able to show you anything...
  November 3rd, 2020 06:22
• SLIGHT DELAY (Joe Marcello) Now that\'s a piece of advice worth tucking away:- Luckily I won\'t meet...
  November 3rd, 2020 06:02
• MASKING THE TRUTH (Joe Marcello) Apologies – I wasn’t around when you did this one And as a result...
  November 3rd, 2020 05:48
• She Was Back Once More. (Goldfinch60) Andy - It\'s not often the the theme of love in poetry gets to me...
  November 3rd, 2020 04:08
• imperial purple (łysy) (Conradconrad) I have absolutely no idea what you are saying: You produce one of these...
  November 2nd, 2020 23:37
• A hoodlum, (albeit respectable) in bedlam (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) You cracked that one - summarised in three dimensions the knowledge we...
  November 2nd, 2020 22:25
• They say (TyraWilliams) Go for it Tyra B. Hard times for folks such as you starting out. I, in my...
  November 2nd, 2020 20:45
• Survive Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Music a compensatory choice. Many thanks for that, Andy.
  November 2nd, 2020 07:08
• Survive Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Yeh you folks aint the only ones - limericks make me itchy too: In a...
  November 2nd, 2020 05:43
• On Tour. (Doggerel Dave) Both Andy and jarcher : I have a theory that these places are part of an...
  November 1st, 2020 06:58
• Tale of a Solemn Tombstone (Alex Arnot) Thanks: Cheered me up no end...
  October 31st, 2020 22:25
• go then (Dusk arising) Thanks for the commentary on the sentiments embodied in \"Do not go...
  October 30th, 2020 22:18
• listen and lay back (Dusk arising) Followed instructions very carefully, then followed the trail to YouTube. ...
  October 30th, 2020 19:19
• RAINDROPS - HOPE - STEAMDROPS (Aiyejinna Abraham O.) \"It\'s the same the whole world over It\'s the poor what gets the...
  October 29th, 2020 06:49
• The Great Debate. (Trenz Pruca) Thanks for that,Trenz - let\'s hope there\'s enough folks prepared to ...
  October 10th, 2020 20:08
• Trenched. (Fay Slimm.) That\'s great Fay - up there with A.D. Hope\'s \'Inscription for...
  October 8th, 2020 05:20
• Three Palms (Doggerel Dave) Thanks for the welcome - Now I know I\'ve done something right with...
  October 7th, 2020 05:36