Comments on community poems by Poetic Dan
- Lonely (MelanieSkyes)
That prison of the mind, said so well. I hope you find the tools to break...
September 27th, 2017 17:11 - A Writers Life (FredPeyer)
You had my mind hooked at the start, I was in that car and already done a...
September 27th, 2017 16:48 - Time now? (Clock King)
Inspiring work of art!
September 26th, 2017 17:53 - Empathy (FredPeyer)
Thank you for this deep and wonderful feel to a very strong emotion of my...
September 26th, 2017 16:48 - Mind Games (FredPeyer)
I see the game you play
I give up my house
Just walking like a...
September 24th, 2017 10:46 - The Wisp (Mugsdaddy)
Beautifully chilling, loved the ending.
September 22nd, 2017 01:02 - ()
So short, so crisp
That kiss must be
So tenderly sweet
September 22nd, 2017 00:58 - A Poem For All (Christina8)
Brilliant, I only wish I had time to read more of everyone\'s...
September 20th, 2017 13:10 - For Those Who Struggle. (Kevin browne)
You stitched it up well for me. The flow was brilliant I was sucked right...
September 19th, 2017 12:12 - Monstichs by Fred (inspired by Michael Edwards) (FredPeyer)
What scribbles they are my friend
I\'ll now have to check what inspired...
September 19th, 2017 12:02 - A HARD LESSON (Louis Gibbs)
Words so true
Facing the childhood
I thought I\'d done mine 6 months...
September 19th, 2017 08:14 - Sound (Poetboy123)
I hear it, it comes when I play, or listen to the brave. Your words are...
September 18th, 2017 08:24 - Unparalleled (Baylee)
Very passionate! Nice work
September 18th, 2017 08:19 - Validation (Christina8)
I done a piece call my roots
I see we come from the same
But at least we...
September 18th, 2017 08:18 - I Am Lightning (Poetboy123)
That it will all fade, as does my fear of this day when I read your words...
September 18th, 2017 02:16 - Followed in the Night. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant! Really relate to this
September 18th, 2017 02:11 - Why? (FredPeyer)
If you really want that view
Mother nature provides for you
A few nice...
September 18th, 2017 02:06 - DayDreaming ❤ (Karla)
Nice, like walking on cloud 9
When love makes you feel
As though out...
September 17th, 2017 02:48 - Resilience (Poetboy123)
My soul will walk tall
Singing our song
More united I feel
After...
September 16th, 2017 10:57 - My Anxiety Battle (Chloe Rachel Flisher)
Pure passion and soul with every word I read.
These thoughts you have are...
September 16th, 2017 08:41 - My Poetic Side (Lasergraph)
Brilliant, goosebumps all the way!
Thank you
September 15th, 2017 09:47 - Hero (Liberty_Shadows)
Nice work, a lot lighter than my first read of yours ;) love it
September 14th, 2017 11:49 - Suicide Note (Liberty_Shadows)
Such a powerful read
Took me back 20 years
I killed myself to...
September 14th, 2017 11:47 - Too many miles (Allysnewworld)
Brilliant! Took me right back to my days of walking the streets, I could...
September 14th, 2017 11:35 - Lake (Myself and me)
Definitely a relaxing read, thank you very much!
September 14th, 2017 11:29 - Endless Love. (Goldfinch60)
Reading this with sunrise in my eyes
As a tear falls down from your...
September 14th, 2017 01:27 - Ocean Swim (FredPeyer)
Fantastic read, set me up for a fantastic day.
September 13th, 2017 02:25 - The Edge of Suicide (Mugsdaddy)
Raw my friend, I know this pain so well. One bit of advice, mother nature...
September 13th, 2017 02:22 - Watch Me (Joy Fetherolf)
And watch we will. Felt my life flash before my eye, brilliant written...
September 12th, 2017 16:05 - For what will my child see as Home (Spyrolove)
Wow! I hope the world takes care of you, you\'ll get what you put in so...
September 12th, 2017 16:01 - Inescapable (Poetboy123)
Brilliant reflection of my frustration inside today. Reading your words...
September 12th, 2017 12:33 - Myself and Me (Myself and me)
What a blank that is my friend!
Sometimes the most enlightening thoughts...
September 12th, 2017 08:53 - Are words just words? (Parisinwonderland7)
Definitely not, they are the beginning and the end, or actions are in...
September 11th, 2017 16:18 - Good In Evil (Poetboy123)
Wow, that was powerful! but that last line kills me, as deep inside I...
September 11th, 2017 12:02 - Another Day Gone (FredPeyer)
I really like this! My mind is ticking
September 11th, 2017 04:51 - Dreamers (Poetboy123)
So many lines taking back through my life, then you walked my through to...
September 9th, 2017 11:54 - The World Burns As We Speak (and one more) (Poetboy123)
Your passion never falls short on wanting to heal this world. A great...
September 8th, 2017 10:45 - Unfinished Journey (Poetboy123)
I feel revived after that read! Thank you
September 8th, 2017 10:36 - What Do You Believe In? (Shiloh)
In my imagination!
Nice writing
September 7th, 2017 23:21 - Rabbit-edone (Myself and me)
Fantastic! Looks like fun if my uneducated brain could keep up ;)
September 5th, 2017 15:31 - Unknown (Baylee)
I second that but the unknown is the cure just keep on exploring till you...
September 5th, 2017 09:03 - Motion Picture (Nicholas Browning)
That\'s how I see the pictures in my mind.
Great work!
September 4th, 2017 17:12 - A Real Man! (DreamersReality)
Very true, I could feel the pain of being let down so strongly and know so...
September 4th, 2017 16:53 - Thought (Something to wrap your mind around) (FredPeyer)
I love the concept of your work.
From my own understanding is that...
September 4th, 2017 16:45 - You Got Weed? (Lanaevans)
Weed got me on the start of a flow
Of learning to let go
Music could...
September 4th, 2017 16:31 - Looking Inward (Mugsdaddy)
It\'s fantastic, slipping and finding. Have to go all the way in, before...
September 4th, 2017 11:39 - pictures (Dusk arising)
Soothing after at crazy night out, I truly felt this so many times but...
September 2nd, 2017 16:54 - thoughts on time (Dusk arising)
Keep writing like this my friend and we will. Sadly this is all in our own...
September 2nd, 2017 07:29 - Beautiful (Confused kid)
Beautifully done!
September 1st, 2017 17:30 - Choices (FredPeyer)
Such a great writing, inspiring so many great comments. I\'ll not put all...
September 1st, 2017 16:52 - Before I Die (Poetboy123)
Thank you for your own truths and the power in these words. You\'ve just...
September 1st, 2017 11:55 - Life (Malubotelho)
Beautifully sweet the last thing before bed that I read. Ending my day so...
August 26th, 2017 18:37 - A Prayer (NaomiRayne)
Outstanding message, really don\'t to me. Thank you
August 26th, 2017 18:31 - forever (Dusk arising)
Soulful writing
August 24th, 2017 22:55 - Always Appreciate What You Have (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Brilliant and 22:22 to you
August 24th, 2017 22:37 - Hard Day (FredPeyer)
Is never enough that\'s why I don\'t drink (much).
Really like this one!
August 21st, 2017 03:47 - Self Aware (Matt campbell)
Every thought provoking, thank you
August 18th, 2017 08:34 - Expectations (FredPeyer)
Well reminded for me to drop all expectations in life, think I\'m 90%
August 18th, 2017 08:30 - IT BREAKS MY HEART (Louis Gibbs)
I feel these words so strongly
I\'m also grateful for a place like...
August 17th, 2017 08:31 - ()
When they get to much I let my gut override them both ;)
I feel the...
August 16th, 2017 11:47 - Who are You ? (Roudan)
\"I\'ve been given a life and I\'ll walk it my way
knowing that the end...
August 15th, 2017 17:13 - Never will forgive myself (Jaybob)
Forgiveness is a powerful tool but should always be used on ourselves...
August 15th, 2017 12:16 - SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE (Michael Edwards)
Dam it! You made me take a break for too long. But that was an enjoyable...
August 7th, 2017 07:43 - Tropical Rain (FredPeyer)
You nearly took there, great writing
August 4th, 2017 01:21 - My Web (Adri)
This was brilliant, even gave me a shiver while reading. I\'ve been told...
August 3rd, 2017 03:09 - My Motorcycle (FredPeyer)
Brilliant, well worth the wait my friend.
Have you ever read the book \"...
August 2nd, 2017 06:38 - Secret Place (FredPeyer)
I have that place when my pen hits the paper or I\'m on my bike making my...
July 31st, 2017 05:06 - Early Morning Troubles. (Goldfinch60)
I am sure in her view you are always on time.
Great write!
July 31st, 2017 05:02 - Intense Sometimes. (Kevin browne)
Brilliant words to start my morning off! Thank you as always!
July 31st, 2017 02:20 - Smile (---mari0)
:) and the world ;)
July 30th, 2017 17:24 - Thankyou (Mikaylamaslin)
Beautifully done but sadly I know many even one my own mum that is stuck...
July 30th, 2017 17:18 - Start Living (Poetboy123)
Amazing work, no one can do it but plenty can help guide you, to live or...
July 30th, 2017 16:40 - My magical life (Jenna33308)
That\'s some powerful soulful words, I hope letting it out helps make some...
July 30th, 2017 13:04 - Procrastination (FredPeyer)
Brilliant! Love it!
July 30th, 2017 12:52 - mortal (Heather T)
I must second that response, I\'m not sure where you took my mind but that...
July 30th, 2017 12:47 - foolish heart (Heather T)
I\'ve now got up from sleeping on this, I wrote so much down last night,...
July 29th, 2017 02:58 - foolish heart (Heather T)
Dam it! My gut told me this from day one!
But I said I was doing it...
July 28th, 2017 17:37 - My Depression (Jodie)
There is no good or bad here, just expressions of our truths deep within....
July 28th, 2017 17:11 - FINAL CURTAIN (Louis Gibbs)
I repeat to my self to be brave it all but a stage and try to remember...
July 28th, 2017 16:27 - Kaleidoscope (FredPeyer)
Brilliant and so true, if only they knew the places your mind can take you...
July 28th, 2017 06:31 - One Wish (Starbuck Kentipoos Cruz)
I\'d put my penny in that well.
Great wish
July 27th, 2017 16:05 - Decoding (Poetic Dan)
Best way to learn I do agree, think I\'d try to enjoy my hole though
July 27th, 2017 16:00 - Whispering Ghosts. (Kevin browne)
I won\'t lie I look at your work and think I\'m too tired to take that all...
July 26th, 2017 18:20 - DREAM THEATER (Louis Gibbs)
O That it is and I\'m playing at my best. I changed my environment(stage) ...
July 26th, 2017 18:10 - Dear me, from me (S.louise)
That\'s raw power there, never let that fire go out. You\'ve given me a...
July 26th, 2017 18:04 - don\'t hesitate (Willyweed)
My second pick was drawn to this
A word I know so well inside myself...
July 25th, 2017 17:28 - take me down the mountain (Willyweed)
Sorry to read of your troubles my friend and I hope they pass ...
July 25th, 2017 17:14 - Just around the Corner (FredPeyer)
That I do sir, every corner is then a milestone.
Well written
July 25th, 2017 01:58 - Accept the flaws of My Family (Saima)
Nicely done, family is for life and we all definitely have our faults!...
July 24th, 2017 01:30 - Begging Down on Broken Knees. (Kevin browne)
What was so *#@* powerful my friend.
I just couldn\'t tell you enough,...
July 23rd, 2017 15:13 - A Suicide (Mbird72)
Raw emotion
I felt that pain
You\'re on your way
As I am too
Keep...
July 23rd, 2017 04:27 - You are the poetry (Mbird72)
I am the poetry
So are you
We write these words
To tell our own truths...
July 23rd, 2017 04:21 - Stillness. (Fay Slimm.)
If I had a last word I think it would be \"forgiveness\"
Great piece...
July 23rd, 2017 04:18 - THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Although I don\'t share your faith
Your words still resonate and...
July 23rd, 2017 04:14 - Words (Ariane)
A very powerful write, felt every word and then some more.
This was like...
July 23rd, 2017 04:06 - The Path (Mellowman)
I look forward to a chat in the sun on that bank of love, while watching...
July 21st, 2017 11:11 - IF (DyingDreams)
If!
I just love this! I\'ve read it three times now and it just keeps...
July 20th, 2017 14:53 - Mañana Karma (Edthepoet)
What the first to said ;)
Captivating
July 20th, 2017 14:43 - Door (The 2 A.M Writer)
My head is spinning with all this meaning. Great work!
July 20th, 2017 14:34 - Sometimes I Call My Mother A Whore (ElenaGrace)
Not sure about giving views for editing as my brain just can\'t see things...
July 20th, 2017 13:57
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