Comments on community poems by Poetic Dan
- Drugs are bad (EpsilonLessThanZero)
I don\'t really know your punchlines, maybe I\'m just getting old.
But I...
May 15th, 2019 08:03 - Past\'s Spot (Someone\'s - 1/3) (Nafis Light)
Brilliant!
Loved the ending
May 15th, 2019 07:50 - Black and White Paint (Nafis Light)
Absolutely enjoyed the knowing but not knowing..
Perfectly you my...
May 14th, 2019 12:08 - 75 cents (JB)
Not such I could contain the laughter after your 3rd attempt, but I\'m...
May 14th, 2019 11:35 - Game Over (EpsilonLessThanZero)
I\'m not sure how old you are?
I feel your lines are from the heart
But...
May 14th, 2019 11:30 - SELFHOOD. (Fay Slimm.)
I needed this so much for a major fear of mine was faced today, for this...
May 14th, 2019 11:21 - Reality (Aa Harvey)
Wow.... Brilliantly sad but hopeful with a flow like tha, it did feel like...
May 14th, 2019 11:08 - of Elspenore pt2 (Dusk arising)
Enjoying.....
May 14th, 2019 11:05 - Red Cushions (Lorna)
Great tune to go with a delightful read, yes when we don\'t know. Just...
May 14th, 2019 11:01 - My Hearts Worth. (Kevin browne)
Towards the middle of this my friend, I thought of a chat I had late one...
May 14th, 2019 10:55 - My Dear Son (W c)
Our religions may differ
But we sing from the same page
My friend you...
May 14th, 2019 09:26 - FOLLY. (Fay Slimm.)
O yes within a picture each will see there own thoughts.
Thank you for...
May 14th, 2019 09:18 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (5) (Michael Edwards)
Hahaha, love it! Feels like my nose, recovering from surgery. No sun for
May 14th, 2019 09:02 - I am to blame (Aa Harvey)
So hard when that one sinks in.
Very well expressed but then one has to...
May 13th, 2019 12:50 - when out of my thoughts (Dusk arising)
Wow, I was unsure for second to write something or not as I try not to get...
May 13th, 2019 09:38 - Mix Ups #27 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Hahaha, brilliant done I could really picture that old lady.
Action will...
May 13th, 2019 09:27 - Dead Leaders (EpsilonLessThanZero)
That was brilliant, I\'ll admit it took my brain a few attempts to read...
May 13th, 2019 09:21 - Rainbows (Lorna)
I have missed your wonderful vibe
Always appreciated
Thank you
May 13th, 2019 05:42 - Chet Blow Your Horn. (Goldfinch60)
Nicely done good sir!
Much appreciated
Its never gone
It lives on in...
May 13th, 2019 03:12 - Thinker (Suresh)
So true, thank you
Much peace and respect
May 13th, 2019 03:10 - All The Love He Kept. (Kevin browne)
No one can do it like you my friend, it was like I was on waves of...
May 12th, 2019 12:04 - Ugly (EpsilonLessThanZero)
This was brilliant, I was completely engrossed. Very nice flow with a...
May 12th, 2019 10:25 - A Turkish Mother To The Kaiser (WW1) +8 (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wow...
Thank you
May 12th, 2019 10:20 - Magic (John Prophet)
I second that bang!
Nail well hit!
Loved it
Much appreciated
With...
May 12th, 2019 10:18 - High rise flats (Amyjay3z)
We can only stand back, not get drawn in
As I remember a time before my...
May 12th, 2019 10:14 - Believe (Sylviasearcher)
Wow.... Outstandingly beautiful, I shall be there
Thank you
Always...
May 12th, 2019 05:31 - it’s ok, it’s ok, it’s ok (AJ)
Loved this! You have a wonderful flow
May 12th, 2019 05:26 - Easy 19 (AJ)
Wow.... Such a vulnerable and powerful writing.
Thank you
May 12th, 2019 05:23 - In Search Of (WhereEvenAmI)
Brilliantly expressed, I remember a few times like this! Keep on writing...
May 12th, 2019 05:19 - We should meet more people not like us (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Yes! I did a piece once called antagonistic vs autonomous
Of not for...
May 12th, 2019 05:11 - Untitled - XI (Suresh)
Brilliant
May 12th, 2019 05:08 - Who Is This Person? (L. Wolfe)
Beautifully done
Thank you very much
May 12th, 2019 05:06 - Raindrop. (Goldfinch60)
Fantastically done from a simple situation. Inspirational as always
May 12th, 2019 04:57 - Poem from my Father - When you left (Nwriting)
Thank you for sharing
A heartful writing
May 11th, 2019 07:03 - Is Love Lost? (Asrealastheycome)
Brilliantly done, those questions only we can answer ourselves.
Much...
May 11th, 2019 07:01 - Life Has A Melody (Asrealastheycome)
It absolutely does I\'ve now heard your, what a splendid tune.
Felt so...
May 11th, 2019 06:57 - At Home I\'ve Been (Swishbish57)
Nature of natural flow
Some of us are built for a nightly stroll....
May 11th, 2019 03:59 - Mom Never Told Me (Swishbish57)
Loved it could feel a real Beastie Boys kick, keep spitting those lines...
May 11th, 2019 03:56 - Poetry In A Hurry (Swishbish57)
Poetry in hurry, mine never turns off!
I guess that\'s why we\'re all...
May 11th, 2019 03:46 - Late Hour (Swishbish57)
Express you did with a positive vibe
I hope your next day goes peacefully...
May 11th, 2019 03:42 - Ordered Serenity. (Goldfinch60)
I am still laughing at that video, what a fantastic way to start my...
May 11th, 2019 03:35 - Riddle of the Dark Kind (Suresh)
Probably or not
The choice is ours
Great stuff!
May 11th, 2019 03:25 - Afford To Love You (Yorelzinala)
Interesting as love does not cost or does it!
Thank you
May 11th, 2019 03:24 - No-one cares (Lulu Boatwright)
Wow, that so powerful and sad
If this is you I hope this brought some...
May 11th, 2019 03:21 - it just wouldnt rhyme (Dusk arising)
That was thoroughly enjoyed my friend, author note\'s had me in stitches...
May 11th, 2019 02:28 - I attract bad people. (E-Poems)
Well, I won\'t lie I think you do ;)
But some of those people have...
May 10th, 2019 16:58 - Break With The Broken. (Kevin browne)
Knew that would be worth waiting for, a true gift you are and the words...
May 10th, 2019 12:52 - LOOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
Hahaha loved the ending, it was a surprise and brought a big smile.
Thank...
May 10th, 2019 12:40 - God and Religion Again. (Goldfinch60)
My friend I just finished writing two more down, the first one finished...
May 10th, 2019 12:37 - dear J (Dusk arising)
Also if that was about Mary J I\'m taking good care of her ;)
May 10th, 2019 12:19 - dear J (Dusk arising)
Your craftsmanship is masterful sir
Thank you
May 10th, 2019 11:53 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Enjoyed but out of my league
May 10th, 2019 11:50 - I Love You\'s Intro (Nafis Light)
That can be so true.
You are perfectly you
May 9th, 2019 14:43 - Friends Are Special (W c)
Great reminder
Thanks a bunch
Always appreciated
With peace and love
May 9th, 2019 14:42 - Fire-Crest (Neville)
Brilliantly done, your are on fire lately and leave just absorbing your...
May 9th, 2019 14:39 - Sack of potatoes! (E-Poems)
That was spud-tacular!
Get my vote for the best one I\'ve ever seen!...
May 9th, 2019 11:10 - Eventide (Moordykspot2)
Brilliantly done, it felt so refreshing!
Much appreciated
May 9th, 2019 11:00 - WINDING DOWN. (Fay Slimm.)
Great work as always!
Thank you
May 9th, 2019 10:57 - Lost In Thought (W c)
Fantastic! I always went to button moon but I\'ll take a trip to come see...
May 9th, 2019 10:54 - new world (Dusk arising)
Great share my friend, felt so open and wonderful ending.
May 9th, 2019 10:51 - Satisfaction in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant, I do always start them but never go back.
Thanks for showing...
May 9th, 2019 10:45 - Moving On (Part 0) (Nafis Light)
Loved it!
May 9th, 2019 10:43 - SPIN-BACK (Fay Slimm.)
:( great writing
May 9th, 2019 10:42 - Dear Capricorn (Neville)
Had to take a deep breath after this....
Thank you
May 9th, 2019 10:40 - My Wonderful World. (Goldfinch60)
Always a pleasure to walk with you my friend.
Many thanks
May 9th, 2019 10:35 - who are you (to me)? (Queer-with-a-pen)
Wow, powerful stuff my friend reminds me of when I confronted my real...
May 9th, 2019 08:47 - Maze of words (Crystal Hope)
Fantastic ending, even got goosebumps
Much appreciated
May 8th, 2019 04:32 - Men Should Have Fun (W c)
Right on! Without fun I\'d be.....no one
Great writing
Much appreciated
May 8th, 2019 04:22 - A Peck Above the Brow (Neville)
Fantastic smile from this one
May 8th, 2019 04:19 - Ghosts & Shells (Neville)
Fantastic last lines my friend, brilliantly done but what else would we...
May 7th, 2019 04:08 - Treasure Hunting (Suresh)
So many thoughts after reading this!
Always appreciated!
Maybe not this...
May 7th, 2019 02:02 - IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards)
Very captivating indeed!
May 6th, 2019 00:29 - Loves Light FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
Classic! My school disco\'s would never of been the same with out this...
May 5th, 2019 05:55 - SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO (Michael Edwards)
What A awesome read on a Sunday
Inspirational words from a one of a kind!...
May 5th, 2019 05:50 - Believe in Your Smile (Nafis Light)
Even though* (you may have a typo)
You never have
The smile you...
May 5th, 2019 05:47 - I Am What I Am (Neville)
I don\'t believe much
But I believe you
A man I admire
I feel the...
May 5th, 2019 03:04 - Weird Tune (Dnellis369)
Nice flow my friend on with the 7th
Much peace and respect
May 4th, 2019 17:11 - miscarriage (MSA-19)
This was so pure and raw as no words can ever help this events, the only...
May 4th, 2019 07:57 - At The Edge Of Life (W c)
I\'m so glad I didn\'t miss this
It\'s hard to keep up and do your own ;)...
May 4th, 2019 02:48 - Manifest of melodies (Crystal Hope)
What an absolute gem!
Absolutely splendidly wonderful, as are you!...
May 4th, 2019 02:41 - Babies Don’t Bounce (Neville)
But....
They do in a door swing
Or a special chair
They do on my...
May 4th, 2019 02:38 - Another Week Alone. (Goldfinch60)
Powerful and pure
Straight from core
Such raw emotions
I can only...
May 4th, 2019 02:24 - Lie is the new truth (Suresh)
The old mc Donald had me in fits!
As I thought to my self this has to be...
May 2nd, 2019 17:54 - In me. (E-Poems)
There was a tingling down my spine
As flowed down your rhyme
My eyes...
May 2nd, 2019 17:48 - The Green Ballot Box (Poetboy123)
As always you writing are phenomenal, this flowed and...
May 2nd, 2019 06:33 - Ramblings?! (Orchidee)
Brilliantly done, thank for the walk nice to see fido r musing fun!
May 2nd, 2019 06:21 - Today\'s Gratitude (Nafis Light)
Sometimes a picture can give a thousand words or a few words can create in...
May 1st, 2019 16:54 - Stolen. (E-Poems)
You can\'t rush your healing by Trevor Hall, played in my head the whole...
May 1st, 2019 16:23 - Crumbs of Comfort (Neville)
Captured well his place we dwell, said to say it have feel like....
May 1st, 2019 16:09 - Weighty Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliantly done!
April 30th, 2019 12:33 - Laughing Mirror (Prequel) (Nafis Light)
I hear that beat, it moved my feet
Before I know it I\'m smiling ear to...
April 30th, 2019 12:25 - pain (E-Poems)
Wow... \"I realise my reality has become my nightmares.\"
A chill and...
April 30th, 2019 11:45 - Take a Seat... (Nafis Light)
Great first lines, brought me straight in!
Sometimes a smile comes after...
April 30th, 2019 11:31 - Followed (W c)
Loved this little gem! What a flow too
Much appreciated
Thank you
April 30th, 2019 11:27 - FREEING . (Fay Slimm.)
Eye.. booty be the best kind of treasure for you can sail the seas, just...
April 30th, 2019 11:22 - Suited Times. (Goldfinch60)
Phew! I had to go back and check the C word as I thought to my self no way...
April 30th, 2019 08:58 - White Bus (W c)
I was surprised that you was surprised, interesting writing.
Hope I...
April 30th, 2019 08:55 - How many times (re-write) (Dusk arising)
About 10 my friend but 3 or 4 I really but in and now I\'m enjoying that...
April 28th, 2019 06:59 - Empty Sky (Neville)
Some people like a dry & sweet wine, maturing wonderfully my...
April 28th, 2019 06:57 - Kiss Me In The Morning. (Kevin browne)
Fantastically done!
Thank you
April 27th, 2019 02:39
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