Comments on community poems by Poetic Dan
- Whispering Ghosts. (Kevin browne)
I won\'t lie I look at your work and think I\'m too tired to take that all...
July 26th, 2017 18:20 - DREAM THEATER (Louis Gibbs)
O That it is and I\'m playing at my best. I changed my environment(stage) ...
July 26th, 2017 18:10 - Dear me, from me (S.louise)
That\'s raw power there, never let that fire go out. You\'ve given me a...
July 26th, 2017 18:04 - don\'t hesitate (Willyweed)
My second pick was drawn to this
A word I know so well inside myself...
July 25th, 2017 17:28 - take me down the mountain (Willyweed)
Sorry to read of your troubles my friend and I hope they pass ...
July 25th, 2017 17:14 - Just around the Corner (FredPeyer)
That I do sir, every corner is then a milestone.
Well written
July 25th, 2017 01:58 - Accept the flaws of My Family (Saima)
Nicely done, family is for life and we all definitely have our faults!...
July 24th, 2017 01:30 - Begging Down on Broken Knees. (Kevin browne)
What was so *#@* powerful my friend.
I just couldn\'t tell you enough,...
July 23rd, 2017 15:13 - A Suicide (Mbird72)
Raw emotion
I felt that pain
You\'re on your way
As I am too
Keep...
July 23rd, 2017 04:27 - You are the poetry (Mbird72)
I am the poetry
So are you
We write these words
To tell our own truths...
July 23rd, 2017 04:21 - Stillness. (Fay Slimm.)
If I had a last word I think it would be \"forgiveness\"
Great piece...
July 23rd, 2017 04:18 - THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Although I don\'t share your faith
Your words still resonate and...
July 23rd, 2017 04:14 - Words (Ariane)
A very powerful write, felt every word and then some more.
This was like...
July 23rd, 2017 04:06 - The Path (Mellowman)
I look forward to a chat in the sun on that bank of love, while watching...
July 21st, 2017 11:11 - IF (DyingDreams)
If!
I just love this! I\'ve read it three times now and it just keeps...
July 20th, 2017 14:53 - MaƱana Karma (Edthepoet)
What the first to said ;)
Captivating
July 20th, 2017 14:43 - Door (The 2 A.M Writer)
My head is spinning with all this meaning. Great work!
July 20th, 2017 14:34 - Sometimes I Call My Mother A Whore (ElenaGrace)
Not sure about giving views for editing as my brain just can\'t see things...
July 20th, 2017 13:57 - Loneliness (Expressingmyself101)
I felt this to my core, memorys of standing on my cliff alone as much as I...
July 20th, 2017 13:47 - heARTbreak (Taylor Rhea)
I\'ve been told that the breaks there are the more light that comes in....
July 20th, 2017 13:29 - aftermath (Taylor Rhea)
Great ending, and so easy to put myself in your work!
July 20th, 2017 13:22 - Childish head (Malubotelho)
Early bird catches the worm, really liked this, thank you.
July 20th, 2017 13:13 - would you care? (Mozart)
Once we are deprogrammed or unprogrammed, then they would care. As for me...
July 20th, 2017 13:09 - Soul and Insight (Poetae Opus)
Nicely done. My soul is at ease with your words, thank you kindly sir.
July 20th, 2017 13:03 - exspand (Onepauly)
Fantastic \" ourselves as we truly are and with that there is no bar\" ...
July 20th, 2017 12:55 - THE WHO I AM (Louis Gibbs)
What a perfect last read before I dift off to see the who that is my...
July 19th, 2017 17:53 - Never in Return. (Kevin browne)
Powerful read as always so much to digest. I\'m watch the thunder and...
July 18th, 2017 17:54 - Inspire (Roudan)
Fantastic my head was dancing away while reading.
Second time round...
July 18th, 2017 17:29 - hear me please (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...)
Tell it for all to hear, if not just for yourself as it\'s the one you...
July 18th, 2017 17:23 - We\'re all under a spell. (CaitEva)
.... And the comment to follow up.
Artless art\" is an artistic...
July 18th, 2017 17:08 - Authenticity dead no knowledge of self. (CaitEva)
Ooooo you are good! Pen warrior indeed, will write poetry wiser than the...
July 18th, 2017 17:04 - Part of an infinite mind chain (CaitEva)
Wow, that\'s so good after reading the last one....I\'m nearly speechless...
July 18th, 2017 17:00 - An individual in a collective sea. (CaitEva)
This sings with every word
The feeling of connection
So beautifully...
July 18th, 2017 16:55 - LEADERS ~ WHO WOULD BE GODS ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nicely done!
I\'ll add this hopefully not to offend, they can play god...
July 16th, 2017 02:27 - good (Onepauly)
Good so far beyond good
July 15th, 2017 16:59 - A war for nothing (Migithehp)
A pen warrior you are, there are so many on this site. Thank you all I\'ll...
July 15th, 2017 16:56 - Reality? (ElenaGrace)
I believe you, we create the world that we perceive. Mine is amazingly...
July 15th, 2017 16:43 - Growing Pains (2017) (WhiteGirl1503)
Fantastic self reflection, truly know ourselves is a timeless task to...
July 15th, 2017 13:33 - We Are All Blind, For We Are Human (Poetboy123)
I hope you don\'t mind but like I said your great work of art is...
July 14th, 2017 20:54 - Shooting Star (Adri)
So many great lines, beautifully said from the heart.
Live the life you...
July 14th, 2017 18:28 - Ghost of Atlantis (Nicholas Browning)
I know we can read things differently depending on our own energy, today...
July 14th, 2017 18:02 - Boundaries (Adri)
Live, learn and figure it out.
Lovely write, forgiveness is the key. To...
July 14th, 2017 17:46 - Counting Sheep (Nicholas Browning)
Wow.....
July 12th, 2017 18:54 - Pulling Plugs. (Kevin browne)
Put your hand on a stove and 30 seconds feels like hours
Be in the...
July 12th, 2017 17:30 - War on Syria (Jaylenrene)
I done a piece called pen warriors, glad I\'ve just found one ;)....
July 12th, 2017 17:15 - The Middle Kids (Edthepoet)
I\'m the youngest and that line towards the end was perfect my friend.
I...
July 12th, 2017 10:51 - The Kiss (FredPeyer)
Wonderfully expressed good sir.
July 12th, 2017 10:13 - When the anxiety hits? (CrissDavies)
Beautifully expressed, no it is not fair!
July 12th, 2017 09:31 - The Regal Storm (Moonflower15)
Absolutely love this, felt brand new just by reading it ;)
July 12th, 2017 09:09 - I wish i never meant you (Angel-baby28)
That\'s some raw truth. Thank you for sharing and having the strength that...
July 11th, 2017 17:23 - Vulnerability (Lost Girl)
Wow I can relate, I spend most of my time trying not to be in others head....
July 11th, 2017 03:47 - Incoming. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful, this is sure to help me give me kids an extra long hug when we...
July 11th, 2017 03:13 - Fuck this Live (FredPeyer)
All done sir, for I\'ve been that one on the street, I know friends that...
July 11th, 2017 03:04 - Splashing Waves In Rainbows. (Kevin browne)
Brilliant! Every other line my brain was on fire, so many thoughts I...
July 11th, 2017 02:45 - Remains (Baylee)
Wow, I was trying to say something like this to someone the day. As always...
July 10th, 2017 08:54 - River of tears (Lost-but-not-broken17)
Thank you so much for sharing all of this: \"THE RIVER OF TEARS
Will...
July 10th, 2017 07:28 - It\'s been a long day (Mandi)
Absolutely love this, thank you! next time I belt one out and take that...
July 10th, 2017 03:22 - Words to the younger me (Poetic Dan)
Thank you sir, Shakespeare sort of said it first ;)
July 10th, 2017 03:14 - Its My Turn To Laugh (Lost Girl)
Powerful, I hope that rock they get swept under gives you some relief of...
July 10th, 2017 03:04 - Your My Inspiration (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Omffffg that was outstanding
The rhythmic flow
Just ran through my...
July 9th, 2017 18:39 - To feel (Nicholas Browning)
Nice job, definitely felt this one. Simple but powerfully affective, like...
July 9th, 2017 18:27 - The Mirror Holds Hate (Jdblake)
Reminds me of my raw pain
Use it, like I did let it take you
The path...
July 8th, 2017 19:20 - My story (Anthonyguzman98)
Raw emotion. Nice work
July 7th, 2017 18:12 - Naked clown (Roudan)
...... Wow I\'m honestly lost for words but emotions felt with it is going...
July 7th, 2017 18:08 - Turn Away (Lostgirl24)
Haha I\'ve been singing my own song all day today too.
\"ringing alone...
July 7th, 2017 18:01 - Clairvoyancy. (Goldfinch60)
Nicely done!
July 7th, 2017 02:58 - Your Nature (David Grubb)
What a ride. Thank you
July 6th, 2017 18:36 - Suicide Thoughts (Lostgirl24)
.... Always stay open and true to your self. I\'ve walked and still...
July 6th, 2017 01:32 - The curency of dreams (Roudan)
Wow. I think I\'ll be reading a few times even to complexed to say all...
July 5th, 2017 17:28 - I lie too (Muhammad the Bully)
Really liked this!
I tell no lie
have been beaten with that...
July 5th, 2017 17:18 - Did you ever really care? (Lost-but-not-broken17)
Powerful, you are so strong. This is so hard to read, when I miss my girl...
July 5th, 2017 15:47 - outdoors (Onepauly)
Thank you for paying respect to the food.
Really enjoyed that, made me...
July 5th, 2017 15:16 - being fit (Onepauly)
Word ;)
July 4th, 2017 18:19 - Asphyxiated. (Niallprideaux)
Wow, I let so many things go with breath at the end of that.
Thank you...
July 4th, 2017 16:33 - Chase (Poetboy123)
Thank you so much for this.
A true pen warrior you are
Be who you are...
July 4th, 2017 16:24 - Flow Without Flow (Emile Dubois)
Wow you\'ve just captured the very moment I\'m in. I shall read again and...
July 4th, 2017 16:16 - Keeping Up With The Reality (Niallprideaux)
There is no medicen on the tell lies vision.
July 4th, 2017 10:06 - Not Again. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you for sharing
I could offer many words
But I\'ll truly take a...
July 4th, 2017 10:02 - Poem number 1000 - Part Three : Deeper and deeper (Aa Harvey)
That was such an inspiring read
I\'d throw you a rope
But you know...
July 4th, 2017 03:45 - What If (FredPeyer)
What if, it does not matter.
Now that\'s a fact!
Superbly done, thank...
July 4th, 2017 03:39 - Dear Dad (Lost Girl)
Thank you so much for letting it out
Tears that follow were for that same...
July 4th, 2017 01:39 - Bound By Love (Seeker123)
Wow.. Just.. Wow
Your writing sings to me
I started doing this early...
July 4th, 2017 00:48 - Scars (Malubotelho)
Beautiful!
You truly deserve to find want it is that you write, peace...
July 3rd, 2017 15:50 - I like some rhymes. (Xd_Blade)
No rhyme is a crime
Nice work ;)
July 3rd, 2017 15:24 - No Tomorrow (Seeker123)
Wow, you just put the first time I saw a family member passed way in a...
July 3rd, 2017 15:19 - 2:14 AM (Iamtheeggman)
Got lost in that, thank you so much
July 3rd, 2017 15:09 - What is life? (Lost-but-not-broken17)
Outstanding!
Live the life you love
Love the live you live
I\'ll say...
July 3rd, 2017 14:16 - No Return (Jabberwocky)
O That feeling :(
Wonderfully written, thanks for reminding me where...
July 3rd, 2017 05:23 - The magic of poetry (Malubotelho)
Your words danced around in my head
Like magic I could feel them instead...
July 1st, 2017 17:38 - Semicolons (Rebecca g.)
Great passion in this thank you so much
July 1st, 2017 17:29 - Fear (Christina8)
Will share this with people I know ;)
Reflection really helps
Great to...
June 30th, 2017 19:38 - Learning To Drive (Christina8)
Ending of truth
Great poem
June 30th, 2017 19:30 - Silence (+_Juice_+)
Brilliant!
June 30th, 2017 16:46 - Unleashing chains (Wolf10)
I hope this means
you\'ve broke free
Thank you for sharing
Powerful...
June 30th, 2017 16:42 - Runner (Pollythepoet)
Brilliant message of moving forward
Rhythm made it that bit more awesome...
June 30th, 2017 16:37 - Grateful for positivity (Pollythepoet)
Have to read runner now but nicely done on highlighting power of
June 30th, 2017 16:30 - Gargouille Dispersed (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice work. Thank you
June 30th, 2017 09:16 - desperate (Onepauly)
I only wish I knew the poetry that was from my younger days, to see all...
June 30th, 2017 06:38 - Lost (BloodPho3nix)
We fall to the lowest depths
Feel the darkest of dark
To truly find who...
June 30th, 2017 03:04 - springtime (Onepauly)
Always makes me feel like tigger
Nicely done
June 29th, 2017 18:01
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