Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- A Living Scarecrow (Suresh)
Some scarecrows go on forever.
May 24th, 2019 00:47 - The End of My Line...The Start of My New Day (Nafis Light)
The light is always out there, in those dark days it was just hard to see...
May 24th, 2019 00:45 - small praise (Dusk arising)
In all the hardships of life we must keep going and your words show how...
May 24th, 2019 00:43 - ALLURE. (Fay Slimm.)
What a wonderful write Fay, the sea is so strong and yet it can produce...
May 24th, 2019 00:42 - Bang On (Neville)
Good fun write, some have more experience than others.
May 24th, 2019 00:40 - Little lights blessing (Poetic Dan)
Such a sad occasion, the grief you feel is understandable. Losing...
May 24th, 2019 00:36 - Serving Sincerely (Orchidee)
Mary had a little lamb,
She called it little Fido
And everywhere that...
May 23rd, 2019 02:30 - YOU🧡LL NEVER WALK ALONE ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
As an aside the Song \"You Will Never Walk Alone\" is so meaningful in...
May 23rd, 2019 01:50 - YOU🧡LL NEVER WALK ALONE ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
As long as you are together in your life of love wherever you go you will...
May 23rd, 2019 01:45 - A GLASS HALF EMPTY OR A GLASS HALF FULL. (Michael Edwards)
If the glass is half full
You have been cheated,
If the glass is half...
May 23rd, 2019 01:14 - Rains of Friendliness (Nafis Light)
\"Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass...It\'s about learning...
May 23rd, 2019 00:16 - The SPY (FineB)
Don\'t loom behind you, he may be there.
May 23rd, 2019 00:14 - Words left hanging (Poetic Dan)
Very true Dan, appreciation of life can take you so very far into glory.
May 23rd, 2019 00:12 - We the Innocent (Neville)
Powerful write Neville, an horrendous time in our world created by one man...
May 23rd, 2019 00:11 - FLASHES. (Fay Slimm.)
Fine write Fay, I enjoy watchinbg swallows over lakes when they fly just...
May 23rd, 2019 00:05 - Breath Breezes (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 22nd, 2019 23:58 - tree uprooted (Dusk arising)
Life can have all these problems thrown at you but they can be overcome...
May 22nd, 2019 23:54 - VOICES FOR CHOICES ~ BENJAMIN ZEPHANIAH (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Some fine messages in your words. I would argue about the line
\"Then...
May 22nd, 2019 23:51 - WORDS (Michael Edwards)
Those words are there within us just waiting to be assembled on the page.
May 22nd, 2019 00:50 - Untitled - XIV (Suresh)
Very wise words Suresh.
May 22nd, 2019 00:49 - Mon Amour (SerenWise)
What a wonderful loving write Suresh, absolutely wonderful.
May 22nd, 2019 00:48 - WE LOVE THE OLD THINGS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I too love old things especially in music and art.
May 22nd, 2019 00:41 - The Gnome knows (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful write and those three words are so meaningful.
May 22nd, 2019 00:37 - Renewing Remembrance (Orchidee)
Good one once more Orchi.
May 22nd, 2019 00:27 - RE-WRITING RHYMES. (Fay Slimm.)
Great re-write Fay, I do that occasionally and rewrite famous poems with...
May 22nd, 2019 00:25 - Thanks For Being My Friend (Temporary) (Nafis Light)
Some friendships just end through our lives with no fault on either side,...
May 22nd, 2019 00:20 - Tserevo Koria (Neville)
Good fond write Neville.
May 21st, 2019 01:07 - Ignorance\'s Dilemma (Suresh)
Very true write Suresh.
May 21st, 2019 01:06 - NATIONAL RULES ~ RULE ~ OK ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Rules can be invented to be broken as some are so ridiculous.
Here are...
May 21st, 2019 01:04 - Epilogue (Poetic Dan)
The light in your life is now there for us all to see.
May 21st, 2019 01:00 - they all saw it (Dusk arising)
Run indeed.
May 21st, 2019 00:38 - Sow And Reap (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
May 21st, 2019 00:34 - Upon Her Ears (Neville)
A fine gentle good bye with hopes of it being rekindled.
May 21st, 2019 00:33 - WOMAN-FED. (Fay Slimm.)
Super memories of times of yore, those mums really kept the families...
May 21st, 2019 00:29 - SHE WAITS (Michael Edwards)
May she be waiting for a long time. Good write Michael and fabulous...
May 20th, 2019 01:18 - Chasing After Tomorrow (Gino)
We can miss so many good times if all we want is to chase that dream...
May 20th, 2019 01:15 - My Problem. (Wholeheart97)
Good emotive write but I feel that he is using you, from your words you...
May 20th, 2019 01:13 - Hal Blaine (SoulMeetsBody)
Great write about a great drummer, as d a says many of us on hear have...
May 20th, 2019 01:10 - country road (Dusk arising)
Those yesterdays can have a great deal for which to answer, all we can do...
May 20th, 2019 00:39 - Distant (SerenWise)
Very emotive write, your wish is bound to come true.
May 20th, 2019 00:33 - The Zoo (StephD)
We all have those dark places in our lives but the light is never missing...
May 20th, 2019 00:32 - Signor (Neville)
Fine write Neville which bought a smile to my face but the serious...
May 20th, 2019 00:28 - Before 40 I\'m building a starship (Poetic Dan)
Each new challenge is part of experience and your challenges have each...
May 20th, 2019 00:25 - MANTRAS FOR HAPPINESS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So very true A and B, peace and respect from within each of us can create...
May 20th, 2019 00:20 - A Call In Calamity (Orchidee)
I do wish my prayers would be answered.
May 19th, 2019 01:45 - IN LIFE SPARE US (Michael Edwards)
So true, mirrors always mislead us.
May 19th, 2019 01:44 - Ink Splattered Skies (StephD)
Such a good write Steph. Walking with nature is wonderful and nature\'s...
May 19th, 2019 01:02 - Untitled - XII (Suresh)
So very true.
May 19th, 2019 00:57 - the love poet (Dusk arising)
Superb write d a, showing what words can do when written in this way, ...
May 19th, 2019 00:54 - THIRTY ONE # TIME GONE ? ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I would like to know what that patient has done for you to elbow him in...
May 19th, 2019 00:50 - Are you thinking about suicide? (Sylviasearcher)
The one thing that I have always had in my life is that I listen to people...
May 19th, 2019 00:42 - Dark and light, never two shall meet (Poetic Dan)
Very good very deep write Dan. That balance is there for us all and we...
May 19th, 2019 00:37 - Beautifully Broken (Neville)
Such a good poem, it can be imperfections in our loved ones that draw us...
May 19th, 2019 00:30 - Gracious Guidance (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 19th, 2019 00:29 - BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful words Michael, I beleive many of us have been on that walk.
May 19th, 2019 00:29 - There is alway someone better off (Jon Nakapalau)
That place is within you.
May 18th, 2019 00:31 - The painter of the war (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Such a powerful write Andrew, so many lives lost for reasons they did not...
May 18th, 2019 00:29 - The Initiation (Neville)
Such an awful thing to happen to the innocence of those who are forced to...
May 18th, 2019 00:26 - The Initiation (Neville)
Such an awful thing to happen to the innocence of those who are forced to...
May 18th, 2019 00:26 - Borrowed Love (Caleb.A)
Love has so many ways of showing itself, I can understand fully your...
May 18th, 2019 00:22 - STONES KNOW. (Fay Slimm.)
What a wonderful write Fay, those days of mining were so hard. Great to...
May 18th, 2019 00:19 - My Mind is blank (FineB)
Those words can be hard to write sometimes but it is surprising what...
May 18th, 2019 00:10 - A rhyme is a rhyme (Poetic Dan)
Poets write from the heart and the soul, as do you Dan.
May 18th, 2019 00:07 - Sincere Seeking (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 17th, 2019 02:31 - TEA? (Michael Edwards)
Rwanda Burundi fine tea leaves into a china teapot, freshly boiled water...
May 17th, 2019 00:48 - across the valley (Jon Nakapalau)
That stillness in life is so very important.
May 17th, 2019 00:43 - My Flame (SerenWise)
Beautiful loving write.
May 17th, 2019 00:42 - Safe Haven (IAmAlwaysConfusion)
Those trees will always give you peace and even when you come back to...
May 17th, 2019 00:32 - Someone to Watch Over You (Lorna)
May your gate lead to the wonderful life that you deserve Lorna.
Glad...
May 17th, 2019 00:24 - Leaving Home (2): for glory (Frank Prem)
Brave men sent to help all.
\"Advance Australia Fair\"
May 17th, 2019 00:22 - LA ABUELA MIA : MY GRANDMAMA ! A TRIBUTE : ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great tribute to your Grandmother Angela is is obviously a much loved
May 17th, 2019 00:18 - The Kingdom To Come (Orchidee)
Good positive write Orchi.
May 17th, 2019 00:15 - Selfhood (Poetic Dan)
Over the time that I have been reading your poems you have come such a...
May 17th, 2019 00:14 - UNANSWERABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
What a wonderful write Fay, the spell of love is so obscure but so very...
May 17th, 2019 00:08 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (6) (Michael Edwards)
I hope those peas will be split to go with the faggots.
May 16th, 2019 01:51 - Flowers Musing on Rain (Lorna)
Very good write Lorna, I do hope that you will be able to dress in colours...
May 16th, 2019 00:25 - 3rd Ypres (1) a swamp (of all the world) (Frank Prem)
The blood of lives sacrificed at the whims of those in power.
May 16th, 2019 00:22 - YESTERDAY. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay, the rain can wash away the ills that are out there so...
May 16th, 2019 00:20 - Watering Can (Poetic Dan)
Good fun write with a deeper meaning, many can be watering cans who bring...
May 16th, 2019 00:18 - Restored And Renewed (Orchidee)
If his restoring grace is there why does he not restore Joyce!!
May 16th, 2019 00:16 - Limerick-diculous (Dusk arising)
I know that guy from Evesham, he goes to our church!
May 15th, 2019 00:21 - An Old Saying (SerenWise)
May your wounds be healed and never happen again.
May 15th, 2019 00:17 - Broken radio (Crystal Hope)
Your words are transmitting with clarity Crystal.
May 15th, 2019 00:15 - Sliding Scale of Mercy (Suresh)
Thought provoking write Suresh but anarchy would surely not work.
The...
May 15th, 2019 00:10 - Red Cushions (Lorna)
Bliss is always with you Lorna as your words on the page show us.
May 15th, 2019 00:05 - SELFHOOD. (Fay Slimm.)
Your life is your own and unique, others try to influence it but for...
May 15th, 2019 00:03 - Multitude Myriads (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
May 15th, 2019 00:00 - Back to fun, my ships are done (Poetic Dan)
Your ship is sailing into the new harbour of you life where the light...
May 14th, 2019 23:59 - of Elspenore pt2 (Dusk arising)
In life there are mysteries that intrigue us and elspenore sits there...
May 14th, 2019 23:57 - Sally Am Jam (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Good tribute to a wonderful organisation Andrew.
May 14th, 2019 01:39 - DORIS DAY AN ACROSTIC TRIBUTE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
She was a great star, I have enjoyed all the movies that I have seen with...
May 14th, 2019 01:38 - Love Letter (SerenWise)
Home is where love is.
May 14th, 2019 00:23 - Rainbows (Lorna)
Those rainbows are so important in our lives Lorna.
May 14th, 2019 00:20 - HUMAN HANDS ~ ALMOST INDISPENSABLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I hold out my hands to you both as a sign of friendship and love.
May 14th, 2019 00:19 - FOLLY. (Fay Slimm.)
Good emotive write Fay, it is amazing what words can be stirred in our...
May 14th, 2019 00:17 - Second letter to my younger self (Poetic Dan)
Very good write. That light is there for us all and recently it has been...
May 14th, 2019 00:14 - Faithful Following (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 14th, 2019 00:12 - Mix Ups #27 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
So very true, saying and doing are worlds apart.
May 13th, 2019 01:34 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (4) (Michael Edwards)
The sheep we had for lunch yesterday only had droppings of mint sauce with...
May 13th, 2019 01:33 - Thinker (Suresh)
The way the humans are treating the earth is abominable but once homo...
May 13th, 2019 01:31
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