Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- I am a Leftie - And proud of it! (FredPeyer)
Good write. I seem to have noticed recently that I come across more and...
July 16th, 2017 01:46 - Rice Wine (Nicholas Browning)
I raise a glass to your health Nicholas.
July 16th, 2017 01:43 - Still A Nurse (Christina8)
Good write. Nurses are special people.
July 16th, 2017 01:40 - Memories (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Beautiful write.
July 16th, 2017 01:39 - good (Onepauly)
very good and very positive write,
July 16th, 2017 01:38 - Slap my wrist (Renzi)
Cheers Renzi have (or hope you had) a great time.
July 16th, 2017 01:30 - Meditative Meanderings (Orchidee)
Good write.
July 16th, 2017 01:28 - Who brings ice Cream to a fucking poker game ? (Joaquin Finn)
I would have taken rum and raisin ice-cream! Good fun write.
July 16th, 2017 01:16 - Movement. (Fay Slimm.)
Another awe inspiring write Fay. Thank you.
July 16th, 2017 01:13 - Alone (FredPeyer)
Very good write, being alone can hold many wonders.
July 16th, 2017 01:11 - The girl on the sand (Hopey_xx)
Super write, \"broken stories trapped in the shore\" says so much.
July 15th, 2017 00:20 - The Star That Never Dimmed (Moonwriting)
That drum will always call you and your friend to rise again. Good write....
July 15th, 2017 00:15 - One Beat (Tony36)
As long as the beat goes on our lives will progress. Keep tapping away.
July 15th, 2017 00:11 - Prosperous Paths (Orchidee)
Good write.
July 15th, 2017 00:08 - Epiphany (Malubotelho)
Vibrate away M, vibrate away.
July 15th, 2017 00:06 - THE WHO I AM (Louis Gibbs)
Good write and yes there are alternate realities. I will put a poem on...
July 15th, 2017 00:06 - Porch (Jabberwocky)
May your life always start with everyday being a good one.
July 15th, 2017 00:03 - Holiday Season (Renzi)
Good fun write. I hope the vodka still allowed you to remember the good...
July 15th, 2017 00:02 - recess (Onepauly)
Good write. I once knew a postman whose postal round was in the middle of...
July 15th, 2017 00:00 - Low Hanging Fruit (FredPeyer)
Good write. Temptation is often before us.
July 14th, 2017 23:57 - Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.)
What a wonderfully evocative write. I was with her on her journey.
July 14th, 2017 23:56 - HOT AIR BALLOONS - An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write. We see many hot air balloons around our way and the town used...
July 14th, 2017 23:53 - Task Achieved. (Goldfinch60)
Is Iron Man a superhero? Thanks Renzi.
July 14th, 2017 07:47 - A sentinel (Aa Harvey)
Good write. Will war in our land never end.
July 14th, 2017 02:37 - Time is nothing (Ali.louise)
Good emotive write.
July 14th, 2017 02:01 - A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Good couplets Michael.
July 14th, 2017 01:56 - hatter mad (Heather T)
Gnash away Heather. Good write.
July 14th, 2017 01:55 - Baby poems (Jabberwocky)
Good writes, I bet the children loved them.
July 14th, 2017 01:50 - Waffling A While (Orchidee)
It had to happen sometime Orchi when you went into your sherry soaked...
July 14th, 2017 01:44 - My boys birthday write (Poetic Dan)
Very good write and message. May your son go along his path of life...
July 14th, 2017 01:40 - Natures Wash Day.... (P.H.Rose)
Good write, it is always amazing what you can see in nature in the...
July 14th, 2017 01:23 - THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write but another things that you have to remember is that us Brits...
July 14th, 2017 01:09 - THROUGH THE NIGHT (3) (Michael Edwards)
That last stanza does complete this poem, those pledges will go on
July 13th, 2017 01:10 - Searching Through Stillness (Augustus)
That muse can be so elusive sometimes but it was certainly with you when...
July 13th, 2017 01:05 - Real Football Players.... (P.H.Rose)
They certainly were, I haven\'t been to a football match since 1963 back...
July 13th, 2017 01:01 - Bliss (Tony36)
Good write. Yes we will all head towards eternity with our Spirit.
July 13th, 2017 00:58 - The Kiss (FredPeyer)
Very good write and the last stanza is so meaningful.
July 13th, 2017 00:57 - THE LIGHT YOU PROVIDED (Louis Gibbs)
You must always chose your own path to follow the light in your life.
July 13th, 2017 00:55 - Worship Worthies (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
July 13th, 2017 00:54 - As sweet as ever (Malubotelho)
Good loving write.
July 13th, 2017 00:53 - candle light (Onepauly)
Nothing \'run of the mill\' about this poem. Good write.
July 13th, 2017 00:52 - Heaven-Held. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write Fay.
July 13th, 2017 00:48 - The Endless End (Jabberwocky)
Very good write.
July 13th, 2017 00:44 - MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good fun write. Michaels abstracts always talk to me as well.
July 13th, 2017 00:43 - THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS (Michael Edwards)
I could have written that with my cynical view of politicians.
I could...
July 12th, 2017 02:50 - Toast (Tony36)
Cheers, make mine a glass of rioja please.
July 12th, 2017 02:46 - Deliverance Desirings 2 (Orchidee)
Amen, Orchi, Amen.
July 12th, 2017 02:42 - Bends In My Road.... (P.H.Rose)
Good write. Those bends in life\'s roads need to be walked round as there...
July 12th, 2017 00:25 - Deluded (Jabberwocky)
\"Tyger Tyger, burning bright,
In the forests of the night;
What...
July 12th, 2017 00:15 - mutual (Onepauly)
The way I read it is to travel with your soul or it may be just you soul...
July 12th, 2017 00:12 - Fuck this Live (FredPeyer)
Very good and true write but it is not just in Hawaii, it is everywhere. ...
July 12th, 2017 00:08 - PEACE? - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Brian. Over the years I have written many acrostics.
I too...
July 11th, 2017 06:29 - A FEW SINGLE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
One liners can be very good and can also be enigmatic.
Your abstract is...
July 11th, 2017 00:48 - DEJA VU 2 ~ MON CLAIR DE LUNE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write about a wonderful tune. As an aside I saw this performed once...
July 11th, 2017 00:44 - A cry for opinion (Malubotelho)
What you cannot believe in are the politicians as they are in it for what...
July 11th, 2017 00:39 - Personal Battle (Ternic73)
Good write. \"We will remember them\"
July 11th, 2017 00:33 - My Heart Pounds (Rosetintedview)
Good write, my your heart be fulfilled.
July 11th, 2017 00:26 - THE ENDLESS QUEST (Louis Gibbs)
Very good write, may he know peace.
July 11th, 2017 00:18 - Glisten (Nicholas Browning)
Good write, writing is so powerful and therapeutic in it conception and...
July 11th, 2017 00:12 - callousness (Stephanie Showers)
Good write with a positive end. Start all over again in the knowledge that...
July 11th, 2017 00:10 - Hello doctor (S.louise)
Thank you for sharing this, as you say cancer is a bi*ch. I heard last...
July 11th, 2017 00:08 - Good Bye Geoffrey (Augustus)
Good write, my son was like this at one time in his life. We went and...
July 11th, 2017 00:05 - Long for you (Lost in Murphy)
Beautiful lovelorn write.
July 11th, 2017 00:00 - Walking On In The Way (Orchidee)
Powerful positive write.
July 10th, 2017 23:59 - Remains (Baylee)
Good write.
July 10th, 2017 23:58 - All I want Is You (Brandyngraham)
Good loving write.
July 10th, 2017 23:54 - River of tears (Lost-but-not-broken17)
Very good write and very positive. The lines
\"But on the other side
Of...
July 10th, 2017 23:54 - To New Friends Gained..... (P.H.Rose)
No thank you PH for your words. As Augustus said many of us feel the same...
July 10th, 2017 23:49 - The beauty from within. (Samreen Chowdhury)
Super loving and positive write.
July 10th, 2017 23:46 - Monday morning, gone eleven (Renzi)
We all have those days but rest assured they become fewer and fewer in our...
July 10th, 2017 23:44 - Hoping (FredPeyer)
Super write, that feeling of hope showing up as hopelessness.
July 10th, 2017 23:41 - Half Full / Half Empty (Jabberwocky)
Clever write. I don\'t know about porcupine but I have heard that...
July 10th, 2017 23:40 - solar system (Onepauly)
Very good write, one day we will visit the planets.
July 10th, 2017 07:41 - Road-Shock. (Fay Slimm.)
Such a sad sight to see any animal run over but foxes are such beautiful...
July 10th, 2017 07:39 - Would you believe me (Poetic Dan)
Good write, we can always change our ways.
July 10th, 2017 07:38 - Couplet (1) (Michael Edwards)
Good write and cartoon Michael.
July 10th, 2017 01:48 - Your Move (Lost in Murphy)
Good write but I think you will find that no matter how good a game you...
July 10th, 2017 01:28 - Youth (Ezra.mendoza)
Good write, these feelings increase with age and I have 50 years on you. ...
July 10th, 2017 01:26 - Your My Inspiration (Ron parrish aka wordman)
This is a wonderful write, my your ink never stop flowing.
July 10th, 2017 01:21 - Behind The Glass (Dylan)
Be sure that I can break that glass so that your life of freedom can be...
July 10th, 2017 01:01 - I Have The Poets Will. (Kevin browne)
Good write, Poets seem to have the will to keep writing and may your will...
July 10th, 2017 00:58 - Drowning (S.louise)
Good emotive write, may your pain soon subside.
July 10th, 2017 00:56 - Numb (R.A.Brown)
Very good write, may that love soon be with you. Welcome to MPS.
July 10th, 2017 00:55 - Just say sorry (ShannonXx)
You must only apologise if you mean it, as has been said some apologise to...
July 10th, 2017 00:54 - Flowerless Thorn (Baylee)
Good write. May you find your thornless flower soon.
July 10th, 2017 00:51 - Her city of words (Abu Aeesh)
Good loving write, may her words forever be with you.
July 10th, 2017 00:47 - reflection (Heather T)
Beautiful write.
July 10th, 2017 00:45 - The Warmth of Your Gaze (Moonflower15)
Very good write and tribute. Friends whom you trust and help you are so...
July 10th, 2017 00:44 - Words to the younger me (Poetic Dan)
Good write and the last two lines are very true.
July 10th, 2017 00:41 - Kingdom Kindlings 2 (Orchidee)
Another good one Orchi. I have still not heard anything about \'that...
July 10th, 2017 00:40 - Memories Tender (Augustus)
Beautiful write.
July 10th, 2017 00:26 - Lost souls (Renzi)
Very good write. Yes you are so right that in this day and age there are...
July 10th, 2017 00:19 - Dignity (Jabberwocky)
Life is for living so keep your head up so all cn be seen. Good write.
July 10th, 2017 00:18 - communication (Onepauly)
Good write.
July 10th, 2017 00:15 - A most Unconventional Wedding..... (P.H.Rose)
Super write, weddings do not have to be conventional. This sounds as if...
July 10th, 2017 00:13 - COMMUNICATING WITH GOD ~ A Blank Verse 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen Brian, Amen.
July 10th, 2017 00:11 - Shore-Song. (Fay Slimm.)
I hear the song that your words sing.
July 10th, 2017 00:08 - MEMORIES AND DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Very good write and another good painting.
July 9th, 2017 01:26 - Lamb Life (Orchidee)
Good write once more.
July 9th, 2017 01:24 - Candy (Renzi)
good write filled with sweetness.
July 9th, 2017 01:03
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