Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- the veil (Heather T)
Beautifully emotive write.
January 22nd, 2018 01:58 - 2018 Homesick Blues (Syd)
Very good write Syd, thoroughly enjoyed it and could relate to it.
January 22nd, 2018 01:58 - The Gents and Me (Lorna)
I can visualise this scene, good write.
January 22nd, 2018 01:33 - Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: Prelude #1 - in preparation (Frank Prem)
May his evening be filled with happiness.
January 22nd, 2018 01:32 - OPEN MY EYES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
WE are all awaiting Our Lords return Brain. Good write.
January 22nd, 2018 01:29 - Paradise Party (Orchidee)
Another good write and piece of music. In 2016 my brother took me to the...
January 21st, 2018 03:28 - LIMERICKS 46, 47, and 48 (Michael Edwards)
Good fun writes Michael, especially the second one.
We had the pews in...
January 21st, 2018 02:49 - Consiousness (FredPeyer)
Very good write, your soul may also be your conciousness.
January 21st, 2018 02:46 - Biscuits and gravy (Tony36)
Good write, I like home made bread and gravy.
January 21st, 2018 01:38 - Rapunzel (KR)
Very emotive write, I do hope you can find your way out.
January 21st, 2018 01:37 - ACROSTICS ~ The Animal Dentist ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good fun write Brian.
January 21st, 2018 01:24 - THREE LITTLE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Three meaningful couplets Michael.
I can see things in the artwork, it...
January 20th, 2018 01:51 - I fell in love (DD.)
Good emotive write.
January 20th, 2018 01:49 - DARK SIDE OF THE MOON (SEAMUS)
Good write, may your friends path to recovery be filled with...
January 20th, 2018 01:46 - Thoughts. (Wallace)
Good write and that last line is so right.
January 20th, 2018 01:41 - UNSUNG HEROES (Lasergraph)
A wonderful write that created emotions within me, so many unseen wounds...
January 20th, 2018 01:40 - Darkness (Tony36)
May that darkness soon be lit to show you the way.
January 19th, 2018 09:11 - I know of so many (Poetic Dan)
We should always give what we can to others even if it is just a smile....
January 19th, 2018 09:06 - Prosperous Plans - Good News Series - 3 (Orchidee)
I have a copy of the Bible in Limerick verse - here is Genesis 17:
This...
January 19th, 2018 03:13 - Prosperous Plans - Good News Series - 3 (Orchidee)
Good write, are you actually going to rewrite all of the Bible?
January 19th, 2018 03:07 - Human Merchandise (FredPeyer)
This is very true for many in a world where there is enough for all but...
January 19th, 2018 03:06 - way poem #17: boat to the island (Frank Prem)
Beautiful, I was in that boat.
January 19th, 2018 02:06 - LUMBER (Michael Edwards)
Good meaningful write, so much is being destroyed in this world....
January 19th, 2018 02:05 - This Flame Will Burn On (Poetboy123)
May that flame never ever be extinguished.
January 19th, 2018 02:00 - I didn\'t want to go (Renzi)
I do hope and pray that your worldly life continues and your battle is...
January 19th, 2018 01:59 - Defunct Marriage (FredPeyer)
This is a very true write Fred for many people, I am very grateful that I...
January 19th, 2018 01:51 - Winter Is My Favorite Time of Year (DHA)
Good write, I do enjoy going out with the sun shining and a frost on the...
January 19th, 2018 01:47 - Oh To Be A Swift (W c)
Wonderful birds swifts. I have been fortunate to help one in the past. ...
January 19th, 2018 01:45 - I know of none (Poetic Dan)
This is a great write and shows how we can all change. Life is what you...
January 19th, 2018 01:43 - Sing (Tony36)
Sing away Tony sing away it can be one of the most fulfilling ways of...
January 19th, 2018 01:40 - Dancing with the Dead (RK) (Lorna)
Very good write, dance on sr, dance on.
January 18th, 2018 09:09 - This Chair. (Fay Slimm.)
Super write, that chair could tell so many stories.
January 18th, 2018 09:05 - BLUE MOON or BLOOD MOON (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I have pictures of the last big moon in December 2017.
January 18th, 2018 09:02 - way poem #16: open to new (Frank Prem)
Very good write Frank, each moment is anew world to be explored.
January 18th, 2018 09:00 - Fearful Fall - Good News Series - 2 (Orchidee)
That snake has a great deal for which to answer. Good write.
January 18th, 2018 03:00 - Quiet (Mariana Lorentz)
wonderful message, may the peace be with you.
January 18th, 2018 02:18 - Platform Four (FredPeyer)
Very good write, people watching is a great way to write, I do it quite a...
January 18th, 2018 02:15 - The Fat Girl (Tony36)
There are many people who are judged from what they look like on the...
January 18th, 2018 02:08 - What Might Have Been (Lorna)
Good write, it is that same question of course, If....
January 17th, 2018 08:50 - Love ya sis (Poetic Dan)
Good write to your friend, your sister, this is how it should be,
January 17th, 2018 08:47 - Esteem. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write and so true, self esteem is everything.
January 17th, 2018 08:45 - ARMAGEDDON ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love conquers all.
January 17th, 2018 02:53 - Ruby Murray. (Wallace)
Good write, I have been there - is the toilet paper in the fridge?
January 17th, 2018 02:52 - LOVE\'S CYCLE (Michael Edwards)
A beautiful emotive write Michael.
January 17th, 2018 02:29 - way poem #15: I, creator (Frank Prem)
May that palette create the colours of your world. Good write.
January 17th, 2018 02:28 - TEMPORARY TEMPLES (Louis Gibbs)
Good write, the body should always be respected.
January 17th, 2018 02:27 - You Lied (Mariana Lorentz)
Eventually two winners emerge and will go on together. Welcome to MPS.
January 17th, 2018 02:25 - Time To Say Goodbye (Poetboy123)
Good write, may that poison soon find an antidote and life goes on as...
January 17th, 2018 02:16 - THINGS I HAVE LEARNED (Lasergraph)
Very good and very true write. Walking with nature can work miracles.
January 17th, 2018 02:15 - Eyes (Pots-and-pans)
Good write with a dark ending.
January 17th, 2018 02:14 - Normality? (2008) (Syd)
Good write and very true, in each of our lives we need to try something...
January 17th, 2018 02:11 - The Youngest Old Man You’ll Ever Meet (AuburnScribbler)
Age can be a myth, getting old happens to the body but in the mind youth...
January 17th, 2018 02:05 - Campfire (Tony36)
Very good and a great place to be.
January 17th, 2018 01:59 - ODE TO A BATTERY HEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian, I always buy free range eggs.
January 17th, 2018 01:56 - Thousands Tribute (Orchidee)
Our Choir sing The tune on Ikliey Moor to Hark the Herald as well.
Good...
January 17th, 2018 01:47 - ANOTHER COUPLET COLLECTION (Michael Edwards)
I do like the first one Michael.
January 16th, 2018 01:55 - No Regret (FredPeyer)
Good write and very true Fred, we take what life gives us and the choices...
January 16th, 2018 01:54 - Time (Hoopie)
All you can do is advise him, he will still make mistakes as we all do, it...
January 16th, 2018 01:52 - OUR MANY YEARS TOGETHER (Lasergraph)
Super write, I have exactly the same feelings.
January 16th, 2018 01:50 - Good old nonsense poem (Jooles)
Super fun write, Spike would have been proud.
Spike is a great poet and...
January 16th, 2018 01:48 - Rainy Day Imagination (Tony36)
Super write, there is nothing quite like getting lost in a book.
January 16th, 2018 01:44 - Arousal. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay, I could see this in my mind as the words came into
January 16th, 2018 01:41 - Someone, Somewhere (Pots-and-pans)
Those moments are always there some are ours some are for others but each...
January 16th, 2018 01:39 - SNOW TRANSFORMS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So true Brian, snow can bring beauty to most things.
January 16th, 2018 01:35 - The Choir in the Corridor (AuburnScribbler)
Very good write and very true. Now she gives Hunt even more power by...
January 15th, 2018 00:43 - Two Souls (Tony36)
It is amazing what happens when two lost souls become one.
January 15th, 2018 00:39 - GOD WILL TAKE CARE OF YOU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen.
January 15th, 2018 00:38 - Wise Waiting (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
January 15th, 2018 00:38 - PUPPETRY (Michael Edwards)
Though provoking write Michael.
I like the artwork, I can see many...
January 14th, 2018 02:00 - Alibis (WL Schuett)
Beautiful write so full of great imagery.
Love the artwork.
January 14th, 2018 01:55 - No Airbrushing Please (AuburnScribbler)
Very true we need to be what we are.
I do like the idea of \'danger...
January 14th, 2018 01:47 - Dreams (Tony36)
Those dreams are what life is all about and you must follow them.
January 14th, 2018 01:42 - Redemption Rememberings (Orchidee)
Super write Orchi.
January 14th, 2018 01:38 - COLD CRABS (Michael Edwards)
Cheeky!
Love the artwork.
January 13th, 2018 02:19 - Deep Freeze (Christina8)
What Michael said. Snow is only here occasionally in middle England and...
January 13th, 2018 02:18 - HAPPINESS IS (Lasergraph)
Wonderful write laser and so very true. True happiness does not cost...
January 13th, 2018 02:16 - Open your heart (Tony36)
Good write love is always waiting for you.
January 13th, 2018 02:04 - Silent Music. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write for beautiful flowers, we always have flowers in the
January 13th, 2018 02:03 - Rapturous Rose (Orchidee)
Good write, I struggled to get the timing write when singing it but found...
January 12th, 2018 03:34 - FUNKY FOOTWEAR ~ TANKAS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Booted and suited Brian - back in the day that was.
Good write.
January 12th, 2018 03:31 - Clouded (WL Schuett)
Very good write, may that crack show you the beauty of your...
January 12th, 2018 02:29 - Saved by the Light (FredPeyer)
The light will always be there even in the darkest of times. Good write.
January 12th, 2018 02:27 - Forsaken (M.E.M.)
Good emotive write.
January 12th, 2018 02:18 - WHEN I WAS A TEEN (Lasergraph)
Good write, I was there, although in the UK, life was easier and somehow...
January 12th, 2018 02:11 - NESSUN DORMA (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful write about a beautiful song, as I saw the title I heard...
January 12th, 2018 01:43 - Alone (Tony36)
Good write which can be so true for so many.
January 11th, 2018 09:02 - Fulfilled. (Fay Slimm.)
A super write Fay. Love is always wonderful.
January 11th, 2018 08:58 - PEACE & SERENITY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian, we will all be there in time.
January 11th, 2018 08:55 - Not For Me. (Wallace)
Good write, there is something so wonderful about being in the
January 11th, 2018 02:27 - THIS LAND HE CALLS HIS HOME (Michael Edwards)
Good write Michael.
I too like the artwork.
January 11th, 2018 02:26 - Be Your Best... (W c)
Good positive write and very true.
January 11th, 2018 02:24 - THE BEAST (Louis Gibbs)
Very strong words, I, like Michael, have never suffered abuse but one of...
January 11th, 2018 02:17 - Anger within (Hoopie)
Very good write and so very true - Oprah for President?
January 11th, 2018 02:14 - Thought it stopped but it came straight back (Poetic Dan)
May your hope soon grow into reality, good emotive write.
January 11th, 2018 02:11 - Wednesday 10th (Renzi)
Such a positive write and I am sending you more positive vibes, keep...
January 11th, 2018 01:48 - 2018 ~ THE EXPECTATIONS ~ An Acrostic 3 11 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The New Year WILL be wonderful.
January 10th, 2018 09:06 - Wind-Demons. (Fay Slimm.)
Super write and the imagery is wonderful.
January 10th, 2018 09:01 - Prayer And Praise (Orchidee)
Very good write and the last verse says it all in our current world.
January 10th, 2018 09:00 - Climbing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you Kat, we used to walk that path quite often but my wife now gas...
January 10th, 2018 08:58 - Broken Me (FredPeyer)
Superb write, my wife was always there for me and we became one, as it...
January 10th, 2018 01:54
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