Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- The evil that wakes you (Jooles)
Being an early bird myself this never bothered me, but once they became...
February 26th, 2018 01:42 - The Renaissance Lover (Lorna)
Beautiful write.
February 26th, 2018 01:39 - Roaming around (Poetic Dan)
Good write, what is inside of us is wonderful.
February 26th, 2018 01:38 - Seven Ages of The SON of MAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Even for those who do not believe that Jesus is the Son of God if they...
February 26th, 2018 01:36 - Communion Commitment (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
February 26th, 2018 01:29 - Solemn Vow (FredPeyer)
Yes Fred, I am with you especially the last verse.
February 25th, 2018 02:59 - The Polititian (FredPeyer)
So very true Fred, so very true. There is a word or words for them that I...
February 25th, 2018 02:57 - FOG (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful write Michael.
February 25th, 2018 02:53 - B of E #17: when she walked it was a saunter (Frank Prem)
Beautiful. May the night last forever.
February 25th, 2018 02:26 - A Modern Psalm (Seeker)
That psalm will be sung as we go towards eternity.
February 25th, 2018 02:25 - Dragons fight (Jooles)
Good write, the fight of life can be won.
February 25th, 2018 02:19 - Loneliness (Myself and me)
Good write m and m. Even in the dark the light will be there.
February 25th, 2018 02:17 - Having To Let You Go (Lorna)
Beautiful emotive write.
February 25th, 2018 02:12 - OMNIBUS ~ NO FUSS ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian, see my answer to Orchi.
February 25th, 2018 02:08 - Flame Of Faith (Orchidee)
The Light is always there.
February 25th, 2018 02:00 - RISING PAIN (Michael Edwards)
May that pain soon be eased
With truths that calm her soul
February 24th, 2018 01:39 - Not in Sync (FredPeyer)
Yes there are some days when all seems to go wrong for us but as you said...
February 24th, 2018 01:37 - Time to enter not just look (Poetic Dan)
Harmony in life is a wonderful thing for which to aim, I hope to find it...
February 24th, 2018 01:35 - The Sailor\'s Farewell (Lorna)
Very good write with great imagery.
February 24th, 2018 01:22 - Absence of Truth (Nicholas Browning)
Good write and so true.
February 24th, 2018 01:21 - Siren Song (Jabberwocky)
Maybe the song should be changed and a new beginning would be upon you.
February 24th, 2018 01:19 - STILL CLIMBING. (Fay Slimm.)
Super write Fay. Being betrayed is one of the worst things that can happen...
February 24th, 2018 01:17 - BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS (Michael Edwards)
\"To approach the spiritual in art, one will make as little use as...
February 23rd, 2018 02:14 - BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS (Michael Edwards)
May your words forever flow
May your colours forever glow
May the stars...
February 23rd, 2018 02:13 - B of E #16: the man who knew (Frank Prem)
Such a good write Frank, he knows but doesn\'t want to accept it.
February 23rd, 2018 02:07 - Emotion (Mrskobrien)
Good write and that last stanza is so very true.
February 23rd, 2018 02:00 - Depression And Anxiety (Christina8)
\"Hope wanes as winter
lags on in such a way
My solace is knowing...
February 23rd, 2018 01:37 - Aye! That\'s Us Away! (Lorna)
Very good write, I was sailing with you.
February 23rd, 2018 01:34 - BEGINNINGS. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write Fay, fabulous and very meaningful last two lines.
February 23rd, 2018 01:32 - Wholly Holy (Orchidee)
Good write, may all the wicked be dealt with.
February 22nd, 2018 02:47 - Baby Blues (Ambest)
Beautiful write, babies are so special and stay in the memory, I can still...
February 22nd, 2018 02:39 - TRUE HISTORY (Michael Edwards)
Very true but what we also need to realise is that history is written by...
February 22nd, 2018 02:36 - BILLY GRAHAM R.I.P ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good write Brian, I guessed that you would write a tribute to Billy...
February 22nd, 2018 02:35 - First Dance (Resa71)
Good emotive write, maybe that first dance is still to come.
February 22nd, 2018 01:59 - Early Start. (Wallace)
Those early morning strolls with nature are wonderful.
February 22nd, 2018 01:58 - B of E #15: untitled - a (Frank Prem)
Are we back in Emiles?
February 22nd, 2018 01:57 - I don\'t think you love me (Birddie Jane)
Very emotive write.
February 22nd, 2018 01:56 - Happiness (Hoopie)
Welcome to the world of happiness, may your Faith continue under God\'s...
February 22nd, 2018 01:53 - Dance (Tally)
\"Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass...It\'s about learning...
February 22nd, 2018 01:42 - Shame And Doubt (Christina8)
Good emotive write Christina but all will be well, Spring is nearly here,...
February 22nd, 2018 01:37 - Last breathe (Diane260965)
Very good emotive write Diane, yes you WILL meet again.
Welcome to MPS.
February 22nd, 2018 01:28 - Dear Grandpa (Ambest)
Good write and tribute to a well loved grandpa. He will always be with...
February 22nd, 2018 01:25 - Constant (Mrskobrien)
Good emotive write, I hope your battle takes you into a peaceful world....
February 22nd, 2018 01:23 - Bette Davis - The Legend (FineB)
Good tribute to a very fine actress.
February 22nd, 2018 01:18 - Dissonance (Jabberwocky)
There are many like this but lieing can be hard as you have to remember...
February 22nd, 2018 01:15 - Dispatcher - Table Down! (Lorna)
What position did you use to write this poem.
Good fun write Laura.
February 21st, 2018 04:08 - LIVE SILVER. (Fay Slimm.)
Hard work back in the day and maybe even harder now as the fish stocks get...
February 21st, 2018 03:21 - Philadelphia Prosperities (Orchidee)
Good write, that worship will strengthen all the time.
February 21st, 2018 03:11 - NOVEMBER (Michael Edwards)
Super write Michael, once more the imagery is brilliant.
February 21st, 2018 02:56 - B of E #14: a pride in hands (Frank Prem)
Life changes.
February 21st, 2018 01:18 - Weeping Away The World. (Kevin browne)
Good strong write Kevin and those last two lines are so true.
February 21st, 2018 01:17 - My Quill (FredPeyer)
That quietened room is such a special place to be where you can be one...
February 21st, 2018 01:15 - INVENTION. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write Fay, your words inspire us.
February 20th, 2018 08:46 - I\'ll Read the Clouds (Lorna)
Good write, so many do not look up and there are so many great messages in...
February 20th, 2018 08:45 - Rose Garden (Jabberwocky)
Good one J, at least you can see the roses and they can lead to beauty.
February 20th, 2018 08:44 - Deity Designings (Orchidee)
Blessings to all.
February 20th, 2018 03:21 - LOVE IS...etcetera (Michael Edwards)
So you put washing up liquid in your Pinot Grigio eh?
February 20th, 2018 02:42 - B of E #13: learning to twirl (Frank Prem)
My dancing days are over but I did try to make an idiot of myself back in...
February 20th, 2018 01:43 - A nobody (Hoopie)
So very true, some people in this day and age cannot see past their own...
February 20th, 2018 01:41 - SUCHNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay.
February 20th, 2018 01:24 - The Last Rail Ticket (Lorna)
Very good write Laura and great imagery.
February 20th, 2018 01:19 - Metamorphosis (Jabberwocky)
Loves metamorphosis
Wakens your repose
It may then just go
Leaving a...
February 19th, 2018 05:02 - Patient Persuals (Orchidee)
Your patience will not be tried as he is always with you.
February 19th, 2018 04:19 - RAINBOW ~ REFLECTIONS ~ A Mirror Acrostic ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Beautiful picture to acompany a beautiful write. This reminded me of a...
February 19th, 2018 04:18 - No Movement. (Wallace)
It will.
February 19th, 2018 01:42 - now ready to depart (Dusk arising)
Beautiful write with great imagery.
February 19th, 2018 01:41 - B of E #12: lights out (Frank Prem)
Beautiful write, the normality of being together in bed is so reassuring.
February 19th, 2018 01:39 - THE PATH (Michael Edwards)
Good write Michael, I only hope she finds the right path.
February 19th, 2018 01:37 - Soaring Past the Mountains (Poetboy123)
Good write with the last two lines very uplifting.
February 19th, 2018 01:26 - Lack (Jabberwocky)
Maybe not all our yesterdays had jam but many of them did.
February 19th, 2018 01:09 - God\'s Mistake (Lorna)
Very true Lorna, I hope that I am not hear on earth to see it.
February 19th, 2018 01:06 - 21 again?! (Orchidee)
Happy Birthday young man, one with a zero in front of it eh. I have that...
February 19th, 2018 01:05 - SEARCH ME ~ O GOD ! A Blank Verse 6 6 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen.
February 18th, 2018 03:03 - MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER (Michael Edwards)
Another one of your wonderful abstracts. Thank you.
February 18th, 2018 03:01 - MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER (Michael Edwards)
There are some good ones there Michael. I like them all.
The first one...
February 18th, 2018 03:01 - Why. (Wallace)
Why indeed!
February 18th, 2018 02:58 - B 0f E #11: a thickening gloom (Frank Prem)
This one got to me, I read tragedy into this.
February 18th, 2018 02:18 - I need you (Hoopie)
Very true, we must always keep in touch with people.
February 18th, 2018 02:14 - ETERNAL (ZIGGY)
I was there, and always have been, My Spirit has come from infinity and...
February 18th, 2018 01:45 - Madness In The Air (DesertWords)
What a very powerfully emotive write.
February 18th, 2018 01:43 - The Yew Tree (FredPeyer)
Good write, those yew trees could tell many, many stories.
February 17th, 2018 09:07 - Wisdom\'s Workings (Orchidee)
Another good one Orchi.
February 17th, 2018 09:05 - HAVE A NICE DAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian, each moment is special and they need grabbing with both...
February 17th, 2018 09:04 - KISS ME HARDY (Michael Edwards)
In that battle where he fell
He could not get up and yell
So the words...
February 17th, 2018 01:50 - B of E #10: decisive uncertainty (Frank Prem)
\'Decisive uncertainty\' rules.
February 17th, 2018 01:44 - Calling (Lovelydove)
Strong write straight from the heart, he will always be with you.
February 17th, 2018 01:42 - Garden Break (W c)
I really must get out into the garden!
Good write.
February 17th, 2018 01:40 - \"The Traveler\" (HeatherRose)
Very good write, travelling with nature is so wonderful.
February 17th, 2018 01:39 - Bette Davis and Joan Crawford - The Feud (FineB)
Good write and tribute to two great actresses.
February 17th, 2018 01:35 - Beneath a co-write with CandleWitch final part 3 ) (ZIGGY)
Good write but the light will never die it will lighten the dark and...
February 17th, 2018 01:32 - LIFE\'S LITTLE JOYS (Lasergraph)
This is so true, the best present that you can give anybody is time and...
February 17th, 2018 01:25 - Maybe (Myself and me)
Maybe?
February 16th, 2018 08:58 - unprepared (Dusk arising)
Good write, may your life continue in ts new love.
February 16th, 2018 08:58 - More Than. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write and imagery Fay.
February 16th, 2018 08:48 - B of E #9: watching the thread (Frank Prem)
Those unexpected photos can really surprise us.
February 16th, 2018 03:43 - Omniscient Observations (Orchidee)
Lead me indeed Orchi. Good write.
February 16th, 2018 03:41 - IN DENIAL (Michael Edwards)
Very true Michael, but some just do not understand or want to understand.
February 16th, 2018 03:40 - Love can never be denied (FredPeyer)
Yes Fred, love can never be disguised or denied.
February 16th, 2018 01:23 - Leaking Clock (WL Schuett)
Super write WL, the emotion and imagery leak through your words so very...
February 16th, 2018 01:21 - Unequivocal Bliss (FredPeyer)
Beautiful write. This is the thing about embracing nature, we can all go...
February 16th, 2018 01:18
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