Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Perhaps (Malubotelho)
Perhaps these words will live forever.
July 23rd, 2017 00:42 - Perpetual Presence (Orchidee)
Amen, Orchi, Amen.
July 23rd, 2017 00:39 - Affliction (Renzi)
You have taken the first step and that is always the hardest to take.
I...
July 23rd, 2017 00:34 - A T M O S P H E R I C S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write and so true, we need to clean the air we breath.
July 23rd, 2017 00:28 - Endings. (Fay Slimm.)
Super sensitive write. Nature can seem to be cruel but it will survive as...
July 23rd, 2017 00:26 - Wisdom (FredPeyer)
Good write and so true. You cannot teach experience.
July 22nd, 2017 01:32 - Unfair (Malubotelho)
Superb write, the two images you have created are wonderful.
July 22nd, 2017 01:08 - Dangers of repressing pain... (Q)
Very good write, may your life become free again.
July 22nd, 2017 01:06 - Truthtful Trustings (Orchidee)
Another good one Orchi.
And what was wrong with having \"Fight the Good...
July 22nd, 2017 00:59 - Daughter (Edthepoet)
Super write, may this love last forever.
July 22nd, 2017 00:46 - THE CRIPPLED (Louis Gibbs)
Good strong write. It is such a shame that many people with unseen...
July 22nd, 2017 00:37 - Seeing the Light. (Goldfinch60)
I always see the light in all things. Thank you Louis.
July 21st, 2017 07:57 - Colour-Fast (Jabberwocky)
Powerful write.
July 21st, 2017 03:53 - voices (Onepauly)
Those early morning hours can be so inspiring.
July 21st, 2017 03:52 - Lois Bernadette (Poetic Dan)
Very good write, the loss of a loved one is so sad, I know how you feel.
...
July 21st, 2017 03:50 - Hugging loneliness (Aa Harvey)
Good very emotive write, may the pain son go away and joy comes back into...
July 21st, 2017 03:47 - Hypnotic. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write, snakes are wonderful creatures.
July 21st, 2017 03:39 - Train to Nowhere (FredPeyer)
Life is full of surprises and not knowing is sometimes very exhilarating....
July 21st, 2017 03:38 - TEMPUS FUGIT ~ TIME FLIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Value each moment as they come, every moment is special and will not come...
July 21st, 2017 03:36 - Embrace (GeraldineTaylor)
Good write. Let the world embrace you.
July 21st, 2017 01:47 - AGE IS IN THE MIND (Michael Edwards)
Very true. In my mind I am still in my thirties, half the age I really...
July 21st, 2017 01:42 - Don’t Go (Charlesbarrett)
Very good write, such a strong feeling of love from your daughter. ...
July 21st, 2017 01:32 - Happiness (Its Raskolnikov)
Good write, I hope she says yes.
July 21st, 2017 01:30 - Blue Twilight (WL Schuett)
Good write. Welcome to MPS.
July 21st, 2017 01:28 - What a tangled web we weave (Ehnope17)
Good write, may the beauty in you keep writing words like these. Welcome...
July 21st, 2017 01:27 - At Peace (Roudan)
Good write with a positive end.
July 21st, 2017 01:26 - Eden is here (Avigail)
People working together for one aim is a great idea but there are always...
July 21st, 2017 00:53 - Everywhere, Everyday (The Influencer)
Very true words. The world of yesteryear has gone, been decimated by those...
July 21st, 2017 00:50 - Childish head (Malubotelho)
Good write, each day comes and goes, the better the day the longer we...
July 21st, 2017 00:43 - Soul and Insight (Poetae Opus)
May that pathway be filled with Joy, Love and Faith. Good write.
July 21st, 2017 00:41 - exspand (Onepauly)
What we know and what we need to know seem to be at the opposite ends of...
July 21st, 2017 00:40 - would you care? (Mozart)
Very good write. People just do not appreciate the world in which they...
July 21st, 2017 00:37 - Mañana Karma (Edthepoet)
Good write, I do hope that bullet never comes beneath the hammer.
July 21st, 2017 00:36 - A Life To Live (Orchidee)
Good write.
July 21st, 2017 00:29 - Control (Renzi)
You have started with word control so just spread it to the rest of you....
July 20th, 2017 08:03 - Interdependence. (Fay Slimm.)
Super write Fay, natures wonder in words.
July 20th, 2017 08:02 - Leading the Way (FredPeyer)
Gods word is there for all to see, but many refuse to see it.
July 20th, 2017 08:01 - Was life fair (Q)
Good write. Life isn\'t necessarily fair but if you can learn from it it...
July 20th, 2017 01:20 - You are loved (Aa Harvey)
Love is out there and it will be found so that flesh will be put back on...
July 20th, 2017 01:19 - This Ones For You (Kbreinich)
Good write. One of my philosophies in life is this is me and if you do...
July 20th, 2017 01:15 - A Pastoral (Ethan)
Good write, W.H. would have been proud.
July 20th, 2017 01:11 - Racing Mind (Strongerforit)
Welcome to MPS. sad write but you WILL get through it and be stronger for...
July 20th, 2017 00:58 - How to Kill a Dream (Ren)
Good write dream are there to be lived not killed so fight on.
July 20th, 2017 00:57 - The stars are out tonight! (Ljneedham08)
Good write, The stars can be so inspiring, may they always shine on you.
July 20th, 2017 00:55 - The Rose (Inking Feather)
Good write, your rose has obviously had the thorns removed in this poem.
July 20th, 2017 00:46 - Love entropy (Malubotelho)
Very good write. Love will come again.
July 20th, 2017 00:45 - Blue-Green Eyed Man (Domi)
Beautiful write.
July 20th, 2017 00:35 - These Words That I Write (DyingDreams)
Very good write but words can also bring joy and beauty into lives.
July 20th, 2017 00:33 - A day orf?! (Orchidee)
Aah, Cooee, Porchi, I am glad that your alter ego has found its way on...
July 19th, 2017 08:34 - DON\'T LOOK BACK (Louis Gibbs)
Good write, so much said in few words. Go forward towards the light.
July 19th, 2017 08:29 - Wednesday\'s child (Renzi)
WOW indeed. I too was born on a Wednesday back in the dark ages. Good...
July 19th, 2017 08:26 - focus (Onepauly)
Good though provoking write.
July 19th, 2017 08:21 - Beautiful (Q)
Good loving write.
July 19th, 2017 08:16 - A part of the process (Aa Harvey)
Very good loving write, the unknown loved from the start.
July 19th, 2017 08:15 - Dying Love (FredPeyer)
Very sad emotive write. Very moving.
July 19th, 2017 08:13 - Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.)
Good strong write. When trust is lost it is almost impossible to get it...
July 19th, 2017 08:11 - E U T H A N A S I A ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such a dividing subject. Abortion certainly should not be allowed except...
July 19th, 2017 08:09 - Vanishing Fears. (Goldfinch60)
We are back to the fear of the unknown. It is always the unknown that...
July 19th, 2017 08:02 - My younger years (Christina8)
Now in my 69th year in my mind I am in my thirties, a time when all was...
July 19th, 2017 01:44 - IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND (Michael Edwards)
Good write, the last stanza is so meaningful.
Another glorious abstract...
July 19th, 2017 01:40 - Never in Return. (Kevin browne)
Brilliant write and that last line means everything. Trust in life.
July 19th, 2017 01:37 - song of the hollow house (Heather T)
Good write and the verses between the stanzas work very well.
July 19th, 2017 01:35 - I\'m Not Perfect (Tony36)
Good write. Are any of us perfect?
July 19th, 2017 00:54 - Sooner (Baylee)
Good write and so very true.
July 19th, 2017 00:52 - Trusting Times (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
July 19th, 2017 00:45 - Crimes in Palestine (Emile Dubois)
I agree with what you say, why does the world seem to think that Israel is...
July 19th, 2017 00:38 - Happiness (Q)
Very true, happiness is always within us, sometimes it needs a prod.
July 19th, 2017 00:35 - lofty (Onepauly)
Good write. May your ship sail on forever.
July 18th, 2017 07:58 - That time of the week (Renzi)
Good write. Some years ago I had a problem where my blood kept on having...
July 18th, 2017 07:57 - HAIKU IN HARMONY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write and I agree with you that bagpipes are best played far away -...
July 18th, 2017 03:00 - Children of War (FredPeyer)
A very good write and in this day and age it is so true and is probably...
July 18th, 2017 02:56 - I Hate Mirrors (Ren)
Good write but you must be aware that what YOU see in the mirror is a...
July 18th, 2017 02:55 - A FEW COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Good write. I would be very wary of cooks who do not cut their nails...
July 18th, 2017 02:51 - Darkness (Lost-but-not-broken17)
That darkness has a strong pull but believe me lightness will always...
July 18th, 2017 00:55 - Contest (Jabberwocky)
Very good write.
July 18th, 2017 00:53 - Wont come out (Lost in Murphy)
Good write may your home always be safe.
\"Hello darkness, my old...
July 18th, 2017 00:51 - \'Mr Snail 🐌- what\'s the point?\' (Sue.evans)
Good write. We all have journeys in our life and many of them seem to...
July 18th, 2017 00:45 - Shy (SorrowfullyHappy)
You are not too shy to put your words on here. Good write.
July 18th, 2017 00:43 - Crystallised Dreams (ShannonXx)
Good write and wonderful childhood memories of times passed but never...
July 18th, 2017 00:40 - Erotica (Phantom bride)
Good erotic write.
July 18th, 2017 00:25 - Heritage Hope (Orchidee)
Another good write Orchi.
July 18th, 2017 00:23 - TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs)
Very powerful write. Your care for the babies shines through.
July 17th, 2017 08:20 - For The Reader (M. Mohon)
I think you have put into words that which most of us feel. Good write.
July 17th, 2017 08:13 - Monday Monday so good to me (Renzi)
Very good rant and write.i do hope that calm and peacefulness comes into...
July 17th, 2017 08:09 - Who I am (Daisychain)
Sorry about your loss but I am glad that nature is helping, nature has...
July 17th, 2017 08:07 - Goodbye (FredPeyer)
Very good emotion laden write.
July 17th, 2017 08:01 - We love who we love (Emile Dubois)
Very true, the last line is so right. Good write.
July 17th, 2017 07:59 - SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST ? A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I saw this in the paper this weekend. Amazing creatures. Good informative...
July 17th, 2017 04:51 - Sleep Tight. (Kevin browne)
What a wonderful write. This shows a great love for Adrian and it also has...
July 17th, 2017 01:49 - Wholesome Witness (Orchidee)
Amen Orchi.
July 17th, 2017 01:24 - Manipulator (Lost in Murphy)
They can normally be seen though and seen for the manipulators that they...
July 17th, 2017 01:06 - funny or sad (Avigail)
Good caffeine laden write. I hope all was well the next morning.
July 17th, 2017 01:04 - When it was gone (Emile Dubois)
Very good write. Stay strong.
July 17th, 2017 00:51 - Body dysmorphic me (Renzi)
Very strong write. I agree with FredPeyer that there is a switch inside...
July 17th, 2017 00:41 - Motley. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful colour filled write Fay.
July 16th, 2017 04:20 - The days of our lives (Aa Harvey)
Very good write. Our experiences preclude our life.
July 16th, 2017 04:20 - Music in my head (Poetic Dan)
Very true music can cure all ills and bring on all emotions. Good write.
July 16th, 2017 02:58 - time off (Onepauly)
May your coffee give you the pleasure and relaxation after a days work, it...
July 16th, 2017 02:57 - A short letter (Xxxplicit)
Good positive write. You must always be there for her/him. Children do...
July 16th, 2017 02:55 - LEADERS ~ WHO WOULD BE GODS ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Put your trust in God our leaders are just not trustworthy at all.
July 16th, 2017 01:49
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