Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- POISON FRUIT (Louis Gibbs)
Very true Louis, we are destroying our planet and nobody who has the power...
July 31st, 2017 08:27 - Three Faces. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write. That muse can be mischaeivious at times.
July 31st, 2017 08:00 - Secret Place (FredPeyer)
Good write. Those secret rooms are so precious.
July 31st, 2017 04:18 - You\'re lost little boy (Jenny.g)
Good strong write, it is a shame that some young ones become, or are...
July 31st, 2017 04:17 - Together we are in heaven (David)
Good write and very true, every moment is special especially this one.
July 31st, 2017 04:14 - Yin to my yang (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful loving write. I am sure that your heaven will always be there.
July 31st, 2017 04:13 - YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An intriguing picture is La Gioconda as is this senryu.
July 31st, 2017 02:04 - WORDS WRITTEN (Michael Edwards)
I too like one liners, so much can be said.
Good write, I will have to...
July 31st, 2017 01:09 - A moment of regrets..... (P.H.Rose)
That emotional chain has let you write a very good poem and that poem has...
July 31st, 2017 01:06 - mortal (Heather T)
Beautiful write with great imagery.
July 31st, 2017 00:56 - Start Living (Poetboy123)
Good write.
July 31st, 2017 00:55 - Light Leadings (Orchidee)
He is always with us. Good write.
July 31st, 2017 00:50 - Time Is The Real Poet (Accidental Poet)
Good write, we all have words within us.
July 31st, 2017 00:44 - Friends (Jabberwocky)
Very good write, may your shoes walk you to the roads of happiness.
July 31st, 2017 00:24 - Afterglow (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay.
July 31st, 2017 00:23 - Beau (Aa Harvey)
Wonderful love filled words.
July 31st, 2017 00:22 - THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
May the Word always be with us and the Lord be closer. Thank you Brian.
July 31st, 2017 00:20 - Procrastination (FredPeyer)
The procrastinators curse \"I will do it tomorrow\" Good write Fred I...
July 30th, 2017 02:25 - LATE JULY (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful write, obviously in your mind your grandson made it a sunny day.
July 30th, 2017 02:23 - My grandson and his dog... (P.H.Rose)
Wonderful loving write. Grandchildren are so special, I have five of them...
July 30th, 2017 01:31 - ahoy! (Onepauly)
The light is always there glad you found it before the darkness of the sea...
July 30th, 2017 01:26 - Fear (FredPeyer)
Very good write and very well imagined. Imagination can pull us all into...
July 30th, 2017 01:24 - Priestly Professions (Orchidee)
Each day should be a Covenant day. Good write Orchi.
July 30th, 2017 01:20 - Many A Man (Accidental Poet)
Good write and very true.
July 30th, 2017 01:15 - Night-Stained. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful tasty write.
July 30th, 2017 00:58 - L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write, I was an Analytical Chemist at the beginning of my working...
July 30th, 2017 00:57 - Over the Hills and Far Away. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Santita glad you enjoyed it.
July 29th, 2017 10:22 - LETTERS TO MY UNIVERSE (Kaychee)
Clever write and I agree with what you have asked.
July 29th, 2017 01:22 - SUMMER BEDDING IS NOT AN OPTION (Michael Edwards)
Clever fun write, I shall run it up the flagpole and see if it gathers...
July 29th, 2017 01:18 - The Tradgedy of Laughter (Accidental Poet)
Good positive write. The blues are best when listening to them being sung.
July 29th, 2017 01:17 - insight (Onepauly)
Good write, may the fun be there forever.
July 29th, 2017 01:15 - My Depression (Jodie)
Such a strong write, depression is debilitating.
Welcome to MPS and I...
July 29th, 2017 01:07 - foolish heart (Heather T)
Like Michael I have only just read this and I too have been taken in by...
July 29th, 2017 01:04 - The Silent March Of 1917, July 28th (Anonymous18)
Good write highlighting the problem - has it been solved though?
July 29th, 2017 00:51 - Friends (Its Raskolnikov)
Good friends are priceless may you keep them close to you. Good write.
July 29th, 2017 00:49 - A Person is a Person (Jonas_marie)
Good write and so very true. Welcome to MPS.
July 29th, 2017 00:44 - Follow You Anywhere (Magenta1)
Good write, may we all walk into the sunset with love.
July 29th, 2017 00:43 - Summertime (Harsbars12281953)
Welcome to MPS. Good write. I too prefer the cooler months.
July 29th, 2017 00:42 - My MPS friends (Christina8)
Glad you are back Christina, moving can be a pain, it can create so many...
July 29th, 2017 00:39 - I see what I\'m doing (Poetic Dan)
Sometimes the mind goes its own way but it always comes back.
July 29th, 2017 00:19 - Gracious Giftings (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
July 29th, 2017 00:17 - Orange Memory. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Brian, much appreciated.
July 28th, 2017 11:59 - FINAL CURTAIN (Louis Gibbs)
We are all actors in the play of life and we wear different make up for...
July 28th, 2017 08:19 - Love-Smitten. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderfully emotive write and that last line is very true for many people.
July 28th, 2017 08:07 - MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wonderful write, Gods tapestry is all around us.
July 28th, 2017 08:06 - A Days first kiss..... (P.H.Rose)
Beautiful write. We are much the same, that first kiss when we awake and...
July 28th, 2017 08:04 - Until death do us part (Aa Harvey)
Wonderful write, we will be on the cloud next to you.
July 28th, 2017 08:01 - Kaleidoscope (FredPeyer)
Our imagination can see all and all it needs is a twist on that tube...
July 28th, 2017 07:57 - Sinking (Not sure?¿)
In our lives we need to see the bad side to appreciate the good things in...
July 28th, 2017 07:55 - AND WAVES WILL ALWAYS ROLL (Michael Edwards)
Good write and wonderful painting.
July 28th, 2017 01:08 - The Foggy Abyss (Poetry_Of_The_Unknown)
Very good write. Welcome to MPS.
July 28th, 2017 01:06 - Laugh (Accidental Poet)
Laughter is so fulfilling and can bring so much joy into your life and the...
July 28th, 2017 01:05 - stream stroll.... (P.H.Rose)
Beautiful write. My wife and I spent many a holiday in the Yorkshire...
July 28th, 2017 01:01 - Why all the hatred (Tony36)
Sometimes life is just inexplicable, maybe they will turn back. Good
July 28th, 2017 00:47 - Remember Me (UniquelyMel48)
Very good heartfelt write. Welcome to MPS.
July 28th, 2017 00:42 - Enough (Charlesbarrett)
Very good write and so true.
July 28th, 2017 00:41 - Gracious Grantings (Orchidee)
Very good prayer/hymn.
July 28th, 2017 00:39 - our forum (Onepauly)
Good write, we are all out there.
July 27th, 2017 08:10 - S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write and very true.
July 27th, 2017 08:09 - Uncivilized. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful dark words Fay. Great write.
July 27th, 2017 08:08 - Decoding (Poetic Dan)
We each see different things in others words. Good write.
July 27th, 2017 08:04 - Looking for my Mind (FredPeyer)
The mind can be split and hide the pieces but it can always be reformed to...
July 27th, 2017 07:56 - time (Onepauly)
Good write, music is always there that can find something that \'could not...
July 27th, 2017 03:15 - linger (Heather T)
Powerfully passionate words. Good write.
July 27th, 2017 02:41 - My Shadow (Bibbeck)
Good write, nightmares can be so shocking sometimes.
July 27th, 2017 02:39 - Broken Deeper (ShannonXx)
Wonderfully emotive write. You must move forward.
July 27th, 2017 02:38 - Perpetual Presence 2 (Orchidee)
Alleluia indeed.
July 27th, 2017 01:37 - DREAM THEATER (Louis Gibbs)
All the world is certainly a stage and this write should be shouted from...
July 27th, 2017 01:26 - sooner or later (Willyweed)
See you soon! Good write.
July 27th, 2017 01:25 - I am a Frog (Jabberwocky)
Good write, always be yourself, if you change to suit others you are only...
July 27th, 2017 01:07 - Making Sense. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write. Love can confuse everything at times.
July 27th, 2017 01:04 - Another Glass of Whiskey (FredPeyer)
Very strong write. Drink can ruin families, a member of our family hada...
July 27th, 2017 00:53 - F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write but what intrigues me is why is fashion so bad that it needs to...
July 27th, 2017 00:47 - ANOTHER DAY (Michael Edwards)
Wow Michael - so much said in these words.
July 26th, 2017 01:48 - take me down the mountain (Willyweed)
Great to see you back WW and back with such a bang with this poem. I am...
July 26th, 2017 01:45 - SATAN CAN\'T HOLD ME (Tony36)
Good Faith ridden write, God is always there for us all.
July 26th, 2017 01:39 - Childhood shenanigans (Jooles)
All those things we used to do as kids brought us fun and experience. You...
July 26th, 2017 01:38 - ()
Glorious love lorn write. May your souls always be as one.
July 26th, 2017 00:59 - Beautiful Danger (Charlesbarrett)
Very good and very true write
\"But sometimes, beautiful things are...
July 26th, 2017 00:58 - Praise Parade (Orchidee)
Praise Him indeed.
July 26th, 2017 00:52 - Marriage Vows (Sue.evans)
Good write, we celebrate 36 years this year.
July 25th, 2017 07:55 - JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write, I love Japanese food.
July 25th, 2017 07:50 - Just around the Corner (FredPeyer)
Very true give the day the best it or you have to offer.
July 25th, 2017 07:47 - Time to think (Starbuck Kentipoos Cruz)
Good write. We all have our Spirit running through us.
July 25th, 2017 02:32 - Diet starts Monday (Rubers76)
Great write. I have a similar plan I will start exercising and dieting...
July 25th, 2017 02:31 - HAROLDS LAMENT (Michael Edwards)
I warn you once Orchi sees that last word he will swoon!
I did tell Orchi...
July 25th, 2017 00:56 - Disposable (Stephanie Showers)
Good write but be assured there will be people out there on whom you have...
July 25th, 2017 00:52 - Today||Tomorrow (ElenaGrace)
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
Good write.
July 25th, 2017 00:49 - Great weather (Renzi)
Super fun write, enjoy your life and lollies.
July 25th, 2017 00:41 - ALEXIS (Louis Gibbs)
Beautiful emotive write.
July 25th, 2017 00:40 - Disconsolate Depths (Orchidee)
Good write, it is good to see some four part harmony music, my line is the...
July 24th, 2017 08:35 - Home (Charlesbarrett)
Home is what any house becomes when the family move in, it can be hard to...
July 24th, 2017 08:32 - OCEAN BLESSINGS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write, we are killing our world.
July 24th, 2017 08:27 - Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get) (FredPeyer)
The depth of your words is wonderful.
July 24th, 2017 08:24 - THE LIFE AHEAD (Michael Edwards)
That curtain raising can bring great things to our lives. Good write
July 24th, 2017 03:24 - Tranquility (Aa Harvey)
The artist may be painting the picture but you have painted it with words.
July 24th, 2017 01:00 - Solomon and Me (Jabberwocky)
Good write, always chose to be yourself, at least you know what has...
July 24th, 2017 00:53 - THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This is a good Faith Filled write Brian, it s a pity that those with power...
July 24th, 2017 00:48 - Stillness. (Fay Slimm.)
The stillness between lovers is a very special moment.
Wonderful words...
July 24th, 2017 00:45 - The Heavenly Gate (Gino)
Beautiful write. The last line speaks to me.
July 24th, 2017 00:43
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