Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60

• An Apology (Sylviasearcher) Asking for forgiveness is the first step to going into a better life. You...
  April 10th, 2018 00:19
• Family And Work Matters - Colossians Series - 7 (Orchidee) Good write Orchi.
  April 9th, 2018 02:22
• AN ESSENCE (Michael Edwards) Another new type of poem brought into my armoury.
  April 9th, 2018 02:22
• Franks Psychiatry, 2 #31: bounce and flow (Frank Prem) Distraction therapy eh?
  April 9th, 2018 02:20
• start (Onepauly) Good write but to my mind rhyming is not important, not many of my poems...
  April 9th, 2018 02:18
• The Warp and the Weft (Lorna) Very good write Lorna, time is endless.
  April 9th, 2018 02:10
• FLIMSY WONDERS. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful words. Whenever you see a feather you know an Angel has been...
  April 9th, 2018 02:09
• Franks Psychiatry, 2 #30: medication jam (Frank Prem) I bet you got through a lot of jam.
  April 8th, 2018 00:46
• WATER DROPLETS (Michael Edwards) That journey to the ocean can be thrilling. Good write Michael.
  April 8th, 2018 00:45
• ANCIENT ONES (Onepauly) Those ancestors are always with you.
  April 8th, 2018 00:43
• SALT IN HER WOUNDS (Bibbeck) Very good write.
  April 8th, 2018 00:42
• Mary and the Little Snake (Lorna) Good write Lorna, kids can be fearless.
  April 8th, 2018 00:24
• FIRST BALLAD. (Fay Slimm.) I was sitting their with you Fay, may your baton always produce fine words...
  April 8th, 2018 00:21
• Shepherd Sureties (Orchidee) Very good one Orchi.
  April 8th, 2018 00:19
• Franks Psychiatry, 2 #29: in charge of retardation (Frank Prem) Such a strange world for a young man but you came through it.
  April 8th, 2018 00:18
• LET US ALL TRUST IN GOD ~ A 6 6 2 SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA) Very good write Brian, God is always with us though.
  April 8th, 2018 00:17
• WITH RESOLUTION (Michael Edwards) Super sonnet, always leave the shadows behind you. Did you get the...
  April 7th, 2018 00:50
• Quaff (Eugene S.) Cheers Eugene, enjoy your beer.
  April 7th, 2018 00:39
• I Thought I Knew (Christina8) In life we have bumps in the road and sometimes crashes but they can lead...
  April 7th, 2018 00:34
• Snowdrops in the Morning (Lorna) Very good write, those snowdrops are very determined plants.
  April 7th, 2018 00:23
• STATES OF THE USA 1 ~ MICHIGAN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good write and explanation, my new thing learned for the day.
  April 7th, 2018 00:21
• Breakfasting Believers (Orchidee) Good one Orchi, there were 154 fishes but we took one to eat before they...
  April 6th, 2018 02:05
• EPIGRAM No 3 (Michael Edwards) If I wore them I would be singing castrato! Good fun write. You need a...
  April 6th, 2018 01:49
• Franks Psychiatry, 2 #28: getting stuffed (Frank Prem) Those who have died should be treated with respect and dignity.
  April 6th, 2018 01:27
• Memory Exhales (Kurt Philip Behm) Those words grew into this excellent write Kurt.
  April 6th, 2018 00:52
• I Wonder (Ron parrish aka wordman) Good emotive write ron.
  April 6th, 2018 00:47
• Simple Words (Lasergraph) Very good write Edward, words can be so fragile that it is always best to...
  April 6th, 2018 00:44
• Hero or Villain (Patricia LaFazia) Very good and very true write. There is Japanese Proverb that says,...
  April 6th, 2018 00:42
• Grandma\'s Treasures (Spirit Walker) Beautiful write SL. Your Grandma\'s treasured moments revealed and never...
  April 6th, 2018 00:29
• A world unknown (Resa71) So many of the ‘privileged ‘ have no idea what real life is about....
  April 5th, 2018 08:16
• MARTIN LUTHER KING ~ 1929 - 1968 Gone but never Forgotten (BRIAN & ANGELA) A great man whose message is still needed even now.
  April 5th, 2018 08:13
• TOGETHERNESS. (Fay Slimm.) Togetherness is so wonderful and it shows in this very good write.
  April 5th, 2018 08:12
• Franks Psychiatry 2 #27: a day at the races (Frank Prem) Good fun write, there is fun to be had sometimes in all eventualities.
  April 5th, 2018 03:44
• Faith Formations (Orchidee) That belief must be string but sometimes it is sorely tested.
  April 5th, 2018 02:30
• EPIGRAM No 2 (Michael Edwards) Learning comes from others and your errors - it is called experience. ...
  April 5th, 2018 00:52
• My Girl (Christina8) Very good loving write for your daughter, that love for her will never...
  April 5th, 2018 00:49
• MODERN DAY BLUES (Lasergraph) Good write and so true in this day and age.
  April 5th, 2018 00:47
• (The Ride) (Spirit Walker) Good write SW. Welcome to MPS.
  April 5th, 2018 00:45
• Philosophy III (Noah) Clever words Noah.
  April 5th, 2018 00:41
• Proportion (Jabberwocky) Good write J.
  April 5th, 2018 00:37
• Winnie and Roo (Lorna) Super write, if only the innocence of childhood could remain with us all...
  April 5th, 2018 00:30
• ASK & YOU WILL RECEIVE ~ BUT NOT ALWAYS AS EXPECTED ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Very good write Brian. One thing that I have always believed that if you...
  April 5th, 2018 00:28
• Watching And Waiting (Orchidee) Alleluia indeed.
  April 4th, 2018 02:21
• Franks Psychiatry 2 #26: row your boat (Frank Prem) It is amazing what they do.
  April 4th, 2018 02:21
• EPIGRAM No1 (Michael Edwards) You were listening to Orchi then!
  April 4th, 2018 02:20
• My Teddy Bear (MARY Swillum) Very good write, may your teddy bear always bring you pleasure.
  April 4th, 2018 01:00
• Paired. (Fay Slimm.) Very good love write Fay, that love only increases with time.
  April 4th, 2018 00:58
• Sinful Victory (Resa71) Very good write Resa.
  April 4th, 2018 00:56
• MODEL RAILWAY GEEK ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Very good write and my first laugh of the day - thank you Brian.
  April 3rd, 2018 03:56
• Franks Psychiatry 2 #25: bathing the locked ward (Frank Prem) So sad.
  April 3rd, 2018 03:53
• Emmaus Encounter (Orchidee) That road to Emmaus has a great deal for which to answer.
  April 3rd, 2018 02:21
• Music Waiting Under the Snow (Lorna) Super write Lorna, your garden is awakening. The music is quite...
  April 3rd, 2018 01:19
• FROM PASSION TO ENCHANTMENT (Michael Edwards) Good senryu write Michael. Just one thing the second line of the first...
  April 3rd, 2018 00:45
• Fall (MP Martinez) May your landing be soft and loving.
  April 3rd, 2018 00:27
• Be That Driving Force (Brooklyn6timesplus) Very good positive write b.
  April 3rd, 2018 00:22
• THE PICNIC (Laura🌻) Viva indeed Laura. This is a great idea, what a wonderful man your Dad...
  April 3rd, 2018 00:21
• I believe in EQUALITY! (Renzi) Very good write and song Renzi. May your writes and rights to gay...
  April 3rd, 2018 00:18
• Today is a Beautiful Day (MARY Swillum) What a very good positive write. After reading this I now know that my day...
  April 3rd, 2018 00:14
• When the Pine Fell (Lorna) Very good write Lorna and so sad, the picture itself is so emotive.
  April 3rd, 2018 00:09
• Keep On Praising (ForeverJesus7) Amen.
  April 3rd, 2018 00:07
• MYSTERIOUS. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful write Fay, Gods Covenant is with us.
  April 3rd, 2018 00:05
• Franks Psychiatry 2 #24: birdies at meal time (Frank Prem) Such a hard life in dealing with these patients, patience in the staff...
  April 3rd, 2018 00:00
• 14 STATIONS OF THE CROSS ~ A ~ 4 4 4 2 ~ SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA) Those fourteen Stations of the Cross do show us the way to the eventual...
  April 2nd, 2018 23:58
• Meaningful Morning (Orchidee) Very good write Orchi.
  April 2nd, 2018 23:56
• People vs the power (Hoopie) very true nr, the same applies to gender and religious beliefs.
  April 2nd, 2018 01:33
• A JOKE IS NOT A JOKE (Michael Edwards) Pardon Michael, I seem to have gone deaf.
  April 2nd, 2018 00:35
• The wine speaks... (Ash) In that darkness you may still glimpse the light and when you glimpse it...
  April 2nd, 2018 00:34
• Met Your Match .. (Ivory) May that chemistry always combine into the perfect formula.
  April 2nd, 2018 00:25
• Feelings (Ron parrish aka wordman) Simple and very meaningful write.
  April 2nd, 2018 00:23
• Blues stand news (Willyweed) Very good emotive write.
  April 2nd, 2018 00:22
• WISELY BOUGHT. (Fay Slimm.) Very good write Fay.
  April 2nd, 2018 00:18
• Drinker (W c) Good write, I am glad that you have overcome your drinking problems,...
  April 2nd, 2018 00:17
• Eternal Easter (Orchidee) I am so glad there is no whisky watering today. Good write Orchi.
  April 2nd, 2018 00:14
• ON EASTER SUNDAY ~ An Acrostic 2-6-6 Sonnet. (BRIAN & ANGELA) Very good acrostic Brian. Yes Easter is the most special time in the...
  April 2nd, 2018 00:12
• Franks Psychiatry 2 #23: famous flying choppers (Frank Prem) The sound of gnashing teeth as they hit the floor.
  April 1st, 2018 01:43
• What Happen to the Music (MARY Swillum) That music will always be in your heart and soul. Good write and welcome...
  April 1st, 2018 00:49
• Greatest mystery ever (_rivas98) Love can be a mystery and take a lifetime to unravel but it is worth every...
  April 1st, 2018 00:47
• A BEVY OF BREVETTES (Michael Edwards) Never come across brevettes but it is an interesting way to write and like...
  April 1st, 2018 00:45
• The Shepherd (Patricia LaFazia) Very good write, the passing of a companion is so hard but I am sure that...
  April 1st, 2018 00:36
• Candy Coated Nightmare Love (MaddieJ) Once the love is there and you are together the love will get stronger and...
  April 1st, 2018 00:34
• Unconditional (LukeCoomer) Good write, love for family has no bounds.
  April 1st, 2018 00:31
• My Greatest Hope; My Darkest Fear (Poetboy123) May those brightest hopes outshine your darkest fears.
  April 1st, 2018 00:30
• Depression (Resa71) Very sad words but in writing words you can lose yourself in them for that...
  April 1st, 2018 00:23
• RESURRECTION ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) He is risen, Alleluia!
  April 1st, 2018 00:21
• Redemption Riches (Orchidee) Good write Orchi. He is risen. Alleluia!
  April 1st, 2018 00:20
• Franks Psychiatry 2 #22: so long miriam (Frank Prem) This can be said for many students.
  March 31st, 2018 00:21
• You Fell In Love With A Memory (Ron parrish aka wordman) those memories can be so strong.
  March 31st, 2018 00:21
• The trend (Hoopie) The end may well be nigh but ordinary people cannot do anything about it.
  March 31st, 2018 00:19
• The UnKnown Man (G-Trebble) Welcome to MPS.
  March 31st, 2018 00:18
• The UnKnown Man (G-Trebble) That \'old me\' doesn\'t necessarily need to be scary, you can change your...
  March 31st, 2018 00:17
• Mrs BROWN (Michael Edwards) The Mrs Browns of this world are always out there, they mean no harm but...
  March 31st, 2018 00:09
• Franks Psychiatry 2 #21: cleaning up (Frank Prem) Hard times that can be mis understood..
  March 30th, 2018 07:49
• CONSTANT. (Fay Slimm.) Good description of those very hard working fishermen.
  March 30th, 2018 07:48
• WHY ~ PERCHE ~ PORQUE - POURQUOI ~ VARUM ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good write Brian, you stole my painting, a wonderful coincidence for a...
  March 30th, 2018 07:47
• Follow In His Footsteps (Orchidee) But he did rise, good write Orchi.
  March 30th, 2018 02:17
• MOUNTAIN RANGES (Michael Edwards) Very good tanka Michael, I could see those mountains.
  March 30th, 2018 00:19
• Good Friday (Christina8) Very good write and so true, He saved us all.
  March 30th, 2018 00:18
• Morning Sun. (Wallace) Great life, I was with you going into your peaceful life.
  March 30th, 2018 00:13
• ANNIE\'S SONG FOR ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Beautiful loving write Brian to a beautiful lady.
  March 30th, 2018 00:11
• Passion Progress (Orchidee) Very good write Orchi.
  March 30th, 2018 00:10