Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Homeless (Myself and me)
Very good write, there seem to be so many people in this place and those...
August 15th, 2017 00:44 - River Music Haunts Me (WL Schuett)
Wonderful write, you took me there with your words.
Once more a very...
August 15th, 2017 00:42 - Snowy Day (Bibbeck)
Good write but as far as I am concerned snow is best seen in pictures.
August 15th, 2017 00:35 - To Her (Caden)
Good emotive write. Welcome to MPS.
August 15th, 2017 00:29 - Favourable Fare (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
August 15th, 2017 00:18 - Battle (Lakiea)
Good write, I will spread my feathers.
August 14th, 2017 08:13 - Clocks and Calendars (WriteBeLight)
Good write. I have a theory that we never want to know the actual time,...
August 14th, 2017 08:12 - THE CYCLE REPLAYED (Louis Gibbs)
Good write about our possible end in this world, see you in the next.
August 14th, 2017 08:08 - What if I told you? (Emile Dubois)
Good write about the truth that nobody will admit to.
August 14th, 2017 08:07 - Black and Blue ( the colours of a grudge) (Sue.evans)
Good write. Grudges should be over almost as soon as they start as they...
August 14th, 2017 08:06 - Intake. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write, I was sitting on that cliff top with you.
August 14th, 2017 08:03 - the labyrinth (Stefan badham)
Good write,I wonder what is around the next corner.
August 14th, 2017 08:02 - Time to Leave (FredPeyer)
Such a good write over s very sad situation, I just do not understand this...
August 14th, 2017 08:01 - I\'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE ~ ENJOY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good fun write. The cricket with the Caribbean Pirates starts this...
August 14th, 2017 07:58 - SUMMER IDYL (Michael Edwards)
Superb write Michael. Life is wonderful.
August 14th, 2017 01:44 - red clay baptism (Heather T)
Very good write and wonderful insight into your life, thank you for...
August 14th, 2017 01:39 - Simplicity Sentiments (Orchidee)
Good faith-filled write.
August 14th, 2017 01:34 - PRAISE THE LORD ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen.
August 14th, 2017 01:26 - Dandelion Seeds (FredPeyer)
That perfect place seems to be my garden! Very good write Fred they are...
August 13th, 2017 02:16 - I\'m your girl (Malubotelho)
Beautiful write. This is a girl of absolute power.
August 13th, 2017 02:15 - ()
The experiment has worked. good write.
August 13th, 2017 02:14 - CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards)
Good write Michael and thank you for showing me a new style of poetry.
August 13th, 2017 02:13 - Broken Shutters (WL Schuett)
Wonderful write. I always wonder what stories old building could...
August 13th, 2017 02:11 - Waiting Is End (Myself and me)
Good write and yes option 2 is the better one but all are good.
August 13th, 2017 02:09 - Katrina dials 911 (Bibbeck)
Good write. The people will always pull together when trouble looms.
August 13th, 2017 02:08 - Living (FredPeyer)
LIfe is there to be lived in ALL its various incarnations. Good write...
August 13th, 2017 02:07 - Resurrection Raptures (Orchidee)
Another good write Orchi.
August 13th, 2017 02:06 - Let Go Your Ego (WriteBeLight)
Very good write and very true. There are many like this.
August 13th, 2017 02:02 - Indifference (Jabberwocky)
Indifference can be a mighty weapon.
August 13th, 2017 02:01 - CARIBBEAN GIRL ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian. I have never been to the Caribbean but all the people...
August 13th, 2017 00:59 - Enticing. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write and opening to my day in the UK. Thank you Fay.
August 13th, 2017 00:51 - Cellblock D (Stephanie91)
Very good write about the way you feel trapped within this awful...
August 13th, 2017 00:35 - ()
Two very good poems.
August 12th, 2017 00:48 - Death (Dulcinea91)
Death is a very long way away, you have so much in your life to do first....
August 12th, 2017 00:47 - Flakes (Whisperingquill)
Good emotive write.
August 12th, 2017 00:45 - GOD (Julianogollo)
I have been touched by God so I know that God exists and I will be with...
August 12th, 2017 00:43 - My Baby girl (Des)
Very good write, my baby girl has gien us two more baby girls the younger...
August 12th, 2017 00:41 - Stand By (SheWasTheSun)
Good write, may the stage be set for the next act.
August 12th, 2017 00:39 - Invocation (Night Owl)
Always follow the light. Good write.
August 12th, 2017 00:37 - To Emily Dickinson (Guillermo Gitz)
Good write and tribute to a good poet. Welcome to MPS.
August 12th, 2017 00:36 - Abandoned (Sue.evans)
Good write, some people can let you down very badly. You are out of it...
August 12th, 2017 00:34 - WHISPERS ACROSS THE PILLOW (Lasergraph)
Wonderful write, I feel exactly the same about my wife.
August 12th, 2017 00:33 - Jack the little yellow Dinosaur (FredPeyer)
Good fun write, I bet your grandkids enjoyed it.
August 12th, 2017 00:31 - The sea she came (Shortyb)
Very good write and as a first poem, excellent.
You said that you had no...
August 12th, 2017 00:30 - Love still (Malubotelho)
Very good loving write. May your hands be together for eternity.
August 12th, 2017 00:27 - You Are Loved (Simplybeautiful)
It is so hard for friends and family when this happens. A very good write...
August 12th, 2017 00:25 - My Faith In Season (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very good write.
August 12th, 2017 00:22 - LANTURNE 2 (Michael Edwards)
I can smell the hay with these words.
August 12th, 2017 00:19 - A Load O\' Rubbish! (Orchidee)
So the true Porchi outs at last. I warn you if you come near my scotch I...
August 12th, 2017 00:07 - Who Have I Become? (Asombersoul)
Good emotive write.
August 12th, 2017 00:00 - Crispy Wing Things (WriteBeLight)
Good fun write.
August 11th, 2017 08:02 - IMAGINE (Louis Gibbs)
Good write, do we know who we are, we all put on different masks depending...
August 11th, 2017 08:01 - Interference. (Fay Slimm.)
Another beautiful write Fay.
August 11th, 2017 07:56 - CITY GIRLS ~ SIX SIZZLING SENRYU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write, I take it you like all girls - well they are wonderful are...
August 11th, 2017 07:54 - Kings of information (Tipper0810)
Good write and very true. Do we or will we ever know who is pulling the...
August 11th, 2017 03:35 - A LANTURNE (Michael Edwards)
This is very close to a FIBS poem where the syllables go 1,1,2,3,5,8,13. ...
August 11th, 2017 00:36 - Hope (FredPeyer)
Good write. Hope is always there as without it existence would be non...
August 11th, 2017 00:33 - Jupiter Farms (Malubotelho)
A great fun write, may your life with nature be full of wonder.
August 11th, 2017 00:29 - ()
May that sound be found and be full of joy and love. Good write.
August 11th, 2017 00:27 - Passion For Peace (Orchidee)
May the Peace of the Lord always remain with you and your Mum Orchidee.
August 11th, 2017 00:20 - Waning Will (WriteBeLight)
Good write. Self discipline is hard to keep going. All we can do is our...
August 11th, 2017 00:19 - Abundance. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good bounteous write Fay.
August 10th, 2017 02:23 - SOPA MINESTRONE ~ PER FAVORE ~ ITALIAN SONNET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Salute, I have some Chianti in my cellar along with other Italian and...
August 10th, 2017 02:22 - EMERGING (Michael Edwards)
Good write Michael, was it the path less travelled that you followed.
August 10th, 2017 02:21 - Ancient whispers (WL Schuett)
Good write and love the music scenario.
The painting is wonderful, I am...
August 10th, 2017 02:14 - World of Songs (Poetboy123)
Natures symphony is wonderful, as is this write.
August 10th, 2017 01:11 - Common Ground (Tony36)
So very true, let us form a world of peace where all help each other.
August 10th, 2017 01:11 - \"Emergency\" (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Good write, Mum\'s are special.
August 10th, 2017 01:09 - Thoughts (Malubotelho)
Good write and may your Faith never become dry.
August 10th, 2017 01:07 - Depravity\'s Eye (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very good write.
August 10th, 2017 01:06 - Terrible Trustings (Orchidee)
Another good one Orchi.
August 10th, 2017 01:05 - Children (John Prophet)
Very good write, that pivot is waiting for us to change the Universe.
August 10th, 2017 01:04 - Dream Lunch (WriteBeLight)
Super write, it would be great for us to get together over lunch swapping...
August 10th, 2017 00:35 - Child of Night (Azura Nightsong)
Very good write, the darkness of the day can have a very strong impact on...
August 10th, 2017 00:27 - IN SPITE OF (Louis Gibbs)
It was not on in the UK but I avoid those programmes anyway. Saying that...
August 10th, 2017 00:26 - Undiluted. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write Fay. May the light always be with you.
August 10th, 2017 00:22 - GUARDIAN ANGELS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
If you go into a room and find a feather on the ground you know an angel...
August 10th, 2017 00:20 - Deepest love (Isaiahb202)
Beautiful write. Welcome to MPS.
August 9th, 2017 01:39 - Is the Grass Really Greener? (Kbreinich)
Good write. The only way to find out if the grass is greener is to walk...
August 9th, 2017 01:05 - Authority (Hboo)
Good write, my life is a stunning symphony composed by Mozart.
August 9th, 2017 01:00 - Train to Heaven (BLACKGOLDKING)
May your destination be filled with hope, wonder and light. Good write....
August 9th, 2017 00:57 - Miss you (Myself and me)
Good emotive write.
August 9th, 2017 00:54 - Goodnight (Ethan)
A dark place indeed. Good write.
August 9th, 2017 00:54 - After Work (The 2 A.M Writer)
Good write, the last line is so meaningful.
August 9th, 2017 00:51 - The Place Where Stardom Dies (Allan Fitzgerald)
Clever well thought out write.
August 9th, 2017 00:48 - Stranger (Thoughtxo)
Good write on such a sad subject. Welcome to MPS.
August 9th, 2017 00:45 - A Poet (Tony36)
Very true Tony, our words come from our soul.
August 9th, 2017 00:43 - Propose (SorrowfullyHappy)
May your hopes be fulfilled.
August 9th, 2017 00:42 - HER VOICE FELL SOFT (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful words Michael, a pleasure to read at 6:30 in the morning.
August 9th, 2017 00:29 - Office Windows (RickyMcG)
Good write. The trees can sometimes be hard to find when looking out of...
August 9th, 2017 00:27 - Beyond the Loss (Jonnyc1)
Good write with a positive end. Move on and breathe once more.
August 9th, 2017 00:22 - love me (AAA)
Good emotive write.
August 9th, 2017 00:21 - Invisible Boundaries (Poetboy123)
Good write and very true. We look back at history and believe what we...
August 9th, 2017 00:11 - Craving/ Consequence (Simple-Man87)
Very good, strong write.
August 9th, 2017 00:07 - Blue paradise (Malubotelho)
Super write the calmness pervades these words.
August 9th, 2017 00:04 - Deliverance Desirings (Orchidee)
Good write and a fine Methodist tune by Wesley.
August 8th, 2017 08:31 - Vividly Versed (WriteBeLight)
The knack has certainly been mastered WBL, I always enjoy your wonderful...
August 8th, 2017 08:27 - Man in Orange. (Goldfinch60)
I didn\'t know that eating oranges turned sight orange. Lol.
August 8th, 2017 08:24 - The Beginning More Important.... (Kurt Philip Behm)
Good write and somtrue.
August 8th, 2017 08:03 - It\'s Not All About Me (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Good and thoughtful write. Thank you Edward.
August 8th, 2017 08:01
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