Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60

• Missed (FredPeyer) We often miss trains in our life but we must always remember that another...
  October 8th, 2017 00:51
• perfect time (Frank Prem) The howl towards the falling moon. Good write.
  October 7th, 2017 01:23
• KIPPERED (Michael Edwards) One of the finest meals for breakfast are kippers. Mind you you can...
  October 7th, 2017 01:13
• Words (DesertWords) This is a good write, one day the reverse may happen and the words on the...
  October 7th, 2017 01:00
• Blue eyes (Malubotelho) Good write. There are some things in life that are just unforgettable.
  October 7th, 2017 00:58
• Journey, pt.1 (Simple-Man87) Good loving poem I do hope that you bring her that shooting star.
  October 7th, 2017 00:56
• The Ten (H.cole23) Good write. Welcome to MPS.
  October 7th, 2017 00:54
• Searching Light (WL Schuett) Beautiful write. We should always go towards the light. Another...
  October 7th, 2017 00:51
• Wisdom Ways (Orchidee) May God\'s wisdom be with us all.
  October 7th, 2017 00:49
• WHAT MAKES THE BRITISH HAPPY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Certainly for me Fun and Laughter comes first because they can solve many...
  October 7th, 2017 00:45
• PTSD (Christina8) It is such an awful disease and is hard to cure, all we can do is to...
  October 6th, 2017 08:03
• tide (Dusk arising) Very good write, times, like the tides, change.
  October 6th, 2017 07:55
• These Days. (Fay Slimm.) Yet another beautiful poem Fay. Thank you.
  October 6th, 2017 07:52
• Sometimes. (RickyMcG) Good positive write.
  October 6th, 2017 07:50
• sweeping (Frank Prem) This swept me away.
  October 6th, 2017 02:18
• To the Wilderness and Beyond (GeraldineTaylor) Amen.
  October 6th, 2017 02:15
• Garden Spider (W c) Nature always knows best, it is homo sapiens that is trying to destroy it.
  October 6th, 2017 02:14
• Chains (FredPeyer) Good write, the chains must be discarded then when he jumps he will float...
  October 6th, 2017 02:13
• IS IT TIME? (Louis Gibbs) This dream life we are leading is becoming a nightmare, hopefully soon we...
  October 6th, 2017 02:12
• DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2) (Michael Edwards) This is a very good write Michael, the clay may be moved by the Spirit.
  October 6th, 2017 02:11
• Bitter sweet, memories (Ron parrish aka wordman) Wonderful write Ron.
  October 6th, 2017 02:07
• A Painters Eye (WL Schuett) Super write, all art is built like this, it is what makes it so amazing.
  October 6th, 2017 02:00
• Under the stars ✨ (Malubotelho) super write, the innocence of young love shines in the stars.
  October 6th, 2017 00:48
• Harvest Homage (Orchidee) Another good thankful write Orchi.
  October 6th, 2017 00:46
• Afraid (E.J. Waling) Our fears of what is ahead will become the experiences of our past. Good...
  October 5th, 2017 08:03
• Paint\'s Heat. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful tribute to a wonderful artist.
  October 5th, 2017 07:59
• I Want to Meet a Stranger (MALU) Good write, welcome to MOS.
  October 5th, 2017 07:56
• Yesterday. (LenientOne) Good write, hope to see more. Welcome to MPS.
  October 5th, 2017 07:54
• coffee train (Frank Prem) Black no sugar please, Colombian preferably.
  October 5th, 2017 07:53
• DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1) (Michael Edwards) The soil should not be moved as the Spirit has already left the body and...
  October 5th, 2017 01:44
• Mortality (FredPeyer) Good write, you are still with us and will stay with us and we will meet...
  October 5th, 2017 01:42
• THE OLD COUPLE (Lasergraph) Super write, I can see this story in my own mind.
  October 5th, 2017 01:30
• Not even the Mule (WL Schuett) Super write, so true. All any of us can and should do is start...
  October 5th, 2017 01:22
• AUTUMN HAIKU ~ For CHRISTINA (BRIAN & ANGELA) Autumn is my favourite season its colours are mesmerising. Good write.
  October 5th, 2017 01:20
• Comforting Considerations (Orchidee) Another good one Orchi.
  October 5th, 2017 01:17
• Our love Is Strong (Christina8) Good write and so true. The last words that my wife and I say to each...
  October 5th, 2017 01:00
• Bound (Baylee) Good loving write.
  October 5th, 2017 00:58
• To Surmount (Poetboy123) Good positive write, keep going up the light is there for you.
  October 5th, 2017 00:57
• Fountains Abbey (Sue.evans) Good write Sue. We have been to Fountains Abbey some years ago and it is...
  October 5th, 2017 00:56
• Just an Organ? (Mugsdaddy) Good write, the last line is so true and I wish it could apply to all in...
  October 5th, 2017 00:51
• October\' s Intent. (Fay Slimm.) Another good write Fay, October does have its beauty, the yellow, golden...
  October 5th, 2017 00:43
• Scarred (FredPeyer) Good write Fred, the world is always a better place as you have gone...
  October 5th, 2017 00:40
• IT\'S ABOUT TIME (Louis Gibbs) I am with you Louis.
  October 4th, 2017 01:06
• THE AUTOCRAT (Michael Edwards) Some family autocrats can bind family members. Good write.
  October 4th, 2017 01:05
• Thank God, Papi is Home Again (Rrodriguez) Such a moving write, I am so glad your Dad is safe.
  October 4th, 2017 00:56
• Littlest of things (Poetic Dan) Those little things in our lives are so important and can bring us such...
  October 4th, 2017 00:46
• Creature Comfortings (Orchidee) Good write Orchi, it is a pity that homo sapiens is trying to destroy it...
  October 4th, 2017 00:44
• Senryu (Christina8) Good senryu Christina.
  October 4th, 2017 00:43
• PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good fun write the both of you.
  October 4th, 2017 00:34
• Sweet Memories (FredPeyer) Very good write, I was there in bell bottoms and platform shoes.
  October 3rd, 2017 07:55
• Yesterday. (Wallace) Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
  October 3rd, 2017 01:49
• so many ask why (Mugsdaddy) Strong write about an appalling atrocity. I agree with Michael about the...
  October 3rd, 2017 01:49
• Alaska Wildlife (W c) Good write, I would love to have been there as well.
  October 3rd, 2017 01:46
• ON BEING A POET (Michael Edwards) I am a bit of stickler when writing the English language, except in...
  October 3rd, 2017 01:37
• Wine Soaked Kisses (FredPeyer) Good write, your imagination is very creative.
  October 3rd, 2017 01:32
• Homeless (Sue.evans) Very good write about an increasing problem in our towns and cities.
  October 3rd, 2017 01:30
• Hiking the Urayoán Mountains (Rrodriguez) wonderful write, I was with you all the way, I have these feelings when I...
  October 3rd, 2017 01:22
• Awake Alertings (Orchidee) Very good write Orchi, I agree with SM87 that it could easily open a...
  October 3rd, 2017 00:41
• Ode to Music. (Goldfinch60) Thank you Louis, much appreciated.
  October 2nd, 2017 11:53
• Space (Edward Charles McDevitt) Good write, space within our minds is infinite.
  October 2nd, 2017 07:59
• Wedding Day (Christina8) Good write, \'til death do us part is so true.
  October 2nd, 2017 07:58
• GOODBYES (Arpit) True friendship never ends, welcome to MPS.
  October 2nd, 2017 07:56
• Wells of Summer. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful write Fay.
  October 2nd, 2017 07:55
• The Place Where Love Controls. (Kevin browne) Good write, love controls all our emotions.
  October 2nd, 2017 07:53
• love (in a time of passing trains) (Frank Prem) Very good write Frank.
  October 2nd, 2017 07:51
• Sock Puppets (Adam Shirley (Rea)) Very good write.
  October 2nd, 2017 07:48
• HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good write, I have never been up in one but we used to have a hit air...
  October 2nd, 2017 07:47
• FUSIONS 4 (Michael Edwards) While I eat my bred washed down with red.
  October 2nd, 2017 01:49
• Rutting Buck (W c) Never get near a stag in the rutting season, they don\'t care who they...
  October 2nd, 2017 01:48
• THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM (Louis Gibbs) Data exists. Good write, A-I is with us and will be teaching us before...
  October 2nd, 2017 01:27
• The Phone (FredPeyer) Very good loving write, glad it was in your mind though Fred.
  October 2nd, 2017 01:24
• The Pack (WL Schuett) Wonderful write, beautiful painting, both are so very meaningful.
  October 2nd, 2017 01:15
• Come Sleep, Oh Sleep (Rrodriguez) Good write very well formed.
  October 2nd, 2017 01:13
• In The Garden (DeviLove) Very good write, the beauty of your garden is shown the words written, the...
  October 2nd, 2017 01:12
• Definition Of Beauty - Jaylan E. Mitchell (Jaylan eneva) Good write, your beauty shines within your words. Welcome to MPS.
  October 2nd, 2017 01:09
• Travelling On Trusting (Orchidee) Another good write Orchi.
  October 2nd, 2017 01:00
• An Apology (Edward Charles McDevitt) It is good that you write on this site, I do try to comment on poems, I...
  October 2nd, 2017 00:59
• A Place For Animals (W c) Good write and I would wish it was so but homo sapiens is so greedy that...
  October 2nd, 2017 00:47
• Advancing. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful write as usual Fay, my favourite time of the year.
  October 2nd, 2017 00:46
• GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Amen Brian, Amen indeed.
  October 2nd, 2017 00:38
• THE TEMPTRESS (Michael Edwards) Good write, repetitions always work well in poetry.
  October 1st, 2017 01:11
• You Touched Me (Ron parrish aka wordman) Beautiful loving write Ron.
  October 1st, 2017 01:09
• Please tell me (Rrodriguez) Beautiful lovelorn write Roberto.
  October 1st, 2017 01:00
• National Parks (W c) Good write, the National Parks in the UK are very special places as well....
  October 1st, 2017 00:59
• Salvation Sensitivity (Orchidee) Amen.
  October 1st, 2017 00:57
• MULTITASKING (Michael Edwards) Oh dear Michael, you have really opened a can of worms here. As I have...
  September 30th, 2017 01:24
• Musings (FredPeyer) Good write, never thought of each day being my last day but I do treat...
  September 30th, 2017 01:20
• CHILLY WRITING DAY (Lasergraph) So very true, ideas in your mind change as the words go onto the page. ...
  September 30th, 2017 01:12
• The Creature (Tony36) Very good write. It is OK I will not be around your way tonight so you...
  September 30th, 2017 01:10
• Aubode (Rrodriguez) Super write, the mornings in the UK are not the same but to me that are...
  September 30th, 2017 01:08
• Love theatre 🎭 (Malubotelho) Good write, may that theatre of love continue to flourish.
  September 30th, 2017 01:05
• Wooden Music (WL Schuett) Super write, making music together is wonderful and must be all the better...
  September 30th, 2017 00:59
• Mississippi Kite (W c) Good write. Watching raptors is wonderful. I had the experience of a days...
  September 30th, 2017 00:54
• Sing-song Serenadings (Orchidee) Yes I was singing to his Praises last night as I will do on Sunday which...
  September 30th, 2017 00:51
• Clipped Wings (Christina8) Very good and powerful write but be assured your wings are free now and...
  September 30th, 2017 00:49
• Music Melody (GeraldineTaylor) Clever write about my favourite form of art.
  September 29th, 2017 02:53
• Extravagance. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful fruit filled write. I can remember gathering blackberries and...
  September 29th, 2017 02:26
• SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) This really took me back, I was an analytical chemist at the start of my...
  September 29th, 2017 02:24
• Forever Lost *Senryu* (Veil loreraven) Good write but strictly speaking this is a senryu. Haikus refer to...
  September 29th, 2017 02:18
• Prime Time. (Wallace) I too am up at 6 in the morning, the best time of the day.
  September 29th, 2017 01:40