Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60

• Never in Return. (Kevin browne) Brilliant write and that last line means everything. Trust in life.
  July 19th, 2017 01:37
• song of the hollow house (Heather T) Good write and the verses between the stanzas work very well.
  July 19th, 2017 01:35
• I\'m Not Perfect (Tony36) Good write. Are any of us perfect?
  July 19th, 2017 00:54
• Sooner (Baylee) Good write and so very true.
  July 19th, 2017 00:52
• Trusting Times (Orchidee) Very good write Orchi.
  July 19th, 2017 00:45
• Crimes in Palestine (Emile Dubois) I agree with what you say, why does the world seem to think that Israel is...
  July 19th, 2017 00:38
• Happiness (Q) Very true, happiness is always within us, sometimes it needs a prod.
  July 19th, 2017 00:35
• lofty (Onepauly) Good write. May your ship sail on forever.
  July 18th, 2017 07:58
• That time of the week (Renzi) Good write. Some years ago I had a problem where my blood kept on having...
  July 18th, 2017 07:57
• HAIKU IN HARMONY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good write and I agree with you that bagpipes are best played far away -...
  July 18th, 2017 03:00
• Children of War (FredPeyer) A very good write and in this day and age it is so true and is probably...
  July 18th, 2017 02:56
• I Hate Mirrors (Ren) Good write but you must be aware that what YOU see in the mirror is a...
  July 18th, 2017 02:55
• A FEW COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) Good write. I would be very wary of cooks who do not cut their nails...
  July 18th, 2017 02:51
• Darkness (Lost-but-not-broken17) That darkness has a strong pull but believe me lightness will always...
  July 18th, 2017 00:55
• Contest (Jabberwocky) Very good write.
  July 18th, 2017 00:53
• Wont come out (Lost in Murphy) Good write may your home always be safe. \"Hello darkness, my old...
  July 18th, 2017 00:51
• \'Mr Snail 🐌- what\'s the point?\' (Sue.evans) Good write. We all have journeys in our life and many of them seem to...
  July 18th, 2017 00:45
• Shy (SorrowfullyHappy) You are not too shy to put your words on here. Good write.
  July 18th, 2017 00:43
• Crystallised Dreams (ShannonXx) Good write and wonderful childhood memories of times passed but never...
  July 18th, 2017 00:40
• Erotica (Phantom bride) Good erotic write.
  July 18th, 2017 00:25
• Heritage Hope (Orchidee) Another good write Orchi.
  July 18th, 2017 00:23
• TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs) Very powerful write. Your care for the babies shines through.
  July 17th, 2017 08:20
• For The Reader (M. Mohon) I think you have put into words that which most of us feel. Good write.
  July 17th, 2017 08:13
• Monday Monday so good to me (Renzi) Very good rant and write.i do hope that calm and peacefulness comes into...
  July 17th, 2017 08:09
• Who I am (Daisychain) Sorry about your loss but I am glad that nature is helping, nature has...
  July 17th, 2017 08:07
• Goodbye (FredPeyer) Very good emotion laden write.
  July 17th, 2017 08:01
• We love who we love (Emile Dubois) Very true, the last line is so right. Good write.
  July 17th, 2017 07:59
• SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST ? A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I saw this in the paper this weekend. Amazing creatures. Good informative...
  July 17th, 2017 04:51
• Sleep Tight. (Kevin browne) What a wonderful write. This shows a great love for Adrian and it also has...
  July 17th, 2017 01:49
• Wholesome Witness (Orchidee) Amen Orchi.
  July 17th, 2017 01:24
• Manipulator (Lost in Murphy) They can normally be seen though and seen for the manipulators that they...
  July 17th, 2017 01:06
• funny or sad (Avigail) Good caffeine laden write. I hope all was well the next morning.
  July 17th, 2017 01:04
• When it was gone (Emile Dubois) Very good write. Stay strong.
  July 17th, 2017 00:51
• Body dysmorphic me (Renzi) Very strong write. I agree with FredPeyer that there is a switch inside...
  July 17th, 2017 00:41
• Motley. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful colour filled write Fay.
  July 16th, 2017 04:20
• The days of our lives (Aa Harvey) Very good write. Our experiences preclude our life.
  July 16th, 2017 04:20
• Music in my head (Poetic Dan) Very true music can cure all ills and bring on all emotions. Good write.
  July 16th, 2017 02:58
• time off (Onepauly) May your coffee give you the pleasure and relaxation after a days work, it...
  July 16th, 2017 02:57
• A short letter (Xxxplicit) Good positive write. You must always be there for her/him. Children do...
  July 16th, 2017 02:55
• LEADERS ~ WHO WOULD BE GODS ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Put your trust in God our leaders are just not trustworthy at all.
  July 16th, 2017 01:49
• I am a Leftie - And proud of it! (FredPeyer) Good write. I seem to have noticed recently that I come across more and...
  July 16th, 2017 01:46
• Rice Wine (Nicholas Browning) I raise a glass to your health Nicholas.
  July 16th, 2017 01:43
• Still A Nurse (Christina8) Good write. Nurses are special people.
  July 16th, 2017 01:40
• Memories (Ron parrish aka wordman) Beautiful write.
  July 16th, 2017 01:39
• good (Onepauly) very good and very positive write,
  July 16th, 2017 01:38
• Slap my wrist (Renzi) Cheers Renzi have (or hope you had) a great time.
  July 16th, 2017 01:30
• Meditative Meanderings (Orchidee) Good write.
  July 16th, 2017 01:28
• Who brings ice Cream to a fucking poker game ? (Joaquin Finn) I would have taken rum and raisin ice-cream! Good fun write.
  July 16th, 2017 01:16
• Movement. (Fay Slimm.) Another awe inspiring write Fay. Thank you.
  July 16th, 2017 01:13
• Alone (FredPeyer) Very good write, being alone can hold many wonders.
  July 16th, 2017 01:11
• The girl on the sand (Hopey_xx) Super write, \"broken stories trapped in the shore\" says so much.
  July 15th, 2017 00:20
• The Star That Never Dimmed (Moonwriting) That drum will always call you and your friend to rise again. Good write....
  July 15th, 2017 00:15
• One Beat (Tony36) As long as the beat goes on our lives will progress. Keep tapping away.
  July 15th, 2017 00:11
• Prosperous Paths (Orchidee) Good write.
  July 15th, 2017 00:08
• Epiphany (Malubotelho) Vibrate away M, vibrate away.
  July 15th, 2017 00:06
• THE WHO I AM (Louis Gibbs) Good write and yes there are alternate realities. I will put a poem on...
  July 15th, 2017 00:06
• Porch (Jabberwocky) May your life always start with everyday being a good one.
  July 15th, 2017 00:03
• Holiday Season (Renzi) Good fun write. I hope the vodka still allowed you to remember the good...
  July 15th, 2017 00:02
• recess (Onepauly) Good write. I once knew a postman whose postal round was in the middle of...
  July 15th, 2017 00:00
• Low Hanging Fruit (FredPeyer) Good write. Temptation is often before us.
  July 14th, 2017 23:57
• Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.) What a wonderfully evocative write. I was with her on her journey.
  July 14th, 2017 23:56
• HOT AIR BALLOONS - An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good write. We see many hot air balloons around our way and the town used...
  July 14th, 2017 23:53
• Task Achieved. (Goldfinch60) Is Iron Man a superhero? Thanks Renzi.
  July 14th, 2017 07:47
• A sentinel (Aa Harvey) Good write. Will war in our land never end.
  July 14th, 2017 02:37
• Time is nothing (Ali.louise) Good emotive write.
  July 14th, 2017 02:01
• A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Good couplets Michael.
  July 14th, 2017 01:56
• hatter mad (Heather T) Gnash away Heather. Good write.
  July 14th, 2017 01:55
• Baby poems (Jabberwocky) Good writes, I bet the children loved them.
  July 14th, 2017 01:50
• Waffling A While (Orchidee) It had to happen sometime Orchi when you went into your sherry soaked...
  July 14th, 2017 01:44
• My boys birthday write (Poetic Dan) Very good write and message. May your son go along his path of life...
  July 14th, 2017 01:40
• Natures Wash Day.... (P.H.Rose) Good write, it is always amazing what you can see in nature in the...
  July 14th, 2017 01:23
• THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good write but another things that you have to remember is that us Brits...
  July 14th, 2017 01:09
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (3) (Michael Edwards) That last stanza does complete this poem, those pledges will go on
  July 13th, 2017 01:10
• Searching Through Stillness (Augustus) That muse can be so elusive sometimes but it was certainly with you when...
  July 13th, 2017 01:05
• Real Football Players.... (P.H.Rose) They certainly were, I haven\'t been to a football match since 1963 back...
  July 13th, 2017 01:01
• Bliss (Tony36) Good write. Yes we will all head towards eternity with our Spirit.
  July 13th, 2017 00:58
• The Kiss (FredPeyer) Very good write and the last stanza is so meaningful.
  July 13th, 2017 00:57
• THE LIGHT YOU PROVIDED (Louis Gibbs) You must always chose your own path to follow the light in your life.
  July 13th, 2017 00:55
• Worship Worthies (Orchidee) Good write Orchi.
  July 13th, 2017 00:54
• As sweet as ever (Malubotelho) Good loving write.
  July 13th, 2017 00:53
• candle light (Onepauly) Nothing \'run of the mill\' about this poem. Good write.
  July 13th, 2017 00:52
• Heaven-Held. (Fay Slimm.) Very good write Fay.
  July 13th, 2017 00:48
• The Endless End (Jabberwocky) Very good write.
  July 13th, 2017 00:44
• MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good fun write. Michaels abstracts always talk to me as well.
  July 13th, 2017 00:43
• THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS (Michael Edwards) I could have written that with my cynical view of politicians. I could...
  July 12th, 2017 02:50
• Toast (Tony36) Cheers, make mine a glass of rioja please.
  July 12th, 2017 02:46
• Deliverance Desirings 2 (Orchidee) Amen, Orchi, Amen.
  July 12th, 2017 02:42
• Bends In My Road.... (P.H.Rose) Good write. Those bends in life\'s roads need to be walked round as there...
  July 12th, 2017 00:25
• Deluded (Jabberwocky) \"Tyger Tyger, burning bright, In the forests of the night; What...
  July 12th, 2017 00:15
• mutual (Onepauly) The way I read it is to travel with your soul or it may be just you soul...
  July 12th, 2017 00:12
• Fuck this Live (FredPeyer) Very good and true write but it is not just in Hawaii, it is everywhere. ...
  July 12th, 2017 00:08
• PEACE? - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Thanks Brian. Over the years I have written many acrostics. I too...
  July 11th, 2017 06:29
• A FEW SINGLE LINERS (Michael Edwards) One liners can be very good and can also be enigmatic. Your abstract is...
  July 11th, 2017 00:48
• DEJA VU 2 ~ MON CLAIR DE LUNE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good write about a wonderful tune. As an aside I saw this performed once...
  July 11th, 2017 00:44
• A cry for opinion (Malubotelho) What you cannot believe in are the politicians as they are in it for what...
  July 11th, 2017 00:39
• Personal Battle (Ternic73) Good write. \"We will remember them\"
  July 11th, 2017 00:33
• My Heart Pounds (Rosetintedview) Good write, my your heart be fulfilled.
  July 11th, 2017 00:26
• THE ENDLESS QUEST (Louis Gibbs) Very good write, may he know peace.
  July 11th, 2017 00:18
• Glisten (Nicholas Browning) Good write, writing is so powerful and therapeutic in it conception and...
  July 11th, 2017 00:12
• callousness (Stephanie Showers) Good write with a positive end. Start all over again in the knowledge that...
  July 11th, 2017 00:10