Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• SIGNS OF THE TIMES (Lasergraph) We went from horses to cars, from cars to airplanes, from adding machines...
  January 23rd, 2018 22:26
• Light (Pots-and-pans) And you have \'risen\' above yourself with this poem!
  January 23rd, 2018 22:23
• Fallback (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Very nice, Kurt! #1 is so true, and #2 is simply beautiful!
  January 23rd, 2018 22:19
• LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Very tender poem, Brian. And you know what happens to two fallen...
  January 23rd, 2018 19:26
• Take Wing (Baylee) Great opening, you pull the reader in and never let go! Very well written,...
  January 23rd, 2018 16:51
• Loss (Sue.evans) Great poem, Sue! Time can be made up, money can be made again, but...
  January 23rd, 2018 04:20
• OPEN MY EYES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I am sure you will get what you pray for, Brian! Well written, well...
  January 23rd, 2018 04:09
• love is a lung (Heather T) Heather, only a caring, beautiful person like you could have written this...
  January 23rd, 2018 04:00
• Gifts of Grace - Good News Series - 6 (Orchidee) Maybe it is better nobody could hear you, orchie! In the old days they...
  January 23rd, 2018 03:56
• I Am Here. (Goldfinch60) Nice to see that \'you are there\', Goldie! And to see you with a bottle...
  January 23rd, 2018 03:52
• MELT (Michael Edwards) I think the result is more than \'okayish\'! You not only followed the...
  January 23rd, 2018 03:46
• THE FILM I VIEWED LAST NIGHT (Michael Edwards) Nice! But you should know that that first kiss in the morning is NOT on...
  January 22nd, 2018 17:55
• the veil (Heather T) Hood said it perfectly, all I can add is that I love your writing....
  January 21st, 2018 14:42
• Uprooted (Baylee) Perfectly worded, Nicole! Go spread your wings. The worst that can happen...
  January 21st, 2018 14:30
• Unending Light? (Goldfinch60) A totally unexpected ending! Maybe you should just leave that outside...
  January 21st, 2018 02:54
• Wet (Lostinthisworld) So sorry I did not see your poems before. This one is so beautifully...
  January 21st, 2018 02:38
• Circus Boy (Lostinthisworld) You do have a way with words, Lostinthisworld (Litw), and the circus...
  January 21st, 2018 02:34
• Bloody Hands (Lostinthisworld) This one stopped me and made me think. I love shorties that leave a lot...
  January 21st, 2018 02:32
• I am Beautiful (Lostinthisworld) Incredibly realistic, with unexpected twists and turns, and a hard hitting...
  January 21st, 2018 02:30
• Of Course (Allan J. Renaldo) For God\'s sake, tell us what happened? Just kidding, your poem leaves it...
  January 21st, 2018 02:22
• Mmmm (Lostinthisworld) Wow, you really, really must be in love! Like it a lot! Well written.
  January 21st, 2018 02:20
• LIMERICKS 46, 47, and 48 (Michael Edwards) Hillarious, Michael! Love them! All three are so good, I can\'t make up my...
  January 21st, 2018 02:14
• Being honest (Dakota) Relationships have been, are, and will be difficult sometimes. You...
  January 20th, 2018 19:13
• When You Find Someone. (Kevin browne) A very beautiful declaration of love, Kevin! Well written, well rhymed!
  January 20th, 2018 19:07
• THREE LITTLE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) You really are multi-tasking, Michael! You write poems, paint, listen to...
  January 20th, 2018 18:21
• Consiousness (FredPeyer) Thanks Tony! Appreciate your comment!
  January 20th, 2018 18:00
• Chalk (Aa Harvey) Well written, sounds like the perfect woman!
  January 20th, 2018 17:56
• Small Town Girl (Skyebellasario) Skye, this is absolutely gorgeous! Great idea, perfectly executed,...
  January 20th, 2018 17:49
• ACROSTICS ~ The Animal Dentist ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) The cartoon does go well with your excellent poem, Brian. Or is it the...
  January 20th, 2018 13:52
• Biscuits and gravy (Tony36) Love this shorty, Tony! We all have our own \'heaven on a plate\'! I think...
  January 20th, 2018 13:29
• blinds (Heather T) Nice to see the great Heather made me think poems again! You haven\'t lost...
  January 20th, 2018 13:27
• Sea & Sky (A__pott) I like your metaphor of light as maybe replacement for \'good\', Alex....
  January 20th, 2018 13:25
• This seed (Anthony Stafford) A thinking mans poem, Podno!
  January 19th, 2018 16:35
• Rainbows Of Your Walking Miles. (Kevin browne) Beautiful expression \'rainbows of your walking miles\' I do like to read...
  January 19th, 2018 16:34
• Half-love (Aa Harvey) ...and that half-love changes to full love! Like your poem, Aa!
  January 19th, 2018 16:31
• UNSUNG HEROES (Lasergraph) Very well written, Lasergraph! Great rhyming too. Kat wrote a poem about...
  January 19th, 2018 16:30
• ACROSTIC ANIMALS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well done Brian! I do like your acrostic poems, and I guess with all the...
  January 19th, 2018 16:26
• Missed Connections (Aislinn Wilson) You do have a comedian talet, Aislinn! Read it twice, lol!
  January 19th, 2018 13:43
• Prosperous Plans - Good News Series - 3 (Orchidee) Forget about re-writing the bible, orchie, start your own TV show! With...
  January 19th, 2018 11:38
• I know of so many (Poetic Dan) Well penned, PD! As you say, to find forgiveness and to remember love is...
  January 19th, 2018 11:32
• Endless Possibilities (Poetboy123) Well written, poetboy, every new day brings endless opportunities and it...
  January 19th, 2018 11:27
• Darkness (Tony36) Well written, Tony, it is like not seeing the forest because of the trees....
  January 19th, 2018 11:23
• \"Where Are My Glasses?\" (Goldfinch60) Goldie, you really hit a nerve here. Do you know how many times I had to...
  January 19th, 2018 05:09
• You and I (Katelynn) Katelynn, I really love this poem, it says exactly how I feel about my...
  January 19th, 2018 02:23
• way poem #17: boat to the island (Frank Prem) Frank, anybody who ever sailed will agree that this is a beautiful poem...
  January 19th, 2018 02:20
• LUMBER (Michael Edwards) Michael, the painting is gorgeous! And the poem ain\'t bad either! Don\'t...
  January 19th, 2018 02:18
• ice queen (Heather T) Heather, this must be the best description of winter I ever read. I got...
  January 18th, 2018 18:47
• I didn\'t want to go (Renzi) Renzi, we love you, no matter what happens. I wish your situation would be...
  January 18th, 2018 18:44
• way poem #16: open to new (Frank Prem) Very true Frank! Kind of made me think of a fish with its 3 second memory!...
  January 18th, 2018 17:35
• TEMPORARY TEMPLES (Louis Gibbs) Your great poem made me think, Louis! Is it maybe the other way round?...
  January 18th, 2018 17:30
• Artists. (Goldfinch60) Your great poem is right on, Goldie! While the impetus may come from the...
  January 18th, 2018 17:24
• My life (Anthony Stafford) A beautiful declaration of love, Podno!
  January 18th, 2018 16:59
• CAUSATION (Michael Edwards) Michael, you do have a way with words (might have said that before, but...
  January 18th, 2018 16:57
• Gold is your soul (Aa Harvey) Well penned, Aa!
  January 18th, 2018 16:55
• Fearful Fall - Good News Series - 2 (Orchidee) Yes, orchie, we are all sinners....but one day..... Now please don\'t...
  January 18th, 2018 16:51
• The Key of Life. (Goldfinch60) Goldie, I said it before, but here it is again: I admire you, your courage...
  January 18th, 2018 16:48
• BLUE MOON or BLOOD MOON (BRIAN & ANGELA) You caught our fascination with the moon perfectly!
  January 18th, 2018 16:42
• I know of none (Poetic Dan) Very truthful and well written, PD! You may still be trying to figure out...
  January 18th, 2018 16:38
• Forget (Olivergreenwood19) Well penned, Oliver! But why is it that we forget things we should...
  January 18th, 2018 16:33
• This Chair. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, your chair and beautiful poem started a bunch of thoughts of what old...
  January 18th, 2018 16:27
• Dear Gretchen the Cheerleader, My First Crush, (Aislinn Wilson) This is a refreshingly good, open, honest write! Well structured, well...
  January 18th, 2018 12:59
• Two Rooks (Aislinn Wilson) There is definitely a little bit of Poe in there, Aislinn, but it\'s just...
  January 18th, 2018 12:54
• God, Our Mother (Aislinn Wilson) Aislinn, I absolutely love this poem. It reminded me of a lady who once...
  January 18th, 2018 12:47
• A Lamentation (Aislinn Wilson) I agree with Michael, Aislinn! You do have quite a way with words. I am...
  January 18th, 2018 12:41
• Monologophobia (Aislinn Wilson) Aislinn, I must say I love it the way it is. There is one thing I would...
  January 18th, 2018 12:32
• ARMAGEDDON ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good one Brian! It\'ll happen, sooner or later (preferably later!).
  January 17th, 2018 11:33
• LOVE\'S CYCLE (Michael Edwards) Michael, you penned something very beautiful here, amazing word choices,...
  January 17th, 2018 11:26
• THINGS I HAVE LEARNED (Lasergraph) It is amazing what aging does to our frame of mind. Well done, Lasergraph!
  January 16th, 2018 17:58
• way poem #14: conversation with three foxes (Frank Prem) Your imagination really is on overdrive here. Well done!
  January 16th, 2018 17:55
• This Day (Beachbabe) All it takes to make a day count, it that one special person. I am one of...
  January 16th, 2018 17:31
• () NO ETERNAL REWARD WILL FORGIVE US NOW for WASTING THE DAWN \" ! You got...
  January 16th, 2018 14:00
• My son sees (Avigail) So true, Avigail! If you have ten people looking at something, you will...
  January 16th, 2018 13:48
• Fuzz Star (Michael J. Schaeffer) The universe is an incredible system and I never get tired of looking at...
  January 16th, 2018 02:58
• Heavenly Help (Orchidee) Well done, orchi! We have to continuously improve. I guess if we stop, we...
  January 16th, 2018 02:53
• SNOW TRANSFORMS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well done, Brian, reminds me so much of my time in Montreal!
  January 16th, 2018 02:50
• Arousal. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, I think that turning night into day through a sexual encounter,...
  January 16th, 2018 02:48
• OUR MANY YEARS TOGETHER (Lasergraph) Lasergraph, this must be one of your best poems! I feel the same way,...
  January 16th, 2018 02:45
• Am I There Yet? (Goldfinch60) I pray you will be with us for a long time to come, Goldie! Cannot imagine...
  January 16th, 2018 02:43
• ANOTHER COUPLET COLLECTION (Michael Edwards) Agree with no.1, well said! No.2, yes, beauty is in the eye of the...
  January 16th, 2018 02:37
• No Regret (FredPeyer) Thank you poetboy! That was a fast comment!! :-)
  January 15th, 2018 22:41
• way poem #13: sorrow and joy (up here in heaven) (Frank Prem) The eternal never getting together love story of the moon and the...
  January 15th, 2018 22:40
• Hear Her (Beachbabe) Welcome to MPS, beachbabe! I have no idea about what you intended with...
  January 15th, 2018 04:57
• HEY WAITER THERE\'S A ..... (Michael Edwards) Forget about the fly, Michael, you are talking about us!
  January 15th, 2018 04:53
• Wise Waiting (Orchidee) Oh man, ortchie, I am not perfect (hard to believe though), I am not...
  January 14th, 2018 06:00
• GOD WILL TAKE CARE OF YOU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) You are a good writer, Brian!
  January 14th, 2018 05:56
• The Love Won\'t End (Its Raskolnikov) And may it go on forever......
  January 14th, 2018 03:17
• HAPPINESS IS (Lasergraph) The whole poem is great, but the last two lines are excellent!
  January 14th, 2018 03:16
• Catatonic Sight (Adrianna Kjeld) Adrianna, I think that last line is what the whole poem is about. How do...
  January 14th, 2018 03:08
• Rapturous Rose (Orchidee) Very well done, Orchidee! Love your poem and all that \'rigmarole\', and...
  January 14th, 2018 03:01
• Edge - Co-Written by Goldfinch and Hood. (Goldfinch60) And the battle goes on... Goldie & Hood, who would have thought! But hey,...
  January 14th, 2018 02:56
• Visions of Hope. (Goldfinch60) Maybe we displaced it, Goldie, but we never lost it!
  January 14th, 2018 02:50
• College Dropout (Lanaevans) Lana, you paint a very realistic situation here with some well placed...
  January 14th, 2018 02:48
• PUPPETRY (Michael Edwards) As Goldie said, it is thought provoking, am just not sure yet of what kind...
  January 14th, 2018 02:42
• way poem #12: barrow and spade (Frank Prem) Nice, Frank! My wheelbarrow and spade are not asleep, they are comatose!...
  January 14th, 2018 02:39
• Loving In The Most Beautiful Of Places. (Kevin browne) Great poem, Kevin. As fas as I am concerned, wherever we cuddle and...
  January 13th, 2018 22:53
• Fly (M.E.M.) Just be careful you don\'t end up like Icarus!
  January 13th, 2018 22:50
• Clouded (WL Schuett) So well written, and the last stanza says it all!
  January 13th, 2018 22:40
• Quickly (Aa Harvey) Yes, Aa, life is short and we have to make the best of it!
  January 13th, 2018 22:38
• BALTIC CRUISE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A cruise can be a beautiful experience. Heard that the inside passage...
  January 13th, 2018 22:26
• Redemption Rememberings (Orchidee) Communion, the center piece of the service! Beautiful poem, orchidee. And...
  January 13th, 2018 22:23