Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- LOVE IS >>> (Michael Edwards)
Yes, love is all that, Michael, and much more like sharing our joys and...
February 14th, 2018 14:11 - SACRED STORIES (Louis Gibbs)
I love your sacred stories, Louis! And yes, love IS the glue that holds...
February 14th, 2018 14:02 - ME AND MY FAMILY (Michael Edwards)
Dancing is a way of expressing yourself, same as you do in your painting...
February 14th, 2018 14:00 - Heaven Waits (Blues Poem #15) +5 (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, I do hope that last riff will not be played for a long long time!...
February 14th, 2018 13:40 - VALENTINE\'S MESSAGE. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully written, Fay! Happy Valentine\'s Day!
February 14th, 2018 13:36 - A Love So True (Christina8)
The perfect Valentine\'s poem, Christina! Wish you both a very happy...
February 14th, 2018 13:33 - tease (Heather T)
Love your word choices, Heather! Am writing this in the middle of a...
February 14th, 2018 13:32 - Destined (Baylee)
And fly on your own you must, Nicole! This is a great poem, so well...
February 14th, 2018 13:18 - A Selection of Couplets (FredPeyer)
Thanks da! I keep on writing them down as they pop into my head and...
February 13th, 2018 21:00 - Then Came The Sadness. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, sometimes we have to go through the whole gamut of emotions like...
February 13th, 2018 20:58 - You Saw Me (Christina8)
Beautifully written, Christina! Am not so sure though of which one of you...
February 13th, 2018 20:51 - COPING ALONE. (Fay Slimm.)
You truly do have the gift, Fay! Beautifully written with just the right...
February 13th, 2018 20:48 - DEATH IN A CANYON ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
All accidents are tragic, but I think Holiday accidents are even worse....
February 13th, 2018 20:41 - Light of Life (Orchidee)
Life is light, light is life! Love your writing, orchie!
February 13th, 2018 20:38 - Less and More. (Goldfinch60)
Agree with Laura, including the tinnitus!!! Am trying to overpower or at...
February 13th, 2018 20:36 - NOW SHARP THE FROSTS (Michael Edwards)
As many others already mentioned, had to read it several times too, and it...
February 13th, 2018 20:33 - Summer 1962 \'The Time Of His Life\' (+7) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Can\'t make up my mind about which one is my favorite here. Am torn...
February 13th, 2018 20:28 - Someone (Its Raskolnikov)
Looks like you really, totally fell in love, Ras! Good for you! And the...
February 13th, 2018 20:25 - \"Falling\" (MaddieJ)
Great poem, Leya! Love the ending!
February 13th, 2018 20:23 - The Songbird Dove Hums (Michael J. Schaeffer)
Well written and intriguing subject, Michael!
February 13th, 2018 20:21 - On Sale For Thee (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
First one: Love it. It is so scary to suddenly see your innermost feelings...
February 13th, 2018 20:11 - Not An Angel (Skyebellasario)
Beautifully written, skye. After reading it the Bellamy Brothers came to...
February 13th, 2018 20:04 - FINDING GOD ~ A PERSONAL SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well done, Brian!
February 13th, 2018 19:57 - Pregnant at 18 (Lost-but-not-broken17)
The pictures are amazing! Congratulations! I do believe that having a...
February 13th, 2018 19:54 - Counting The Months (Christina8)
Believe me, even though I now have summer all year long, I thirsted for...
February 11th, 2018 00:48 - A. A. A. I will always be (Poetic Dan)
I hope you will sing and dance the WHOLE time! Have fun and make her
February 11th, 2018 00:46 - A Deaf Ear (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I felt very close to the first poem, really like \'My stone to drag\', and...
February 11th, 2018 00:37 - WHO I AM (Michael Edwards)
While I love the way you write, Michael, I have to say that I never got...
February 10th, 2018 20:07 - I Awoke Today (Goldfinch60)
Your great poem speaks to the converted here. At my age, every day is a...
February 10th, 2018 20:03 - The echo (Poetic Dan)
Beautifully written, PD.
February 10th, 2018 20:01 - WONDERFUL WORLD OF WORK ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Always liked to work, am still working, and don\'t see any reason why I...
February 10th, 2018 19:56 - THOSE. (Fay Slimm.)
You conjure up great scenes of life on the sea, Fay. So well written! I...
February 10th, 2018 19:53 - Sugar Sweet She Shone. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, you keep surprising me, positively for sure! Some great lines. I...
February 10th, 2018 19:43 - Floral, Red Dress. (Adrianna Kjeld)
You outdid yourself with this one, Adrianna! Well written, well rhymed, it...
February 9th, 2018 14:02 - Forever Long (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, were you writing about me? Especially the \'memory on the run\'...
February 9th, 2018 11:31 - Roses tinted glasses (Poetic Dan)
Well said, PD!
February 7th, 2018 12:17 - Sleepy Day (Michael J. Schaeffer)
Every night owl would agree with you! Well written, Michael.
February 7th, 2018 12:10 - WHITE STUFF. (Fay Slimm.)
Really like your \'fun\' poem, Fay! I think that sometimes dogs are...
February 7th, 2018 12:08 - Your Fire (Christina8)
Yes, you are in love, Christina, no doubt about it after reading this...
February 7th, 2018 12:05 - FEMALE EQUALITY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I like it that you address this problem, and even though it is better now...
February 7th, 2018 11:56 - Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: last escort (Frank Prem)
Frank, I really like the openness of this poem. It leaves a lot to the...
February 7th, 2018 02:45 - Waiting In The Cold (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautifully written, Kurt, love your word choices and combinations like...
February 7th, 2018 02:32 - Your Voice (Little_Write)
LW, we all need to hear that voice once in a while. Life is tough to...
February 6th, 2018 03:30 - What is Life? (Goldfinch60)
What is life, what is our purpose, why are we here.....
These are the...
February 6th, 2018 03:25 - Thomas\' Trust - Twelve Disciples Series - 7 (Orchidee)
Great hymn-poem about our doubting Thomas! So many people need to touch...
February 6th, 2018 03:22 - IT IS TIME (Louis Gibbs)
Our brains are no match for computers as far as math is concerned, but I...
February 6th, 2018 03:20 - More (Pots-and-pans)
p&p, I recently wrote a poem titled \'serendipity\' and I think your...
February 5th, 2018 18:53 - WORDS & ORIGINS ~ 2 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Keep on going Brian! Love to learn where these expressions are coming...
February 5th, 2018 18:27 - Love\'s Birthright. (Fay Slimm.)
Great poem, love that last line! So well written, as always!
February 5th, 2018 18:25 - The Book. (Goldfinch60)
Just had to make this a favorite, Goldie! Love the way you set it up and...
February 5th, 2018 18:21 - John\'s Journeyings - Twelve Disciples Series - 6 (Orchidee)
There is an important message in your poem: to be humble and serve others,...
February 5th, 2018 18:18 - The Ending Assured (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
No pain....no gain
Love the way you concentrate it to the essentials....
February 5th, 2018 12:35 - First Place (Its Raskolnikov)
Very nicely written, Ras, good flow, and the best thing is that you will...
February 5th, 2018 01:36 - Naked Joy (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Did not see the second one on my phone. It is beautiful and so much...
February 5th, 2018 01:32 - VITRIOL (Laura🌻)
You said it, Laura. Don\'t know if this is aimed at anyone in particular,...
February 5th, 2018 01:27 - Longing for a Change (FredPeyer)
Thanks so much Cat! Maybe the time is not totally lost and wasted IF it...
February 4th, 2018 20:48 - Naked Joy (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Read the title, was looking forward to read about skinny dipping. Should...
February 4th, 2018 17:14 - Longing for a Change (FredPeyer)
Thanks Kevin. Sometimes it seems as if the unreal is better than the real,...
February 4th, 2018 14:24 - The end of the world (Jooles)
Looks like I have something to look forward to!!! Makes me want to leave...
February 4th, 2018 12:03 - Into the darkness (Jooles)
Jooles, welcome to the club! I think all poets have a \'wierd side\' as...
February 4th, 2018 11:58 - Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: who is he (2) (Frank Prem)
Frank, your poems really get the juices flowing. At least the juices in my...
February 4th, 2018 04:15 - Splash (Michael J. Schaeffer)
Just give everybody a ball so they don\'t have to fight!
February 4th, 2018 04:13 - Philip\'s Perusals - Twelve Disciples Series - 5 (Orchidee)
Can you imagine how much that would cost today? Well written and very...
February 4th, 2018 04:10 - MAN IN BLACK ~ JOHNNY CASH (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks for posting this, Brian. I do like Johnny Cash a lot.
February 4th, 2018 04:08 - Light in Chaos. (Goldfinch60)
I really like this poem, Goldie! And one does not have to be religious to...
February 4th, 2018 04:04 - Windy (A__pott)
Love these last two lines, Alex! And how many times does something...
February 4th, 2018 04:00 - Mother (Anthony Stafford)
A very beautiful declaration of love for your mom! Like it! Mothers are...
February 4th, 2018 03:58 - My love for you (Bella cortez)
I think this would make a nice love song! Well written, Bella!
February 4th, 2018 03:48 - Of All the Hearts in All the Towns in All the World (Lorna)
Lorna, this poem is beautiful! I had to read it a few times, and each time...
February 3rd, 2018 15:26 - Broken (Lexi_lg)
Wow, if this isn\'t a cry for help, I don\'t know what would be! But who...
February 3rd, 2018 14:00 - Anorexia (Lexi_lg)
You described the anorexia problem perfectly, Lexi! Well written.
February 3rd, 2018 13:58 - Second Truth (WL Schuett)
Kat is right, there is magic in this poem, and you are the magician!
February 3rd, 2018 13:52 - Deep Within (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
There are very few poems that take away my words. This one did. I am blown...
February 3rd, 2018 13:44 - ORIGINS OF EXPRESSIONS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thank you Professor Brian. Maybe I should join your class! I did realize...
February 3rd, 2018 13:36 - Alltogetherness. (Fay Slimm.)
The answer to the \'who?\' is quite simple: It is YOU Fay!!!
How else...
February 3rd, 2018 13:34 - Oracle (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Well written, like how you bring all the different Gods, the oracle,...
February 3rd, 2018 13:21 - James\' Judgement - Twelve Disciples Series - 4 (Orchidee)
It seems to me orchie, that no matter what you touch, it comes out good!
February 3rd, 2018 13:15 - SHORTIES FROM FUSIONS (Michael Edwards)
Your shorties are so good, Michael, you don\'t have to apologize for...
February 3rd, 2018 13:12 - Missing Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Goldie, you are so right. Too many people go through life wearing blinkers...
February 3rd, 2018 13:09 - A different kind of thought (Annonymouswonder)
Well written and interesting poem. Made me think. It is also very timely...
February 2nd, 2018 23:40 - High School Depression (Adrianna Kjeld)
Ahw, Adrianna, so sad! Well written though! Well, there you are, ready...
February 2nd, 2018 23:26 - a two dollar tip on a five dollar beer (Abora)
Well done Abora! It has flow and rhythm, great description of the single...
February 2nd, 2018 23:12 - Can You / Will You (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I just love your \'intellectual\' poems, Kurt, they make one think. On the...
February 2nd, 2018 15:15 - GROUNDHOG REVENGE PUNXSUTAWNEY PHIL (part 2) (Lasergraph)
Nice continuation to your last poem, lasergraph! I guess you guys still...
February 2nd, 2018 15:03 - Winter\'s Wrath (Christina8)
Well written, Christina! The first snow is usually a lot of fun, but as...
February 2nd, 2018 15:01 - Too Long. (Fay Slimm.)
Very beautifully written, Fay! And while I write this comment, I look out...
February 2nd, 2018 14:48 - ANGELA IN THE GARDEN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Beautiful declaration of love, Brian!
February 2nd, 2018 14:47 - Baffled. (Goldfinch60)
Great poem, great question, Goldie!
And you are in luck!!! I researched...
February 2nd, 2018 14:37 - IF ALL THE WORLD...(2) (Michael Edwards)
You just made my morning, Michael. And please don\'t call this \'pure...
February 2nd, 2018 14:26 - PUNXSUTAWNEY PHIL (Lasergraph)
Like your poem, lasergraph. I wonder where these legends come from, what...
February 2nd, 2018 14:08 - ONCE IN BLUE MOON ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks for this moon poem, Brian. What I expected to see when I got up...
February 2nd, 2018 14:06 - Matthew Missioner - Twelve Disciples Series - 3 (Orchidee)
I guess not much has changed as far as tax collectors are concerned. We...
February 2nd, 2018 14:04 - 7pm wake up call (Aa Harvey)
That dream turned into a nice love story! Well done.
February 2nd, 2018 14:00 - The Coven (a story writing practice - part 1) (Niallprideaux)
Could be a great opening to a novel!
Keep on writing.
February 2nd, 2018 13:57 - Although It\'s All I Can Remember. (Kevin browne)
Great writing, Kevin! Keep on remembering that \'sunnyside of the...
February 1st, 2018 13:27 - Regeneration. (Fay Slimm.)
And there she goes...gallivanting around with a big smile on her face!
I...
February 1st, 2018 13:22 - Better World. (Goldfinch60)
While I generally prefer a saxophone over a clarinet, this player was...
February 1st, 2018 13:13 - RESERVED WITHIN (Michael Edwards)
While very well written, what I like most about both the drawing and the...
February 1st, 2018 13:07 - Reentering (Kurt Philip Behm)
There seems to be no limit to your imagination and writing skills, Kurt,...
February 1st, 2018 13:02 - CORPORATE ILLUSION (Lasergraph)
Well written, lasergraph! And so true! A while back I wrote a poem about a...
February 1st, 2018 12:56
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