Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Specialness. (Fay Slimm.) That picture goes perfectly with your beautiful poem, Fay! While the last...
  February 1st, 2018 12:50
• My Artist. (Goldfinch60) You are right, Goldie, we can get lost in a beautiful painting, or a...
  February 1st, 2018 12:41
• A Twisted Flow (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) No.1: Beautiful writing, Kurt. I seems to me that you are leaving this one...
  February 1st, 2018 12:36
• The Flower Garden (Tony36) After reading your fine poem, I can see that garden in my mind!
  January 31st, 2018 12:32
• A QUORUM OF QUINZANES (Michael Edwards) Michael, you mastered the form perfectly! And to top it off, all five...
  January 31st, 2018 12:31
• my spiral self (Avigail) I agree with you that it would be nice if today\'s I would be better than...
  January 31st, 2018 12:24
• Hush (Baylee) Beautiful description of a winter day, Nicole! Makes me want to run out...
  January 31st, 2018 12:19
• Floating (Poetic Dan) Perfect picture for a perfect poem!
  January 31st, 2018 02:03
• Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: and yet she looked so (Frank Prem) Sometimes it is as if our brains are playing games with us! You captured...
  January 31st, 2018 02:00
• Pen and Paper (Skyebellasario) You described perfectly the life of a writer! If the pen and paper don\'t...
  January 31st, 2018 01:59
• OBSEQUIES (Laura🌻) Very well written, Laura! \'I am your bait\' made me thing that hopefully...
  January 31st, 2018 01:54
• Unfettered. (Fay Slimm.) \'Facing tomorrows without need of phantom....\' Beautiful writing again,...
  January 31st, 2018 01:50
• Full time dreamer (Aa Harvey) Well penned, Aa! Like that last stanza!
  January 31st, 2018 01:42
• MY CAT TALKS TO ME ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Interesting poem, cats are like that! But that last line isn\'t exactly
  January 31st, 2018 01:40
• Music In My Soul. (Goldfinch60) Great, great poem, Goldie! I don\'t listen to the same kind of music, but...
  January 31st, 2018 01:38
• Andrew\'s Aspirings - Twelve Disciples Series - 1 (Orchidee) Very very nice, orchie! Believing or not, I feel saved!
  January 31st, 2018 01:37
• Less (Anthony Stafford) Podno, this is great! Hope you can become fearless again!
  January 31st, 2018 01:34
• breathe in, breathe out... (Niallprideaux) Very well written, niall! I personally never had anxiety attacks, but I...
  January 31st, 2018 01:33
• HER LONG LIFE (Lasergraph) Very nicely written, well rhymed, lasergraph! You are right, it happens...
  January 31st, 2018 01:31
• Dictated (Poetic Dan) Yes, Dan, life does dictate a lot, but we do have a choice, we can say...
  January 31st, 2018 01:29
• Moon on the Ground (A__pott) While this poem is incredibly well written, well rhymed, great metaphors,...
  January 31st, 2018 01:26
• Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: sometimes it’s dancing - old fashioned tap (Frank Prem) You really caught the essence of tap dancing with your poem, Frank. Never...
  January 30th, 2018 03:11
• The Dream (Christina8) Judging from this beautifully written poem, you are a very lucky woman,...
  January 30th, 2018 03:09
• SPILLED INK SHADOWS (Michael Edwards) Michael, your word choices are just incredible! Does it all just come to...
  January 30th, 2018 03:04
• Sometimes (Dusk arising) A well written poem about heartache, one-sided love, and how we deal with...
  January 29th, 2018 12:51
• Discontent (Dusk arising) great poem, da, and so true! If you look at the sad state of affairs all...
  January 29th, 2018 12:45
• Tell Me. (Fay Slimm.) Well written Fay! We always wonder about these \'secrets\', don\'t we? It...
  January 29th, 2018 05:39
• SHORELINE DESECRATION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Here in Hawaii, our shorelines are protected. On the other hand, while...
  January 29th, 2018 05:36
• Angel. (Wallace) Wallace, I wish you luck! You might have to look far and wide to find this...
  January 29th, 2018 05:05
• Shielded Safety (Orchidee) Orchie, I am so happy for you that you found your safety shield. Am still...
  January 29th, 2018 04:49
• Path of Love. (Goldfinch60) I live in the States, we don\'t walk, we drive, so the longest drive will...
  January 29th, 2018 04:44
• IF ALL THE WORLD...(1) (Michael Edwards) Too much \'Anglo-Saxon\' for me! Ok, I know what a trunk is, and I do wear...
  January 29th, 2018 04:40
• New line (Aa Harvey) And every new line is filled with opportunity and wonder! Well done, Aa!
  January 29th, 2018 02:24
• Poet Identity (Mottakeenur Rehman) You are what you write - you write what you are! Love this poem, MR!
  January 29th, 2018 02:23
• BIRD-TUNED. (Fay Slimm.) You caught the wonder of migrating birds perfectly, Fay!
  January 29th, 2018 02:21
• Return, Rebuild, Restore (Orchidee) orchie, from the title I thought you are talking about my house...
  January 29th, 2018 02:19
• What are we doing here? (Avigail) Great question, Avigail! \'What are we doing here?\' You tell me! Don\'t...
  January 29th, 2018 02:17
• For Gracious Greetings. (Kevin browne) \'The bubble we spend our time in\'...sometimes it does feel like we live...
  January 29th, 2018 02:07
• Lovesick (A__pott) Yes, Alex, love can be terminal...at least it is in my case. It just...
  January 29th, 2018 02:03
• THE STRUGGLE WITHIN (Louis Gibbs) Love it, Louis! And the struggle goes on... I am with you, would love to...
  January 29th, 2018 02:01
• Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: from the man at (Frank Prem) Great poem again! And yes, a woman can do that to us! Emile\'s is turning...
  January 29th, 2018 01:57
• The Voice Distant (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, I do like this poem, had to make it a favorite! On a lighter note,...
  January 29th, 2018 01:55
• Love In The Morning (Adam Shirley) Beautifully written, great word choices, and that last line is just...
  January 29th, 2018 01:23
• Help Me Lord. (Goldfinch60) I said it before, Goldie, I admire you. Your love for her shines through...
  January 28th, 2018 23:20
• HOLOCAUST MEMORY (BRIAN & ANGELA) \'Ethnic cleansing\' is a crime and is still going on in various parts of...
  January 28th, 2018 23:10
• ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE (Michael Edwards) I can see that gathering storm night, feel it in my bones. Great writing,...
  January 28th, 2018 23:03
• True Love (W c) you are right, wc, this is what true love is all about!
  January 28th, 2018 02:09
• The Flames Dance (Kurt Philip Behm) As I have come to expect from you, Kurt, a beautifully written poem. And...
  January 28th, 2018 02:01
• Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: a small conversation (Frank Prem) Absolutely love it, Frank! You caught the ambiance, the quoi-faire, the je...
  January 28th, 2018 01:17
• Dreams (Skyebellasario) Beautifully said, skye! You HAVE TO believe in your dreams, but then comes...
  January 27th, 2018 22:05
• She Broke All The Rules. (Kevin browne) I think AP is right, Kevin. You gotta show this to her! Beautifully...
  January 27th, 2018 22:03
• THE KNOWING. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully expressed, Fay! Every once in a long time there are these...
  January 27th, 2018 21:59
• A TEDDY BEAR IS ~ BETTER THAN A MAN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Better than a man? So is a robot. And he even talks to you! Just kidding,...
  January 27th, 2018 21:47
• Naughty at any age (Jooles) Great poem. At 40 you probably think 70 is OLD! I will be 70 this year and...
  January 27th, 2018 21:42
• Praise Psalmody (Orchidee) \'Make praises all life long\' reminded me to be more \'praiseful\' with...
  January 27th, 2018 21:33
• Look at the Stars. (Goldfinch60) Really like this poem, Goldie! We do need to \'look at the stars\', or see...
  January 27th, 2018 21:30
• I Lost You. (Beachbabe) I like your poem for two reasons: One, it is well written, two, it poses...
  January 27th, 2018 21:26
• ADVERSARY RHYMES 13, 14, & 15 (Michael Edwards) I remember #3 quite distinctly, even though it was a long time ago. Never...
  January 27th, 2018 21:13
• Goodnight Moon, Goodnight RK (Lorna) Very tender and loving, sr.
  January 26th, 2018 12:01
• Silver Bullet (Uma) (Lorna) I am reading through all your poems, sr! So glad I found you! Love your...
  January 26th, 2018 11:56
• May We Always Fly Free (Lorna) Love your short train related poem. Recently took the train from San Diego...
  January 26th, 2018 11:51
• Death by Hibachi (Lorna) Good one, sr, beats having to fumble around with hooking up the exhaust...
  January 26th, 2018 11:49
• Endings (Lorna) I don\'t know if it is the writing, or the subject, but after reading your...
  January 26th, 2018 11:45
• The Train Station Wheelchair-bound Philosopher (Lorna) Great title....drew me right in! And the poem did not disappoint! I wanna...
  January 26th, 2018 11:40
• Down syndrome (Sarah Marie) Well written, Sarah! The last six lines especially are wonderful. Thank...
  January 26th, 2018 11:33
• Toast (Aa Harvey) The boredom in the poem does come through perfectly! Ah well, what\'s...
  January 26th, 2018 11:27
• As I Did (Baylee) So sad, Nicole, but with some beautiful word choices, \'my riven wings...
  January 26th, 2018 11:17
• HAPPY TEDDY BEAR ~ A Free Verse Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) There is something special about teddy bears, had more than one when I was...
  January 26th, 2018 11:13
• Unbeaten. (Fay Slimm.) I just love the English country side, the harbor towns and Europe in...
  January 26th, 2018 04:52
• Heaven On Earth - Good News Series - 9 (Orchidee) Have to admit that I don\'t understand this one too much. It does have a...
  January 26th, 2018 04:49
• Watta Lotta Excrement. (Goldfinch60) I guess you could have said \'shit\', but that wouldn\'t have changed...
  January 26th, 2018 04:40
• A COMPILATION OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) OK, Michael, my favorites are 1, 2, and 5.
  January 26th, 2018 04:35
• Not Half-Not Whole (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) Funny, you write about the soul here, Kurt. This is a subject I am deeply...
  January 26th, 2018 04:16
• A Field In Misery (Thoff1) Well written, am trying to decipher the hidden meaning. Guess, need a...
  January 25th, 2018 23:11
• I Can Dance What I See. (Kevin browne) Kevin, your well written poem covers a whole lifetime of love\'s up and...
  January 25th, 2018 23:06
• What\'s Heaven Sent (Kurt Philip Behm) ...and the grass is always greener on the other side! Kurt, I do love...
  January 25th, 2018 20:43
• Resurrection Rejoicings - Good News Series - 8 (Orchidee) With all these fine poems and your beautiful singing, orchi, you make...
  January 25th, 2018 20:41
• THURSDAY\'S ENIGMA ? An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Your poem made me think about which day I like best. Probably Monday,...
  January 25th, 2018 20:39
• Crocodile Tears (Mottakeenur Rehman) Well written, M, with some beautiful word choices!
  January 25th, 2018 20:35
• A TOUCH OF ROMANCE (Lasergraph) Lasergraph, love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza! Words are...
  January 25th, 2018 15:37
• OLD MAN (Michael Edwards) I have to assume that this is a tribute to your grandfather. Beautifully...
  January 25th, 2018 15:05
• Alone Or With God. (Goldfinch60) I truly enjoyed your conversation with God, Goldfinch! I don\'t think I...
  January 25th, 2018 14:54
• shine inside out (Avigail) This is a good one, Avigail! We do have to come to terms with ourselves...
  January 25th, 2018 14:40
• A Reminder That I\'m Human (Syd) Syd, I like the poem, the subject, the writing, and the rhyming. Well
  January 25th, 2018 14:36
• Find your way (Tony36) Nicely said, Tony! It\'s not always the easiest way, but at least it is...
  January 25th, 2018 14:33
• Fool (Baylee) You tell em, girl! Very cleverly written with a great message! And yes, he...
  January 25th, 2018 14:28
• Still giving time more time (Poetic Dan) I think your writing is getting better and better, PD! Hang on to the good...
  January 25th, 2018 14:06
• Disguised Rainbow (A__pott) I guess you could call it a disfunct family! I like it Alex, short, to...
  January 25th, 2018 13:57
• Cold Bum (FredPeyer) Thanks, tepo! These two stanzas must have reminded you of scuba diving! I...
  January 24th, 2018 13:22
• play life (Avigail) Love the title and your thinking, Avigail! Too many of us regard life as a...
  January 24th, 2018 11:11
• Whale Meat Again. (Goldfinch60) Given the difficulty of the title, you came up with a good one, Goldie!...
  January 24th, 2018 10:58
• Little Things (FredPeyer) Thanks so much Michael! I think we both understand each other!
  January 24th, 2018 02:52
• Little Things (FredPeyer) Thanks Goldie, you got it! They do!
  January 24th, 2018 02:46
• Cold Bum (FredPeyer) Thanks so much Angel! The word \'amazing\' is debatable! But my wife told...
  January 24th, 2018 02:45
• DIVERGENCE OF PARALLELS (Michael Edwards) First of all Michael, the painting is absolutely gorgeous! Now to the...
  January 24th, 2018 02:15
• Cold Bum (FredPeyer) Thanks Michael, you are so right. When I was young, my brains were down in...
  January 24th, 2018 02:09
• She Wept And I Cried. (Kevin browne) Brings to mind the song: \'Breaking up is hard to do\'! But no matter...
  January 24th, 2018 02:08
• Little Things (FredPeyer) Thanks Louis, something a little different. Otherwise I might bore you to...
  January 23rd, 2018 23:21
• I\'ll keep searching on (Poetic Dan) PD, sometimes, despite our strongest efforts, it just doesn\'t work....
  January 23rd, 2018 22:39
• Pity Him. (Fay Slimm.) There are no winners in any war, only losers. While I admire and am...
  January 23rd, 2018 22:35