Comments on community poems by burning-embers

• Just around the Corner (FredPeyer) What are those words in the ceremony \'in the midst of life we are in...
  July 25th, 2017 05:51
• Marriage to Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Its such a simple thing you appear to have written but the way you have...
  July 25th, 2017 05:48
• I just wanted to fly (Malubotelho) I read in your response to FredPeyer about the circumstance of this pieces...
  July 25th, 2017 04:15
• The Hard Times (Austin Harness) I like this very much indeed. It\'s one of those writes which contain so...
  July 25th, 2017 04:09
• Disposable (Stephanie Showers) Welcome to the economy, LOL . Cruel isn\'t it. But the trade off is some...
  July 24th, 2017 12:26
• Societies Standards (Dxmenxque) What a nugget of truth you expose here! You\'re right. There are several...
  July 24th, 2017 11:20
• Waiting For Dawn (Kurt Philip Behm) Sombre strong truth imparted with skill and economy. Somehow simple but...
  July 24th, 2017 10:36
• Great weather (Renzi) Jeez what a life! Few days ago it was street parties and booze, then it...
  July 24th, 2017 10:25
• ALEXIS (Louis Gibbs) This is beautifully written. Your feelings pour out of it.
  July 24th, 2017 09:09
• Fears (Mbird72) Lovely read. I felt this.
  July 24th, 2017 08:41
• Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get) (FredPeyer) I shy away from such droppings - hey, i even dodge the pigeons efforts.
  July 24th, 2017 03:15
• Reading Man. (Goldfinch60) Sadly, the world is not always ready for our work.
  July 24th, 2017 02:42
• Him (Kbreinich) Great piece of work. Compact succinct. I wish more could be so economic.
  July 24th, 2017 00:00
• Broke my promise (Renzi) All the best nutters break a promise now and again, it\'s in the rule
  July 23rd, 2017 23:56
• DANCING IN THE DARK (Poetic Judy Emery) Judy, such a beautifully crafted introductory piece from you. A really...
  July 23rd, 2017 19:54
• Accept the flaws of My Family (Saima) Fairy tale world. Try telling people who are abused by their birth parents...
  July 23rd, 2017 19:50
• Wings (Stumped) Erm, that sure is some commitment u are asking there.
  July 23rd, 2017 19:48
• Glass House (FredPeyer) Nice twist. But when the spies open these comments will we be hauled...
  July 23rd, 2017 14:45
• My Motions (Tia Davis/テイア) Did anyone tell u that \'motions\' are what comes out of your anus....
  July 23rd, 2017 14:08
• destroyed (Ummbree) Superb expression, Very powerful. Courageous too.
  July 23rd, 2017 13:15
• Unfair (Malubotelho) aah the trade off, which is the more important? which is the more...
  July 22nd, 2017 13:36
• Wisdom (FredPeyer) Oh to have never made the same mistake twice. Nice one
  July 22nd, 2017 13:32
• The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie) (Goldfinch60) (sings) Bring me sunshine .... You certainly brought some to me on this...
  July 22nd, 2017 13:31
• Affliction (Renzi) A living poet bares their pain frustration in words read again exposing...
  July 22nd, 2017 12:53
• Black Hearts 🖤 (Drusch33) Stunning. This is a page of recent me which probably haunts my tomorrows....
  July 19th, 2017 16:27
• Love Is (Migithehp) Love in its purest is unconditional. Love will teach you what love is. It...
  July 19th, 2017 15:14
• Beautiful (Q) And your words are beautiful for Amy too.
  July 19th, 2017 15:07
• My younger years (Christina8) Nice one christina. i guess mine would be my thirties, your prime years...
  July 19th, 2017 13:15
• Thoughts (M.m) This is gorgeous. You totally encapsulate the feeling and i know it only...
  July 19th, 2017 13:11
• Love entropy (Malubotelho) Malubotelho A sad but recurring event in our lifes. Rejoice!!! for the...
  July 19th, 2017 13:00
• Wednesday\'s child (Renzi) Great positivity. I too chucked away negative rubbish apart from....oh ...
  July 19th, 2017 07:14
• Vanishing Fears. (Goldfinch60) Good points raised about questions above me here. For me i am blessed with...
  July 19th, 2017 03:03
• Dying Love (FredPeyer) Brought a tear to my eye fred because i interpreted this as my love for...
  July 19th, 2017 02:59
• Happiness (Q) Good words indeed. Many on here are living this way. Hopefully expression...
  July 18th, 2017 06:25
• Hi I am a slut (NikitaPassmore) You\'re a poet hun. That\'s why you\'re here and that\'s how you\'ll be...
  July 18th, 2017 05:32
• That time of the week (Renzi) Just a little scratch they say as they stab you - missing the vein....
  July 18th, 2017 05:23
• Life\'s Aims. (Goldfinch60) Singing oh yes, such joy. I used to keep my voice in condition forever...
  July 18th, 2017 05:11
• Children of War (FredPeyer) My thoughts went to WW1 Fred and the Christmas football match between the...
  July 18th, 2017 05:00
• I Hate Mirrors (Ren) Excellent writing. I know all too well your expression and the stranger in...
  July 18th, 2017 04:49
• I Wish I Didn\'t Care (M. Mohon) Great outpouring of anger. Aimed at self or a friend there is validity. Im...
  July 18th, 2017 04:39
• The power of love (David) Yep, just as DS/KS says above very similar to corinthians. Should u wish...
  July 18th, 2017 04:31
• The Healing (Kbreinich) Great. Really well written and powerful. Verses two and four work as...
  July 18th, 2017 04:24
• Black Angel (Lostinthisworld) Maybe you were created the perfect victim. The famous dance of life. It...
  July 17th, 2017 22:52
• Meaning. (Stumped) Never mind the bullshit just make sure you eat good quality...
  July 17th, 2017 22:15
• Not The Same Anymore (Bunny1996) Well, it\'s like this - i was at the supermart last week and they had a...
  July 17th, 2017 22:05
• Wanted (Nori_B) Sounds good to me!
  July 17th, 2017 21:58
• Too late (Justagirl) Sooner or later you\'re going to find the guy in your arms is a bit better...
  July 17th, 2017 21:56
• Love (Elphaba993) You\'re right but it\'s what you are pre - programmed to do. You can stop...
  July 17th, 2017 21:52
• My Black is beautiful (Simply Jimyra) Hun you are beautiful and it shines out of your words. My but you are some...
  July 17th, 2017 14:41
• Wont come out (Lost in Murphy) Yes mate. Theres times when we all need emotional austerity. Its self help...
  July 17th, 2017 14:19
• 🎀Tear Stains🎀 (Savvi) Well done for getting out of that awful relationship and WOW well done for...
  July 17th, 2017 14:05
• \'Mr Snail 🐌- what\'s the point?\' (Sue.evans) Wicked! Absolutely love this. As you\'ll see from my stuff i love entering...
  July 17th, 2017 13:58
• Shy (SorrowfullyHappy) Pretty deep really.. If u don\'t say hello, then no chance of doing the...
  July 17th, 2017 13:54
• TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs) Reading both your poem and your notes this is so beautiful. Thank you, you...
  July 17th, 2017 12:07
• WHAT I SAW (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) What a magical poet you are. This really is a work of art. I wish i could...
  July 17th, 2017 11:59
• Connectors (Avigail) Great work. I think i was badly wired from new but along the way a few...
  July 17th, 2017 11:53
• A Story in Silence (Rpgiii) Truly almost too gobsmacked to comment, had to sit back a minute. Very...
  July 17th, 2017 11:25
• I Am Desire. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, what have you been doing? I recognise in your words that youve been...
  July 17th, 2017 11:04
• For The Reader (M. Mohon) Love it, but i would suggest one improvement to ease your workflow. Use a...
  July 17th, 2017 10:59
• Who I am (Daisychain) Beautifully written message of your journey through hell. I suspect you...
  July 17th, 2017 10:43
• Copacabana (Malubotelho) Soooooo HOT malubotelho i evaporated ! Three large glasses of water and...
  July 17th, 2017 10:23
• Monday Monday so good to me (Renzi) Aaaaah that song, sung by a wonderful voice from a lovely fat lady. The...
  July 17th, 2017 09:23
• Goodbye (FredPeyer) For me you were picking up litter - public spirited soul that u are - and...
  July 17th, 2017 08:47
• Coffee First! (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch60 this sort of work i love. Pure poetry and honesty of the...
  July 17th, 2017 08:34
• Don\'t Judge. (Jaylenrene) Jaylenrene too much! To my eyes you\'ve put about five different poems in...
  July 17th, 2017 08:30
• *Warning: Explicit Content* (Hannabal) I was eating a burger as i began to read this. Your words inspired me - I...
  July 17th, 2017 08:20
• The Hurting (Kbreinich) This a really lovely healing message, excellent presentation and...
  July 17th, 2017 07:51
• Game of Life (Poetboy123) Now you\'ve altered it and its a whole different ballgame. The original...
  July 16th, 2017 19:18
• Game of Life (Poetboy123) Erm, correct me if i\'m wrong but those who HAVE lived are no longer in...
  July 16th, 2017 18:57
• Conquest (MissDefined) How much longer will this cycle continue you ask. For as long as you keep...
  July 16th, 2017 18:46
• God of Chaos (Alex Arnot) Hee hee hee, i think someone just said \'much ado about nothing\'.
  July 16th, 2017 18:40
• Worldly Muse (Adri) I\'ll tell you what inspires me. The utter and complete boredom of not...
  July 16th, 2017 18:38
• Black Coffee (Myself and me) Nice twist
  July 16th, 2017 18:23
• Mister Mr (Abpoet18) Nice one mister. Conundrum is if you hates to be learning you aint gonna...
  July 16th, 2017 17:02
• Oops (ElenaGrace) I think its great, love the humour!
  July 16th, 2017 16:48
• Later nor grater (Mello) In a city that is lost you will be taking the role as mayor eh?...
  July 16th, 2017 16:43
• The Closet (Domi) Nice work. Please have a glimpse of my poem \'Breaking the chain\'...
  July 16th, 2017 16:37
• Purity (Darkerme8651) Yep, totally agree with that. When the world has peed u off...go someplace...
  July 16th, 2017 16:33
• Paw prints in my life (Clairie840) Aww i feel for you. Animals which associate with give us so much don\'t...
  July 16th, 2017 16:17
• Body dysmorphic me (Renzi) Hey, ya wanna see funny shaped body? i\'ll send u a pic. (please wear...
  July 16th, 2017 16:09
• Again (Its Raskolnikov) Wow! Did u miss anything out?
  July 16th, 2017 16:02
• A short letter (Xxxplicit) BIG good on you mister. Do not stop writing your stuff.When that child is...
  July 16th, 2017 15:59
• Manipulator (Lost in Murphy) Transparent when they take u for a fool m8
  July 16th, 2017 09:53
• I am a Leftie - And proud of it! (FredPeyer) So you\'re biased to your left, right? It\'s no understatement when you...
  July 16th, 2017 03:10
• Reality? (ElenaGrace) I\'m with you there definitely. Reality is but an illusion.
  July 15th, 2017 16:55
• A war for nothing (Migithehp) War nowadays is a disgusting boom time for the arms (and legs - sick)...
  July 15th, 2017 14:54
• mourning light (Heather T) Wow. Image after image after image, but i\'m having trouble joining them...
  July 15th, 2017 14:46
• The Butcher [Graphic: Viewer Discretion Advised] (P.X. Vexxus) Great write. Vivid and horrific. Sadly i missed his laughter from the 2nd...
  July 15th, 2017 14:08
• Growing Pains (2017) (WhiteGirl1503) Yep, center stage is where every one of us lead our lives from even when...
  July 15th, 2017 13:58
• Sleazy lover (Malubotelho) 100% sleaze i couldn\'t go for. But sleaze within a knowing tender loving...
  July 15th, 2017 10:04
• SHOOTING STAR (Louis Gibbs) This life is a cruel, unfair and testing thing. Your piece is a beautiful...
  July 15th, 2017 09:59
• Slap my wrist (Renzi) \'Didn\'t we have a lov-er-ly time the day we went to Bangor\' WA-hey,...
  July 15th, 2017 09:46
• Who brings ice Cream to a fucking poker game ? (Joaquin Finn) Cool! Like a candid snapshot/photo you present a great example of the odd...
  July 15th, 2017 09:19
• HIM. (Ali.louise) Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. A celebration of enduring love. A stolen...
  July 15th, 2017 08:56
• Alone (FredPeyer) Fred i know this chap you speak of, we grew up together and he spoke to me...
  July 15th, 2017 08:23
• The 7 (Niallprideaux) You can get an oinkment to rub on this sort of affliction you know. Good...
  July 15th, 2017 08:16
• Parallel Universes. (Goldfinch60) This sure chimed in my world Goldfinch60. Within the teachings of Buddha...
  July 15th, 2017 08:12
• Words. (SimoneAllen) Ouch! baby. This is a brilliant write. You gave me your pain in this i...
  July 15th, 2017 07:53
• a single shooting star (Taylorkenna27) Excellent rant! Very readable and not at all boring (a fault with so many...
  July 15th, 2017 07:48
• I\'m Sorry (Kbreinich) Wow, in expressing yourself this way you really show what a beautiful...
  July 15th, 2017 07:43