Comments on community poems by burning-embers
- My love story (Justagirl)
All of these things are manifestly true. Dont mock the man who is not yet...
July 26th, 2017 06:49 - Weeping Willow (Unique)
Even the weeping willow bears a fruit. From that fruit grows a beautiful...
July 25th, 2017 17:57 - Love (Oliviagc)
At wherever u are in your life right now thats how u see it. Fair enough....
July 25th, 2017 10:30 - You (Private poet)
That\'s a beautiful poem PP. I hope you were rewarded with years of...
July 25th, 2017 07:27 - Just around the Corner (FredPeyer)
What are those words in the ceremony \'in the midst of life we are in...
July 25th, 2017 05:51 - Marriage to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Its such a simple thing you appear to have written but the way you have...
July 25th, 2017 05:48 - I just wanted to fly (Malubotelho)
I read in your response to FredPeyer about the circumstance of this pieces...
July 25th, 2017 04:15 - The Hard Times (Austin Harness)
I like this very much indeed. It\'s one of those writes which contain so...
July 25th, 2017 04:09 - Disposable (Stephanie Showers)
Welcome to the economy, LOL . Cruel isn\'t it. But the trade off is some...
July 24th, 2017 12:26 - Societies Standards (Dxmenxque)
What a nugget of truth you expose here! You\'re right. There are several...
July 24th, 2017 11:20 - Waiting For Dawn (Kurt Philip Behm)
Sombre strong truth imparted with skill and economy. Somehow simple but...
July 24th, 2017 10:36 - Great weather (Renzi)
Jeez what a life! Few days ago it was street parties and booze, then it...
July 24th, 2017 10:25 - ALEXIS (Louis Gibbs)
This is beautifully written. Your feelings pour out of it.
July 24th, 2017 09:09 - Fears (Mbird72)
Lovely read. I felt this.
July 24th, 2017 08:41 - Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get) (FredPeyer)
I shy away from such droppings - hey, i even dodge the pigeons efforts.
July 24th, 2017 03:15 - Reading Man. (Goldfinch60)
Sadly, the world is not always ready for our work.
July 24th, 2017 02:42 - Him (Kbreinich)
Great piece of work. Compact succinct. I wish more could be so economic.
July 24th, 2017 00:00 - Broke my promise (Renzi)
All the best nutters break a promise now and again, it\'s in the rule
July 23rd, 2017 23:56 - DANCING IN THE DARK (Poetic Judy Emery)
Judy, such a beautifully crafted introductory piece from you. A really...
July 23rd, 2017 19:54 - Accept the flaws of My Family (Saima)
Fairy tale world. Try telling people who are abused by their birth parents...
July 23rd, 2017 19:50 - Wings (Stumped)
Erm, that sure is some commitment u are asking there.
July 23rd, 2017 19:48 - Glass House (FredPeyer)
Nice twist. But when the spies open these comments will we be hauled...
July 23rd, 2017 14:45 - My Motions (Tia Davis/テイア)
Did anyone tell u that \'motions\' are what comes out of your anus....
July 23rd, 2017 14:08 - destroyed (Ummbree)
Superb expression, Very powerful. Courageous too.
July 23rd, 2017 13:15 - Unfair (Malubotelho)
aah the trade off, which is the more important? which is the more...
July 22nd, 2017 13:36 - Wisdom (FredPeyer)
Oh to have never made the same mistake twice. Nice one
July 22nd, 2017 13:32 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie) (Goldfinch60)
(sings) Bring me sunshine .... You certainly brought some to me on this...
July 22nd, 2017 13:31 - Affliction (Renzi)
A living poet bares their pain
frustration in words read again
exposing...
July 22nd, 2017 12:53 - Black Hearts 🖤 (Drusch33)
Stunning. This is a page of recent me which probably haunts my tomorrows....
July 19th, 2017 16:27 - Love Is (Migithehp)
Love in its purest is unconditional. Love will teach you what love is. It...
July 19th, 2017 15:14 - Beautiful (Q)
And your words are beautiful for Amy too.
July 19th, 2017 15:07 - My younger years (Christina8)
Nice one christina. i guess mine would be my thirties, your prime years...
July 19th, 2017 13:15 - Thoughts (M.m)
This is gorgeous. You totally encapsulate the feeling and i know it only...
July 19th, 2017 13:11 - Love entropy (Malubotelho)
Malubotelho A sad but recurring event in our lifes. Rejoice!!! for the...
July 19th, 2017 13:00 - Wednesday\'s child (Renzi)
Great positivity. I too chucked away negative rubbish apart from....oh ...
July 19th, 2017 07:14 - Vanishing Fears. (Goldfinch60)
Good points raised about questions above me here. For me i am blessed with...
July 19th, 2017 03:03 - Dying Love (FredPeyer)
Brought a tear to my eye fred because i interpreted this as my love for...
July 19th, 2017 02:59 - Happiness (Q)
Good words indeed. Many on here are living this way. Hopefully expression...
July 18th, 2017 06:25 - Hi I am a slut (NikitaPassmore)
You\'re a poet hun. That\'s why you\'re here and that\'s how you\'ll be...
July 18th, 2017 05:32 - That time of the week (Renzi)
Just a little scratch they say as they stab you - missing the vein....
July 18th, 2017 05:23 - Life\'s Aims. (Goldfinch60)
Singing oh yes, such joy. I used to keep my voice in condition forever...
July 18th, 2017 05:11 - Children of War (FredPeyer)
My thoughts went to WW1 Fred and the Christmas football match between the...
July 18th, 2017 05:00 - I Hate Mirrors (Ren)
Excellent writing. I know all too well your expression and the stranger in...
July 18th, 2017 04:49 - I Wish I Didn\'t Care (M. Mohon)
Great outpouring of anger. Aimed at self or a friend there is validity. Im...
July 18th, 2017 04:39 - The power of love (David)
Yep, just as DS/KS says above very similar to corinthians. Should u wish...
July 18th, 2017 04:31 - The Healing (Kbreinich)
Great. Really well written and powerful. Verses two and four work as...
July 18th, 2017 04:24 - Black Angel (Lostinthisworld)
Maybe you were created the perfect victim. The famous dance of life. It...
July 17th, 2017 22:52 - Meaning. (Stumped)
Never mind the bullshit just make sure you eat good quality...
July 17th, 2017 22:15 - Not The Same Anymore (Bunny1996)
Well, it\'s like this - i was at the supermart last week and they had a...
July 17th, 2017 22:05 - Wanted (Nori_B)
Sounds good to me!
July 17th, 2017 21:58 - Too late (Justagirl)
Sooner or later you\'re going to find the guy in your arms is a bit better...
July 17th, 2017 21:56 - Love (Elphaba993)
You\'re right but it\'s what you are pre - programmed to do. You can stop...
July 17th, 2017 21:52 - My Black is beautiful (Simply Jimyra)
Hun you are beautiful and it shines out of your words. My but you are some...
July 17th, 2017 14:41 - Wont come out (Lost in Murphy)
Yes mate. Theres times when we all need emotional austerity. Its self help...
July 17th, 2017 14:19 - 🎀Tear Stains🎀 (Savvi)
Well done for getting out of that awful relationship and WOW well done for...
July 17th, 2017 14:05 - \'Mr Snail 🐌- what\'s the point?\' (Sue.evans)
Wicked! Absolutely love this. As you\'ll see from my stuff i love entering...
July 17th, 2017 13:58 - Shy (SorrowfullyHappy)
Pretty deep really.. If u don\'t say hello, then no chance of doing the...
July 17th, 2017 13:54 - TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs)
Reading both your poem and your notes this is so beautiful. Thank you, you...
July 17th, 2017 12:07 - WHAT I SAW (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...)
What a magical poet you are. This really is a work of art. I wish i could...
July 17th, 2017 11:59 - Connectors (Avigail)
Great work. I think i was badly wired from new but along the way a few...
July 17th, 2017 11:53 - A Story in Silence (Rpgiii)
Truly almost too gobsmacked to comment, had to sit back a minute. Very...
July 17th, 2017 11:25 - I Am Desire. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, what have you been doing? I recognise in your words that youve been...
July 17th, 2017 11:04 - For The Reader (M. Mohon)
Love it, but i would suggest one improvement to ease your workflow. Use a...
July 17th, 2017 10:59 - Who I am (Daisychain)
Beautifully written message of your journey through hell. I suspect you...
July 17th, 2017 10:43 - Copacabana (Malubotelho)
Soooooo HOT malubotelho i evaporated ! Three large glasses of water and...
July 17th, 2017 10:23 - Monday Monday so good to me (Renzi)
Aaaaah that song, sung by a wonderful voice from a lovely fat lady. The...
July 17th, 2017 09:23 - Goodbye (FredPeyer)
For me you were picking up litter - public spirited soul that u are - and...
July 17th, 2017 08:47 - Coffee First! (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch60 this sort of work i love. Pure poetry and honesty of the...
July 17th, 2017 08:34 - Don\'t Judge. (Jaylenrene)
Jaylenrene too much! To my eyes you\'ve put about five different poems in...
July 17th, 2017 08:30 - *Warning: Explicit Content* (Hannabal)
I was eating a burger as i began to read this. Your words inspired me - I...
July 17th, 2017 08:20 - The Hurting (Kbreinich)
This a really lovely healing message, excellent presentation and...
July 17th, 2017 07:51 - Game of Life (Poetboy123)
Now you\'ve altered it and its a whole different ballgame. The original...
July 16th, 2017 19:18 - Game of Life (Poetboy123)
Erm, correct me if i\'m wrong but those who HAVE lived are no longer in...
July 16th, 2017 18:57 - Conquest (MissDefined)
How much longer will this cycle continue you ask. For as long as you keep...
July 16th, 2017 18:46 - God of Chaos (Alex Arnot)
Hee hee hee, i think someone just said \'much ado about nothing\'.
July 16th, 2017 18:40 - Worldly Muse (Adri)
I\'ll tell you what inspires me. The utter and complete boredom of not...
July 16th, 2017 18:38 - Black Coffee (Myself and me)
Nice twist
July 16th, 2017 18:23 - Mister Mr (Abpoet18)
Nice one mister. Conundrum is if you hates to be learning you aint gonna...
July 16th, 2017 17:02 - Oops (ElenaGrace)
I think its great, love the humour!
July 16th, 2017 16:48 - my first awakening (Efthimios William Cornelius)
If u want to put it to music i have a banjo you could borrow. Interesting...
July 16th, 2017 16:47 - Later nor grater (Mello)
In a city that is lost you will be taking the role as mayor eh?...
July 16th, 2017 16:43 - The Closet (Domi)
Nice work. Please have a glimpse of my poem \'Breaking the chain\'...
July 16th, 2017 16:37 - Purity (Darkerme8651)
Yep, totally agree with that. When the world has peed u off...go someplace...
July 16th, 2017 16:33 - Paw prints in my life (Clairie840)
Aww i feel for you. Animals which associate with give us so much don\'t...
July 16th, 2017 16:17 - Body dysmorphic me (Renzi)
Hey, ya wanna see funny shaped body? i\'ll send u a pic. (please wear...
July 16th, 2017 16:09 - Again (Its Raskolnikov)
Wow! Did u miss anything out?
July 16th, 2017 16:02 - A short letter (Xxxplicit)
BIG good on you mister. Do not stop writing your stuff.When that child is...
July 16th, 2017 15:59 - Manipulator (Lost in Murphy)
Transparent when they take u for a fool m8
July 16th, 2017 09:53 - I am a Leftie - And proud of it! (FredPeyer)
So you\'re biased to your left, right? It\'s no understatement when you...
July 16th, 2017 03:10 - Reality? (ElenaGrace)
I\'m with you there definitely. Reality is but an illusion.
July 15th, 2017 16:55 - A war for nothing (Migithehp)
War nowadays is a disgusting boom time for the arms (and legs - sick)...
July 15th, 2017 14:54 - mourning light (Heather T)
Wow. Image after image after image, but i\'m having trouble joining them...
July 15th, 2017 14:46 - The Butcher [Graphic: Viewer Discretion Advised] (P.X. Vexxus)
Great write. Vivid and horrific. Sadly i missed his laughter from the 2nd...
July 15th, 2017 14:08 - Growing Pains (2017) (WhiteGirl1503)
Yep, center stage is where every one of us lead our lives from even when...
July 15th, 2017 13:58 - Sleazy lover (Malubotelho)
100% sleaze i couldn\'t go for. But sleaze within a knowing tender loving...
July 15th, 2017 10:04 - SHOOTING STAR (Louis Gibbs)
This life is a cruel, unfair and testing thing. Your piece is a beautiful...
July 15th, 2017 09:59 - Slap my wrist (Renzi)
\'Didn\'t we have a lov-er-ly time the day we went to Bangor\'
WA-hey,...
July 15th, 2017 09:46 - Who brings ice Cream to a fucking poker game ? (Joaquin Finn)
Cool! Like a candid snapshot/photo you present a great example of the odd...
July 15th, 2017 09:19 - HIM. (Ali.louise)
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. A celebration of enduring love. A stolen...
July 15th, 2017 08:56 - Alone (FredPeyer)
Fred i know this chap you speak of, we grew up together and he spoke to me...
July 15th, 2017 08:23
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