Comments on community poems by burning-embers

• How is your energy today? (Avigail) Theres energy and energy isn\'t there. Physically im yuk today. But...
  July 9th, 2017 11:00
• Memories Tender (Augustus) A beautiful piece. A wonderful dedication.
  July 9th, 2017 08:48
• Dignity (Jabberwocky) Succinct. This life and living it is what we\'re here to do. Well written...
  July 9th, 2017 08:30
• A most Unconventional Wedding..... (P.H.Rose) After reading a powerful poem, like yours, i have to sit and think. Where...
  July 9th, 2017 08:24
• Heart Space (FredPeyer) Today they measure space in gigabytes and stuff.I think i\'ve got many...
  July 9th, 2017 08:16
• Is it bad (SorrowfullyHappy) Lovely expression of love and vunerabilty. An air of helplessness and...
  July 9th, 2017 07:49
• Truth seeker (Lost Girl) Great expression of passion here. I know how u feel, once i have...
  July 9th, 2017 07:43
• Nature\'s Wondrous World. (Goldfinch60) I miss my country garden since moving into the city. The call of the ...
  July 9th, 2017 07:39
• Why? (JYNX) Hey i remember this wonderful feeling its called being \'Zonked\' and in...
  July 9th, 2017 07:34
• midnight cigarette (Velvetlascivious) Blissful beautiful picture painted by one who\'s poetic brushes tease awe...
  July 9th, 2017 07:24
• Decisions (Brandyngraham) Ah so true. How many of us have made this mistake. Mistakes bring forth a...
  July 9th, 2017 07:19
• Alone through Time (Gino) I lingered here for some time. This is very deep. Is he writing the story...
  July 9th, 2017 07:09
• Life change (Malubotelho) I love the line \'to face the world as a lioness\' so true mum. You...
  July 9th, 2017 06:57
• Lost souls (Renzi) People slip thru our systems for many reasons often because they are in no...
  July 9th, 2017 06:51
• PainKillers (Joaquin Finn) Nice twist. Entertaining.
  July 8th, 2017 10:53
• Untitled (SarahLouise) Refreshing to see a bright and positive piece. Nice sunny feel about it.
  July 8th, 2017 09:46
• Blackbird (Edthepoet) Yes it is amazing that we dream such beauty whilst living on the...
  July 8th, 2017 09:09
• Sick (Pudders1994) Ahhhh freedom - what is that? I\'m kidding you, you hold the key to...
  July 8th, 2017 05:16
• Mind (FredPeyer) I like your style here. Drawn me into your thoughts there and bigger...
  July 8th, 2017 04:28
• To That Boy (Pmanz734) Clear as a bell! Why aren\'t you a rough tough football player? Is there...
  July 8th, 2017 01:58
• Ballad Of a P.O.S (Xxxplicit) So high on yourself that your lost - what a wicked line. I love this,...
  July 8th, 2017 01:53
• You😒 (Katy Alvarez) Oh yes you will be happy. And keep us posted with your changing states of...
  July 7th, 2017 23:09
• Control (AshleyT) So now you are free to express yourself in your poetry. More please! I was...
  July 7th, 2017 23:07
• Unspoken (SheWasTheSun) WOW To think Maya Angelou said all that to you in just one line!
  July 7th, 2017 20:43
• Is love selfish? (Malubotelho) \"The secret that you carry in your heart\" hmmm - I\'d shout YOU from the...
  July 7th, 2017 20:39
• childhood prison (Rosebel) Moved me to tears.
  July 7th, 2017 14:50
• Speed (Ezra.mendoza) I like that very much. Very, very clever. A message for which you have to...
  July 7th, 2017 14:36
• Other Women (Judy Booler) You are very real too. Real love, the shared romantic stuff cannot be...
  July 7th, 2017 13:41
• Audience Of One (Kurt Philip Behm) Hey, you leave my audience out of this!
  July 7th, 2017 12:59
• I Gave You The Voodoo (Edthepoet) Driven to punish and decry, but the pain of the punisher shows through.
  July 7th, 2017 11:43
• Poetry and Music (Meno1972) I\'m in there amongst your words and these words surround me.
  July 7th, 2017 08:55
• Clairvoyancy. (Goldfinch60) I like that, makes you think. More fakes per half acre than anywhere else...
  July 7th, 2017 06:53
• Defiance (FredPeyer) Your words have opened my eyes to how lucky i am in the choices i have. I...
  July 7th, 2017 06:23
• Your Nature (David Grubb) David i like this. Pure simple enjoyment of being alive and a love of life...
  July 6th, 2017 17:33
• Gods are Human, too (Andetl04) I think it does turn for you you know. And i think you\'re seeing its...
  July 6th, 2017 13:56
• all of this and more (Meno1972) I know the feeling of coming off stage after 3 encores .... to...
  July 6th, 2017 13:52
• For Our Grandchildren (Sue.evans) Amazing lil things ain\'t they. And the world is theirs to learn and...
  July 6th, 2017 13:45
• I forgive you (Lost-but-not-broken17) Inside you are a very big hearted person. Forgiving is blessed, unselfish...
  July 6th, 2017 13:40
• More than perfect (ShannonXx) Just read your notes about this and realised i got things a bit wrong....
  July 6th, 2017 11:38
• More than perfect (ShannonXx)
  July 6th, 2017 11:36
• More than perfect (ShannonXx) Wonderful expression of mothers love for a special being. I have a...
  July 6th, 2017 11:36
• Secret Love (Tony36) Sad isn\'t it this chap seems to be in a lot of poems i read on here. You...
  July 6th, 2017 10:56
• You Won\'t Know (Kmerc1) You know what - i loved it. I didn\'t think i was gong to, jeez its a bit...
  July 6th, 2017 08:06
• My poetic side (Renzi) Youve a poetic bent let us not quibble but yer...
  July 6th, 2017 07:54
• A Whole Lot of Work (FredPeyer) Evocative. You should see the tumbledown mess i love in. I know exactly...
  July 6th, 2017 01:25
• What I Saw vs. What It Is (Little lay lay) I am a white man born in 1952 in UK and brought up in a racist environment...
  July 5th, 2017 23:25
• Not a lonely bird (Malubotelho) Oh this is gorgeous! You seduce me with your first four lines. So much so...
  July 5th, 2017 20:56
• When I\'m low (Just a girl.) Passion, deceit, anticipation, guilt, exhilaration, all there crafted into...
  July 5th, 2017 20:43
• Found Love Again (Lanejamesc) Reads like you were thinking out loud and came to a right conclusion. When...
  July 5th, 2017 19:09
• The curency of dreams (Roudan) Two magnificent pieces of work come to mind 1) Cliff Richard singing ...
  July 5th, 2017 17:59
• Did you ever really care? (Lost-but-not-broken17) One day i had a phone call from my brother, my big brother. We had grown...
  July 5th, 2017 15:37
• Girls\' night out - AKA mob rule!! (Sue.evans) I loved the way i felt u getting drunk in this. You had me with you and...
  July 5th, 2017 15:25
• NO WAY (Laurell) Great write. Reads like you are cleansing yourself of this betrayer....
  July 5th, 2017 15:19
• The Truth (Kendra_dawnn) Kendra, anyone tries to give you rules about writing poetry, then i...
  July 5th, 2017 14:00
• Suicide Thoughts (Lostgirl24) I like this, it really benefits from your choice of layout too. Have you...
  July 5th, 2017 10:57
• Guide You Home (Abpoet18) You\'re right, there HAS TO BE more to us. Sadly, though you and i would...
  July 5th, 2017 09:47
• THE AGONY AND THE ECSTACY (Louis Gibbs) True these two extremes bring forth tears. The price of being human u ask....
  July 5th, 2017 09:11
• Decay (P.X. Vexxus) Such great sadness. The pen is mightier than the sword is a noble line....
  July 5th, 2017 06:49
• The Sorrows of Summer (AcaciaRose) I don\'t know how long ago your 8th grade was but if you were to write...
  July 5th, 2017 06:45
• We (Krystal Brewington) You\'ve written about us lot in there my friend. Yes, us your...
  July 5th, 2017 06:39
• Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60) That superman is a sod - still wearing Y fronts.
  July 5th, 2017 06:22
• Others Think (Brandyngraham) Walk your own path, value your own judgement. Seems like you have found...
  July 5th, 2017 06:11
• Comparision (DD.) A life of contrasts is a life so rich. Lovely poetry
  July 5th, 2017 06:07
• Oranges (Adrianna Kjeld) Oh i love \'em but not allowed them. Put myself on ketogenic diet. I miss...
  July 5th, 2017 05:57
• Take Me Home (Jamminblu) Wonderful and very moving. I wonder shall we all meet up at the end of our...
  July 5th, 2017 05:25
• My proMising MoMent (Indypindy20) Oh my you really touched a spot with this. This could oh so easily be a...
  July 5th, 2017 04:48
• Night Rhythms (Garry) This does everything for the subject. Why do i keep dozing off?
  July 5th, 2017 04:42
• Father (Judy Booler) I feel for you and your cry. This world is in as \'as is\' state a will be...
  July 5th, 2017 04:37
• The Conch Shell (TiffanyR) Very calming words. Wonderfully balanced. If you wanted to relax your...
  July 5th, 2017 04:29
• Front tooth (Renzi) Incisive incisor humour, love your stuff.. was that pic taken upside down?...
  July 5th, 2017 04:12
• You\\\\\\\'re such a whore (Lost in Murphy) We strive to be intellectually strong and creatures of delicate feelings...
  July 5th, 2017 02:29
• Before I... (Lost-but-not-broken17) You are wise beyond your years by anyones measure. This is a lovely piece....
  July 5th, 2017 02:21
• Awakened (chapter One) (McKinsey Rose Lynn) Very nicely written and gripping! i wanted to keep on reading. Your last...
  July 5th, 2017 02:11
• Dead Sara (Edthepoet) This actually made me feel old because it brought back so clearly people i...
  July 5th, 2017 01:47
• THE WIND BLOWS (Michael Edwards) \'Gad sir, did u fart?\' \'Of course i did - you don\'t think i...
  July 4th, 2017 07:28
• What is Lettuce ? (Joaquin Finn) Now that\'s clever, i like that.
  July 4th, 2017 02:34
• What is Death? (Goldfinch60) Nice one. My local lending library shows me so much evidence for life...
  July 4th, 2017 02:31
• Fat (Renzi) OK so i\'m full of sympathy for your burden (ha-wot use sympathy to you ya...
  July 4th, 2017 00:05
• Today is the day (Renzi) So i\'m looking at the stuff you put on here before i arrived.Another...
  July 3rd, 2017 23:59
• My Mother (Renzi) Love it. just discovered another one of your wonders this ones going on...
  July 3rd, 2017 23:55
• What is life? (Lost-but-not-broken17) When you walk through a storm Hold your head up high And dont be afraid...
  July 3rd, 2017 22:54
• Scars (Malubotelho) I find this tremendously inspiring. I\'ve been sat here i don\'t know how...
  July 3rd, 2017 16:07
• Untitled (Katherinem7) What an amazing verse! I am in awe of your talent! You ARE like stardust...
  July 3rd, 2017 14:36
• I will not change a word (Tony36) The words of Billy Joel come to mind. \'Don\'t go changing to try and...
  July 3rd, 2017 12:36
• Sham Alama Ding Dong (Edthepoet) Do wop ya do do well boy! Do wop ya dun did gud.
  July 3rd, 2017 12:28
• THIS TIME AROUND (Louis Gibbs) This shows you have wisdom. Whats been in your past enables you to avoid...
  July 3rd, 2017 10:58
• They would say (ShannonXx) Wow thats powerful.
  July 3rd, 2017 09:25
• Pen warriors needed! (Poetic Dan) Sadly the warriors of the world are attracted to things more exciting to...
  July 3rd, 2017 07:36
• POETS OF THE WORLD - UNITE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) If only the world were listening to us.
  July 3rd, 2017 06:39
• Beyond Existence. (Goldfinch60) They sure nuff aint crushing your life and memories. But dont get sucked...
  July 3rd, 2017 06:25
• Mother\'s Days (Seek) So easy to not see what mum is because shes always there whipping us into...
  July 3rd, 2017 06:21
• 23 (ForeverAW) Addicts are in love with their addiction. That love can turn to hating...
  July 3rd, 2017 06:10
• MY LITTLE DOGFISH (Michael Edwards) There was a man bought a fish. Took it home splish, splash, splish. It...
  July 3rd, 2017 05:59
• You Screwed Up (Bunny1996) If someone did that to me then they would only be worth a final short...
  July 3rd, 2017 05:55
• L is for Trap (Sonnet) (Cypress) Learning luscious loves lost lament leaves loneliness languishing,...
  July 3rd, 2017 05:49
• Angel (Xxxplicit) Moved me to tears as i know it will others here. Wonderfully written...
  July 3rd, 2017 05:35
• a father\'s love. (Ruth Fadairo) Really touched me with this Ruth. Love conquers all doesn\'t it.
  July 3rd, 2017 05:18
• Equality (Saphira) Sadly there will always be injustice and inequality. I\'m a brit but i do...
  July 3rd, 2017 05:14
• Adrift (Lost in Murphy) Dont throw away anything now. Keep those unfinished sketches of emotion...
  July 3rd, 2017 05:02
• Perfection (Lost-but-not-broken17) Old git tho i may be, i do recall some of my time spent being your...
  July 3rd, 2017 04:17