Comments on community poems by burning-embers
- The 7 (Niallprideaux)
You can get an oinkment to rub on this sort of affliction you know. Good...
July 15th, 2017 08:16 - Parallel Universes. (Goldfinch60)
This sure chimed in my world Goldfinch60. Within the teachings of Buddha...
July 15th, 2017 08:12 - Words. (SimoneAllen)
Ouch! baby. This is a brilliant write. You gave me your pain in this i...
July 15th, 2017 07:53 - a single shooting star (Taylorkenna27)
Excellent rant! Very readable and not at all boring (a fault with so many...
July 15th, 2017 07:48 - I\'m Sorry (Kbreinich)
Wow, in expressing yourself this way you really show what a beautiful...
July 15th, 2017 07:43 - One Hundred Miles In Fifteen Feet (M. Mohon)
I really like this very much. I like your repeated line and the novelty of...
July 15th, 2017 07:34 - When I Die(Was This What You Wanted?) (Poetic Misfit)
Lots of pain pours from your words here. I hope the writing of this was...
July 15th, 2017 07:19 - Wishes: Denied (ElenaGrace)
Cute! My grandmother used to say \"if wishes were horses, then beggars...
July 15th, 2017 06:22 - Illusion (Baylee)
Another of your power pieces. My minds eye sees this mans photo pinned...
July 15th, 2017 06:18 - Toxins (Lost Girl)
You pose such a question. Who knows. What confounds me is - with all the...
July 15th, 2017 06:15 - Boundaries (Adri)
Yes forgiving is closure too. After that worries and/or guilt will fade....
July 14th, 2017 20:12 - We Are All Blind, For We Are Human (Poetboy123)
A fine expression of western civilizations disgust of war. Oh that it were...
July 14th, 2017 15:23 - Without You (Myself and me)
yes, that feeling of great loss take the zest out of everything and...
July 14th, 2017 15:12 - Hello, Hey (Brie)
Great expression of the uncertainty of youth (?). Hope theres more
July 14th, 2017 15:06 - One Beat (Tony36)
You are so right. It just goes on. and it goes on. good one
July 14th, 2017 14:55 - Epiphany (Malubotelho)
Perfect! +favs
July 14th, 2017 09:04 - Porch (Jabberwocky)
Really well written sir! Love the wisdom in the savoir-faire. Shrug ya...
July 14th, 2017 06:49 - Speaking in tongue (Poetic Dan)
Dan my mate. You\'ve given me a headache. I\'ve read this five times.
But...
July 14th, 2017 06:31 - Holiday Season (Renzi)
We knew there was something awry
Up went the hue and cry
We\'ve been in...
July 14th, 2017 06:20 - A Suicide (Mbird72)
Something you do most definately have mbird72 is that rare ability to put...
July 14th, 2017 04:12 - Low Hanging Fruit (FredPeyer)
I like the way you\'re telling me not to go for a low hanging pear here...
July 14th, 2017 03:46 - Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay i love the pictures and colours you give me here. I was looking out of...
July 14th, 2017 03:41 - Local Area Business Man (Rpgiii)
Thrilling writing. Captivating.
July 14th, 2017 03:38 - A sentinel (Aa Harvey)
Good stuff. My mind immediately transferred this to a domestic war - the...
July 14th, 2017 03:31 - Task Achieved. (Goldfinch60)
OMG you\'re a born again domestic. I live alone and haven\'t ironed a...
July 14th, 2017 03:09 - My Will, My Life (Xxxplicit)
I like this a lot. To say strong isn\'t enough in this genre. Isn\'t...
July 14th, 2017 03:02 - A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
These are really good. Thought provoking. Did you reveal them \'as is\'...
July 14th, 2017 02:52 - Letting Go (Kbreinich)
Excellent words. It took me more than half my lifespan to be able to do...
July 14th, 2017 02:17 - undress my mind (Bella cortez)
Less is more! And what more could you say? Absolutely beautifully thought...
July 14th, 2017 02:01 - AM I STRONG? (Lost Girl)
Your words have strength and your rationale is fine. I believe that the...
July 13th, 2017 21:25 - hatter mad (Heather T)
OK when is the screen play coming out? Its gonna be some event but i wanna...
July 13th, 2017 18:26 - burn (Eldubbb)
I feel that horrible limbo state in your words where you are freshly out...
July 13th, 2017 18:17 - It\'s So Quiet Now (M. Mohon)
Yes this is a well penned piece. I interpreted this as the gal u loved...
July 13th, 2017 18:12 - Have you ever ... (Nyoko_beautiful moon)
Oh yes i have and more. Your words are the words of a lover. And your...
July 13th, 2017 18:04 - Into The Furnace (Edthepoet)
Wow Ed that is wonderful. Truly wonderful writing and really hit me hard....
July 13th, 2017 17:57 - His Canvas (Baylee)
You are a real poet. Thats a very fine piece. May i suggest you remove the...
July 13th, 2017 17:26 - Recipe for the End (Rpgiii)
A very powerful write. Provocative. What is wrong with our society today.
July 13th, 2017 11:11 - Unsaved time (Mello)
I love it, full of contradictions. Like a jigsaw puzzle in a plain box.
July 13th, 2017 10:48 - Waffling A While (Orchidee)
Love it (hic) the communion wine goes down much better with an interesting...
July 13th, 2017 10:43 - My boys birthday write (Poetic Dan)
Great emotional outpouring.. Tell him that people (you) only get older on...
July 13th, 2017 10:23 - It\'s not if... It\'s when... (Avigail)
You sure hit it on the head there. I guess my moment of epiphany came very...
July 13th, 2017 06:58 - THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wholeheartedly agree but let us Brits not be \'holyer than thou\' about...
July 13th, 2017 06:52 - Streetlights (Jinx)
Another power piece! Is this about pride? These short works really get me...
July 13th, 2017 03:34 - what? why? (Kpomeroy4119)
It\'s wonderful dramatic writing you know and well put together. I\'m...
July 13th, 2017 02:46 - Why Her, Why? (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch60 big sympathy m8 with this horrible affliction eating at the...
July 13th, 2017 01:49 - Don\'t Look At Me (Tia Davis/テイア)
I like this a lot but you\'ve confused me. Lines 3, 4 and 5 imply you dont...
July 13th, 2017 01:42 - Just A Job (Short Story) (FredPeyer)
You devious devil, nice one, nice twist. Easy relaxing read. just read...
July 13th, 2017 01:21 - The Time Gone By (Julzradams98)
Julz wow! I love this story and so easy to read, such a pleasure. More...
July 13th, 2017 01:12 - Bleeding Acceptance of Desiderata Disintegration (Whisperingquill)
I love it, a smack in the face for your reader. Strong, powerful, potent...
July 13th, 2017 01:00 - Escape (Bagel)
I feel your angst. I\'m going to ask you to think about something, an old...
July 13th, 2017 00:34 - THROUGH THE NIGHT (3) (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful. Love and peace. All the better for the final verse. Ten times...
July 13th, 2017 00:25 - Together (MissileOfUncertainty)
You are right and i have said it many times. A short poem is a punchy...
July 12th, 2017 22:59 - Relax (Adam)
Short and sweet = impact! Great choice of words. Canopies, grass and...
July 12th, 2017 22:51 - Love\\\\\\\'s Hunger Needs (HEIDIKINS)
OOOh you romantic you. This is as good as any passionate declaration of...
July 12th, 2017 22:42 - Wife (Bagel)
As a teenager i used to hate that people said girls are way more grown up...
July 12th, 2017 22:38 - Gone (Tay1234)
A very good first Tay. The best work i do is the work which comes thru my...
July 12th, 2017 22:12 - letter burning (Heather T)
Passion, anguish, pain and fear cry out from your writing. Beautifully...
July 12th, 2017 21:59 - I hate you (Angel-baby28)
I think you say it all and with such clarity and obvious motherly love....
July 12th, 2017 21:54 - My Addiction (BrittA)
Down to earth, has gritty realism and pathos. Definately well written....
July 12th, 2017 20:43 - Outgrown (Baylee)
Nice punchy stuff. Succinct verse usually is more powerful. You do it
July 12th, 2017 18:56 - The World We Live In (Kaden Hudson)
Don\'t expect anyone to change your world for you. It\'s your world, you...
July 12th, 2017 12:48 - Starry Night (Rita_ehn)
May all your troubles be insignificant pricks of light which disappear...
July 12th, 2017 12:14 - The Kiss (FredPeyer)
Kissing is quite quite glorious. But when u pull it apart its a bit weird...
July 12th, 2017 10:34 - As sweet as ever (Malubotelho)
He he he @ Kevin Browne calling you a little smoothie. You were a tigeress...
July 12th, 2017 08:47 - The Endless End (Jabberwocky)
Thats profound sir! Strong, well chosen phrasing.
July 12th, 2017 04:19 - FREAK (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...)
I love it, full of fire and fight. \" i may be tall i may be thick, but...
July 12th, 2017 04:10 - The Truth (EnderGirl)
Tell your troubles upon my screen
many heartaches are often seen
share...
July 12th, 2017 03:51 - MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh such wonderful
frivolity
his painting\'s captured you
to a...
July 12th, 2017 03:42 - Black and White (Katherine_Lemke)
I love provocative work like yours. Gets the grey matter tingling. Black...
July 12th, 2017 03:29 - Words on a Page. (Goldfinch60)
Very true. Here i find a place to tell my stories, created fiction or...
July 12th, 2017 02:26 - Set to Rise (GeraldineTaylor)
The prize is yours. I like it. Positive and uplifting. \"Take me to a...
July 12th, 2017 02:20 - See David Sit (Dent Moses)
Straight away i\'m thinking environment. To me this is a provocative cry...
July 12th, 2017 01:32 - Her. (Katy Alvarez)
A great write. Short and punchy. Hits him straight in the guts. Powerful.
July 12th, 2017 01:24 - No Longer and Not Yet (Kbreinich)
Inspirational work this. You just opened up a new sphere of thought in me....
July 12th, 2017 00:01 - My Heart\'s On My Sleeve... (JustCallMeCe)
Lots of pain in your work. Us old gits will tell you the pain subsides,...
July 11th, 2017 23:37 - Destined to fly (Lost-but-not-broken17)
i thought i was reading about drug addiction, then i read your author\'s...
July 11th, 2017 23:28 - Living for others (Youloveme)
It works two ways when i write \'you love me\' doesn\'t it. And your words...
July 11th, 2017 23:20 - Normal (Kaden Hudson)
Smiled at your line \'pray the gay away\'. Normal nowdays is being...
July 11th, 2017 19:11 - Shadow of yourself (Poetic Dan)
Well written and well done for writing it. Its a theraputic outlet for me...
July 11th, 2017 19:01 - They call me ego (Malubotelho)
\"Observing the opportunity to raid your thoughts\" how true and well...
July 11th, 2017 17:44 - No Answers (M. Mohon)
I\'ve known the feeling you express here and you convey it well. It\'s a...
July 11th, 2017 17:31 - The Day Ricky Left (Rpgiii)
Great gripping read. Very entertaining. More please.
July 11th, 2017 16:34 - Slut (Just a girl.)
In the manner you describe the use of the word it is i think a shortened...
July 11th, 2017 16:19 - Reflection Weary Judgement (Whisperingquill)
Prying masticates the cat. What a wonderful line. You have a really...
July 11th, 2017 16:09 - When is a man a man? (CrissDavies)
That line from Damaged Soul/Kindred Spirit\'s comment here resounds -...
July 11th, 2017 15:45 - Hope Never Rests (Kurt Philip Behm)
Excellent. What did our fore fathers think of our childhood interests and...
July 11th, 2017 15:28 - Paper Cuts (Bagel)
I love this. i dunno why but i just do. I think youve reached into my...
July 11th, 2017 15:03 - Just Fall (Jinx)
Ah temptation. But for these chains that bind me, i would surely go. Great...
July 11th, 2017 14:45 - Deluded (Jabberwocky)
Wot - no thorn in the paw? I just pray its got indigestion. A very thought...
July 11th, 2017 14:09 - Vulnerability (Lost Girl)
We\'re all vunerable u know. I\'m an old geezer and lifes taught me to...
July 11th, 2017 14:06 - Fuck this Live (FredPeyer)
These people are all individuals not one smelly heap. Each has their own...
July 11th, 2017 13:54 - Unconditionally (Moonflower15)
Lovely, beautiful expression of pure love. Rare that we see this subject...
July 11th, 2017 11:58 - THE ENDLESS QUEST (Louis Gibbs)
For a knight to die on the job???? You must be jousting my friend!
July 10th, 2017 12:50 - Hoping (FredPeyer)
Its a good thing to have hope in your life but a bad thing if hope becomes...
July 10th, 2017 10:47 - Monday morning, gone eleven (Renzi)
The layout looks like a silhouette of a devilish skull. Really well...
July 10th, 2017 09:53 - Dancing Like an Idiot. (Goldfinch60)
It works for me my friend.Music has been my life. I\'m half deaf from...
July 10th, 2017 09:42 - Love Is Built (ElenaGrace)
A gem of wisdom, so so true.
July 10th, 2017 01:03 - Imperfection (Adrianna Kjeld)
Someone else\'s recently penned phrase \'perfect imperfections\' comes...
July 9th, 2017 18:09 - Behind The Glass (Dylan)
The glass breaks wonderfully well from your side. Come on through - oh...
July 9th, 2017 17:14 - Drowning (S.louise)
Writing gives me such release. I hope it is so for you too. You will...
July 9th, 2017 17:06
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