Comments on community poems by burning-embers

• One Hundred Miles In Fifteen Feet (M. Mohon) I really like this very much. I like your repeated line and the novelty of...
  July 15th, 2017 07:34
• When I Die(Was This What You Wanted?) (Poetic Misfit) Lots of pain pours from your words here. I hope the writing of this was...
  July 15th, 2017 07:19
• Wishes: Denied (ElenaGrace) Cute! My grandmother used to say \"if wishes were horses, then beggars...
  July 15th, 2017 06:22
• Illusion (Baylee) Another of your power pieces. My minds eye sees this mans photo pinned...
  July 15th, 2017 06:18
• Toxins (Lost Girl) You pose such a question. Who knows. What confounds me is - with all the...
  July 15th, 2017 06:15
• Boundaries (Adri) Yes forgiving is closure too. After that worries and/or guilt will fade....
  July 14th, 2017 20:12
• We Are All Blind, For We Are Human (Poetboy123) A fine expression of western civilizations disgust of war. Oh that it were...
  July 14th, 2017 15:23
• Without You (Myself and me) yes, that feeling of great loss take the zest out of everything and...
  July 14th, 2017 15:12
• Hello, Hey (Brie) Great expression of the uncertainty of youth (?). Hope theres more
  July 14th, 2017 15:06
• One Beat (Tony36) You are so right. It just goes on. and it goes on. good one
  July 14th, 2017 14:55
• Epiphany (Malubotelho) Perfect! +favs
  July 14th, 2017 09:04
• Porch (Jabberwocky) Really well written sir! Love the wisdom in the savoir-faire. Shrug ya...
  July 14th, 2017 06:49
• Speaking in tongue (Poetic Dan) Dan my mate. You\'ve given me a headache. I\'ve read this five times. But...
  July 14th, 2017 06:31
• Holiday Season (Renzi) We knew there was something awry Up went the hue and cry We\'ve been in...
  July 14th, 2017 06:20
• A Suicide (Mbird72) Something you do most definately have mbird72 is that rare ability to put...
  July 14th, 2017 04:12
• Low Hanging Fruit (FredPeyer) I like the way you\'re telling me not to go for a low hanging pear here...
  July 14th, 2017 03:46
• Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.) Fay i love the pictures and colours you give me here. I was looking out of...
  July 14th, 2017 03:41
• Local Area Business Man (Rpgiii) Thrilling writing. Captivating.
  July 14th, 2017 03:38
• A sentinel (Aa Harvey) Good stuff. My mind immediately transferred this to a domestic war - the...
  July 14th, 2017 03:31
• Task Achieved. (Goldfinch60) OMG you\'re a born again domestic. I live alone and haven\'t ironed a...
  July 14th, 2017 03:09
• My Will, My Life (Xxxplicit) I like this a lot. To say strong isn\'t enough in this genre. Isn\'t...
  July 14th, 2017 03:02
• A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) These are really good. Thought provoking. Did you reveal them \'as is\'...
  July 14th, 2017 02:52
• Letting Go (Kbreinich) Excellent words. It took me more than half my lifespan to be able to do...
  July 14th, 2017 02:17
• undress my mind (Bella cortez) Less is more! And what more could you say? Absolutely beautifully thought...
  July 14th, 2017 02:01
• AM I STRONG? (Lost Girl) Your words have strength and your rationale is fine. I believe that the...
  July 13th, 2017 21:25
• hatter mad (Heather T) OK when is the screen play coming out? Its gonna be some event but i wanna...
  July 13th, 2017 18:26
• burn (Eldubbb) I feel that horrible limbo state in your words where you are freshly out...
  July 13th, 2017 18:17
• It\'s So Quiet Now (M. Mohon) Yes this is a well penned piece. I interpreted this as the gal u loved...
  July 13th, 2017 18:12
• Have you ever ... (Nyoko_beautiful moon) Oh yes i have and more. Your words are the words of a lover. And your...
  July 13th, 2017 18:04
• Into The Furnace (Edthepoet) Wow Ed that is wonderful. Truly wonderful writing and really hit me hard....
  July 13th, 2017 17:57
• His Canvas (Baylee) You are a real poet. Thats a very fine piece. May i suggest you remove the...
  July 13th, 2017 17:26
• Recipe for the End (Rpgiii) A very powerful write. Provocative. What is wrong with our society today.
  July 13th, 2017 11:11
• Unsaved time (Mello) I love it, full of contradictions. Like a jigsaw puzzle in a plain box.
  July 13th, 2017 10:48
• Waffling A While (Orchidee) Love it (hic) the communion wine goes down much better with an interesting...
  July 13th, 2017 10:43
• My boys birthday write (Poetic Dan) Great emotional outpouring.. Tell him that people (you) only get older on...
  July 13th, 2017 10:23
• It\'s not if... It\'s when... (Avigail) You sure hit it on the head there. I guess my moment of epiphany came very...
  July 13th, 2017 06:58
• THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature (BRIAN & ANGELA) Wholeheartedly agree but let us Brits not be \'holyer than thou\' about...
  July 13th, 2017 06:52
• Streetlights (Jinx) Another power piece! Is this about pride? These short works really get me...
  July 13th, 2017 03:34
• what? why? (Kpomeroy4119) It\'s wonderful dramatic writing you know and well put together. I\'m...
  July 13th, 2017 02:46
• Why Her, Why? (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch60 big sympathy m8 with this horrible affliction eating at the...
  July 13th, 2017 01:49
• Don\'t Look At Me (Tia Davis/テイア) I like this a lot but you\'ve confused me. Lines 3, 4 and 5 imply you dont...
  July 13th, 2017 01:42
• Just A Job (Short Story) (FredPeyer) You devious devil, nice one, nice twist. Easy relaxing read. just read...
  July 13th, 2017 01:21
• The Time Gone By (Julzradams98) Julz wow! I love this story and so easy to read, such a pleasure. More...
  July 13th, 2017 01:12
• Bleeding Acceptance of Desiderata Disintegration (Whisperingquill) I love it, a smack in the face for your reader. Strong, powerful, potent...
  July 13th, 2017 01:00
• Escape (Bagel) I feel your angst. I\'m going to ask you to think about something, an old...
  July 13th, 2017 00:34
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (3) (Michael Edwards) Beautiful. Love and peace. All the better for the final verse. Ten times...
  July 13th, 2017 00:25
• Together (MissileOfUncertainty) You are right and i have said it many times. A short poem is a punchy...
  July 12th, 2017 22:59
• Relax (Adam) Short and sweet = impact! Great choice of words. Canopies, grass and...
  July 12th, 2017 22:51
• Love\\\\\\\'s Hunger Needs (HEIDIKINS) OOOh you romantic you. This is as good as any passionate declaration of...
  July 12th, 2017 22:42
• Wife (Bagel) As a teenager i used to hate that people said girls are way more grown up...
  July 12th, 2017 22:38
• Gone (Tay1234) A very good first Tay. The best work i do is the work which comes thru my...
  July 12th, 2017 22:12
• letter burning (Heather T) Passion, anguish, pain and fear cry out from your writing. Beautifully...
  July 12th, 2017 21:59
• I hate you (Angel-baby28) I think you say it all and with such clarity and obvious motherly love....
  July 12th, 2017 21:54
• My Addiction (BrittA) Down to earth, has gritty realism and pathos. Definately well written....
  July 12th, 2017 20:43
• Outgrown (Baylee) Nice punchy stuff. Succinct verse usually is more powerful. You do it
  July 12th, 2017 18:56
• The World We Live In (Kaden Hudson) Don\'t expect anyone to change your world for you. It\'s your world, you...
  July 12th, 2017 12:48
• Starry Night (Rita_ehn) May all your troubles be insignificant pricks of light which disappear...
  July 12th, 2017 12:14
• The Kiss (FredPeyer) Kissing is quite quite glorious. But when u pull it apart its a bit weird...
  July 12th, 2017 10:34
• As sweet as ever (Malubotelho) He he he @ Kevin Browne calling you a little smoothie. You were a tigeress...
  July 12th, 2017 08:47
• The Endless End (Jabberwocky) Thats profound sir! Strong, well chosen phrasing.
  July 12th, 2017 04:19
• FREAK (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) I love it, full of fire and fight. \" i may be tall i may be thick, but...
  July 12th, 2017 04:10
• The Truth (EnderGirl) Tell your troubles upon my screen many heartaches are often seen share...
  July 12th, 2017 03:51
• MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oh such wonderful frivolity his painting\'s captured you to a...
  July 12th, 2017 03:42
• Black and White (Katherine_Lemke) I love provocative work like yours. Gets the grey matter tingling. Black...
  July 12th, 2017 03:29
• Words on a Page. (Goldfinch60) Very true. Here i find a place to tell my stories, created fiction or...
  July 12th, 2017 02:26
• Set to Rise (GeraldineTaylor) The prize is yours. I like it. Positive and uplifting. \"Take me to a...
  July 12th, 2017 02:20
• See David Sit (Dent Moses) Straight away i\'m thinking environment. To me this is a provocative cry...
  July 12th, 2017 01:32
• Her. (Katy Alvarez) A great write. Short and punchy. Hits him straight in the guts. Powerful.
  July 12th, 2017 01:24
• No Longer and Not Yet (Kbreinich) Inspirational work this. You just opened up a new sphere of thought in me....
  July 12th, 2017 00:01
• My Heart\'s On My Sleeve... (JustCallMeCe) Lots of pain in your work. Us old gits will tell you the pain subsides,...
  July 11th, 2017 23:37
• Destined to fly (Lost-but-not-broken17) i thought i was reading about drug addiction, then i read your author\'s...
  July 11th, 2017 23:28
• Living for others (Youloveme) It works two ways when i write \'you love me\' doesn\'t it. And your words...
  July 11th, 2017 23:20
• Normal (Kaden Hudson) Smiled at your line \'pray the gay away\'. Normal nowdays is being...
  July 11th, 2017 19:11
• Shadow of yourself (Poetic Dan) Well written and well done for writing it. Its a theraputic outlet for me...
  July 11th, 2017 19:01
• They call me ego (Malubotelho) \"Observing the opportunity to raid your thoughts\" how true and well...
  July 11th, 2017 17:44
• No Answers (M. Mohon) I\'ve known the feeling you express here and you convey it well. It\'s a...
  July 11th, 2017 17:31
• The Day Ricky Left (Rpgiii) Great gripping read. Very entertaining. More please.
  July 11th, 2017 16:34
• Slut (Just a girl.) In the manner you describe the use of the word it is i think a shortened...
  July 11th, 2017 16:19
• Reflection Weary Judgement (Whisperingquill) Prying masticates the cat. What a wonderful line. You have a really...
  July 11th, 2017 16:09
• When is a man a man? (CrissDavies) That line from Damaged Soul/Kindred Spirit\'s comment here resounds -...
  July 11th, 2017 15:45
• Hope Never Rests (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent. What did our fore fathers think of our childhood interests and...
  July 11th, 2017 15:28
• Paper Cuts (Bagel) I love this. i dunno why but i just do. I think youve reached into my...
  July 11th, 2017 15:03
• Just Fall (Jinx) Ah temptation. But for these chains that bind me, i would surely go. Great...
  July 11th, 2017 14:45
• Deluded (Jabberwocky) Wot - no thorn in the paw? I just pray its got indigestion. A very thought...
  July 11th, 2017 14:09
• Vulnerability (Lost Girl) We\'re all vunerable u know. I\'m an old geezer and lifes taught me to...
  July 11th, 2017 14:06
• Fuck this Live (FredPeyer) These people are all individuals not one smelly heap. Each has their own...
  July 11th, 2017 13:54
• Unconditionally (Moonflower15) Lovely, beautiful expression of pure love. Rare that we see this subject...
  July 11th, 2017 11:58
• THE ENDLESS QUEST (Louis Gibbs) For a knight to die on the job???? You must be jousting my friend!
  July 10th, 2017 12:50
• Hoping (FredPeyer) Its a good thing to have hope in your life but a bad thing if hope becomes...
  July 10th, 2017 10:47
• Monday morning, gone eleven (Renzi) The layout looks like a silhouette of a devilish skull. Really well...
  July 10th, 2017 09:53
• Dancing Like an Idiot. (Goldfinch60) It works for me my friend.Music has been my life. I\'m half deaf from...
  July 10th, 2017 09:42
• Love Is Built (ElenaGrace) A gem of wisdom, so so true.
  July 10th, 2017 01:03
• Imperfection (Adrianna Kjeld) Someone else\'s recently penned phrase \'perfect imperfections\' comes...
  July 9th, 2017 18:09
• Behind The Glass (Dylan) The glass breaks wonderfully well from your side. Come on through - oh...
  July 9th, 2017 17:14
• Drowning (S.louise) Writing gives me such release. I hope it is so for you too. You will...
  July 9th, 2017 17:06
• Flowerless Thorn (Baylee) Oh that i could give you lessons, but i would fall in love with your...
  July 9th, 2017 16:08
• reflection (Heather T) Pure poetry. Fairies, unicorns, mystery, ladies of the lake. Makes me feel...
  July 9th, 2017 13:09
• The Warmth of Your Gaze (Moonflower15) I love your words. What a wonderful friend you have. You inspire me to...
  July 9th, 2017 12:11
• Whom Could It Be (+2) ... long (Kurt Philip Behm) A few kernels of grain? Blimey! Who\'d be a plumber, writing for free?
  July 9th, 2017 11:03
• How is your energy today? (Avigail) Theres energy and energy isn\'t there. Physically im yuk today. But...
  July 9th, 2017 11:00