Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Shy (Neville) Nights in white satin..... Well, better late than never. The things...
  November 3rd, 2021 11:53
• What Traffic? (Goldfinch60) Since lockdown there seems to be less traffic.... people working from...
  November 3rd, 2021 11:49
• Caged Illusions (Sketchy_soul) I read your author\'s comments first and then the poem. Having lived...
  November 2nd, 2021 12:42
• VIRTUOSO (MDStone) I like this and the truths contained. It is indeed a warning not to become...
  November 2nd, 2021 12:37
• Mummy Daddy (Paul Bell) Confusion of same sex relationships and parent hood comes to mind. Love...
  November 2nd, 2021 06:19
• Dreaming (Cheyenne Smith) Don\'t rush away from now, this moment. It\'s precious and will take you...
  November 2nd, 2021 06:17
• A Different Perspective. (Kitty the naughty poet) My busy mind is easily distracted and I lose the plot so often. Completely...
  November 2nd, 2021 06:15
• Moccasins (Lorna) That\'s what we are i suppose, each of us one drop of rainfall in a cloud,...
  November 2nd, 2021 06:10
• Walking By (Krutarth) This piece shouts \'i love life and my beautiful planet\'. A poem of...
  November 2nd, 2021 06:02
• Unlock (Fay Slimm.) LOL preaching to the converted here, I\'m everyday weird and try to think...
  November 2nd, 2021 05:54
• Let These Words Speak For Themselves (Neville) Peace and wellbeing is my mantra of the last few weeks and looks like...
  November 2nd, 2021 05:50
• Oh woe! (Orchidee) Don\'t be down Orchi, life has so much to offer. it strikes me that your...
  November 2nd, 2021 05:44
• Eternal Love. (Goldfinch60) It warms me when I read of the love between you two. You are a fine...
  November 2nd, 2021 05:40
• Shared memories (Jeremy Leach) Love in it\'s maturity remembers, rekindles that vibrant young flame. Love...
  November 1st, 2021 16:37
• Open. (The BlackShakespeare) There were great rewards for doing all those things before man invented a...
  November 1st, 2021 11:13
• Wonder (Jerry Reynolds) Those catacombs can be a great and peaceful place to dwell in...
  November 1st, 2021 11:11
• Storm Petrel Rising (Neville) Oi seen some thangs on\'t \'orizon m\'lad but i never seen of...
  November 1st, 2021 06:25
• Too Long (Fay Slimm.) What a delightfully miserable picture you paint today. Immediately I enjoy...
  November 1st, 2021 04:51
• Unity Utterance (Orchidee) A good message Orchi.
  November 1st, 2021 02:39
• The Glory Of My LIfe. (Goldfinch60) I\'m tempted to say \"Right on soul brother\" because i\'m of the same...
  November 1st, 2021 02:02
• WHO IS GREATER THAN YOU LORD (Cbdave) I wonder how often you worship physically or is it just a paper...
  November 1st, 2021 00:03
• Believe 💫 (Cheyenne Smith) Welcome out from under that cloud to the world of living life\'s reality....
  November 1st, 2021 00:00
• Into the Night (A.H. Browning) There are many who have lived through this inescapable tragedy and simply...
  October 31st, 2021 23:54
• Multitudinous Marvellings (Orchidee) I\'m lost mate. Who\'s this lamb fellah, i thought there was a flock?
  October 31st, 2021 17:50
• Vacancy. (Goldfinch60) Well your poetry is never stuffy... until now I like the alternating...
  October 31st, 2021 17:46
• Somewhere on a Spectrum (Neville) The essence of enigma and fascination captured in your fine writing today.
  October 31st, 2021 01:47
• God\\\\\\\'s Love. (The BlackShakespeare) Based upon a book written by men and censored by the church of rome which...
  October 30th, 2021 15:18
• The Squirrel (Jerry Reynolds) Damn good fun mate.
  October 30th, 2021 14:19
• BLESSED (Cbdave) Instilled with fear of god at a young age by christians or just gullible?...
  October 30th, 2021 04:15
• Best (Fay Slimm.) My word, what have you been drinking? There\'s a lot of love in your...
  October 30th, 2021 03:03
• smile (Sad Clown) Yep, a smiley outlook takes rough edges away. Some ppl just see the rough...
  October 30th, 2021 02:31
• Halloween Horror (Orchidee) was that a trick? or a treat?
  October 30th, 2021 02:20
• Eternal River. (Goldfinch60) The spirit of your river combines with your spirit i feel here.......
  October 30th, 2021 01:31
• Glad You’re My Dad (Gurleen Bal) Looks like dad has done a good job, and so have you with this piece....
  October 30th, 2021 00:54
• That Made all The Difference. (GershWrites) Who could remain indifferent to the quality of this your introductory post...
  October 30th, 2021 00:52
• Out Of This World (Garth Rakumakoe) TGhe beauty of love at day\'s beginning. Sustenance.
  October 30th, 2021 00:21
• I\'ve already been; (HannahElisabeth) placing a part of life naked before us dear poet takes a lot of...
  October 29th, 2021 05:10
• Poetry at sea (Poetic Dan) Sounds very much like a spiritual thing which happened to me with the...
  October 29th, 2021 04:24
• I Wrote Of You (Garth Rakumakoe) Lovely flowing loves fantasy poetry
  October 29th, 2021 04:20
• Forced (Fay Slimm.) Oh I\'m so with you onsnug warm at home on blustery c c cc cold days...
  October 29th, 2021 04:07
• The line. (Kitty the naughty poet) Maybe nobody else sees your line. Or maybe theyre on the same side of a...
  October 29th, 2021 03:28
• The wrong train (Spilleronsheet) Nice. Well constructed and superb punch line / message. i\'d be tempted to...
  October 29th, 2021 03:18
• Wholesome Witness (Orchidee) Call for me the disbeliever option (penultimate verse last line). But i...
  October 29th, 2021 02:24
• Inconsequential Gulls (Neville) Such a lovely metaphor for the Houses of Parliament you\'ve poetically...
  October 29th, 2021 01:57
• I Paid For That! (Goldfinch60) I was in traffic the first time i noticed a huge plume of smoke being...
  October 29th, 2021 01:54
• JOURNEY OF WORDS (Shadow424) And so begins the voyage of discoveryand mutual adventure.... fiction?... ...
  October 28th, 2021 20:56
• only nature shall survive (SureshG) The truth is undenyable in your post today. Well presented and food for...
  October 28th, 2021 20:55
• Burnt and Bitter Oranges (Neville) Mystery leads the mind to conjour a story..... plenty of meat here to...
  October 28th, 2021 14:41
• I STAND AT THE DOOR (Cbdave) Nice bit of fantasy.
  October 28th, 2021 07:33
• The Honey Trap. (Paul Bell) I\'m with Teddy on this, what\'s Mojenta?
  October 28th, 2021 07:31
• Making Plain (Fay Slimm.) Cor blimey, so that\'s how the female brain fathoms out love or not is it?...
  October 28th, 2021 07:03
• Good Times FIB (Goldfinch60) And there\'s me telling of suffering. oh when will the sun shine, take...
  October 28th, 2021 06:59
• Willow (Aniahmator) Great piece of love poetry for your cats. I love the enigmatic ways of...
  October 27th, 2021 14:52
• Humane (SureshG) A hotch-potch of emotions aren\'t we. The savage who nurtures a child etc....
  October 27th, 2021 14:26
• I love you, and I\'m sorry. (Zyphril) A truly revealing piece demonstrating how lack of self love interferes...
  October 27th, 2021 13:54
• SMILE !! (Vamsi Sudha) Totally agree and applaud the way you present this in your poetry. Such...
  October 27th, 2021 11:17
• Easy (Scebrynski) Pain will ease, time will do it\'s healing. Better to let go than live in...
  October 27th, 2021 11:11
• Myself! (IAli) Great poetry with super form and conclusion. Alone one has oneself. A...
  October 27th, 2021 11:09
• Excellent Example (Orchidee) Any thoughts about why we hear no more of jesus\' teaching etc after...
  October 27th, 2021 11:06
• In the rain (Trashsam) Quite lovely. I like the way you have presented this tale very...
  October 27th, 2021 11:03
• Frozen Heart (Moribundmind) Well written, well crafted tale of woe upon loves ending. Time will do...
  October 27th, 2021 10:56
• 1 - 4 - 3 ~ I Love You (Accidental Poet) Fine and respectful dedication to the lighthouse and the men who built
  October 27th, 2021 10:54
• Mouth My Name Slow (Neville) Oh i recall the days when i threw arrows at your image and mocked every...
  October 27th, 2021 10:16
• Attack (Fay Slimm.) Cornwall has so many relics of past activities. Plenty for the poetic mind...
  October 27th, 2021 04:28
• Coincidence (Goldfinch60) Name dropper! My jazz greats rarely get a mention.
  October 27th, 2021 04:19
• Tired (Ajax (he/xe)) Just keep living and as you grow older along will come answers, most of...
  October 26th, 2021 18:55
• Concept Of Love (Draft 3.0) There\'s many kinds of love. Romantic love is just the springboard from...
  October 26th, 2021 18:53
• Salvation Sure (Orchidee) Ahem! Today\'s \'chosen generation\' has largely turned its back on...
  October 26th, 2021 14:56
• You (Job Welime) Wonderful expression of love. You have great poetry within you. Keep...
  October 26th, 2021 14:50
• SPACE (T. Boston) Enjoyed how you concluded this piece.
  October 26th, 2021 14:47
• ഏകാന്തത (Bivin Sunny) DžnjǮ ȵɰȡ ɝǔdžʨ ͌͌͌͆ϗώϑцжЎЄ
  October 26th, 2021 14:17
• Once (Fay Slimm.) Oh for those sunshine days of childhood lost.... a longing refreshed in...
  October 26th, 2021 13:32
• Enlightenment #2 (Neville) Forever? Even the tales of history\'s greats fades.... I know little of...
  October 26th, 2021 09:06
• Dad\'s Back. (Goldfinch60) Thought I saw dad in the mirror the other day.
  October 26th, 2021 08:55
• I am a victim of birth (AnxiousMane) WElcome to the human race, it\'s been the same for every one of us. But we...
  October 25th, 2021 18:46
• TBC (SaaskiiaBonita) What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger! Your day will come, hang in...
  October 25th, 2021 18:43
• whine (Robin jayne) Great memories recalled are never lost.... they bring us smiles from our...
  October 25th, 2021 18:39
• 3. (Gey Dumbass Over Here) Yes, we should always encourage one another to shine. Sadly too many seem...
  October 25th, 2021 18:36
• Safe And Sure (Orchidee) I read your poem\'s title and thought it was going to be about condoms,...
  October 25th, 2021 03:54
• A CROWN OF THORNS (Cbdave) And then he buggered off and was never heard of again.... too good to be...
  October 25th, 2021 03:48
• Breakfast Rituals (Neville) Ah, bliss..... then out came the rolling pin (the missing verse). Such...
  October 25th, 2021 03:27
• People Do Not Care Rant. (Goldfinch60) The best rejoinder possible! However, many a gentleman has consciously...
  October 25th, 2021 03:18
• AND PUPPETS DANCE (Michael Edwards) interpretation.... a haunting sadness pervades and invades otherwise...
  October 25th, 2021 03:14
• МОЛЬБА (Remisson) Why cant you present this in English like everyone else so it can be read...
  October 24th, 2021 17:50
• Witchcraft (Lorna) Yes, most definitely yes.
  October 24th, 2021 14:29
• No Regret (Fay Slimm.) The suffering heart hides through seasons of essential healing yet has so...
  October 24th, 2021 14:21
• Recollections (Neville) Those we have love had beauty and sincerity until.... whatever happened....
  October 24th, 2021 14:13
• Finding Old Music. (Goldfinch60) Lovely. I know exactly what you mean
  October 24th, 2021 14:05
• A thoughtful walk in the wood (Jeremy Leach) To sit among the trees in a forest, natures cathederals, and reflect upon...
  October 23rd, 2021 16:17
• Cream of Tartar (B) Your mum\'s words will haunt you till u become a breakaway which usually...
  October 23rd, 2021 16:12
• Locked Up Freedom (Anshibee) Let time gently do it\'s healing thing.
  October 23rd, 2021 12:28
• eden (Casper_the_ghost) Cupid\'s poisoned arrow. The overwhelming desire of love condemning the...
  October 23rd, 2021 12:26
• Pay It Forward (Accidental Poet) Kudos
  October 23rd, 2021 12:22
• Love (Lorna) Love, the learned value of life. The appreciation of all around us, the...
  October 23rd, 2021 12:13
• First (Fay Slimm.) Oh no you couldn\'t LOL for there is so very much of it in your poetry you...
  October 23rd, 2021 12:05
• Magnificently Flawed (Neville) Not to mention the huge Gorilla swinging on her apex. Great description...
  October 23rd, 2021 12:02
• Tell me O moon (Spilleronsheet) Oh Mr mystery moon, so many questions you pose. No answers other than your...
  October 23rd, 2021 11:55
• Age Celebration. (Goldfinch60) Here, here. Totally agree having losr family and friends along the way....
  October 23rd, 2021 11:51
• NGIZWA UTHANDO (Luyanda Ngcobo) I hope your pretty lady enjoyed it. I\'m pretty sure no one else on MPS...
  October 22nd, 2021 05:38
• The Harbour (Lorna) Oh to have and share such a place. With a somebody who knows me well and...
  October 22nd, 2021 05:33