Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• The wrong train (Spilleronsheet) Nice. Well constructed and superb punch line / message. i\'d be tempted to...
  October 29th, 2021 03:18
• Wholesome Witness (Orchidee) Call for me the disbeliever option (penultimate verse last line). But i...
  October 29th, 2021 02:24
• Inconsequential Gulls (Neville) Such a lovely metaphor for the Houses of Parliament you\'ve poetically...
  October 29th, 2021 01:57
• I Paid For That! (Goldfinch60) I was in traffic the first time i noticed a huge plume of smoke being...
  October 29th, 2021 01:54
• JOURNEY OF WORDS (Shadow424) And so begins the voyage of discoveryand mutual adventure.... fiction?... ...
  October 28th, 2021 20:56
• only nature shall survive (SureshG) The truth is undenyable in your post today. Well presented and food for...
  October 28th, 2021 20:55
• Burnt and Bitter Oranges (Neville) Mystery leads the mind to conjour a story..... plenty of meat here to...
  October 28th, 2021 14:41
• I STAND AT THE DOOR (Cbdave) Nice bit of fantasy.
  October 28th, 2021 07:33
• Making Plain (Fay Slimm.) Cor blimey, so that\'s how the female brain fathoms out love or not is it?...
  October 28th, 2021 07:03
• Good Times FIB (Goldfinch60) And there\'s me telling of suffering. oh when will the sun shine, take...
  October 28th, 2021 06:59
• Willow (Aniahmator) Great piece of love poetry for your cats. I love the enigmatic ways of...
  October 27th, 2021 14:52
• Humane (SureshG) A hotch-potch of emotions aren\'t we. The savage who nurtures a child etc....
  October 27th, 2021 14:26
• I love you, and I\'m sorry. (Zyphril) A truly revealing piece demonstrating how lack of self love interferes...
  October 27th, 2021 13:54
• SMILE !! (Vamsi Sudha) Totally agree and applaud the way you present this in your poetry. Such...
  October 27th, 2021 11:17
• Easy (Scebrynski) Pain will ease, time will do it\'s healing. Better to let go than live in...
  October 27th, 2021 11:11
• Myself! (IAli) Great poetry with super form and conclusion. Alone one has oneself. A...
  October 27th, 2021 11:09
• Excellent Example (Orchidee) Any thoughts about why we hear no more of jesus\' teaching etc after...
  October 27th, 2021 11:06
• In the rain (Trashsam) Quite lovely. I like the way you have presented this tale very...
  October 27th, 2021 11:03
• Frozen Heart (Moribundmind) Well written, well crafted tale of woe upon loves ending. Time will do...
  October 27th, 2021 10:56
• Mouth My Name Slow (Neville) Oh i recall the days when i threw arrows at your image and mocked every...
  October 27th, 2021 10:16
• Attack (Fay Slimm.) Cornwall has so many relics of past activities. Plenty for the poetic mind...
  October 27th, 2021 04:28
• Coincidence (Goldfinch60) Name dropper! My jazz greats rarely get a mention.
  October 27th, 2021 04:19
• Tired (Ajax (he/xe)) Just keep living and as you grow older along will come answers, most of...
  October 26th, 2021 18:55
• Concept Of Love (Draft 3.0) There\'s many kinds of love. Romantic love is just the springboard from...
  October 26th, 2021 18:53
• Salvation Sure (Orchidee) Ahem! Today\'s \'chosen generation\' has largely turned its back on...
  October 26th, 2021 14:56
• You (Job Welime) Wonderful expression of love. You have great poetry within you. Keep...
  October 26th, 2021 14:50
• SPACE (T. Boston) Enjoyed how you concluded this piece.
  October 26th, 2021 14:47
• ഏകാന്തത (Bivin Sunny) DžnjǮ ȵɰȡ ɝǔdžʨ ͌͌͌͆ϗώϑцжЎЄ
  October 26th, 2021 14:17
• Once (Fay Slimm.) Oh for those sunshine days of childhood lost.... a longing refreshed in...
  October 26th, 2021 13:32
• Enlightenment #2 (Neville) Forever? Even the tales of history\'s greats fades.... I know little of...
  October 26th, 2021 09:06
• Dad\'s Back. (Goldfinch60) Thought I saw dad in the mirror the other day.
  October 26th, 2021 08:55
• I am a victim of birth (AnxiousMane) WElcome to the human race, it\'s been the same for every one of us. But we...
  October 25th, 2021 18:46
• TBC (SaaskiiaBonita) What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger! Your day will come, hang in...
  October 25th, 2021 18:43
• whine (Robin jayne) Great memories recalled are never lost.... they bring us smiles from our...
  October 25th, 2021 18:39
• 3. (Gey Dumbass Over Here) Yes, we should always encourage one another to shine. Sadly too many seem...
  October 25th, 2021 18:36
• Safe And Sure (Orchidee) I read your poem\'s title and thought it was going to be about condoms,...
  October 25th, 2021 03:54
• A CROWN OF THORNS (Cbdave) And then he buggered off and was never heard of again.... too good to be...
  October 25th, 2021 03:48
• Breakfast Rituals (Neville) Ah, bliss..... then out came the rolling pin (the missing verse). Such...
  October 25th, 2021 03:27
• People Do Not Care Rant. (Goldfinch60) The best rejoinder possible! However, many a gentleman has consciously...
  October 25th, 2021 03:18
• AND PUPPETS DANCE (Michael Edwards) interpretation.... a haunting sadness pervades and invades otherwise...
  October 25th, 2021 03:14
• МОЛЬБА (Remisson) Why cant you present this in English like everyone else so it can be read...
  October 24th, 2021 17:50
• Witchcraft (Lorna) Yes, most definitely yes.
  October 24th, 2021 14:29
• No Regret (Fay Slimm.) The suffering heart hides through seasons of essential healing yet has so...
  October 24th, 2021 14:21
• Recollections (Neville) Those we have love had beauty and sincerity until.... whatever happened....
  October 24th, 2021 14:13
• Finding Old Music. (Goldfinch60) Lovely. I know exactly what you mean
  October 24th, 2021 14:05
• A thoughtful walk in the wood (Jeremy Leach) To sit among the trees in a forest, natures cathederals, and reflect upon...
  October 23rd, 2021 16:17
• Cream of Tartar (B) Your mum\'s words will haunt you till u become a breakaway which usually...
  October 23rd, 2021 16:12
• Locked Up Freedom (Anshibee) Let time gently do it\'s healing thing.
  October 23rd, 2021 12:28
• eden (Casper_the_ghost) Cupid\'s poisoned arrow. The overwhelming desire of love condemning the...
  October 23rd, 2021 12:26
• Love (Lorna) Love, the learned value of life. The appreciation of all around us, the...
  October 23rd, 2021 12:13
• First (Fay Slimm.) Oh no you couldn\'t LOL for there is so very much of it in your poetry you...
  October 23rd, 2021 12:05
• Magnificently Flawed (Neville) Not to mention the huge Gorilla swinging on her apex. Great description...
  October 23rd, 2021 12:02
• Tell me O moon (Spilleronsheet) Oh Mr mystery moon, so many questions you pose. No answers other than your...
  October 23rd, 2021 11:55
• Age Celebration. (Goldfinch60) Here, here. Totally agree having losr family and friends along the way....
  October 23rd, 2021 11:51
• NGIZWA UTHANDO (Luyanda Ngcobo) I hope your pretty lady enjoyed it. I\'m pretty sure no one else on MPS...
  October 22nd, 2021 05:38
• The Harbour (Lorna) Oh to have and share such a place. With a somebody who knows me well and...
  October 22nd, 2021 05:33
• Listeners (Fay Slimm.) That just about sums up my muse and me. Scribblers in the early hours we...
  October 22nd, 2021 03:31
• A Diamond in The Making (Neville) Nice one Neville. I hate to think what my gallstones will turn out to be...
  October 22nd, 2021 03:10
• Making Mansions (Orchidee) Did he say all that..... have u been making it up again, BITE him Fido.
  October 22nd, 2021 02:16
• Grandpa’s girl (Ruqaiya) So much warmth in your words. That warmth in grandpa\'s memory will stay...
  October 22nd, 2021 02:15
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (7) (Michael Edwards) At last.... now i feel i can fart unrestrained. Great write... outside...
  October 22nd, 2021 02:12
• My Two Ladies. (Goldfinch60) Love, honour and respect. What greater aspects of one\'s personality could...
  October 22nd, 2021 01:21
• In God’s Court (Thekkinkkattil) God? Most religions load you with guilt while you are a child, so you\'re...
  October 22nd, 2021 00:14
• Why? (The BlackShakespeare) Life is full of questions. The unanswered ones find resolution in the...
  October 21st, 2021 19:12
• TOGETHER (Seo Eun Hae) Nicely put together piece.
  October 21st, 2021 16:12
• All the Right Notes (HangingbyaHalo) The honesty within this piece is outstanding. Excellent poetry. Should be...
  October 21st, 2021 12:38
• When Autumn Breathed Her Silence (ADarkerMind) Stunning dark poetry beautifully composed.
  October 21st, 2021 10:27
• Mutation (Fay Slimm.) And what a bow this flourish of autumnal beauty presents to our eye before...
  October 21st, 2021 06:37
• Lamb-like (Orchidee) Who\'s side was he on in 1066 at hastings? shouldda been king fido u know.
  October 21st, 2021 06:32
• I\'ve Been A Good Boy Today. (Goldfinch60) Pah!... you\'re just saving up for a bad day.
  October 21st, 2021 06:29
• Two Days into Autumn (Neville) I came home from a stay in hospital to a wonderful autumnal display on my...
  October 21st, 2021 06:27
• Plucked Strings. (Goldfinch60) I think you plucked the strings of all readers hearts with your words ...
  October 20th, 2021 09:35
• My Cat (The BlackShakespeare) LOL i love this story.
  September 24th, 2021 11:43
• And So, The Battle Begins (Jo) it\'s the christian way of things, ever since the crusades of the middle...
  September 24th, 2021 09:26
• Happenings (Fay Slimm.) Nature\'s tale. It\'s a cruel world of strange beauty on a certain level...
  September 24th, 2021 03:40
• Nothing to Lose (Neville) OOh I\'ve had mornings like that. Nervousness pervades the atmosphere.... ...
  September 24th, 2021 03:20
• Favourable Farewell (Orchidee) We are so lucky to have Tesco\'s in every town now. Poor paul had to...
  September 24th, 2021 02:07
• Our One God. (Goldfinch60) As you know, I stand alongside your appreciation of what is god and the...
  September 24th, 2021 01:39
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (6) (Michael Edwards) Flora don\'t stand too much study, it melts.
  September 23rd, 2021 10:43
• Matins. (Beano) Pure poetry, wonderful wordsmithry.
  September 23rd, 2021 03:19
• Cold Showers (Mariel Ilagan) Dunno quite how to respond to the chill of your piece today... ...
  September 23rd, 2021 03:12
• La Traviata. (Goldfinch60) I\'m envious of your enjoyment and appreciation of a musical place I have...
  September 23rd, 2021 03:07
• Without Closure (Neville) Well some old trinkets are just baggage after the lust has gone, the...
  September 22nd, 2021 13:54
• First Day Of Autumn (Jerry Reynolds) And long may that window show you the changes of season.
  September 22nd, 2021 09:53
• This Heart (Fay Slimm.) Stunning! Beautiful! Fay you have created a magnificent work of art here....
  September 22nd, 2021 05:54
• Natures Gymnopodie. (Goldfinch60) Satie\'s work is so simple yet so beautiful. Written for ease of play for...
  September 22nd, 2021 05:27
• Generational Trauma (Mariel Ilagan) There is so much of this around in society. In many ways we are lucky...
  September 22nd, 2021 05:23
• The Untitled (Advaitha) Oh it\'s great so see arrogance displayed so blatantly. Nice expose.
  September 21st, 2021 12:15
• Fall Tanka (Jerry Reynolds) Succinct poetry of the beautiful season of the fall. Or autumn as we call...
  September 21st, 2021 07:39
• Reminders (Fay Slimm.) Oh i lazily walked that lane from low tide through the afternoon drinking...
  September 21st, 2021 05:30
• A Taste Well Shared (Neville) For the essence of love\'s spirit has twinned them into harmonic intimacy...
  September 21st, 2021 05:23
• Welcome (Jennifer Martin) Oh my Jennifer Martin. This is the second of your poems i have read and I...
  September 21st, 2021 03:55
• Ever Flowing (Jennifer Martin) I\'m so pleased i found this. It is quite quite beautiful poetry beyond...
  September 21st, 2021 03:51
• O My Hopeful Soul! (IAli) These words become so meaningful when an older person like me thinks of...
  September 21st, 2021 03:20
• ADHD (Mariel Ilagan) In a word... Brilliant. Loved this to bits. Straight into my favourites.
  September 21st, 2021 03:14
• The Further Down, The Less You Can See (Jo) Hmmm if this is for real - a part of your life ... then... When you\'re...
  September 21st, 2021 03:03
• Shiver (Rebmasters) Great imagery.
  September 21st, 2021 03:01
• Moonlight. (Goldfinch60) The light IS with you Andy. And you share it with us all. You bring a zest...
  September 21st, 2021 02:19
• Crystal (Methmi Mandara) Methmi, you\'ve posted ten poems on here but your profile page reveals you...
  September 21st, 2021 00:25
• That Green Ring (Flyingfish) Great mystery in this, thrilling, suspenseful, well composed.
  September 21st, 2021 00:23