Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Incomparable (Fay Slimm.) And upon that plane may the pleasing calm of slumber overide these aches...
  December 3rd, 2021 08:57
• My Lady is More Than a Poem (Neville) Shallow bottomed and responds well to wind eh? Does she crest the waves of...
  December 3rd, 2021 07:00
• Devilish Debauchery (Kitty the naughty poet) Where did u get that photo of my living room from. Anyway I\'ve moved the...
  December 3rd, 2021 06:56
• Restoring And Reviving (Orchidee) Except the ones it fails eh? but of course christianity brushes that under...
  December 3rd, 2021 06:53
• THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION (Michael Edwards) Is it me? I haven\'t been on that bench you know. Am i the bloke who...
  December 3rd, 2021 06:51
• Striped Tie. (Goldfinch60) Oh yes, well remembered. I used to wear a 3 piece suit and regularly...
  December 3rd, 2021 06:48
• Weary (Hurtbutterfly) Keep writing. You\'ll find friendly words of support on this site and,...
  December 2nd, 2021 14:03
• Ranting? (Orchidee) Looks like you are stuck in the rut of a habit and can\'t face up to the...
  December 2nd, 2021 13:56
• A Winter Song (Jerry Reynolds) Cosy, comforting, reassuring, knowing.
  December 2nd, 2021 11:22
• Late By Yesterday (Nicholas Browning) Nice word play to bring on a headache for deep thunkers LOL
  December 2nd, 2021 10:46
• No Home (Lorna) This is a sad reflection on the type of society we exist in. A situation...
  December 2nd, 2021 10:38
• Book of Passion (Kitty the naughty poet) Oh there\'s no book of passion here for me, just urgently scribbled...
  December 2nd, 2021 09:34
• Dead Fox (Saxon Crow) Yes indeed dear poet. I take that onboard, we are all just dead foxes...
  December 2nd, 2021 09:29
• Everyday Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) I know those words are special for you and heartfelt. I arose late...
  December 2nd, 2021 09:22
• Living with a scar (Spilleronsheet) So true. There are scars still quite alive in me from all through my life....
  December 2nd, 2021 09:10
• Never (Garth Rakumakoe) Prayer can be a great healer if it is done with all sincerity.
  December 1st, 2021 14:29
• Omicron Harvest (Jerry Reynolds) LOL easy pickings.... those who refuse to either take precautions or even...
  December 1st, 2021 09:15
• A Real Who Done It (MDStone) But i bet she\'ll be propping up a bar or two.
  December 1st, 2021 09:13
• Wind (Poetaddict365) Good to see wisdom within your words - you know time will heal...
  December 1st, 2021 09:10
• First Snow (Lorna) Lovely, your words are like a light dance upon the carpet of white. I...
  December 1st, 2021 05:27
• Making Rainbows Blindly (Neville) The act of choosing hopefully meant he saw the options available to him....
  December 1st, 2021 04:04
• Spankings. (Kitty the naughty poet) Katie... !!! why did you stop there ???
  December 1st, 2021 03:54
• Tenderness (James Alexander) Finding love can be a long, lonely waiting game. Be wary of being to...
  December 1st, 2021 03:46
• Faking (Fay Slimm.) I was never attractive enough to attract overt declarations of love. LOL...
  December 1st, 2021 03:43
• Restoring Rejoicings (Orchidee) Why does your religion baptise people when they are babies? There is no...
  December 1st, 2021 03:12
• Kerouac (Mdrogers) Suggestion. If you want to attract more readers and comments then start...
  December 1st, 2021 03:10
• We Never Know. (Goldfinch60) Well \'they\' don\'t live in the same world as we do. Their descisions for...
  December 1st, 2021 02:23
• Good Morning Mamma/Buongiorno Mamma♥️ (Laura🌻) It speaks of a loving closeness when i read your words today.Irreplaceable...
  December 1st, 2021 01:14
• No hope (Poet Nockie) Encompases a sad negative outlook on life. Almost as if the writer is...
  November 30th, 2021 05:38
• Her Love (Fay Slimm.) Sad words of loss and adjustment as the onset of winter seems to take away...
  November 30th, 2021 05:35
• Ho Ho Oh No (Lorna) Refreshing to read. Today\'s apparent urgent need to be in christmas...
  November 30th, 2021 05:29
• My Angel\'s Arrival !!! (Vamsi Sudha) You describe so well the affection and unconditional love you share with...
  November 30th, 2021 03:01
• Wandering, to just find dismay (Spilleronsheet) Reading your words today has made me want to pass on a piece of wisdom....
  November 30th, 2021 02:38
• Looking. (Goldfinch60) And what we have achieved in overcoming all those bricks that life threw...
  November 30th, 2021 02:32
• A Heroes Home Coming (Mozzthe1) For me, you resurrect the echoes of the years over which we have failed to...
  November 29th, 2021 11:40
• A Promenade in Twilight (PS) Some of life\'s small pleasures are to wish for as everlasting delights....
  November 29th, 2021 11:16
• A Promenade in Twilight (PS) Some of life\'s small pleasures are to wish for as everlasting delights....
  November 29th, 2021 11:16
• Help In The Frey (MDStone) It\'s good to read your realistic vision of this hell you are going...
  November 29th, 2021 08:49
• Dandelions (Dove) Your words brought back the memory of searching for a dandelion with one...
  November 29th, 2021 08:41
• The Rose (James Alexander) Scent, the sense of smell can take us back to moments years ago with...
  November 29th, 2021 07:02
• Winter is coming (Kitty the naughty poet) You\'ve made me shudder with your chill words and it already in minus...
  November 29th, 2021 06:40
• Blue-Tailed mermaid (Rubyrosemoscone) This well composed piece leaves me with a mystery which is compelling...
  November 29th, 2021 06:30
• Arrow (Nicholas Browning) Too morose, you\'ve got plenty of life left in ya yet young-un. Like the...
  November 29th, 2021 06:23
• Was It You? (Lorna) mmmm Lorna... this brought something to me for I have known who reached...
  November 29th, 2021 06:03
• In The Making (Fay Slimm.) Oh Fay, gone are the days of such enthusiasm from the young (by and...
  November 29th, 2021 05:49
• On Being Called to War  (Neville) Unless called upon to defent this land I hold dear, then give me a white...
  November 29th, 2021 05:41
• What Ghost! (Goldfinch60) It\'s the cobwebs between your fingers and in your nostrils which give it...
  November 29th, 2021 05:36
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (7 - 9) (Michael Edwards) Do these gems appear to you whilst you are creating your visual...
  November 29th, 2021 05:33
• No words, no sound, no acts necessary (SureshG) Your chosen title here describes the moment so well..... blissful. I\'m...
  November 29th, 2021 05:30
• Who Among Us? (Garth Rakumakoe) In the words of a famous Billy Joel song \"We didn\'t start the fire\"....
  November 28th, 2021 17:05
• Sunday Shores (Fay Slimm.) Sundays are when your muse recharges her batteries I imagine here. Had to...
  November 28th, 2021 12:35
• I lost another ribbon (Spagirl_lola) Really moving and personal. I felt this poem. Welcome to MPS. I look...
  November 28th, 2021 12:28
• OLD MAN (Finchy) You\'re right, it\'s not half bad, in fact it\'s very good. Hard to...
  November 28th, 2021 08:43
• Holiday (Lorna) Get away from everybody and do what you want to do.... my kinda holiday.
  November 28th, 2021 06:40
• Summer 19.. (Neville) And why not miss everything..... love is a worthwhile diversion..... ...
  November 28th, 2021 06:35
• Muse alert….. Sorry – My Mistake (Doggerel Dave) Deliverence!
  November 28th, 2021 06:29
• Be Careful. (Goldfinch60) Please don\'t assosciate me with the bible, a book full of contradiction,...
  November 28th, 2021 06:28
• Judge (ChloeS) As a young child we do not judge. Parental influence and experience leads...
  November 27th, 2021 16:58
• Love Seasons Of Two (Garth Rakumakoe) Unsure why i like this but I do. Great flow and mystery.
  November 27th, 2021 16:48
• On My Mind (Lorna) The reassurance of a love, gone, still builds an inner strength of...
  November 27th, 2021 09:06
• Exchange (Fay Slimm.) Lovely capture here. The magic of two souls wanting again to share, taking...
  November 27th, 2021 09:00
• Down With Everything (Neville) Done with them, done with them, done, done , done.....but soddit they\'re...
  November 27th, 2021 08:56
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (4 - 6) (Michael Edwards) My Glow balls are warming next to a radiator this cold winter morn as we...
  November 27th, 2021 08:53
• From Experience. (Goldfinch60) Wise words indeed for those regrouping their spirit for a new beginning....
  November 27th, 2021 08:47
• Losing Game (A Boy With Roses) Moving from third person in verse one to first person tense in verse two...
  November 27th, 2021 08:35
• Enough (Lostinfantasy) Yep, self worth is so important. Not really possible to unconditionally ...
  November 26th, 2021 12:37
• Is love real? (MKL) Don\'t keep telling yourself you cannot love. That is giving your life to...
  November 26th, 2021 12:27
• Love and Battle in the North (Nicholas Browning) Ah the good old romantic fable has stirred in your blood. The hero of...
  November 26th, 2021 12:21
• In Silence (3amMemories) And sometimes words unspoken carry more weight.
  November 26th, 2021 11:43
• Free at last.......... (Doggerel Dave) My life is ennui these days mate. Can\'t even take a trip around the...
  November 26th, 2021 11:23
• Look into the Face of Jesus (Cbdave) I wonder which man made vision of jesus you see in your mind\'s eye? Oh...
  November 26th, 2021 11:20
• Voiceless (Fay Slimm.) Cor you make a very complex thing sound so simple. It should be simple,...
  November 26th, 2021 11:15
• Dip Your Brush Into Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) Yes Andy, I wouldn\'t have it any other way. The future is bright in my...
  November 26th, 2021 11:07
• Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer (Neville) That special place all spiritual folk have found deep within our soul. A...
  November 26th, 2021 11:05
• Only if (Spilleronsheet) Reads like the regret after a very young love was halted by parental...
  November 25th, 2021 16:06
• Montero was right (HastyLT) Well keep telling us about your climb. Please bear in mind, from...
  November 25th, 2021 11:50
• Thank you (Saxon Crow) Well one might think this is all about your father but it can\'t be cos...
  November 25th, 2021 11:48
• Anchored (Fay Slimm.) Hmmm... led to some deep thinking. Like an old ship of many...
  November 25th, 2021 05:18
• Exalted (Cbdave) LOL your OCD is showing again. I see you\'re still not reading other...
  November 25th, 2021 04:00
• Solitude Acrostic (Goldfinch60) Soilitude, that much misunderstood word. Solidity of will and purpose...
  November 25th, 2021 03:52
• An Unmistakable She (Neville) There\'s many a rolling R\'s to be observed on the high street too. And...
  November 25th, 2021 03:49
• Unfathomed (Fay Slimm.) Admire... I\'m in awe at the dawn\'s unique beauty each day (when I get to...
  November 24th, 2021 08:18
• Lift God’s Standard (Cbdave) Lord? Who is King? Such silly languge christians use.
  November 24th, 2021 04:34
• Ma Petit Serviette (Neville) I like the way you tease my mind in your recent poetry..... did they,...
  November 24th, 2021 03:49
• Baby Boomer Birth (Rozina) Us computer savvy oldies aren\'t as daft as they think.
  November 24th, 2021 03:40
• Lost Worries. (Goldfinch60) The people watching poems you write bring up all kinds of subjects. How...
  November 24th, 2021 03:34
• Blood (Depressionofbecca) You describe something which I have to admit is beyond my understanding....
  November 23rd, 2021 08:03
• Life (James Alexander) quote \"life is what happens to you whilst your busy doing something...
  November 23rd, 2021 07:59
• Rainbows (Lynnec008) Well written. Ain\'t that just the way it is.
  November 23rd, 2021 07:57
• Aint it Grand (Mozzthe1) The realism of this post strikes home. Would have been perhaps better...
  November 23rd, 2021 07:40
• The Word (Cbdave) The \'word\', presumably this means words from the bible. The collation of...
  November 23rd, 2021 07:29
• Practises Of The People (Orchidee) The early church Orchidee was guilty of deciding WHICH of the many gospels...
  November 23rd, 2021 07:21
• Linger (Neville) Beautifully told, of emotions contortions as we endure trying times in...
  November 23rd, 2021 06:10
• Be To Me (Fay Slimm.) Unsure here whether this is directed to a partner or to the joy of the...
  November 23rd, 2021 06:07
• One Of Our Favourites. (Goldfinch60) I\'m sure she was with you in spirit and encouraging you to be the man she...
  November 23rd, 2021 06:03
• Swansong for a Skoda Octavia (Solar Impulse_1912) Great idea to write about how attached we become to our cars. I\'m guilty...
  November 22nd, 2021 08:03
• Where Is Heaven (Ameljor) I found heaven is all around us, but i found it when my eyes were ready to...
  November 22nd, 2021 07:57
• An All Too Certain Falsity (Neville) Always aware of the unspoken words I begin to wonder whether the non...
  November 22nd, 2021 06:49
• This Time (Fay Slimm.) Nostalgia and the graceful acceptance of circumstance flow through me as I...
  November 22nd, 2021 06:43
• A Man Of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60) A wholesome envy (not a sin) fills me as I read this piece. Stuck indoors...
  November 22nd, 2021 06:37