Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Cannibal. (Kitty the naughty poet) The voracious hunger of self doubt. Lets never forget the need to feed the...
  November 13th, 2021 06:08
• Pray Keep the Mask On (Neville) There\'s an old phrase about looking at the mantlepiece which came to
  November 13th, 2021 06:02
• The Ex (Paul Bell) Madcap scenario. I like it.
  November 13th, 2021 06:01
• BY HIS GRACE (Cbdave) By his grace we DO SEE death, the maimed, strife and famine (unless we...
  November 13th, 2021 03:42
• Worship Worthies (Orchidee) Yes, worship his creation of cruelly malformed babies, worship for the...
  November 13th, 2021 03:38
• True Love. (Goldfinch60) Yes, I don\'t know why but with age music can be such an emotional...
  November 13th, 2021 03:32
• THE ICE CAPS ARE MELTING (Andy Hunter) We as individuals cant force our/any governments to act. All we can do...
  November 12th, 2021 16:56
• LOVE - A Tender Feeling !!! (Vamsi Sudha) Love, probably creations finest gift.
  November 12th, 2021 06:04
• Letting Fade (Fay Slimm.) Only too true! Currently withering and moaning about it LOL but deffo...
  November 12th, 2021 05:55
• THE TRUTH (Cbdave) Thanks for sharing your obsessive compulsive disorder to reassure yourself...
  November 12th, 2021 05:09
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards) A Basil Fawlty quote \"There you go again, stating the bleedin...
  November 12th, 2021 04:19
• Problems or Challenges? (Goldfinch60) So true and poignant for me right now. The gold of our future lies withing...
  November 12th, 2021 04:13
• I shall not tether my heart to sorrow (Jeremy Leach) Classic poetry. your writing here is second to none. Into my
  November 11th, 2021 17:06
• THEY CALL IT RAP (Andy Hunter) There\'s good and bad in all pop genres.... mostly bad is what i have...
  November 11th, 2021 14:14
• Night: A dream I loved (a girl\'s POV) (Hana randre) Dreams are a place where romance is waiting. Good writing, will you show...
  November 11th, 2021 11:10
• Rave. (Kitty the naughty poet) Reads like an acid trip! Lucky you if your mind cavorts unassisted through...
  November 11th, 2021 09:06
• Festivals (Thekkinkkattil) Family can mean so much, gathering together is such joy.
  November 11th, 2021 07:43
• In Transit (Doggerel Dave) Very impressed with your writing skill and maturity DD. Yes if there\'s...
  November 11th, 2021 07:32
• No Such Thing as Empty Space (Neville) I have been described as both a waste of space and a waste of good...
  November 11th, 2021 05:09
• Shining Brightness. (Goldfinch60) An opening into the forever.
  November 11th, 2021 05:00
• Playing Hooky (MDStone) May days like that thrill you through the rest of your life. They have in...
  November 10th, 2021 08:17
• cosmic colors (Asrealastheycome) Expressionism. Dunno about understanding it\'s nitty gritty necessarily...
  November 10th, 2021 04:43
• Yin and Yang (Rozina) Clever joyful poetry, well done.
  November 10th, 2021 04:34
• Fish out of water. (Kitty the naughty poet) LOL nice one, my first laugh of today.
  November 10th, 2021 03:52
• Musings (Orchidee) Sympathy (to a degree) with the local ministers/vicars for they do the...
  November 10th, 2021 03:49
• Sweet Stupor (Fay Slimm.) Oh yes... empathy. How I miss my days of purpose when to rise promptly was...
  November 10th, 2021 03:44
• Helpless (Rochelle Singer) Wot? no safety net LOL. Let MPS be your safety net... it certainly is...
  November 10th, 2021 02:18
• Waiting For What. (Goldfinch60) Haven\'t we all been there at one stage of our life. That repetative...
  November 10th, 2021 02:17
• THE WORD (Cbdave) Tell that to the martyrs. Really poor logic in that last line.
  November 9th, 2021 18:44
• She (James Alexander) Reminds me of finding out about love and relationships in my youth.
  November 9th, 2021 18:42
• A Man’s Man (MDStone) Very narrow description of what a man is. LOL @ title, very misleading in...
  November 9th, 2021 18:35
• I want to write (Jade Wolf) That\'s a place I goto regularly and write about on here..... so lets...
  November 9th, 2021 17:23
• Trusting Times (Orchidee) Let Israel now say what?? .... oh yes theyre really saying mercy endures...
  November 9th, 2021 12:16
• Rope. (Kitty the naughty poet) Brings back memories of interesting times.
  November 9th, 2021 09:10
• Left A Memory. (Goldfinch60) I hope you are behaving yourself then! Could be a reward for doing some of...
  November 9th, 2021 09:05
• Through The Battle (MDStone) Who can know this but those who survived. The blood, stink, noise and...
  November 8th, 2021 17:13
• No one sees (EthanMac) Because he does not show himself. Many reasons why this should be...
  November 8th, 2021 17:04
• For Theo (Piggystardust) When we are gifted with a special child we are in turn made special...
  November 8th, 2021 16:58
• Fear #1 (Saxon Crow) Visions of a conversation with an oncologist came to mind.
  November 8th, 2021 10:03
• The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay (Garth Rakumakoe) A sad tale indeed. But there\'s a message one can read apart from the...
  November 8th, 2021 07:35
• The Advance of Mankind (Classicmister) This needs to be said time and again before we truly see actions making a...
  November 8th, 2021 07:21
• Tuesdays (Meg) Welcome to the club called humanity and learning to accept that...
  November 8th, 2021 06:15
• Blue Eyes (Lorna) The one who was \"the love of your life\" will stay in your heart, your...
  November 8th, 2021 06:02
• Mr& Mrs Smith (Paul Bell) Ouch! Forbidden love. Says it all. What a poem!. Smacks you in the nuts...
  November 8th, 2021 05:51
• Rosy shades (Spilleronsheet) It occurred to me that the writer had \"begun to see through a glass...
  November 8th, 2021 05:47
• Power, Presence, Prosperity (Orchidee) Grrrr so many questions and failures come to mind..... why do u keep...
  November 8th, 2021 05:27
• Cooking Curse. (Goldfinch60) I know where you are coming from. Back in the days of 2020 shielding I was...
  November 8th, 2021 05:24
• Time Traveler. (Doggerel Dave) Intrigued by your poem i discovered my own ignorance. Never had that...
  November 8th, 2021 04:54
• Green (Lorna) Lovely wordplay surrounding this metaphor of young love.
  November 7th, 2021 11:24
• I am the light, in my darkness (Shearonder1987) If you are the light then why have you got darkness? Contradiction LOL Or...
  November 7th, 2021 08:19
• Helpless (Rochelle Singer) Too true, I have so many unfinished, half baked poems/ideas on my hard...
  November 7th, 2021 06:33
• Playground Politics. (Kitty the naughty poet) Too easy for some to point a critical finger and stir divisions. Human...
  November 7th, 2021 06:19
• The Fridge (Paul Bell) Executive house shares never work peacefully for long.. LOL. Each...
  November 7th, 2021 05:09
• Muse in my view (Poetic Dan) Great pictures Dan, That little beauty is growing up fast... now to the...
  November 7th, 2021 04:28
• Help Be Here (Orchidee) Where\'s god\'s justice when he - the omnipotent creater of mankind and...
  November 7th, 2021 04:23
• Tears (The_silly_poet) Shedding of tears and the natural sobbing which often accompanies is a...
  November 7th, 2021 04:18
• Walking endlessly (Spilleronsheet) Somewhere..... when something is calling you and it resounds deep...
  November 7th, 2021 04:04
• The Red Tree (Lorna) When a thing of beauty fills us up and brings out of us the most joyous...
  November 7th, 2021 03:54
• IN THE PRESENCE OF THE LORD (Cbdave) Yeah well if you can only stretch to believing in ancient mumbo jumbo from...
  November 7th, 2021 02:40
• Flowers In The Rain (Jayasree) Such a contrast for us humans you\'ve brought together here. For it\'s...
  November 7th, 2021 02:34
• Day Of Rubies. (Goldfinch60) You show us just what a diamond you are time and again Andy. You\'re...
  November 7th, 2021 02:30
• Will You? (Mafaye) Beautiful poetry. Where have you been hiding? Welcome to MPS. We are a...
  November 7th, 2021 01:54
• I went for a drink with an Irishman (Saxon Crow) Great stuff, you sure know how to write entertaining poetry. To be sure.
  November 6th, 2021 06:41
• Passing By (Paul Bell) LOL goof fun write, yes i enjoyed reading this.
  November 6th, 2021 04:55
• No Chips! (Goldfinch60) You\'re obviously a wealthy man, well done. Do you prefer straight cut...
  November 6th, 2021 03:03
• ALL YOU NEED (Florence Red) WE each have a guardian angel by our side. But in times of extreme need,...
  November 5th, 2021 09:22
• What\'s Beautiful (Mystic_isles) Join the club of the majority on this planet and you are welcomed with all...
  November 5th, 2021 09:19
• Senses (Rebmasters) Can\'t you sense the presence of those who did before what we do today in...
  November 5th, 2021 09:15
• Greed. (Kitty the naughty poet) Good stuff, could do with saying this stuff more often. Inequality rules...
  November 5th, 2021 09:12
• The Sand And The Sea (Paul Bell) Timeless imagery in this cunningly composed masterpiece which I read...
  November 5th, 2021 07:07
• Linked (Fay Slimm.) A phot of babe in arms of mother stood next to grandmother and again great...
  November 5th, 2021 07:04
• Little Jack Frost (Saxon Crow) Oh, good one Saxon. A classic from your very own fingers, so well...
  November 5th, 2021 06:41
• Come Outside. (Goldfinch60) I was ten when my older sister of sixteen taught me to jive and took me to...
  November 5th, 2021 06:37
• I love Poetry. (The BlackShakespeare) LOL @ you. For a lover of poetry your profile shows you don\'t read many...
  November 4th, 2021 17:36
• Live to tell the tale (Jeremy Leach) Nice one. I think a lot of us older poets here try to pass on a bit of...
  November 4th, 2021 15:28
• Pumpkin pie (Crowns4Christ) Cute! You very lucky person.
  November 4th, 2021 15:26
• Comedian-mix. (Kitty the naughty poet) I agree with everything you have written here, which is rare and makes me...
  November 4th, 2021 11:42
• Cupiditates Spina (Charles_newOwner) Remarkably well written considering your age (sorry if that sounds...
  November 4th, 2021 10:32
• New Lovers (Christopher Way) Time to \'man-up\' and let her know... which is the route to finding out...
  November 4th, 2021 08:25
• Wake (Saxon Crow) A truism. I rarely see a funeral procession though i live quite close to...
  November 4th, 2021 07:08
• Fireflies (James Alexander) I love flights of fantasy, I write them in thoughts of my grandchildren......
  November 4th, 2021 06:44
• Little girl (Meg) Mind bending torment of regret. How life can shape us into places we dont...
  November 4th, 2021 06:41
• The Vultures Dance (Paul Bell) Realism of the disgusting state which war really is. Lets not kid...
  November 4th, 2021 06:36
• Hope For All Souls (Orchidee) Men have such need to cast a new spin on this old tale. So much so that...
  November 4th, 2021 06:31
• LIVING FOR THE LORD (Cbdave) Ooh you must be so much holier than me. Or is it your OCD showing up.
  November 4th, 2021 06:22
• 3 a.m. (HannahElisabeth) Such drama! Really enjoyed this suspenseful sad tale. A story being told...
  November 4th, 2021 06:20
• I am here! (IAli) And nobody can do better than their best. Long may your best be good...
  November 4th, 2021 06:15
• Diwali - Festival of Lights !!! (Vamsi Sudha) Joyful reading. Its good to see joy in celebration.
  November 4th, 2021 06:13
• Happy Diwali 2021 (SureshG) Nice warm and cheerful poetry. If not for the pandemic (its not over) i\'d...
  November 4th, 2021 06:12
• Brook-Song (Fay Slimm.) I remember this lovely metaphor from a while back. Still as potent as it...
  November 4th, 2021 05:13
• Kitten (Neville) Someones been eating their kellogs frosties i see. Kittens climbing up...
  November 4th, 2021 05:10
• Madly Flowering. (Goldfinch60) Whats all the fuss about glow ball warming, I havent even got a glow ball...
  November 4th, 2021 05:03
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards) Ah yes, the essence of a god who created the world in 6 days but isn\'t...
  November 4th, 2021 05:00
• Serene Servers (Orchidee) The last line killed it for me..... children born handicapped - innocents...
  November 3rd, 2021 15:10
• It’s okay to not be okay (Spilleronsheet) It\'s always OK to be not OK so long as we aren\'t hurting anyone. You...
  November 3rd, 2021 15:06
• I am! (The BlackShakespeare) Me too, but my god didn\'t come from a book that was written by men when...
  November 3rd, 2021 14:58
• Year\'s Yield. (Fay Slimm.) You took my thoughts to the life of and living as a field mouse....
  November 3rd, 2021 12:01
• Shy (Neville) Nights in white satin..... Well, better late than never. The things...
  November 3rd, 2021 11:53
• What Traffic? (Goldfinch60) Since lockdown there seems to be less traffic.... people working from...
  November 3rd, 2021 11:49
• Caged Illusions (Sketchy_soul) I read your author\'s comments first and then the poem. Having lived...
  November 2nd, 2021 12:42