Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Trusting Times (Orchidee)
Let Israel now say what?? .... oh yes theyre really saying mercy endures...
November 9th, 2021 12:16 - Rope. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Brings back memories of interesting times.
November 9th, 2021 09:10 - Left A Memory. (Goldfinch60)
I hope you are behaving yourself then! Could be a reward for doing some of...
November 9th, 2021 09:05 - Through The Battle (MDStone)
Who can know this but those who survived. The blood, stink, noise and...
November 8th, 2021 17:13 - No one sees (EthanMac)
Because he does not show himself.
Many reasons why this should be...
November 8th, 2021 17:04 - For Theo (Piggystardust)
When we are gifted with a special child we are in turn made special...
November 8th, 2021 16:58 - Fear #1 (Saxon Crow)
Visions of a conversation with an oncologist came to mind.
November 8th, 2021 10:03 - The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay (Garth Rakumakoe)
A sad tale indeed. But there\'s a message one can read apart from the...
November 8th, 2021 07:35 - The Advance of Mankind (Classicmister)
This needs to be said time and again before we truly see actions making a...
November 8th, 2021 07:21 - Tuesdays (Meg)
Welcome to the club called humanity and learning to accept that...
November 8th, 2021 06:15 - Blue Eyes (Lorna)
The one who was \"the love of your life\" will stay in your heart, your...
November 8th, 2021 06:02 - Rosy shades (Spilleronsheet)
It occurred to me that the writer had \"begun to see through a glass...
November 8th, 2021 05:47 - Power, Presence, Prosperity (Orchidee)
Grrrr so many questions and failures come to mind..... why do u keep...
November 8th, 2021 05:27 - Cooking Curse. (Goldfinch60)
I know where you are coming from. Back in the days of 2020 shielding I was...
November 8th, 2021 05:24 - Time Traveler. (Doggerel Dave)
Intrigued by your poem i discovered my own ignorance. Never had that...
November 8th, 2021 04:54 - Green (Lorna)
Lovely wordplay surrounding this metaphor of young love.
November 7th, 2021 11:24 - I am the light, in my darkness (Shearonder1987)
If you are the light then why have you got darkness? Contradiction LOL Or...
November 7th, 2021 08:19 - Helpless (Rochelle Singer)
Too true, I have so many unfinished, half baked poems/ideas on my hard...
November 7th, 2021 06:33 - Playground Politics. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Too easy for some to point a critical finger and stir divisions. Human...
November 7th, 2021 06:19 - Muse in my view (Poetic Dan)
Great pictures Dan, That little beauty is growing up fast... now to the...
November 7th, 2021 04:28 - Help Be Here (Orchidee)
Where\'s god\'s justice when he - the omnipotent creater of mankind and...
November 7th, 2021 04:23 - Tears (The_silly_poet)
Shedding of tears and the natural sobbing which often accompanies is a...
November 7th, 2021 04:18 - Walking endlessly (Spilleronsheet)
Somewhere..... when something is calling you and it resounds deep...
November 7th, 2021 04:04 - The Red Tree (Lorna)
When a thing of beauty fills us up and brings out of us the most joyous...
November 7th, 2021 03:54 - IN THE PRESENCE OF THE LORD (Cbdave)
Yeah well if you can only stretch to believing in ancient mumbo jumbo from...
November 7th, 2021 02:40 - Flowers In The Rain (Jayasree)
Such a contrast for us humans you\'ve brought together here. For it\'s...
November 7th, 2021 02:34 - Day Of Rubies. (Goldfinch60)
You show us just what a diamond you are time and again Andy. You\'re...
November 7th, 2021 02:30 - Will You? (Mafaye)
Beautiful poetry. Where have you been hiding?
Welcome to MPS. We are a...
November 7th, 2021 01:54 - I went for a drink with an Irishman (Saxon Crow)
Great stuff, you sure know how to write entertaining poetry. To be sure.
November 6th, 2021 06:41 - No Chips! (Goldfinch60)
You\'re obviously a wealthy man, well done.
Do you prefer straight cut...
November 6th, 2021 03:03 - ALL YOU NEED (Florence Red)
WE each have a guardian angel by our side. But in times of extreme need,...
November 5th, 2021 09:22 - What\'s Beautiful (Mystic_isles)
Join the club of the majority on this planet and you are welcomed with all...
November 5th, 2021 09:19 - Senses (Rebmasters)
Can\'t you sense the presence of those who did before what we do today in...
November 5th, 2021 09:15 - Greed. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Good stuff, could do with saying this stuff more often. Inequality rules...
November 5th, 2021 09:12 - Linked (Fay Slimm.)
A phot of babe in arms of mother stood next to grandmother and again great...
November 5th, 2021 07:04 - Little Jack Frost (Saxon Crow)
Oh, good one Saxon. A classic from your very own fingers, so well...
November 5th, 2021 06:41 - Come Outside. (Goldfinch60)
I was ten when my older sister of sixteen taught me to jive and took me to...
November 5th, 2021 06:37 - I love Poetry. (The BlackShakespeare)
LOL @ you. For a lover of poetry your profile shows you don\'t read many...
November 4th, 2021 17:36 - Live to tell the tale (Jeremy Leach)
Nice one. I think a lot of us older poets here try to pass on a bit of...
November 4th, 2021 15:28 - Pumpkin pie (Crowns4Christ)
Cute! You very lucky person.
November 4th, 2021 15:26 - Comedian-mix. (Kitty the naughty poet)
I agree with everything you have written here, which is rare and makes me...
November 4th, 2021 11:42 - Cupiditates Spina (Charles_newOwner)
Remarkably well written considering your age (sorry if that sounds...
November 4th, 2021 10:32 - New Lovers (Christopher Way)
Time to \'man-up\' and let her know... which is the route to finding out...
November 4th, 2021 08:25 - Wake (Saxon Crow)
A truism. I rarely see a funeral procession though i live quite close to...
November 4th, 2021 07:08 - Fireflies (James Alexander)
I love flights of fantasy, I write them in thoughts of my grandchildren......
November 4th, 2021 06:44 - Little girl (Meg)
Mind bending torment of regret. How life can shape us into places we dont...
November 4th, 2021 06:41 - Hope For All Souls (Orchidee)
Men have such need to cast a new spin on this old tale. So much so that...
November 4th, 2021 06:31 - LIVING FOR THE LORD (Cbdave)
Ooh you must be so much holier than me. Or is it your OCD showing up.
November 4th, 2021 06:22 - 3 a.m. (HannahElisabeth)
Such drama! Really enjoyed this suspenseful sad tale. A story being told...
November 4th, 2021 06:20 - I am here! (IAli)
And nobody can do better than their best. Long may your best be good...
November 4th, 2021 06:15 - Diwali - Festival of Lights !!! (Vamsi Sudha)
Joyful reading. Its good to see joy in celebration.
November 4th, 2021 06:13 - Happy Diwali 2021 (SureshG)
Nice warm and cheerful poetry. If not for the pandemic (its not over) i\'d...
November 4th, 2021 06:12 - Brook-Song (Fay Slimm.)
I remember this lovely metaphor from a while back. Still as potent as it...
November 4th, 2021 05:13 - Kitten (Neville)
Someones been eating their kellogs frosties i see.
Kittens climbing up...
November 4th, 2021 05:10 - Madly Flowering. (Goldfinch60)
Whats all the fuss about glow ball warming, I havent even got a glow ball...
November 4th, 2021 05:03 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards)
Ah yes, the essence of a god who created the world in 6 days but isn\'t...
November 4th, 2021 05:00 - Serene Servers (Orchidee)
The last line killed it for me..... children born handicapped - innocents...
November 3rd, 2021 15:10 - It’s okay to not be okay (Spilleronsheet)
It\'s always OK to be not OK so long as we aren\'t hurting anyone. You...
November 3rd, 2021 15:06 - I am! (The BlackShakespeare)
Me too, but my god didn\'t come from a book that was written by men when...
November 3rd, 2021 14:58 - Year\'s Yield. (Fay Slimm.)
You took my thoughts to the life of and living as a field mouse....
November 3rd, 2021 12:01 - Shy (Neville)
Nights in white satin.....
Well, better late than never. The things...
November 3rd, 2021 11:53 - What Traffic? (Goldfinch60)
Since lockdown there seems to be less traffic.... people working from...
November 3rd, 2021 11:49 - Caged Illusions (Sketchy_soul)
I read your author\'s comments first and then the poem. Having lived...
November 2nd, 2021 12:42 - VIRTUOSO (MDStone)
I like this and the truths contained. It is indeed a warning not to become...
November 2nd, 2021 12:37 - Dreaming (Cheyenne Smith)
Don\'t rush away from now, this moment. It\'s precious and will take you...
November 2nd, 2021 06:17 - A Different Perspective. (Kitty the naughty poet)
My busy mind is easily distracted and I lose the plot so often. Completely...
November 2nd, 2021 06:15 - Moccasins (Lorna)
That\'s what we are i suppose, each of us one drop of rainfall in a cloud,...
November 2nd, 2021 06:10 - Walking By (Krutarth)
This piece shouts \'i love life and my beautiful planet\'.
A poem of...
November 2nd, 2021 06:02 - Unlock (Fay Slimm.)
LOL preaching to the converted here, I\'m everyday weird and try to think...
November 2nd, 2021 05:54 - Let These Words Speak For Themselves (Neville)
Peace and wellbeing is my mantra of the last few weeks and looks like...
November 2nd, 2021 05:50 - Oh woe! (Orchidee)
Don\'t be down Orchi, life has so much to offer. it strikes me that your...
November 2nd, 2021 05:44 - Eternal Love. (Goldfinch60)
It warms me when I read of the love between you two. You are a fine...
November 2nd, 2021 05:40 - Shared memories (Jeremy Leach)
Love in it\'s maturity remembers, rekindles that vibrant young flame. Love...
November 1st, 2021 16:37 - Open. (The BlackShakespeare)
There were great rewards for doing all those things before man invented a...
November 1st, 2021 11:13 - Wonder (Jerry Reynolds)
Those catacombs can be a great and peaceful place to dwell in...
November 1st, 2021 11:11 - Storm Petrel Rising (Neville)
Oi seen some thangs on\'t \'orizon m\'lad but i never seen of...
November 1st, 2021 06:25 - Too Long (Fay Slimm.)
What a delightfully miserable picture you paint today. Immediately I enjoy...
November 1st, 2021 04:51 - Unity Utterance (Orchidee)
A good message Orchi.
November 1st, 2021 02:39 - The Glory Of My LIfe. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m tempted to say \"Right on soul brother\" because i\'m of the same...
November 1st, 2021 02:02 - WHO IS GREATER THAN YOU LORD (Cbdave)
I wonder how often you worship physically or is it just a paper...
November 1st, 2021 00:03 - Believe 💫 (Cheyenne Smith)
Welcome out from under that cloud to the world of living life\'s reality....
November 1st, 2021 00:00 - Into the Night (A.H. Browning)
There are many who have lived through this inescapable tragedy and simply...
October 31st, 2021 23:54 - Multitudinous Marvellings (Orchidee)
I\'m lost mate. Who\'s this lamb fellah, i thought there was a flock?
October 31st, 2021 17:50 - Vacancy. (Goldfinch60)
Well your poetry is never stuffy... until now I like the alternating...
October 31st, 2021 17:46 - Somewhere on a Spectrum (Neville)
The essence of enigma and fascination captured in your fine writing today.
October 31st, 2021 01:47 - God\\\\\\\'s Love. (The BlackShakespeare)
Based upon a book written by men and censored by the church of rome which...
October 30th, 2021 15:18 - The Squirrel (Jerry Reynolds)
Damn good fun mate.
October 30th, 2021 14:19 - BLESSED (Cbdave)
Instilled with fear of god at a young age by christians or just gullible?...
October 30th, 2021 04:15 - Best (Fay Slimm.)
My word, what have you been drinking? There\'s a lot of love in your...
October 30th, 2021 03:03 - smile (Sad Clown)
Yep, a smiley outlook takes rough edges away. Some ppl just see the rough...
October 30th, 2021 02:31 - Halloween Horror (Orchidee)
was that a trick? or a treat?
October 30th, 2021 02:20 - Eternal River. (Goldfinch60)
The spirit of your river combines with your spirit i feel here.......
October 30th, 2021 01:31 - Glad You’re My Dad (Gurleen Bal)
Looks like dad has done a good job, and so have you with this piece....
October 30th, 2021 00:54 - That Made all The Difference. (GershWrites)
Who could remain indifferent to the quality of this your introductory post...
October 30th, 2021 00:52 - Out Of This World (Garth Rakumakoe)
TGhe beauty of love at day\'s beginning. Sustenance.
October 30th, 2021 00:21 - I\'ve already been; (HannahElisabeth)
placing a part of life naked before us dear poet takes a lot of...
October 29th, 2021 05:10 - Poetry at sea (Poetic Dan)
Sounds very much like a spiritual thing which happened to me with the...
October 29th, 2021 04:24 - I Wrote Of You (Garth Rakumakoe)
Lovely flowing loves fantasy poetry
October 29th, 2021 04:20 - Forced (Fay Slimm.)
Oh I\'m so with you onsnug warm at home on blustery c c cc cold days...
October 29th, 2021 04:07 - The line. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Maybe nobody else sees your line.
Or maybe theyre on the same side of a...
October 29th, 2021 03:28
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