Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer (Neville)
That special place all spiritual folk have found deep within our soul. A...
November 26th, 2021 11:05 - Only if (Spilleronsheet)
Reads like the regret after a very young love was halted by parental...
November 25th, 2021 16:06 - Montero was right (HastyLT)
Well keep telling us about your climb. Please bear in mind, from...
November 25th, 2021 11:50 - Thank you (Saxon Crow)
Well one might think this is all about your father but it can\'t be cos...
November 25th, 2021 11:48 - Anchored (Fay Slimm.)
Hmmm... led to some deep thinking.
Like an old ship of many...
November 25th, 2021 05:18 - The Last Waltz (Paul Bell)
WOW! It begs the question.... who has the greatest loss..... the man in...
November 25th, 2021 04:30 - Exalted (Cbdave)
LOL your OCD is showing again. I see you\'re still not reading other...
November 25th, 2021 04:00 - Solitude Acrostic (Goldfinch60)
Soilitude, that much misunderstood word. Solidity of will and purpose...
November 25th, 2021 03:52 - An Unmistakable She (Neville)
There\'s many a rolling R\'s to be observed on the high street too. And...
November 25th, 2021 03:49 - Come Into My web (Paul Bell)
Ah, brought to mind the mother-in-law. She could be lethal even with the...
November 24th, 2021 13:35 - Unfathomed (Fay Slimm.)
Admire... I\'m in awe at the dawn\'s unique beauty each day (when I get to...
November 24th, 2021 08:18 - Lift God’s Standard (Cbdave)
Lord? Who is King? Such silly languge christians use.
November 24th, 2021 04:34 - Ma Petit Serviette (Neville)
I like the way you tease my mind in your recent poetry..... did they,...
November 24th, 2021 03:49 - Baby Boomer Birth (Rozina)
Us computer savvy oldies aren\'t as daft as they think.
November 24th, 2021 03:40 - Lost Worries. (Goldfinch60)
The people watching poems you write bring up all kinds of subjects. How...
November 24th, 2021 03:34 - Blood (Depressionofbecca)
You describe something which I have to admit is beyond my understanding....
November 23rd, 2021 08:03 - Life (James Alexander)
quote \"life is what happens to you whilst your busy doing something...
November 23rd, 2021 07:59 - Rainbows (Lynnec008)
Well written. Ain\'t that just the way it is.
November 23rd, 2021 07:57 - Aint it Grand (Mozzthe1)
The realism of this post strikes home. Would have been perhaps better...
November 23rd, 2021 07:40 - The Word (Cbdave)
The \'word\', presumably this means words from the bible. The collation of...
November 23rd, 2021 07:29 - Practises Of The People (Orchidee)
The early church Orchidee was guilty of deciding WHICH of the many gospels...
November 23rd, 2021 07:21 - Linger (Neville)
Beautifully told, of emotions contortions as we endure trying times in...
November 23rd, 2021 06:10 - Be To Me (Fay Slimm.)
Unsure here whether this is directed to a partner or to the joy of the...
November 23rd, 2021 06:07 - One Of Our Favourites. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m sure she was with you in spirit and encouraging you to be the man she...
November 23rd, 2021 06:03 - Swansong for a Skoda Octavia (Solar Impulse_1912)
Great idea to write about how attached we become to our cars. I\'m guilty...
November 22nd, 2021 08:03 - Where Is Heaven (Ameljor)
I found heaven is all around us, but i found it when my eyes were ready to...
November 22nd, 2021 07:57 - An All Too Certain Falsity (Neville)
Always aware of the unspoken words I begin to wonder whether the non...
November 22nd, 2021 06:49 - This Time (Fay Slimm.)
Nostalgia and the graceful acceptance of circumstance flow through me as I...
November 22nd, 2021 06:43 - A Man Of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60)
A wholesome envy (not a sin) fills me as I read this piece. Stuck indoors...
November 22nd, 2021 06:37 - The Earworm….. (Doggerel Dave)
Cor Blimey cobbah. I agree with your sentiments. Jazz is a worthy...
November 22nd, 2021 06:32 - Late night (Spilleronsheet)
The lonesome blues playing on ones mind is never a way to be at peace with...
November 21st, 2021 11:02 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (1 - 3) (Michael Edwards)
I swear that bat is wearing mascara.
Three gems of wisdom.
November 21st, 2021 06:05 - Spellbound (Fay Slimm.)
Deep feelings in virtual relationships are a fools game. I\'ve been that...
November 21st, 2021 06:03 - Don\'t Think Too Much. (Goldfinch60)
OMG you\'ve described my mum to a tee. What a worrier she was. I think she...
November 21st, 2021 05:58 - An All Too Familiar Modus (Neville)
You\'ve been reading my diaries again Neville.
November 21st, 2021 05:55 - Will It Always Be Like This? (Izzyb471)
Maybe everyone is similar to your description behind their facade. But...
November 20th, 2021 13:11 - I’m the problem (Hurtbyherdad0316)
Too long.
November 20th, 2021 13:06 - Plodding A Path (Orchidee)
Where you getting these promises and guidance (you mention them) from. Is...
November 20th, 2021 12:57 - Brenda (Paul Bell)
Bloody good laugh, thank you.
November 20th, 2021 11:00 - Sensuality (Fay Slimm.)
mmmm sensuality indeed but.... i recall asa 16 year old accompanying my...
November 20th, 2021 10:53 - The Wreck of Our Lady (Neville)
Aye but her torn and buckled plates have such tales to tell as they warn...
November 20th, 2021 08:59 - What Failing Memory? (Goldfinch60)
Scorched earth policy? Tree???? What tree???
November 20th, 2021 08:57 - Love is Selfless (Gunnar)
Find unconditional love as shown by mother to child. No greater love is...
November 19th, 2021 11:23 - MY ACCOUNT (Abu Wafi Palathumkara)
Ever heard of giving money away to a good cause? i.e. a charity.
November 19th, 2021 11:21 - Spring (James Alexander)
Well I hope that by the time springtime sings into our souls you feel...
November 19th, 2021 11:19 - Dead (Depressionofbecca)
Let it out and tell the world. The MPS world here will listen and seek...
November 19th, 2021 11:17 - Today. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Super first person conversational writing to carry this important message....
November 19th, 2021 11:14 - The invisible hands (Spilleronsheet)
Confronted with the vastness of creation, the sky, ocean or mountainscape...
November 19th, 2021 07:55 - You Will (Philwesley)
There\'s such a lot of truth between the lines of this compact piece. All...
November 19th, 2021 07:43 - Never Enough (Fay Slimm.)
One thought says put down that book pf learning and go out there to feel...
November 19th, 2021 05:57 - THE BATTLE BETWEEN GOOD AND EVIL (Cbdave)
What a title you have chosen. Anyone would think that good and...
November 19th, 2021 05:28 - Unsincerely Yours (Neville)
There\'s a lot to be said for a clean and final ending. Often an exchange...
November 19th, 2021 05:24 - Freedom Abounds. (Goldfinch60)
I know that you will have been a strong supportive friend throughout and...
November 19th, 2021 05:19 - Life Is So Crooked (Rozina)
Good positive writing. Uplifting.
November 18th, 2021 09:23 - Have you ever wondered? (Belladonna)
You have a delightful natural talent and the content or message contained...
November 18th, 2021 09:20 - Two squirrels (Spilleronsheet)
You certainly capture here how squirrels always seem to be joyous...
November 18th, 2021 09:08 - The Quick-Fix Manual To Keeping a Woman Happy. (Gunnar)
A timely message indeed but you forgot to mention..... most of the time...
November 18th, 2021 06:09 - Who (Fay Slimm.)
Well I gues the answer to the question Who? is our Fay, lover of the...
November 18th, 2021 05:23 - WALK WITH JESUS (Cbdave)
Oh my, one minute mankind is paying for the sin of killing jesus the next...
November 18th, 2021 04:27 - Narcissistically Speaking (Neville)
I knew her for about eighteen months of one 2 one. Finally i walked away...
November 18th, 2021 04:24 - The Greatest Gift. (Goldfinch60)
I never count the cost, it just happens naturally.
November 18th, 2021 04:20 - Prosperous Providings (Orchidee)
LOL @ fear of god. As taught to children by vicars, priests and so called...
November 17th, 2021 11:19 - Clarity (L.R.A)
It\'s good to read the positive in your poem today. A difficult time but...
November 17th, 2021 10:49 - She was Born a Princess / To my future wife (Zemde)
Blimey she sounds wonderful, you\'ll have to be twice as wonderful to be...
November 17th, 2021 10:38 - Dark academia (Nakedheartcxliii)
Left me wondering who is this \"we\" you repeatedly referred to.
November 17th, 2021 10:36 - LEFTOVERS (MDStone)
OMG another christian claiming jesus speaks to him.
\"What he did...
November 17th, 2021 10:23 - AS THE DAWN ARRIVES AGAIN (Cbdave)
i see you\'re still not showing any intererst in reading the poetry on...
November 17th, 2021 04:34 - Magic (Fay Slimm.)
And see how a sray of bubble floating on the breeze bring squeels of fun,...
November 17th, 2021 04:31 - Into A New Day. (Goldfinch60)
The awakening of \'ball basher Andy\' wondering what colours the day will...
November 17th, 2021 04:16 - What a Way to Go…. (Doggerel Dave)
Am I reading, between the lines, what you found so attractive to staying...
November 17th, 2021 04:13 - Just Another Way Out (Neville)
Ah, the secrets of a woman\'s past, who shall know their varying. For...
November 17th, 2021 03:41 - HE WILL SET YOU FREE (Cbdave)
What a poet you are. Your profile shows your interest in being an active...
November 16th, 2021 13:10 - Minions (Fay Slimm.)
Oh my muse, wherefore art thou?
In a state of wholesome envy here.
To...
November 16th, 2021 12:57 - Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars (Neville)
Dress a lady in vertical bars to accentuate her curves. A real prowling...
November 16th, 2021 06:28 - Walking With Trees. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely stuff and I\'m envious having to stay locked away.
November 16th, 2021 06:19 - The First Time I Played Croquet With My Dad (Saxon Crow)
Fathers deserve to win a lot more than theyre given credit for. Are you a...
November 16th, 2021 06:18 - when you are feeling unloved (Jon Nakapalau)
Deep and meaningful when these words fall at the right moment.
Into my...
November 15th, 2021 20:31 - Death (Ntandorh Ngobeserh)
Death is meant for everyone. We are mortals.
November 15th, 2021 18:34 - Lawnsome (Neville)
What the Faik is a faikhu?
Though much more a snatch than a patch
Pray...
November 15th, 2021 14:31 - Searching for Poison (Melellendixon)
Such a well woven tale with a truly worthwhile message contained therein....
November 15th, 2021 14:22 - Dark Desire (Jerry Reynolds)
I thought that was the american dream. Why have so many guns if you\'re...
November 15th, 2021 11:36 - Step Forward (Brei)
Good positive stuff.
Welcome to mps.
November 15th, 2021 09:23 - Untitled (@coffeelcs)
First line of the last verse/stanza says a lot...... for your poetry to...
November 15th, 2021 09:20 - Fallen angel (Nakedheartcxliii)
I guess we\'ve all been angelic at one stage of our lives and taken that...
November 15th, 2021 09:12 - The Wind Knows (Garth Rakumakoe)
The wind shields a flame LOL ... you got carried away there .... and no...
November 15th, 2021 07:20 - Dolly (Paul Bell)
The harsh reality of life in war torn middle east (for example) as seen...
November 15th, 2021 05:26 - Visit to outside (Spilleronsheet)
Cor blimey, you been reading my diary mate? This is the boring life i have...
November 15th, 2021 05:21 - Ice (James Alexander)
A sad recognition of a relationship gone stale where one heart may begin...
November 15th, 2021 05:19 - AMERICAN GUN CULTURE (Michael Edwards)
The republic which claims to be the worlds finest democracy.
Riddled...
November 15th, 2021 04:53 - EXALTED (Cbdave)
PMSL preaching again... who are you trying to convince..... ...
November 15th, 2021 04:42 - Suffering Sensibility (Orchidee)
Patronising crap. Go worship a god who creates babies with so called...
November 15th, 2021 04:40 - Fight, Flight. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Hmmm this is a day in my life. OK where are the secret cameras concealed?
November 15th, 2021 04:37 - Backgammon To Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
Aha, so the cats out of the bag now and saxon is your son.
I can see...
November 15th, 2021 04:35 - Cherry-Blossom Suicide (Nicholas Browning)
Reads like the return of the leper knight. The reticent hero seeking his...
November 14th, 2021 14:38 - i wrote a poem (Beary1112)
Writing our poetry is a self healing, rewarding thing. Do read other poets...
November 14th, 2021 08:42 - THE JOY OF THE SPIRIT (Cbdave)
Something\'s missing if you have to keep writing it to reassure yourself.
November 14th, 2021 03:09 - Soundless Rest (Fay Slimm.)
Such a loss is felt daily for life and it\'s poetry will change as the...
November 14th, 2021 03:05 - Singing With Angels. (Goldfinch60)
Life goes on, up there and down here. Along come events which painfully...
November 14th, 2021 03:01 - For my Father.... (Saxon Crow)
OK now put those L plates away and stop playing \'the beginner\'.
November 13th, 2021 08:42 - The mask (Spilleronsheet)
Mostly loved ones are accepting of the beast within the mask but...
November 13th, 2021 06:13
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