Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• The Earworm….. (Doggerel Dave) Cor Blimey cobbah. I agree with your sentiments. Jazz is a worthy...
  November 22nd, 2021 06:32
• Late night (Spilleronsheet) The lonesome blues playing on ones mind is never a way to be at peace with...
  November 21st, 2021 11:02
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (1 - 3) (Michael Edwards) I swear that bat is wearing mascara. Three gems of wisdom.
  November 21st, 2021 06:05
• Spellbound (Fay Slimm.) Deep feelings in virtual relationships are a fools game. I\'ve been that...
  November 21st, 2021 06:03
• Don\'t Think Too Much. (Goldfinch60) OMG you\'ve described my mum to a tee. What a worrier she was. I think she...
  November 21st, 2021 05:58
• An All Too Familiar Modus (Neville) You\'ve been reading my diaries again Neville.
  November 21st, 2021 05:55
• Will It Always Be Like This? (Izzyb471) Maybe everyone is similar to your description behind their facade. But...
  November 20th, 2021 13:11
• I’m the problem (Hurtbyherdad0316) Too long.
  November 20th, 2021 13:06
• Plodding A Path (Orchidee) Where you getting these promises and guidance (you mention them) from. Is...
  November 20th, 2021 12:57
• Sensuality (Fay Slimm.) mmmm sensuality indeed but.... i recall asa 16 year old accompanying my...
  November 20th, 2021 10:53
• The Wreck of Our Lady (Neville) Aye but her torn and buckled plates have such tales to tell as they warn...
  November 20th, 2021 08:59
• What Failing Memory? (Goldfinch60) Scorched earth policy? Tree???? What tree???
  November 20th, 2021 08:57
• Love is Selfless (Gunnar) Find unconditional love as shown by mother to child. No greater love is...
  November 19th, 2021 11:23
• MY ACCOUNT (Abu Wafi Palathumkara) Ever heard of giving money away to a good cause? i.e. a charity.
  November 19th, 2021 11:21
• Spring (James Alexander) Well I hope that by the time springtime sings into our souls you feel...
  November 19th, 2021 11:19
• Dead (Depressionofbecca) Let it out and tell the world. The MPS world here will listen and seek...
  November 19th, 2021 11:17
• Today. (Kitty the naughty poet) Super first person conversational writing to carry this important message....
  November 19th, 2021 11:14
• The invisible hands (Spilleronsheet) Confronted with the vastness of creation, the sky, ocean or mountainscape...
  November 19th, 2021 07:55
• You Will (Philwesley) There\'s such a lot of truth between the lines of this compact piece. All...
  November 19th, 2021 07:43
• Never Enough (Fay Slimm.) One thought says put down that book pf learning and go out there to feel...
  November 19th, 2021 05:57
• THE BATTLE BETWEEN GOOD AND EVIL (Cbdave) What a title you have chosen. Anyone would think that good and...
  November 19th, 2021 05:28
• Unsincerely Yours (Neville) There\'s a lot to be said for a clean and final ending. Often an exchange...
  November 19th, 2021 05:24
• Freedom Abounds. (Goldfinch60) I know that you will have been a strong supportive friend throughout and...
  November 19th, 2021 05:19
• Life Is So Crooked (Rozina) Good positive writing. Uplifting.
  November 18th, 2021 09:23
• Have you ever wondered? (Belladonna) You have a delightful natural talent and the content or message contained...
  November 18th, 2021 09:20
• Two squirrels (Spilleronsheet) You certainly capture here how squirrels always seem to be joyous...
  November 18th, 2021 09:08
• The Quick-Fix Manual To Keeping a Woman Happy. (Gunnar) A timely message indeed but you forgot to mention..... most of the time...
  November 18th, 2021 06:09
• Who (Fay Slimm.) Well I gues the answer to the question Who? is our Fay, lover of the...
  November 18th, 2021 05:23
• WALK WITH JESUS (Cbdave) Oh my, one minute mankind is paying for the sin of killing jesus the next...
  November 18th, 2021 04:27
• Narcissistically Speaking (Neville) I knew her for about eighteen months of one 2 one. Finally i walked away...
  November 18th, 2021 04:24
• The Greatest Gift. (Goldfinch60) I never count the cost, it just happens naturally.
  November 18th, 2021 04:20
• Prosperous Providings (Orchidee) LOL @ fear of god. As taught to children by vicars, priests and so called...
  November 17th, 2021 11:19
• Clarity (L.R.A) It\'s good to read the positive in your poem today. A difficult time but...
  November 17th, 2021 10:49
• She was Born a Princess / To my future wife (Zemde) Blimey she sounds wonderful, you\'ll have to be twice as wonderful to be...
  November 17th, 2021 10:38
• Dark academia (Nakedheartcxliii) Left me wondering who is this \"we\" you repeatedly referred to.
  November 17th, 2021 10:36
• LEFTOVERS (MDStone) OMG another christian claiming jesus speaks to him. \"What he did...
  November 17th, 2021 10:23
• AS THE DAWN ARRIVES AGAIN (Cbdave) i see you\'re still not showing any intererst in reading the poetry on...
  November 17th, 2021 04:34
• Magic (Fay Slimm.) And see how a sray of bubble floating on the breeze bring squeels of fun,...
  November 17th, 2021 04:31
• Into A New Day. (Goldfinch60) The awakening of \'ball basher Andy\' wondering what colours the day will...
  November 17th, 2021 04:16
• What a Way to Go…. (Doggerel Dave) Am I reading, between the lines, what you found so attractive to staying...
  November 17th, 2021 04:13
• Just Another Way Out (Neville) Ah, the secrets of a woman\'s past, who shall know their varying. For...
  November 17th, 2021 03:41
• HE WILL SET YOU FREE (Cbdave) What a poet you are. Your profile shows your interest in being an active...
  November 16th, 2021 13:10
• Minions (Fay Slimm.) Oh my muse, wherefore art thou? In a state of wholesome envy here. To...
  November 16th, 2021 12:57
• Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars (Neville) Dress a lady in vertical bars to accentuate her curves. A real prowling...
  November 16th, 2021 06:28
• Walking With Trees. (Goldfinch60) Lovely stuff and I\'m envious having to stay locked away.
  November 16th, 2021 06:19
• The First Time I Played Croquet With My Dad (Saxon Crow) Fathers deserve to win a lot more than theyre given credit for. Are you a...
  November 16th, 2021 06:18
• when you are feeling unloved (Jon Nakapalau) Deep and meaningful when these words fall at the right moment. Into my...
  November 15th, 2021 20:31
• Death (Ntandorh Ngobeserh) Death is meant for everyone. We are mortals.
  November 15th, 2021 18:34
• Lawnsome (Neville) What the Faik is a faikhu? Though much more a snatch than a patch Pray...
  November 15th, 2021 14:31
• Searching for Poison (Melellendixon) Such a well woven tale with a truly worthwhile message contained therein....
  November 15th, 2021 14:22
• Dark Desire (Jerry Reynolds) I thought that was the american dream. Why have so many guns if you\'re...
  November 15th, 2021 11:36
• Step Forward (Brei) Good positive stuff. Welcome to mps.
  November 15th, 2021 09:23
• Untitled (@coffeelcs) First line of the last verse/stanza says a lot...... for your poetry to...
  November 15th, 2021 09:20
• Fallen angel (Nakedheartcxliii) I guess we\'ve all been angelic at one stage of our lives and taken that...
  November 15th, 2021 09:12
• The Wind Knows (Garth Rakumakoe) The wind shields a flame LOL ... you got carried away there .... and no...
  November 15th, 2021 07:20
• Visit to outside (Spilleronsheet) Cor blimey, you been reading my diary mate? This is the boring life i have...
  November 15th, 2021 05:21
• Ice (James Alexander) A sad recognition of a relationship gone stale where one heart may begin...
  November 15th, 2021 05:19
• AMERICAN GUN CULTURE (Michael Edwards) The republic which claims to be the worlds finest democracy. Riddled...
  November 15th, 2021 04:53
• EXALTED (Cbdave) PMSL preaching again... who are you trying to convince..... ...
  November 15th, 2021 04:42
• Suffering Sensibility (Orchidee) Patronising crap. Go worship a god who creates babies with so called...
  November 15th, 2021 04:40
• Fight, Flight. (Kitty the naughty poet) Hmmm this is a day in my life. OK where are the secret cameras concealed?
  November 15th, 2021 04:37
• Backgammon To Croquet. (Goldfinch60) Aha, so the cats out of the bag now and saxon is your son. I can see...
  November 15th, 2021 04:35
• Cherry-Blossom Suicide (Nicholas Browning) Reads like the return of the leper knight. The reticent hero seeking his...
  November 14th, 2021 14:38
• i wrote a poem (Beary1112) Writing our poetry is a self healing, rewarding thing. Do read other poets...
  November 14th, 2021 08:42
• THE JOY OF THE SPIRIT (Cbdave) Something\'s missing if you have to keep writing it to reassure yourself.
  November 14th, 2021 03:09
• Soundless Rest (Fay Slimm.) Such a loss is felt daily for life and it\'s poetry will change as the...
  November 14th, 2021 03:05
• Singing With Angels. (Goldfinch60) Life goes on, up there and down here. Along come events which painfully...
  November 14th, 2021 03:01
• For my Father.... (Saxon Crow) OK now put those L plates away and stop playing \'the beginner\'.
  November 13th, 2021 08:42
• The mask (Spilleronsheet) Mostly loved ones are accepting of the beast within the mask but...
  November 13th, 2021 06:13
• Cannibal. (Kitty the naughty poet) The voracious hunger of self doubt. Lets never forget the need to feed the...
  November 13th, 2021 06:08
• Pray Keep the Mask On (Neville) There\'s an old phrase about looking at the mantlepiece which came to
  November 13th, 2021 06:02
• BY HIS GRACE (Cbdave) By his grace we DO SEE death, the maimed, strife and famine (unless we...
  November 13th, 2021 03:42
• Worship Worthies (Orchidee) Yes, worship his creation of cruelly malformed babies, worship for the...
  November 13th, 2021 03:38
• True Love. (Goldfinch60) Yes, I don\'t know why but with age music can be such an emotional...
  November 13th, 2021 03:32
• THE ICE CAPS ARE MELTING (Andy Hunter) We as individuals cant force our/any governments to act. All we can do...
  November 12th, 2021 16:56
• LOVE - A Tender Feeling !!! (Vamsi Sudha) Love, probably creations finest gift.
  November 12th, 2021 06:04
• Letting Fade (Fay Slimm.) Only too true! Currently withering and moaning about it LOL but deffo...
  November 12th, 2021 05:55
• THE TRUTH (Cbdave) Thanks for sharing your obsessive compulsive disorder to reassure yourself...
  November 12th, 2021 05:09
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards) A Basil Fawlty quote \"There you go again, stating the bleedin...
  November 12th, 2021 04:19
• Problems or Challenges? (Goldfinch60) So true and poignant for me right now. The gold of our future lies withing...
  November 12th, 2021 04:13
• I shall not tether my heart to sorrow (Jeremy Leach) Classic poetry. your writing here is second to none. Into my
  November 11th, 2021 17:06
• THEY CALL IT RAP (Andy Hunter) There\'s good and bad in all pop genres.... mostly bad is what i have...
  November 11th, 2021 14:14
• Night: A dream I loved (a girl\'s POV) (Hana randre) Dreams are a place where romance is waiting. Good writing, will you show...
  November 11th, 2021 11:10
• Rave. (Kitty the naughty poet) Reads like an acid trip! Lucky you if your mind cavorts unassisted through...
  November 11th, 2021 09:06
• Festivals (Thekkinkkattil) Family can mean so much, gathering together is such joy.
  November 11th, 2021 07:43
• In Transit (Doggerel Dave) Very impressed with your writing skill and maturity DD. Yes if there\'s...
  November 11th, 2021 07:32
• No Such Thing as Empty Space (Neville) I have been described as both a waste of space and a waste of good...
  November 11th, 2021 05:09
• Shining Brightness. (Goldfinch60) An opening into the forever.
  November 11th, 2021 05:00
• Playing Hooky (MDStone) May days like that thrill you through the rest of your life. They have in...
  November 10th, 2021 08:17
• cosmic colors (Asrealastheycome) Expressionism. Dunno about understanding it\'s nitty gritty necessarily...
  November 10th, 2021 04:43
• Yin and Yang (Rozina) Clever joyful poetry, well done.
  November 10th, 2021 04:34
• Fish out of water. (Kitty the naughty poet) LOL nice one, my first laugh of today.
  November 10th, 2021 03:52
• Musings (Orchidee) Sympathy (to a degree) with the local ministers/vicars for they do the...
  November 10th, 2021 03:49
• Sweet Stupor (Fay Slimm.) Oh yes... empathy. How I miss my days of purpose when to rise promptly was...
  November 10th, 2021 03:44
• Helpless (Rochelle Singer) Wot? no safety net LOL. Let MPS be your safety net... it certainly is...
  November 10th, 2021 02:18
• Waiting For What. (Goldfinch60) Haven\'t we all been there at one stage of our life. That repetative...
  November 10th, 2021 02:17
• THE WORD (Cbdave) Tell that to the martyrs. Really poor logic in that last line.
  November 9th, 2021 18:44
• She (James Alexander) Reminds me of finding out about love and relationships in my youth.
  November 9th, 2021 18:42
• A Man’s Man (MDStone) Very narrow description of what a man is. LOL @ title, very misleading in...
  November 9th, 2021 18:35
• I want to write (Jade Wolf) That\'s a place I goto regularly and write about on here..... so lets...
  November 9th, 2021 17:23