Comments on community poems by arqios

• The Spirit Immersing the Waters of Passion... (Cellinic) Wow! The drive towards compassion amidst chaos speaks volumes about the...
  December 15th, 2024 20:58
• son of the sun (Rengoku) Oh so many come to mind, Apollo, Ra or Helios, perhaps... LInk (Zelda),...
  December 15th, 2024 20:34
• What\'s My Heart For? (MendedFences27) Feeling that bereft-ness and it does seep into anything and everything....
  December 15th, 2024 20:24
• Be Time full (Cedrick) Oh wow, the gift, the cost, and the punishment of Time- the whole...
  December 15th, 2024 20:22
• In which the Blackbird Ponders on the What and the Why (Kevin Hulme) And we all think without a thought that we know so much and that much more...
  December 15th, 2024 20:18
• Busy A Gut (Tony36) We need more mirth and laughter in our days! Thanks for sharing Tony :-)
  December 15th, 2024 20:02
• `~ Love Is In The Air -Limericks Chain- (Thad Wilk) So there, it’s settled… a dog’s best friend is bacon 🥓 or a...
  December 15th, 2024 18:29
• Demons (Tristan Robert Lange) I’ve been through Valhalla with a corpse with no name… it’s so good...
  December 15th, 2024 18:27
• Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville) But the rug won’t stay up on a stained ceiling! So why not wear the...
  December 15th, 2024 18:24
• Another Choice. (Goldfinch60) Brings to mind the oft worn out phrase: ‘spoilt for choice.’ But do we...
  December 15th, 2024 18:21
• creature (Rin) Interesting interplay here; the dynamic between the creature and the...
  December 15th, 2024 18:18
• Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better (TobaniNataiella) That is so touching. My story is the reverse where Mum got between myself...
  December 15th, 2024 08:22
• Ripped off again (2781) I feel this quite distinctly, technology is the windmill army of this...
  December 15th, 2024 08:18
• Lillian Grace . A Ghost Story for Christmas. (Kevin Hulme) Very Gothic and emotionally gripping. A deeply moving tale of horror fit...
  December 14th, 2024 18:46
• Blind (2781) Very \"extraspective\" of the human condition and the challenges of being.
  December 14th, 2024 18:41
• Seasonal Mayhem (senryu) (Teddy.15) And of late a turkey jailbreak!
  December 14th, 2024 18:38
• Optimist or Pessimist? (Orchidee) Coming or going? Inside or out? Here or there? Neither the why nor
  December 14th, 2024 18:35
• Peace on earth, good will (Sorenbarrett) Like trees planted, extensions of who we are, what a reflection in the...
  December 14th, 2024 18:34
• mountain (Rin) Defiance does not aid transformation it only allows others to witness the...
  December 14th, 2024 18:31
• Fragile (Cassie58) There is such a fragility in our memories and all-encompassing are the...
  December 14th, 2024 18:27
• Today a person begged (Demar Desu) Terrible on either side of the negotiating. Hope it works out for you and...
  December 13th, 2024 21:51
• Give me a second chance.. (Ke3v) A truly invested write! Moved much by it 👍🏻
  December 13th, 2024 21:49
• Once Upon A Time! (Thad Wilk) Extended indeed to the fullest extent it would seem. Lock and key was the...
  December 13th, 2024 21:47
• DUSK. (David Wakeling) Love me a nature metaphor! 👍🏻
  December 13th, 2024 18:30
• Bluebells (Caring dove) They are so pretty and couldn’t help leaning my ear into the bells’...
  December 13th, 2024 09:14
• Gamera taking a camera (Rin) Coming back to life, there is that innate spark that ignites!
  December 13th, 2024 09:13
• Grey Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Impregnable!
  December 13th, 2024 09:11
• Afterwards #2   (Neville) Hunter-gatherer… prisoner-jailer… the chase scene over and after….
  December 13th, 2024 09:09
• Thaw (Tony36) Should everyone meet their specific thawer in their lifetime we all would...
  December 13th, 2024 09:04
• One Out of Five (Tristan Robert Lange) Somehow brought me back to thoughts of the Vietnam War and all other such...
  December 13th, 2024 09:01
• Now (2781) Distraction and struggle are a regular thing here, what with uncooperative...
  December 12th, 2024 04:20
• It Took Years (Thomas W Case) It\'s really kind of a long and winding road, isn\'t it; life\'s journey.
  December 12th, 2024 04:12
• M\"mmm !!! (TobaniNataiella) Sometimes we fill our communication with these words to buy more time to...
  December 12th, 2024 04:07
• The Shadows. (Goldfinch60) Time to revisit that era and make a real go of it. I was toddling along as...
  December 12th, 2024 04:04
• Living Like This (Exorcise) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Modern living is so marked by disconnectedness, apathy and internal...
  December 12th, 2024 04:01
• Dementia’s Cruel Kiss (Neville) That has rammed its way close to home. I\'ve still to process some moments...
  December 12th, 2024 03:56
• The two-headed eagle (Rin) Oh for one clear thought! It appears to be about envy, complexity and...
  December 12th, 2024 03:53
• You May Get a Kiss (senryu) (Teddy.15) Now that\'s precise, succinct and speaks volumes!
  December 12th, 2024 03:50
• This Is My City (Tom Dylan) Reminds me of a poem I wrote once about Chicago which was patterned after...
  December 12th, 2024 03:49
• Undeserving (Sorenbarrett) For me this poem captures the frustration of life\'s fleeting joys and the...
  December 12th, 2024 03:47
• 354 Presents - Doing the Maths! (Orchidee) And altogether they add up to \"CHRISTMAS\" and then everything goes back...
  December 12th, 2024 03:42
• Humanoid (Rin) Inversion is a powerful concept that may represent opposite ends of a...
  December 12th, 2024 03:37
• Mothers Tears in There Eyes (TobaniNataiella) Not many get a happy ending. Glad this one did!
  December 12th, 2024 03:25
• 3: Holy Trinity  (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) At times its connections like these that take us through our toughest and...
  December 12th, 2024 03:09
• Winds Turning Common Men (Dan Williams) So much of misuse of power goes under the rug. Glad that this poem deals...
  December 12th, 2024 03:03
• Raining For Peace. (Goldfinch60) Here, here!
  December 12th, 2024 02:58
• Blackbird (Caring dove) Bright as sunshine! Lovely read.
  December 12th, 2024 02:57
• LIMERICK 133 (Michael Edwards) oh dear... fun but also tragic circumstances... Much enjoyed! On to the...
  December 12th, 2024 02:55
• Mist (Sorenbarrett) I am loving the ephemeral beauty of a misty morning, where the interplay...
  December 12th, 2024 02:45
• Repentant Readiness (Orchidee) I\'ve experienced winnowing on the field at harvest time, now that and...
  December 12th, 2024 02:37
• American Sport & English Poetry (Tom Dylan) There is a richness in diverse interests that attests to the complexity of...
  December 12th, 2024 02:36
• Holding Back the Smile (Neville) In situations of tension and restraint, we all need to retain a modicum of...
  December 12th, 2024 02:33
• Little Lamb (Sebastian.) Welcome to MPS! Poetry indeed is a freeing experience, which leads to...
  December 12th, 2024 02:25
• A Dance With Death (Tristan Robert Lange) Now that\'s a wow! I guess we all have to fill in the hollowness of...
  December 12th, 2024 02:21
• Hot Sauce of Love (Tony36) Something for the wintery weather, for Christmas even, or both.
  December 12th, 2024 02:18
• The rapture! (2781) What a rich tapestry of spiritual contemplation and prophetic...
  December 12th, 2024 02:16
• `~ Read My Lips! ~` (Thad Wilk) Now we know who\'s boss! Repeating phrases like \"Don\'t try that pup\"...
  December 12th, 2024 02:10
• Martha (Cassie58) Hey Cassie! Such an ephemeral nature of life and memory, and the way...
  December 12th, 2024 02:04
• Tomorrow (Neil Higgins) Exudes an ethereal and uplifting quality, evoking a sense of journey and...
  December 12th, 2024 02:01
• Charity Rose (Kevin Hulme) Oh of her nature so fleeting and insincere affection! The poem as a whole...
  December 12th, 2024 01:56
• Not enough colours (David Wakeling) I agree! There are so many different colourful things to colour in!
  December 12th, 2024 01:50
• Expose\' (Kurt Philip Behm) I could hear the final screams “Mission abort! Mission abort!”
  December 10th, 2024 19:47
• Not Special (Joesph Kwolski) A sobering message that keeps us grounded and levelled together.
  December 10th, 2024 06:53
• a lifeless man (Joesph Kwolski) Welcome to MPS!
  December 10th, 2024 06:51
• Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head) (TobaniNataiella) I find writing gives this voices a venue to speak their piece thereby...
  December 10th, 2024 05:37
• Words of the prophets (Sorenbarrett) Poets often fall under the category of drunken buffoons… and I don’t...
  December 10th, 2024 05:33
• Transitory Existence (Eugene S.) A tranquil exploration that is poignant and thought-provoking. It reminds...
  December 10th, 2024 05:31
• Reading Poetry (Tom Dylan) And once again and yet again. A position that I shift toward every chance...
  December 10th, 2024 05:25
• The Gods of Sydney Town. (David Wakeling) Been there, done that, oh so glad to be rid of grease and grass stains...
  December 10th, 2024 05:23
• Reflections Of Pissmas (Teddy.15) Christmas Day is quite a different sort of hangover, dusted with cinnamon...
  December 10th, 2024 05:19
• Strategically Lost (Neville) Strategy some say is half the game!
  December 10th, 2024 05:17
• Living in Epicaricacy (Demar Desu) Powerful in its brevity!
  December 10th, 2024 05:16
• If I Loved (Kevin Hulme) Some may even agree that unrequitedness is the true litmus test of genuine...
  December 10th, 2024 05:15
• Driving Ambition (Cassie58) The scale of such thoughts and processes are of a magnitude that takes...
  December 10th, 2024 05:14
• Words in Vain (Mr. Not) That type of interaction/person can be superbly annoying!
  December 9th, 2024 20:36
• ~> Ralphie Gets Even! ( Monorhyme ) (Thad Wilk) So you got a jealous one there. Lucky he just got his shots! We had a...
  December 9th, 2024 20:29
• Come On, Then! Do You Want Some? (Mutley Ravishes) A whole trove of meaning and existential intent in a grove of fun verse!
  December 9th, 2024 20:26
• The Last (Thomas W Case) My sentiments exactly. One of the toughest and most persistent questions...
  December 9th, 2024 20:25
• My Heart (Tony36) Now that brings so much to the awareness of connectedness. Moving...
  December 9th, 2024 20:24
• The Endless Spectator (Tristan Robert Lange) It still has its dark sparkle!
  December 9th, 2024 20:22
• christmas song (Jim56) The simple joys and pure traditions of Christmas is what brings its magic,...
  December 9th, 2024 07:32
• Granny (2781) Every town’s got one of those! Fortunate for you (or not so much) it...
  December 9th, 2024 06:45
• The Changes After 2020? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I can only agree. A clue too is how our referring to time seems off by 2...
  December 9th, 2024 06:20
• Paternity Test (Tom Dylan) Then loosens out the real opinions once the drinks have had their way.
  December 9th, 2024 06:18
• Holy beast (Rin) We can always try… and have tried and most possibly will continue to
  December 9th, 2024 06:16
• Extraordinary Unearth (Teddy.15) Ooh, nice one! 👍🏻 Right between the eyes 🎯
  December 9th, 2024 06:12
• Temple Message (Orchidee) Imagine the poet being struck dumb, 😱
  December 9th, 2024 06:08
• We are not in Control (Ad Man) (TobaniNataiella) The spinner of tales, the town crier corrupted; bought out by those who...
  December 9th, 2024 05:53
• Sailing To Peace Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) It used to be that Christmastime was a brief reprieve, now we seem to be...
  December 9th, 2024 05:48
• Rest in pieces (David Wakeling) Yes, sadly, that’s the way it looks. My one didn’t take to the bottle...
  December 9th, 2024 05:46
• Tempus Fugit Once More (Kevin Hulme) Indeed, we tend to stay and hang on while hoping for what can be as well,...
  December 8th, 2024 08:37
• The perfect poem (Sorenbarrett) Ah!
  December 8th, 2024 05:23
• Tornado of Light (Teddy.15) Now that is a splendid twist on personification. Very effective in...
  December 8th, 2024 05:23
• Trinity (Rin) How interesting a concept which shall probably remain hypothetical,...
  December 8th, 2024 05:21
• Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe (Neville) Just been there oh so recently... still fuming... two stacks on the...
  December 8th, 2024 05:19
• Dreams and Nighmares (TobaniNataiella) It would be good to have a nice dream every now and again!
  December 8th, 2024 05:17
• The branches are bare. (David Wakeling) Oh the shift and twist followed by that take off! It got going pretty...
  December 8th, 2024 05:15
• In Amongst The Blackbirds. (Goldfinch60) I saw a trapped swallow die the other day, still moved by it. The poor...
  December 8th, 2024 05:13
• Nightstorm (Dan Williams) Getting an interlacing of themes of fate, change, and self-reflection;...
  December 8th, 2024 05:09
• ~> Our Garden Of Love (Thad Wilk) Brings to mind that old song (now) that goes “sowing the seeds of...
  December 7th, 2024 15:22