Comments on community poems by arqios
- I Was Not Born a Ghost (The Eternal Cry of the Unbroken) (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Here is a cry carved from the marrow of history; a poetic reckoning with...
June 23rd, 2025 03:11 - Mrs Bonnie Mae Clutter. (David Wakeling)
A poem, raw and unforgiving; told with blunt rhythm and ghost-heavy...
June 23rd, 2025 03:08 - The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
A marvellous entry in your growing anthologyโa piece that rustles with...
June 23rd, 2025 03:04 - The 9 o\'clock News (Mutley Ravishes)
This poem\'s got a deadpan charmโabsurdity delivered with the calm...
June 23rd, 2025 03:00 - Marriage Advice For Men (Chuckles Week Part 1). (Poetic Licence)
Your humour is quite a feature of your personality and writing. This...
June 23rd, 2025 02:42 - DREAM OF SARA (Nephilim56)
This poem drips with memory and longing, soaked in the atmosphere of a...
June 23rd, 2025 02:39 - Dreams beyond the cage (Elizabeth Ross 4)
Welcome to MPS ๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 23:51 - Monรณlogo del Viento (Aravena B.)
Welcome to MPS๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 22nd, 2025 15:29 - The Flash (Jerry Reynolds)
Beautiful movement here Jerry๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 09:29 - survive in front of the mirror (Lore)
Welcome to MPS ๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 06:59 - sometimes life is hard (Jim56)
Feel good poem, nice.๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 06:59 - Made with love (BlessedbyGod)
Thatโs the kind of kitchen worth going home to! ๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 06:39 - The Stranger\'s Truth (Tristan Robert Lange)
Sometimes our strange is not what makes us strangers to others but the...
June 22nd, 2025 06:36 - Campfire (Tony36)
Brings back so many fun memories! ๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 06:35 - light between shadows (Arqios)
Thanks @Cheeky Missy for the Fave๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 05:16 - WHAT IF (Nephilim56)
Awesome sense of humour ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 03:57 - To Jail He Went. (Goldfinch60)
Pass Start and collect $200๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 03:30 - Now (Sorenbarrett)
Indelible etchings on the soul๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 03:29 - Wise Man Say (17) (Poetic Licence)
So close to instalment #20! Keep โem coming ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 03:28 - 4 blue walls (Leah Bess)
Welcome to MPS ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 23:54 - I Watch (Vanna)
Welcome to MPS ๐๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 05:32 - unyielding eyes (Arqios)
MPS is an excellent venue for freedom of expression, as far as it has been...
June 21st, 2025 05:24 - I fell deep into the dark well. (David Wakeling)
What an experience! I was there all along ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 02:44 - Be the first (NafisaSB)
And firstly to show up, good stuff๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 02:43 - The Longest Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
And we have our shortest day today! Polar opposites๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 02:43 - Fido wants to know (Orchidee)
Fun write O ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 02:42 - I Don`t Have To Agree. (Poetic Licence)
We agree to disagree to live and let live and no harm is no...
June 21st, 2025 02:41 - bridges (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave @Cheeky Missy๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 00:44 - Cat and little leaf (Caring dove)
This poem feels soft and gentle, like a quiet moment shared between a...
June 20th, 2025 17:47 - Baby Babyโฆ (Doggerel Dave)
Some people really want kids and go through expensive treatments to have...
June 20th, 2025 17:44 - Rusty Guitars and Runaway Trains (Kaelyn Jade)
Beautiful. Reminds me somewhat of โPhotographs and Memoriesโ by Jim...
June 20th, 2025 16:05 - hobbitual (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave๐คฉ @Kaelyn Jade๐๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 15:55 - Campfire (Tony36)
First day of Sumner! Camping ๐๏ธ and outdoorsy stuff all around...
June 20th, 2025 07:39 - Will (John Prophet)
This hits like a chiseled mantra; stark, compact, and reverberating with...
June 20th, 2025 06:53 - A strange guy (Sorenbarrett)
It is like being taken on a wild, surreal ride; a collage of...
June 20th, 2025 06:12 - ITS OKAY TO BE SELFISH TO LIVE IN A WORLD FULL OF MISCHIEFS (Nocturnal Soul)
This poem urges the reader not to wait for rescue, but to shape their own...
June 20th, 2025 06:09 - velveteen quietude (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave @Reynaldo Casison ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 06:03 - While I Am (Mottakeenur Rehman)
The poem\'s narrator appears to exist in the liminal space between...
June 20th, 2025 06:02 - Enchantments of her Pretty eyes (Reynaldo Casison)
This poem has a delicious jazz-like rhythm to it, almost improvisational...
June 20th, 2025 05:59 - Mr Bellmeister catches the bus. (David Wakeling)
Such a tender, solemn, and exquisitely human poem that reads like a...
June 20th, 2025 05:56 - Untitled (RSM0812)
The heart of this poem lies in the vivid, jarring remembrance of the...
June 20th, 2025 05:51 - A MOTHERS GRIEF (Nephilim56)
That would be the way any normal person would feel. Very moving poem and...
June 20th, 2025 05:46 - bridges (Arqios)
Forgot to work on a reduced image to load up at posting. Here it is now.
June 20th, 2025 05:44 - The Longest Day. (Goldfinch60)
A long day is ideal with joy sustaining it throughout its length and...
June 20th, 2025 03:13 - Gloomy Doom heehee (Orchidee)
Good write O๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 03:11 - Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!. (Poetic Licence)
Expansion is seen as a blessed life๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 03:11 - Skating (John Prophet)
\"Figure eight\" a beautiful deliberate symbol of infinity looping atop a...
June 19th, 2025 18:38 - Three senryus about the state of he world - June 11, 2025 (Norman Flagtea)
One could but sigh at times like these
June 19th, 2025 18:31 - Swcond Chances (RSM0812)
The title exemplifies the need for such a swcond (sic) chance ๐๐๐ป
June 19th, 2025 14:26 - The sun wishes to touch the ground (Caring dove)
Much enjoyed ๐๐๐ป
June 19th, 2025 14:24 - One of my most favourite Questions? (Teddy.15)
I have as well! My favourite Martian and the visit to planet Earth were...
June 19th, 2025 14:23 - In Remembrance (Pete the poet)
Welcome to MPS ๐๐๐ป
June 19th, 2025 14:21 - Got That Out (Tristan Robert Lange)
Here is a raw, primal, and defiantly honest poetic equivalent of a...
June 19th, 2025 08:09 - my poetic side (Arqios)
Thanks for the like @Cheeky Missy ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 19th, 2025 08:02 - Dying Bird (Jerry Reynolds)
The opening line is a marvellous doorstep to the poem; and the third and...
June 19th, 2025 07:28 - Without Depth (Frรคnz Mรผller)
This poem flows with a universal embrace, capturing the essence of...
June 19th, 2025 06:36 - robin lullaby (Jim56)
Such beauty is eve4 sufficient to fill our days๐๐ป๐
June 19th, 2025 05:35 - The Eternal Tides (Mottakeenur Rehman)
A poem that speaks to the timeless dance between art and existence, a...
June 19th, 2025 05:35 - The Scarlet Muse (Kevin Hulme)
Oh, what a delightful chaos of wit and poetic frustration! This cleverly...
June 19th, 2025 05:30 - I Dreamed I Saw... (Rrodriguez)
An Ed first attempt, very exciting imagery and movement ๐๐ป๐
June 19th, 2025 05:27 - my poetic side (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave @Soren๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 19th, 2025 04:55 - Where Does Time Go? (Goldfinch60)
Indeed, where does it go!? And thereโs so much of it still coming our...
June 19th, 2025 02:30 - Mammon`s Table. (Poetic Licence)
Oooh, foreboding, ominous and apocalyptic even๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 19th, 2025 02:29 - Marble statuesque (Georgia Watson)
Welcome to MPS๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 18th, 2025 18:20 - Silver Threads (Firefall)
As a child I had separation anxiety and abandonment issues, having been...
June 18th, 2025 17:36 - The poet\'s lament (Norman Flagtea)
Had it senses
what had fallen
surely felt it!
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June 18th, 2025 17:32 - The Covenant of Eyes (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Hey there! Now this applies to all aspects of life an living. We shall not...
June 18th, 2025 17:27 - Of An Unknown Poet (Teddy.15)
And one day we shall all adorn graveyards... I was so moved visiting...
June 18th, 2025 17:26 - Random Thoughts (MendedFences27)
Thoughts of a day, everyday, Phil A. Priceless๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 18th, 2025 17:09 - Still Human? (Orchidee)
It felt a bit frustrating surfing the net for a bit there. Good rite O...
June 18th, 2025 13:10 - still the earth breathes (Arqios)
Thanks heaps @Somam Fagavan for the Fave ๐คฉ๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 13:06 - Regrets (Jerry Reynolds)
Indeed! And quite a collection have I gathered over the...
June 18th, 2025 08:09 - still the earth breathes (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave ๐คฉ @Doggerel Dave๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 07:25 - still the earth breathes (Arqios)
Perhaps there shall still be hopeโฆ.
June 18th, 2025 07:24 - The Unexpected Visitor (Nocturnal Soul)
Welcome to MPS ๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 07:22 - Freely Dance (Tony36)
Sounds what true freedom feels like๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 06:48 - Melanie (Frรคnz Mรผller)
What a delightfully eerie and mischievous tale! Melanieโs flesh,...
June 18th, 2025 06:47 - BALCONY (Nephilim56)
This is the world and age that we live in; a familiar strangeness, no...
June 18th, 2025 06:44 - A Sad Day at the Track (Thomas W Case)
Superb.
June 18th, 2025 06:40 - In the Legs of Loss (Tristan Robert Lange)
The poem evokes much more than a physical longing; it delves into...
June 18th, 2025 06:39 - My Friend (Sorenbarrett)
It is good when we recognise friendships in unlikely places and even...
June 18th, 2025 06:32 - Poetry is My Present (Tom Dylan)
Moreโs the pity for the gifts that are ignored and passed upon....
June 18th, 2025 06:28 - Do Not Be A Beaver. (Poetic Licence)
And for us the walls do come crashing down at the right time an with the...
June 18th, 2025 06:27 - Daily List. (Goldfinch60)
Care, devotion and consideration start with self and with those...
June 18th, 2025 06:26 - Mrs Gladys Allsopp-Jones goes to the Beach. (David Wakeling)
Could encapsulate almost every expedition to the beach ๐ thereโs just...
June 18th, 2025 06:25 - Wear a Smile (Uttara.gokhale1)
Welcome to MPS ๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 06:20 - hobbitual (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave @Cheeky Missy
June 17th, 2025 06:52 - hobbitual (Arqios)
Go ye forth, where burrows lie deep, walls of earth hold warmth close,...
June 17th, 2025 04:54 - What a man is (Sorenbarrett)
โโฆin his word,โ thatโs the way ๐๐ป๐
June 17th, 2025 04:35 - Evicted From Hell. (Poetic Licence)
Awesome capturing of a life experience ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 17th, 2025 04:14 - A Wonderful Day Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Bright way to live each day!
June 17th, 2025 02:10 - The Shining (Mutley Ravishes)
Yes, may Apรณllลn watch over our day, shining bright!
June 17th, 2025 02:08 - where shadows do not drown (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave @Mutley Ravishes you are much...
June 17th, 2025 00:44 - where shadows do not drown (Arqios)
Here shall these thoughts drown
June 17th, 2025 00:09 - The Sydney Opera House. (David Wakeling)
Dear old Bennelong, life for him was not that long. When I was first made...
June 17th, 2025 00:08 - Press Deeper (Mottakeenur Rehman)
The final lines are especially powerful. \"Even your wounds are seeds\"-- ...
June 16th, 2025 21:12 - On Nudism (Frรคnz Mรผller)
A bare statement that authenticity is a powerful force. Whether in moments...
June 16th, 2025 21:07 - The Mule (John Prophet)
I get that awareness is a form of resistance. To recognise manipulation,...
June 16th, 2025 20:55 - The Crystal Glass (Tony Grannell)
Great to witness beauty in these moments. The world moves forward, but...
June 16th, 2025 20:44 - And They Call It Science (Tristan Robert Lange)
Here is the ability to see through the faรงade, to challenge the...
June 16th, 2025 20:40
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