Comments on community poems by arqios

• Little Mo (Paul Bell) Layers and layers! And the managing of people\'s greatest challenge are...
  November 8th, 2025 07:09
• Demons Lie (Jerry Reynolds) Probably fake silver is like the sparkle of nickel plating, which isn’t...
  November 7th, 2025 08:55
• All The Fours. (Goldfinch60) Such a wonderful companion is our memory.🙏🕊️
  November 7th, 2025 08:25
• The Lord\'s Despair (Tristan Robert Lange) Sad how that is how it is with far too many, the lord is their belly and...
  November 7th, 2025 08:23
• Fall Breeze (Jerry Reynolds) superb! 🙏🕊️
  November 7th, 2025 06:38
• Comforting Cheer (Orchidee) Much tidings there as well... and joy!
  November 7th, 2025 06:36
• Awakening (Sorenbarrett) Wow, it felt like the moment of leaving behind the illusions of dreams and...
  November 7th, 2025 06:07
• Blood From Memory (OA Poetry) When we flow the light from hat has turned to shadows also finds darkness...
  November 7th, 2025 05:14
• Paper lantern (FrasMac) Mesmerising!
  November 6th, 2025 19:21
• Walking Into Yesterday (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Superb read!
  November 6th, 2025 19:20
• Mission Impossible (Tristan Robert Lange) One hears a cry of frustration about injustice, wasted chances, and the...
  November 6th, 2025 19:19
• Night (PerditaRose) Welcome to MPS! This is raw, unsettling, and beautifully put together....
  November 6th, 2025 19:09
• A Caterpillar (OA Poetry) Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏
  November 6th, 2025 19:06
• Once (Sorenbarrett) I really liked the way “Once” mixes regret with sharp, surreal images....
  November 6th, 2025 19:06
• Honest Intentions. (Goldfinch60) Hope there is another video that would suit as this one is not available....
  November 6th, 2025 18:52
• Bright Blessings (Orchidee) Good write O! 🕊️🙏
  November 6th, 2025 18:48
• Goodbye Dolly (Kevin Hulme) Brought me back to Yonkers. Fun read🕊️🙏🏻
  November 6th, 2025 00:40
• Empty (Sorenbarrett) Oh boy, that’s an excellent makes 5. That’s a terrible slip up on my...
  November 5th, 2025 23:51
• They came (Sorenbarrett) Oh my! I hope your foot is doing better. I imagined the retreat indoors...
  November 5th, 2025 18:52
• Thief, priest and engineer (Sorenbarrett) This is so clever! I am taken by the contrast between fear, faith, and...
  November 5th, 2025 18:35
• Be as (Sorenbarrett) Oh, to be like water itself. This is probably my present life challenge....
  November 5th, 2025 18:31
• The garden (Sorenbarrett) The phrase \"blood and snot\" stood out excruciatingly to me; such a raw...
  November 5th, 2025 18:25
• Christ Crowned (Orchidee) Good write, O 🙏🕊️
  November 5th, 2025 05:37
• Comfort and Joy (Paul Bell) This one really leans into dark comedy, Paul. I found myself laughing and...
  November 4th, 2025 21:15
• Ways to say I love you, without words (FrasMac) Amazing! And all doable🕊️🙏🏻
  November 2nd, 2025 22:26
• The Robin song (FrasMac) “The Robin Song” breathes companionship in times of struggle. The...
  November 2nd, 2025 02:57
• Ghost-to-be, or not- to-be (Lukeman) Welcome to MPS, Lukeman 🕊️🙏
  November 1st, 2025 06:12
• Instead. (Rocky Lagou) I read this as a compact elegy for regret. The repetition (“dead is dead...
  November 1st, 2025 05:49
• the sound before faith (Tristan Robert Lange) I read “the sound before faith” as a poem about the raw space before...
  November 1st, 2025 05:46
• Devilishly Dreadful: The Croaker (Tristan Robert Lange) This one reads like a dark fable about free speech. Jimmy keeps cracking...
  October 31st, 2025 08:31
• Could Not Afford You. (Goldfinch60) heritage listed, most likely! 🕊️🙏
  October 31st, 2025 08:23
• Halloween (2781) This one feels like a lament straight out of the prophets; its barren...
  October 31st, 2025 08:16
• Solo climbing (Sorenbarrett) This one really captures the stark beauty and danger of climbing, Soren;...
  October 31st, 2025 08:08
• Phoe-Nix (Mutley Ravishes) I like how this one feels like a cosmic riddle: Phoenix, Pyramid, and then...
  October 31st, 2025 07:59
• License Revoked (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) This one made me grin: turning a DUI into a “Poet’s D.U.I.” is such...
  October 30th, 2025 20:36
• Taken Into A New World. (Goldfinch60) Nothing like live music at venues! 🕊️🙏
  October 30th, 2025 20:30
• Rain (Sorenbarrett) I like how this flips the usual idea of storms being violent or...
  October 30th, 2025 20:29
• WORDS UPON BREEZE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This one hit me with its quiet heaviness. I like how the imagery keeps...
  October 30th, 2025 20:23
• The House of Westenra (Tristan Robert Lange) Congratulations! Really enjoyed how this piece twists Stoker’s Dracula...
  October 30th, 2025 20:12
• The Inquiry (Paul Bell) You know, I’ve come to the conclusion that the Sergeant isn’t actually...
  October 30th, 2025 18:52
• The Ghost of Babel (Tristan Robert Lange) I so love this! And I have tramped around a bit to have had an adjacent...
  October 29th, 2025 07:42
• Walking To Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Going to the doctors for test results on my bung feet. Looking toward a...
  October 28th, 2025 05:22
• The warm sun (RSM0812) ...it gives and it also takes away. What a mighty source it is....
  October 28th, 2025 05:19
• Goodbye (Sorenbarrett) An excellent way to perpetualise friendship gone to years. Perhaps one day...
  October 28th, 2025 05:16
• ODD AND ODDER (1) (Michael Edwards) ...and an odd mistress our language is! 🙏🕊️
  October 28th, 2025 05:12
• NO PRINCESS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This is a really moving piece. The imagery of the earth as a green carpet...
  October 28th, 2025 04:33
• Lord Of Life (Orchidee) Good one O 🙏🕊️
  October 28th, 2025 03:33
• Devilishly Dreadful: The Undying Count (Tristan Robert Lange) ooh, so deliciously dark! 🕊️🙏
  October 27th, 2025 07:27
• Reaper (Sorenbarrett) Oh, that struck home quite solidly! A superb poem here, Soren! 🙏🕊️
  October 27th, 2025 05:28
• Rejoicing Refreshment (Orchidee) Now this is so celestially written🙏🕊️
  October 27th, 2025 02:07
• The Mural (Paul Bell) Reminds me of someone I used to know! 🕊️🙏🏻
  October 26th, 2025 14:03
• the corkscrew (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Devender Kumar 🙏🏻🕊️
  October 26th, 2025 14:01
• My Chopin Liszt. (Goldfinch60) Then do some cooking on the stovetop and bakin’ in the itsy bitsy...
  October 25th, 2025 15:11
• Guy Fawkes. (Poetic Licence) What! I missed the cut-off again!? It has to be the time zones. It truly...
  October 24th, 2025 22:39
• Comforter Consolings (Orchidee) Timely, there is so much need for/of consoling. Cheers O🕊️🙏
  October 24th, 2025 18:46
• A Moth (FrasMac) What a moving piece. The image of the moth clinging to the windscreen...
  October 23rd, 2025 20:24
• The Bench (Simply streckle) welcome to MPS🕊️🙏
  October 23rd, 2025 06:15
• The Sound Of Silence Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Like rests in a musical composition, full of meaning and part of what can...
  October 23rd, 2025 06:13
• in the waning light (Arqios) @Karoline —Thanks for the Fave 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
  October 22nd, 2025 12:06
• Theotokos\'s Trap (Tristan Robert Lange) When mystery is caged in doctrine, faith hardens — a paradox turned...
  October 19th, 2025 15:42
• Ambiance (Neil Higgins) Much enjoyed 🕊️🙏
  October 19th, 2025 06:45
• Calligraphy (Priya Tomar) Now this speaks constellations! 🕊️🙏
  October 19th, 2025 06:44
• AUSTERITY BY ANOTHER NAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem lays bare how austerity isn’t just economics but a quiet form...
  October 19th, 2025 06:43
• What is Forgiveness? (Friendship) An excellent read, Friendship 🕊️🙏
  October 19th, 2025 05:36
• Music Can Bring Peace. (Goldfinch60) It can and it has and it shall! 🕊️🙏
  October 19th, 2025 05:32
• Population explosion (Sorenbarrett) A poem that really hits hard as an allegory, here. The rats effectively...
  October 19th, 2025 05:30
• The Drake Havens (Mutley Ravishes) Here is a poem that feels like a fragment of pure energy. It\'s broken...
  October 17th, 2025 08:31
• No give in forgive, no get in forget (Sorenbarrett) A poem that uses nature to show the cost of holding onto pain. Making out...
  October 17th, 2025 08:28
• This Woeful Day (Tristan Robert Lange) I really like how this poem captures the intensity of self‑reflection....
  October 17th, 2025 08:24
• The Price of Instruction. (Friendship) This is close and deeply resonant to me. It really nails the difference...
  October 17th, 2025 08:19
• The Drake Havens 2 (Mutley Ravishes) This poem feels like a pressure cooker! It\'s volcanic imagery and clipped...
  October 17th, 2025 08:17
• Careful (2781) There is much value as this poem balances advice with self‑doubt. How it...
  October 17th, 2025 08:15
• With No Hint of An End (Neville) Amazing how this poem loops back on itself, Neville. How the imagery of...
  October 17th, 2025 08:13
• Mozart On Random. (Goldfinch60) It so good that genius can be shared and celebrated. 🕊️🙏
  October 17th, 2025 05:31
• What you want (Sorenbarrett) I like how this poem flips daydreaming into a call to action and the shift...
  October 17th, 2025 05:27
• Anthems Of My Generation (Dan Williams) This poem really captures the weight of disillusionment. And the way...
  October 17th, 2025 05:17
• Breath (RSM0812) Beautifully heartfelt. I\'m liking how the imagery moves from breath to...
  October 17th, 2025 05:12
• Masquerade (Sorenbarrett) This poem captures so well the way we hide our most fragile parts behind...
  October 14th, 2025 22:03
• Fresh First Fruits (Orchidee) Good stuff!
  October 13th, 2025 00:01
• The Shape of Why (Tristan Robert Lange) Like a cryptic crossword, in the middle there. Excellent device...
  October 12th, 2025 23:58
• S.T.I. (Andrew Deaton) Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  October 11th, 2025 04:47
• Bed of My Beloved (Tristan Robert Lange) This piece is chilling and unforgettable and its refrain of “you...
  October 10th, 2025 20:25
• Peace Promise (Orchidee) Ooh! Saved by the bell 🔔 I was considering posting up a hymn or two but...
  October 10th, 2025 17:00
• Near sighted (Sorenbarrett) Reminds me of that Rupert Holmes song. But this poem is of much more depth...
  October 10th, 2025 16:57
• Better Day Today. (Goldfinch60) Here’s to many more fresh starts🕊️🙏🏻
  October 10th, 2025 16:39
• squoting slugs (Tristan Robert Lange) Agree totally. It also closely mirrors not taking authority in vain....
  October 7th, 2025 07:48
• Some day (Sorenbarrett) What a powerful ending! “Toilet paper,” in contrast to the rest of the...
  October 6th, 2025 19:37
• Two Sevens Today. (Goldfinch60) Happy birthday, Andy! 🎉
  October 6th, 2025 03:22
• Is It Contagious?. (Poetic Licence) Yet whispers linger, soft as morning rain, That kindness, once planted,...
  October 5th, 2025 02:28
• Lost music of the forest (Sorenbarrett) That has happened to me as well on occasion, Soren. 🕊️🙏🏻
  October 2nd, 2025 16:02
• Playing The Clarinet. (Goldfinch60) Nice! Remember to press record some time 👍🏻🕊️🙏🏻
  October 2nd, 2025 16:00
• National Poetry Day 2025 (Tom Dylan) A play of words will suffice, methinks🕊️🙏🏻
  October 2nd, 2025 06:04
• New Pages. (Goldfinch60) The use of repetition is movingly effective here, Andy🕊🙏🏻
  October 1st, 2025 16:21
• KINTSUGI (Michael Edwards) Just beautiful!🕊🙏🏻
  October 1st, 2025 16:20
• gated folds (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Soman
  October 1st, 2025 16:16
• Strange Horizon (Tristan Robert Lange) Your poem really captures that eerie shift from the comfort of autumn...
  October 1st, 2025 07:39
• Shaping (Sorenbarrett) Good stuff here, Soren! This poem turns the act of pruning into a gentle...
  October 1st, 2025 07:36
• Point Taken (Tom Dylan) Hope your fortnight goes well, Tom. Will be here at the ‘side when you...
  September 30th, 2025 18:59
• instant society (Gray0328) No there’s a title and a poem that exceeds its expectations!
  September 30th, 2025 18:57
• Indigestion (Sorenbarrett) Powerful brevity here, dear Soren! 🙏🏻🕊️
  September 30th, 2025 16:05