Comments on community poems by arqios
- Summer Fun (Jerry Reynolds) 
They can’t help themselves🌞🌻🍉😎
August 24th, 2025 07:49 - \"the question\" (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Priya Tomar🕊️🙏🏻
August 24th, 2025 07:48 - \"the question\" (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett🤩🕊️🙏🏻
August 24th, 2025 05:12 - \"the question\" (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave @Salvia🤩🙏🏻🕊️
August 24th, 2025 05:03 - \"the question\" (Arqios) 
There’s a certain kind of writing that isn’t about endings at all, but...
August 24th, 2025 04:37 - Smashed Ice Cream Bars and Microwaved Meals (Cheeky Missy) 
Across this little odyssey of sonnets, daily life weaves itself from small...
August 23rd, 2025 18:11 - Allures in Illusions (Salvia.S) 
A poem so delicate but edged: a warning distilled into three quick...
August 23rd, 2025 18:09 - Mirrored pool of Hermes (Sorenbarrett) 
This ripples with alchemy; lightning etching mortal traces, language...
August 23rd, 2025 18:06 - THE OLDEST FLAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) 
For me \"The oldest flame\" evokes a lone, golden‑crowned fire standing...
August 23rd, 2025 18:04 - Monsoon musings (Priya Tomar) 
These monsoon musings unfurl like the first warm rain after a long,...
August 23rd, 2025 18:02 - Porlock (Neville) 
I like the salt‑soft nostalgia in Porlock, like a postcard you can smell...
August 23rd, 2025 17:59 - Stepping Stones Tanka. (Goldfinch60) 
There’s a quiet resolve in this tanka, Andy; the kind that doesn’t...
August 23rd, 2025 17:57 - the damnedest destinations (Tristan Robert Lange) 
This poem snaps and spirals like a gust that can’t decide whether to...
August 23rd, 2025 17:55 - When I Look At You  (Louiray) 
Welcome to MPS, louiray 🕊️🙏🏻
August 23rd, 2025 17:52 - Change (Jerry Reynolds) 
Black moon tonight! The sky is so dark. 🙏🏻🕊
August 23rd, 2025 07:50 - public square, Grote Markt Bruxelles  (Arqios) 
It’s a bit on the vague surrealistic side but glad you’ve taken it...
August 23rd, 2025 07:49 - The shadows of tyrant (Laurence Thompson) 
Welcome to MPS Laurence 🕊️🙏🏻
August 22nd, 2025 18:17 - Whats for dinner (Jerry Reynolds) 
Everyone is someone else’s dinner, so it appears! 
August 22nd, 2025 08:26 - moreton mirror (Arqios) 
Half of none could be some in a dreamscape
August 22nd, 2025 08:23 - moreton mirror (Arqios) 
Set on Brisbane’s river edge, Moreton Mirror drifts from a simple...
August 22nd, 2025 07:02 - Traps (Sorenbarrett) 
Your poem coils with primal inevitability: a world where hunter and hunted...
August 22nd, 2025 06:58 - The Day I Found Me (Teddy.15) 
Brings me back to my most favourite early childhood story, \"the ugly...
August 22nd, 2025 06:53 - Priest Of Fishing. (Goldfinch60) 
Your poem drifts with the calm simplicity of fishing memories before...
August 22nd, 2025 06:51 - YOU DEPARTED EAST (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) 
Your poem captures the profound ache of betrayal, moving from the false...
August 22nd, 2025 06:42 - Pity, Really Such A Dreadful Pity (Cheeky Missy) 
Steam curling from the mug
Cats fed, leaves drifting gold
Small griefs...
August 21st, 2025 18:43 - Alone (Tristan Robert Lange) 
In the still between heartbeats
A spark still glows unseen
Even the...
August 21st, 2025 18:39 - The Grave Digger (Tony Grannell) 
Soil swallows names
Shadows remain
Hands still ache
From weight of
August 21st, 2025 18:37 - Wind (Sorenbarrett) 
Whisper to roar
Roots torn wide
Her fury spent
Sighs can\'t hide
August 21st, 2025 18:37 - LITTLE PICTURES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) 
Ink can wound
Or ink can hide
Let\'s choose the page
Where truth...
August 21st, 2025 18:35 - Memories Brought Back (Goldfinch60) 
Sun on the green
Echoes in my mind
One against many
And still, I...
August 21st, 2025 18:33 - New World Slaughter (Mutley Ravishes) 
Steel in my stance
Fire in my eyes
One clean hit
Your crown...
August 21st, 2025 18:32 - Simple pleasures (Jerry Reynolds) 
And that whiff can extract one’s soul and sensibilities!
August 21st, 2025 18:03 - Core (Tristan Robert Lange) 
The poem collapses language into feeling. 
Connection isn’t...
August 20th, 2025 16:47 - we meet again, mid-sentence (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave @ Prius Tomar🕊️🙏🏻
August 20th, 2025 06:38 - My brain is killing me. (T Merigold) 
Welcome to MPS🙏🏻🕊️
August 20th, 2025 05:31 - Service Suspended. (Poetic Licence) 
...here we. are waiting for a flicker of return. but health first and...
August 19th, 2025 20:46 - Cold As Hell (Tristan Robert Lange) 
This poem drips with visceral intimacy and emotional precision; love not...
August 19th, 2025 19:54 - Therapists Lament (Randy Carter) 
Hey Randy, welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
August 19th, 2025 19:49 - Wordless music talks (Poetic Dan) 
Music without words speaks in frequencies we forget we understand; like...
August 19th, 2025 19:25 - simple sample (Arqios) 
From lamplight scribbles to flickering screens, our relationship with...
August 19th, 2025 05:18 - simple sample (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Poetic Dan 🕊🙏🏻
August 19th, 2025 05:13 - Is Poetry Salvation (Tooway) 
Your poem reads like a wandering hand brushing through a crowd —...
August 18th, 2025 23:32 - Losing my mind; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) 
Shadows creep closer with whispers they weave 
Tangled in threads I can...
August 18th, 2025 22:46 - Top Drawer  (Teddy.15) 
Got one or two myself, just like it in my abode! 🕊️🙏🏻
August 18th, 2025 20:51 - National Bad Poetry Day (Spencer Wilhelm) 
I’ve looked in the mirror 🪞 far too many times over the internet...
August 18th, 2025 20:49 - Hindsight  (Keeter C) 
Sublime!
August 18th, 2025 20:42 - clarity (Arqios) 
When sometimes it seems too little too late… haha
August 18th, 2025 20:34 - Trapped. (Friendship) 
A tough one there. And the triumph of finding articulation, small...
August 18th, 2025 20:16 - Facing Empire (Tony Grannell) 
To me this poem unfolds as a defiant stand that shifts into lament, with...
August 18th, 2025 19:05 - To the Value of One  (Kevin Hulme) 
For me, “The Value of One” is a meditation on the irreplaceable impact...
August 18th, 2025 19:02 - clarity (Arqios) 
Sometimes you get the niggling feeling that welcome has been overstayed 
August 18th, 2025 18:57 - South of Me (Tristan Robert Lange) 
Superb poeticisation!
August 18th, 2025 16:17 - Goodbye Terence Stamp (Randyjohnson71) 
Rest In Peace, Terence🙏🏻
August 18th, 2025 16:17 - Burning Letters (Priya Tomar) 
Somehow brings to mind Hamelin and a sort of pied piper; surely a...
August 18th, 2025 16:16 - It is What it is! (Friendship) 
True freedom, therein the spirit lifts!
August 18th, 2025 16:15 - Scribed to my brain (Poetic Dan) 
A true inspiration!
August 18th, 2025 16:15 - dreamer (Jim56) 
Now there’s a poem to sit with by the Fire on cold winter nights!
August 18th, 2025 16:14 - Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode (Neville) 
Bird migration is both awe inspiring and reassuring, like all will be...
August 18th, 2025 16:13 - The Long Day. (Goldfinch60) 
That’s always a beautiful end to a long live day!
August 18th, 2025 16:12 - Pork Pies (Orchidee) 
Cabbages are a potent musical vege!
August 18th, 2025 16:11 - Vlad (My Friend)!!. (Poetic Licence) 
Perhaps a reason why poets aren’t quite welcome in their time, one of...
August 18th, 2025 16:11 - What is greatness (Sorenbarrett) 
That is a woeful truth indeed!
August 18th, 2025 16:09 - clarity (Arqios) 
Quarterly makes for measly returns…
August 18th, 2025 11:34 - clarity (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave 🤩@CM
August 18th, 2025 11:33 - Stargazing (YannickM) 
Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
August 18th, 2025 07:24 - LITTLE DOGGIE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) 
Here is a sharp, darkly funny burst of sleepless frustration, using the...
August 18th, 2025 05:18 - clarity (Arqios) 
Sometimes we don’t get rid of the questions; we just learn to live...
August 18th, 2025 05:15 - week in a wink (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Eugene S.
August 18th, 2025 05:02 - Confusion (Dan Williams) 
In a world where clarity is often demanded but rarely delivered,...
August 17th, 2025 23:38 - The Neglected. (David Wakeling) 
Hey there David, good to see you back🕊️🙏🏻
August 17th, 2025 21:38 - week in a wink (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Damaso
August 17th, 2025 18:59 - week in a wink (Arqios) 
Love how each day arrives with its own little cameo — trackpants and...
August 17th, 2025 05:02 - week in a wink (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @CM
August 17th, 2025 04:58 - There is A Crease in Everything (Neville) 
I like how this folds the flaw into the fabric of experience; that...
August 17th, 2025 03:57 - The Best Children\'s Party. (Poetic Licence) 
The Treasure Hunt
Under the gum trees’ dappled shade, maps were...
August 17th, 2025 02:42 - \"our poetic sides\" (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave 🤩@Salvia. S
August 17th, 2025 02:01 - You Recall that Childhood Game? (Cheeky Missy) 
There’s something irresistibly human in how these tumble from branded...
August 16th, 2025 23:32 - 8-days in a gum-leaf blur (Arqios) 
Kookaburra sits on the old gum tree,
Merry merry king of the bush is...
August 16th, 2025 18:23 - 8-days in a gum-leaf blur (Arqios) 
…under half but struggling… a very curious state to be in
August 16th, 2025 18:14 - 8-days in a gum-leaf blur (Arqios) 
Gum-Leaf, gum tree refer to the eucalyptus family of trees. Thanks Bella...
August 16th, 2025 14:26 - 8-days in a gum-leaf blur (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave @Bella S. 🤩
August 16th, 2025 14:24 - Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know (Neville) 
This is wonderfully unsettling, with the pairing of “crab eye stalks”...
August 16th, 2025 08:44 - INDELIBLE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) 
A beautifully framed keepsake in words; memory as touch, voice, and light,...
August 16th, 2025 08:11 - Oscar Peterson. (Goldfinch60) 
A life scored in Peterson’s chords, you’ve bottled the swing, the...
August 16th, 2025 08:01 - Death Wrapped (Tony Grannell) 
Your words cling like lichen to the bare season — weathered, faithful,...
August 16th, 2025 07:57 - Choc`O`Holic. (Poetic Licence) 
Nothing like a sweet tooth! 🕊️🙏🏻
August 16th, 2025 07:55 - Poetic lightning (Sorenbarrett) 
Like lightning through the night sky, your words illuminate the fleeting;...
August 16th, 2025 07:53 - The Open Door (Tristan Robert Lange) 
Stripped back yet resonant, this feels like a manifesto of light and love;...
August 16th, 2025 07:50 - Heart of Relief. (Poetic Licence) 
This is dark, visceral, and unflinching, Natiella. It plunges into the...
August 15th, 2025 20:45 - The Lost Idea. (Goldfinch60) 
A quiet, meta‑reflection on creativity’s elusive nature; the intended...
August 15th, 2025 20:42 - Trek (Keeter C) 
A brief, contemplative meditation on choice, weariness, and the pull...
August 15th, 2025 20:37 - Oh, You Know (Cheeky Missy) 
Whimsical and richly domestic, these paired sonnets stitch together the...
August 15th, 2025 20:35 - To The Wind (Kurt Philip Behm) 
A stark, minimalist farewell; each clipped stanza sharp with restraint,...
August 15th, 2025 20:33 - Sweet Forgiveness  (Tony Grannell) 
This poem radiates healing; a journey from despair to redemption, where...
August 15th, 2025 20:25 - The Descendant of Dereliction (Tristan Robert Lange) 
This sixth vision in The Book of Tittu is searing and immediate; not a...
August 15th, 2025 20:24 - THE NAKED FRAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) 
So true. A Fave 🕊️🙏🏻
August 15th, 2025 06:27 - the cupboard light (Arqios) 
So glad that this came through within its first couple of hours. 
August 15th, 2025 06:26 - Falling for Icarus #2 (Neville) 
What are the chances of a similar theme! It’s one of those myths that...
August 14th, 2025 06:10 - Aspersions. (Poetic Licence) 
That’s the way of things in human relations, quite a range of...
August 14th, 2025 06:08 - \"a former dream\" (Arqios) 
There, the font size has been adjusted👍🏻
August 14th, 2025 06:05 
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