Comments on community poems by arqios

• The Lunatics are On the Move (Poetic Licence) Quite so. Very insightful 🙏🏻
  November 28th, 2024 06:11
• Meant to last... (Noah Malice) As it should be. And still the rawness of having to go through life...
  November 28th, 2024 05:46
• Oyster Shucking - Factory Girls (Cassie58) I could only imagine though on one tropical holiday I was like Rambo by...
  November 28th, 2024 05:42
• We Are Piggies..... (Orchidee) This little piggie stayed at home. It’s angels were on annual leave.
  November 28th, 2024 05:38
• Green Tangents (Neville) A cure all Band-Aid or was it Kool Aid… nah, not climbing that tree...
  November 28th, 2024 05:36
• Best Dream Ever (senryu) (Teddy.15) Ack when the sweet tooth was well and kicking, that’s quite like heaven...
  November 28th, 2024 05:35
• Mrs Bonnie Mae Clutter. (David Wakeling) Huh, 2 poems a day on MPS! I want in! Some histories need telling or...
  November 28th, 2024 05:32
• Jazzy Night Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Ah, there’s that shift! Had Bach playing for most of the day. Always...
  November 28th, 2024 05:31
• All American turkey (Sorenbarrett) Oh, so you know about that shift! Not to be indelicate but even cushioned...
  November 28th, 2024 05:28
• Rosa Louise McCauley Parks. (David Wakeling) Now that’s something. A token, a gesture, but it’s a definite start....
  November 28th, 2024 05:26
• Angels (Doggerel Dave) So much lore, legend, and even cult following in some parts. But logically...
  November 28th, 2024 05:23
• Keep an open mind (Jeremy Leach) It’s the best practice, proven over and over again! TFS 👍🏻
  November 27th, 2024 15:27
• ~> A Voodoo Christmas (Thad Wilk) Now there’s a twist!
  November 27th, 2024 15:25
• Thousands (Tony36) Without the fight, many humans just fall through societal cracks. And...
  November 27th, 2024 15:24
• Labeled (Tristan Robert Lange) In a world where labels sting, Let words of healing take wing. Lift the...
  November 27th, 2024 15:21
• Seen With Sadness (Cassie58) This is so touching. I see a sepia photograph clutched closely in an...
  November 27th, 2024 15:03
• Bold (2781) And that wisdom can’t be conjured up but received!
  November 27th, 2024 15:00
• Silent Poem (Orchidee) Next time we can use a metronome to help us keep time with this silent...
  November 27th, 2024 10:16
• Nursery mantra (Sorenbarrett) Too enjoyable, trying to make out the barbs from the hilarity! Here’s a...
  November 27th, 2024 07:24
• Saccharine Succor (Tristan Robert Lange) Spot on, poignantly capturing the dehumanizing and isolating experience of...
  November 27th, 2024 07:05
• Unreasonable Logic  (Neville) Thanks for challenging the restrictive norms of masculinity and the...
  November 27th, 2024 06:48
• An Unreal Dream. (Goldfinch60) That punchline puts the punch where punches are meant to land! A waking...
  November 27th, 2024 06:39
• The transparent wall (Rin) Rin! You had me at the title! My ginkgo leaves are yellow but these are...
  November 27th, 2024 06:37
• Writer\'s Cramp (Dan Williams) Wow DW, that’ a neat encapsulation, eloquently capturing the struggles...
  November 27th, 2024 06:35
• ADULT FUN (Bobby O) So that’s how you make seventy bucks…. Takes a bit of haggling in the...
  November 27th, 2024 06:30
• Ads (Sorenbarrett) Mmm… quite thought provoking! It might also be interesting to see how...
  November 26th, 2024 07:14
• Dame Ruth (David Wakeling) It scares me and thrills me both to have the last say and to give it to...
  November 26th, 2024 07:09
• Lying & Truly (Neville) How do we say good by, turn away and walk into our own tomorrow?
  November 26th, 2024 07:06
• Death Asked Life. (Goldfinch60) Bam! Now that’s the way to swing a poem to its curtain call!
  November 26th, 2024 07:03
• Upon Visiting the Dead (Thomas W Case) I haven’t fished in forever! Take me along, I say!
  November 26th, 2024 06:59
• KP Nuts (Orchidee) Let Fido have a paw at this!
  November 25th, 2024 12:39
• Love is a Noun (Tharun) At first I thought this would be something that couldn’t be agreed with,...
  November 25th, 2024 06:28
• Forever Thinking (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) We have a tax called ‘environmental levy’ which means we are breathing...
  November 25th, 2024 06:25
• Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it? (Doggerel Dave) Acronyms just mess me up, I’ll have the letters fine but what they stand...
  November 25th, 2024 06:22
• The Sun-Spilled Honey (HarrisHan2k) Welcome to MPS Harris Han! So much in minimal lines and word count. You...
  November 25th, 2024 06:17
• Cricket and Grasshopper (Rin) Bravo! Something to continue where we left off in our younger years, keep...
  November 25th, 2024 06:11
• Team Building (Neville) There is a reversing of thinking on many fronts and the drumbeat is...
  November 25th, 2024 06:09
• Another Day Another Train wreck (David Wakeling) Goosebumps and shivers DW…hadn’t thought about Carriage 3 in a long...
  November 25th, 2024 06:03
• Filled With Joy. (Goldfinch60) Oh and this version rivals the 70s version… if I’m thinking of the...
  November 25th, 2024 05:51
• Filled With Joy. (Goldfinch60) Oh you did it this time Andy! The language, the tone, the cadence, the...
  November 25th, 2024 05:50
• LOSSES SWIFTLY CUT (Bobby O) ‘Absolutely nothing!’ Don’t get me started! So powerful the knee...
  November 25th, 2024 05:46
• Forget Me Not (Teddy.15) A very holistic and well rounded self appraisal and examination! Glad to...
  November 25th, 2024 05:41
• Drip from the tap (Sorenbarrett) Like the incessant dripping of the tap! Soren, this is marve!
  November 25th, 2024 05:40
• Here\'s Looking At You. (Goldfinch60) I love the style and how it sits “on the page!” The atmosphere is like...
  November 25th, 2024 04:46
• Enough (Tristan Robert Lange) Only to me and that is the sad point where a sharedness can be lacking,...
  November 24th, 2024 07:35
• Fear (Sorenbarrett) Now that was very real, excruciating!
  November 24th, 2024 07:33
• Casual Ties (Neville) Some people just won’t commit unless for a temporary link. Others keep...
  November 24th, 2024 06:21
• Old Navigation. (Goldfinch60) Lanterns as headLamps in the first horseless carriages as well....
  November 24th, 2024 06:19
• let\'s kill it (Rin) What to do if the (lesser) cuckoo won’t sing. Don’t put it in a...
  November 24th, 2024 06:18
• Some Things (Accidental Poet) That’s all that we all can really do! Reminds me of that song where the...
  November 24th, 2024 06:08
• Justice and Injustice Koreans (Rin) Hard to understand that cultural nuance from a Nihongo mindset.
  November 23rd, 2024 09:17
• BONSAI and Ordinary talent \'BONSAI to bonsai\' (Rin) Like the trees that surround the Imperial palace!
  November 23rd, 2024 09:15
• hot cocoa (Rin) 楽しかった! Showa kindness park is beautiful this time of...
  November 23rd, 2024 09:12
• Invisible man (Rin) Welcome to MPS! ようこそ!
  November 23rd, 2024 09:07
• Road trip (Tony36) Something I’d do, plan to do and have done over and over again! Lovely...
  November 23rd, 2024 09:03
• First (Tristan Robert Lange) The digital word processor saved me! Actual physical pages always...
  November 23rd, 2024 08:34
• Give me (2781) The things we go through to accomplish a gesture! This would make a...
  November 23rd, 2024 08:31
• Father Stu (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I should’ve paid more attention, we were a group watching this and there...
  November 23rd, 2024 07:31
• Metal cage (Sorenbarrett) A powerfully evocative image. Reminded me of Nana in her last days, I...
  November 23rd, 2024 06:53
• An Elegy To Deception (Ria_1005) Welcome to MPS! It’s a good place to be.😊
  November 23rd, 2024 06:43
• THE CARELESS CARPENTER (Michael Edwards) I suspect it’s a good thing that He was good at His trade, a reliability...
  November 23rd, 2024 06:40
• Kindness and Absent Friends (Neville) What a punch 🥊! If the were edible berries that’s where you’d find...
  November 23rd, 2024 06:38
• Morning Moments (Teddy.15) Loved the idea-filled buttonholes, to be up and away from inactivity and...
  November 23rd, 2024 06:36
• At the Altar of Eros. (David Wakeling) He either was healed of this romantic rejection or he dies still in his...
  November 23rd, 2024 06:31
• Chopin Fantasy Impromptu. (Goldfinch60) Ah, that music! That Chopin that my dad used to play. I wouldn’t even...
  November 23rd, 2024 06:23
• Into the Abyss She Climbed (Thomas W Case) A very interesting case, TWC, makes one wonder about the backstory, should...
  November 23rd, 2024 06:20
• A Psalm of Praise and Awe (Matthew R. Callies) Modern psalms are what we need, nothing wrong with the standard ones, just...
  November 23rd, 2024 06:18
• Personal Paroxysm (Tristan Robert Lange) Pyroclastic displays are both awe-inspiring and terrifying in the same...
  November 22nd, 2024 09:04
• Blast Off (Tony36) Remember to drop in on the Jetsons and give them our best regards!
  November 22nd, 2024 09:01
• Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words) (Tom Dylan) In this day and age it is quite a production to write the way it used to...
  November 22nd, 2024 09:00
• Distant drumes (Sorenbarrett) Reminds me of what I consider a classic with Spencer Tracy as well as the...
  November 22nd, 2024 08:58
• united hearts (Jim56) Written only like one in love can!
  November 22nd, 2024 08:57
• Casual Ties and Other Loose Associations (Neville) Your Muse like Tinkerbell in a lantern has ensconced itself in this latest...
  November 22nd, 2024 08:56
• Ah Sleep (David Wakeling) Smiling through the sorrow and the pain and at times even through seething...
  November 22nd, 2024 08:50
• Who gives (2781) Songs in the night brings visions of chains scaling off and prison walls...
  November 22nd, 2024 08:48
• Life\'s Never Ending Span. (Goldfinch60) Here’s a path worthy of emulating. The span being ever shorter on one...
  November 22nd, 2024 08:46
• Moon light (Tharun) Welcome to MPS, Tharun. Very engaging composition!
  November 21st, 2024 17:12
• ~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme - (Thad Wilk) And on and on rides our Ichabod Crane... and his headless horseman!
  November 21st, 2024 17:11
• What good (2781) Appears on the surface to observe a superficiality of societal norms and...
  November 21st, 2024 06:50
• KP, she say.... (Orchidee) So much hilarity in place of hymns!
  November 21st, 2024 06:20
• Kiss of death (Sorenbarrett) Wow! Jam packed, vitriolic almost, seeping with cynicism. Powerfully...
  November 21st, 2024 06:15
• Amaterasu (Neville) Let’s take a dive into deep waters for a brief moment: Inner vision is a...
  November 21st, 2024 06:09
• The Seagulls over Rose Bay don’t like Wine. (David Wakeling) Yeah, they’d much prefer them greasy chips with chicken salt!
  November 21st, 2024 05:50
• The Literature Of Music. (Goldfinch60) Totally agree! Even know when my vinyls and cassettes have been replaced...
  November 21st, 2024 05:49
• Lockdown farewell (FrasMac) Aye, that’s a procession we are on either side of at varying times at...
  November 21st, 2024 05:47
• A Pirate From The Past (Cassie58) Now there’s the source of indelible memories! The pirate theme’s still...
  November 21st, 2024 05:45
• Bullying (Avi) Standing by her side, I\'ve seen the shadows that haunt her, and it\'s...
  November 20th, 2024 06:20
• Little bird (Sorenbarrett) Now that’s so sad. As a child I’da thought otherwise. Had a green...
  November 20th, 2024 05:55
• The Terminal Generation (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wow, atomic potency in word and image. Alaska and Western Europe is...
  November 20th, 2024 05:53
• After the Army (Dan Williams) I feel that. Over the weekend we met a former neighbour whose son, then...
  November 20th, 2024 05:50
• Sometimes it rains at night. (David Wakeling) Funny you’d say that. It was raining all last night and the mercury...
  November 20th, 2024 05:44
• Snow Of Beauty Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A frigid crystalline hell…. Oh how I miss winter and how I wish for...
  November 20th, 2024 05:40
• Crushed (Neville) …snails in the snow 🐌 what an image! The sentiment echoes in the...
  November 20th, 2024 05:38
• Community - Go Find Yours. (Doggerel Dave) Lived there for 7 years! Another 6 in Tokyo. Same deal. Reminds me of...
  November 20th, 2024 05:36
• Left Hanging (Cedrick) And that is how it should be. True love does not alter but remains true...
  November 20th, 2024 05:29
• A Losing Game (Cassie58) Makes me muse about the disconnect… too many have been cut off from...
  November 19th, 2024 17:21
• INTENTIONS (Tristan Robert Lange) Ooh, “reality analysis“ sends shivers down along the spine!
  November 19th, 2024 17:18
• Pancakes (Tony36) Yum! 🥞
  November 19th, 2024 17:16
• Without a Sound (Dan Williams) This poem feels like a capturing of the turmoil and complexity of seeking...
  November 19th, 2024 07:42
• Culled (Neville) The first definition is a rough enough affair to involve the second....
  November 19th, 2024 04:18