Comments on community poems by arqios

• Letters of Complaint (Tristan Robert Lange) A more mature and proactive “rain, rain, go away…” we do have to...
  April 16th, 2025 07:09
• pot plants (Arqios) Some get it, some don’t; a few are on a tangent of their own.
  April 16th, 2025 06:25
• Redeemer pains through window panes (Sorenbarrett) Brings to life all that ancient history and lore🙏🏻🕊️
  April 16th, 2025 05:47
• Not Perfect. (Goldfinch60) Relatable Andy. I laugh when there are no situational cues to do so. But...
  April 16th, 2025 03:04
• Tick Tock. (Poetic Licence) Time is like a steed in some ways on our life journey 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 16th, 2025 03:02
• Immortal Chortles (Mutley Ravishes) Oh goody, inspired poetry 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 16th, 2025 00:46
• Enough? (Maydanae) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 16th, 2025 00:19
• Like, How On Earth? (Cheeky Missy) What a build up to the third which shines and pulses with...
  April 15th, 2025 17:21
• Pilate\'s Perturbations (Orchidee) Good write O🙏🏻🕊
  April 15th, 2025 17:18
• Lost At Sea (MDStone) This poem will stay with me for quite a while 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 15th, 2025 07:50
• Go to sleep (Tony36) Beautiful as a lullaby🙏🏻🕊️
  April 15th, 2025 07:25
• Here (Tristan Robert Lange) Love the metaphor of tuberculosis which parallels and even surpasses that...
  April 15th, 2025 07:05
• letting go: Anton Ego (Arqios) A film reference no less but for the younger crown and those disposed to...
  April 15th, 2025 05:56
• Who died and made you God (Sorenbarrett) Those that pull of a pretty cry-face could probably fool the rest of us...
  April 15th, 2025 05:36
• Our day (2781) Makes the heart burst with fearsome joy. That Word hovered about the whole...
  April 15th, 2025 03:18
• Change of Heart (Poetic Licence) Let’s keep our lamplights burning🙏🏻🕊️
  April 15th, 2025 03:08
• Loyal Hearts. (Goldfinch60) The exemplar of faithfulness, our canine companions 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 15th, 2025 01:17
• My domain (Angeline) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 14th, 2025 14:31
• Cockerel Crowing (Orchidee) That statue of Peter’s denial was intense and that giant cistern cavern...
  April 14th, 2025 14:27
• Abuse (Tony36) Sad truth and necessary poem🙏🏻🕊️
  April 14th, 2025 09:38
• Should Sleep Spare (Tristan Robert Lange) Very realistic and so relatable 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 14th, 2025 06:50
• Differences (Sorenbarrett) They do indeed go together!🙏🏻🕊️
  April 14th, 2025 05:43
• midnight courage (Arqios) Here we go a writing
  April 14th, 2025 04:46
• Pleasing Everyone Else (Poetic Licence) Mistrusting and people pleasing are probably the first ailments that beset...
  April 14th, 2025 02:40
• TEETOTAL (Michael Edwards) Glad to have you back, Michael. Was wondering where you’d gone off to...
  April 14th, 2025 02:38
• Weeping (2781) Toughest words to utter from the heart and the will🕊🙏🏻
  April 14th, 2025 02:36
• Tests In Life. (Goldfinch60) Some are just unforgettable 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
  April 14th, 2025 02:32
• Cinnabarred (Mutley Ravishes) “Imaginative tracks” are quite what our life vessel is on. Liked and...
  April 13th, 2025 21:50
• Watch Out (Thomas W Case) Good write 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 13th, 2025 20:55
• Dear Miss Austen (Kevin Hulme) So good to have this wonderful poem resurface for some...
  April 13th, 2025 20:21
• Fine tune (2781) And indeed quite a show it is to witness; much of it in the surrounds...
  April 13th, 2025 14:24
• Anointing Memorial (Orchidee) Good one O 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 13th, 2025 14:21
• Gallows (Tony36) It kind of felt like the speaker in the poem went to the gallows...
  April 13th, 2025 07:43
• Words (Tristan Robert Lange) Hellspiring acrimony requiring antigrav! Now there’s a paradigm shift...
  April 13th, 2025 07:02
• song to the stars (Arqios) When in despair, look up
  April 13th, 2025 05:22
• Passing on (Sorenbarrett) Now that has compressed so much in so few lines, bursting with thought and...
  April 13th, 2025 04:12
• Tip Toe In Life. (Goldfinch60) And sometimes we glide forward! 🕊🙏🏻
  April 13th, 2025 03:12
• Wise Man Say (10). (Poetic Licence) Ah is it 10 already! And still going strong🙏🏻🕊
  April 13th, 2025 03:11
• Knight’s Tale (MDStone) Brings me to the opening scene of the film with a similar title, where a...
  April 12th, 2025 22:23
• Jerusalem Journey (Orchidee) Good hymn-poem O🙏🏻🕊
  April 12th, 2025 18:26
• Lost girl (Yazmen scurry) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  April 12th, 2025 18:25
• The Spire (Tristan Robert Lange) Short and powerful. Has a kind of LOTR feel to it as well🙏🏻🕊️
  April 12th, 2025 09:04
• Dear Heart (Tony36) Brilliant work, very inspiring 🙏🏻🕊
  April 12th, 2025 08:13
• A Petal for His garden ([email protected]) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  April 12th, 2025 08:09
• celestial threads (Arqios) The straw that breaks the camel’s back may be nigh.
  April 12th, 2025 06:13
• Seasons pass (Sorenbarrett) It must well and truly be Spring… “everyone” is writing twitterpated...
  April 12th, 2025 05:32
• Adventures of Mary and Harry (3) (Poetic Licence) Real life can be so much more hilarious than fiction as exemplified in...
  April 12th, 2025 05:28
• Gratitude For Life Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A brand new day is such a beautiful thing!🙏🏻🕊
  April 12th, 2025 05:26
• Where The Willows Grow (MDStone) Ah, the atmosphere of poetry! I too sometimes converse with crows; but...
  April 11th, 2025 21:58
• Secluded (Cendrine Marrouat) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  April 11th, 2025 21:57
• Made Manifest (E.J. Waling) “phanein” : manifest “doxa” glory doxophany - glory/praise made...
  April 11th, 2025 20:12
• Great Is The Lord (Orchidee) Good write O🙏🏻🕊️
  April 11th, 2025 20:08
• Tropical easterlies (Spilleronsheet) That’s the power and grace of Nature 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 11th, 2025 20:07
• Lost in the Mud (Thomas W Case) Brilliant work🙏🏻🕊️
  April 11th, 2025 20:05
• Big boys don\'t cry (Tony36) Cry when there is no audience, no witnesses to what was deemed weakness....
  April 11th, 2025 07:36
• Oh Snap (Tristan Robert Lange) Oh the joy and frustration of triggers in our day to day...
  April 11th, 2025 07:30
• Anton Ego (Arqios) The first couple of hours, even 5 can be so slow…
  April 11th, 2025 05:34
• THE OLD NORTH CEMETERY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Always loved a good cemetery visit. Hence poems about graveyards 🪦 can...
  April 11th, 2025 05:32
• be brave... (NafisaSB) Ah, it’s a rare occasion when rain is not happy or filled with...
  April 11th, 2025 05:29
• Scent of the past (Sorenbarrett) They do tell a story and narrate history as well as its accompanying...
  April 11th, 2025 05:27
• Children Have Rights. (Poetic Licence) Haha, that’s excellent… I was the product of a loving quickie, would...
  April 11th, 2025 05:24
• 4/10/25 (Wren) Breathe … mmm…🙏🏻🕊️
  April 11th, 2025 01:41
• Solar Suppression (Mutley Ravishes) Kinda feels that way and I feel like most of us are on the less fortunate...
  April 11th, 2025 01:38
• Unicorn Choir. (Goldfinch60) Oh, mushrooms 🍄‍🟫 are an awesome culinary ingredient; but yes not...
  April 11th, 2025 01:35
• Muscle Car (Tristan Robert Lange) That was my dad’s generation, after the oppression of the 40s they were...
  April 10th, 2025 21:48
• He pulls the trigger (Tony36) Powerful write Tony 🙏🏻🕊
  April 10th, 2025 09:05
• Shellf Life (MDStone) Brings to mind the shells 🐚 hermit crabs vacate and move into, they...
  April 10th, 2025 06:48
• d a n c e (Arqios) Thanks Mutley for the fave🙏🏻🕊️much appreciated 🕊️🙏🏻
  April 10th, 2025 06:46
• Flower (Sorenbarrett) Mysterious ways for mysterious days.🙏🏻🕊️
  April 10th, 2025 05:12
• d a n c e (Arqios) To be fair…
  April 10th, 2025 05:05
• Kindness and Compassion Are Free. (Poetic Licence) Now here’s an Amen to that! Good stuff🙏🏻🕊️
  April 10th, 2025 02:04
• Universal Life. (Goldfinch60) A whole told other than! Glorious thought Andy🙏🏻🕊️
  April 10th, 2025 01:56
• Icarus Wanted it All (Thomas W Case) Foolhardy yet recklessly free… and Daedalus let him… so much to this...
  April 9th, 2025 16:29
• Dread Day (Kevin Michael Bloor) Scary time. Hope you are better. Glad you are able to write. My fear is to...
  April 9th, 2025 08:31
• The broken heart cafe (Tony36) That’s quite a burden left with the cafe, or is it the keeper? Mmm…...
  April 9th, 2025 07:55
• The Pecking (Tristan Robert Lange) Using a traditional (black Royal) typewriter makes this even more tactile!...
  April 9th, 2025 07:31
• Normalcy (MDStone) The norm and what is considered normal rarely find themselves exactly on...
  April 9th, 2025 06:09
• How odd is odd (Sorenbarrett) Us and Them is an old game that resurrects every now and again…corporate...
  April 9th, 2025 06:07
• windswept smiles (Arqios) Here it goes again, season must’ve shifted the cohort
  April 9th, 2025 05:13
• Croquet Fever. (Goldfinch60) Run the race well and finish well, all else is fluff🙏🏻🕊️
  April 9th, 2025 03:09
• Into The Spotlight. (Poetic Licence) And burn your eyebrows in the process too🙏🏻🕊️
  April 9th, 2025 03:06
• Inversion (Mutley Ravishes) Quite true, a very dangerous state of affairs in its continuance, so...
  April 9th, 2025 00:26
• A Hole - Pain Through The Brain (Mad Prophetess) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  April 8th, 2025 23:42
• The Forge (E.J. Waling) The narkoses of ancient times lives on. Very interesting 🙏🏻🕊
  April 8th, 2025 20:55
• Let\'s Just Say It IS, Shall We? (Cheeky Missy) Most enjoyable read CM🙏🏻🕊
  April 8th, 2025 17:44
• Blind (Tristan Robert Lange) And there appears yet again the fine edge of that reckless knife. Saw for...
  April 8th, 2025 17:42
• nautical compass (Mourgana of the Fey) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  April 8th, 2025 17:39
• Rejoice.... (Orchidee) Ooh, Everyman’s “hymn” now there’s a beneficent innovation...
  April 8th, 2025 17:34
• I\'m Sorry (Tony36) That’s quite the summation… it’s far more comprehensive than my...
  April 8th, 2025 07:22
• Vilvoorde: wash (Arqios) Now this is a tough one
  April 8th, 2025 05:52
• WHILE I CRY (DEBIH MARTIN) That’s a kind of heartbreak that resonates. Very
  April 8th, 2025 05:13
• on a night... (Dimpy) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 8th, 2025 05:12
• How soon we forget (Sorenbarrett) Now that is where the circuits jumble and fry, only to return to that...
  April 8th, 2025 03:49
• On the Road To Insanity. (Poetic Licence) Now there\'s a way to rhyme! Praise to both you and Tristan, these are...
  April 8th, 2025 02:58
• Lessons Learned In Life. (Goldfinch60) Oh they joy of not being in control all the time! 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 8th, 2025 01:31
• When I Figure That Out.... (Cheeky Missy) Even with Spring’s persuasive prodding, some won’t react in accord, so...
  April 7th, 2025 20:03
• Kundagarten (Mutley Ravishes) Nice twist, delectable turns🙏🏻🕊️🤩
  April 7th, 2025 19:34
• Kindness my Ass (Thomas W Case) Snake, subtle and deceitful…a venomous chameleon, cold blooded to boot...
  April 7th, 2025 18:31
• Til Death Do Us Part (>Kai<) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  April 7th, 2025 18:27
• Loop of Lost Tomorrows (Tristan Robert Lange) Quite a deep dive, very intriguing thoughts🕊🙏🏻
  April 7th, 2025 08:21