Comments on community poems by WriteBeLight
- Heartful Hopes (Orchidee)
Great job.
March 6th, 2017 00:21 - This Abyss. (Kevin browne)
I can relate Kevin.
March 6th, 2017 00:21 - A UNION NOW REGRETTED (Michael Edwards)
Coo!l Michael. Great job.
March 6th, 2017 00:18 - Just a dog (Georgiarous101)
Such a beautiful tribute to your wonderful pet. It is so very sad when we...
March 6th, 2017 00:11 - LIMERICKS 16, 17 & 18. (Michael Edwards)
Great work Michael on both accounts once more! :)
March 4th, 2017 07:47 - My Depression (Christina8)
Hey Christina. I saw this post, but got interrupted and did not respond. I...
March 4th, 2017 07:46 - Your darkest hour (Eviebee03)
Very inspiring! Time will heal. We all just have to try to be patient....
March 3rd, 2017 19:47 - Creation (Tony36)
Great prayer Tony!
March 3rd, 2017 13:38 - Two Peas in a Pod (Notapoet)
Ha Ha. Very cute NAP!
March 3rd, 2017 13:37 - Yearning to Sail (Augustus)
I have sailed on a 24 foot, full-keel sailboat. There is nothing like the...
March 3rd, 2017 13:35 - Mother; I remain (Willyweed)
I feel a very deep sorrow after reading this poem WW. Excellent poetry,...
March 3rd, 2017 13:33 - Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.)
Almighty writing Fay. Love it. I love the ocean and respect its power :)
March 3rd, 2017 06:27 - Live in Peace - FIBS (Goldfinch60)
I am filled with the feeling of fresh air Goldfinch!
March 3rd, 2017 06:23 - THE VIEW FROM BEYOND (Michael Edwards)
Feel the anger here Michael. The picture is appropriate and beautiful.
March 3rd, 2017 06:22 - death was a lady (Willyweed)
Great job WW. Reminds me of the Movie of the Week movie \"Death Takes A...
March 2nd, 2017 12:51 - Thursday... (Myinnervoice)
I agree. The world is getting more polluted and troubled. People have to...
March 2nd, 2017 12:44 - Triumphant Testimony (Orchidee)
I feel like marching! Very uplifting!
March 2nd, 2017 12:29 - The soul eater (Jooles)
Ha Ha. I am sure the bad things touched upon here are not that evil. Good...
March 2nd, 2017 12:27 - Looking Back! (Dford1)
Sounds wonderful. Great job.
March 2nd, 2017 12:26 - THREE LITTLE WORDS (Michael Edwards)
BEAUTIFUL picture Michael, and very sweet words.
March 2nd, 2017 12:13 - Drought (Quemis)
Love in particular the second to last stanza. Excellent poetry Psentinel!
March 2nd, 2017 12:12 - The Fibre In Our Souls. (Kevin browne)
Thirst of drinking poetry - all is great, but like that in particular.
March 2nd, 2017 12:09 - FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very sweet and healthy Brian.
March 2nd, 2017 12:08 - Watson and Holmes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60)
That is a wonderful story Goldfinch! Great!
March 2nd, 2017 12:08 - Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.)
Betrayal is terrible, and hopefully something to recover from. Great job...
March 2nd, 2017 12:07 - Beast Of Burden (Notapoet)
A heavy write, yet so uplifting.
March 2nd, 2017 12:05 - \"Heart Beat Stars\" (Augustus)
So very clever Augustus and beautifully written.
March 2nd, 2017 12:03 - Lost (Augustus)
Awesome are the stars on a dark Summer night. That is what I feel. I do...
March 1st, 2017 17:55 - Good Turned Ugly And Bad, (Kevin browne)
Sounds very dark Kevin. Well done at expressing this.
March 1st, 2017 17:53 - I am the Poet (Tony36)
Great grasp of knowing who you are Tony!
March 1st, 2017 17:51 - The Hunger (Notapoet)
LOVEly. :)
March 1st, 2017 17:49 - Mirror (Allan J. Renaldo)
So poignantly well written.
March 1st, 2017 06:03 - Rage (Christina K)
Squashed dreams. Well written.
March 1st, 2017 06:02 - THE RETURN (Michael Edwards)
Very excellent again, Michael, on both accounts.
March 1st, 2017 06:01 - Infidelity Sucks (Gelyn)
Pulls a one\'s heartstrings. Excellent work, expressing the pain.
March 1st, 2017 05:59 - Chet. (Goldfinch60)
Loving tribute! Very well done. Draws a person in, anticipating each next...
March 1st, 2017 05:58 - dance with my shadow (Willyweed)
Yea! But that crap in the rear view mirror and see it get smaller, smaller...
March 1st, 2017 05:51 - Passionate Release (Notapoet)
Great job. I can relate.
February 28th, 2017 19:20 - Neverland (Jooles)
Hit the nail on the head Jooles. Would love to just play Hooky from...
February 28th, 2017 19:16 - A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I often think of the places I would travel if I had the time and money....
February 28th, 2017 12:37 - Coveted. (Fay Slimm.)
You hit a gold streak with this one Fay!
February 28th, 2017 12:36 - Face to Face 2 (Tony36)
Wow Tony! Great work.
February 28th, 2017 12:35 - Somewhere on the five (Willyweed)
Must have been quite the Angel you saw there on the road, to have put the...
February 28th, 2017 12:34 - Doubt Revisited (Augustus)
I doubt you will get an argument on this point! :)
February 28th, 2017 12:20 - Seed Sowing (Orchidee)
Very uplifting and comforting!
February 28th, 2017 12:19 - I see as you see but what? (Mello)
Everyday is a new chance to change, improve, and be grateful. Great...
February 28th, 2017 05:04 - Butterflies Flew To Me. (Kevin browne)
All is wonderful Kevin, in particular, the last several lines.
February 28th, 2017 05:02 - PREDICTION (Michael Edwards)
I like that Michael and the replies from you and Goldfinch are great and...
February 28th, 2017 04:54 - The Old Man (Goldfinch60)
Oh, so sweet and poignant Goldfinch.
February 28th, 2017 04:52 - running (Janetaylor)
You caught the experience so perfectly Jane. Lovely photo as well.
February 27th, 2017 19:48 - Doubt (Augustus)
I wonder if doubt is really just a gut feeling that will always come up in...
February 27th, 2017 19:47 - Somedays are harder than others. (Myinnervoice)
I feel for the person in this poem. I think the fact that they are...
February 27th, 2017 19:44 - Atonement Assurance (Orchidee)
A very good prayer!
February 27th, 2017 12:46 - Forsaken. (Fay Slimm.)
A tragic subject matter. Great to shine a light on it Fay!
February 27th, 2017 12:05 - Sometimes I Wonder. (Kevin browne)
Makes one wonder, your poem :)
February 27th, 2017 12:03 - Between I Love You and Goodbye (Gelyn)
Love the line about the pebble in a shoe. I can relate. Good job.
February 27th, 2017 08:40 - Come sail away (Tony36)
Sure matey! Great poem Tony.
February 27th, 2017 08:39 - OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very clever Brian. Scary picture.
February 27th, 2017 06:37 - TRANSIENCE (Michael Edwards)
Poignant and thought provoking Michael. Love the watercolor, as well.
February 27th, 2017 06:27 - Stealing Mind and Body. (Goldfinch60)
Love the last lines Goldfinch60, all of the lines.
February 27th, 2017 06:26 - A Life Lived.... (P.H.Rose)
A positive poem of strength P.H.
February 27th, 2017 06:24 - Out on the promenade (Willyweed)
Nice work and footwork WW.
February 27th, 2017 01:48 - Little Boys (Augustus)
Ha Ha. Very funny and reality, I am sure.
February 27th, 2017 01:43 - Turn Normal People Blue. (Kevin browne)
Like the last line, as you have said it all, here Kevin.
February 27th, 2017 01:41 - Our perfect little world (Notapoet)
Sounds like a bright future. Great poem.
February 27th, 2017 01:38 - Morgan Freeman Got It Right (Kurt Philip Behm)
I agree.
February 26th, 2017 11:14 - At The Master\'s Feet (Rrodriguez)
Deep and rich message.
February 26th, 2017 11:12 - dream a dream (Willyweed)
Dreamy poem WW. Lovely.
February 26th, 2017 11:11 - Goodbye (a song) (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
So sorry for the divorce. But, you have expressed your feelings very well.
February 26th, 2017 09:40 - TIME TO GO (Michael Edwards)
Yes. That can happen. Great work on the painting.
February 26th, 2017 07:04 - Love\'s Due. (Fay Slimm.)
Very LOVE-ly Fay!
February 26th, 2017 07:01 - LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Another great Sunday write.
February 26th, 2017 06:58 - My River Awaits (Goldfinch60)
Very vivid and beautiful.
February 26th, 2017 06:56 - Acquainted with Much Pain (Rrodriguez)
Poignant and so heart felt. Great work at tugging at my heart.
February 25th, 2017 20:34 - Celebration Certainties (Orchidee)
Such talent you have expressed!
February 25th, 2017 20:32 - New Depths. (Fay Slimm.)
Deep feelings you have touched upon Fay!
February 25th, 2017 20:29 - Mister “Know-It-All” (Notapoet)
We all know someone like that. Good job expressing your feelings.
February 25th, 2017 20:27 - An Apple For The Teacher (Augustus)
To me it speaks volumes about the impression a teacher makes on a student....
February 25th, 2017 20:23 - the Dragon King ( a fairytale of sorts) (Willyweed)
Good Knight write WW. :)
February 25th, 2017 10:33 - Carpe Diem (Philip)
Love it Philip!
February 25th, 2017 10:30 - Deer (Tony36)
Very deer poem!
February 25th, 2017 09:15 - I Think I Dropped A Quid Up Ya Old Ladies Skirt Last Night. (Kevin browne)
Very different write Kevin.
February 25th, 2017 07:27 - HAUNTED (Illia)
Hauntingly beautiful!
February 25th, 2017 07:24 - I went outside to pick up some leaves (Rrodriguez)
Very poignant rrodriguez. I feel the pain and sadness in the poem, as it...
February 25th, 2017 07:20 - LIMERICKS 13, 14 & 15. (Michael Edwards)
Wonderful words and picture Michael! Very cute limericks.
February 25th, 2017 07:16 - You Are What You Are. (Goldfinch60)
Love that last line. One of my favorites! Great job and message.
February 25th, 2017 07:14 - My life Pattern.... (P.H.Rose)
Very well done with inspiring thoughts P.H.
February 25th, 2017 07:13 - Rock Reassurances (Orchidee)
Very, very comforting and well written.
February 25th, 2017 07:12 - I WORE A HAT ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Hats off to you Brian!
February 25th, 2017 07:11 - Star Trek Moment (Tony36)
Great job Tony! Now, do Bones the doctor. Ha Ha.
February 24th, 2017 13:04 - Menopausal Mayhem.... (P.H.Rose)
Poor kid. Hope she feels better and better everyday!
February 24th, 2017 13:02 - Queen for a day (Willyweed)
Yes. Be careful what you wish for as you might just get it. :)
February 24th, 2017 13:00 - Tracks (Augustus)
I like this.
February 24th, 2017 12:57 - My Knight (Christina8)
Excellent!
February 24th, 2017 12:54 - The Proposal (Notapoet)
I love the wildfire line! Great work.
February 24th, 2017 08:57 - The Joy of Old Age (Goldfinch60)
Very nicely done about aging. We are all doing that everyday. I like how...
February 24th, 2017 06:43 - CHANGES (Michael Edwards)
Stop and smell the roses. Great flow.
February 24th, 2017 06:39 - OPPORTUNITY KNOCKS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Bikes are great!
February 24th, 2017 06:38 - I don\'t know ? (What you were told?) (Willyweed)
I think the animals are smiling.
February 23rd, 2017 12:20 - O P P O R T U N I T Y ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very true Brian.
February 23rd, 2017 06:29
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