Comments on community poems by WriteBeLight
- LIMERICK 27 (Michael Edwards)
Very cute Michael.
May 15th, 2017 13:32 - Race for Love. (Goldfinch60)
Very loving write Goldfinch!
May 15th, 2017 13:30 - BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Bottles of great rhyme Brian!
May 15th, 2017 13:29 - This Heart. (Fay Slimm.)
Very touching Fay.
May 15th, 2017 13:28 - The Garden (Swingline)
Excellent poetry swingline! Great story as well.
May 15th, 2017 13:27 - Bully (Tony36)
True. Beware of the trolls out there Tony.
May 15th, 2017 13:25 - A Dream (Lizzy Renee)
Very unusual Lizzy. I used to get weird dreams when having a slice of...
May 15th, 2017 13:23 - My World (Swingline)
A great proclamation swingline!
May 14th, 2017 06:32 - LIMERICK 26 (Michael Edwards)
I beg his pardon :) Great one.
May 13th, 2017 05:54 - Let\'s Get Lost. (Goldfinch60)
Unfortunately, this is the end for many talented artists. Great to...
May 13th, 2017 05:52 - Bogeyman (Mandi)
Ohhh Noo! Scary write :)
May 13th, 2017 05:50 - Bethany (Tony36)
Great job Tony!
May 12th, 2017 11:53 - Mountain family holiday villa and Waves.. (P.H.Rose)
Great poetry P.H. I am so glad you are having some time off and
May 12th, 2017 11:51 - In All Your Glory. (Kevin browne)
Very lovely Kevin!
May 12th, 2017 11:50 - PERCEPTIONS MISPLACED (Michael Edwards)
Lovely Michael. I could visualize the glances. Great picture as well!
May 12th, 2017 11:48 - 40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great poetry Brian!
May 12th, 2017 11:45 - The Wall. (Goldfinch60)
I discovered Pink Floyd about 6 years ago and later, in a concert, saw the...
May 12th, 2017 11:42 - The forgotten (Jooles)
Very sympathic and well written Jooles.
May 12th, 2017 11:40 - Your Spirit (Tony36)
A great poem of a poetic plea for salvation, Tony.
May 12th, 2017 11:37 - Mothering. (Fay Slimm.)
A truly one-of-a-kind connection Fay. Great poem.
May 12th, 2017 11:36 - Save Me! (Lizzy Renee)
Very true Lizzy.
May 12th, 2017 11:34 - My Sins He Forgave (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Great job Kurt. Very visual as well :)
May 11th, 2017 10:10 - Revealing Nothing (Garry)
Some things are better left unsaid :)
May 11th, 2017 10:07 - The Child (Jessie)
So beautiful and poignant Jessie! Wonderful poetry. Great point of view...
May 11th, 2017 09:50 - LIMERICK 25 (Michael Edwards)
Great job Michael. The drawing is very cute. I do not have any gnomes. I...
May 11th, 2017 05:27 - Only Remembered. (Goldfinch60)
Very nice tribute Goldfinch. All good things must come to an end, I guess....
May 11th, 2017 05:25 - Oh My Captain (Swingline)
Very nice swingline.
May 10th, 2017 12:59 - THE LANGUAGE OF BRITISH FLOWERS (A to M) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Beautiful images you have bloomed Brian!
May 10th, 2017 12:57 - NATURAL THREAT (Michael Edwards)
Picture works here Michael. The aftermath in a way :)
May 10th, 2017 12:55 - Mozart Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Great job Goldfinch. Love Mozart!
May 10th, 2017 12:54 - Compatibility. (Fay Slimm.)
I think it is the toughest thing one must do, but it must be done, in...
May 10th, 2017 12:53 - Worship Wholesomeness (Orchidee)
Great write orchidee!
May 10th, 2017 12:51 - im done (Angel Smileyface)
I know how you feel :)
May 10th, 2017 12:48 - BUFFET FODDER (Michael Edwards)
Great message in the poem Michael, but you should have accompanied it with...
May 9th, 2017 06:26 - FOOD GLORIOUS FOOD ~ DECONSTRUCTED HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very important nutritional facts Brian. I love water, most of all. Salads...
May 9th, 2017 06:23 - Orange and Yellow. (Goldfinch60)
Reminds me of a mirage in the hot summertime at the beach. Great write...
May 9th, 2017 06:19 - Sunset of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Never thought about clouds in that way Goldfinch. Very beautiful.
May 8th, 2017 13:35 - CASTAWAY (Michael Edwards)
Love this Michael, painting and last lines, in particular.
May 8th, 2017 13:33 - CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Be a good friend and you will have good friends! Great write.
May 8th, 2017 13:32 - Rolling Waves of the Sea (Lizzy Renee)
Very nice Lizzy. I so love the water and the waves. Great expression here...
May 8th, 2017 13:31 - BBQ (Tony36)
Lunch time! Great Tony!
May 8th, 2017 13:30 - Five Favoured (Orchidee)
Such a love you have for the Lord orchidee!
May 8th, 2017 13:29 - Ode to an Ant (Lizzy Renee)
Life should be respected! Great thought here Lizzy.
May 6th, 2017 06:48 - DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards)
I agree Michael. Years ago I was a bartender and waitress. It is unreal...
May 6th, 2017 06:43 - Have the Aliens Landed? (Goldfinch60)
That is so very true Goldfinch. I was on a cruise boat years ago that...
May 6th, 2017 06:37 - SPRING SUNRISES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love them both Brian. Unfortunately, a lot of weather that will keep them...
May 6th, 2017 06:33 - Dawn To Dusk (Rajkumar)
Great work Rajkumar. Great timing and very thought provoking. I love the...
May 6th, 2017 06:22 - RAINBOW OF ROSES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks for the guide to the colors. I never knew about this until years...
May 5th, 2017 05:42 - you (Jlortiz84)
We all deal with relationships and they can be a joy or full of...
May 5th, 2017 05:40 - Behind the Farce (Bibbeck)
I can relate to this poem. Great job. Reality is not sweet. It is very...
May 5th, 2017 05:38 - THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards)
Great homage to the Chapel Michael.
May 4th, 2017 05:30 - Island of Acceptance. (Goldfinch60)
Like the metaphor seeing something that looks promising, but as you get...
May 3rd, 2017 15:52 - THE GATHERING (Michael Edwards)
I like the died like water in the sand.
May 3rd, 2017 15:51 - Other People\'s Voices (Garry)
Very good Garry. Does she know the serenade is coming from other people?...
May 3rd, 2017 15:48 - Taken From Me (Lizzy Renee)
So sorry Lizzy. An appropriate poem explaining your frustration.
May 3rd, 2017 15:44 - C A R N I V A L ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes, it is that time of year again for the Carnivals! Very poetic tribute.
May 2nd, 2017 12:14 - Catch the fire (Tony36)
Sizzling advice Tony!
May 2nd, 2017 12:10 - LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24> (Michael Edwards)
Very funny Michael!
May 2nd, 2017 12:08 - Lonely River Song (MendedFences27)
When love is lost, all of those things like songs and special places...
May 1st, 2017 19:14 - What We Had. (Fay Slimm.)
Great job Fay and love the significance of the sunset, or sunrise. What...
May 1st, 2017 11:00 - Baby calves (Tony36)
Very visual Tony! Great!
May 1st, 2017 10:59 - Daydream (Vvnrose)
Very well done!
May 1st, 2017 10:57 - Comfort Consolings (Orchidee)
He is everywhere! Great write.
May 1st, 2017 10:56 - All She wants (Angel Smileyface)
Great job expressing the pain and hurt. Happy Birthday. Hope she gets what...
May 1st, 2017 10:55 - Bird Talk. (Fay Slimm.)
I love this Fay!
April 30th, 2017 07:16 - MAKE LOVE NOT WAR ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very timely message Brian. I hope they are listening.
April 30th, 2017 07:13 - A SIMPLE MAN (Michael Edwards)
The poem and picture go well together. I feel this person lived a life...
April 30th, 2017 07:10 - With Our Tears Left To Cry. (Kevin browne)
I feel the despair that Gary Edward mentions. I try not to feel about life...
April 30th, 2017 07:08 - Through Your Light (Pintu Mahakul)
Such a beautiful picture and message Pintu, and wonderful commentary....
April 30th, 2017 07:02 - Why dont they understand that......... (Angel Smileyface)
I agree with the last line in particular! Very good work.
April 29th, 2017 07:34 - Jazz was Born. (Goldfinch60)
Glad you enjoyed the show as I can easily tell in your uplifting and jazzy...
April 29th, 2017 07:32 - Out of Sight (Naeners)
Very creepy write. Well done!
April 29th, 2017 07:23 - Questions (Lizzy Renee)
Great poem about all the answers needed, but may never be found. I did ask...
April 29th, 2017 07:20 - Boldness. (Fay Slimm.)
They are very cute, but destructive. Your poetry does show the sweet side...
April 29th, 2017 07:17 - Vulnerable? (Vvnrose)
I can relate to this very much. Great poetry and message and I feel your...
April 29th, 2017 07:12 - A BIT MORE MIRTH (Michael Edwards)
Very sarcastic in a way. But, great message. Some people in the U.S. are...
April 29th, 2017 07:08 - COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Glad to see you are back Brian! Great write!
April 29th, 2017 07:06 - Awakening. (Goldfinch60)
Yes Goldfinch, great write. I agree with all here. It is wonderful to get...
April 29th, 2017 07:04 - DESPAIR (Michael Edwards)
Could be about a whole population, Michael, hit by tragedy. Thought...
April 28th, 2017 05:25 - Confident Communings (Orchidee)
Great work.
April 27th, 2017 15:45 - The Batter (Tony36)
Great work Tony!
April 27th, 2017 15:43 - The Battle Between Truth and Lies (Lizzy Renee)
I agree Lizzy. The truth always conquers.
April 27th, 2017 10:36 - Home, Love and Family. (Goldfinch60)
You deserve all of the happiness you can gather. Nice write.
April 27th, 2017 06:18 - NOSTALGIA (Michael Edwards)
Really nice poetry Michael and adorable art.
April 27th, 2017 06:17 - The Return of Big Boss Bear (Tony36)
Sounds like a very nice companion!
April 26th, 2017 11:42 - Saviour Sightings (Orchidee)
Such a poet orchidee!
April 26th, 2017 11:41 - KYS (Raven130)
I agree. Kill yourself is horrible and no joke! Great job expressing the...
April 26th, 2017 05:26 - Metallic marvels (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Yes a Lava Lamp sounds perfect. Very nice imagery in this poem SZK.
April 26th, 2017 05:22 - Brightness.. (Fay Slimm.)
I love the Sun. Nice tribute Fay!
April 26th, 2017 05:20 - Reaching Perfection. (Goldfinch60)
There is never true perfection, I guess. But, it is the journey, isn\'t...
April 26th, 2017 05:19 - Simple Musings (Seeker)
We all need something to believe in Seeker. I like the questions you are...
April 25th, 2017 18:20 - Island of Words and Music. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like a very lovely island!
April 25th, 2017 18:17 - Treasured. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful Fay.
April 25th, 2017 18:16 - Dancing Eyes (Garry)
So very nice Garry.
April 25th, 2017 18:14 - When We Already Know So Little. (Kevin browne)
Very deep thoughts. Great poetry Kevin. Again touching on the dark side...
April 25th, 2017 18:10 - Am I Me (Garry)
Great perspective.
April 24th, 2017 11:55 - In Sickness and in Health. (Goldfinch60)
You have put together so well the words of a very difficult time in your...
April 24th, 2017 11:53 - Choreographing Breakfast (Garry)
It is wonderful to be inspired, no matter what the circumstances. I bet...
April 24th, 2017 11:50 - His Breath (Zana)
Very touching.
April 24th, 2017 11:49 - Light Liberty (Orchidee)
Hold your head high in the light of day. Great write.
April 24th, 2017 11:45
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